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MK feat. YURiE - Spiral
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good job, will mod when its finished, also make an easier diff k?
Just gonna give a quick mod for Insane, nothing too intense. Mostly suggestions, I'm not used to this whole modding business, and I'm not good at these Insane beatmaps.
[General]
Timing seems on.
Might wanna cut the song file a bit short. About half of the song is used for the beatmaps.
[Insane]
Brutal HP drain, heh.
0:00:464 (1) - Eep, dropping suddenly into the song. This makes me uncomfortable.
1:05:797 (1) - I feel like following the vocals for this combo instead of going for a straight 1/2 stream would be a bit better. This rhythm doesn't pop up too often in the song, so it'd be nice to see it followed the few times it comes up.
1:08:464 (8) - Questionable quick slider, the end doesn't really seem to fall on anything important.
1:40:464 (1) - hooray squares
2:01:797 (3) - Rather than using a long repeating slider, perhaps it'd be better to make a longer slider that moves the cursor around.
2:04:297 (1) - Remove new combo from here...
2:04:464 (2) - ...and instead set it here.
2:04:464 (2) - see 1:05:797 (1)
2:06:464 (1) - A nice isosceles triangle. To turn it into a beautiful equilateral triangle, you could perhaps alt-drag it 2 right + 1 down or so.
Looking forward to Normal, maybe I won't fail that!
[General]
Timing seems on.
Might wanna cut the song file a bit short. About half of the song is used for the beatmaps.
[Insane]
Brutal HP drain, heh.
0:00:464 (1) - Eep, dropping suddenly into the song. This makes me uncomfortable.
1:05:797 (1) - I feel like following the vocals for this combo instead of going for a straight 1/2 stream would be a bit better. This rhythm doesn't pop up too often in the song, so it'd be nice to see it followed the few times it comes up.
1:08:464 (8) - Questionable quick slider, the end doesn't really seem to fall on anything important.
1:40:464 (1) - hooray squares
2:01:797 (3) - Rather than using a long repeating slider, perhaps it'd be better to make a longer slider that moves the cursor around.
2:04:297 (1) - Remove new combo from here...
2:04:464 (2) - ...and instead set it here.
2:04:464 (2) - see 1:05:797 (1)
2:06:464 (1) - A nice isosceles triangle. To turn it into a beautiful equilateral triangle, you could perhaps alt-drag it 2 right + 1 down or so.
Looking forward to Normal, maybe I won't fail that!
Star~
star~
need to make a difficulty I can pass! just kidding, star for cici~ 
Offset:452 (-12ms to all of your timing lines and resnao all notes )
<Hard>
It`s nice,but there are toooooo many 1/2 divisors at the end part XD
<Insane>
too many claps IMO, you can copy hard`s hitsounds XD
this diff has so many 1/2 divisors too XD
<Hard>
It`s nice,but there are toooooo many 1/2 divisors at the end part XD
<Insane>
too many claps IMO, you can copy hard`s hitsounds XD
this diff has so many 1/2 divisors too XD
Hell yeah =D now get some easier difficulty and it will be perfect ^^
here's my normal for you so far, it still needs work but you can look at it as is.
:added some notes and got rid of the awkward stream.
:alright, finished version is ready, critique as needed since i am still learning the ways of making maps, if those stacked repeating sliders are a problem i don't mind removing them and trying something else.
Download: MK feat. YURiE - Spiral (Lena) [Soulclenz's Normal].osu
:added some notes and got rid of the awkward stream.
:alright, finished version is ready, critique as needed since i am still learning the ways of making maps, if those stacked repeating sliders are a problem i don't mind removing them and trying something else.
Download: MK feat. YURiE - Spiral (Lena) [Soulclenz's Normal].osu
[H][I][I][I]!?
❤ = ★
It'd be nice if I knew which anime this came from seeing as you have "anime" in your tags. (If the anime's mentioned IN the tags, my bad 
)
★ for you~
)★ for you~
Mind putting that as the source then? I'm sure others wouldn't know where this song came from immediately, so... yeah 
Topic Starter
Done! ^^Blazevoir wrote:
Mind putting that as the source then? I'm sure others wouldn't know where this song came from immediately, so... yeah
gto461013's Very Easy
00:24:451 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to the next note
00:32:451 (6) - add new combo
00:37:785 (3) - add new combo, remove new combo from the next note
00:44:452 (1) - turn what it is now, into http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12203 remove new combo on the next note, and do the same to that one, cause right now, the rebound point doesn't sound great to me
00:55:118 (3) - new combo
01:00:452 (6) - ^
01:06:285 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:05:238, and end at 01:08:451
Easy
00:41:451 (1) - remove new combo, delete the next note, and make the spinner start on the white tick, and end same place, since this is an Easy
Soulclenz's Normal+
00:05:368 (2) - sounds a bit weird to me
Glasslake's Hard
00:26:118 (6) - This rebound point is hidden, i didn't see it upon playing, Fix it
Insane
02:07:201 (1) - end this at 02:08:451
Lena's Jumps
Spacing is wack, but MAP IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUN!!! Greatest diff!!!
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00:24:451 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to the next note
00:32:451 (6) - add new combo
00:37:785 (3) - add new combo, remove new combo from the next note
00:44:452 (1) - turn what it is now, into http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12203 remove new combo on the next note, and do the same to that one, cause right now, the rebound point doesn't sound great to me
00:55:118 (3) - new combo
01:00:452 (6) - ^
01:06:285 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:05:238, and end at 01:08:451
Easy
00:41:451 (1) - remove new combo, delete the next note, and make the spinner start on the white tick, and end same place, since this is an Easy
Soulclenz's Normal+
00:05:368 (2) - sounds a bit weird to me
Glasslake's Hard
00:26:118 (6) - This rebound point is hidden, i didn't see it upon playing, Fix it
Insane
02:07:201 (1) - end this at 02:08:451
Lena's Jumps
Spacing is wack, but MAP IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUN!!! Greatest diff!!!
^__________________________^v
Hi :3
gto461013's Very Easy:
Easy:
00:08:451 (2,1)-I think you should remove that note before the spinner and place the spinner on 00:08:451.
01:03:118 (1, 1)-^same thing, although place spinner on 01:03:118.
01:39:118 (4,1)-^Same thing, although place spinner on 01:39:118.
Soulclenz's Normal+:
-Sliders are too fast. ._.
-I'm sorry but i would suggest to remap it.
I can't really say its Normal+, but hey its just a suggestion.
Glasslake's Hard:
-HP drain: move 1 tick down.
-OD: move 1 tick down.
Insane:
02:08:451 to 02:12:451-Add break.
02:14:785-Maybe map a little more.
Lena's Jumps:
Cool.
Nice song.
Star! :3
gto461013's Very Easy:
Still isn't updated. ._.EEeee wrote:
01:06:285 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:05:238, and end at 01:08:451
Easy:
00:08:451 (2,1)-I think you should remove that note before the spinner and place the spinner on 00:08:451.
01:03:118 (1, 1)-^same thing, although place spinner on 01:03:118.
01:39:118 (4,1)-^Same thing, although place spinner on 01:39:118.
Soulclenz's Normal+:
-Sliders are too fast. ._.
-I'm sorry but i would suggest to remap it.
I can't really say its Normal+, but hey its just a suggestion.Glasslake's Hard:
-HP drain: move 1 tick down.
-OD: move 1 tick down.
Insane:
02:08:451 to 02:12:451-Add break.
02:14:785-Maybe map a little more.
Lena's Jumps:
Cool.
Nice song.
Star! :3
Topic Starter
Thankshybrid579 wrote:
Hi :3
gto461013's Very Easy:Still isn't updated. ._.EEeee wrote:
01:06:285 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:05:238, and end at 01:08:451 fixed
Easy:
00:08:451 (2,1)-I think you should remove that note before the spinner and place the spinner on 00:08:451.
01:03:118 (1, 1)-^same thing, although place spinner on 01:03:118.
01:39:118 (4,1)-^Same thing, although place spinner on 01:39:118.
^but I like it like that
Soulclenz's Normal+:
-Sliders are too fast. ._.
-I'm sorry but i would suggest to remap it.
^he doesn't think it's too fast...waiting for more opinions
Glasslake's Hard:
-HP drain: move 1 tick down.
-OD: move 1 tick down.
^done
Insane:
02:08:451 to 02:12:451-Add break.
02:14:785-Maybe map a little more.
^done
Lena's Jumps:
Cool.
Nice song.
Star! :3
Kudosu for you :3
Topic Starter
EEeee wrote:
gto461013's Very Easy
00:24:451 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to the next note
00:32:451 (6) - add new combo
00:37:785 (3) - add new combo, remove new combo from the next note
00:44:452 (1) - turn what it is now, into http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12203 remove new combo on the next note, and do the same to that one, cause right now, the rebound point doesn't sound great to me
00:55:118 (3) - new combo
01:00:452 (6) - ^
01:06:285 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:05:238, and end at 01:08:451
^fixed all of the above
Easy
00:41:451 (1) - remove new combo, delete the next note, and make the spinner start on the white tick, and end same place, since this is an Easy
^fixed
Soulclenz's Normal+
00:05:368 (2) - sounds a bit weird to me
He's thinking about it
Glasslake's Hard
00:26:118 (6) - This rebound point is hidden, i didn't see it upon playing, Fix it
^fixed
Insane
02:07:201 (1) - end this at 02:08:451
added more to the map so...
Lena's Jumps
Spacing is wack, but MAP IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUN!!! Greatest diff!!!
^glad you like it :3
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Kudosu ^o^
as for the sliders being too fast, i can remap if i have to, i didn't even think about slider speed when i started making it =(, but i'll wait and see what other people say before i do that.EEeee wrote:
Soulclenz's Normal+
00:05:368 (2) - sounds a bit weird to me
:fixed the slider to be on time with vocals, it was off by 1 tick each, should sound better when i upload it for Lena again
Tiiiiiiiiiiime out... Shouldn't the anime be the source and whatever you currently have listed be in the tags?
Topic Starter
Technically the source IS exit trance speed anime 2, but since it has links to Spiral from Asura Cryin, I put it in the tags. >3<Blazevoir wrote:
Tiiiiiiiiiiime out... Shouldn't the anime be the source and whatever you currently have listed be in the tags?
Ah, I see. Well anyway, you can remove exit, trance, and anime from the tags since they were used in the source already.
Topic Starter
Done ^3^Blazevoir wrote:
Ah, I see. Well anyway, you can remove exit, trance, and anime from the tags since they were used in the source already.
Ou Mai Gash!!
What a nice remix!...and pretty funny map! i played insane and i luv it!!
Starred!!
Good Luck ^_^
What a nice remix!...and pretty funny map! i played insane and i luv it!!
Starred!!
Good Luck ^_^
hurrdurr
Good jobQuick modding in irc for Insane:
I think it could use another break 2/3 of the way in, because I find it repeating a bit and it hurts my arm ._.
I think you could add a few short 3 or 5-length streams throughout to make the map more epic. Try to find the best spots for it to fit the music.
Good luck.
I think it could use another break 2/3 of the way in, because I find it repeating a bit and it hurts my arm ._.
I think you could add a few short 3 or 5-length streams throughout to make the map more epic. Try to find the best spots for it to fit the music.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
I made the map with no stream on purpose >.<. My next map will have more stream in it.james039 wrote:
Quick modding in irc for Insane:
I think it could use another break 2/3 of the way in, because I find it repeating a bit and it hurts my arm ._.
I think you could add a few short 3 or 5-length streams throughout to make the map more epic. Try to find the best spots for it to fit the music.
Good luck.