Hey Gommy and Mili ovo/
Here for the NM requested from the Wild and Hyper's NM/M4M Queue [STD|CTB]
General
Slider velocity in Salad is too high. 1.5 fit so much better.
01:01:274 and 01:07:849 timing points are not snapped and are a bit close to the next kiai (suggest putting thjem back to the last white tick on the timeline).
Kiai's collide with Mili's diff and should stay the same for consistency even for a GD.
Don't need Letterbox or widescreen support like AFB said.
Well I hope this helped
Any questions feel free to pm me or leave a message in my inbox
Good luck :3/ (good beatmap)
Here for the NM requested from the Wild and Hyper's NM/M4M Queue [STD|CTB]
General
Slider velocity in Salad is too high. 1.5 fit so much better.
01:01:274 and 01:07:849 timing points are not snapped and are a bit close to the next kiai (suggest putting thjem back to the last white tick on the timeline).
Kiai's collide with Mili's diff and should stay the same for consistency even for a GD.
Don't need Letterbox or widescreen support like AFB said.
Salad
00:13:654 (1) - bit of a hard jump to get to. Ctrl + G this and move a bit closer to somewhere like x:384 y:248 (also should this not have a finish at the start) ?
00:26:599 (4) - remove this note for more emphasis on the next note (1)
00:26:805 (1) - This should have a finish on it since it has a clash sound in the music
00:28:243 (1,2,3) - Since you follow the lyrics in the music it would be nice if there was a long slider here because it does not fit as it is atm (specially (1) and (2)) Also it has a lot of 1/4 sliders so adding variety is nice too
00:31:531 (4,1) - Removing (1) and extending (4) into a reverse makes it sway nicer and it can be easier (after adjusting the snapping of course)
00:33:175 (4,1) - This sounds a lot better here
00:39:339 (5) - Remove this because you don't necessarily need this as the vocals stop here and plus it would give a nice short emphasis
00:39:956 (2) - Be nice for a finish at the start of this slider too
00:40:777 (3,4,5,6) - instead of a straight line it would be nice for some variety patterns as quite a number of the ones used are just straight lines. try something like this.
00:49:819 (1) - Little clash noise here for a finish at the start of it
00:51:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For better flow try this. Move (2) to x:272 (3) to x:144 (4) to x:248 (5) to x:344 and (6) to x:216
00:54:750 (1) - This needs a finish again at the start
01:01:942 (2,3) - Swapping these over sound better with the vocals (adjust claps then)
01:16:120 (5) - Imo remove (6) and extend this to a reverse and it glides nicely with that ding noise then
01:21:873 (2,3) - if you listen to it back in 25% playback rate these notes are off time (some others ahead are a little bit off too)
00:26:599 (4) - remove this note for more emphasis on the next note (1)
00:26:805 (1) - This should have a finish on it since it has a clash sound in the music
00:28:243 (1,2,3) - Since you follow the lyrics in the music it would be nice if there was a long slider here because it does not fit as it is atm (specially (1) and (2)) Also it has a lot of 1/4 sliders so adding variety is nice too
00:31:531 (4,1) - Removing (1) and extending (4) into a reverse makes it sway nicer and it can be easier (after adjusting the snapping of course)
00:33:175 (4,1) - This sounds a lot better here
00:39:339 (5) - Remove this because you don't necessarily need this as the vocals stop here and plus it would give a nice short emphasis
00:39:956 (2) - Be nice for a finish at the start of this slider too
00:40:777 (3,4,5,6) - instead of a straight line it would be nice for some variety patterns as quite a number of the ones used are just straight lines. try something like this.
00:49:819 (1) - Little clash noise here for a finish at the start of it
00:51:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For better flow try this. Move (2) to x:272 (3) to x:144 (4) to x:248 (5) to x:344 and (6) to x:216
00:54:750 (1) - This needs a finish again at the start
01:01:942 (2,3) - Swapping these over sound better with the vocals (adjust claps then)
01:16:120 (5) - Imo remove (6) and extend this to a reverse and it glides nicely with that ding noise then
01:21:873 (2,3) - if you listen to it back in 25% playback rate these notes are off time (some others ahead are a little bit off too)
Platter
Cool platter (SS'ed this huehue)
00:00:298 - Like you sort of did at the end of this diff with the quick notes on the sounds maybe put 2 notes here? one being on the time selected right now and one being here 00:00:401 - goes well with that start noise too
00:07:695 - Instead of that slider being there it would be nice if there was just one note here instead. quite nice emphasis too
00:09:750 - Drum noise here that could be used with a circle note on it
00:13:654 (1) - Finish sound at the start (won't mention the finishes again. They are all in Salad mod if you need them :3)
00:39:750 (1,2) - This Jump is a bit hard. Either make (1) into a hyper (which would also give an emphasis on the chorus too) or reduce the distance.
00:40:572 (4) - Imo this would suite the section better (or the pattern you did before this as she says the same lyrics)
00:42:627 (1) - There is not really any sound here. Not too essential but I would remove it
00:59:887 (2) - Instead of this slider it feels better to use circle notes to hit with the vocals
01:13:038 (2) - move this to x:80 for smoother flow
01:17:353 (1) - Be nice if this was moved to x:480 for a hyper near the end. better climax to
01:24:339 (1) - it's kind of a soft ending and not sure if this small reverse slider works. I would just use a single circle note
00:00:298 - Like you sort of did at the end of this diff with the quick notes on the sounds maybe put 2 notes here? one being on the time selected right now and one being here 00:00:401 - goes well with that start noise too
00:07:695 - Instead of that slider being there it would be nice if there was just one note here instead. quite nice emphasis too
00:09:750 - Drum noise here that could be used with a circle note on it
00:13:654 (1) - Finish sound at the start (won't mention the finishes again. They are all in Salad mod if you need them :3)
00:39:750 (1,2) - This Jump is a bit hard. Either make (1) into a hyper (which would also give an emphasis on the chorus too) or reduce the distance.
00:40:572 (4) - Imo this would suite the section better (or the pattern you did before this as she says the same lyrics)
00:42:627 (1) - There is not really any sound here. Not too essential but I would remove it
00:59:887 (2) - Instead of this slider it feels better to use circle notes to hit with the vocals
01:13:038 (2) - move this to x:80 for smoother flow
01:17:353 (1) - Be nice if this was moved to x:480 for a hyper near the end. better climax to
01:24:339 (1) - it's kind of a soft ending and not sure if this small reverse slider works. I would just use a single circle note
Mili's Rain
00:08:312 (1,2) - quite a strong beat between the 2 here so I would make the end of (1) into a hyper to (2). (move (1) to x:336 and (2) to x:160 or maybe even further out so (7) before has a hyper too. would run smooth)
00:20:230 (2) - move right a bit to x:352 as it is quite a powerful vocal sound and flows nice too
00:29:887 (2) - move to x:160 for better flow
00:40:161 (3,4,5) - another powerful start up here. Try move all these together to x:320
00:46:017 (4) - quite a hard turn around to get. Just ctrl+g on the spot which also give a nice hyper too
00:58:654 (4,5,6) - the claps here sound a bit weird. I would just put them on the white ticks instead. Same goes for 00:59:476 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:887 (4,5,6) - (and ones further along)
01:13:037 (4,5,6) - You should mirror these a bit better on the grid and move them all to x:192. Better flow too. = profit :3
01:15:914 (5,6,7) - bit of a hard turn again. At least move the notes closer together (I see what you try to do here though for the finale :3)
Cool Rain /
00:20:230 (2) - move right a bit to x:352 as it is quite a powerful vocal sound and flows nice too
00:29:887 (2) - move to x:160 for better flow
00:40:161 (3,4,5) - another powerful start up here. Try move all these together to x:320
00:46:017 (4) - quite a hard turn around to get. Just ctrl+g on the spot which also give a nice hyper too
00:58:654 (4,5,6) - the claps here sound a bit weird. I would just put them on the white ticks instead. Same goes for 00:59:476 (1,2,3) - and 00:59:887 (4,5,6) - (and ones further along)
01:13:037 (4,5,6) - You should mirror these a bit better on the grid and move them all to x:192. Better flow too. = profit :3
01:15:914 (5,6,7) - bit of a hard turn again. At least move the notes closer together (I see what you try to do here though for the finale :3)
Cool Rain /
Overdose
00:01:120 (1) - move this to x:352 as where it is atm is too easy and needs to be spread out more.
00:06:257 (2) - Imo this would fit the music SO much better with this pattern too. (Go crazy with overdose :3)
00:59:887 (2) - instead of this slider have 2 circle instead and make (2,3,4) hypers cause it goes nicely with the vocals from side to side
01:17:764 (4,1) - Sound like a slider would go here instead making it better with the vocals
01:18:586 (4,1) - ^
Really good overdose :3 I loved it
00:06:257 (2) - Imo this would fit the music SO much better with this pattern too. (Go crazy with overdose :3)
00:59:887 (2) - instead of this slider have 2 circle instead and make (2,3,4) hypers cause it goes nicely with the vocals from side to side
01:17:764 (4,1) - Sound like a slider would go here instead making it better with the vocals
01:18:586 (4,1) - ^
Really good overdose :3 I loved it
Well I hope this helped
Any questions feel free to pm me or leave a message in my inbox
Good luck :3/ (good beatmap)