Planetboom - Brandnew Days · forum

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-05-28T10:28:54+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 6일 일요일 at 오후 8:22:16

Artist: Planetboom
Title: Brandnew Days
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Portable 2 TECHNIKA Lucy Lovecraft Dumping Life Trilogy
BPM: 124
Filesize: 18657kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0.94 stars, 103 notes)
Hard (4.51 stars, 239 notes)
Maximum (4.73 stars, 284 notes)
Normal (2.6 stars, 153 notes)
Taiko (4.81 stars, 500 notes)

Download: Planetboom - Brandnew Days
Download: Planetboom - Brandnew Days (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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26th beatmap, All Done

Pop Rock song included in DJMAX Trilogy, Portable 2 and TECHNIKA 2

Composed by Planetboom
Visualized by Lucy, Lovecraft ( + Dumping Life in TECHNIKA 2 )
Vocal by Planetboom

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-06-20T07:13:16+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

subarasikibuta

559 posts

Joined May 2009

subarasikibuta 2010-05-28T17:33:11+00:00

yea~

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

Joined November 2009

Colin Hou 2010-06-02T04:47:07+00:00

[General]:

I knew little about this song, but how about adding 'Lovecraft' in the tags?
Planetboom - Brandnew Days (MoonFragrance).osb kill this file and full submit.

[Easy]:

Good.

[Normal]:

Good.

[Hard]:

02:10:761 (2,3) - 1 Grid right.

[Maximum]:

00:59:874 (4) - 2 Grids left
01:10:277 (7) - 1 Grid left
01:15:841 (5,6) - make them horizontal symmetry with 01:14:874 (3,4).

Tatsuo

575 posts

Joined January 2009

Tatsuo 2010-06-02T05:58:40+00:00

Here I am~
Ready to mod your beatmap~
Here I go~

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are great!
I like your custom hit sounds.
The only thing that irk-ed me just a little, was a lack of a break time in [Hard] and [Maximum]. Other than that, its fine.

[Easy]
00:34:954 (3) - This doesn't sound good... Sounds off and doesn't go along with the song.
... The only thing I could find in [Easy]

[Normal]
This difficulty is good.

[Hard]
I love this difficulty~

[Maximum]
00:01:809 (3) - Move this two grids up level 3. (That way, it sits in the middle of the two sliders)
... The only thing I could find in [Maximum]

[Taiko]
Sorry, can't mod Taiko difficulties. But you knew that when you came into my mod queue~

Man, I found nothing to nit-pick about on this map. Curses, there goes my fun lol.
In other words, I loved playing through your map. All you need is priority.
I smell a ranked map soon~
~Star~

Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

1,893 posts

Joined March 2009

Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-06-02T06:36:47+00:00

[Hard]
01:50:680 (6) - 뉴콤보 추가

저스트

역시 훌룡한 모더

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Kecco 2010-06-02T12:52:21+00:00

•Overall•
Offset : -2 ms ~ Resnap all notes.

•Maximum•
00:44:148 (5,6) - 1 grid right and 1 up? (lv3)
00:48:745 (1) - 1 grid up?
01:00:116 (5) - 2 grids left?

•Hard•
02:11:970 (5,6) - Move those this way http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11640?

•Normal•
00:37:132 (1) - Last point of this slider 1 grid right

•Easy•
Ok.

DjMax~<3
Nice map~
Star~

Pokie

osu! Alumni

2,630 posts

Joined December 2009

Pokie 2010-06-02T19:54:32+00:00

General
- .osb file (sigh)
- didn't snapped yet o.o?
- add blank sliderwhistle.wav? the sliderwhistles are so noisy ;~;

Easy
00:08:099 (1) - 1 grid left o.o
00:37:132 (1) - remove whistle?
02:11:970 (2) - a bit confused D: remove this note and start spinner here?

Normal
Nice!

Hard
Great work

Maximum
- OA+1?

NICCCCE DJMAX

(throw a star)

aRiskOfRain

osu! Alumni

1,367 posts

Joined June 2009

aRiskOfRain 2010-06-02T21:07:27+00:00

Background has a misspelling...

Arusha Shuna

1,793 posts

Joined August 2009

Arusha Shuna 2010-06-03T14:40:12+00:00

nice map, looks fine to me

the only thing that looks strange is the BG says "tittle"
shouldn't it be "title" (minus one letter "t")?

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

4,848 posts

Joined May 2009

KRZY 2010-06-04T10:17:37+00:00

Looked through, but couldn't find a single thing that bothed me. Either I'm a bad modder or you're a flawless mapper XD

Star!

[Dango]

841 posts

Joined December 2009

[Dango] 2010-06-04T11:30:52+00:00

po STAR wer XD

NotShinta

1,021 posts

Joined September 2009

NotShinta 2010-06-04T15:27:01+00:00

General
Is the video silenced? Can't tell ATM, but if it isn't, possibly do so?

Easy
1/4?
00:37:132 (1) - Remove new combo?

Normal
Tick Rate 2?
01:20:678 (5) - Symmetrise.

Hard
01:54:549 (5) - Move middle ticks 1 grid left. Yes, really.
01:56:485 (1) - ^

~~Insane~~ Maximum whatever
00:08:823 (2) - Copypaste 00:08:097 (1) and flip accordingly instead?

Oh yeah I don't mod Taiko diffs and I don't feel like being incredibly specific today

Frill

514 posts

Joined March 2010

Frill 2010-06-04T22:25:14+00:00

[Easy]

good

[Normal]

00:06:404 (2) - New combo?

[Hard]

Good

[Maximum]

00:05:678 (3) - 1 grid right

Fun map.

+Star

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-06-05T02:39:09+00:00

IAmNotShinta wrote:
General
Is the video silenced? Can't tell ATM, but if it isn't, possibly do so?

I don't know how to silence it orz

Fixed what i picked.

NatsumeRin

osu! Alumni

4,032 posts

Joined August 2009

NatsumeRin 2010-06-05T02:52:12+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
don't like the normal-hitfinish2, but maybe it's just me.
emm....the sliderwhistles is you made them this way? not sure, but better to remove them imo.

[Easy]
OD+2 HP+2 = =
slider tick rate:2?
00:21:648 (1) - you need to make the green line 1/2 earlier you know= =
00:40:035 (2) - 1 grid down i think?
01:35:196 (3,4,1) - emm let me try to change them... 3- 1 grid up+1 grid left, 4- 1 grid up, 1- 1grid up + 1grid right, better?

[Normal]
slider tick rate:2?
map is really great.

[Hard]
00:02:533 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing= =
01:05:194 (2) - ugly.
02:11:485 (3) - new combo?

[Maximum]
00:03:501 (4,5,6) - nazi again= =

[Taiko]
fine for me.

MMzz

Elite Mapper

3,979 posts

Joined June 2009

MMzz 2010-06-05T03:08:01+00:00

[Taiko]

First off, I think this map is epic. I love how you mapped the chorus.

Second I think you could lower down the amount of finishers you used. Thats just a suggestion though, i'm not a general fan of them, and sometimes they drown the map to much.

Also

00:30:839 - This slider should just be 3 normals Dons (reds) instead of a slider.

Nice map! Star~!

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-06-05T03:35:03+00:00

MittenMasterzz wrote:
[Taiko]
00:30:839 - This slider should just be 3 normals Dons (reds) instead of a slider.

Umm.... I think slider is more fit well :3
Others all fixed

Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2010-06-05T04:55:07+00:00

Fun map and nice hitsounds

blacksymbian

585 posts

Joined December 2008

blacksymbian 2010-06-05T06:43:47+00:00

I've been waiting for this song to get mapped so here's a star

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2010-06-05T06:56:16+00:00

[Taiko] Nice one.

[Maximum]
0:03:025 (3) right 1 grid to make (1,2,3) a stright line
0:04:041 (2) up 1 grid to make the same level with the next (1)
0:41:976 (5,6,7) up 1 grid to make the stright line, (8,9) right + up 1 grid?
0:54:799 (2) up 1 grid? There're a visible difference in spacing
1:40:525 (8) right a bit so that (5,6,7,8) looks more likely to be a stright line
2:08:831 (3) right 1 grid?

[hard]
2:08:831 (3) up 1 grid
2:10:041 (1) down 1 grid? It's circle->slider

normal and easy will be fine

Like your last song Space of Soul a lot =D
star*2

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2010-06-05T14:19:41+00:00

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• Open all .osu files and change...
SPOILER
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,255

[Easy]

• HP Drain Rate: 4
• Overall Difficulty: 3

[Normal]

• Resnap all notes

[DBF]

1,827 posts

Joined January 2009

[DBF] 2010-06-05T15:48:45+00:00

[Overall]
Why offset in Easy 368? Let's fix that.

[Easy]
01:23:593 (3) - left 1, use grid lvl 3. (that nazi)

[Normal]
Resnap all notes.

[Hard]
Fine.

[Maximum]
Fine.

This map must have be ranked! I like that very much, good for playing and really awesome hitsounds.

Star~

bmin11

5,438 posts

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2010-06-05T19:41:43+00:00

바쁜 관계로 그냥 별만 놓고 물러납니다 ~_~;;

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2010-06-06T01:56:39+00:00

ANNYEONGHASEYO

[Easy]
00:08:109 (1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12034
00:23:593 (x) - Add note with whistle?
00:31:819 (1) - Extend this slider to next white tick?
00:34:480 (2) - This not following music or vocal.... Move forward to white tick?
01:03:993 (B) - Fill this break? Like [Hard]?
01:34:238 (2) - Move 2 grid up?
01:37:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern are too odd for me, maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12035

[Normal]
01:03:993 (B) - Fill this break? Like [Hard]?

[Hard]
Fine~

[Maximum]
Fine~

[Taiko]
Fine~

Good song
STAR

Mok

1,226 posts

Joined August 2009

Mok 2010-06-06T07:47:39+00:00

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Since I'm not a Taiko player, I can't mod your Taiko diff, I'm really sorry.

[Easy]
HP Drain rate +1.

[Normal]
00:29:636 (1,2,3) - 1 grip up (lvl 3).

Others are fine to me

IceBeam

osu! Alumni

1,957 posts

Joined December 2009

IceBeam 2010-06-06T08:17:43+00:00

Hi.

[Easy]
00:08:109 (1) - 1 grid left? or maybe place it 1 grid right,because it looks like a mistake for the first time.

[Normal]
02:11:974 (2) - Probably you don't need this note.

[Hard]
01:04:234 - Adding a note here?

[Maximum]
Some moments are hard to read,but fine in general.

[Taiko]
Fine.

Star~

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-06-06T08:32:50+00:00

fixed what i picked :3

YGOkid8

osu! Alumni

2,729 posts

Joined February 2009

YGOkid8 2010-06-06T10:54:33+00:00

General:
- Remove Letterboxing so bars don't cut into video? (If it doesn't, nvm because I didn't dl w/ video)

Normal:

Normal Mod~
01:20:686 (5) - Looks ugly when it's in this position.
01:52:622 (1,4,1) - IMO, looks better with linear shape.

Hard:

Normal Mod~
02:02:783 (1) - There might be more (can't be stuffed looking) but why isn't this in the very middle? o.o

Maximum:

Combo Mod~
01:14:880 (3,5) - New Combo.

tieff

Featured Artist

2,254 posts

Joined March 2009

tieff 2010-06-06T12:16:15+00:00

Awesome.
Bubbled.

DJNightmare

882 posts

Joined February 2009

DJNightmare 2010-06-06T12:43:54+00:00

STARRED!

I really like ur maps XD