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Craig David - Insomnia

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sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 19 de febrero de 2010 at 12:29:28 p.m.

Artist: Craig David
Title: Insomnia
BPM: 125.4
Filesize: 4861kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Feeling Sleepy (4.24 stars, 316 notes)
  2. Feels Like Insomnia (4.77 stars, 433 notes)
  3. So Tired (3.08 stars, 204 notes)
Download: Craig David - Insomnia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first map, and im doing my best to make it a great beatmap

Special thanks to Sir Minelli and LFPB07


So tired= Done
Feeling sleepy= Done
Feels like Insomnia= Done
Last edited by sebastiangl , edited 107 times in total.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
BPM = 125.40
Offset = 5,240

kk, I can't this now, since the timing u had was really off, add this new timing, and either place ur notes all over again, resnap all notes, and fix all ur sliders, this song is kinda dang awesome, sounds like this other american singer I know
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
thanks for replying... i knew i was doing something wrong :P but not everything hehe, well this is my first beatmap so im still learning.
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
quintessence
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Overall
U have some kind of storyboard, the i don't really see anything useful, probably remove the storyboard u have,
delete .osb in song folder and delete that image if ur not gonna use it, or u can storyboard it (WIP storyboard)

Felling sleepy
Set preview point
01:56:047 (6) - space this, after spacing it with 5, make sure the rest of the combo is spaced as well

Feels like insomnia
set preview point,
there are some parts in the map that i would add some claps, u stopped all of a sudden, listen to the claps in the mp3 and add hitsounds on notes placed at those parts, should be really awesome
end the song somewhere better? unless it's not done yet


map is :3, also this dude seriously sounds like Ne Yo, if u know who he is :P
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
BUMP
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
kk, this is the last time i'm modding this, new diff u added looks good,

Irc modding on timing
and irc modding on suggestions of kiai time overuse

dude, i really hope u get this ranked, try pming players/mods or visit #mod
after all this progress i'm really looking forward to seeing this being ranked, hope i helped
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
IRC mod:

15:15 < strager> sebastiangl: dark combo colours are blehhhh
15:15 < strager> harder to read
15:17 < strager> sebastiangl: Also
15:17 < strager> OD is way too low for me to be happy
15:20 < strager> sebastiangl: Those are the only issues I think
15:20 < strager> sebastiangl: Just readability.
15:20 < strager> let's see the other diffs
15:23 < strager> sebastiangl: That one has a missing combo marker on a slider
15:23 < strager> 02:17:785 (2) - New combo?
15:24 < strager> sebastiangl: Also, wtf why does it have the default skin
15:24 < strager> Make it all have the same skin and combo colours
15:24 < strager> all diffs
15:25 < strager> sebastiangl: Decrease sleepy's OD by one tick
15:27 < strager> sebastiangl: OD = Overall Difficulty.  Your Normal checks out
15:27 < strager> I like Insane =>
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
All kiai should start on a beat, and not 1/4 early. I've listed a few examples, fix the rest yourself.
[Tired]
00:45:800 - Kiai currently starts here. Move it so it starts on 00:45:919.
01:00:752 - Start kiai here instead.
01:34:962 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern may be a little too confusing for newbs, in my opinion. That said, 7 is too far from 6.
01:46:685 - Start kiai here instead.
01:52:427 (4) - I recommend making this shorter by 1 repeat and turning 01:53:862 into a note, so (3) and (4) have the same number of repeats.
02:02:235 - Start kiai here.
02:46:494 (1) - I recommend ending this at 02:48:168.

[Sleepy]
00:45:919 - Start kiai here instead.
00:51:422 (6) - This is ending on a blue tick. Fix please.
01:46:685 - Start kiai here instead.
02:02:235 - ^

[Insomnia]
00:30:369 (1) - This should end on the nearest white tick.
00:32:283 (4) - ^
00:36:111 (3,4) - End (3) where (4) is and remove (4). This is retarded imo.
00:38:025 (3,4) - ^
01:31:613 (4) - End it on a white tick.
02:48:407 - Start kiai here.

This map is very well made. Starred!
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Move the offset to 3,824 so that the strong beats land on the proper places.
.osb references a non-existant file.
Capitalize difficulty names.
Don't force the default skin.
Source? Tags?

[So tired]

01:36:637 (6) - Consider shifting this 1/2 later?
02:14:915 (1,1,1) - A few too many consecutive spinners for my liking.

[Felling sleepy]

Should be "Feeling Sleepy"? XD

02:04:388 (6,1) - Spacing.

[Feels like insomnia]

This is the only difficulty with letterboxing enabled; intentional?

00:58:838 (6,7) - Spacing.

Some of the jumps at the end of this difficulty might be a bit extreme. Good mapset overall, star~
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
No source and tag? Anyway, nice song!

[So tired]
00:16:015 (1) - Add whistle at the whole slider.
00:16:733 (2) - Add whistle.
00:17:211 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning, second repeat, and the end.
00:18:647 (4) - Add whistle.
00:28:216 - Add note here.
00:39:938 (2) - Kinda don't like the finish. Consider removing it? [?]
00:42:331 (4) - ^ [?]
00:45:441 (1) - Add finish at the end.
01:33:527 (3) - Forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
01:35:441 - Add note here.
01:36:876 (7) - Forward one 1/2 tick.
01:36:876 (7) - Remove one repeat..? [?]
01:45:010 (2) - Forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
02:16:111 (1) - Kinda hard for an easy diff.
02:38:599 (9) - Put it to other place. It's like hidden for me. [?]
02:41:230 (2) - Move 1 tiny grid right.
02:46:494 (1) - Extend one 1/2 tick.

[Feeling sleepy]
I don't really like the 1/4 streams, overmapped in my opinion (except for 03:39:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7))
00:28:216 (4) - Add note here.
00:32:283 (2) - Forward one 1/2 tick.
00:36:111 (8) - Forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 12 tick. Add note here.
01:33:527 (2) - Forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
01:36:876 (7) - Forward one 1/2 tick.
01:45:010 (2) - Forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
02:05:584 (1) - Error distance spacing.
02:27:833 (4) - Move 1 small grid up. Check the rest notes' spacing too.
02:32:618 - Add note here. Then add clap.
02:42:905 (4) - Add clap.
03:04:915 (1) - Error distance spacing.

[Feels like insomnia]
Don't really like small circles.
The jumps are too sudden for me.
00:43:766 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
00:59:077 (7) - Error distance spacing. [?]
01:06:972 (2) - Forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
01:16:063 (1) - Add finish at the end.
01:42:618 (1) - Don't like this jump. Consider changing its spacing?
01:54:580 (2) - Change this spacing. The jump's too sudden and don't fit its placement to the song.
02:00:680 (6) - Delete this note.
02:04:388 (1) - Don't like this jump. Consider changing its spacing?
Star.
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
ok just did both recomendations, thanks :)
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 3820

That's it for now...

FrionelEDIT: Zekira, stop being lazy

ZekiraEDIT: I'm tired, OK, leave my posts alone...
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
General
Remove "Craig David Insomnia" from the source
Remove "Craig David Insomnia sebastiangl" from tags
is no needed...

Feels Like Insomnia
00:43:772 (1) - move the start point 1/2 later and add note here
00:55:494 (2) - remove note
00:59:083 (7) - end 1/2 beat earlier
01:02:193 (1) - remove
01:13:915 (1) - end 1/2 beat earlier
01:15:111 (1) - ^
01:28:389 (1) - dont start in blue ticks.. move to prev white tick please
01:33:532 (3) - end 1 beat later
02:09:178 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary new combos, you decide if you keep it or not
02:49:370 (2) - move 1/2 later, and remove a repeat
02:53:437 (1,1) - doens't fit the rhythm
02:57:264 (6) - ^
03:05:638 (10) - ^

Feelling Sleepy
00:32:049 (2) - shorten 1/2 beat and move it to next red tick.. then add a note here: 00:32:049
00:36:116 (9) - end 1/2 beat later and remove 00:37:312 (1)
00:39:226 - add note
00:39:465 (1) - remove it
00:39:705 - add note
00:41:140 - ^
00:51:427 (6) - extend to next white tick
01:33:293 (2) - shorten 1/2 beat and move it to next red tick.. then add a note here: 01:33:293
01:38:796 (2) - ^
02:12:767 (1) - 1/2 later and remove a repeat
02:21:619 (4) - extend 1/2 beat
03:04:920 (1,2) - keep following the music please ~.~ it was going nicely
03:08:748 (1) - ^

So Tired
remove unused timing sections o.o
00:32:049 (2) - see Feelling Sleepy
00:38:030 (2,1,2) - move 1/2 later
01:06:260 (4) - same
01:33:293 (2) - see Feelling Sleepy
01:36:882 (7) - move 1/2 later
01:38:796 (2) - see Feelling Sleepy
01:44:776 (2) - same here
02:09:896 (2,3) - move 1/2 later
02:13:724 (4) - extend 1/2 beat and removing 02:14:442 (5) -

Done!
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
all changes done :)
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Add something in source, i.e. album's name.


~So Tired~
00:34:681 (6) - new combo
00:37:312 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:269 (2) - new combo
00:39:705 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:499 (4) - add claps at 1st and 3rd note
01:35:925 (7) - new combo
02:07:264 (1) - start on red tick
02:10:135 (2) - add a clap at middle note
02:11:571 (3) - add claps at 1st and 3rd note
02:13:724 (4) - add a clap at the end
02:17:073 (1) - start on white tick
02:24:250 (1) - remove new combo

~Feelling Sleepy~
00:35:877 (8,9) - wrong spacing
01:39:035 (3,4) - ^
02:39:083 (1) - remove new combo
02:41:236 (1) - ^
02:57:982 (2) - new combo
03:04:920 (1) - remove new combo
03:05:638 (2) - new combo
03:08:748 (7) - ^

~Feels Like Insomnia~
00:10:279 (5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:11:714 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:17:217 (6) - new combo
00:19:848 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:044 (5) - new combo
00:23:078 (1) - move a bit further from (8)
00:24:154 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:633 (4) - new combo
00:27:982 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:700 (3) - new combo
00:54:059 (5) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:06:020 (9,1) - wrong spacing
02:09:657 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:11:571 (1,1,1,1) - ^
02:19:226 (1) - ^
02:21:619 (6) - new combo
02:23:054 (1) - remove new combo
02:32:623 (9) - new combo
02:35:016 (5) - ^
02:35:973 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:930 (5) - new combo
02:41:953 (8) - ^
02:49:609 (2) - add a clap at 2nd note
02:52:958 (3) - stack it
02:53:437 (1) - don't repeat on blue tick, it sounds weird
03:01:092 (1) - remove new combo
03:01:571 (3) - new combo
03:04:920 (9) - ^
03:07:552 (3,1) - unexpected jump D:


+Star
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

Add tags.
The green and yellow combo are like...nonsense. I think it would be best to use a white, gray, blue and another shade of blue. My suggestion is use these:

Combo1 : 174,215,255
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 216,216,216
Combo4 : 87,166,253
So Tired:

00:41:619 (2,3) - They are kinda hidden, make them more visible.
00:56:930 (1) - Clap the end, too.
01:29:944 (1) - Maybe a finish sound?
01:40:709 (5) - Reverse it one more time.
01:54:824 (3) - Add a finish sound.
01:58:652 (3) - ^
02:17:711 - You ended kiai in a weird way. End it at the beggining or the ending of the spinner.
Feeling Sleepy:

00:24:154 - Add a note.
01:29:944 (1) - Maybe a finish sound?

Feels Like Insomnia:

Nothing wrong found but, small hitcircles SUCKS BALLS, really. I would like to ask you to make them bigger.
That's all~ An awesome map. Go go rank this. <3
Have your star.
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
Changes done, and waiting for more :D
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
No problem found in this map :3
Star~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Combo colors: you might want to switch it so it goes white - blue - grey - light blue this way the color contrast is better imo.
-- Album shouldn't be in source put it in tags.
-- Why force the default skin?

So Tired:

00:13:867 (2) - Clap the start and end.
00:58:843 (3) - Covered by the kiai, this might be hard for newer players to catch.
01:33:293 (2) - Clap.
01:39:035 (3) - Clap slider.
01:40:709 (5) - Clap second and last return.
02:37:408 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This bit might be a little hard for the easiest difficulty. I don't know.

Nice overall, make sure to look out for a consistent clap pattern, this song suits soft claps.

Feeling Sleepy:

00:13:867 (2) - Clap the end.
00:35:877 (8) - Clap.
01:35:925 (7) - Clap only the second return.
01:36:882 (8) - Clap + finish sounds awful imo.
02:12:767 (1) - Feels off starting on a red tick, maybe add a beat at 02:12:528 then start the returning slider at 02:13:006
02:48:652 (2,3) - This looks better like 02:52:480 (2,3) -
02:50:566 (2,3) - ^
02:58:221 (2,3) - Maybe have a returning slider instead?
03:05:877 (2,3) - Like I said before I think its better to have 3 visible, up to you though ^^

Feels Like Insomnia:

02:53:437 (1) - Clap the end.
03:04:920 (1) - Clap return.
03:07:552 (3) - Clap end.

Maps are good ^^

~ Star.
LFPB07
6 posts
Joined December 2008
LFPB07
last post was at Mon Feb 22, 2010 -_-

I like this map a lot and I think it should have been ranked a long time ago..

Hope this star helps you :p
AdRon Zh3Ro
901 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
[:]Suggestion
[>>]Need to change

So tired
Good.

Feeling sleepy
:OD 1 or 2 ticks more.

Feels like insomnia
Very good.
[DBF]
1,827 posts
Joined January 2009
[DBF]
[So Tired]
00:28:461 (1) - Add finish.
[Feeling Sleepy]
00:09:083 (3,1) - spacing.
00:11:953 (5,1,2) - ^
00:27:264 (2) - add finish with low hitsound (use timing sections)
00:28:221 (4) - ^
00:28:461 (1) - add finish.
01:53:150 (4) - add finish in ending.
01:54:346 (1) - finish.
01:54:824 (3) - ^
02:39:800 (7) - ^
02:40:279 (1) - ^
02:40:757 (3) - ^
03:06:355 (3,1) - spacing.
03:14:011 (4,1) - spacing (that nazi).
[Feels Like Insomnia]
00:06:690 (1) - right 1, use grid lvl 3. let's trying fix all like that, that not danger but..
00:58:604 (5,6) - spacing.
01:46:930 (1) - right 1, use grid lvl 3.
02:13:006 (5,1) - that little wrong spacing, let's trying fix it.
02:46:499 (1) - finish.
03:04:920 (1) - Up 1, use grid lvl 3.

I really like that map and song, Star~
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
kk, this is small, but needed!

Overall
Change the previewtimes so that they are all the same, right now one diff has 67680, while the other 2 have 67677
also, remove osb, i'm gettin this weird bug when i mess with it XD

and seriously dude, i modded this like 4 times, GET some BATs to look at it, it's pretty perfect now XD
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Delete "Greatest Hits" from Tags?
- It would be nice if you make the combocolors go from blue - white - blue - white. Having the grey one and the white one together looks like you're following the same combo sometimes.

~So Tired~
00:42:336 (4) - Just for making sure there isn't any confusion with the reverse arrow, move the endpoint away from the notes (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11790)

~Feeling Sleepy~
- Slidertick 2, 4 doesn't make sense and it just boosts Max Combo / Score.

~Feels Like Insomnia~
No problems here~

Nice map, get it ranked! It's old enough D: *star*
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
ok did all sugestions, and changed the slidertick in Feeling Sleepy to 2 :)
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Hello~
In fact, I'm un-official old map saver lol

[Feeling Sleepy]
00:33:724 (1) - mm maybe this is quite far from the previous note....(For normal players)
00:41:140 (1) - Same as above

That's all for me ><

EDIT: GO
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
...back

Usa offset 0... para que siga la música nadamás. No es que esté incorrecto, pero este está más correcto. ;p

[So Tired]
  1. Algunos spinners se sienten muy... rápidos. Ej. 02:14:920 (1). No es nada malo, sólo trata de regularlo para la siguiente vez. Sería bueno si cambiaras algunos comoquiera.
02:38:843 (1) - Tal vez podría llevar un rebote más.

[Feeling Sleepy]

01:36:882 (8,1) - Spacing...
03:10:183 (5,1) - Spacing...
03:18:556 (1) - Definitivamente tiene que ser acortado en alguna parte...

[Feels Like Insomnia]

00:48:325 - Sentí que un beat faltaba aquí.
01:10:087 (1) - Este slider no sigue la música mucho...
02:21:140 (7,1) - Spacing...
03:08:516 (1,1,1,1) - Siento que estos estarían mejor en 03:07:559.
03:19:035 (1) - Sería mejor si éste fuera sólo un beat...

D= Llámame cuando termines

EDIT: Rebubs
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Change offset to -10 instead?
Maybe? :P
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
For being able to rank this please change your offset to: -15
Don't forget to resnap all notes afterwards.

Also, while you are at it, delete your .osb file from your beatmap folder. Don't really need it.

PS: This slider looks terrible: 02:23:047 (2) -
You can create a smoother "S" by adding less points and moving them around without using the grid snap option.

Star~
Last edited by Sir Minelli , edited 1 time in total.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Alright, offset seems good now.

Ranked!
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
hehehehehehe FINALLY
sebastiangl
36 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
sebastiangl
Thank you everyone for all your support and help :D
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
congratulations for your first map !! ^^

it is really a good one ;)
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