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ChiyoTia - Fly away

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MMzz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 08, 2010 at 12:46:01 AM

Artist: ChiyoTia
Title: Fly away
Source: Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA
BPM: 125
Filesize: 1689kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.14 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Hard (4.8 stars, 158 notes)
  3. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 408 notes)
  4. Normal (4.08 stars, 125 notes)
Download: ChiyoTia - Fly away
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5/27/10 - Redownload for new BG~
5/28/10 - Added Lepidon's Taiko

Mod Please!

Easy: Done
Normal: Done
Hard: Done

Modders~
I_Tatsuo_I
animask
[DFB]
wmfchris
Leorda
DiamondCrash
Kecco
Tatsuo
Random Mod~

[Overall]
I love the way you map. Just one thing I need to bring up is that you need to have a difficulty under three stars. BAT seems to be keen on having these difficulties around for the newer players.
Take out DDR from the tags since it's in the source, and change DDR to Dance Dance Revolution.

[Normal]
The only real problem I had with this difficulty was that at 00:47:965 (3), that dang slider confused me. For a [Normal] you may want to change that. Along with 00:55:645 (2) too.

[Hard]
00:35:005 (1) - This sounds off to me.
01:32:125 - I feel that everything after this (which are the three hit circles and the slider) is unnecessary. May want to cut that.

Good map. I like it. You can have this. *star*
Topic Starter
MMzz

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Random Mod~

[Overall]
I love the way you map. Just one thing I need to bring up is that you need to have a difficulty under three stars. BAT seems to be keen on having these difficulties around for the newer players.
Take out DDR from the tags since it's in the source, and change DDR to Dance Dance Revolution.

[Normal]
The only real problem I had with this difficulty was that at 00:47:965 (3), that dang slider confused me. For a [Normal] you may want to change that. Along with 00:55:645 (2) too. Ok, Fixed Both

[Hard]
00:35:005 (1) - This sounds off to me. Changed
01:32:125 - I feel that everything after this (which are the three hit circles and the slider) is unnecessary. May want to cut that. I like this part, I'm gonna keep it, unless there are more suggestions to get rid of it.

Good map. I like it. You can have this. *star*
Thank you~
You get KD
Sleep Powder
Offset 15,329

[Normal]
00:23:965 (1) - Add a finish
00:47:965 (3) - New Combo
00:54:205 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:55:645 (1) - Add New Combo

[Hard]
Try to extend combo length to at least 5

00:38:129 (9) - Re-arrange slider end (Don't block with slider start)
00:45:809 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
MMzz

animask wrote:

Offset 15,329

[Normal]
00:23:965 (1) - Add a finish
00:47:965 (3) - New Combo
00:54:205 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:55:645 (1) - Add New Combo

[Hard]
Try to extend combo length to at least 5

00:38:129 (9) - Re-arrange slider end (Don't block with slider start)
00:45:809 (2) - ^

Did all of this.
Thank you! KD
[DBF]
[Normal]

00:20:365 (2) - clap.

00:32:849 - 01:00:929 need hitsounds, you can trying make like this:

00:33:569 - clap.
00:34:525 (4) - ^
00:35:489 - ^
00:36:449 - ^
00:37:409 - ^
00:38:849 - ^
00:39:329 - ^
00:39:809 - ^
00:40:769 - ^
00:41:729 - ^
and all next.. keep rhythm.

01:03:329 - 01:32:129 - whistles little loud and annoying, maybe let's volume down?
or you can use claps.

[Hard]

01:03:329 - 01:32:129 add some claps, that be better.

map really good, i dont find big errors, star~
Topic Starter
MMzz

[DBF] wrote:

[Normal]

00:20:365 (2) - clap.

00:32:849 - 01:00:929 need hitsounds, you can trying make like this:

00:33:569 - clap.
00:34:525 (4) - ^
00:35:489 - ^
00:36:449 - ^
00:37:409 - ^
00:38:849 - ^
00:39:329 - ^
00:39:809 - ^
00:40:769 - ^
00:41:729 - ^
and all next.. keep rhythm. Ok :3

01:03:329 - 01:32:129 - whistles little loud and annoying, maybe let's volume down? Put claps
or you can use claps.

[Hard]

01:03:329 - 01:32:129 add some claps, that be better. Added Clap :3

map really good, i dont find big errors, star~
I never really got around to adding hitsounds on either x3
Thank you for mod tho~!

KD
wmfchris
[overall]
You must make an easier diff lower than 3.00 star to make it rankable :3

[hard]
0:39:809 (7) adjust the direction a bit to make correct spacing with (1)
0:43:409 (2) down 1 grid
0:55:409 (2) spacing but ok for me
1:26:369 (5) right 1 grid

[normal]
0:35:009 (6) spacing+symmetiy, right+up 1 grid
0:38:129 (5) mistake? left + down 1 grid
1:27:089 (2) suggestion: left+up 1 grid?

star~
Nazo_old
I suppose I could make a guest difficulty for you.

Because I'm that nice. :3

+ Star. Will make an Easy soon enough.

... I may make a Taiko, as well...~

FINALLYYYYY.

Took forever. -_-;

Download: ChiyoTia - Fly away (MittenMasterzz) [Nazo's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
MMzz

Nazo wrote:

I suppose I could make a guest difficulty for you.

Because I'm that nice. :3

+ Star. Will make an Easy soon enough.

... I may make a Taiko, as well...~

Received modding from Fuuko, via MSN.

Will re-upload file after fixing is done.
I was gonna make a Taiko >_>
Topic Starter
MMzz

wmfchris wrote:

[overall]
You must make an easier diff lower than 3.00 star to make it rankable :3

[hard]
0:39:809 (7) adjust the direction a bit to make correct spacing with (1)
0:43:409 (2) down 1 grid
0:55:409 (2) spacing but ok for me
1:26:369 (5) right 1 grid

[normal]
0:35:009 (6) spacing+symmetiy, right+up 1 grid
0:38:129 (5) mistake? left + down 1 grid
1:27:089 (2) suggestion: left+up 1 grid?

star~
Thank you! :3
Leorda
Yo

[General]
1) Source : Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA
2) Tags?

[File]
1) Your bg (Fly away.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 680x467)
2) Fly away-bg.png is useless, delete it

[Easy]
Please map until the end

00:19:169 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo?
00:32:849 (4) - New combo?
00:34:049 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:45:809 (2) - Move backward to red tick and add 1 repeating slider?

[Normal]
00:21:085 (4) - New combo?
00:22:045 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:53:005 (4) - New combo?
01:25:405 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Hard]
00:17:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too easy D:
00:50:605 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:50:125 (5)?
00:59:485 (5) - New combo?
00:59:965 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - This object is not following beat/rhythm/vocal
01:39:805 (1) - Silence this spinner


Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
MMzz

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[General]
1) Source : Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA Ok
2) Tags? I really don't know what to put there x.x

[File]
1) Your bg (Fly away.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 680x467) I'll see what I can do :3
2) Fly away-bg.png is useless, delete it Ok

[Easy]
Please map until the end It's fully mapped now

00:19:169 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo?
00:32:849 (4) - New combo?
00:34:049 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:45:809 (2) - Move backward to red tick and add 1 repeating slider? Did all this

[Normal]
00:21:085 (4) - New combo?
00:22:045 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:53:005 (4) - New combo?
01:25:405 (1) - Remove new combo? Did all this

[Hard]
00:17:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is too easy D:
00:50:605 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:50:125 (5)?
00:59:485 (5) - New combo?
00:59:965 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - This object is not following beat/rhythm/vocal
01:39:805 (1) - Silence this spinner


That beat follows the drums in the background, unless it's unrankable I won't remove it. Did everything else.

Nice song
STAR
Thank you for Mod :D
lepidopodus
Taiko map finished. Oni lvl. 7 I think.

EDIT: you changed BG, so please reset this same as others.

Download: ChiyoTia - Fly away (MittenMasterzz) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Roddie
Star! :D
aRiskOfRain
Preview point!

Easy;
I'm concerned about the distance snap; proportionately, it is larger than normal's.
00:32:009 (2) - 1/4 on an easy? Reconsider.

Normal;
Resnap all notes.
00:47:485 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:54:209 (4,1) - ^
01:07:169 (3,1) - Too difficult for a normal.
01:14:849 (3,1) - ^
01:24:449 (1,2) - Spacing.

Hard;
Resnap all notes.
00:54:689 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:11:009 (3) - New combo.
01:28:045 (2,3) - Spacing.

Oni;
Not that into taiko, but a suggestion -
00:54:689 - Don
00:54:809 - Kat
00:55:049 - Kat
00:55:169 - Don
00:55:409 - Kat
I think I got those the right way round anyway. Feel free to ignore; you're the expert at this.
Topic Starter
MMzz

DiamondCrash wrote:

Preview point!

Easy;
I'm concerned about the distance snap; proportionately, it is larger than normal's.
00:32:009 (2) - 1/4 on an easy? Reconsider. ummmm what?

Normal;
Resnap all notes.
00:47:485 (2,1) - Spacing. Ok
00:54:209 (4,1) - ^ Ok
01:07:169 (3,1) - Too difficult for a normal. How so?
01:14:849 (3,1) - ^ Ok
01:24:449 (1,2) - Spacing. Ok

Hard;
Resnap all notes.
00:54:689 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:11:009 (3) - New combo.
01:28:045 (2,3) - Spacing. Ok for all

Oni; I'll PM lepidon for this.
Not that into taiko, but a suggestion -
00:54:689 - Don
00:54:809 - Kat
00:55:049 - Kat
00:55:169 - Don
00:55:409 - Kat
I think I got those the right way round anyway. Feel free to ignore; you're the expert at this.

Thank you~!
lepidopodus

DiamondCrash wrote:

00:54:689 - Don
00:54:809 - Kat
00:55:049 - Kat
00:55:169 - Don
00:55:409 - Kat all fixed
Download: ChiyoTia - Fly away (MittenMasterzz) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Kecco
•Overall•
Set the preview point : Timing>Set current position as Preview Point.
Remove the .osb file and Full Submit
Offset : 15.335 ~ Resnap All Notes
•Hard•
01:10:049 (2) - The end of this slider doesn't match with the begin of the previous one. Toggle the distance snap and fix it.
01:17:729 (5) - ^
01:26:369 (5) - 1 grid left?
01:39:809 (1) - Silence this spinner with a timing section Audio : 0.

•Normal•
00:17:249 (1) - This slider is too far from the centre for a Normal Diff, since there is a spinner previously.
00:32:849 (1) - ^

•Easy•
I think the distance snaping is too high for a Easy diff, what do you think about reducing it and replace all notes?

Good map~
Star~
Topic Starter
MMzz

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
Set the preview point : Timing>Set current position as Preview Point.
Remove the .osb file and Full Submit
Offset : 15.335 ~ Resnap All Notes Did all this
•Hard•
01:10:049 (2) - The end of this slider doesn't match with the begin of the previous one. Toggle the distance snap and fix it.
01:17:729 (5) - ^
01:26:369 (5) - 1 grid left?
01:39:809 (1) - Silence this spinner with a timing section Audio : 0. Did all this

•Normal•
00:17:249 (1) - This slider is too far from the centre for a Normal Diff, since there is a spinner previously.
00:32:849 (1) - ^ Did all this

•Easy•
I think the distance snaping is too high for a Easy diff, what do you think about reducing it and replace all notes? It's fine to me. . . n.n

Good map~
Star~

Thank you~
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