General:Star diff jumps from 3.7 to 5
^dats not good
Standard:Try avoiding overlapping in low diffs. These tend to be somewhat confusinf to new players
Also clean up ur map, 00:10:509 (1,2) - like moving these so they overlap 00:09:028 (1,2) - new players like repeatable things. This also makes it cleaner and smoother.
Some of your sliders are pretty sudden fast :S fix?
Make less of this hard small sliders 00:41:435 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:38:658 (1,2,1) - 00:57:917 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 01:29:028 (1,2,1,2,3) -
More of this 01:18:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:34:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 03:21:620 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
Alot of your map is very focused on the middle, try using your whole canvas.
00:09:583 (3) - making these go back fourth 3 times is a bit overkill. due to high bpm and all 00:08:102 (3,4) - I think something like this would be better.
I suggest a bigger circle size.
Some of it is a bit overmapped for this difficulty.
And i would user a lower distance snap cus it would be less notes
00:08:102 (3,4) - Fix so they look pretty
00:12:546 (3,4) - This might be a bit overmapped for this diff
00:30:139 (6,1) - Move so they overlap
00:32:732 (3) - Move so it overlaps 00:32:732 (3) - ( look around your map for these, i dont wanna point tthem all out :S)
00:34:213 (1,1) - avoid these overlaps
00:35:324 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - This is a big mess. it is to much focus on the middle and so much overlapping.
00:38:658 (1) - Dont cover the repeat sign
00:56:435 (2,1) - Fix blanket
00:57:917 (3) - Move so overlaps 00:59:028 (1) -
01:07:361 (5) - Unneccecary? Make slider start here instead and make the spinner end at 01:08:287 -
01:27:917 (6,7,1,2,1,2,3) - To hard overlapping for a new player.
01:40:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sneak in a slider somwhere?
02:14:583 (4,1,2,3) - much hard for a newbie
02:50:509 (5,1) - ^
03:06:620 (1,2,1,2) - Dont think a double repeat is such a good idea, not in these kind of sliders and hig bpm
Hyper:Distance snap is a neat thing, remember that :3
Again, i think alot of the map is focused on the middle, dont be afraid to put notes on the sides. It seems like you favorize on side of the map ;P
Like last diff, remember to move around notes so they overlap previous notes. This makes the map pwetty :^)
00:08:102 (3,4,5,6) - Suggesting a repeat slider here? (i know many new players may struggle with single taps)
00:11:065 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Spread it more out instead of making it go back. Use the whole area.
00:28:658 (5,6,7) - 3 on top of eachother is old mapping style :U 2 is okey :3 (many confuse it with triples, specialy new players)
00:31:435 (1) - Move so it overlaps 00:30:509 (3) -
00:32:361 (3,4,5,6) - make a nice curve or jumps
00:33:658 (1,2,3,1,1) - spread things more out
00:37:176 (1,2,3,4) - Listen to the music, triple might not fit here. But it sounds like a great spot for a repeat slider
00:39:398 (5) - Remove one tick from this one? it fits better to the music
00:41:065 (1,2,3) - i think a small slider would fit better here with the music. Since note (2) isnt on a beat.
00:43:287 (1) - Move a bit further away from last note? So the new players dont think they have to click it earlier.
00:55:880 (2,3) - I dunno about this, might be to fast to react or read for this level of players. migh wanna add a triple instead.
00:59:398 (6,7,8) - Old mapping style
01:01:435 (1,2,3) - Map the vocals where she sings "antibeat", makes more variation instead of just following the drums and stuff
01:03:843 (1,2,3) - I dunno about this either, the shape isnt so nice either :U
01:06:806 (1,2,3) - Old mapping style
01:04:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - Would be nice with a slider somewhere (much singletapping for the new players)
01:12:361 (5,6) - Dont cover the repeat sign
01:18:102 (1,2,3,4) - Old mapping style
01:19:028 - Seems like uneccecary break for me, since its a verse and the notes begin in the middle of a verse.
01:33:472 (1,2) - Double reverse is pretty confusing, specialy thinking with these types of size sliders. Small ones are fine, and big enough ones are fine
01:39:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You can map vocals here, and as you can see, all these notes are very focused on one spot
01:38:287 (6) - to 01:57:176 - is very hard focused on one side acctually.
01:57:176 - this is a cool place to map some chill notes :3
02:03:102 (1,2,3) - old map style 3 on top
02:04:213 (1,2,3) - ^
02:06:065 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This is pretty confusing, and you can spread it more out instead of placing them all on this one place
02:17:917 - Add note
02:28:102 (9) - fix overlap
02:28:658 (2) - Hmm, add note instead?
02:30:695 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Map vocals? (so much on the right side of map
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02:32:361 (4,6) - Fix so they dont overlap
02:33:472 - to 02:34:028 - Map vocals?
02:35:695 (7,8,9) - I dunno about these sliders
02:40:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this might be overmapped, since there are many "non-beats", I reccomend putting notes on the white and red ticks.
02:46:065 - I think sliders are suprisingly fast :U
02:49:028 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - Fix some overlapping here
02:59:398 (5) - Fast double repeat slider is not a good idea
02:57:917 - to 03:07:361 (5) - is a nice possiblity to map vocals
03:28:935 (4) - This sounds like a "non-beat" to me, i dunno, might just be me :U
03:33:472 (1) - Spinner end here maybe? since thats the end of all sound
Another:Soo, the star difference between hyper and another is pretty high :S
You can look around in this map also so notes overlap previous notes
00:02:176 (3) - Double repeater on such fast sliders are a bad idea
00:06:620 (3,3) - ^
00:13:102 (4,5,6,7,8) - Suggesting u curve it less, or just stack them
00:25:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggesting a repeat slider here
http://sta.sh/02elg6z8d7wt00:30:139 (2) - fix so overlaps 00:29:398 (5) -
00:30:880 (1,2,3) - Sounds like non beats notes, i dunno.
00:31:435 (1,2) - Suggesting something like this here
http://sta.sh/024lwxox757100:34:213 (1) - Well, this slider asnt very pretty. instead of the slider, you could map vocals
00:37:176 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - These overlaps are confusing when dealing with triples
00:45:509 (1) - Fix so overlaps 00:44:583 (7) -
00:54:954 (5,1) - Suggesting this here
http://sta.sh/0213lhp83prv00:58:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dunno about this stream over the vocals
01:00:880 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:04:769 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:05:324 (9,10,11,12) - Suggesting a vocal mapping here
00:59:398 (6,7) - Double repeat on fast sliders are not gooood
01:08:287 (1) - Suggesting spinner ending here instead
01:09:398 - would be cool if this guitar part was mapped :3
01:28:102 (8,9,10) - Overmapped. remove 01:28:195 (9) -
01:30:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Double repeat no good, if you make the sliders smaller, it would be okey maybee?
01:34:398 (7) - Fix so overlaps end of this slider 01:34:954 (1) -
01:35:695 (3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped part
01:43:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:45:880 (10) - fix so overlaps 01:46:435 (2) -
01:47:361 - to 01:57:176 - have some overmapped parts. Also some vocal mapping might be needed
01:55:695 (7) - big sliders arent supposed to be starting and ending on white, but often its okey :3 But its a nice thing to remember when mapping, try to avoid it ;P (i dunno where i have heard this, and i have nothing to back it up with, so dont listen to this statement D: )
02:08:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1) - I think u got this wrong, i think it would be better if it started with a note and then the repeat slider came. i think it would fit much better to the vocal
02:16:065 (5) - 02:15:324 (2) - Overlap fix
02:26:620 (4,5,6) - Try to avoid making straight lines, it is old mapping style.
02:26:250 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Map the vocals here maybe?
02:36:620 (1,8) - overlap fix ( look around for these)
02:55:695 (5,6,7,8) - seems overmapped
Inya`s Extreme:As i see it, there are many non beats and over-mapped parts. Check your triples, they dont feel natural be at certan spots.
Also some more vocal mapping could be needed. Instead of only following the drums and stuff. also the end part dont feel natural. it feels a bit wierd and clunky, i dont know why though.
00:04:583 (1) - Fix so overlaps 00:03:380 (2) -
00:07:824 (2,3) - I dont know about these overlaps, they are hard to read. But if thats how u want them, okai :U
00:25:880 - Reccomend a repeat slider at this spot, i feel like it flows better
00:31:065 (2) - I wanna move this to 00:30:880 - cus it fit to the guitar in the back, but so does what you did. So it dosent matter
00:34:213 (1) - Make this slider longer to fit vocals?
00:44:213 (5,6,7,8) - i would avoid doubles, unless they are really needed any fit really well to the music. But i dont think these fit here
00:46:250 (6) - fix so overlay 00:45:139 (1) -
00:47:731 (2,3,4) - Here a double would fit instead of a triple :U Cus you can hear two drum beats. Remove 00:47:731 (2) - and consider it. You have done it here 00:52:268 (5,6) -
00:50:694 (7,8,9) - Overmapped, remove 00:50:787 (8) -
00:57:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped, non-beats
00:58:657 (7) - fix so overlaps 00:57:546 (8) -
01:00:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this would maybe be a thing to put in at near end of song, When all the instuments are kicking off and stuff. But this is just overmapping.
01:02:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Any vocal mapping would be nice. This is also something that could be a thing in the end of a song when the instuments are loud and powerfull.
01:22:731 (7,8,9) - remove 01:22:824 (8) - ? But its not that bad
01:30:509 (1,2,3) - Remove 01:30:601 (2) - Fits better to vocal
01:35:138 (2,3,4) - remove 01:35:232 (3) -
01:38:842 (2,4) - Overlap fix
01:45:138 (6) - Fix so overlaps 01:43:657 (3) -
01:46:805 (6,7,8) - remove 01:46:898 (7) - I think it would fit better, but you can keep it if you really want it to be there
01:48:101 (3,4,5) - remove 01:48:379 (4) - ^
01:49:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You know what i said earlier :U Also map more vocals.
01:55:695 (10) - For some reason, i though this was a bit to far away
02:03:287 (2,3,4) - remove 02:03:379 (3) - but oy can keep it if you want too. I know ur tying to keep a high star diff
02:07:175 (1,2,3) - 3 notes overlapping like this is terrible and ols mapping style, why not just a repeat slider?
02:09:027 (1,2,3) - remove 02:09:120 (2) -
02:11:805 (6,7,8) - ^
02:13:287 (5,6,7) - ^
02:24:213 (4,5,6) - It is more natural for this triple to be here 02:24:398 - Because you last triple 02:22:917 (8,9,10) - was placed in such spot. and your next triple 02:25:880 (2,3,4) -
02:28:287 (1,2,3) - remove 02:28:380 (2) - Or map something else on
02:32:361 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:731 (1,2,3) - Does not fit with vocals at all
02:39:027 (6,7,8) - Move this triple to 02:38:843 -
02:47:916 (6,7,8) - remove 02:48:009 (7) -
02:51:990 (3,4,5) - ^ Or map something else in
02:53:287 (9,10,11) - ^
02:53:842 (2,3,4) - ^
02:56:250 (1,2,3) - ^
02:57:546 (1) - Suggesting a repeat on this one
03:02:175 (1,2,3) - remove 03:02:453 (2) -
03:04:583 (2,3,4) - ^
03:09:583 (5) - a bit boring to end with a slider
I suggest you just continiue the stream instead of the slider
03:21:620 - everything behind this point feels cluncy and wierd. I wouldnt be afraid to put in some more notes, cus the song is still hyping. I think it fiels wierd because it is suddenly so long between the notes and the difficulty have dropped. and the end, most people anticipate a hard end. if i make any sense :U
Good luck!
Dont give any Kdso before im done mapping eet :U