1. Revelation (5.47 stars, 1924 notes)

appleeaterx wrote:

metadata: p/3827499
star for you

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Here's something
[General]
00:24:210 (3) - place this at x:64 y:144 no change
00:24:381 (4) - place this at x:152 y:208, these two will be better there no change
00:26:267 (1) - flip it up no change
04:27:638 (1) - maybe place it to the left of [*]04:27:295 no change
05:02:095 - this should have 1 circle or place the slider farther then placed the slider further away
05:21:295 (2) - wrong DS here no change
06:13:581 (2,3,4) - place the slider down toward the (5) no change
06:37:238 (3) - place this at x:416 y:152 ( on to the left of (4) ) no change
06:56:610 (6) - place this under (7,8) at x:408 y:344 yeah that's better
That's all I can do ( I think ) and please award me a Kudosu if this useful
Anyway, good luck with approved this map :3

1. add collab / collaboration in tags for obvious reasons o3o

1. 00:24:210 (3,4) - the flow is a bit weird here, Ctrl+G them?
2. 00:27:810 (2,3) - same?
3. 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken.
4. 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
5. 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself.
6. 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o
7. 04:21:123 (2) - same as 01:15:637 (1) - ;w;
8. 04:24:895 (6) - uh since this part I see another NC consistency, then here 04:46:838 (1) - you're back to the current consistency while the music doesn't change at all, not a big problem but better fix this because suddenly I see a big number of combos and I feel like the consistency is broken and it's really noticeable imo =w=
9. 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - wow, this is kinda sudden and confusing, firstly I thought they had another rhythm o.o you always used more or less the same spacing when you map this rhythm, I suggest to change this because it could be a big problem for players even for pro ones
10. 06:56:781 (1,5) - swap NC

Inyuschan wrote:

[General]

1. add collab / collaboration in tags for obvious reasons o3o okay

[Revelation]

1. 00:24:210 (3,4) - the flow is a bit weird here, Ctrl+G them? nah i think its fine
2. 00:27:810 (2,3) - same?
3. 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken.
4. 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
5. 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself.
6. 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o
7. 04:21:123 (2) - same as 01:15:637 (1) - ;w; yup fixed
8. 04:24:895 (6) - uh since this part I see another NC consistency, then here 04:46:838 (1) - you're back to the current consistency while the music doesn't change at all, not a big problem but better fix this because suddenly I see a big number of combos and I feel like the consistency is broken and it's really noticeable imo =w= Yeah i fixed the ncing there
9. 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - wow, this is kinda sudden and confusing, firstly I thought they had another rhythm o.o you always used more or less the same spacing when you map this rhythm, I suggest to change this because it could be a big problem for players even for pro ones Yeah illl reduce the spacing a bit
10. 06:56:781 (1,5) - swap NC

yup

Awesome map o3o

Inyuschan wrote:

[Revelation]

1. 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken. - Not sure what you mean, Slider looks fine to me
2. 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
3. 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself. - Fixed
4. 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o - Added (pls don't hurt me hula)

Awesome map o3o

1. As I've said the OD seems a bit excessive for this kind of map. Maybe OD8.5?
2. 03:39:295 (1) - This NC is unnecessary o3o
3. 04:12:552 (1) - Missing whistle?
4. 04:18:038 (1) - Same.
5. 06:34:838 (1,2,3,4,1) - I thought you were going to fix this...

Secretpipe wrote:

Wheeeee~

EDIT : 2manyqualifiedmapsfortoday c:

come back tomorrow!

Combo2 : 183,70,123
Combo3 : 213,70,73

Secretpipe wrote:

Wheeeee~

• 
  Examples of weird things.

1. 00:22:496 (3,4,5,6,7) - First, could you explain me why there is a different spacing here ? it looks more clunky than intentional. And also, the flow could be improved here, AR9.3 helps a lot the player to play this pattern naturally. And same for 00:23:182 (8) -
2. 00:32:610 (5,6) - I don't really get your logic, sometimes there is a higher spacing, and sometimes there is a smaller. I mean, compared to the previous note of each streams. And that could be not comfortable to play for a player, and thanks to the OD9, when playing, you see that you're hitting the objects too early because the player gets 100.
3. 00:39:467 (6,7,8) - Here too, this is really unfortable to play for a player, he is just helped with AR9.3. There is a different spacing, and the angle between these circles is near to 180*, everything that makes a pattern not comfortable to play.
4. 05:47:524 (2,3) - Here the flow could be improved, the circle (3) doesn't allow players to play the previous slider properly, and they could get a 100 on this slider, Just see (3) is at the same place as (8) :
   
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