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Mashley
And now for something awesome. Remember to add my timing sections cos most of it is 2x and there's some kiai too.

Download: Gorillaz - Dirty Harry (RandomJibberish) [Hard].osu
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RandomJibberish
Thanks, it's awesome.
Ryohan
Gorillaz :D
Mashley
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RandomJibberish
Added~
Mashley
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RandomJibberish
Awesome. Moving to pending now~
aRiskOfRain
<3
jockeytiyan
Wow? I'm the first mod?

Just a quick mod, I can't see major things except for in Easy going a bit hard for newbies to read especially in ASH's part. But I don't wanna worry about that.


Normal:
02:47:065 - Intended that it has no break right. If not, please put one?


Hard:
02:14:346 (2,3,4) - Spacing's intended too?
02:46:158 - Same as Normal.
Topic Starter
RandomJibberish
I'm pretty sure that the lack of a break is intentional as I think it's short enough and makes a good tense moment of nothing but HP drain (Is it just me than finds those moments fun ? XD) but if ASH says otherwise I'll change it.

Idk about the spacing though.
Gens
General opinion on the map:

Well, the map is technically fine, but I think it can be improved. Combos in all difficulties generally felt a bit weird to me, though not in ASH's part (iirc).
[Easy]'s flow is really weird; it isn't good at all, imo. Maybe you could try snapping more to the background beats while keeping the beat still a bit on the lyrics.
[Normal] was a bit better, no real flaws I saw. The star rating is bothering me, though I think you can't do something about it. Really nice slider shapes.
[Hard] was lovely~ specially the 2x part by ASH. The lack of that break in ASH's part was a bit annoying though. Also the spinners felt awkward (maybe because I know the lyrics in the rap part and I just wanted to play them).
I really wish you mapped up to the final part, since it feels a bit awkward. it shouldn't be much anyway. :P

Second, I think offset is early. Try +~15, it sounds better to me. I got many "late" hits when testing.
Third, what's up with the SB? What's that weird lighting thing that pops out each finish? (I hope it doesn't involve video since I always download the novideo version when modding) I think the SBed names could look a bit better with some filters/effects. Right now it's just text with a black border and a simple gradient. I could try to do some but I think you're capable enough of adding something else to it. :P

And just another thing: don't you need to add Agent Spin Here to the tags?

I guess that's it. :)
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RandomJibberish
the SB is a flare, it makes sense if you've seen the video. I'll change the background so there's some sky in it though so it makes some more sense, and maybe mess with the motion a little.

Looking into everything else too, thanks.
Eirene
[Hard] :
02:25:745 (3,4) - it's not an issue, but maybe move one/two squares down (I guess I'm not the only player who don't like objects under the scorebar). This won't change a lot the pattern ...

[Normal] :
01:17:131 (1,2) - huuu, you make me cry T.T, but I won't say anything because it's hard to change that.

well, I hate Gorillaz, but it's a good map STAR
Sallad4ever
Horayyy fo gorilaz 8-)

[General]
I agree the current BG is not very appealing (even though it fits the song) probably because of the low quality
I really wish you would mapped till the end

[Easy]
Kinda confusing to read, idk maybe because of the blue tick notes?

[Normal]
Nice n neat
00:55:611 (x) - add note here to follow music?
03:00:520 (2) - delete this?
03:04:730 (1) - I want to play this part
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:32:219 (5) - NC (new combo)
01:19:626 (6) - ^
01:31:789 (6) - ^
01:33:348 (1) - remove NC
[Insane]
This is AWESOME
My favorite diff
A 2x BPM warning would be nice, because of the break the 2x slider startled me and I broke my combo :cry:
How about following the music more closely in 01:32:101 (5,6,7) by moving them forward 1 tick, then delete 01:32:725 (1) ?
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:22:239 (5) - NC
00:27:229 (6) - ^
00:32:219 (7) - ^
00:37:210 (3) - ^?
01:24:616 (5) - NC
Cool map n epic collab
The video is interesting too ;)

Star~
NotShinta

RandomJibberish wrote:

I need a something, to keep my something something.
I need a gun, to keep myself from harm. I think. Tempting as it may be, do not kudosu this post.

Also starred
Garven
[Easy]
I haven't heard this song before, so my sight read of easy was kind of frustrating. It felt like a lot of the beats just didn't go with the music at all.
Maybe some of the things that make it feel really off are things like 00:24:422 (2) ending a 1/4 beat late compared to the strong beat in the music, followed by going with the second note in the vocals for the start of beats. I found that the bass line was the easiest and most natural to follow.
Since you've already set this up to a more difficult easy, you may as well add a note at 00:22:239 to make it play a little less awkwardly.
00:34:870 (1) - Remove the whistle from the slider slide.
00:37:365 (1,2,3) - The placement of these three felt really weird. You're following the second vocal note on all three hits, and I was still feeling the bass line out and 100'd them out. Maybe a lot of my issue is the delayed vocals with the child chorus.
03:11:903 (4,1) - This jump intended for an easy?

[Normal]
This diff is hawt. Good stuff.

[Hard]
01:04:811 (2) - Remove whistle from slider.
01:12:296 (2) - ^ It's so rare for this sound to sound good, I've found, hehe.
02:25:433 (2,3,4) - You may want to lower these a bit as the 3 and 4 are sticking into the life bar.

Yeah, focus on making the easy mode easier to follow. The other two diffs are gold.
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hmm...
[:]You can change
[>>]You need to change

General
:Offset 90
:the orange hand with the light stuff can be on bouth sides

Easy
Seems a little confusing for begginers xD

Normal
:2:28:546(5) off-screen?

Hard
>>2:45:393 Add break

hard song to map, good job :P
Louis Cyphre
Must
Should
Suggestion

[General]
Seems good

[Easy]

I think too long for easy =/
01:17:436 - remove new combo (SPAM)
02:27:298 - distance
02:28:546 - ^

03:12:209 - remove new combo

[Normal]
00:23:013 - distance
00:29:874 - ^
01:36:149 - ^

01:42:231 - Add a note?
01:47:221 - ^

03:12:209 - remove new combo

[Hard]
00:27:223 - add new combo
00:32:213 - ^

02:37:434~02:39:462 - fill this place with notes.

Nice map :3 Star~
[DBF]
[Easy]

00:24:416 (2) - that slider have end in 00:25:040.
01:24:766 (1) - that not in 01:24:922.
01:25:389 (2) - ^ in 01:25:545.
01:25:857 (3) - deleted.
02:21:060 (3) - left 1, use grid lvl 3. (that nazi)
02:49:754 (1) - finish in end.
02:52:249 (2) - ^
03:12:209 (1) - do that closer to (4).

[Normal]

01:09:327 (8) - finish.
02:44:140 (8) - remove clap and add whistle.

[Hard]

Best diff with best hitsounds and without errors.

02:23:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i dont like that, really.

Star~
IceBeam
Hello RandomJibberish.

Well,I am a big fan of Gorillaz,so have a star~

Map is fine,haven't found something wrong,but maybe some suggestions here:

[Easy]
00:34:864 (1) - Start at 00:35:020?

[Normal]
01:18:060 (3) - Maybe add a circle here and start the slider at 01:18:216 up to 01:18:684?
01:49:248 - Adding a circle?
02:41:957 (8) - New combo?
02:43:204 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:406 (1) - Remove and add circles to 00:29:406 (9),00:29:718 (10)?
00:30:030 (1) - Add a circle here and start New Combo? Probably adding a circle to 00:30:186 (2).
01:24:610 (5) - New combo?
02:34:316 (1) - So long spinner,I think you should start it at 02:34:783 (1).
02:34:471 (8) - Adding a circle?
02:34:627 (9) - ^

Good luck to your map.I wish it'll be ranked soon.
Astom
Fine =)

Star
TheVileOne
Easy

00:24:416 (2) - What the heck is this following? Vocals start at the end of it. Shouldn't it start there? 00:25:196 -

00:25:664 (1,2,3) - Creating your own beat doesn't help. It is very clear to me that these notes are awkward. Note 2 belongs on the blue note. Both the beat and the vocal starts there. 3 could be place back to the previous red tick as well.

All these sections could potentially screw up someone following the beat.

00:40:010 (1,2) - Move back to the blue ticks.

01:08:704 (4) - Still belongs on the previous blue tick.

01:13:070 (3,4) - Previous blue ticks.

01:20:555 (3,4) - ^

01:24:922 (1,2) - ^

01:29:912 (1,2,3) - Eh. I think you get the point.

02:16:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Note placement check. The singer is singing off tune. Check the snap here.


Normal

01:02:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These sections are spllatered all over the map and they vary in where the notes stack and how they stack. There shouldn't be much of a variation at all.

02:15:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I still don't know about this. It fits better than easy.

Hard

00:25:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - Making up your own beat again I see. This doesn't even come close to following the beat.

00:36:112 (2) - End on blue tick? 00:36:736 -

02:32:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A tad confusing being al the same combo.

I'm not going to attempt to search for flow issues. It's too fast for me.




Eh. The song is off tune. I can't blame you for any of that so I'll give this a star.
Topic Starter
RandomJibberish
Those notes in easy were on blue ticks, but many people pointed out that they were hard to read if you hadn't heard the song before and that I should follow the beat so it's easier to play.

Also, although the singer is slightly off beat at 02:16:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6), I'm pretty sure he is meant to be on the beats that are used in the map. It'd be confusing itherwise

Fixed pretty much everything else though
Krisom
Hi ^^!

[General]
You'll need a bigger BG image, I think the smallest one you can have is 860x640 (or something like that <_<)

[Easy]
Yeah, Confusing for an easy ._.
00:40:010 (1) - Move one grid right (Wihout moving (2) ) (?)
00:54:981 (1) - Whistle (?)
00:59:971 (1) - ^ (?)
01:08:080 (3) - Clap
01:13:070 (3) - ^
01:14:941 (1,2) - Try to put the endpoints at the same height than the startpoints (?)
01:20:555 (3) - Clap
01:22:738 (3) - Whistle (?)
01:30:535 (2) - Unwhistle, then Clap
01:35:526 (2) - ^
01:29:912 (1) - Whistle (?)
01:34:902 (1) - ^ (?)
01:39:892 (1) - ^ (?)
01:44:882 (1) - ^ (?)
02:16:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What about transforming this combo into 2 repeat sliders (?) That'd be easer to read for newbs imho
02:21:684 (4) - UnClap the end (?)
02:26:051 (3) - Clap the end
02:27:298 (4) - ^
02:28:546 (5) - ^
02:49:754 (1) - Clap the repeat and the end
02:52:249 (2) - ^
03:11:897 (4) - Either remove the finish or the clap >_<
03:12:209 (1) - I failed here. 3 times ._. Maybe you could transform 03:11:897 (4) Into a slider that ends here (?) Something like this ?

[Normal]
Most of this is hitsounds suggestions.
00:29:406 (1) - What is this slider following?
00:33:773 (4) - I thought this was 1/4 earlier. I could read it the second time though.
00:35:020 (2) - ^. I'd change this into a 1 beat long slider, 1/4 earlier. That'd be me though.
00:40:322 (3) - Whistle (?)
01:08:080 (6) - Clap at the start
01:09:327 (8) - I'd rather a clap here, but the finish is nice too
01:09:951 (1) - Unclap the end
01:10:575 (2) - Clap
01:11:043 (4) - Remove the finish at the end. Maybe replace it with a whistle (?)
01:14:941 (1) - UnWhistle the end, then clap it.
01:18:060 (3) - Clap the start. UnClap the end
01:19:308 (5) - UnWhistle, then clap
01:19:776 (2) - UnClap the end.
01:20:555 (3) - Clap
01:21:491 (6) - I'd rather a clap at the end, but the finish is nice too.
01:30:535 (3) - UnClap the end, Clap the start
01:31:783 (1) - UnClap the repeat, clap the start
01:36:149 (5) - Clap the end
01:41:140 (7) - UnClap the start
01:46:130 (7) - ^
01:49:872 (x) - Add a note?
02:18:565 (6) - Clap the second repeat
02:26:051 (3) - Clap the end
02:27:298 (4) - ^, Unwhistle it.
02:28:546 (5) - ^
02:45:699 - Why is this blank space here ._.?
02:50:377 (2) - Clap
02:51:625 (4) - ^
02:52:249 (1) - UnClap the start
02:53:496 (2) - UnFinish the start
I didn't like the finish abuse in ASH's part ._.

[Hard]
01:15:409 (3) - /Nazi/ It's too close to (2)
01:16:501 (6) - /Nazi/ It's too far away from (5)
01:17:904 (3) - /Nazi/ It's too close to (2)
01:18:996 (6) - /Nazi/ It's too far away from (5)
The notes here are similar to Normal, so for hitsounding it should follow a similar pattern ^^
I won't mod the speed up, sorry, I can't play it ._.

Everything seems nice and clean, though this is a hard song to map.
Star^^
Haneii
Couldn't find much (/me wishes she could map so flawlessly...)
Well here's my mod (more like suggestions...meh :P)

Easy
02:27:298 (4,5)- spacing? (Although when I play it I had no trouble reaching them, it’s up to you)

Normal
00:22:389 (6) - spacing
00:31:122 (3) - ^
01:36:149 (5) - ^

Hard
00:30:186 (4) - spacing
00:30:810 (5) - ^
00:31:278 (7) - ^
01:23:518 (4) -...kinda looks weird to me
02:14:589 (4) - spacing (not sure how you’ll change it though, since it doesn’t really look nice anywhere else :( )

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Topic Starter
RandomJibberish
Bumping with my iPod and a few mins of Wifi :/
Gens
Just one thing.

The flare has unnecessary transparency.

Also reduce the normal sampleset section volume a bit?

EDIT: OK, I'm silly. Have a fragile bubble...
James
bg is.. pixelated.. unless it is intentional..

map is ok though..
Topic Starter
RandomJibberish
I found it hard to find anything better, But if anyone knows where I can get any improved ones they'd be great

I'm ok with it like this though.
James
rank then. no regrets ok?
Topic Starter
RandomJibberish
Ilu James

All my ranked maps are good from here on guiz
Andrea
Don't forget next time to set genre and language :P

I did it already x3
noneed
first on easy for probably one day ~.~
congrats!
Derekku
Why isn't Mashley in the tags? :I
LuigiHann

Derekku wrote:

Why isn't Mashley in the tags? :I
Well, Mashley wasn't invented yet when the map was tagged. :p

Added now
Potato
Downloading now =D
Awesome song.
Derekku

LuigiHann wrote:

Derekku wrote:

Why isn't Mashley in the tags? :I
Well, Mashley wasn't invented yet when the map was tagged. :p

Added now
Still, it was bubbled/ranked post-name change. :v
Potato
One thing I'd like to mention besides the maps are perfect.

It's probably just a personal issue, but I hate it when people put their name on the map...
Dun know if you could/are willing to take that off. Not that you have to, but I think it's nice =D

Nice map again!
Topic Starter
RandomJibberish
The names are just so you know who mapped each part :V
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