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toara_fict wrote:
1st :3
add tag : cagalin
ps.時間があればもっどします のーくどすでオナシャス :3
because of this, if these notes unity, I really want to select dkkd dkdd or kkkd dkdd.Nwolf wrote:
woof m4m :3 tyty :3
[Kantan]
00:32:572 (39) - Would move this note to 00:32:806 - Because it comes kinda surprising. I understand that you map to the vocals but naaaah it's quite unfair to a beginner, especially since there's only one kind of this
no reason to reject, totally. fixed!
01:05:618 (6) - This drum doesn't really fit, map something here lol
add d_kdk
01:20:618 (6) - ^
add k_kdk
02:35:853 - Missing spinner? Pay attention to next diff mod cause I mention it there too :3
・its maybe only my opinion, but this spinner with 1/4, 1/2, and could be 1/8 late is feeling something like converted map.
so, I don't like to use most case including this.
so, sorry but its okay for this.
beautiful Kantan <3 tyy <3
[Futsuu]
00:12:650 (15) - Think kit fits pitch better as kat prefect, fixed!
00:30:931 (45) - Try a don here. ok.
01:29:290 - Think another note here wouldn't hurt, kiai ends here and the player can rest a bit in the calm part true. and its really good for mapping before.
02:35:618 (1) - Spinner is quite long, maybe reduce it to 02:44:993 - here. I would also recommend to add a note where the spinner currently starts and let the spinner start 02:35:853 - here
reduce spinner.
beautiful Futsuu <3
[Muzukashii]
00:07:728 (14) - Pitch fits better as kat change
00:17:572 (41,42) - omg somebody who uses doublets in a muzukashii correctly *cries of happiness* <3333
00:29:056 (80) - Maybe also move 00:28:939 - here, the rhythm was so great keep it for this last time lol sure.
00:38:431 (111) - Same with this note okay
00:44:056 (128) - And this note to 00:43:939 - fits the vocal better fixed. really good.
01:12:298 - Don here add don.
01:37:728 (21) - If you changed 14 (in intro), change this too changed~
02:22:728 (116,117,118) - Kat triplet? There are so few and it fits here :3 okay.
02:35:618 (1) - Same as Futsuu reduce spinner.
[Oni]
00:41:126 (181) - Think it's nicer without this note ok, remove!
00:02:572 (2) - 01:32:572 (16) - 02:17:572 (182) - Prefer the third one, make them consistent :3
change to dkkd
00:03:665 (8) - 01:33:665 (22) - 02:18:665 (190) - Prefer the second/third one
change to dkdd
There're many high sound here, like this point 02:17:572 (182) - .(changed to dkkd)Nwolf wrote:
01:42:103 (45) - Like it better with kat (also it's not three times dkdd then)
its lower tone than this 01:37:728 (32,33,34,35) - ,want same or more d here.
sorry but no change.
02:22:728 (212,214) - Dons, reasons above
hm, honestly I think you're right, but he's trying best. keep map set at this stage.Nwolf wrote:
02:27:103 (238) - Kat, reasons above
same as 01:42:103 (45) -, for this lower. sorry ;;
02:35:618 (1) - Same as Futsuu
reduce spinner.
Love this diff! ty!><)..
REALLY NICE MAPS YOU'VE MADE MIDSOUL : D If you really are trying to go for rank (and that would be very great), I might recommend to move lin's Oni as seperate download though... mainly because it's too different from the set and... well, not as good. But do what you want lol
Good luck!
arigato~~~~XDDDJUDYDANNY wrote:
くどすた~~
I marked.
そのうち見れたら見ます
Nwolf wrote:
woof m4m :3
[lin's Oni]
00:11:478 (15,16) - Switch those (ctrl+g) for snare rhythm
00:12:650 (21) - Kat, same reason^
00:13:001 (24) - Delete, same reason v and also more emphasis on main beat
00:39:368 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - Nyaaa a stream out of nowhere? Less notes is better here
01:37:142 (497) - This is a calm part... it's supposed to be calm, delete
01:40:540 (4,5,6,7,9,10) - All, delete except
02:35:618 (295) - Big Kat, plays better
Thank you God that has healed all
REALLY NICE MAPS YOU'VE MADE MIDSOUL : D If you really are trying to go for rank (and that would be very great), I might recommend to move lin's Oni as seperate download though... mainly because it's too different from the set and... well, not as good. But do what you want lol
Good luck!
thanks for your mod!! and really sorry for this late..xtrem3x wrote:
Request via M4M
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General
don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K
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Kantan:
00:59:993 - change these spinner to....
00:59:993 - k
01:00:345 - d
01:00:697 - d
01:14:993 - change spinner (again) to ...
01:14:993 - k
01:15:462 - k
01:15:931 - d
01:16:400 - d
01:59:993 - .... same
01:59:993 - d
02:00:462 - k
02:00:931 - d
02:01:400 - k
02:01:868 - D
I think these snap time is not suitable for Kantan, needs more interval. so, I use spinner for..
sorry but no change for now.
but I think get better put notes, specially 01:59:993 - .
02:03:743 - extend to 02:05:618
02:07:493 - Spinner for Slider until 02:09:368
02:11:243 - extend to 02:13:118
and these points for intervals, too.
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Futsuu:
Good.
thanks ;w;
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Muzukashii:
00:39:368 - change to K
no change for this. finisher for vocal? but maybe this break the melody..
01:00:931 - d
01:01:400 - d
sorry, no change. I know these for vocals but its really hard to beat or cause interval issue.
01:04:798 - Delete (?)
this for drums clearly so not delete, but I deleted 01:05:501 - .
01:08:548 - delete
01:10:189 - delete
01:10:306 - delete
for drums, can be able to change the color, not delete.
01:10:540 - k
k... uum, sorry but I can't understand what this meaning for
01:13:939 - delete ^^
01:19:798 - delete ^
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Oni:
00:39:017 - delete (?)
sorry for this crush sound.
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and that's all .-.
aww that was incorrect, thanks ;∀; fixed now~~Xakyrie wrote:
Hi there,
The album title unveil should be in the tags and not the source!
thx for great mod!PatZar wrote:
can you mod my map ? (m4m) | [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3362914#p3362914]Link map~
thanks~[/url]
[General]
please.., put a preview point
01:00:931 - put here , it's will be good imo
owow,, there's no preview point.. thanks for good preview 'w' fixed
[Oni]
sv1.4 -> 1.6 please it's better I think 1.4 is better for this. not so feeling speedy, better on this BPM.and just I hate high SV
00:25:540 (105,106) - ctrl+ g | it's better imo 106 for snare, it cannot change
00:28:939 (122,124) - ctrl+ g | it's better okay, change dd kk to dk kd
00:39:368 (173) - the cymbal voice | use finish fixed.
01:00:931 (4) - kat lower vocal than 01:01:400 (5) - , d k for expressive sounds pitch.
01:15:579 (83) - Finish for comfortable playing, please don't
01:15:814 (84,85) - ctrl + g from sounds pitch. or concidered, delete that 84(d).
01:30:462 (12,15) - ctrl+ g like ^3, sorry
02:22:728 (212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - be consistent here its enough reasonable for flute+drum from 02:16:868 (179) - ~, and new sounds for 02:23:431 (218) - , so no change.
[Muzukashii]
00:07:845 - don here no, thanks. for the beginning part, express as much as possible silence.
00:12:064 (26) - kat here okay, change d to k.
00:42:181 (122) - kat cuz vocal v
01:02:572 (6,7,8) - wat is this triplets | it's doesn't fit with song . better (7) delete for some bright sounds and pattern, I believe its work enough to good playing.
at first kiai, >> much triplets , please fix them
You can use triplets , but don't overuse
sorry but its really slow, You cannot be compared with high BPM knowledge.
because of the united feeling, mapping refreshed from
00:39:368 (113) - to 00:44:759 (131) - .
[Futsuu]
00:04:915 - http://puu.sh/bqpsL/51328c9356.png
00:06:087 - kat
these point focused for lower sounds.
01:09:134 - delete | better for me imo
01:10:072 (16) - kat
changed 01:08:431 (13,14,15,16) - k ddd >> kkk d. fit it for drums.
[Kantan]
00:54:368 (16) - k this d for kick and "pattern reset" for hard rhythm, its important for me.
good luck~!
なんというか・・ただでさえこの異常な返信の遅れ具合だというのに、低難易度が本当に区間ごとに適当なところがあってガバガバで‥JUDYDANNY wrote:
:P
MidSoulには一部既に言ってる部分もありますがここでまとめてもう一度書いときます。[General]前までのmodにあった箇所も含め、すべて修正しました。ありがとうございます。
- Uncheck the widescreen support(that is for SB options). This beatmap has not SB.
http://puu.sh/728Ot.png- プレビューポイントが設定されてないです。 01:00:902 – あたりにどうかな?
- http://puu.sh/bqHeq/33278ae946.png このmapに必要なさそうなので全部チェックは外しませんか?
[Kantan]
- 全体的に平坦なのでもう少し削れそうなとこ削ってみてはどうですか?
例:
00:17:806 - , 00:20:150 - , 00:21:556 (1,2) - ,
00:01:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –とそれ以降の00:09:368 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) –
を比べると 00:17:806 – からは00:09:368 – と同密度よりは減らした方が個人的に好きです.
全体を見て区間的なノーツ配分を考えることにしました。
確かに低BPMのわりに詰まっている点が気になったので上記の4点、その他大きく序盤に変更箇所があります。
箇所が多いため羅列しませんが、基本的にはノーツの削除十数か所です。非常に参考になりました。ありがとうございます。- 00:49:212 (7) – delete? fixed!
- 00:53:431 (14) – これを消去、または1/2 左にmove? 1/2<moved.
- 00:57:181 (19,20) - >> 19を1/2左に、 20を消去? 00:51:322 (11) –と同じなような.. バックストリングスが後半の曲の流れに向いて長く続いているメロディを形成しているので、現状で問題ないかと思います。00:51:322 () - ではやはり軽いリズム感よりもその場にある音の密集度が大きかったですね。できれば避けたいです。
- 01:37:962 (4) – delete? 休憩させるときはしっかりさせていいと思います. ok! fixed. こちらの方が前述の密度感にも適しますね。
- 02:14:993 (1) – 長めなので1/2 短くしてみては? Auto的にはこっちの方が聞こえもよさげです. fixed.
- 02:31:400 (22) – add don? added.
最終的な調整時に気になったためさらに休憩箇所として00:59:525 (21) - del を行いました。
[Futsuu]
- 00:40:306 (62) – delete, fixed! 突然この2連どうしたんでしょうね。ボーカルですけどいきなりかわりすぎて意味不明すぎました。確かにバックから音が入って曲調の変わり目につながりはしますがよく見えてなかったですね。ありがとうございます。
周辺との整合性とプレイ感覚を保つために後方のパターンを若干変更しました。- 00:52:259 (14) – K Kantanとmuzukashiiもkだったんで,, Futsuuくらいの難易度だとこの間隔の大音符は同色の方がいいかと思ったためです。もしまた指摘があった場合はすぐにでも変えたいと思いますが今はキープします。
- kiaiの1/2の3連ですが,, 個人的に無理に置かなくてもいい気がします。2連で そう思います。下記指摘点をベースにこの後方部分を(特に基本的なリズムパターンを修正する点で)大きく改修しました。
- 01:03:275 (3,4) – どっちか削除…? なんか急に難しくなりすぎてるような.. 1:03.275をdel
- そのほかはもしも譜面が変わった後にもし気づけばまた何か言います.
[Muzukashii]
- 00:39:837 (114,115,116,117) - 高音の裏の音をとったのかな…? >>>> 00:37:962 (109,110,111,112) –と同じにしてみてはどうでしょう?。。個人的には37秒にkdd-kで39秒にkd-dkの方がボーカルにしっくりくるのでそちらをお勧めします。 この提案通り修正!と思ったんですが‥やってるうちによくわからないことんあってしました。全体で見直した際に(かんたん~ふつう同様)この一帯の区間丸ごと違和感があった感じがあったので、それと近い形での修正と、色変更はこちらのModを参考に変更しました。
- 01:02:689 (7) - delete, okay 01:05:384 (19,20,21) – k,delete,keep… ? 連打多いので無理のない程度位に抑えてみてはどうでしょうか..っていう提案です.. ここいじったら他も変えないといけないかも。。? 19 keep, 20 undefined 21 keep >> 19 del, 20 - 21 keep もしかしたら前後のmodで多少入れ替わっているかもしれなかったのですが、この突然連打が増えて難しくなっている という点でこの後も少しノーツを減らしました。
- 01:11:478 (1) – 01:12:298 (1) - delete? fixed
- and… 01:13:118 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - >>> http://puu.sh/bqIv6/c5776811df.jpg ?
・・ごめんなさい。マジで見るのが遅すぎました。この箇所を k d k ddd _ k >> k _ k ddd d k に変更しました。
01:14:993 (52,53,54,55) - ついでにfinish削除- 01:30:931 (8) – add don ? added
[Oni]まだ他にも気付くところあったかもしれないですがその際は個チャ飛ばします~
- 整ってるので主観のみで幾つか提案
- 00:47:689 (17) - d ? 00:46:400 (11,12) – のkkの目立たせにもう少しd音も欲しいかな~ ok,change
- 00:58:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - dd-kd ? から d-k-ddk ?
>>00:59:173 – move to 1/4left….? 少しこの2連構成が。。。 ボーカルのヒットに合わせた方がいい気がします
そうですね、ちょっと複雑なリズムができる!めずらしい!やった!って浮かれていたところがあります。ただ、この位置では後部の方が音の種類も量も多いと思うのでそちらに対応させるように変更します。 dk dd kd k k >> dk d dkd k kに修正。- 02:13:822 (157,158,159,160,161) – dkkdk> ddkkdじゃダメですか…?
>>2回もdkkdkを使うタイミングじゃないと思います。このあたりのkkkdk(dkkdk)の流れを続けたいところがあるので、できれば崩したくないです。がfixed!あとで直そうと思わなかったらこっちの方がプレイ感が良いんじゃないかと思うのでしばらく取り入れたままにしておきます。
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