sb
no reply=fixed, thanks for your great mod!CelsiusLK wrote:
as requested
[general][q.q]
- uncheck widescreen ? no sb here
good luck , have fun mapping
- 00:18:094 (3,4,5,6) - flow kinda feel derpy or something idk here like I think flow transition can be better here , try place notes like this and why use 1.3x spacing here instead of 1.2x spacing ?
- 00:29:134 (3,4) - the flow breaking here is not really feel that good with the song imo , would make sense if you break flow here 00:28:894 (2,3) - instead imo , try ctrl+j (3) so it make it looks like this which make the flow somehow better imo
- 01:32:429 (1) - slider shape is not really fit the music here imo , something like this would feel a bit better imo
- 01:33:389 - would be nice to map this beat tho so it would make the rhythm here 01:32:429 (1,2,3) - sound and play better imo
- 01:38:909 (5) - copy-paste this 01:38:189 (4) - pls xD for perfect parallel
- 01:44:669 (2) - I would do something like this instead
- 01:54:749 - it feel empty here , mapping this beat would make the rhythm here 01:53:549 (4,5) - sound a bit more perfect , currently it feels like it missing something there
- 02:00:989 (4,5) - spacing here should be bigger than 02:00:509 (3,4) - since the beat here 02:01:229 - sound kinda more emphasized than 02:00:989 - so yea , try move (4) to x412 y104
- 02:04:589 (3) - it worth moving this a bit far away from 02:03:869 (2) - tho since this beat kind worth spacing change too, you can try move this 02:04:589 (3) - to around x156 y152 that would make pattern here 02:03:149 (1,2,3) - looks better too
- 02:05:789 - better map this beat as a circle then start spinner here 02:05:909 - instead it play better imo
- 02:22:749 (3,4) - flow here is kinda awkward imo , better make spacing consistent here instead that make flow a bit more consistent imo
- 02:45:130 (1) - uhh ok I guess I would prefer this better imo lol
- 02:56:559 (1) - the curve there not really good when trying to do curve like this try putting anchor like at the center of each anchor point so that would make the curve looks better , here a pic the one I circle red is the one you need to put at the center to make it curve nice
- 03:16:320 (3) - similiar to what I said above this looks a lots better imo
- 03:18:225 (3,4) - transition flow can be improved here a bit imo , try move (4) to x276 y128 ? keep this because i don't like overlap;_;
- 03:23:225 (1) - this looks better imo
- 03:27:035 (1) - this looks better imo reworked this slider
- 03:34:654 (1) - what with bezier curve there lolololol standard curve is enough now imo
- 03:48:701 (3,4) - flow would be better imo if you ctrl+j (4) so it looks like this
- 03:57:749 (2,3) - hmm better make jumps here instead of 03:57:511 (1,2) - so it would make sense with music more , try move (2) to x232 y291 ?
- 04:03:225 (1,2,3) - I would make spacing consistent here so it would make flow here a bit better imo , currently it feels a bit awkward here 04:03:939 (2,3) - imo
- 04:04:178 (3) - yea this looks better imo
- 04:14:416 (6) - use drum sampleset here ? just like what you did here 04:12:987 (2) - , sound nice imo
- 04:17:511 (5) - copy-paste this 04:17:035 (4) - pls xD you did it here 04:17:987 (6) - but why not here 04:17:511 (5) - :C
- 04:18:463 (1,2) - flow transition can be improved here imo , you can try move (2) to around x324 y248 that would make flow here a bit better imo
- 04:22:273 (1) - slider looks a bit weird here imo , I would try to make it looks like this
- 04:35:368 (1) - emphaiszed note for sliderend tho , I think this rhythm might play better
- 04:39:416 (1) - I think if you place like this , it will make flow here 04:38:701 (3,1,2) - better imo
- 04:57:511 (2) - this slider is not really that good imo , I think standard curve is enough now
- 05:31:083 - I think it sound better to start spinner here instead
都改啦,谢谢船业,船业生快smallboat wrote:
From QQ ,give some opinion
[Q.Q]
00:10:174 (4) - This note sounds like almost inaudible, also you make these 35% volume turn up to 5~10% imo 这一块都加了5%
00:43:109 (2) - Same above
00:45:269 (5,1,2) - 5 move to (296|161) avoid to overlap over,remember 00:46:229 (1) - stack 5 slider head and the (5) end blanket 00:47:189 (2) . http://puu.sh/ic2t5/57f5bb6344.jpg
01:12:029 (5) - Keep same DS?
01:30:989 (5) - Same as 00:10:174
04:10:963 (1,1) - Spinner end suggest use 40% and 04:12:749 (1) - use 50% sounds like natuarl imo (Noise now) 前面的删了绿线改了45看起來沒啥問題應該能點
没写的都改了KaedekaShizuru wrote:
one of the song can let me cry, only love this Wotamin's ver.
[General]
难度名推荐备选My Song、My Letter、10 Years之类 后面再思考思考
BG乃可以勇敢地撞一下KPY前辈 尽量不想撞BG啦
顺便没有SB歌词会很遗憾 要sb就要做好的,然而我找不到人做
建议找人好好查一下metadata确认歌名 骏喵查过了
[Q.Q]
00:10:174 (4) - whistle and del whistle at 00:10:414 感觉有点道理但是为了前后一致还是先算了,后面有人再说就都改了
00:32:734 (1,2,3,4) - del whistle,00:34:205 (5)有这个whistle就够了的感觉
00:34:709 (1) - 被这个音效吓到 音量压到10% 下一个note再回到35% 20 instead
01:12:029 (5) - 前后间距keep一下
01:23:549 (5) - try this:http://puu.sh/icaEg/be465c5e08.jpg
02:03:869 (2,3) - blanket稍微有点歪
03:27:749 (2) - 对03:27:035 (1) - 的blanket歪了 要么对称要么把03:27:749 (2)的角度打开
其实结尾的时候跟vocal会比较有意思一点 思考思考,后面有人说了在考虑下
别的根本挑不出什么了 人哥我榜样 要好好学习
nice map, my faver, 3 stars for you
之后再找找看有没有人能查吧=。=kanpakyin wrote:
(壽司熊
(你不覺得一開始的timing有點off麼...
23:03 Alex Li: 03:43:344 (2,3,4,5) -
23:04 Alex Li: 我觉得3这个短话条比较多余
23:04 Alex Li: 4和5是一组
23:04 Alex Li: 要不你看把3转成连打?
23:04 Kagamine Ren: 三声钢琴啊?
23:05 Alex Li: 但是你的音效没有钢琴啊
23:05 Alex Li: 要不音效也钢琴啊
23:05 Kagamine Ren: 有道理
23:06 Kagamine Ren: 加了whistle
23:06 Alex Li: 厚
23:07 Alex Li: 这没什么问题啊
23:07 Alex Li: 怎么不找其他人泡
23:08 Kagamine Ren: 懒
23:08 Kagamine Ren: 今天想到这个就顺便找你了
23:08 Alex Li: 我查查音效跟aibat
23:08 Kagamine Ren: 恩,那个我还没看
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 顺便有没有什么BG推荐啊
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 我有点不喜欢这bg
23:09 Alex Li: soft hitclap
23:09 Alex Li: 有延迟
23:09 Kagamine Ren: 好
23:09 Alex Li: 你要什么样的bg啊
23:10 Alex Li: 东方的可以吗
23:10 Kagamine Ren: 类似于安静的女孩子那种
23:10 Alex Li: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=17749622
23:11 Alex Li: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=8442255
23:11 Alex Li: 这个画师很不错
23:11 Kagamine Ren: 开VPN载不出
23:11 Kagamine Ren: 我关一下
23:13 Kagamine Ren: 这没有安静的感觉吧
23:13 Kagamine Ren: 算了先这个吧
23:13 Kagamine Ren: qua之前再找找看
23:13 Alex Li: 厚
23:13 Alex Li: update plz
23:13 Kagamine Ren: 等下
23:14 Alex Li: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=50367831
23:14 Alex Li: 或者这个第二张?
23:14 Kagamine Ren: softclap哪有delay啊
23:14 Alex Li: 后面啊
23:14 Kagamine Ren: 后面有要求?
23:14 Kagamine Ren: 大于100ms就行了
23:15 Alex Li: 啊
23:15 Alex Li: 那没事了
23:15 Kagamine Ren: 多长都无所谓的
23:15 Kagamine Ren: 算了我还是剪一下
23:15 Alex Li: 那张bg怎么样啊
23:16 Kagamine Ren: hmm..先不该把
23:16 Kagamine Ren: 不改吧*
Great mod as usual. Thank you so much. I'll come up a diff name later.Xinely wrote:
General
- lol are you sure with the diff's name? but it doesnt make any sense to me so i'd really suggest to change ah i'm still sonsidering this.
- any metadata prove for this song? q.q np
Q.Q
- 00:33:454 (4) - may add whistle for piano
- 01:01:229 (5) - add whistle for piano?
- 01:06:989 (3) - the spacing makes a little bit confuse here, i'd say make 1,0x spacing consistent or stack with object in 01:07:469 - (i prefer stack if you ask me)
- 01:10:829 (3) - same as above
- 01:26:189 (3) - for this one i'd say 244,344 for yep, better read ><
- 01:51:149 (9) - whistle for piano?
- 02:03:869 (2) - 28,232 for better flow (circular movement) ><
- 02:08:940 (1) - the main music (louder one) is cymbal here so i'd say use soft default finish here, or adding finish with keep normal whistle is fine either for me Added finish.
- 02:24:178 (1) - same as above
- 02:25:368 (4) - 02:21:559 (4) - 02:29:178 (4) - 02:32:987 (3) - 02:36:797 (4) - add soft whistle for head to emphasize the piano?
- 02:41:320 (1) - 02:56:559 (1) - same as previous, need finish q.q
- 02:08:940 - until end really suggest volume +10% , it's hard to hear your drum claps also inceased volume to 65% in kiai time.
- 02:59:178 (2) - how about place the circle at leftside of the last tail so i mean just move to 296,156 for better movement it would be too hard, i stack it on 02:58:225 (5) - instead
- 03:19:297 (6) - maybe im deaf but the drum isnt exactly sound at 1/4 and i hear nothing clearly in 1/4 so remove?
- 03:38:344 (6) - and i hear nothing in here
- 04:10:844 (1) - make a little jump for this circle? example 332,240
- 04:29:416 (6) - this rhythm doesnt emphasize the music clearly for me, i'd say make this as 1/2 and add circle at blue tick, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3272303 hmm changed on my own way.
- 04:51:320 (2) - the movement of tail isnt really smooth, i'd say move tail to 368,168
- 04:52:273 (4) - this spacing is really weird because you did jumps on previous, i'd say you keep making a little jump for this slider
- 04:57:511 (2) - just my taste but i prefer ctrl+g to make jump being higher only this, god im too kind to change this, it's too hard, players may kiil me;_;
jiao wo hui lai
2015-07-01 14:37 handsome: 00:38:069 (6) - also this is ??
2015-07-01 14:38 Karen: how about deleting this
2015-07-01 14:38 handsome: yes
2015-07-01 14:39 Karen: ok done
2015-07-01 14:40 handsome: 04:16:916 (3) -
2015-07-01 14:40 handsome: same
2015-07-01 14:41 Karen: ok
2015-07-01 14:41 handsome: 04:57:511 (2) - the curve is....
2015-07-01 14:41 handsome: try to redo slider
2015-07-01 14:41 handsome: now the grey point is bug/not normal
2015-07-01 14:42 Karen: ok done
Xinely wrote:
what the firetruck so fast
gratz baka renhandsome wrote: