DJPop wrote:

BPM should be 220 according to very fast song.
This is exactly double of what I have, so it shouldn't make a difference. But I'll change
On second thought, denied. Sorry.
~Easy~
Fine.

~MegaManEXE's Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:32:889 (8) - move 1/4 right (middle of 7,9)
00:52:798 (4,5) - too far
All fixed

~Insane~
00:23:344 (2) - better with 1/3 snap
Fixed
00:30:707 (3,4,5) - wrong spacing
Fixed
00:32:889 (7) - move 1/4 right (middle of 6,8)
Fixed
00:34:934 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed
00:37:525 (8) - new combo
Fixed
00:54:980 (4) - delete
Fixed
00:55:116 (5) - start on white tick
Fixed


+Star

1. 00:33:162 (8,1) - Spacing. (1) is too far away from slider end (8).
2. 00:44:071 (1) - Delete new combo (?)
3. 00:44:071 (9,1,2,3) - Spacing is odd here. Distance between (9) and (1) is larger than between (1) and (2). And then (2) and (3) is all of the sudden small spacing again.

1. 00:33:025 (8,9) - Ugly jump.

1. 00:35:071 (4,1) - Jumps in nomal are ok, but this jump is too large imo. Please change it.

1. Resnap all notes nubcake D:!

Gladi wrote:

[General]

Make the title Ichiko Furukawa 'feat. or &' Makoto Tonosu (I like this guy's name)
Having trouble changing artist name :/
Capitalize all tags.
Done
Delete .osb file from song folder.
Done

[Insane]

1. 00:33:162 (8,1) - Spacing. (1) is too far away from slider end (8).
   Fixed
2. 00:44:071 (1) - Delete new combo (?)
   Fixed
3. 00:44:071 (9,1,2,3) - Spacing is odd here. Distance between (9) and (1) is larger than between (1) and (2). And then (2) and (3) is all of the sudden small spacing again.

Fixed with 1.5 snap.

[Hard]

1. 00:33:025 (8,9) - Ugly jump.

Lol, fixed XD

[MegaMenEXE's Normal]

1. 00:35:071 (4,1) - Jumps in nomal are ok, but this jump is too large imo. Please change it.

[Easy]

1. Resnap all notes nubcake D:!

o-o Resnappered

• 00:38:071 (1) Finish only on last
  00:48:980 (1?) None
  01:01:525 (1) ^

• 00:10:253 (4) Whistle
  00:51:707 (4) ^

• 00:15:844 (2) Clap

• 00:10:798 (11) Add Finish
  00:52:389 (6) Delete

Shulin wrote:

I love Tales of Symphonia! I wish I had found this earlier or I would've asked to make a difficulty ^^

General:

-- The comma in your artist title is fine, it's how the artists put it.
-- Delete "Tales of Symphonia" from tags since it's already in the source.
-- Set BG color to black all difficulties.
-- I'm a bit dissapointed you didn't map to the end.
It's just too awkward to map over the fade, sorry :/
Easy:

-- Make sure the kiai is the same as Hard and Insane.

00:13:525 (3) - New combo?
Fixed
00:15:707 (5) - ^
Fixed
00:17:889 (7) - ^ ~ Just to make it colorful and because the combo's very long.
Fixed
00:24:434 (4) - End on blue tick at 00:25:389
Fixed
00:44:071 -- Your audio volume gets lower here, make it the same volume it was previously or reduce the volume of the previous section.
Regulated so all volume changes are now the same
00:51:980 (1) - Too unexpected for an Easy, drop this x2 section.
Done, and replaced slider with one hit cricle
00:54:980 (3) - New combo?
Done
00:57:162 (5) - ^
Fixed

MegaManEXE's Normal:

-- Capitalize tags on this difficulty as well.
-- Make audio lead in the same as other difficulties (or add it to the other difficulties.)

No problems

Hard:

-- Your audio level goes quiet at the end again.
K, regulated again

00:15:844 (2) - This bit sounds odd because it follows nothing in the music, otherwise it's fine.
Deleted 1 and made one slider
00:17:889 (6) - New combo
k
00:20:480 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
k
00:20:889 (1) - ^
Done
00:24:434 (1) - Finish and maybe remove the new combo.
Did both
00:32:071 (7) - Ends on 1/6 at 00:32:798
Done
00:33:025 (8) - Also 1/6 at 00:32:980
Done
00:52:798 (4) - New combo
Done
00:54:616 (2,3) - Claps sound a little awkward here.
They're regular beats now


Insane:

-- Some of these jumps are brutal.

00:21:162 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - No thanks, can you reduce the distance between notes on this zig zag stream? Also align it.
Lol, fixed
00:22:662 (1,2) - The bpm is too slow to map this sound properly.
Redid these with hitcricles
00:23:162 (2) - Why is this on a 1/3? Make it on the white tick/or delete it.
Deleted and redone with hitcricles. Btw djpop told me to do that XD
00:32:071 (6) - Ends on a 1/6 same place as I said in Hard.
Fixed
00:33:025 (7) - Kill the clap.
Fixed, also made jump more forgiving
00:42:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Lol no. Same thing about this zig zag stream.
K
00:46:934 (9,10,11) - Sounds and plays weird.
Adjusted slightly
00:52:116 (5,6,1) - I found gaps like this a little odd.
I fixed (5,6) but 1 remains the same
01:02:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lol... this will annoy people.
>:3

Overall: I'm not a huge fan of insane if I'm honest but the rest is good, make sure to check out for those 1/6 parts. I'll come and check this again later (hopefully when I'm not tired lol)

Kudos star for now

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Im now starting to think that the bpm is too slow... If you decide to do that put it at BPM 220. (You'll have to rethink slider velocity etc.)Sorry Shu, BPM stays the same
-- Easy, Hard and Insane still need some audio lead in (1.5 to be consistent with Normal)
Donezorz
-- Make sure the tags on Normal are the same as the other difficulties.
Megaman tole me not to touch his map, but w/e. Changed

Insane:

00:21:162 (3,4,5,6,1) - Right one square.
Done.
00:21:162 (3,4,5,6,1) - Down one square and right one square.
Wait but you already said right one square Meh done anyway.
00:32:980 (7) - 1/6 move back one tick.
Done
00:52:116 (5,6) - Sounds weird, maybe just use white and red ticks? Or put some notes in such as 00:51:980, 00:52:116 (5) - delete, and add one at 00:52:525.
K, its done
01:02:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Still hard to read imo, maybe do something else?
Combo pattern is the same, spacing is different.

In general for this difficulty I think the spacing between the triples is too wide which creates huge jumps (think of how you did the triples and Hard those were more fun to play lol), however, there's nothing technically wrong with them because the spacing is correct so it's up to you whether you change.

The other difficulties are fine imo, get some more mods on insane and get someone to double check the snaps and I think this will be ready for a pubble


~ Star.

Lizbeth wrote:

Insane
This diff have some problems with spacing..
gonna point a few so you get the idea:
00:04:662 (7,8) -
Fixed
00:21:162 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - different spacing.. so turn confusing imo
Spacing is different here because the stream is longer, I feel like I should change it but I don't want to :/I think I changed it to what you mean.
00:51:980 (5,6) - 6 is too close
Changed
other problems
00:32:071 (6,7,8) - unsnapped notes
It is snapped at 1/6 for this part, just not snapped at 1/4. Does this still count as snapped? :/ If you do happen to reply please tell me.
00:46:253 (8,9,10,11) - dont fits the rhythm
I Think it fits it fine >_<. I will change is some else thinks otherwise though.

i'll edit this post later, for other diffs (run out of time)
try to work on that for now.. double check spacing please

Natteke desu wrote:

Hi.

[Generally]
It seems to be a good map and I didn't really spot any bad things about it. (Besides that song is a bit short, but it doesn't really matter ^^)

Easy, Normal and Hard look fine.

[Insane]

If I put (?) - it means im not sure about it or it's a suggestion.

00:20:071 (8) - Mby new combo(?)
Euhh...
00:35:344 (8) - New combo(?)
Euhh...
00:36:434 (8) - ^
What;s with you and suggesting one note combos? o_O
00:52:525 (6) - Why so close to 5?
Changed this in Lisette's mod
Well, a good map after all.

babble wrote:

Either I didn't quite understand your mods, or I did but disagreed, Im honestly not sure of which it was o_o. Thanks for the mod XD

1. I think ino need to add audio lead-in to [Easy], [Hard] and [Insane], please remove
2. Video Game should not be a tag, it will added to genre after get ranked

1. 00:03:162 (2) - this slider looked odd :/ it didn't fit music
2. 00:07:525 (2) - ^
3. 00:18:707 (1) - start at 00:18:434 better imo
4. 00:54:980 (1) - spinner starts here better
5. 01:00:162 (1) - start at 00:59:889 better

1. 00:06:434 (10) - end of it didn't stack well with the start of (9), fix it by turning off grid snap

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. I think ino need to add audio lead-in to [Easy], [Hard] and [Insane], please remove
   I honestly think there should be no lead in either, BUt I'll keep it there to match the normal and to prevent people from being thrown off.
2. Video Game should not be a tag, it will added to genre after get ranked

Removed

[MegaManExe's normal]

1. 00:03:162 (2) - this slider looked odd :/ it didn't fit music
2. 00:07:525 (2) - ^
3. 00:18:707 (1) - start at 00:18:434 better imo
4. 00:54:980 (1) - spinner starts here better
5. 01:00:162 (1) - start at 00:59:889 better

[Insane]

1. 00:06:434 (10) - end of it didn't stack well with the start of (9), fix it by turning off grid snap

Fixed


others are fine
star

VanMoNky wrote:

Lowercase all the tags. [!]

VanMoNky wrote:

You know what? All BAT will ask you to lowercase all the tags. So, before they ask you to do that, I ask you first. Why not?

VanMoNky wrote:

[MegaManEXE's Normal]
00:12:434 (3) - Better without finish at the beginning.
00:22:253 (1) - Add finish.

YGOkid8 wrote:

VanMoNky wrote:

You know what? All BAT will ask you to lowercase all the tags. So, before they ask you to do that, I ask you first. Why not?

Ehrm, I kinda just proved to you that they don't:
viewtopic.php?t=21638

If you didn't actually read...

SPOILER

YGOkid8, on his first beatmap, wrote:

Artist: Sambomaster
Title: Kimi wo Mamotte, Kimi wo Aishite
Source: Bleach
Tags: Gladi ztrot TV Size Ending 19

And none of the 5 BATs that looked at it said anything about lowering the cases for tags, so... Σ(￣ε￣; ) ･･･
------------------
Speaking of tags...

"Gamecube" is actually meant to be "Game Cube", but oh well, might as well add "Game Cube" to tags as well

Lizbeth wrote:

Insane
This diff have some problems with spacing..
gonna point a few so you get the idea:
00:04:662 (7,8) -
00:21:162 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - different spacing.. so turn confusing imo
00:51:980 (5,6) - 6 is too close

other problems
00:32:071 (6,7,8) - unsnapped notes
00:46:253 (8,9,10,11) - dont fits the rhythm

i'll edit this post later, for other diffs (run out of time)
try to work on that for now.. double check spacing please

EDIT: I'm really sorry for the delay.. been busy with college and work

but here is it.. n.n


All diffs: Try to put all inherited timing sections at least 1/4 before the notes if is possible.

Insane
00:46:253 (8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot (timeline)

Hard
00:33:162 (9) - is too far from (8)
00:52:116 (3) - turn it 1/8 length I don't understand this one :X

MegaManEXE's Normal and Easy
no porblems.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags. [!]
2. There are some 1/3 sections in this song.

[Easy]
00:02:616 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.K
00:06:434 (6) - Remove finish.K
00:06:980 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.K
00:11:344 (1) - ^K
00:15:707 (1) - Add finish at the end.K
00:20:616 (3) - Remove whistle. It sounds odd.K
00:44:616 (1) - Add finish at the end.K
00:47:889 (5) - Remove finish.K
00:48:434 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.K
00:52:798 (1) - ^K
00:57:162 (1) - Add finish at the end.K

[MegaManEXE's Normal]
00:12:434 (3) - Better without finish at the beginning.
00:22:253 (1) - Add finish.

[Hard]
I don't like how a slider end on blue tick followed by note or slider begin on white tick.
00:02:616 (1) - Delete the next note (2), then extend this slider one 1/4 tick.Thats how I originally put it, but it got modded away. Oh well Imma put it back.
00:11:889 (2) - I hate this slider. Remove it. Then extend (1) one 1/4 tick, add 1/3 notes on 00:12:071 and 00:12:253.
Just gonna remap this section based off what you said
00:12:434 (4) - Should end on 00:13:162. Then add 1/3 note on 00:13:344.
^
00:18:298 (1) - It's acceptable if the slider like this, based on the song.
00:24:025 (3) - Should be on 00:24:071 (1/3 tick).K
00:24:162 (4) - Should be on 00:24:253 (1/3 tick).K
(3) - Add finish.K

[Insane]
Follow them for sure.
00:04:525 (6) - Add whistle here. So the previous whistle will not sounded odd.Sorry, I dont like the sound of that,
00:12:025 (3) - Should be on 00:12:071 (1/3 tick).
00:12:162 (4) - Should be on 00:12:253 (1/3 tick).
00:13:253 (6) - Should be on 00:13:162 (1/3 tick).
00:13:344 - Add note here.
00:13:525 (8) - Overlapping slider? Change it for safety. [?]Its staying, sorry
00:18:298 (5) - Delete this note. Move (6) slider here. Then extend it one 1/4 tick.
00:24:434 (8) - Overlapping slider? Change it for safety. [?]
00:43:253 (3) - Add finish.

Alll of the above have been fixed, and have inspired me to remap a certain part

00:46:253 (8) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
00:46:934 (9) - Move backward one 1/4 tick. Extend one 1/4 tick.
00:47:480 (10) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
00:48:025 (11) - Move backward one 1/4 tick. Extend one 1/4 tick.
00:48:571 (1) - ^
00:53:480 (3) - Should be on 00:53:525 (1/3 tick).
00:53:616 (4) - Should be on 00:53:707 (1/3 tick).
00:53:889 (1) - Should end on 00:54:616 (1/3 tick).
00:54:707 (2) - Should be on 00:54:798 (1/3 tick).

All of the above (excluding those fixed) have been ignored, because I've fixed it in a mod I forgot to mod before this.

00:54:844 (3) - Delete this note. It doesn't fit to the song. Overmapped.Fixed
00:59:753 (8) - Overlapping slider? Change it for safety. [?]

Star.Staying

Teara wrote:

[Easy]

SPOILER

General:

AudioLeadIn: 1511
PreviewTime: 2560

Timing:

BPM = 110
Offset = 435

Offset feels wrong to me, I'd recommend you get a timing expert to test this for you

General Mod:

Those short spinners are way to hard for a easy diff, I'd suggest you take another look at that, and try something else.

00:21:162 (1) -
00:42:980 (1) -
01:02:616 (1) -

[MegaManEXE's Normal]

SPOILER

General:

AudioLeadIn: 1511
PreviewTime: 2560

Timing:

BPM = 110
Offset = 435

Nazi Mod:
00:12:162 (2,3) - with distance snap off, select both and move down 1 grid ( grid 3 )

[Hard]

SPOILER

General:
AudioLeadIn: 1511
PreviewTime: 2560

Timing:

BPM = 110
Offset = 435

Combo Mod:
00:08:753 (5) - new combo Maybe
00:32:071 (7) - New combo maybe? :3
00:40:525 (3) - ^ (both have clearly a changed pitched, and they fit IMO)
00:52:116 (3) - ^ ( easier to read the map then )
00:56:480 (5) - New combo
01:01:253 (6) - ^

[Insane]

SPOILER

General:

AudioLeadIn: 1511
PreviewTime: 2560

Timing:

BPM = 110
Offset = 435

Combo Mod:
00:04:798 (8) - New combo
00:09:162 (8) - ^
00:13:525 (8) - ^
00:32:071 (6) - ^
00:45:844 (5) - ^

[General Thoughts]

Nice, I really like this beatmap set, it done quite well, however, I do feel the sliders in easy/hard/insane can get a little more love. Insane needs it the most, near the end, no offense, but those just look horrid.

also, here is the re-sized version of the background ( 800x600 ).

SPOILER

Nazi Mod:
00:12:162 (2,3) - with distance snap off, select both and move down 1 grid ( grid 3 )

Shulin wrote:

Hard:

00:12:071 (2,3) - 1/3 here is really hard to detect when playing, maybe use a slider? (Could use 1/2 still hits beats but not the synth) Deleted 2 notes and put a small slider in 1/3. I tried playing and it was easier to detect
00:13:344 (5) - ^ maybe extend the last slider to hit the 1/3? (or 1/2?) O-o I think it's fine where it is.
00:24:071 (3,4,5) - Recommend a returning slider here. Actually you could use 1/2 if you wanted.Still in 1/3 timing, but i deleted hitcircles and made into 1 repeating slider.

I guess you could use 1/2 for the other 1/3 parts but the ones above are the hardest one's to detect in game imo.

Insane:

00:23:616 (5) - Move left 1 square just for neatness.Done
00:23:889 (6) - ^Done
00:24:071 (7,8) - This 1/3 part is really hard to catch, maybe use 1/2? Or perhaps use a slider?It was originally in 1/2 anyway
00:40:525 (1,2,3) - Jump feels a little weird here.I thought it played pretty fun.. *grumble* Adujusted it only slightly
00:42:298 (7,8) - ^Jump distance is smaller
00:45:844 (1,2,3) - Might be better as a stack the 00:45:844 (1,2,3,4) - is really hard to make.Stacked
00:47:480 (6) - Move to red tick at 00:47:616 imo, adjust spacing if you take this suggestion.I like the way it is better. Sounds more like a finish.
00:50:207 (5,6,7,8) - The spacing feels a little messy here and the jump is a little hard to read, maybe make a diamond shape or something?Fixed into a diamond shape
00:53:480 (3) - Should really be 1/3 if following how you mapped this previously.Changed how I mapped previously, so it remains the same.
00:53:616 (4) - ^^
00:53:889 (1) - ^ End of slider.^
00:54:707 (2) - ^^
00:57:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This bit really is mean, those back and forth jumpy streams...hehehe >:3 This'll stay unless someone else agrees it should change.

The other difficulties are looking good

Sorry I can't pubble this yet, some of the snaps in Insane are different from earlier in the map. Also imo some of the 1/3 doesn't play that well (even though it's correct) you could always map those parts in 1/2 if you wanted to or make them easier with sliders. That's all for now, feel free to ask me to recheck again ^_^

• • 00:04:525 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:45:980 (x) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[MegaManEXE's Normal]

• • 00:04:525 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:45:980 (x) - ^

DiamondCrash wrote:

Sorry, forgot the star.

YGOkid8 wrote:

DiamondCrash wrote:

Sorry, forgot the star.

next time, instead of making another post to star, just edit your post and star it like that

babble wrote:

O-o where did you come from?

1. Timing looks good
2. Your comboburst is a *little* too wide. the max width for combobursts is 388, while yours is 399. its only minor, but its still unrankable apparently ._.
3. Theres about 25% of the MP3 thats unused. Perhaps you could crop it off to save space?

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

1. Timing looks good
2. Your comboburst is a *little* too wide. the max width for combobursts is 388, while yours is 399. its only minor, but its still unrankable apparently ._.
3. Theres about 25% of the MP3 thats unused. Perhaps you could crop it off to save space?

[EASY]

Its all good

[MEGAMANEXE'S NORMAL]

Nice

[HARD]

Good good

[INSANE]

I've never been too keen on slow sliders with wide spacing, meh. Its still a nice map though

Very nice. Just fix the combobursts (and perhaps crop the MP3) and I'll protobubble

Starred

Real1 wrote:

Hi there!
I will not pop your bubble, but I will point some things out.

[Easy]
Lower the slidertick. Why, you may ask? Because, higher slider tick on an Easy with many sliders means that a TRUE noob will fail LOTS on this map, as missing many sliderticks decreases your HP significantly.

[MegaManEXE Normal Normal]
Is alright.

[Hard]
00:35:207 - Add a note on this blue tick to follow the music. Sounds much better!

[Insane]
Is fine!





Starred~

Shinxyn wrote:

~~
Old map, I went light on the nazi... >.<;

Easy-
Fine

Megaman's
Okay... some parts are iffy, but okay

Hard-
... huh, why is tick rate higher than easier diffs... usually other way around, oh well
00:06:980 (1) - whistle on slider with no whistle on slider ends sound weird
>.<
Whistle

Insane-
Why is Insane louder?
Didn't notice, fixed
00:47:480 (6) - ehh, might as well stack this properly
Fixed
00:59:753 (8) - whistle on slider with no whistles on ends sound weird!
Fixed!
@.@ the streams could be arranged prettier~!
Agreed. Fixed a couple

Hmm... Yea... just "fix" those and I'll bubble, old map needs help

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

ToS :3

[Insane]:
00:24:162 (8) - Stack under (5)?
Done
00:24:434 (9) - Shorten slider by 1/4? You might have to make the loop a bit smaller to compensate though.
Done
00:54:707 (2) - Why not make this 1/6 as the other moment back at 00:12:071 (3) - ? o:
Done
The offset feels a little early. I'm not very good at offsets and the like, but perhaps +16 on all offsets? That'll make your first offset on 451. Please test that and tell me what you think! Set to 451, I think it sounds much better

I don't have any problems other than that. My personal angst though is how slow the slider speed is on [Hard]. The spacing asks for some quick action, but the slider speed doesn't feel like it's fulfilling that; so things kind of get weird...It's not a problem the moment I get used to the slider speed though Changed velocity to 2.0

pew~

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

You broke two rules of my mod queue xD
One: I will mod maps under 15 SP.
Two: No bubbled maps.

You don't need me =P
Get more BATs~

Frill wrote:

[Easy]

00:42:996 (3) - add a finish in end?

[MegaManEXE's Normal]

00:44:087 - add kiai time this star.

[Hard]

good

[Insane]

00:44:087 (1) - add finish remove whistle?

+Star