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Ayumi Fujimura - Wishes Hypocrites (TV Size)

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Vicho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 23 de mayo de 2010 at 0:39:05

Artist: Ayumi Fujimura
Title: Wishes Hypocrites (TV Size)
Source: Seikon no Qwaser
Tags: Aki Toyosaki Minori Chihara Aya Hirano Yoko Hisaka Kotomi-chan Breast Milk
BPM: 160,03
Filesize: 12464kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,46 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (4,95 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Kotomin-sane (5 stars, 328 notes)
  4. Normal (4,2 stars, 158 notes)
Download: Ayumi Fujimura - Wishes Hypocrites (TV Size)
Download: Ayumi Fujimura - Wishes Hypocrites (TV Size) (no video)
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TV Size version of the ED2 of Seikon no Qwaser - Wishes Hypocrites
Enjoy!

Done! Thanks to Kotomi-chan for her Insane diff
Kotomi-chan
DeadAlready
star >w<
Cyril Scarlet
I'm not good modder , If you see and feel weird plz ignore this ^^

-Normal-

00:44:128 (1) - maybe try this style ? ↓
* move 00:44:128 (1) to 00:43:941 and don't return slider , add note at 00:44:503 , 00:44:878


-Hard-

00:05:136 (1,2) - spacing ?
00:28:194 (4) - maybe move left 3-4 grid ?
00:56:314 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:876 (2) - add new combo
01:36:994 (1) - ^


-kotomi-chan-

00:12:259 (6) - move left 1 grid ?
00:20:883 (1) - maybe.. new combo ?
01:32:869 (3) - down 1 grid
01:33:244 (5) - right 1 grid
Topic Starter
Vicho

S i R i R u wrote:

-Normal-

00:44:128 (1) - maybe try this style ? ↓
* move 00:44:128 (1) to 00:43:941 and don't return slider , add note at 00:44:503 , 00:44:878


-Hard-

00:05:136 (1,2) - spacing ?
00:28:194 (4) - maybe move left 3-4 grid ?
00:56:314 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:876 (2) - add new combo
01:36:994 (1) - ^
All Fixed! Kotomi want to fix her diff ^^
Thanks Bakaru ^^
Kotomi-chan
Fenya
holaa :3
Seikon no qwaser *------*
Hoho, este es el primer map que te doy estrella por que me gusta xD, me gusta la cancion y el map *-----*

Star~
orioncomet
STAR ☆
Beuchi
Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Why do you have Chihara Minori, Toyosaki Aki and Hirano Aya in Tags and not in Artist? I can clearly hear their voices in the song... o.o (If you're going to say that putting all the names would be so long then put "Seikon no Qwaser Cast" as Artist).
- Delete .osb file and make a Full Submit next time you update.

~Easy~
00:31:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmm sounds a bit weird to me... Move (3) 1/1 earlier and add a note here 00:32:881? Up to you.
01:00:438 (4) - Delete this note and start the spinner here, it's so short.
01:05:499 - This slidertick sounds weird...

~Normal~
- Wow... so much difference between Easy and Normal o.o

00:11:884 (2) - Fix spacing.
01:00:625 (1) - Same as Easy.

~Hard~
00:26:319 (1) - Fix spacing, it feels like it comes earlier than it is :/
00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - Could you make the spacing shorter? I know it fits the song and whatever but it doesn't fit the map when you don't have so many uber-jumps like those :/
01:33:807 (4) - New Combo.

Kotomin-sane
00:35:880 (5) - New Combo.
00:42:254 (6) - Fix spacing.
01:12:436 (1) - I find this jump a bit annoying... =X

Good luck! *star*
Kotomi-chan
Topic Starter
Vicho
All Fixed expect this:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All Diffs~
- Why do you have Chihara Minori, Toyosaki Aki and Hirano Aya in Tags and not in Artist? I can clearly hear their voices in the song... o.o (If you're going to say that putting all the names would be so long then put "Seikon no Qwaser Cast" as Artist). No xP

~Hard~
00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - Could you make the spacing shorter? I know it fits the song and whatever but it doesn't fit the map when you don't have so many uber-jumps like those :/ no no NO! :3
Thanks Beuchi <3
Astom
uhm no le pille nada u_u, lo unico q me dejo wtf fue el video xD al inicio quede "o_o q mierd...." haha xD bueno esop :3

star~ aunque no me gusto la cancion x3
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. the suggest KIAI time: 01:02:125~01:38:118.

[Easy]:
  1. 01:23:496 (1,2,3) - spacing
[Normal]:
  1. fine.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - jump like this is a bit insane in a Hard diff. make them like 00:42:441 (1,2,3,4).
  2. 00:27:632 (3,4) - spacing
  3. 00:53:314 (1,2,3,4) - check the spacing without Grid Snap. (Issues like this exists, check the whole map)
[Insane]:
  1. 00:10:385 (8) - turn the last way point 2 grids down.
Star~
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
your hitsounds is a bit loud imo. make it 70 or lower will be better.
you set your kiai from 01:02:031 to 01:38:025, but i think the right timing section is from 01:02:125 to 01:38:118

[Easy]
emm.... HP Drain Rate+1 & Overall +1 i think. don't make them too low to keep an Easy. (after changed it's still only 1.46 stars)
00:05:136 (1) - 1 grid right?
00:31:756 (1,2,3) - a little hard for beginners, use a repeated slider instead?
00:36:630 (2) - turn off "grid snap" and move it left a bit.
00:41:879 (5,1) - use a slider instead? since this is 3/2
01:23:496 (1,2) - spacing?

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate-1
00:13:759 (1) - maybe you can remove this note and use a spinner start at 00:12:634 and ends at 00:13:759?
00:29:131 (2,3) - stack with (1)?
00:52:752 - add a beat?
00:55:939 (3,4) - use a slider instead?
00:57:438 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:00:637 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead of this triple. since this is the first beat, it's hard for people to know how fast it is.
00:01:199 (4,5,6) - if you did ^, make it a slider too.
00:13:009 (5) - new combo?
00:51:065 (4,5,6) - tiny spacing problem.
00:53:314 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are hard for a [Hard] imo... but you can just keep it if you want
01:18:434 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:20:122 (1,2) - if you want them to end at the same place, turn off "grid snap" and move (2) slightly.

[Kotomin-sane]
need more hitsounds at the front.
00:12:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make the volume lower at this part.
00:18:446 (5) - 1 grid down+ 1 grid right.
00:18:821 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing.
01:13:185 (3) - move it a bit to stack with (1)'s end?
01:15:435 (6) - 1 grid up.

good map. so most are just suggestions XD, here's my star.
Topic Starter
Vicho

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. the suggest KIAI time: 01:02:125~01:38:118. fixed


[Easy]:
  1. 01:23:496 (1,2,3) - spacing fixed
[Normal]:
  1. fine.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - jump like this is a bit insane in a Hard diff. make them like 00:42:441 (1,2,3,4). ok fixed
  2. 00:27:632 (3,4) - spacing fixed
  3. 00:53:314 (1,2,3,4) - check the spacing without Grid Snap. (Issues like this exists, check the whole map) no ._.
[Insane]:
  1. 00:10:385 (8) - turn the last way point 2 grids down. Kotomi's job
Star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
your hitsounds is a bit loud imo. make it 70 or lower will be better. fixed
you set your kiai from 01:02:031 to 01:38:025, but i think the right timing section is from 01:02:1
25 to 01:38:118
fixed
[Easy]
emm.... HP Drain Rate+1 & Overall +1 i think. don't make them too low to keep an Easy. (after changed it's still only 1.46 stars) fixed
00:05:136 (1) - 1 grid right? ok
00:31:756 (1,2,3) - a little hard for beginners, use a repeated slider instead? for me it's fine
00:36:630 (2) - turn off "grid snap" and move it left a bit. ok
00:41:879 (5,1) - use a slider instead? since this is 3/2 no
01:23:496 (1,2) - spacing? ok


[Normal]
HP Drain Rate-1 ok
00:13:759 (1) - maybe you can remove this note and use a spinner start at 00:12:634 and ends at 00:13:759? good
00:29:131 (2,3) - stack with (1)? ok
00:52:752 - add a beat? ok
00:55:939 (3,4) - use a slider instead? no
00:57:438 (1,2) - ^ no

[Hard]
00:00:637 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead of this triple. since this is the first beat, it's hard for people to know how fast it is.
00:01:199 (4,5,6) - if you did ^, make it a slider too.
00:13:009 (5) - new combo?
00:51:065 (4,5,6) - tiny spacing problem.
00:53:314 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:439 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are hard for a [Hard] imo... but you can just keep it if you want
01:18:434 (4) - 1 grid down?
01:20:122 (1,2) - if you want them to end at the same place, turn off "grid snap" and move (2) slightly.
all fixed in this

good map. so most are just suggestions XD, here's my star.
Thanks Colin and Rin ^^
Kotomi-chan

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kotomin-sane]
need more hitsounds at the front. Eeh fixed? xD
00:12:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make the volume lower at this part.IMO it sounds better with the normal volume D;
00:18:446 (5) - 1 grid down+ 1 grid right. Fixed
00:18:821 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing. Fixed
01:13:185 (3) - move it a bit to stack with (1)'s end?Fixed
01:15:435 (6) - 1 grid up. Fixed
Thanks for the mod! here the fixed diff

Download: Ayumi Fujimura - Wishes Hypocrites (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Kotomin-sane].osu
DJPop
HENTAI! LOL XD


~Easy~
00:43:941 (3) - add hitfinish
00:55:939 (2) - add hitfinish at start
01:00:438 (1) - add hitfinish
01:08:124 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:14:123 (1) - ^
01:20:122 (1) - add hitfinish
01:25:371 (3) - add hitfinish at the end
01:29:120 (4) - add hitfinish
01:32:119 (3) - add hitfinish at start
01:35:119 (2) - add hitfinish

~Normal~
00:00:637 (1) - unsnapped
00:50:127 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:02:125 (1) - ^
01:08:124 (1) - ^
01:14:123 (1) - ^
01:20:122 (1) - add hitfinish at start, add clap at the end
01:26:121 (4) - add hitfinish at start
01:29:120 (5) - add hitfinish
01:32:119 (6) - ^
01:35:119 (4) - ^

~Hard~
00:13:009 (1,2) - use soft-hitsounds
00:37:005 (6) - add clap at the end
01:08:124 (2) - add hitfinish at start
01:14:123 (1) - ^
01:20:122 (1) - ^

~Kotomin-sane~
00:12:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use soft-hitsounds
00:14:134 (1) - add hitfinish
00:26:319 (1) - add hitfinish at middle
00:36:442 (2) - add hitfinish at start
00:37:192 (2) - add hitfinish


+Star
Sallad4ever
Sorry Vicho-kun I can't mod this :o
Topic Starter
Vicho

Sallad4ever wrote:

Sorry Vicho-kun I can't mod this :o
Why?? :(
Nakagawa-Kanon
all fine with me
yaya
woo
nice map .
bubbled.
Mafiamaster
Ranked
Sallad4ever
Very Fast ;)

Congratz Vicho-kun :) eventhough I didn't mod this
Andrea
I'm late. *removes this map from his queue*
Gens
orz
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