Nishizumi wrote:

WEW, AesaJentopherSpodermunPartOfYou Ryou-nyan ngemod sekarang !!1!!11!

Jona wrote:

Mod as requested through PM

This mapset is really good, so there is very little to point out. This will only be personal suggestions, so if you want to, deny everything.

[Kantan]

1. 00:46:780 - k ok

[Futsuu]

1. Didn't find anything particularywrong here, except the finishers at the end, such as these 00:48:622 . I don't see a reason to add finishers there, but ofc, that's up to you. me follow song..

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:13:104 - d
2. 00:15:997 - ^
3. 00:18:890 - ^
4. 00:21:783 - ^
5. 00:25:728 - d
6. 00:27:044 - ^
7. 00:28:360 - ^ fix all about d
8. 00:44:675 and 00:45:991 - Is it allowed to have these so close to other patterns in a muzu? I'm not sure myself, pointing it out just in case. hmmm thinking

[Oni]

1. 00:35:070 - k
2. 00:41:386 - k
3. 00:46:780 - k ok

Pretty useless mod, sorry about that. But anyways, GL

Meow2 wrote:

Hi there
You requested mod to me
Here we go

Kantan

00:14:682 (6) - How about move this note 1/1 back?
00:17:575 (8) - ^
00:20:468 (10) - ^
00:23:361 (12) - ^
reject all :C

Futsuu

00:12:051 (1) - Add finish
00:13:104 (4) - Change to d?
00:15:997 (11) - ^
00:18:890 (18) - ^
00:21:783 (25) - ^
00:45:596 - Add note
00:47:175 - Add note
00:48:359 (80) - Change to k
00:50:201 (86) - ^
00:52:043 (92) - ^
00:53:885 (98) - ^
i dont know to reply mod, but in there have well to fix my diff

Muzukashii

00:29:807 - Add Note
00:31:386 - ^
00:32:965 - ^
00:33:623 - ^
00:34:017 - Add note and change the next note to k no
00:34:412 - ^
00:36:123 - Add note
00:37:701 - ^
00:39:280 - ^
00:39:938 - ^
00:40:333 - Add note and change the next note to k no too
00:40:728 - ^
00:42:438 - Add note

Oni

00:33:557 - Add note?
00:33:951 - ^
00:34:346 - ^
00:34:741 - ^
00:39:873 - ^
00:40:267 - ^
00:40:662 - ^
00:41:057 - ^
00:43:951 - ^
no.. hmm thinking bcuz i dont want dis Oni get hard to play :C except i have Inner oni~

That's all.
Sorry if the mod doesn't help you at all
Good luck for rank!

jossieP wrote:

#TimingHelp >L_< wahh

Please use 114 as BPM, doubling the BPM and using half SV is just.... OL_O ohh...

Timelines

Code

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13104,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
15998,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
18892,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
21786,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
24680,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
25995,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
27310,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
28625,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
47572,-100,3,1,0,70,0,1
54938,526.315789473684,6,1,0,70,1,0

You can use the rankable 1,4 SV now, about the metronomer on second kiai I don't think is a big deal, you can now do a nice x1.5 speed up here :^) okay i try it

1. I think this song is 228bpm

1. You can use 1/2 because there are 5/8 and 6/8.
2. 00:14:682 (6) move to 00:14:419.
3. 00:17:576 (8,10,12) These notes should be located on the 1/2 tick before. ^
4. 00:29:677 (17,19,21) ^
5. 00:35:993 (24,26,28) ^
6. 00:42:309 (31,33) ^
7. 00:47:572 please remap on this kiai time. 1/1s are weird.

1. 00:15:472 (9,10) delete these for break.
2. 00:18:366 -, 00:21:260 -, 00:24:154 ^
3. 00:31:519 -, 00:37:835 -, Delete these. ^
4. 00:47:572 From here, 3/4+1/2 pattern are too hard. make more breaks and change to easier pattern.

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. via PM
[ General]

1. I think this song is 228bpm

[ Kantan]

1. You can use 1/2 because there are 5/8 and 6/8.
2. 00:14:682 (6) move to 00:14:419.[/b]ok[/b]
3. 00:17:576 (8,10,12) These notes should be located on the 1/2 tick before. ^
4. 00:29:677 (17,19,21) ^
5. 00:35:993 (24,26,28) ^
6. 00:42:309 (31,33) ^
7. 00:47:572 please remap on this kiai time. 1/1s are weird.
   fix all, this my fault bcuz snap in 1/1

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:15:472 (9,10) delete these for break.
2. 00:18:366 -, 00:21:260 -, 00:24:154 ^
3. 00:31:519 -, 00:37:835 -, Delete these. ^
4. 00:47:572 From here, 3/4+1/2 pattern are too hard. make more breaks and change to easier pattern. ok fix all~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Oni]
00:25:732 (76,77) - matches the song more if these are 'd', hopefully not too hard okay i try this, in another change like thiz? XD ok~

[Muzukashii]
Nice job here! hahaha thx XD

[Futsuu]
Feels hard because of offbeat rhythms. But I trust tasuke's notions. okay~

[Kantan]
This is pretty confusing for new players lol XD

00:30:993 (19) - and 00:37:309 (25) - would be nice places to add a break. ok~
00:48:361 (37) - feels really weird maybe delete, so the player understands the rhythm? ok, nice suggestion sir~

Nice short set. hope ranked XD but i confused in timing hue hhhh XD

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13104,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
15998,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
18892,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
21786,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
24680,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
25995,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
27310,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
28625,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,0
47572,-100,3,1,0,70,0,1
48888,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
49414,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
50992,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
51255,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
52570,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
53096,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
54411,526.315789473684,3,1,0,70,1,1
54938,526.315789473684,6,1,0,70,1,0

Senritsu wrote:

no kd

Metadata
Title : 戦慄の鼓動
Romanized : Horrible Heartbeat
Artist : 並木 学
Romanized : Manabu Namiki
Source : ドラキュラ伝説 ReBirth
Tags : Castlevania The Adventure ReBirth CONTRA stage 5 original soundtrak ost short version

Hilank.jepege

im not an expert, cuma nambah"in redline di belakang biar pas sama lagunya

xRizx wrote:

hi mas Aji XD mo nyoba mod nih , walau ga bisa ngemap haha :3 wat de O_O

Kantan

00:14:551 (6) - ini pindah ke 00:14:682 (6) - nice~ widih
yang lain juga 8,10,12. btw jadi aneh yang sekarang itu.. aku ga pas mainnya ;w; hahaha XD

Futsuu

ini dah bagus bagiku Ji XD makasih mbak e

Muzukashii

._. hmm dah bagus, aku bisa kok maininnya `w`

Oni

00:24:811 (69) - hapus biar mirip sama lanjutannya XD oh iya, wew combo nomornya enam sembliman kwkwk
00:25:995 (76) - ini ganti biru, bagus lho (`-`) selanjutnya juga (y)
00:28:625 (92,93) - ganti biru merah, nah kren hahaha XD

dah.. mod pertamaku ini lho XD G'Luck Sur~

Blanc Kisaragi wrote:

Random Mod `L_`


[Kantan]
00:43:624 (31) - Remove this for consistency. okay~
00:46:782 (34) - This can be removed ok
00:47:835 - 00:49:151 - You can add notes on this part yeah add 1 don

[Futsuu]
Seems fine. woh gud

[Muzukashii]
00:13:104 (7) - Change to k?
00:15:998 (17) - Same as above
00:18:892 (27) - Same as above
00:21:786 (37) - Same as above
okay, all accept for while, this nice too for different hitsound from dat 3plet and consistency

[Oni]
00:13:104 (8) - Change to d? wut? huhuhuhuu is not fit for me~ XD keep k, u know?

Nice set, hope it get ranked yeah i try it, so Timing is maybe a problem..

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. Looks fine *-*/

1. Perfect Diff

1. 00:06:788 (2) - Why D? change to k for consistency with 00:09:946 (2) - 00:03:630 (2) - is not necessary to keep a general pattern with Kantan here.
2. 00:12:841 (3) - delete, totally unnecessary to add more emphasis on 00:13:104 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:50:992 (77) - remove this note, to keep consistency 00:50:729 (76) - with 00:54:411 (86) -
   Great diff too

1. 00:06:788 (2) - same as Futsuu, change to k
2. from 00:23:891 - to 00:28:625 - you don't have breaks and I hear that you can't make long patterns on Muzu, so you should found another pattern here. One option can be moving 00:25:337 (50) - to 00:24:811 - and deleting 00:25:732 (52) -, same here 00:25:995 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - and here 00:27:310 (59,60,61,62,63,64) -

1. 00:06:788 (4) - same as Futsuu and Muzu
2. 00:24:286 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - after testing, It feels so weird, Try this 00:24:549 (67) - move to 00:24:811 - and delete 00:25:864 (75) - and if you decide to follow my advice keep the same pattern as 00:25:995 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - and 00:27:310 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) -
3. 00:34:809 (127) - delete, is too long pattern and to add more emphasis at 00:34:940 (128,129) -
4. 00:41:125 (163) - same as above

-Sh1n1- wrote:

[About]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

[General]

1. Looks fine *-*/ XD

[Kantan]

1. Perfect Diff :D

[Futsuu]

1. 00:06:788 (2) - Why D? change to k for consistency with 00:09:946 (2) - 00:03:630 (2) - is not necessary to keep a general pattern with Kantan here.
2. 00:12:841 (3) - delete, totally unnecessary to add more emphasis on 00:13:104 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:50:992 (77) - remove this note, to keep consistency 00:50:729 (76) - with 00:54:411 (86) -
   Great diff too XD
   accept all, thx this nice XD

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:788 (2) - same as Futsuu, change to k
2. from 00:23:891 - to 00:28:625 - you don't have breaks and I hear that you can't make long patterns on Muzu, so you should found another pattern here. One option can be moving 00:25:337 (50) - to 00:24:811 - and deleting 00:25:732 (52) -, same here 00:25:995 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - and here 00:27:310 (59,60,61,62,63,64) -
   accept all, maybe wait for other modder see this XD

[Oni]

1. 00:06:788 (4) - same as Futsuu and Muzu hmm can i keep? is nice XD for same in kantan.. yeah D is for low pitch XD
2. 00:24:286 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - after testing, It feels so weird, Try this 00:24:549 (67) - move to 00:24:811 - and delete 00:25:864 (75) - and if you decide to follow my advice keep the same pattern as 00:25:995 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - and 00:27:310 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) -
3. 00:34:809 (127) - delete, is too long pattern and to add more emphasis at 00:34:940 (128,129) -
4. 00:41:125 (163) - same as above

I did this mod yesterday but I have a bad network, so maybe you fix my advices on blanc kisaragi's mod, if this is the case you can ignore my mod but btw nice map GL

Hinsvar wrote:

Helped with metronome resets.

tap qiq

12:05 Hinsvar: 00:44:412 - Tambah satu uninherited timing point buat metronome reset.
12:05 Surono: bentar
12:05 Hinsvar: 00:43:623 - hapus
12:06 Surono: oke
12:06 Hinsvar: eh sori
12:06 Hinsvar: Yang 44:412 juga gak usah.
12:06 Surono: ....
12:07 Surono: apa, kwkwwk
12:07 Hinsvar: Otomatis udah ganti birama juga kalau 43:623 ilang.
12:07 Hinsvar: awkawkwakwak
12:07 Surono: XD
12:07 Hinsvar: Lupa.
12:07 Surono: kwkwkwkwkwkw
12:07 Surono: duh makan soto celup sniker
12:07 Surono: *kebalik njir..
12:07 Hinsvar: tai
12:07 Hinsvar: 00:47:572 - Jadiin uninherited, 4/4.
12:07 Hinsvar: 00:48:888 - Hapus.
12:08 Surono: ternyata 572 toh?
12:08 Hinsvar: 00:50:992 - 4/4
12:08 Hinsvar: Iya mz
12:08 Hinsvar: lah bentar gw
12:08 Surono: jelas ga pas..
12:08 Hinsvar: muter sendiri
12:08 Hinsvar: aaaah
12:08 Surono: wew..
12:08 Surono: wihh kwakwa
12:09 Hinsvar: 50:992 hapus, 00:49:414 - 4/4
12:09 Surono: oke
12:09 Hinsvar: Pokoknya di sini 4/4 semua.
12:09 Hinsvar: Ga perlu ada uninherited 1/2 ketukan sebelum uninherited lain lagi.
12:09 Surono: wah jago bener `L_` duh lupa siapa si mz wwwww
12:10 Surono: mz ngepros nich, oke thx
12:10 Hinsvar: y ok mz
12:10 Hinsvar: sep
12:10 Surono: savelog ga?/?
12:10 Surono: mau liat namanya hinsper `L_`
12:10 Hinsvar: segini doang awkakwwkakwa
12:10 Hinsvar: Tapi oke.
12:10 Hinsvar: `L_`

AxelHino wrote:

Hey dem where u post 1669 hue dat nice `L_`

[Oni]
Fun use of the finishers in the beginning hueheheh

00:13:630 (11) - move to 00:13:761 - Kinda feels awkward that a triplet is placed there. Considering the rhythm and pacing of the song, a dk dd feels like it'll contribute nicely to the rhythm. It also matches 00:15:209 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - , rhythm wise nice catch hueheh
00:16:524 (26) - move to 00:16:655 - for the same reason
00:19:418 (41) - move to 00:19:549 - for the same reason
00:22:312 (56) - move to 00:22:443 - for the same reason

nice slow streams in the second kiai wah thx, accept all

[Muzukashii]

i usually object the use of kdd and 5 note clusters in muzukashii, but considering the slow bpm (and how it actually fits to the song), i'll let it slide. i would support fully if it's not for rank wwww wut wut wut wwwwwww

00:50:861 - add kk to make a triplet? might help with the melody. (i don't really know, this map's fine already) yeh this nice~
00:54:543 - same no no wwww dem kk dont like this, except for Oni is gud :3

[Futsuu]

00:12:051 (1) - change to D to match the others? heem ok

kalo ini mah futsuunya mau dibikin 1/2 only susah nge-mapnya tapi dibikin ada 1/4nya bingung juga wwwwww. Nothing too weird here. buset kwkwkwkwk

[Kantan]

considering the super weird rhythm you did all the best you could for this one. nothing odd here haha XD dam son

Man, what a song you got there. this my fav gem in my childhood.. maybe Sekolah dasarS kwkwk *gem nintendo bung, eh dari Wii duh. soundtrak jamn doeloe malah susah ngemepnya *keren nich dibuat Inner *nonstop stream uraah

Meow2 wrote:

Set the preview point to 00:13:104

Maybe it's the right time to find and call BN

Fort wrote:

pusing lu cari BN taiko :V

Arcubin wrote:

[General]

1. remove most finisher at start... (exhausting imo) okay, i try
2. mostly well-made wazahh

[Kantan]

1. 00:14:156 - add don for "spice" y kwkwk
2. 00:17:050 - ^
3. 00:52:570 - ^
4. 00:53:885 (42) - k

boring imo... `L_`

[Futsuu]
remove most 3/4 (diff spike from kantan is real if you do 3/4 here) @_@

1. 00:12:051 (1) - remove finisher ok
2. 00:18:892 (13) - d abeceh

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:00:999 (1) - K
2. 00:03:104 (1) - K
3. 00:05:209 (1) - K
4. 00:24:680 (47,48,49) - unrankable stuff for muzukashi muzukashii only use single color pattern for triplet
5. 00:25:995 (52,53,54) - ^
6. 00:27:310 (57,58,59) - ^
7. 00:48:624 (137) - remove finisher
8. 00:50:466 (144) - ^
9. 00:52:307 (151) - ^
10. 00:54:148 (158) - ^
11. 00:54:543 - add k
    
    accept all except remove finisher ;w;

[Oni]
intro pattern should be the same with muzu

1. 00:12:709 (5) - k ok
2. 00:48:624 (203) - remove finisher
3. 00:50:466 (213) - ^
4. 00:52:307 (224) - ^
5. 00:54:148 (234) - ^
   
   ;w;

[TimingPoints]
473,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
13104,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
14420,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
15999,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
17315,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
18894,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
20209,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
21788,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
23104,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
24683,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
28630,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
47578,263.157894736842,7,1,0,70,1,0
54946,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0

Charles445 wrote:

Avoids rounding error, doubles bpm

[TimingPoints]
473,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
13104,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
14420,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
15999,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
17315,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
18894,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
20209,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
21788,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
23104,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
24683,263.157894736842,5,1,0,70,1,0
28630,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0
47578,263.157894736842,7,1,0,70,1,0
54946,263.157894736842,6,1,0,70,1,0

Jerry wrote:

M4M

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:45:993 (65) - Add a Finish to this note, it's creates a nice Finish rhythm with 00:44:414 (63) -

lol sorry but that's all I could find. Not much of an issue with the mapset .-.
Good luck!

no kudosu please

chaica wrote:

Hi,surono~ from my queue,sorry late;; haha np

[Kantan]

good~ uhu~~

[Futsuu]
00:29:019 - delete? - Add a little of a break?I felt this note is unnecessary. ~_~ dont need.. keep, bcuz this allready have gud break

[Muzukashii]
00:04:157(1,1,1,1) - Ctrl+G? - it is better that you unified dkdk?00:00:473~00:02:578 as of. ehh.. is like in first, this have different in this High pitch 00:00:473 (1) - .. Dkdk Kkdk, Just different in Highpitch~_~
00:10:472(1,1,1) - change dkd? - ^ ~_~ i am not find somethink wrong... same reason ^ *me follow music n this rightly
00:53:885 - add K? - If you fit the big note after. this not High pitch, sry

[Oni]
00:04:157(1,1,1) - change dkd? - same as Muzukashii ^
00:10:472(1,1,1) - same as Muzukashii ^
00:18:498(35,36,37,38) - change kddk? - But what try adding the change because just the same arrangement? ~_~ i dont like varitation.. this already better.. and same sound pitch must same Hitsound..


Sorry for the delay;w; good lack~! Lel, thx for Anlyz and ur Opini