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Pretty Rhythm

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2014-03-09T05:49:50+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[Komari's Normal]

00:58:270 (2) - 리듬이 안어울리는거같아요 00:58:270 - 여기에 노트 추가하고 00:58:731 - 이곳에 긴 슬라이더를 추가하는게 리듬이 잘 어울릴듯요 글쎄요.. 전 그닥
01:10:270 (3) - 담요.. 살짝 빗나간것같아요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1360189 ok
01:13:039 (3) - 첫번쩨꺼랑 마찬가지 이것도 틀린거같진 않음..
01:43:962 (4) - 담요 ok

별 문제는 없는것같은데 첫번쨰 키아이에서 클랩을 안넣으신 이유를 모르겠네요 fix

Normal fix

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 93116
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol
TitleUnicode:てゐがクッキンアイドルになったようです
Artist:yukkin
ArtistUnicode:ゆっきん
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Komari's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:Lolicore_Komari Touhou
BeatmapID:359362
BeatmapSetID:98069

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-03-23T16:34:03+00:00

all done update

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-08-22T21:18:36+00:00

where's my normal? ;__;

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-08-23T03:02:02+00:00

Gero wrote:
where's my normal? ;__;

o.O isiste normal ?

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-08-23T11:59:24+00:00

Justo estaba por rebajar el mapa cuando me di cuenta que la borraste, ya no la tengo :/

anyways good luck with your mapset ~

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-08-23T20:18:47+00:00

Gero wrote:
Justo estaba por rebajar el mapa cuando me di cuenta que la borraste, ya no la tengo :/

anyways good luck with your mapset ~

yo me acuerdo que xin iba aser la normal pero nunca la iso i de ai le pedi a komaris x.x
no me acuerdo pero creo que iba aser una tambien la berdad no me acuerdo :c

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-08-31T09:21:01+00:00

Hi

from my queue.

Just a reminder

My queue's rules say that if you have one or more ranked beatmaps, you must apply M4M or I will just mod the two easiest diffs in your mapset. Looks like you agree with this

Anyway if you need the mod for the final diff just mod my map and send me an in-site PM or send me a Hangout on G+ (see signature)

First of all, check AIMod for all diffs. I notice something critical there. i

[Hitsound volumes]
Well you can ignore this if you want to. Just some suggestions for hitsound volume settings.
1. 00:47:649 - 30%
2. 00:56:879 - 35%
3. 01:03:341 - 60%
4. 01:19:033 - 40%
5. 01:33:802 - 60%
6. 01:48:572 - 35%
7. 02:03:341 - 60%
8. 02:32:879 - 55%
9. 02:52:264 - 30%
10. 02:55:495 - 40%
11. 03:02:418 - 65%
12. 03:24:572 - 45%
13. 03:32:879 - 25%

[Komari's Normal]
0. I think this is Easy...? HP 2, OD 2, and AR 4 will make it a pretty Easy diff lol.
1. 00:49:495 (1,2) - This blanket looks strange. Just try to fit the circle in the center of the slider. In short just let the slider cover the circle perfectly.
2. 02:32:879 (1,1,1) - About these three sliders, I recommend you to break them into multiple sliders. Multiple sliders are easier to form patterns, more beautiful, and less boring than holding the button for a long time just to get a 300. It's more rhythmical by the way.
3. 03:22:725 (1) - Remove NC.
4. 03:24:110 (2) - NC.

[Easy]
1. 00:55:033 (2,1,2) - Play it at 50% speed and try to fix the curves that doesn't fit with the vocal.

...and I think that's all?

Hope to get your feedback soon.

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Artavia 2014-10-30T08:04:00+00:00

Hi, M4M Request!

General

■ Easy = Komari's Normal? It is strange star rating. Normal need to make a little bit more difficult.

■ This is my recommendation, You better add light Insane difficulty.

Easy

00:47:649 (1) - Add Whistle

00:50:187 (2) - ^

00:55:033 (2) - Ctrl+H (for a better flow)

00:56:879 (1,3) - especially, add whistle the tail part

01:16:725 (4,1) - High suggest Definitely, new player will feel difficulty in here. 'cuz it is much too close to the beat of spinner. If I were you, I'll fix it.

01:24:572 (4) - Add whistle

01:26:418 (5) - NC here and 01:26:879 (1) - Remove NC

01:26:879 (1) - Add Clap

01:27:341 (2) - ^ (tail part only)

01:29:187 (5) - Add Whistle

01:30:110 (1) - ^ (head part only)

01:32:879 - Add Circle

01:33:802 - I suggest sound sampleset to change with soft sound.

01:48:572 (1) - NC here

01:50:418 (3) - Add clap (the slider tail part only)

01:52:264 (1,2) - ^

01:54:572 (4) - ^ (the slider head part only - especially, only 01:54:210 - )

01:55:956 (1) - Add finish

01:56:879 (2,4) - Add clap

01:58:725 (5) - Add Whistle

01:59:649 (1) - ^ and Add Clap (Clap is only the return slider part)

02:02:418 (2) - Whistle

02:03:341 (1) - Add finish (the slider head part only) and same as 01:33:802 - I think soft change to the sounds are better.

02:36:110 (4) - Whistle

02:43:956 (1,2,3) - Add clap (the slider tail part only)

02:47:649 (5,1) - same as 01:16:725 (4,1) -

03:08:879 - Add Circle

Komari's Normal

■ Widescreen support 체크해제 바랍니다.

00:56:187 - 여기서 부터 빨간틱, 흰틱, 빨간틱 차례로 서클 추가하는게 좋을거 같습니다.

00:58:264 (2) - 58초에는 서클을, 그 후에 나오는 큰 흰틱에 슬라이더를 넣는것이 더 좋은 박자를 만들수 있습니다. 이부분에 대해서는 다른분도 지적해 주신거 같으니, 고치는것을 권장드립니다.

01:05:187 (3) - 이 부분은 슬라이더 2/1박 쓰지마시고 1/1박 쓰는게 더 좋습니다.

01:19:033 (1) - 슬라이더에 추가된 휘슬 없애주세요. 오로지 슬라이더의 머리, 꼬리부분에만 휘슬이 들릴수 있도록 설정하는것이 좋겠습니다.

01:20:879 (3) - ^

01:22:725 (1,3) - ^

01:26:418 (1,3) - ^ 이런식으로 슬라이더에 삐익소리나게 설정된 휘슬소리는 다 고쳐주세요. 더이상 지적하지 않겠습니다.

또한, 01:26:418 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분에 클랩 추가해주시고요

01:27:802 (3) - 이부분은 서클을 넣고, 그다음 오는 큰 흰틱인 01:28:284 - 여기에 슬라이더를 넣어주세요. 더 자연스러운 박자로 바꿔줄겁니다.

01:33:341 (4) - 클랩추가

01:33:802 - 그리고 이부분부터 키아이 시작하는 나머지 두 지점들, 소프트 샘플셋으로 히트사운드 채워주시면 좋겠습니다.

01:42:572 (3) - 여기도 01:27:802 - 와 같은 지적을 드립니다. 상당히 지루할 뿐더러, 박자가 순간 엇박으로 들립니다.

01:59:649 (1) - 한음처리(ex. 샤우팅, 그외 등등) 되는 부분이 아니라면 그냥 패턴을 추가해주세요.

02:08:418 (7) - 01:27:802 - 와 같습니다.

02:16:264 (3) - 맨끝부분에 피니시 추가

02:32:879 (1) - 이정도는 노멀 난이도라 괜찮은데 02:36:572 (1,1) - 이런것들은 너무 길고, 지루해질뿐만 아니라 플레이 하는데 어색함을 돋구는 요소가 될수 있습니다. 이곳은 리듬이 느려지거나, 빨라져서 돋보여야 하는 구간이 아니기 때문에 스피너를 넣어도 될만큼의 긴 슬라이더 사용은 무리수로 보입니다.

02:43:395 - 서클 추가

02:45:341 - ^

02:47:649 (1) - 서클 없애버리시고 02:50:879까지 스피너 밀어주시는게 자연스럽습니다.

02:52:264 (2) - 이 슬라이더는 02:53:187에 끝처리 해주시고 후에 남는 박자들엔 패턴 넣어주세요.

02:55:495 (1,3) - 클랩 추가

02:56:879 (4,5) - 끝부분만 클랩 추가

02:58:725 (6) - 휘슬 추가

03:07:495 (6) - 이 슬라이더는 끝나는 지점을 같게하고, 시작 지점을 03:07:956으로 밀어주세요. 그러면 03:07:495 - 여기가 빌텐데 여기에는 서클추가 해주시고요.

03:18:572 (2) - 01:27:802와 같습니다

03:22:264 - 서클 추가

03:32:879 (1,3) - 휘슬 추가

03:35:649 (1) - 여기서부터 03:37:033 - 까지만 슬라이더 해주시고요, 그뒤에 나오는 큰 흰틱부터 스피너 추가하시는게 좋을거 같습니다.

Hard

01:48:584 (7) - NC here.

01:50:891 (2) - Move to x64 y60

02:35:661 (4,5) - I think *this pattern is better

02:36:814 (2,3,4) - stack

Good luck.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-10-30T16:08:53+00:00

ALL FIXED

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2014-11-01T06:26:17+00:00

Sorry for Super delay

Artavia wrote:
Hi, M4M Request!

Komari's Normal

■ Widescreen support 체크해제 바랍니다.
수정 완료

00:56:187 - 여기서 부터 빨간틱, 흰틱, 빨간틱 차례로 서클 추가하는게 좋을거 같습니다. 서클 하나 슬라이더 하나로 수정했습니다.

00:58:264 (2) - 58초에는 서클을, 그 후에 나오는 큰 흰틱에 슬라이더를 넣는것이 더 좋은 박자를 만들수 있습니다. 이부분에 대해서는 다른분도 지적해 주신거 같으니, 고치는것을 권장드립니다. 수정 완료

01:05:187 (3) - 이 부분은 슬라이더 2/1박 쓰지마시고 1/1박 쓰는게 더 좋습니다. 수정 완료

01:19:033 (1) - 슬라이더에 추가된 휘슬 없애주세요. 오로지 슬라이더의 머리, 꼬리부분에만 휘슬이 들릴수 있도록 설정하는것이 좋겠습니다.

01:20:879 (3) - ^

01:22:725 (1,3) - ^

01:26:418 (1,3) - ^ 이런식으로 슬라이더에 삐익소리나게 설정된 휘슬소리는 다 고쳐주세요. 더이상 지적하지 않겠습니다.

또한, 01:26:418 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분에 클랩 추가해주시고요 수정 완료

01:27:802 (3) - 이부분은 서클을 넣고, 그다음 오는 큰 흰틱인 01:28:284 - 여기에 슬라이더를 넣어주세요. 더 자연스러운 박자로 바꿔줄겁니다. 수정 완료

01:33:341 (4) - 클랩추가 수정 완료

01:33:802 - 그리고 이부분부터 키아이 시작하는 나머지 두 지점들, 소프트 샘플셋으로 히트사운드 채워주시면 좋겠습니다. 수정 완료

01:42:572 (3) - 여기도 01:27:802 - 와 같은 지적을 드립니다. 상당히 지루할 뿐더러, 박자가 순간 엇박으로 들립니다. 수정 완료

01:59:649 (1) - 한음처리(ex. 샤우팅, 그외 등등) 되는 부분이 아니라면 그냥 패턴을 추가해주세요. 바꿔봤는데 지금게 더 낫더라구요

02:08:418 (7) - 01:27:802 - 와 같습니다. 수정 완료

02:16:264 (3) - 맨끝부분에 피니시 추가 수정 완료

02:32:879 (1) - 이정도는 노멀 난이도라 괜찮은데 02:36:572 (1,1) - 이런것들은 너무 길고, 지루해질뿐만 아니라 플레이 하는데 어색함을 돋구는 요소가 될수 있습니다. 이곳은 리듬이 느려지거나, 빨라져서 돋보여야 하는 구간이 아니기 때문에 스피너를 넣어도 될만큼의 긴 슬라이더 사용은 무리수로 보입니다. 수정 완료

02:43:395 - 서클 추가 수정 완료

02:45:341 - ^ 수정 완료

02:47:649 (1) - 서클 없애버리시고 02:50:879까지 스피너 밀어주시는게 자연스럽습니다. 수정 완료

02:52:264 (2) - 이 슬라이더는 02:53:187에 끝처리 해주시고 후에 남는 박자들엔 패턴 넣어주세요. 일단은 보류해보겠습니다.

02:55:495 (1,3) - 클랩 추가

02:56:879 (4,5) - 끝부분만 클랩 추가

02:58:725 (6) - 휘슬 추가

03:07:495 (6) - 이 슬라이더는 끝나는 지점을 같게하고, 시작 지점을 03:07:956으로 밀어주세요. 그러면 03:07:495 - 여기가 빌텐데 여기에는 서클추가 해주시고요. 다른 패턴으로 고쳐보았습니다.

03:18:572 (2) - 01:27:802와 같습니다

03:22:264 - 서클 추가

03:32:879 (1,3) - 휘슬 추가

03:35:649 (1) - 여기서부터 03:37:033 - 까지만 슬라이더 해주시고요, 그뒤에 나오는 큰 흰틱부터 스피너 추가하시는게 좋을거 같습니다.

Good luck.

fixed

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-01T06:36:33+00:00

ipdate

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2014-12-26T19:15:07+00:00

If normal need Remapping, I will do

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,726 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2015-01-03T02:48:17+00:00

Hello!

IRCmod from Easy and Hard

20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: Tienes algun mapa que pueda modear??
20:08 KokoroStudiox3: te gustan japoneses :# ?
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: yo no me fijo en esas cosas
20:09 KokoroStudiox3:

20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: si la canción es buena, cualquier cosa está bien
20:09 KokoroStudiox3: ando continuando con este
20:09 *KokoroStudiox3 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261803 yukkin - Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol]
20:11 KokoroStudiox3: si puedes darle un test :3
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: bien!. Como estoy ocupado con mi mapa, no sé si lo vaya a modear esta semana, pero de verdad estoy agradecido
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: okay..
20:11 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261803 yukkin - Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol]
20:11 KokoroStudiox3: con un test me es suficiente :3
20:12 ErunamoJAZZ: uggu... demasiado moe xDD
20:12 KokoroStudiox3: xDD
20:12 *ErunamoJAZZ is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261803 yukkin - Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol [Hard]]
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: muchos blankets xD
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:04:737 (4) -
20:18 KokoroStudiox3: xD
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:07:276 (3) - !! este fue especialmente notorio xD
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: 02:47:661 (1) - esto se siente más para ser simetrico
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: así aun un lado se siente raro
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: lo bueno es que de ahí en adelante no son muchas las notas que tendrías que acomodar si lo haces
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: mm.. y mira el AiMod

20:23 KokoroStudiox3: ok
20:24 KokoroStudiox3: i la easy
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: ya
20:33 ErunamoJAZZ: estaba cenado

20:34 KokoroStudiox3:

20:41 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262813 yukkin - Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol [Easy]]
20:41 ErunamoJAZZ: el inicio es un poco extraño
20:41 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/dZJBL/f5746e496c.jpg <- podrías hacer eso
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: el (2) es copy/paste de 00:51:353 (3) - , y al (1) lo achiquité con Ctrl+Shif+S
20:44 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:16:737 (2) - Esta parte se siente como si la mocharas con un machete (?)
20:44 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
20:44 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/dZJYT/0691324532.jpg algo así se siente mejor.
20:44 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:30:122 (1) - el blanket con 4 lo puedes mejorar. creo xD
20:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:38:891 (2) - no está en el centro.
20:46 ErunamoJAZZ: 02:14:430 (1) - haciendolo simetrico podría verse mejor
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: 02:51:353 (2) - siento que sí hace falta el golpe, mejor hacer un repeat http://puu.sh/dZKsJ/dc8c62e44f.jpg
20:49 ErunamoJAZZ: 03:03:353 (1) - mm.. segun como son ahora las cosas, esta nota la "tendrías que eliminar", por lo del tiempo de entre el spiner la siguiente nota era algo como...
20:49 ErunamoJAZZ: ... un compas en faciles, medio compas en normales, y 1/4 de compas en hards
20:49 ErunamoJAZZ: peeero no sé, por el bpm lento no se ve como necesario xD
20:49 ErunamoJAZZ: pero tenlo en cuenta.
20:51 ErunamoJAZZ: 03:09:814 (1) - se ve un poco feo, procura que sí quede en el centro. http://puu.sh/dZL3J/1a2c424bb9.jpg
20:52 ErunamoJAZZ: mm... 03:37:507 (1) - por que lo acabaste después del tick largo? (aun no me fijo si está así en las otras diffs)
20:52 ErunamoJAZZ: lol, ya empecé, creo que termino D:
20:53 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. y claro, no olvides fijarte en el AiMod.
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: duda: el chico de la GD quién es?
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: olvidalo, ya lo encontré xD
20:59 KokoroStudiox3: ok todo echo
21:00 KokoroStudiox3: :3
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: es coreano.. D:
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: no hay necesidad de remapear, creo
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: solo corregir algunas cosas.
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: pero en fin, hard
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: debo actualiza, no?
21:02 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261803 yukkin - Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol [Hard]]
21:02 KokoroStudiox3: sip
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:05:891 (1) - blanket.
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:07:276 (3) - este fue el de ahorita,
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: lol, orz, de ritmo lo sentí bien, así que disculpame lo nazi xD
21:03 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:29:661 (1) - no está centrado
21:07 ErunamoJAZZ: 02:47:199 (4,5,1) - primero, no es 100% simetrico (arreglalo antes que Gero te rete

(?) ), segundo, http://puu.sh/dZNbb/478ccd1edf.jpg
21:08 ErunamoJAZZ: y lo que te dije ahorita, quizas termines moviendo las notas antes del break, pero pienso que quedará mejor.
21:09 ErunamoJAZZ: 03:27:814 (4) - el stack no está bien hecho.
21:09 ErunamoJAZZ: y ya. Lo del normal lo hago en el foro.
21:09 ErunamoJAZZ:

[general]
Plis, fix issues from AiMod.
hit300g (2).png?? Nueva Carpeta??

[Normal]

01:05:199 (3) - I feel 01:06:122 - need some note for push, i suggest this:
01:15:353 (1,1) - respect new rules about notes after spinners, this is unrankable now
My suggest is delete the spinner and mapping this section.
01:39:353 (7) - This feels better, imo:
01:54:122 (3) - improve blanket pls: http://puu.sh/dZOSp/fde709247c.jpg
01:55:968 (5,6) - (nazi): delete useless anchors, and improve the shape
http://puu.sh/dZP0j/07d8446c22.jpg -> http://puu.sh/dZP5f/85cb4e5fa7.jpg
02:35:199 (2,3) - may be??
02:40:276 (1) - nice o3o
02:45:814 (3,4) - i think this will be better:
02:47:891 (1) - unrankable bc time snap between slider and note. This will help to fix:
> Delete 02:50:891 (1,2) -
> end spinner in 02:51:353 -
02:52:276 (1) - humm... mmm.... orz, secction between 02:51:353 - to 03:00:584 - is dificut to map xD
So... just map some dificult here. bc spread, you dont will have problems
03:26:430 (5) - improve blanket.
03:30:122 (3) - ^

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-01-04T06:12:49+00:00

thanks to mod!

I accept all your suggestion.

Fixed

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:てゐがクッキンアイドルになったようです
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Creator:KokoroStudiox3
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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-04T18:37:37+00:00

UPDATE

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-07T01:31:35+00:00

from #modreqs o/ tewii *.* *nosebleed*

[General]
Cambia el titulo de la cancion por "Tewi ga Cooking Idol ni natta you desu" -> "てゐがクッキンアイドルになったようです" y puedes poner el titulo en ingles en los tags. Thanks a lot to Lanturn for helping with the romanized title <3
El preview point de el easy es diferente del de las otras dificultades, yo lo pondria aca 01:32:891 - en todas las dificultades imo.
Borra el soft-hitclap3.wav al parecer no lo usas en ninguna diff
Tambien me parece raro que no hitsoundearas la easy como lo hiciste con el hard, ademas haria que tu easy sea mas variado al ser jugado en taiko.
Esta mal escrito el tag Lolicore_Kooumari, arreglalo

[Easy]
OD y HP +1/0.5

Podrias agregar un soft-slidertick, usando el soft-hitclap, para los sliders como estos 01:17:199 (3,1,3) - imo
00:47:661 (1,2) - Creo que el (1) es lo suficientemente largo como para poner un nc en el (2)
01:00:122 (1,2) - seria mejor que enfatizaras el downbeat, puedes reemplazar el (1) por un circulo y luego pon un 1/1 slider aca 01:00:584 - con nc
01:04:276 - lo mismo que arriba. Puedes acortar 01:02:430 (3) - hasta 01:03:814 - poner un 1/1 slider con nc aca 01:04:276 - y borrar 01:04:737 (4) - imo
02:03:353 (1,3) - - http://puu.sh/eaEsD/1c08b54b14.jpg
02:08:430 - ponle normal en sampleset (de veras seria mejor que lo hitsoundearas con las claps que usaste en el hard)
02:10:737 (1) - quitale el finish, no suena bien ahi
02:12:584 (2) - sampleset normal
02:16:737 (2) - ^
02:17:661 - ^ a partir de aqui no hay mas hitsounds D:
03:05:661 (1,2) - ponle el nc al (2) en lugar de al (1)
03:19:045 (1,2) - ^
03:22:737 (1,2) - ^
03:28:276 (3) - podrias ponerle nc a este imo

[Komari's Normal]
I don't like the idea of using the normal sampleset :/
The spread between this and easy diff isnt good, maybe you can make it a bit harder

00:53:199 (2) - blanket
01:00:584 (6) - blanket
01:03:353 (1) - split this into 2 1/2 sliders and a 1/1 slider here 01:04:276 - and delete this 01:04:737 (3) - this would help to spread

01:10:276 (3) - blanket
01:29:661 (5) - remove finish
02:08:430 (7) - avoid skipping the downbeat :3
02:03:353 - that green line isnt snapped

sadly i suggest you to remap it. Try to make it more like you did here 01:39:353 (7,8,1) - use more 1/2 or you can split more 1/1 slider into something else, pm me in-game if you want more suggestions, i'll be glad to help you >w<

[Hard]

00:51:353 (5) - nc y 00:52:968 (1,2) - cambia el nc del (1) al (2)
00:58:737 (2) - blanket
01:05:430 (6) - no me gusta como el (4) cubre esa nota, podrias moverla a x308 y172, no es tan dificil considerando el bpm
01:04:045 (1,3) - nc en (3) en lugar del (1)
01:05:891 (1) - quita nc?
01:19:276 (2) - stackealo en el 01:17:661 (2) -
01:33:814 (1) - http://puu.sh/eaN89/ea980a4de8.jpg
01:35:430 (4,1) - blanket
01:36:353 (2,3) - ^
01:39:353 (1) - copia el que puse mas arriba :3
01:45:584 (5) - muevelo a x240 y152 para blanket
01:54:122 (1,2) - blanket
02:06:584 (3) - x276 y264 blanket
02:47:661 (1) - hazlo simetrico

codee :3

code]408,88,167661,6,0,B|364:60|344:28|344:28|304:40|256:13|256:13|208:40|168:28|168:28|148:60|104:88,1,360[/code]

03:13:276 (4,1) - blanket
03:15:122 (4,1) - ^
03:17:891 (2) - ctrl+h crtl+j y muevelo a x272 y107. fluye mejor imo
03:26:199 (1) - reemplazalo por un circulo + 1/2 slider

Eso seria todo, suerte

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-01-07T05:36:16+00:00

pkhg wrote:
from #modreqs o/ tewii *.* *nosebleed*

[Komari's Normal]
I don't like the idea of using the normal sampleset :/
The spread between this and easy diff isnt good, maybe you can make it a bit harder

00:53:199 (2) - blanket
01:00:584 (6) - blanket
01:03:353 (1) - split this into 2 1/2 sliders and a 1/1 slider here 01:04:276 - and delete this 01:04:737 (3) - this would help to spread
01:10:276 (3) - blanket
01:29:661 (5) - remove finish
02:08:430 (7) - avoid skipping the downbeat :3
02:03:353 - that green line isnt snapped

sadly i suggest you to remap it. Try to make it more like you did here 01:39:353 (7,8,1) - use more 1/2 or you can split more 1/1 slider into something else, pm me in-game if you want more suggestions, i'll be glad to help you >w<

I think so too, I will remap normal. btw, thanks to mod!

Eso seria todo, suerte

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-01-08T13:49:43+00:00

Remapped Normal Here. (Edit : Hitsound 100%)

Upload it

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 92891
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol
TitleUnicode:てゐがクッキンアイドルになったようです
Artist:yukkin
ArtistUnicode:ゆっきん
Creator:KokoroStudiox3
Version:Komari's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:Lolicore_Komari eLtigreXXx tewi inaba usa porject zun
BeatmapID:359362
BeatmapSetID:98069

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-15T18:34:12+00:00

all update

FlobuFlobs

614 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-15T19:36:40+00:00

Timing feels so off

do you accept gd's?

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-15T20:03:39+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Timing feels so off

do you accept gd's?

diff ? :3

FlobuFlobs

614 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-15T20:23:24+00:00

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:
FlobuFlobs wrote:
Timing feels so off

do you accept gd's?
diff ? :3

Insane <3 ?

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-01-15T20:40:09+00:00

IRCd. Fixed.... a lot lol.

SPOILER

10:36 KokoroStudiox3: hi :3
10:36 Lanturn: Hey
10:37 KokoroStudiox3: can test my diff :3
10:37 Lanturn: Uhh if it's below 4.0 otherwise I suck :P
10:37 KokoroStudiox3: hard
10:37 Lanturn: haha ok
10:37 *KokoroStudiox3 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261803 yukkin - Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol]
10:38 Lanturn: dang.. I have this map halfway up my list XD
10:38 Lanturn: Must be like a year old or something
10:38 KokoroStudiox3: xDDD
10:42 Lanturn: That was a cute map. Once you get the rhythm it's very well done
10:43 KokoroStudiox3: *.*
10:44 Lanturn: 01:43:391 (6) - stuff like this would be better evenly spaced so the player doesn't accidently think it's closer for some strange reason
10:44 Lanturn: 01:43:045 (5,6,7) - 
10:46 KokoroStudiox3: fixed
10:50 Lanturn: 03:19:045 (5,6,7) -  spacings here could use a bit balance. the 5->6 and 6->7 look the exact same but the 6->7 is 1/4 longer
10:52 Lanturn: 01:45:584 (5) - delete this note? It's a jump note, and it doesn't really give off a jumpy feeling. You can fix this simply by deleting it, or by removing the jump from 4->5
10:53 Lanturn: Since you follow vocals mainly for the jumpy parts
10:56 KokoroStudiox3: fixed
10:58 Lanturn: Easy: 00:47:661 (1) -  remove this? It's not there on your hard
10:59 Lanturn: Also, the red line should start at 00:49:507 -
10:59 Lanturn: otherwise you have the incorrect starting measure
10:59 Lanturn: You'll probably have to go resnap your green lines after it
11:00 Lanturn: since they'll be unsnapped by 1 or 2ms
11:00 Lanturn: Easy: 00:55:045 (2) -  offscreen. unrankable
11:02 KokoroStudiox3: fixed
11:03 Lanturn: make sure to swap the red timing on all diffs, and fix all their green lines as well :P
11:03 KokoroStudiox3: ok
11:04 Lanturn: 01:04:737 (4) -  nc on Easy? That's a really long combo otherwise
11:04 KokoroStudiox3: done
11:07 Lanturn: 03:00:584 (1) - instead of this spinner. Why not map starting from 03:02:430 - instead of leaving this big gap?
11:07 Lanturn: Maybe create symmetry with 03:04:276 (1) -  for it
11:10 KokoroStudiox3: done :D
11:12 Lanturn: Maybe do the same in hard as well? I'm worried the spacing after the spinner isn't enough time to recover (though I didn't have a problem)
11:15 Lanturn: Finally the last spinner seems like it should end at 03:39:353 - because that's where the final vocals stop and it's just fade out after that
11:15 Lanturn: on both diffs
11:15 Lanturn: Maybe map the last bit on Hard since the spinner would be short.
11:15 Lanturn: Also the green line is unsnapped at the end of the spinner anyways, unless you already fixed it
11:20 KokoroStudiox3: fixed
11:20 Lanturn: Hmm. Update for now and I'll see what still needs to be fixed
11:20 Lanturn: Easy was pretty perfect from what I could tell
11:25 KokoroStudiox3: updated :3
11:26 Lanturn: 03:04:276 (1) - Should remove this NC on Easy, and then NC on 03:06:122 (2) -  (remove Nc on 03:05:661 (1) - )
11:27 Lanturn: 03:02:430 (1,1) -  also these two could be moved a little to the left. Having the 03:02:430 (1) -  so far right is a bit much lol
11:32 KokoroStudiox3: fixed
11:32 Lanturn: the only other thing is normal needs quite a few more mods
11:33 Lanturn: Since it was remapped, and I can already see a few things off the bat that need fixing
11:33 Lanturn: Also for Easy. You should just AR3 HPOD2
11:34 Lanturn: Normal needs to use a higher SV and such
11:34 Lanturn: to make up for the difficulty
11:40 Lanturn: . Oh. you didn't start the red line at 00:49:507 - I thought you were going to remove the notes before it as well XD
11:44 KokoroStudiox3: ok :C
11:45 Lanturn: lol
11:45 Lanturn: might as well fix it early because it will have to be done anyways (the red timing point)
11:45 KokoroStudiox3: all fixed
11:45 KokoroStudiox3: :3
11:52 Lanturn: Cool. Now you just gotta resnap all the green lines. :P
11:52 Lanturn: For example: 03:24:583 - got unsnapped because of the red timing change. It happens
12:04 KokoroStudiox3: all fixed :3
12:05 Lanturn: cool :D
12:05 KokoroStudiox3: :3
12:06 Lanturn: I'll write a few things for Normal I guess
12:06 Lanturn: It needs a bit of work
12:07 KokoroStudiox3: ok

On a side note, a lot of green is still unsnapped. 01:48:583 - and 03:24:583 - are two important examples. There are probably more.

[Komari's Normal]
So this diff is probably going to need another remap. The major issue is that the density balance is too uneven. A lot of parts are really 1/2 spammy, while some others have nothing but 1/1's. I think it was mapped like this to increase the 'difficulty' of the map. The problem is with such a low SV. adding 1/2 notes isn't going to increase it by that much. This mostly occurs in the Kiai. One of two options is to try and vocal map a bit more instead of mapping heavy on the beat, and the other is to just remove some unimportant ones, like lead-ins and empty note ends.

I highly suggest using 1.2 to 1.4 SV since Easy is 1.0 and Hard is 1.8. You can either then choose to use 0.8 spacing or 1.2 spacing. Depends if you want the 1/2 notes to touch or not. Make sure they either are touching the previous notes, or have enough space that they aren't.

Some additional modding to help get you started. Didn't really pick on any placement things because you'll need to fix the SV and stuff.

00:52:276 (4) - I think it would suit the music more following the vocals here. There really isn't any noticable beat in the background to support your current rhythm. The magical 3/2 reverse sliders work wonders here. Once the beat starts up at 00:56:891 (1) - it plays fine as is.
01:00:584 (1) - That's a lot of instruments you skip here. Are you sure you don't want to at least map to the cymbal at 01:01:507 - for a finish?
01:09:353 (2) - would fit the music 1/2 back
01:57:584 (2) - Pointless note. Better off deleted imo as it doesn't match the rhythm of anything
02:35:661 (5) - This doesn't match the rhythm. The reverse really doesn't hit anything in the song. It'd be better just to map this to 1/2 notes or 1/1.
02:52:276 (2) - This makes more sense if the reverse happens at 02:53:199 - to match the vocals. Add a note afterwards at 02:55:045 -
02:55:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I would suggest deleting these since the beat gets awkward here and having a break like Easy/Hard do.
03:01:276 (2) - 2.0 spacing here. This should be in the middle of (1,3)
03:04:276 (4,5) - To be honest. You should just follow the vocals for these since it becomes a lot more dense than Hard even does lol.
03:16:968 (3,4,5) - Though I don't have a problem myself. The 3/4 vocals being a circle could be rough for the newer players. Change (3) into a circle and then have a slider from 03:17:199 - to 03:17:545 - to make it easier and more suitable for this diff.
03:20:891 (3) - This really doesn't fit being a 3/4. It goes by 1/1 vocals and 1/2 beat here.
03:35:891 - this is a bit too much of a slowdown. Why not try something simple like Easy does. You don't even need the slow down here.

So these are just a few things after skimming through. The Normal definitely needs more mods/assistance, and the Easy/Hard wouldn't hurt to have a few more.

Good luck. You can call me back later once Normal is a bit more balanced and ready to be ranked.

Pretty Rhythm

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Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-01-16T10:38:29+00:00

well.. ok, I will remap again

pkhg

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Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-17T04:03:08+00:00

why didnt you replied to my mod? my heart is on it ;w;

@Lolicore_Komari: ganbatte >w<

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-19T00:42:18+00:00

pkhg wrote:
why didnt you replied to my mod? my heart is on it ;w;

@Lolicore_Komari: ganbatte >w<

aplique todo nomas lo del titulo lo Voy a dejar pendiente

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Insane <3 ?

ok

please as soon as possible x.x

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-01-19T12:03:10+00:00

Remapped complete..

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-20T06:44:40+00:00

all update

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2015-01-30T21:50:40+00:00

http://puu.sh/ffvl7/937bb20e30.flv
http://puu.sh/ffvrt/5974e6af17.mp3

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-30T23:01:54+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
http://puu.sh/ffvl7/937bb20e30.flv
http://puu.sh/ffvrt/5974e6af17.mp3

thanks for the best video quality and cut

Riyukii

253 posts

Joined July 2014

Riyukii 2015-01-31T10:01:37+00:00

Hello. From #modreqs. (sorry i'm late D:)
[Easy]

00:52:160 (2) change the position to 00:52:045
00:54:006 (4) do the same thing with this note, change position to 00:53:891
00:55:852 (2) here too, move it to 00:55:737
00:57:699 (4) move at 00:57:583

[Komari's Normal]

01:03:699 (3) move this note at 01:03:237
2:41:545 - 2:41:314
2:51:699 (4) change this note to this http://puu.sh/fgVct.jpg

[Hard]

00:38:776 (4) move to 00:38:891
00:39:353 (6) http://puu.sh/fgWHV.jpg move like this, http://puu.sh/fgWOn.jpg or approach it how you like.
00:55:160 (2) maybe move it to 00:55:045 ?

Sorry for short mod. >w<
Good luck. ~

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-01-31T19:27:23+00:00

Riyukii wrote:
Hello. From #modreqs. (sorry i'm late D:)
[Easy]
00:52:160 (2) change the position to 00:52:045not keeping pace x.x players can fail no notice that the note is closer
00:54:006 (4) do the same thing with this note, change position to 00:53:891^same
00:55:852 (2) here too, move it to 00:55:737^^same
00:57:699 (4) move at 00:57:583^^same
[Komari's Normal]
01:03:699 (3) move this note at 01:03:237
2:41:545 - 2:41:314
2:51:699 (4) change this note to this http://puu.sh/fgVct.jpg
[Hard]
00:38:776 (4) move to 00:38:891not keeping pace x.x
00:39:353 (6) http://puu.sh/fgWHV.jpg move like this, http://puu.sh/fgWOn.jpg or approach it how you like. does not match the pace of the voice that I follow:c
00:55:160 (2) maybe move it to 00:55:045 ?it is not necessary x:3
Sorry for short mod. >w<
Good luck. ~

np thanks :3

Lazly-kun

45 posts

Joined February 2013

Lazly-kun 2015-01-31T20:57:02+00:00

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/b/617117
Timing:
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 01:01:853
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 02:37:853
That applies to all difficulties.
Easy:
00:18:468 (2) - While the note you're going for here is audible, it's probably best to stay on the beat for an easy.
00:22:160 (3) - Same.
00:25:852 (2) - Again
There's a few other sliders that are the same throughout the map, it's probably not that big of a problem.
01:09:237 (1) - Maybe add a circle for every beat here? Feels kind of pauseish to me, but that's just me.
Normal:
00:04:622 (3) - This slider feels like it's following the vocal, but because of the other beats around it, and the difficulty it's on, it's probably better to stick to ending on the beat.
01:31:391 (1) - I feel like what this is mapped to is better for opening the break than being a single beat.
Hard:
00:32:314 (1) - Slider is "hiding" under the end of the slider, it is a hard, but I think it should be separated a bit because of how little the time between it and the slider is.
01:05:776 (1) - Same as before.

I really like the map, better than what I could make.

Sorry if you don't like the mod, that's why I modded you first.

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-02-01T17:11:26+00:00

thanks to mod!

fixed

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: _Touhou_Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol____.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46160
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 47669,64250,79019,138130,152899,211976
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Tewi wants to Become a Cooking Idol
TitleUnicode:てゐがクッキンアイドルになったようです
Artist:yukkin
ArtistUnicode:ゆっきん
Creator:KokoroStudiox3
Version:Komari's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:Lolicore_Komari eLtigreXXx tewi inaba usa porject zun
BeatmapID:359362
BeatmapSetID:98069

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
Video,0,"optc.flv"
//Break Periods
2,91852,104960
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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16622,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
32314,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
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128314,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
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157853,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
165237,-100,4,2,0,25,0,0
172160,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,210,166
Combo2 : 197,141,141
Combo3 : 255,132,193

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152,36,19852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,156,20314,2,0,L|168:296,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,84,21699,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,22160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,22391,2,0,P|376:212|430:170,1,140
328,96,23314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,23545,2,0,L|172:116,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,170,24929,6,0,P|376:212|308:208,1,140
184,180,25852,2,0,L|212:256,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,76,26776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,196,27237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,260,27699,2,0,P|246:233|261:168,1,140
256,192,28622,12,0,31391,0:0:0:0:
40,184,32314,6,0,P|139:162|219:225,1,210
236,284,33237,2,0,L|220:356,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,33929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,312,34160,2,0,P|432:212|385:87,1,280
268,48,35545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,132,36006,6,0,P|234:168|304:152,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,52,37391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,51,37852,2,0,P|52:115|72:188,1,140
128,208,38545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,200,38776,2,0,L|160:336,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,40160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,76,40622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,200,41083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,200,41545,2,0,B|36:224|36:224|8:192|8:136|32:110,1,280
140,44,42929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43391,12,0,46160,0:0:0:0:
444,331,47083,6,0,P|454:233|368:183,1,210
304,188,48006,2,0,L|212:200,1,70
196,248,48468,2,0,L|104:260,1,70
71,287,48929,2,0,P|29:195|69:101,1,210
124,68,49852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,128,50314,2,0,L|320:120,1,70
340,68,50776,6,0,L|478:87,1,140
392,180,51699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,272,52160,2,0,P|482:338|423:368,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,244,53314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,268,53545,2,0,L|292:280,1,70
256,232,54006,2,0,L|180:244,1,70
124,240,54468,6,0,P|69:154|102:57,1,210
160,36,55391,2,0,L|304:56,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,156,56776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,156,57006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,156,57237,2,0,L|292:172,1,70
324,144,57699,2,0,L|420:160,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,268,58622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,340,59083,2,0,P|472:276|448:208,1,140
356,128,60006,2,0,P|292:104|224:128,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,61852,6,0,P|58:245|60:112,1,280
180,76,63237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,76,63468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,76,63699,2,0,P|191:144|166:208,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,188,64622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,308,65083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,308,65545,6,0,P|214:333|334:266,1,280
356,208,66699,2,0,L|363:138,1,70
320,92,67160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,67391,2,0,L|112:96,1,140
28,184,68314,6,0,P|23:218|35:250,1,70
72,304,68776,2,0,P|92:331|124:345,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,69237,2,0,L|348:320,1,140
348,200,70160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,70622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,287,71083,6,0,P|470:228|462:159,1,140
368,76,72006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,172,72468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72929,12,0,75699,0:0:0:0:
451,103,76622,6,0,P|355:81|299:162,1,210
332,216,77545,2,0,L|352:300,1,70
408,304,78006,2,0,L|428:388,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,204,78929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,203,79391,2,0,P|483:135|434:88,1,140
356,188,80314,6,0,P|290:205|231:171,1,140
304,68,81237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,100,81699,2,0,L|500:80,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,208,82622,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,308,83083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,324,83545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,232,84006,6,0,L|86:259,1,140
0,168,84929,2,0,L|137:140,1,140
244,72,85852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,72,86314,2,0,L|383:87,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,172,87699,2,0,B|384:208|384:208|440:172,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,172,89545,2,0,B|128:208|128:208|71:172,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,90929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,91391,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,144,106160,6,0,P|478:208|443:267,1,140
396,304,106852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,284,107083,2,0,L|240:280,1,70
220,236,107545,2,0,L|124:232,1,70
96,264,108006,2,0,B|72:272|72:272|56:364,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,233,108929,2,0,B|174:225|174:225|190:133,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,109852,6,0,P|60:142|73:75,1,140
124,36,110545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,64,110776,2,0,L|320:76,1,140
360,124,111468,2,0,L|429:130,1,70
384,248,112160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,203,112622,2,0,P|242:140|265:75,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,113776,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,268,114006,2,0,L|388:336,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,236,114699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,236,114929,2,0,P|461:174|444:107,1,140
344,32,115852,6,0,P|310:24|275:26,1,70
228,68,116314,2,0,P|220:102|222:137,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,184,116776,2,0,L|248:328,1,140
128,364,117699,6,0,L|135:288,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,264,118622,2,0,L|59:188,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,119545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,316,120006,2,0,P|275:267|281:135,1,280
180,60,121391,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,144,121852,2,0,L|4:156,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,122776,2,0,L|472:252,1,280
420,136,124160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,132,124622,2,0,P|272:179|288:228,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,99,125545,6,0,P|522:153|431:312,2,420,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,128776,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,132,129237,2,0,P|81:140|49:199,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,130622,5,0,0:0:0:0:
363,132,131083,2,0,P|430:140|462:199,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,132468,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,160,132929,2,0,P|108:113|139:31,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,134314,5,0,0:0:0:0:
379,160,134775,2,0,P|404:96|375:34,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,264,136160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,320,136622,2,0,L|260:328,1,70
224,284,137083,2,0,L|144:292,1,70
104,328,137545,2,0,P|47:290|51:223,1,140
128,124,138468,2,0,L|148:56,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,139160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,167,139391,2,0,P|294:181|350:142,1,140
452,68,140314,6,0,L|432:208,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,124,141699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,248,142160,2,0,L|352:316,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,312,143083,6,0,P|169:339|107:311,1,140
72,260,143776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,144006,2,0,L|52:108,1,140
148,36,144929,6,0,L|148:148,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,146083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,146314,2,0,L|324:80,1,70
380,48,146776,6,0,L|360:208,1,140
388,244,147468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,283,147699,2,0,P|377:319|309:308,1,140
192,260,148622,6,0,P|124:249|65:284,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,149776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,252,150006,2,0,P|312:219|302:186,1,70
276,127,150468,6,0,P|382:54|472:146,1,280
452,204,151622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,204,151852,2,0,L|464:276,1,70
400,260,152314,2,0,L|420:376,2,105,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,204,153468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,244,153699,2,0,L|160:256,1,70
140,200,154160,6,0,L|0:220,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,156006,6,0,L|512:220,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,292,157852,6,0,P|227:205|140:115,1,280
16,84,159237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,84,159468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,159929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,160160,2,0,L|196:180,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,161545,6,0,B|256:296|256:296|266:324,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,244,162468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,344,162929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,344,163160,2,0,B|476:328|476:328|491:226,1,140
456,180,163852,2,0,L|420:24,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,244,165237,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,132,166160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,96,167083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,136,168006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,259,168699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,259,168929,6,0,P|262:243|262:51,1,420
156,124,170776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,56,171237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,180,171699,2,0,B|24:220|52:288|52:288|60:260,1,140

KokoroStudiox3

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Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-02-02T18:49:23+00:00

Lazly-kun wrote:
M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/b/617117
Timing:
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 01:01:853 FIXED
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 02:37:853FIXED
That applies to all difficulties.
Easy:
00:18:468 (2) - While the note you're going for here is audible, it's probably best to stay on the beat for an easy.AQUI NO ME QUEDA CLARO X.X
00:22:160 (3) - Same.
00:25:852 (2) - Again
There's a few other sliders that are the same throughout the map, it's probably not that big of a problem.
01:09:237 (1) - Maybe add a circle for every beat here? Feels kind of pauseish to me, but that's just me.ESTA BIEN ASY PARA UNA EASY y no beo problema :3
Normal:
00:04:622 (3) - This slider feels like it's following the vocal, but because of the other beats around it, and the difficulty it's on, it's probably better to stick to ending on the beat.
01:31:391 (1) - I feel like what this is mapped to is better for opening the break than being a single beat.
Hard:
00:32:314 (1) - Slider is "hiding" under the end of the slider, it is a hard, but I think it should be separated a bit because of how little the time between it and the slider is.OK
01:05:776 (1) - Same as before.OK

I really like the map, better than what I could make.

Sorry if you don't like the mod, that's why I modded you first.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-02-02T20:24:55+00:00

here's my irc :

12:05 ByBy_ChAn: hi
12:25 KokoroStudiox3: hi :3
12:25 ByBy_ChAn: would you like a IRC ? as I said in my queue
12:25 KokoroStudiox3: yes ^^
12:26 ByBy_ChAn: ok
12:26 ByBy_ChAn: wait a minute
12:26 KokoroStudiox3: ok
12:39 ByBy_ChAn: sry for taking so long ;_;
12:39 ByBy_ChAn: I had a chat
12:39 KokoroStudiox3: ok :3
12:39 ByBy_ChAn: lemme testplay first
12:40 KokoroStudiox3: okas :3
12:42 ByBy_ChAn: blame my laptop ;-:
12:42 ByBy_ChAn: *;_;
12:42 KokoroStudiox3: :P
12:44 ByBy_ChAn: ok
12:44 ByBy_ChAn: general
12:44 ByBy_ChAn: there's combo colour incosistences 
12:44 ByBy_ChAn: *colours
12:45 ByBy_ChAn: ohh
12:46 ByBy_ChAn: I want to say you have unused combo colours
12:46 KokoroStudiox3: o:
12:48 KokoroStudiox3: combio colours ?
12:50 ByBy_ChAn: yes
12:52 KokoroStudiox3: http://puu.sh/fnSVb/d3711a84bc.png
12:52 ByBy_ChAn: yes they're unused
12:52 KokoroStudiox3: o:
12:53 ByBy_ChAn: fix pls
12:53 KokoroStudiox3: http://puu.sh/fnTcN/b5b874717d.jpg
12:53 ByBy_ChAn: maybe you forgot to add to your osu! file
12:54 ByBy_ChAn: oohh
12:54 ByBy_ChAn: at me is red,blue,greenand yellow ;w;
12:54 KokoroStudiox3: use default skin :#
12:55 ByBy_ChAn: ah ok
12:56 KokoroStudiox3: :3
12:56 ByBy_ChAn: easy
12:57 ByBy_ChAn: 00:58:160(1) remove whistle from sliderslide
12:59 KokoroStudiox3: aa fixed :3
13:04 ByBy_ChAn: 01:20:314 (1)- imo move the slider's tail to 01:21:237 ()- and add a note on 01:21:699 ()-
13:04 ByBy_ChAn: to follow well the rhythm and the vocal
13:09 KokoroStudiox3: ok
13:09 KokoroStudiox3: :3
13:10 ByBy_ChAn: 01:49:391 (4)- you can make a blanket with the previous slider for a better flow I guess
13:11 ByBy_ChAn: 02:04:622 (2)- Add clap on slider's reverse arrow
13:15 KokoroStudiox3: done
13:16 ByBy_ChAn: maybe last issue
13:17 ByBy_ChAn: 02:25:000 (2)- Why you not move the last gap to x:355 y:232 for a better flow and cursor movement ?
13:20 KokoroStudiox3: o:
13:21 ByBy_ChAn: I'll post the IRC

Good Luck o/

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-02-02T20:29:47+00:00

all update thanks :3

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2015-02-24T00:35:48+00:00

Hi~ KokoroStudiox3

Easy

00:24:929 (1) - Delete finish
00:32:314 - Add finish
00:59:545 (2) - Add circle , sampleset normal
01:31:391 - Add finish
02:04:622 (2) - Suggestions!
02:22:622 (4) - Add circle , sampleset normal
02:30:006 (4) - Same
Overall is missing clap.
00:18:006 (1) - 00:19:852 - 00:20:776 - 00:21:699 (2) - 00:23:545 - 00:24:468 (6) - 00:25:391 - 00:27:237 - 00:28:160 (6) - 00:29:083 - 00:30:006 (3) - 00:32:776 (2) - 00:34:622 (2) - 00:36:468 (1,3) - 00:39:237 (5) - More ...

Komari's Normal

ㅎㅇㅎㅇ~

힛사가 없는데 .. 일부러 그러신건가요? 아니라면 힛사 넣어주세요.
제가 모양같은건 잘 못잡아서 .. 패스할게요 .. 죄송..

아.. 그리고 맨 처음에 빨간선쪽에 소리가 좀 큰것같아요. 40% 정도로 줄여주시면 괜찮을지도 .. 는 지금상태로는 너무 큰듯싶어요.

Hard

02:04:929 (3) - Finish on both sides
02:16:006 (1,2) - Swap NC
02:19:391 (5,1) - Same
02:21:699 - Add Clap!
02:22:622 (7) - Same
02:36:776 (4) - snap!! 02:36:814 (4) - move

Done!!

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-02-26T23:26:59+00:00

all done

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2015-02-27T21:09:44+00:00

to Zzz : 뱃 (아직도 이렇게불러도되나) 와서 맵셋 이대로가도 괜찮다고하면 그때 힛사추가할라구요..

Dromadan

71 posts

Joined January 2014

Dromadan 2015-05-12T01:22:29+00:00

Let this be ranked someday.

UchiganeNiigata

44 posts

Joined February 2014

UchiganeNiigata 2015-06-15T23:10:50+00:00

NM from my queue

Komari's Normal

General Things:
You can add claps to every note that lands on white ticks Starting from 00:16:622
There are a lot of blankets to fix, I will only mention a few
Might not want to map on blue ticks

00:02:776 - It seems that you are mapping the vocals here, so I suggest making the hitsound for this section S and lowering the volume to 30-40%
00:09:929(6) - You can add a Finish to this note
00:10:622 (1) - Fix the blanket here
00:13:852 (1) - You should only be mapping on red and white ticks, so maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/iqiCV/294ba18bb7.jpg
00:16:160 - Move the timing point from 00:16:622 to here
00:13:852 (1,2) - You can put Finish on these two notes
00:35:545 (5,1) - Blanket fix
00:36:006 (1,3) - Blanket fix
01:01:852 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
01:31:391 (1) - You can add a Finish on this note
01:46:160 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
01:59:545 (3,4) - Blanket fix

Hard

Not much to fix here except the small blanket misplacement and some slight hitsounding changes

00:02:776 - It seems that you are mapping the vocals here, so I suggest making the hitsound for this section S and lowering the volume to 30-40%
00:10:160 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
00:20:545 (3,1) - Blanket fix
00:47:083 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
01:01:852 - "
01:09:237 - "
01:46:160 - "
01:48:929 (4,5) - Blanket fix
02:15:699 - Change the hitsound of this section to N

Sorry I couldn't mod the easy, I'm horrible at modding easy diffs

Good luck with the map! And let me know what you changed

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-06-16T00:45:11+00:00

UchiganeNiigata wrote:
NM from my queue

Komari's Normal
General Things:
You can add claps to every note that lands on white ticks Starting from 00:16:622
There are a lot of blankets to fix, I will only mention a few
Might not want to map on blue ticks

00:02:776 - It seems that you are mapping the vocals here, so I suggest making the hitsound for this section S and lowering the volume to 30-40%
00:09:929(6) - You can add a Finish to this note
00:10:622 (1) - Fix the blanket here
00:13:852 (1) - You should only be mapping on red and white ticks, so maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/iqiCV/294ba18bb7.jpg
00:16:160 - Move the timing point from 00:16:622 to here
00:13:852 (1,2) - You can put Finish on these two notes
00:35:545 (5,1) - Blanket fix
00:36:006 (1,3) - Blanket fix
01:01:852 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
01:31:391 (1) - You can add a Finish on this note
01:46:160 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
01:59:545 (3,4) - Blanket fix

Hard
Not much to fix here except the small blanket misplacement and some slight hitsounding changes

00:02:776 - It seems that you are mapping the vocals here, so I suggest making the hitsound for this section S and lowering the volume to 30-40%ok
00:10:160 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
00:20:545 (3,1) - Blanket fixok
00:47:083 - Change the hitsound of this section to N
01:01:852 - "
01:09:237 - "
01:46:160 - "
01:48:929 (4,5) - Blanket fixok
02:15:699 - Change the hitsound of this section to N

Sorry I couldn't mod the easy, I'm horrible at modding easy diffs
Good luck with the map! And let me know what you changed

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Pretty Rhythm

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Pretty Rhythm 2015-06-16T13:39:00+00:00

well, I don't add hitsound yet because I cannot sure my diff is ok to rank, but well.. I will add hitsound

Lumael

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Lumael 2015-06-17T00:08:28+00:00

Hello , you are the next from my modding queue!

Overall

I feel like the song is a bit offset, play it at 25% playback
Work on hitsounding a bit more for consistency
There's a mix of patterns following the vocals and some following the rhythm, some places it's hard to guess which of they you'll follow

Easy

I think that the hitsound should focus on the first part of the sliders, it would fit better imo, I feel like it's unpleasant how it is now

00:06:468 (1) - I think it's a bit boring to place the slider at the same place it was right before. I thought of something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3264510
00:15:699 (1) - What if it finished at 00:17:083 - and place a 1/1 slider at 00:17:545 - ? Because this melody would start a new 'part' of the song
00:41:545 (3,4,5,6) - Too much whistle, don't feel great
01:48:006 (2,3) - Fix blanket
01:55:391 (3,4) - Blanket slightly off

Komari's Normal

00:28:622 (1) - Why a spinner? Spinners are hard for new players
02:02:776 (3) - this slider is a bit unconfortable to play (I imagine new players trying to hold their mouses weirdly to this slider)
02:05:545 (1) - Lower the volume of the initial part of this slider?
02:08:776 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part should follow the rhythm on the red snap
02:36:006 - 02:36:929 - 1/1 slider at both locations?

Hard

00:06:468 (1) - According to this 00:04:622 (1) - I think the first part should have whistle hitsound too
00:08:314 (4) - ^
00:28:622 (6) - Whistle and NC (You've put NC here 00:21:237 (1) - , which is equivalent)
00:29:083 (1) - Remove NC

That's it

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-06-17T15:35:59+00:00

al fix :

Luel Roseline

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Luel Roseline 2015-06-19T13:10:01+00:00

Hello~ For Modding~

[General]Why don't you add this tag?(Nico Nico Douga)

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-06-20T04:37:43+00:00

S A V E R Y wrote:
Hello~ For Modding~

[General]Why don't you add this tag?(Nico Nico Douga)

ok

thnaks :3

Luel Roseline

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Luel Roseline 2015-07-02T06:00:42+00:00

Very nice, isn't it?

KokoroStudiox3

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KokoroStudiox3 2015-07-06T03:49:32+00:00

S A V E R Y wrote:

Very nice, isn't it?

video ? o:

Luel Roseline

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Luel Roseline 2015-07-08T15:39:41+00:00

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:
S A V E R Y wrote:

Very nice, isn't it?
video ? o:

Yes.

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