Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Easy
00:19:973 (5,6) - move 1 tiny grid right (X)
00:20:763 (7) - move 2 tiny grid right (X)
02:16:026 (2) - remove the timing section here, since it'sused for kiai time OR remove only the kiai time (X)
Normal
01:55:500 (5) - new combo? (X)
03:27:079 (9) - ^ to cut off the combo (X)
Sallad's Flag!
Cool!
Hard+
00:43:658 (5) - this circle seems out of place, fix this (No Change)
Awesome!

Awesome beatmap!
STAR!!

P.S. can i take the insane diff? Why Not ?

blissfulyoshi wrote:

... The tags "coca" "cola" "sponsor." Did Coca-Cola sponsor this map or something? I really doubt that anyone would Coca-Cola or sponsor, so please remove them from the tags since I don't think I recall seeing anything in the map that suggest that these words belong in the tags.
This song is Coca-Cola's song as sponsor for this World Cup
Easy:
Normal mod:
00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) - it looks sort of ugly right now with the sliders not being symmetric Having some thing like the 1 in the picture would be better:

SPOILER

Couldn't make them perfectly symmetric , so I figured out another way to fix it (*)
01:07:342 (1,2,1) - overlapping sliders look terrible, esp if the sliders are not symmetric (X)
01:25:895 (1) - This jump was sort of random (X)
01:44:447 (1,1,1,1) - same as 00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) (*)

Combo mod:
00:36:552 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:30:237 (1) (X)
00:39:710 (3) - ^ (X)
00:42:868 (4) - ^ (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (this is for the change in hitsound type between this and the previous section) (X)

Normal:
Normal mod:
01:57:079 - this break is really randomly placed (the break's start does not follow anything) (X)

Combo mod: (The key to combos is consistency, so I am trying to make the combos consistent based off what I see a majority of your map follows, but you are free to make it consistent in another way
00:30:237 (3) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos (X)
00:36:552 (5) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner (X)
00:39:710 (3) - ^ (X)
01:46:026 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos (X)
01:52:342 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner (X)
01:55:500 (5) - ^ (X)
03:23:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - add some new combos to this set (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
02:16:026 - ^ (X)

Sallad's Flag!: (This diff is really weird with it being the hardest diff but only worth slightly more than Normal)
Normal mod:
01:19:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the back and forth pattern got boring the second time through, so can you think of a different pattern pls
02:34:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - seeing the combo a fourth time.... (I guess you can just copy and paste whatever you did the fix the previous suggestion)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - There are 2 timing sections at the same place here, so please remove one of them
01:00:138 - just wondering y is this a custom hitsound section when I don't see any custom hitsounds
03:19:184 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai
03:36:552 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Hard+:
Normal mod: (similar to Easy, there are a lot of sliders that need to be made symmetric such as 00:18:000 (1) and 01:25:500 (1), so please fix them) (X)
00:26:289 (4,1) - the partial overlap of these sliders look bad Fixed with new sliders
00:34:579 (7,1) - This shortened spacing is disorienting Fixed with new sliders
01:09:513 (4) - probably will look nicer if it was parallel to 1 (X)
01:52:342 (5) - align with 4 (sort of a nazi thing, but it is noticeable while playing) (X)
02:09:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stacking makes this part look pretty bad so lower the stack leniency enough to make this part look nicer (also, stack the ends of sliders directly on top (not a few pixels off) of the next slider) (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section) (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
01:25:500 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai (X)
02:16:026 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
02:41:289 - align the end of the kiai section with the end of the corresponding kiai section in normal (you can adjust normal or this diff depending on what you feel is better) (X)
02:53:921 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section) (X)

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Nice map and storyboard. I really wish you mapped the easier diffs with lvl 3 grid (tiny). There are a lot of the points where you can see blatant spacing inconsistencies that could have been avoided using a higher lvl grid. Other than that, focus on making the map more aesthetically appealing. Star.

Wow dude,Thanks I think I've fixed all the things that u pointed out

strager wrote:

Storyboard
Cool. =]

The flash at the bottom of the screen needs to be moved up so it aligns with the BG. (X)

Remove letterboxing during breaks. (X)

Skin
Really good skin.

For the spinner, ehh ... It's hard for spinners who spin small to read thier cursor while spinning with that huge thing flying around.
Made some changes here (Cursor.png) I hope u can see it clearly now.
The slider repeats don't look too good. Make them smaller and make the border thicker?
Changes here (Reversearrow.png)

Sallad's Flag!
Your kick sliders are shit. The ones in the middle of longer sliders are bad, and the rest mostly should be 1/3, not 1/2. Resnap them and respace them accordingly.

I really liked the hitsounds in the beginning. Very nice.

I had fun playing this, except at the shit kickslider parts. Reminds me of Rolled mapping.

Hard+
Awesome!

I suggest increasing the spacing during the kiai parts (+0.3x?). That'd add to the awesomeness, and constitute the bump to Insane. No changes here

You need to fix some sliders ... Most aren't perfect, e.g. 00:18:000 (1) I think I fixed it in the last post, anyways re-checked and 00:27:868 (2). (X)

00:33:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird spacing(X)

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
your skin is so awesome!!!

[Easy]
00:25:105 (3) - maybe stack with (1)? (X)
00:38:131 (1) - align with (2) before? (X)
00:57:868 (2,1) - spacing? (X)
01:49:184 (1,1) - ^ (X)
02:12:473 (1) - align with (2)?

[Normal]
why grid level 1? No changes here
00:25:500 (1,2,3) - and some other places.... it's weird in a normal imo. No changes here
01:05:368 (2,3,4) - what's this... (X) Also Fixed the same issue with the next chorus
...think you can use grid level 3 and change some of the spacing. Tried to fix some stuff with the same grid level

[Sallad's Flag]
01:06:552 (4) - kind of random placed...
there's not some really important problems since this is a I

[Hard+]
don't think this is Hard+, just Hard.
00:14:644 - 00:16:026 too short a break ,remove plz. (X)
the second part's new combo is a bit strange. No changes here
01:48:000 (2,3,4,5,6) - need a better shape. (X)
01:54:908 (3) - exactly stacked with (1)... don't know if it's fine. No changes here
02:20:170 (4) - ^ (X)
02:40:105 (1) - 3 spinners in a row..? (X)

Astom wrote:

[General]
-Los BG deben ser 800x600 o 1024x768, asi que hasle resize o busca algunos del tamaño. All the backgrounds are 1024x640
-Recorta la transparencia innecesaria a los nombres de los paises I'll Fix this later , Thx I didn't notice that

Excelente cancion, map, SB y skin xD
STAR ~

Leorda wrote:

[Shuna's Flag!]
This diff is don't need a audio Lead-in it needs one, why? because the lead-in warning will make the first notes a little bit hidden, and it need sometime to make the warning disappear
02:28:855 (1) - I think this object is hidden (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ it does? O_o
02:30:434 (6) - New combo fixed my way

Leorda wrote:

Yo (I don't know to say hi in Peru) Sup, well if u don't know spanish u can always say hi

[General]
1) Your difficulty spread is E-H-I-I-I, difficulty spread should be E-N-H-I-I, so you have to remap them
Omg , I've mapped easy,normal and hard 2 times will this affect the beatmap in anyway ? Because I thought u needed an easy difficulty and then it depends on u :S

2) Make sure the tags is same for all diff Fixed (X)

[File]
Your SB elements is waaaaay too many transparent pixel, you have to cut the smallest possible, otherwise, this beatmap will be high performance during playing this beatmap
Example japan.png


If you see the black space, you have to rid them off. ALSO! You have to fix the SB Elements in all files in cnames folder ONLY

Yes I will fix that , but I have no time, I'll do this tomorrow.
Pls don't point out this in the next mods.

[Easy]
00:23:526 (3) - I think this object is really difficult for beginner player, can you don't stack with 1 at the end???
I stacked this because somebody suggested that in an older mod :S
00:25:105 (3) - ^
I stacked this because somebody suggested that in an older mod :S
01:13:263 (1) - Do not place near spinner in timing, since this a easy diff, it could be more difficult for beginner player[/color] Fixed(X)
01:18:789 (x) - Add note?? Fixed(X)
01:19:973 (1) - Move 1 grid left?? Fixed(X)
01:30:631 (1) - ^ Fixed(X)
02:03:394 (1) - Make symetric?? Fixed(X)

[Normal]
01:31:816 (1) - Cut short this slider to white tick
02:30:828 (3) - Cut short this slider to red tick and add 2 repeating slider[/color] Fixed(X)
03:25:500 (5) - New combo?? Fixed(X)
03:30:434 (1) - Silence this spinner Fixed(X)

[Sallad's Flag!]
03:06:750 (1,2) - Stack at the middle is not stack perfectly, stack it Fixed(X)
03:08:329 (2,3) - ^ Fixed(X)
03:19:973 (2) - Stack with 1 at the end is not stack perfectly, stack it Fixed(X)

[Hard+]
00:17:013 (2,3) - Move 2 grid left?? Fixed(X)
00:23:921 (4) - New combo?? Fixed(X)
00:24:118 (1) - Remove new combo?? Fixed(X)
00:25:500 (5) - New combo?? Fixed(X)
00:25:697 (1) - Remove new combo?? Fixed(X)
00:34:973 (1) - Make symetric?? Tried
03:30:631 (1) - Silence this spinner Fixed(X)

[Shuna's Flag!]
This diff is don't need a audio Lead-in

02:28:855 (1) - I think this object is hidden (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
02:30:434 (6) - New combo

Updated(X)

Good song
STAR

ty , let the modding continue pl0x

VanMoNky wrote:

While waiting for my guest diff...

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. How about adding "waving" to the tags? Some people call this song "Waving Flag". (X)
2. Is it just me or the offset is a bit too late? [?] Somebody said that too ( Looking for the right one )

[Storyboard]
1. Beautiful! Why don't you SB the lyrics? Maybe chorus only ,will think about it
2. All the images in cnames have a lot of unused spaces. Remove the spaces then your map's size will be smaller. Working on it

[Easy]
-- 2 minutes map without any break? I'm a little worry... (X)
-- Map the diff until the end of the song. It's better.
00:33:789 (1) - Remove new combo? [?] (X)
00:49:579 (1) - Move it closer to the center of the spinner. (X)
01:11:684 (1) - Move one tiny grid left. (X)

[Normal]
00:49:776 (2) - Move one small grid up.
00:52:934 (2) - ^
00:56:092 (2) - ^
01:25:500 (1,1) - Why don't you change these spinners become a break? You may want to add a finish note on 01:25:500. (X)
02:40:302 (1,2,3,4) - Those whistles sound bad lol. (X)
02:53:526 (3) - Inconsistent jump. Better resnap it. (X)

[Sallad's Flag]
Good job. Although some jumps seem to be too hard.

[jericho2442's Rave] I guess u just got confused [Hard+]
-- This diff is a little tiring because of the single break. Add some more break. (X)
-- The drum streams sounds using 1/3 beat snap. You may want to fix all streams sliders in 1/3 sections.
00:05:171 (1,2) - Change this to 1/3 streams slider.
00:08:329 (1,2) - ^
00:51:750 (4) - Move one tiny grid up. (X)
02:53:921 - You place the break inconsistently. Bad placement. (X)

[Shuna's Flag]
-- A little overmapped by some streams.
-- Could you make this diff easier? It's too insane and could ruin this beautiful map :O.
00:46:289 (4,5,6) - Those sliders should be 1/3 beat.
00:47:210 (1) - Nah. Add a note behind it on 1/3 beat.
01:03:592 (5,1) - Swap combo.
02:00:829 (3,4) - Confusing. Move the (3) somewhere.
03:31:421 (4) - You might want to add a finish at the end of it.

Star.

Thank U

1. Audio lead-in is different in [Shuna's Flag]... not to mention the letterboxing is also enabled there.
2. It's just me and my SB naziing, but you could save some space erasing "clapbottom.png" or "claptop.png" and just apply a Vertical Flip parameter in the SB. I don't think it matters that much anyway.
3. Maybe make "reversearrow.png" a bit smaller? They go a bit offbounds of the hitcircle. You could also resize "hit0.png".
4. Why not make the same storyboard on every difficulty? As far as I've checked, [Easy] doesn't have the country names on it.
5. The pause menu background must be 800x600 or else it will look bad. Right now you can see the score you have, and I doesn't look good to me =[
6. Why an invisible cursortrail?

1. Doesn't seem that hard to me. Maybe just rename it to Hard?

1. Triples... =[
2. Maybe... lower the hitsound volume a bit? or at least the whistle's volume, it hurts =[ [/list]

VanMoNky wrote:

While waiting for my guest diff... there's more!? O_O
[Shuna's Flag]
-- A little overmapped by some streams. i really need to learn to map w/o triplets :<
-- Could you make this diff easier? It's too insane and could ruin this beautiful map :O. T_T
00:46:289 (4,5,6) - Those sliders should be 1/3 beat. screw them sliders
00:47:210 (1) - Nah. Add a note behind it on 1/3 beat. screw them notes
01:03:592 (5,1) - Swap combo. k
02:00:829 (3,4) - Confusing. Move the (3) somewhere. k
03:31:421 (4) - You might want to add a finish at the end of it. k

Gens wrote:

Oh, it's this song...

[General]

1. Audio lead-in is different in [Shuna's Flag]... not to mention the letterboxing is also enabled there. fix'd
   
   [Shuna's Flag!]
   
   1. Triples... =[ =[
   2. Maybe... lower the hitsound volume a bit? or at least the whistle's volume, it hurts =[ [/list]

fixd

02:56:092 (2,3) - It can be easily be mistaken for two sliders... borderline unrankable IMO. k

Gens wrote:

Oh, it's this song...

[General]

1. Audio lead-in is different in [Shuna's Flag]... not to mention the letterboxing is also enabled there.
2. It's just me and my SB naziing, but you could save some space erasing "clapbottom.png" or "claptop.png" and just apply a Vertical Flip parameter in the SB. I don't think it matters that much anyway.
3. Maybe make "reversearrow.png" a bit smaller? They go a bit offbounds of the hitcircle. You could also resize "hit0.png". (X)
4. Why not make the same storyboard on every difficulty? As far as I've checked, [Easy] doesn't have the country names on it. Easy has the same SB
5. The pause menu background must be 800x600 or else it will look bad. Right now you can see the score you have, and I doesn't look good to me =[ No Pause-overlay kgo
6. Why an invisible cursortrail? (X)

[Normal]

00:42:868 (1) - This spinner doesn't quite fit here IMO (and Italy gets covered up...) Sorry Italy , Fixed
00:46:026 (1) - NOOOOO YOU COVERED THE MOST KAWAII DESU COUNTRY Of them allllll...... okay I should stop. Just sayin' it looks like you got lazy here and used spinners instead. Sorry Japan , Fixed
01:04:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe... use the same rhythm/pattern you used at 01:03:394 (1,2,3,4)?
01:17:605 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. Nevermind, since you seem to use this too much I think it will be fine
01:31:816 (1,2) - I think this spacing change should be fixed. =/ (X)
01:49:184 (1) - Same spinner thing... (X)
02:01:816 (1) - Same spinner thing... (X)
03:19:184 (1,1) - Yeah, spinners. (X)

[Hard+]

1. Doesn't seem that hard to me. Maybe just rename it to Hard? (X)

00:05:171 (1,2) - These would sound better if they were on 1/3. (X)
00:08:329 (1,2) - Same as above. (X)
00:19:973 (3,4,5) - You could stack these manually... it isn't that hard. Just go to the .osu in notepad, go to "GridSize: 8" and change it to "4", then move the beats 1 grid down and 1 grid right. (X)

[Shuna's Flag!]

1. Triples... =[
2. Maybe... lower the hitsound volume a bit? or at least the whistle's volume, it hurts =[ [/list]

02:56:092 (2,3) - It can be easily be mistaken for two sliders... borderline unrankable IMO.

Updated, Ty Shuna

~ ~ ~

Excellent! Just these things. Be sure to notify me when you're done so I can recheck. =]

Thanks Gens

Added Lyrics in the first chorus as a test , it will probably get deleted ( Will see )

Arusha Shuna wrote:

EDIT

VanMoNky wrote:

Gonzvlo, add "VanMoNky" to the tags box.

You shouldn't give kudos to guest diff post. Kudos are given only to modding post.

OK

00:19:973 (3,4,5) - You could stack these manually... it isn't that hard. Just go to the .osu in notepad, go to "GridSize: 8" and change it to "4", then move the beats 1 grid down and 1 grid right.

Gens wrote:

Woops, sorry, but three Insanes cannot be ranked on a single set.

Also:

00:19:973 (3,4,5) - You could stack these manually... it isn't that hard. Just go to the .osu in notepad, go to "GridSize: 8" and change it to "4", then move the beats 1 grid down and 1 grid right.

I see you changed the grid size but didn't stack them.

Gens wrote:

Woops, sorry, but three Insanes cannot be ranked on a single set. (X)

Also:

00:19:973 (3,4,5) - You could stack these manually... it isn't that hard. Just go to the .osu in notepad, go to "GridSize: 8" and change it to "4", then move the beats 1 grid down and 1 grid right. (X)

I see you changed the grid size but didn't stack them.

Gens wrote:

After playing Monky's difficulty, it isn't that hard actually. I think Sallad's diff is harder than that... sorry I kinda jumped right out to conclusions right there. >.>;

One thing though: recently a (small) issue was brought in a ranked map, saying that the Epilepsy warning still was there when the notes started appearing. Mind increasing the lead in here? (X)

I think 6 difficulties is pushing it, though I'm willing to let it slide.

VanMoNky wrote:

Gens' idea was good anyway ;__;

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[All Guest Difficulties]:
(Shuna's Flag) 01:43:066 (1) - There's two Netherlands. Hmm...? Remove the top one, thanks! (X)

[Easy]:
The map goes unneedingly longer than it should be due to the Storyboard. There's two solutions to this. One would be to map [Easy] all the way to the end. The other would be to make everything after the end of [Easy] exclusive to the rest of the difficulties (Difficulty-specific SBing). You can do this by copy-pasting sections in the .osus and .osbs with Notepad. (X)

[MoNky's Flag]:
03:31:024 (7,8,9) - Hmmm...Maybe make these a triangle-shaped pattern instead of anti-jumps. (X)

Thanks for modding this , And Thanks MoNky

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm really unsure if this beatmap can be ranked with this difficulty spread "N H I I I I".

There are too many I's

noo

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm really unsure if this beatmap can be ranked with this difficulty spread "N H I I I I".

There are too many I's

Gens wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm really unsure if this beatmap can be ranked with this difficulty spread "N H I I I I".

There are too many I's

Same mistake?

Gens wrote:

After playing Monky's difficulty, it isn't that hard actually. I think Sallad's diff is harder than that... sorry I kinda jumped right out to conclusions right there. >.>;

One thing though: recently a (small) issue was brought in a ranked map, saying that the Epilepsy warning still was there when the notes started appearing. Mind increasing the lead in here?

I think 6 difficulties is pushing it, though I'm willing to let it slide.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Well, sorry but I don't rank anything if this difficulty spread doesn't change.

EDIT:

New Difficulty Spread: E H H I I I

Now let's get the bubble once again

6 days , 18 hours ,38 mins, 5 secs

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm really unsure if this beatmap can be ranked with this difficulty spread "N H I I I I".

There are too many I's :(

-SiN- wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm really unsure if this beatmap can be ranked with this difficulty spread "N H I I I I".

There are too many I's

[attachment=0:18773]Capture.JPG[/attachment:18773]

too many 1's

-SiN- wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

I'm really unsure if this beatmap can be ranked with this difficulty spread "N H I I I I".

There are too many I's

[attachment=0:ad3ce]Capture.JPG[/attachment:ad3ce]
too many 1's

Lol u made me laugh

Mystearica wrote:

lol +1

I think map's fine ._.

Don't worry I just need to get this rebubbled , Thanks for the stars

emaal wrote:

You could just give the OD +2 on Hard becomes a lot more read-able. Also, did you forget the idea of Storyboarding the Chorus?

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hard]

I find really hard to read all the patterns because the low OD. I don't know what you can do about this, try to do something.
(X)
[MoNky's Flag]

00:59:250 (1) - Unsnapped.
02:15:039 (1) - ^
02:15:236 (2) - ^
02:15:631 (3) - ^
(X)

Popped for now. Other difficulties looks fine.

Yay D:, Ok now we need a bubble AGAIN then we need the Heart , almost done guys , 5 days/6 for some people ,left

-SiN- wrote:

just something in my mind..
the SB is boooooooring.. left - right - left - right - left - right - L - R - L - R - wth
try in different directions diagonal right down - up & down - etc
The old SB had Left , right, up, down , etc , but It was too much. I like it the way it is now
also suggestion:
you could crop the logo and create another layer with edited logo to shining one.

-SiN- wrote:

[attachment=0:eeb26]screenshot016_1.jpg[/attachment:eeb26]

the left picture is PNG.. which one is better?
edit all of your JPG file like that to PNG.. (X)

Note: yeah. its not a nazi mod, i'm strict if its about SB.. just doing what should i do like when i was learning to be an animator

Fixed, Thanks It looks great

KIA wrote:

Delete one of the Insanes and rank it! D:

Blue Dragon wrote:

This should be ranked on Jun 11 8-)

Hanyuu wrote:

is austria not in the world cup ? <_< or do you just forget it

i dont know iam not a football fan

Blue Dragon wrote:

Hanyuu wrote:

is austria not in the world cup ? <_< or do you just forget it

i dont know iam not a football fan

not in the world cup D:

Mafiamaster wrote:

Add 3 seconds of lead-in time on all difficulties. This is to prevent the epilepsy warning that is displayed at the beginning from hiding the first couple of notes of gameplay.
[Monky's] lead-in time is fine. (X)

Gens wrote:

Holy. Jesus. At the filesize.

You're only using the .png files, why include the jpgs? This makes the filesize really huuuge.

- Delete osb. (X)
- Add a ! at [MoNky's Flag] so it's [MoNky's Flag!]. (X)

I was expecting to rank this. =<

jpgs