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Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu, Mankai Watashi iro! (TV Size)
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Topic Starter
thanks for star 谢谢你喜欢我的map 
•Overall•
Resnap All Notes on all diffs.
•TerisKey's insane•
00:31:277 (2) - 2 grids down? (lv3)
00:34:052 (5) - 1 grid left?
00:34:745 (7) - 2 grids right?
01:00:930 (9) - New combo and 1 grid up and 2 right?
01:12:029 (1) - Eeh? Better if you switch it with some notes and sliders.
•Hard•
00:16:363 (3) - Add a clap on the end of this slider.
00:16:884 (4) - Add a clap.
00:22:259 (4,5) - ^
00:45:670 (1) - 4 grids left?
00:54:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make those this way? ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11763
00:57:808 (1,2) - Pleace these in the grid-centre?
01:03:878 (?) - Add a circle with clap?
01:04:052 (?) - ^
•Normal•
00:08:907 (5) - New combo.
00:21:394 (5) - Prolong this slider to the following red tick?
00:24:515 (1) - This following note after the spinner is too far from the centre for being a normal diff.
00:41:162 (1,2) - 1 grid up?
00:45:670 (1,2) - A normal diff with jumps? Blergh.
01:19:139 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing.
•Easy•
I think that in the final part of this diff there are many jumps that can be avoided, especially for the easy diffs.
00:08:907 (4) - New combo.
00:11:682 (4) - ^
00:14:456 (4) - ^
00:22:607 (1) - I think this spinner is too quick for a Easy diff. Prolong it to [00:24:167]?
00:24:514 (1) - If you follow ↑ passage I think you should move this slider closer to the grid-centre.
00:24:514 (Timing Section) - Why this diff, on the contrary of the other ones, has this timing section with Normal sound? I think it should be Soft like the other diffs.
00:49:486 (5) - New combo
00:51:913 (1) - ^
01:01:624 (3) - ^
01:04:399 (3) - ^
01:07:173 (3) - ^
01:09:948 (3) - ^
01:11:162 (2) - 2 grids up?
01:12:722 (3) - New combo.
01:13:936 (4) - 2 grids up?
01:20:005 (3) - Prolong this slider to the following white tick.
01:21:046 (4) - Move this slider on the previous white tick.
Cool map~
Pretty song~
Star~
Resnap All Notes on all diffs.
•TerisKey's insane•
00:31:277 (2) - 2 grids down? (lv3)
00:34:052 (5) - 1 grid left?
00:34:745 (7) - 2 grids right?
01:00:930 (9) - New combo and 1 grid up and 2 right?
01:12:029 (1) - Eeh? Better if you switch it with some notes and sliders.
•Hard•
00:16:363 (3) - Add a clap on the end of this slider.
00:16:884 (4) - Add a clap.
00:22:259 (4,5) - ^
00:45:670 (1) - 4 grids left?
00:54:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make those this way? ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11763
00:57:808 (1,2) - Pleace these in the grid-centre?
01:03:878 (?) - Add a circle with clap?
01:04:052 (?) - ^
•Normal•
00:08:907 (5) - New combo.
00:21:394 (5) - Prolong this slider to the following red tick?
00:24:515 (1) - This following note after the spinner is too far from the centre for being a normal diff.
00:41:162 (1,2) - 1 grid up?
00:45:670 (1,2) - A normal diff with jumps? Blergh.
01:19:139 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing.
•Easy•
I think that in the final part of this diff there are many jumps that can be avoided, especially for the easy diffs.
00:08:907 (4) - New combo.
00:11:682 (4) - ^
00:14:456 (4) - ^
00:22:607 (1) - I think this spinner is too quick for a Easy diff. Prolong it to [00:24:167]?
00:24:514 (1) - If you follow ↑ passage I think you should move this slider closer to the grid-centre.
00:24:514 (Timing Section) - Why this diff, on the contrary of the other ones, has this timing section with Normal sound? I think it should be Soft like the other diffs.
00:49:486 (5) - New combo
00:51:913 (1) - ^
01:01:624 (3) - ^
01:04:399 (3) - ^
01:07:173 (3) - ^
01:09:948 (3) - ^
01:11:162 (2) - 2 grids up?
01:12:722 (3) - New combo.
01:13:936 (4) - 2 grids up?
01:20:005 (3) - Prolong this slider to the following white tick.
01:21:046 (4) - Move this slider on the previous white tick.
Cool map~
Pretty song~
Star~
Topic Starter
thanks for mod~
观光团特地对你实行惨无人道的围观
星~
星~
[General]
- Add tags [Hayate no Gotoku] [Anime]
[Easy]
00:29:023 (2) - remove whistle
[Normal]
Good.
[Hard]
01:19:138 (5) - add finish end (01:19:485 - )
01:20:699 (2) - add whistle
[TerisKey's insane]
01:19:485 (3) - add fnish
Fun map~
+Star
- Add tags [Hayate no Gotoku] [Anime]
[Easy]
00:29:023 (2) - remove whistle
[Normal]
Good.
[Hard]
01:19:138 (5) - add finish end (01:19:485 - )
01:20:699 (2) - add whistle
[TerisKey's insane]
01:19:485 (3) - add fnish
Fun map~
+Star
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ~☆
Nice job, love this song
Wish I had gotten around to finishing my version now D:
Nice job, love this song
Wish I had gotten around to finishing my version now D:
Normal:
00:10:294 (3,1,2) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11958
00:12:375 (3,4) - Spacing.
Hmm.. actually you should shorten the spacing from 00:10:294 (3) to 00:15:844 (5) - , it is a bit far from behind.
And..some sort of complain about that your map doesn't have custom comboburst :/
00:10:294 (3,1,2) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11958
00:12:375 (3,4) - Spacing.
Hmm.. actually you should shorten the spacing from 00:10:294 (3) to 00:15:844 (5) - , it is a bit far from behind.
And..some sort of complain about that your map doesn't have custom comboburst :/
Topic Starter
谢谢 comboburst done.
<Easy>
00:24:861 (1,2,1,2) - they don`t sound really sweet for my ears i sugeest you can use pattern like the picyures
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11984 yours
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11985 example one
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11986 example two
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - claps don`t sound really good here
00:46:711 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use 50~60% volume for this part
00:54:688 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest use normal hitsounds with 65% -->75% -->80%
00:58:849 (1) - making it end on white tick sounds better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11987
01:01:624 (1) - ^
01:09:948 (1) - ^
01:12:722 (1) - ^
<Normal>
01:22:433 (1) - end on 01:23:64
<Hard>
00:29:370 (5) - remove this clap
About Normal and Hard`s Hitsounds
If you listen to the music carefully,you can find that BGM claps are on 2 4 6 8..... divisors
Like the picture
Usually. we add claps on those beats
In your case, you pick soft-whistle as clap in Normal and hard
Try to add soft-whistles on 2 4 6.... beats
<Insane>
01:18:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe you can make this oart louder XD
the mapset is getting bette, good job
00:24:861 (1,2,1,2) - they don`t sound really sweet for my ears i sugeest you can use pattern like the picyures
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11984 yours
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11985 example one
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11986 example two
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - claps don`t sound really good here
00:46:711 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use 50~60% volume for this part
00:54:688 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest use normal hitsounds with 65% -->75% -->80%
00:58:849 (1) - making it end on white tick sounds better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11987
01:01:624 (1) - ^
01:09:948 (1) - ^
01:12:722 (1) - ^
<Normal>
01:22:433 (1) - end on 01:23:64
<Hard>
00:29:370 (5) - remove this clap
About Normal and Hard`s Hitsounds
If you listen to the music carefully,you can find that BGM claps are on 2 4 6 8..... divisors
Like the picture
Usually. we add claps on those beats
In your case, you pick soft-whistle as clap in Normal and hard
Try to add soft-whistles on 2 4 6.... beats
<Insane>
01:18:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe you can make this oart louder XD
the mapset is getting bette, good job
Topic Starter
done. 谢谢老师的mod
<Easy>
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - 這幾個clap不打算移掉嗎??
<Normal>
00:38:388 (1) - 補上whistle
hard跟normal的音量可以調整成一樣, 80%~85%滿理想的 100%在前半段有點太大聲
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - 這幾個clap不打算移掉嗎??
<Normal>
00:38:388 (1) - 補上whistle
hard跟normal的音量可以調整成一樣, 80%~85%滿理想的 100%在前半段有點太大聲
Topic Starter
再次感谢
[Easy]
Remove all unused green lines sections.
00:27:636 (5) - New combo.
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - Like Alace said, this claps sounds weird. Remove them.
01:19:138 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Normal]
00:33:532 (5) - New combo.
00:49:485 (8) - ^
01:10:641 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:139 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:18:618 (5) - New combo.
00:37:867 (7) - Place it correctly under 00:37:347 (6).
01:19:138 (5) - Why starting from here the volume is so low? Increase it a bit.
[TerisKey's insane]
Capitalize "insane" to "Insane".
00:17:404 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:930 (9) - New combo due to jump.
01:20:005 (1) - Same as Hard. Volume is too low, increase it a bit.
Not bad for a first map.
Remove all unused green lines sections.
00:27:636 (5) - New combo.
00:38:387 (1,2,3) - Like Alace said, this claps sounds weird. Remove them.
01:19:138 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Normal]
00:33:532 (5) - New combo.
00:49:485 (8) - ^
01:10:641 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:139 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:18:618 (5) - New combo.
00:37:867 (7) - Place it correctly under 00:37:347 (6).
01:19:138 (5) - Why starting from here the volume is so low? Increase it a bit.
[TerisKey's insane]
Capitalize "insane" to "Insane".
00:17:404 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:930 (9) - New combo due to jump.
01:20:005 (1) - Same as Hard. Volume is too low, increase it a bit.
Not bad for a first map.
Topic Starter
thanks done.
Looks better now ^_^
Bubbled~
Bubbled~
Topic Starter
thanks again ><
P.S: This diff is not for submit so everybody you can ignore this diff except Suzuka Asahina~ lol
SPOILER
唔喔 泡泡了呀，那看來這個參考難度也可以丟了XD (喂
嘛 上次你跟我說的做好了，sa你可以看看哪個pattern你覺得不錯的就直接用在你map上就好了，
記住喔，不要上傳這個難度，真的不要給我上傳這個難度XDDDD
這只是給你參考的，不會可惜，真的不會可惜(喂)，覺得哪裡好真的直接copy到你的map裡就好了XD
不過要注意的是你這map已經泡泡了，如果上傳的話泡泡會破掉喔，所以如果你真的找到pattern想改要三思lol
ATTACH[Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu, Mankai Watashi iro! (TV Size) (Suzuka Asahina) [Ver.Reference].osu]
嘛 上次你跟我說的做好了，sa你可以看看哪個pattern你覺得不錯的就直接用在你map上就好了，
記住喔，不要上傳這個難度，真的不要給我上傳這個難度XDDDD
這只是給你參考的，不會可惜，真的不會可惜(喂)，覺得哪裡好真的直接copy到你的map裡就好了XD
不過要注意的是你這map已經泡泡了，如果上傳的話泡泡會破掉喔，所以如果你真的找到pattern想改要三思lol
ATTACH[Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu, Mankai Watashi iro! (TV Size) (Suzuka Asahina) [Ver.Reference].osu]
Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu, Mankai Watashi iro! (TV Size) (Suzuka Asahina) [Ver.Reference].osu
泡泡了麽 那算了...
Ranked.
Topic Starter
thanks all
WoW 明天（今天）的考试要好好加油哦 :3