ReeChelly wrote:

From my queue~

[Ramune]
Please fix this.


00:01:565 (3) - Putting more distance to this would add a nice emphasis to the sound.

00:04:422 (3) - ^ and making this a reverse slider doesn't really fit the song imo. Try using a circle on 00:04:779 stacked with 4 instead. The sound here is similar to on 4.

Like this

00:05:315 (1,2) -Do not put sliders on a red tick unless the song really allows it. It doesn't fit, you would mostly want to map sliders on a down beat.

00:07:279 (3) - same as the first thing I mentioned.

00:07:993 (5) - This plays kinda awkwardly.. try moving this under 4 and putting 6 in it's place.. If you don't change it, fix 5, it is not aligned properly with the slider (or fix the slider, that works too).

00:10:850 (1) - Instead of making this closer, try making it further. Nice way to emphasise the new 'pattern' in the song.

00:15:136 (1) - The SV change here doesn't really fit imo.. But if you want to keep it I suggest using 0.75 instead..

00:18:708 (3) - fix blanket? k

00:19:422 (5) - ^ ^

00:20:850 (1) - Same thing about the SV change. k

00:23:708 (1) - 2 is closer to 1 than 4, it's a quite deceiving.. Maybe move 1 closer to 4? k

00:28:708 (3) - Fix blanket?

00:33:529 (4) - Consider turning this into a reverse slider to finish on the white tick?

00:44:779 (5) - Fix blanket? k

00:44:243 (3) - doesn't fit on red tick. fixed

00:44:779 (5) - Instead of a reverse slider, consider using a a circle then a slider. It fits better because of the separate sounds in the music. done

00:45:404 - Add here k

00:45:761 (2) - Remove this. k

00:46:743 (2) - Doesn't fit on the red tick, you'll want to click on the white tick, on 'hey'. fixed

00:47:368 - Add here? nah

00:54:422 (4,5,6) - ctrl g the order so it goes: slider, slider, circle.k

00:57:904 - Add here?

00:59:779 (1,2,3,4) - I think this square is slightly off..

01:00:493 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above

01:01:743 (2) - Move to previous white tick to follow the vocal(?) I think a slider there would really fit the music.

01:19:600 (3) - change to triple?

01:31:118 - add here?

01:54:065 (1) - Spinner doesn't really fit, just start mapping right at the end of this spinner.

01:56:029 (5,6) - Move to previous white tick?

01:57:100 (3,4) - ^

Long reply short, I did some of the adding stuff, mostly I didn't. But I fixed all the other stuff

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello~

[General]

❶ add the green section on taming section - is only possible if the speed changes. but you only change the volume. you need to remove the green section and change the volume in the timing section. http://puu.sh/iErcd/642b3a5d79.png Fixed on Normal
❷ in the folder are unused hitsounds http://puu.sh/iEri4/7ed6f21b7f.png Deleted unused sounds

Kiai time

3rd kiai time - move start here 02:06:565 Moved the kiai time for both Ramune and Normal

[Normal]
Thank you for all the NC mods~ I'm pretty bad at NCing so it really helps
01:26:565 (4) - New combo ( Here you have got lost new combo ~_~ )
01:27:636 (1) - remove nc
01:40:850 (5) - nc and 01:41:208 (1) - remove nc
01:59:422 (1) - remove nc and 02:00:850 (3) - nc
02:02:279 (1) - remove nc
02:12:279 (5) - nc and remove nc
02:22:993 (1) - remove nc and 02:24:065 (2) - nc
02:29:422 (6) - nc and 02:29:779 (1) - remove nc
02:31:922 (1) - remove nc and 02:32:636 (2) - nc and 02:33:708 (1) - remove nc

Ramune - nice diff. but Kiai time is different from [Normal] it's not GD diff? Fix it. Fixed, it happened when I added the extra like inherited points >.<

Good luck!

K i R a wrote:

hello ~!

[General]
Avoid HUGE names for files, windows has problems some times with those kind of files, just rename it. I re-named the BG
Also the first timing point should be removed, start the first timing point (the original one) at the whole start and use 109 as the offset, remember to move all the timing points and objects. Timing point moved to offset of 109

Youtube as source ~ From osu wiki:

Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.

About the tags, make sure you put medley so people can find your map when they look for medleys (medleys are songs made of other songs), you can do that or put the name of every song but those are more than 200 tags. I'll put medley

Also your difficulty spread is not good, your hard has less stars than your normal, you need to have a real Hard so make sure you modify it. Hard is W.I.P. and the Easy is still being determined .-.

[Normal]
00:09:422 (1) - I recommend you to remove the combo here to add it 00:09:779 (2) - k
00:43:350 (1,2) - Same than before, also helps new players to distinguish the circles. k
00:50:850 (3) - Why finish here? There is nothing in the music to do that. For vocal
00:51:922 (4) - Same here removed
00:55:136 (1) - ^ Use finish correctly unchanged
00:58:350 (1) - ^ remove
Seems like there are a lot of places where you use finish to confuse the song, a finish should be placed where the song says it should be placed, not randomly, so revise it, wont write every place because there are too many.
01:29:065 (1) - Remove new combo and add it 01:29:422 (2) - okay .-.
01:40:493 (4,2) - Stacking circles is not allowed in normal difficulties. Correction, Stacking circles is not allow on Easy difficulties, this mapset will have an easy once the Hard GD is finished
02:06:565 (2) - New combo okay .-.
Make sure this 02:21:565 (2,4) - and this 02:33:350 (2,3) - are rankeable, ask a BN sure I guess (I don't know any but I'll look for one)

[Ramune]
00:05:315 (1) - Remove NC and put it 00:05:493 (2) - Unchanged, this is where a new pattern starts
00:07:279 (3) - NC k
00:09:422 (1) - Remove NC and put it 00:09:601 (2) - Same as first reply
00:36:743 (3) - Spacing? It's supposed to be like that
00:53:886 (2) - If you are doing this intentionally I dont see why ^
00:56:743 (4) - NC Doesn't really make sense to go from 7 combo - 4 combo- 4 combo
01:01:922 (3) - ^ ^
01:05:493 (6) - ^ ^
01:26:208 (2,3) - NC on both k
01:28:708 (5) - Stack with the slider, if you are making this on purpose, make it a bit further. fixed
01:30:493 (5) - NC k
01:56:743 (1) - Remove NC and start it 01:56:922 (2) - patterns
01:57:815 (1) - Stack with the end of the slider? k
02:01:386 (4) - NC k
02:02:636 (8,9) - This is really weird due to the start of the second slider and a jump for no sense. It's there because there's still 1/8 things going on right after .-.
02:04:333 (1) - Remove NC and put it 02:04:422 (2) - nah
02:05:136 (10) - NC nah
02:06:565 (2) - ^ k
02:31:565 (5,6,3) - Please, again, dont put finish randomly, apply this to the whole part. fixed

Osuology wrote:

[Ramune]
fixed all except commented
00:20:822 (1) - Not snapped.
00:06:894 (1) - Why NC?
Also Timing points conflict
00:47:608 (5) - Stuff like this confuses me personally. Just note it. Commented
02:02:608 (5,6) - Put these two closer together.

[General]
Added all of those stuff, sorry can't like fix the timing points and etc because those are on the GDs, and the timing will affect all inherited points and such ;-; have to wait for them to fix
Kiai times and timing points conflict.
- Consider adding "George" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Sc4" to all of your tags
Normal has unsnapped at 00:57:993 - snap to 00:57:966

Osuology wrote:

[Sc4's Extra]
Very jumpy at beginning for no apparent reason.
00:24:422 (3,5,6) - Why all end on 1/8? end on 1/2.
00:31:565 (1,2) - ctrl + g IMO
00:55:136 (1) - end on 1/1
01:05:493 (1,2) - you really need to stop doing this
01:22:458 (4) - PLZ STOP
01:25:493 (1) - ;-;
01:27:636 (1) - uvr tgnijhbewc
01:29:422 (1) - make 1/4
01:30:672 (2) - 1/4
01:40:850 (1) - ok please stop
01:40:850 (1,2) - wasted opputunity to do something better
01:55:493 (2) - one longer
01:57:993 (1) - longer
01:59:065 (4) - WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!!
02:00:136 (1) - My whole mod is made of these pretty much jeez

Rest of those

02:02:279 (1) -
02:08:529 (3) -
02:12:636 (2) -
02:15:136 (1) -
02:19:600 (4) -
02:22:636 (7) -
02:23:708 (1) -
02:26:565 (1) -
02:29:422 (1,1,2) -
02:32:279 (1,2,1,3) -

Oh well... Something gone wrong when Deemo was implementing my diff, and it gone terribly wrong. In course of remapping, please be patient :/
[General]
Kiai times and timing points conflict.
- Consider adding "George" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Sc4" to all of your tags
Normal has unsnapped at 00:57:993 - snap to 00:57:966

DJVinyl wrote:

From Modding Queue

[Ramune]
I dont like doing all that NC's and stuff so..
General (From AiMod) apparently some of your Uninherited Timing points conflict with Hard and Extra ehh covered in the other replies,gotta wait for the GD's to fix it (or the Hard GD to be close to done .3.)

00:09:394 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This jump is so... sudden to me, the circles before dont really signal a jumpI think it should be cool
01:06:537 (1,2,3) - The Sliders really bother me, Is this on purpose or... what. Yes on purpose
01:59:759 (4) - Umm, NC? Sure why not
02:03:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This Stream is like Freedom Dive 2, anyways the stream is really spaced out,
Can you like make the stream easier to pass? I don't think it's that bad, it's just .7-.9 DS
02:04:483 (2,3,4) - Spacing is changed a little opposed to the others, Trust me, you do not want a illspaced stream I changed the one part that was 1.0 DS to follow the rest (.9 DS)
02:11:001 (3,1) - The Slider and the circle, pretty self explanatory how ugly and unflowing that is. I changed the slider into two circles
02:11:358 (1,2,3,4) - Your other circles followed a 1.00x Spacing Pattern, to make it like make this pattern 1.00x? sure
02:34:272 (2,3,4) - The 3rd Circle is like .9 and the next circle is like 1.20x, make the third circle 1.20x? sure


I'm So sorry its so short ._. Its so well done I barely could find any problems

Fiery_Bulblax wrote:

wassup random mod cuz i feel like modding today

also this may be a little out of order so bear with me

--Ramune--

This difficulty isn't the hardset in the set, you should rename it to Insane. To be determined x.x

00:51:537 (2,3,4) - 01:37:251 (2,3,4) - You can probably change this to something like this http://puu.sh/iJVOi/91efc6650d.jpg to fit the song better I like the way they are right now

00:12:251 (5) - You don't need this slider here, it makes more sense to have circles that follow the music, kind of like what you did here 00:17:965 (1,2,3) k

00:25:822 (3,4,5) - 00:28:680 (3) - Make these the same, doesn't matter which you change it to, but 00:28:680 (3) makes more sense Variety~

00:36:358 (2,3) - 00:42:072 (2,3) - Distance seems off, spacing out more would be more enjoyable to play (this occurs many times in the song, all should be in spoiler) It's actually all in .5 DS spacing for the Repeat-Slider patterns, so yeah

SPOILER

00:47:787 (6,7) -
00:53:501 (1,2) -
01:22:072 (6,7) -
01:24:394 (4,5,6,7) -
01:27:787 (2,3) -
01:33:501 (6,7) -
01:39:215 (1,2) -

00:44:751 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - 00:56:180 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:19:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:31:001 (1,2,3,4) - 01:41:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - In the video, you saw that every time the song would get to these parts, the MIDI fighter would light up. Having a sped up slider in these parts will emphasize the song in this way, and make the map more enjoyable to play. I guess it wouldn't hurt, changed parts with x1.4

01:10:108 (3,4,5,6,1) - 01:12:965 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:14:394 (3,4,5,6,1) - 01:15:822 (3,4,5,6,1) - These parts doesn't follow the song at all, and seems to be placed there at random. It was my mapping style at the time >.< don't judge

02:02:832 (6) - Connecting these two sliders isn't the best idea, and removing 02:02:251 (4) and replacing it with some 1/2 singletaps could emphasize the part you were trying to even better. K

02:26:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is completely unnessecary. If you wanted a buildup, start a stream in this part where it makes sense. Still my mapping style .3.

Best of luck!

Natsu wrote:

gonna check this today

1. 00:01:537 (3) - missing a whistle? compare to 00:03:680 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:22:072 (4,5,6,7,8) - the problem here is that the 1/2 spacing is very small compared to the 1/4 spacing, it does not flow so well. 1/2 spacing should always be larger than 1/4 spacing in the same combo. I suggest decreasing the space between 5,6,7 but you can always do the other thing and increase the spacing for 3,4,5
3. 00:36:358 (2,3) - considering that there is actually 1/2 time between these, try moving them further apart. Normally we see this when the slider has 4 hits in total but here it is only 3. Theres a few more of these around but again I'm not pointing them all out
4. 00:39:751 (1,2,3,4) - did you want to stack 1 and the end of slider 4?
5. 00:44:394 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same thing as 00:22:072, either lower the 1/4 spacing or increase the 1/2 spacing
6. 00:52:251 (1,2,3) - I think you wanted to use DS here
7. 01:07:072 (3,4,5) - I think you wanted these to be parallel? You can easily check this by temporarily stacking them on top of each other http://puu.sh/iNBOJ/cbaac0519b.jpg
8. 01:11:358 (3,4,5) - finishes are too strong a hitsound for this
9. 01:10:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - the 1/2 spacing is way larger than the 1/1 here.. confusing stuff
10. 01:11:805 (6,7) - try changing these into a slider to make timing it more lenient. Or you can just simply put them closer to show they are less than 1/1
11. 01:15:108 (1,2) - try changing these into 1/2 sliders, I think it would be nice if there was a sound on the red lines
12. 01:25:822 (1,1,1) - remove some of the NC's here, that is not necessary
13. 01:29:930 (4,5,6) - same as 01:07:072 (3,4,5)
14. 01:56:715 (1,2) - why is the space here larger than the rest? it would make sense if you used that spacing style for the other lines here but that is not the case
15. 02:02:608 (6,7,8) - 1/8 spacing is the same as 1/2... uh? Please at least make 6,7 overlap too
16. 02:03:322 (8,1) - spacing is very small, almost as close as the notes in the stream are lol
17. 02:03:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is by far the hardest part of the map. Personally I don't have too much trouble with it but imo this should be an easy - moderate section of the song... Maybe try reducing the spacing between the notes here or using a more straightforward shape. Also, if not changing the shape please move 1,2 because the overlapping is not good to play
18. 02:09:394 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is the spacing supposed to be getting smaller between the pairs of notes? double check
19. 02:21:537 (3,4,5) - shouldn't this be the same spacing as 02:22:072 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - compare this part to 00:50:108 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - earlier

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, quick mod from pm ha that wasn't quick at all xD

[General]
The offset should be 823. Technically its the same, but changing this will set the downbeat to the correct position so it will be easier to look at in the editor. kk So I fixed it the first time, and it sounded pretty good, it sounds more in sync when it's at the current offset that is is right now.Also it affects gameplay with NC mod, so it should be fixed

The HP drain is very high and the OD is very low... I think if you swapped those around it would be perfect for all the difficultiesk

[Insane]
The NC usage is very messy, I think this is because the offset was wrong so the lines were incorrect. So I recommend that after fixing the offset, use the downbeat lines to split up the NC's evenly. With that being said, I'm not going to point out all the NC inconsistencies Like literally cannot NC properly with a mod ;-;

Its kinda weird that the hitsounds are ignoring the drums, but the custom sample is a snare..? Not that the beat you made up is unpleasant, it sounds ok, but it does not follow the song! For example, 00:35:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - the claps are on 2,3,4 but going by the song it should actually be on 5. I mean if you want to map the melody with hitsounds that's ok but please use a different sound for that, not the drum sound! ;-;

Blanketing problems throughout the whole map (because it looks like thats what you were going for). Its easy to tell if something is blanketing or not by comparing the slider to the approach circle. For example, 00:18:680 (3,4) - looks like this http://puu.sh/iNAOU/7a31a99836.jpg you can fix by moving the starting point of the slider up a bit. I'm not going to point out all the blankets that can be fixed throughout the map, please just double check them Fixed all the things that were supposed to be blankets

• 
  Fixed all except ones with the repeat slider into slider, spacing is intentional and people don't mention it, so it should be fairly simple to sightread

1. 00:01:537 (3) - missing a whistle? compare to 00:03:680 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:22:072 (4,5,6,7,8) - the problem here is that the 1/2 spacing is very small compared to the 1/4 spacing, it does not flow so well. 1/2 spacing should always be larger than 1/4 spacing in the same combo. I suggest decreasing the space between 5,6,7 but you can always do the other thing and increase the spacing for 3,4,5
3. 00:36:358 (2,3) - considering that there is actually 1/2 time between these, try moving them further apart. Normally we see this when the slider has 4 hits in total but here it is only 3. Theres a few more of these around but again I'm not pointing them all out
4. 00:39:751 (1,2,3,4) - did you want to stack 1 and the end of slider 4?
5. 00:44:394 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same thing as 00:22:072, either lower the 1/4 spacing or increase the 1/2 spacing
6. 00:52:251 (1,2,3) - I think you wanted to use DS here
7. 01:07:072 (3,4,5) - I think you wanted these to be parallel? You can easily check this by temporarily stacking them on top of each other http://puu.sh/iNBOJ/cbaac0519b.jpg
8. 01:11:358 (3,4,5) - finishes are too strong a hitsound for this
9. 01:10:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - the 1/2 spacing is way larger than the 1/1 here.. confusing stuff
10. 01:11:805 (6,7) - try changing these into a slider to make timing it more lenient. Or you can just simply put them closer to show they are less than 1/1
11. 01:15:108 (1,2) - try changing these into 1/2 sliders, I think it would be nice if there was a sound on the red lines
12. 01:25:822 (1,1,1) - remove some of the NC's here, that is not necessary
13. 01:29:930 (4,5,6) - same as 01:07:072 (3,4,5)
14. 01:56:715 (1,2) - why is the space here larger than the rest? it would make sense if you used that spacing style for the other lines here but that is not the case
15. 02:02:608 (6,7,8) - 1/8 spacing is the same as 1/2... uh? Please at least make 6,7 overlap too
16. 02:03:322 (8,1) - spacing is very small, almost as close as the notes in the stream are lol
17. 02:03:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is by far the hardest part of the map. Personally I don't have too much trouble with it but imo this should be an easy - moderate section of the song... Maybe try reducing the spacing between the notes here or using a more straightforward shape. Also, if not changing the shape please move 1,2 because the overlapping is not good to play
18. 02:09:394 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is the spacing supposed to be getting smaller between the pairs of notes? double check Intentional
19. 02:21:537 (3,4,5) - shouldn't this be the same spacing as 02:22:072 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - compare this part to 00:50:108 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - earlier

That's all, good luck!

_tasty wrote:

I'm aware extra and hard is not in their final state but I'm dropping in a few comments
[extra]
HP drain rate is hiiiiiighhh, tone it down a bit True true, toned it down, expect it to be lower in the finalized version.
instead of having a high hp turn up the OD, it's too easy for the song diff imoYou will see this too

02:35:583 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - these kind of stuff are very confusing. The spacing is very deceiving D; I think this is totally fine, NC is used to notify, and these are also expressing the increasing pitch of the strong instrument in the background. Honestly since this is extra I think it is fine.

02:26:565 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 is more spaced in terms of rhythm but the way it is placed says otherwise Well this was another problem when Deemo was implementing my difficulty... Most of the sliders reduced in length by 1/8, so this happened. You will not see this in the final version though :< Sorry!