Mrak buat MOD ku~
no reply mean fixedRivals_7 wrote:
Hi~
From my queue
Here's my modClick me :3Lv.32
01:33:552 - Add on 3 // keep, 2 note is fine
Lv.20
00:05:219 - Suggestion // great, but keep, because 00:05:052 (5052|3,5219|2) - different sound
01:33:552 - Add on 3 // keep, 1 note for bass is fine
Lv.15
00:04:219 - A beat. add?
00:04:719 (4719|0) - Move to 4
00:04:886 (4886|1) - Delete
01:33:552 - add on 3 // keep
Lv.8
01:33:552 - add on 3 // keep
01:33:886 - add on 2 // keep
Tbh, quite hard to find issues on your map. Maybe you can get Speedrank? maybe
Anyways, Good luck with your Beatmap
ThanksRaediaufar wrote:
from this queue
Column:
l1l2l3l4l
[Lvl. 15]
00:16:052 (16052|3) – remove 4 // keep, hihat sound
00:34:719 (34719|3) - ^ // ^
01:14:719 (74719|2) – remove 3 // ^
01:35:219 – add 4 // keep, 1 note is fine for bass sound
have also check another diffs but it seems ok. Since you not fully give the hs on Lvl. 8 and 15 I'm not modding your hs
if this mod is useless, pls don't give me kds
fixed all except red onesBrian_Ex wrote:
Yo! LNP-, Mod From Request
|1|2|3|4|Lv.800:34:886 (34886|3,35052|2,35219|1) - gw tau lu ikutin suara tong teng tong :v, tapi pas di selanjutnya lu ngikutin bassnya lagi, dan ngk ngikutin suarang teng tong lagi, dan itu rasanya awkward..... kalau mau lu bisa delete note ini 00:35:052 (35052|2) -
00:53:386 (53386|0,53386|3) - buat jadi 2,3 biar lebih menarik 'w' // keep, nada nya sama 'w'
01:30:719 (90719|3,90719|0) - ^ ^Lv.1500:33:386 (33386|1) - ini ngikutin suara yg mana? // deleted
00:53:386 (53386|3,53386|0) - bikin sama kye di lv.8 tadi // keepLv.2000:53:386 (53386|2,53386|0,53386|3) - Ctrl+H // keep
00:56:219 (56219|1) - jadikan LN (ngikutin suara synth) endnya di 00:56:552 - situ // nice, applied to all diff
00:56:386 (56386|0) - delete
01:30:719 (90719|0,90719|1,90719|3) - Ctrl+H lagi XD // keep
01:33:886 - bikin 3 note soalnya di 01:31:219 - situ elu bikin 3 note // keep buat rest
ya sampai situ aja modku, sorry kalau pendek2 ;w; soalnya banyak urusan irl
moga bermanfaat
Good Luck~
All fixed except red onesVerniy_Chan wrote:
Hi LNP- (rajin amat ngereq di queueku) >.<)/
NM as requested from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆General : ( ✔ )
Mapset : ( ✘ ) star Lv.8 mencapai 2, reduce plz
Metadata : ( ? ) msih blum dpat sourcenya T_T
Timing : ( ? ) kiaimu yg pertama di 00:11:219 - msa cuma smpe disini 00:11:302 :v dan bisa tmbahin lg kiai di 01:09:886
Audio : ( ✔ )
Background : ( ✔ ) BGmu agak kurang fit dngan lagunya, coba gmbar dri lahan peternakan krena ada suara hewan ternak lol :v (just kidding)Nice hewani instrument music :v4K = |1|2|3|4|
(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern) Lv.8fokus : reduce your star diff
00:31:886 (31886|2) move to 2
00:32:052 (32052|1,32219|0) geser 2 kolom kekanan yaitu di (4 & 3)
00:32:552 (32552|2) move to 1 (ikutin variasi pattern yg bertolak belakang dr 00:26:552 (26552|2,26719|0,26886|1,27052|2,27219|0,27219|3) - )
00:37:219 coba seperti ini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3027208
00:38:552 (38552|3) remove? check 00:39:219 atau sbliknya klu mau ditmbahin // keep, 00:39:219 - disini gk ada cymbal sound
00:49:386 (49386|1,49469|2,49552|3) jadiin LN? biar bisa reduce star diffmu // nice, added LN 4
00:53:386 (53386|0,53386|3) move to 2 & 3 ^ //keep
00:53:886 (53886|1) move to 4 dan 00:54:052 (54052|2) move to 1 (biar variatif patternmu) // keep, sama sound dengan sebelumnya
00:56:552 (56552|3) move to 2 dan 00:56:719 (56719|0) move to 2 ^ // ^
01:09:219 (69219|1) patahin LN 01:09:552 streamnya soundnya beda sy dnger
01:20:719 (80719|1) remove low pitch sound
01:22:719 (82719|1) ^
01:23:386 (83386|1) ^
01:26:052 (86052|0) ^
01:28:052 (88052|3) ^
Remap biar bisa turun SR nya
01:30:719 (90719|0,90719|3) move to 2 dan 3 // keepLv.1501:19:552 add note, high pitch sound check 01:19:219 // keep
01:19:886 ^ // ^
01:20:386 remove slah satu? suaranya hnya 1 klu gak slah // keep
01:31:886 gak tmbah LN/note, suara sapi? :v // no, buat rest z :v
01:37:886 add note, cymbal sound check 01:35:886
01:38:552 ^
01:40:552 ^
01:41:219 ^Lv.2000:08:386 - 00:08:552 klu gak slah disini ada suara stair deh? // lihat level pls, gk mungkin disamain sama lv.32
00:14:052 (14052|3,14136|3) move to 3, dan 00:14:219 (14219|2) move to 4, more fit & balance // keep, pattern nadanya
00:41:052 (41052|1,41219|2) Ctrl + G
00:45:052 (45052|0) pindah ke 3, lalu 00:45:219 (45219|2) 2, balance
01:31:886 mbooo lg // keep, for rest
01:35:219 add note cymbal here (sama sperti di diff sblumnya)
01:35:886 ^
01:37:886 ^
01:38:552 ^
01:40:552 ^
01:41:219 ^
02:05:386 - 02:05:552 stair sound? // lihat level pls, gk mungkin disamain sama lv.32
02:05:719 missing note here? // sengaja kosong, fokus ke 3 note aja
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
All fixed except red onesKagu-chan wrote:
Please Replay soon and point out what is rejected and why
1|2|3|4All in one you should try to be more consistent with Double-Notes (Chords) - I havent really seen a system, often you could use one, sometimes i dont really get chord. I dont pointed it out much, here you should seldmod to improve.Lv.8
00:43:552 - Add Note // keep, rythm thing
00:45:552 - ^ // ^
00:48:886 - ^ // ^
00:49:552 - ^
00:59:052 (59052|2,59219|3) - Swap to avoid Jack (No same sound)
01:06:886 - Add Note
01:48:886 (108886|1,109052|1,109219|2,109386|2) - Rearrange to avoid Jacks (no same Sound)
01:55:052 - Add Note in 2
In KIAI i would use more Chords since it is supposed as highlight in song
Look this :p https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jofNR_WkoCELv.15
00:03:052 - until LN: Add Notes // keep for rest
00:10:886 (10886|0,10886|1) - Remove one (sound not so strong as before)
00:13:636 (13636|2) - To 4
00:18:969 (18969|0) - To 3
00:40:219 - Add in 4
02:08:302 (128302|0) - To 3
No issues found in Lv. 20, other diff is too hard for me :/
all fixed except red ones.Meiko Senpai wrote:
Hi~ mod for req via queue
columns 1|2|3|4
[Lv.8]
00:43:052 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053586 // Keep, rythm thing
00:45:719 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053587 // keep
00:49:552 - add note in 2 // keep, not make double note for bass sound in this part
00:53:386 - put this double in columns 2 - 3 // keep, same sound with 00:53:219 (53219|3,53219|0) -
01:00:386 (6386|2) - move to 1 keep
01:04:386 (64386|0) - move to 2
01:30:719 - put this double in columns 2 - 3 // same as 00:53:386 -
[Lv.15]
00:04:552 (4552|0) - move to 4
00:27:052 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053634 // looks good
00:32:386 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3053638 // ^
01:09:052 - why this double? // aww, deleted one note
01:34:552 - add note // keep, 2 note just for symbal+bass sound in this part
01:37:219 - ^ // ^
01:39:886 - ^ // ^
good luck
All fixed except red one[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:
sup
u sure about the lv names? // dunno, i need help about level ;w;
col: 1|2|3|4
[Lv.8]
00:14:219 (14219|2) - 4
00:24:886 - http://puu.sh/hzuJj/db86339cfa.jpg // nice, applied
00:31:886 - for pattern variability~ http://puu.sh/hzuNT/c651639c83.jpg // =w=)b
00:38:886 - http://puu.sh/hzuS3/77e9b41eb8.jpg OR http://puu.sh/hzuVW/b895050b47.jpg
01:00:386 (60386|2) - 1. then 01:01:219 (61219|1,61386|2) - swap col
01:01:219 (61219|1,61386|2) - this should be 2 notes, emphasizing the cymbals
01:41:886 (101886|3,102052|2,102219|0,102386|0,102552|3,102719|2,102886|1,103052|1,103219|0,103386|1,103552|3,103719|3,103886|0,104052|1) - do a 2 consectutive mini jacks, except the last 2 notes. like this~ http://puu.sh/hzvi4/773dfe6202.jpg // nice
01:45:552 (105552|3,105719|3) - unusual point for a jack, considering this section doesnt have one. move 01:45:552 (105552|3) - to 1. then~ http://puu.sh/hzvqc/e8dbc9b223.jpg
01:56:552 (116552|2) - this ln actually ends at 01:56:719 - . end it there, then add a note on 01:56:719 - at col 1
01:56:886 (116886|3) - i suggest you turn this into a single note, since this one followed the synths, and 01:57:052 (117052|1,117219|0,117386|1,117552|2) - dont, which create an awkward transition. then move 01:57:052 (117052|1) - to 3
02:04:552 - better flow and pattern~ http://puu.sh/hzvGC/60f09cba9f.jpg
[Lv.15]
00:15:219 (15219|0) - 4
00:37:469 (37469|1) - 3, better triplet positioning
00:50:219 (50219|2,50386|0) - swap col
00:52:886 (52886|2) - try moving this to 1, to accent the synths, instead of the bass. (for comfortability also)
[Lv.20]
00:29:469 -i suggest removing the note here, which creates an awkward start for the stream. also, try this~ http://puu.sh/hzwJX/835f6c04ca.jpg // added note in red line
00:32:052 (32052|1,32219|2) - swap col // keep
00:39:886 (39886|0) - try ending this ln on 00:40:219 - , to make the entire part less crowded, then this~ http://puu.sh/hzx1O/de5180634b.jpg
00:44:552 (44552|2,45052|0,45219|2) - 1, 3, 2
00:47:052 (47052|1) - 1
00:47:719 (47719|1) - single note, then note at 00:47:802 - on 3
all fixed except red oneDE-CADE wrote:
Hi here's my check as requested
[General]Fix unsnapped Preview Time // fixed[Lv.32]
You can add "Oriental Core" to Tag // added00:08:636 (8636|1) - delete, i suggest you to only follow the drumpad[Lv.20]
00:08:719 (8719|0,8775|1,8830|2) - Ctrl+H and then move one coloumn to right
00:10:052 (10052|0) - Move to 3
00:29:386 - http://puu.sh/hEtBY/ffb6c6c25d.jpg , anyway you miss note here // changed another way
00:46:469 (46469|0) - Move to 3
00:46:552 (46552|1) - Move to 1
00:49:886 (49886|2) - Move to 1
00:49:969 (49969|0) - Move to 3
00:53:219 (53219|3) - Remove F
01:07:219 - http://puu.sh/hEtTu/a427c7c431.jpg , actually it's easier for me if like that // looks pretty
01:20:719 (80719|2) - Add to 4 F // ? i dont hear symbal sound @.@00:40:219 - http://puu.sh/hEufQ/33cd321a53.jpg
00:46:719 (46719|3) - Move to 3
00:52:802 (52802|1,52886|2) - Ctrl+H
00:58:886 (58886|1) - Move to 3
00:59:052 (59052|1) - Move to 1 and change C to W
01:54:052 (114052|0,114136|1) - Move to 3 n 4
01:57:719 (117719|2,117802|1) - Ctrl+H very fit with instrument
02:13:219 (133219|1) - Move to 1
I'll come back for other diff and HS consistency
2015-07-11 21:06 LNP-: salchipapa
2015-07-11 21:06 LNP-: eh bspowah
2015-07-11 21:06 Ichigaki: wa
2015-07-11 21:07 Ichigaki: hitsound belum di cek?
2015-07-11 21:07 Ichigaki: yhaaaa
2015-07-11 21:07 LNP-: oh iya
2015-07-11 21:07 LNP-: :v
2015-07-11 21:07 Ichigaki: anjay ;3
2015-07-11 21:07 LNP-: kok males banget gw buka editor
2015-07-11 21:07 Ichigaki: sama ;'3
2015-07-11 21:07 Ichigaki: ntar kalo aku ga niat, malah dq
2015-07-11 21:08 Ichigaki: papah sudah benci dq ;c
2015-07-11 21:08 LNP-: ;C
2015-07-11 21:08 LNP-: oh iya hitsound nya disamakan ke Lv.32 semua diff
2015-07-11 21:08 Ichigaki: harusnya sih gitu
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: jangan lupa hindari W|F
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: F|C
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: W|C
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: dsb
2015-07-11 21:09 LNP-: sip
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: selama ada note yang ada di sebelahnya
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: kalau ga ada biasanya mending pakai yang dominan aja
2015-07-11 21:09 Ichigaki: kalo bisa jam 10an udah selesai :v
2015-07-11 21:09 LNP-: ini sebentar kok
2015-07-11 21:09 LNP-: ;v
2015-07-11 21:10 Ichigaki: tadi siang padahal garena udah papah uninstall, eh bangun dari tidur siang udah ada lagi
2015-07-11 21:10 Ichigaki: diinstall adek
2015-07-11 21:10 LNP-: wkwkwkwk
2015-07-11 21:11 LNP-: sepertinya garena sudah menempel permanent di laptop anda
2015-07-11 21:11 LNP-: atau laptop anda tsundere
2015-07-11 21:39 LNP-: udah update
2015-07-11 21:39 Ichigaki: ay
2015-07-11 21:39 Ichigaki: bentar
2015-07-11 21:39 Ichigaki: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/74057 xi - Halcyon [miccoli's diff]]
2015-07-11 21:39 Ichigaki: mic coli
2015-07-11 21:39 LNP-: huhuhue
2015-07-11 21:39 LNP-: sejenis bakteri
2015-07-11 21:40 LNP-: ecoli
2015-07-11 21:41 Ichigaki: ayy lmao
2015-07-11 21:46 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/669557 Memme - BSPower Explosion [Lv.32]]
2015-07-11 21:46 Ichigaki: 00:05:219 (5219|2) - pindah ke 2 mah, kan abis ini ada jack
2015-07-11 21:47 LNP-: w8
2015-07-11 21:47 LNP-: ok
2015-07-11 21:48 Ichigaki: 00:19:052 (19052|2,19136|1) - ctrl+g trus 00:19:219 (19219|2) - move to 1, suggest
2015-07-11 21:49 Ichigaki: 00:20:108 (20108|0,20157|1,20219|2) - ctrl +g
2015-07-11 21:49 LNP-: 0k
2015-07-11 21:49 Ichigaki: 00:21:219 (21219|1,21219|0) - di lv32 ini ln satu doang, di 22 lnnya dua, tapi 00:21:552 (21552|0,21552|3) - di lv32 ada 2, di lv 15 ada 1
2015-07-11 21:50 Ichigaki: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3373533
2015-07-11 21:50 LNP-: samain ke lv 22
2015-07-11 21:51 Ichigaki: 00:23:969 (23969|2) - keknya ini ghost deh ma
2015-07-11 21:51 Ichigaki: btw yang saran di SS itu ga dipake?
2015-07-11 21:51 Ichigaki: 00:26:552 (26552|3) - move to 3?
2015-07-11 21:52 LNP-: ngga dibikin sama kayak lv 22
2015-07-11 21:52 Ichigaki: yowes
2015-07-11 21:52 LNP-: ghost note deleted
2015-07-11 21:52 LNP-: moved
2015-07-11 21:52 Ichigaki: 00:37:386 (37386|2,37469|2,37552|1) - ctrl + h
2015-07-11 21:53 LNP-: ok
2015-07-11 21:55 Ichigaki: 01:45:886 - 01:46:219 -
2015-07-11 21:55 Ichigaki: coba cek ke lv22 nya
2015-07-11 21:56 LNP-: lmao
2015-07-11 21:56 LNP-: LN nya
2015-07-11 21:56 Ichigaki: btw lv 22 jadiin reference deh
2015-07-11 21:56 Ichigaki: atau udah dari tadi?
2015-07-11 21:56 LNP-: iya
2015-07-11 21:56 LNP-: fixed
2015-07-11 21:56 Ichigaki: 01:51:219 (111219|0) -
2015-07-11 21:56 LNP-: udah dari tadi `w`
2015-07-11 21:56 Ichigaki: ln
2015-07-11 21:57 Ichigaki: 01:59:219 - lebih susah 22 hue
2015-07-11 21:58 LNP-: Lv 32 memang sengaja dibikin sedikit LN nya
2015-07-11 21:58 LNP-: biar ada perbedaan antar diff nya `w`
2015-07-11 21:58 Ichigaki: `3`
2015-07-11 21:59 Ichigaki: 00:29:219 (29219|2) - btw ini jadi normal note aja
2015-07-11 21:59 LNP-: ok
2015-07-11 22:00 Ichigaki: 01:07:386 (67386|1,67386|0,67469|3,67469|2,67552|0,67552|1) - ctrl h
2015-07-11 22:00 Ichigaki: biar ada variasi
2015-07-11 22:01 Ichigaki: 01:38:052 (98052|2,98386|2,98719|2) - jadi normal note ?
2015-07-11 22:01 LNP-: ctrl h ok
2015-07-11 22:02 LNP-: no
2015-07-11 22:02 Ichigaki: 01:38:719 (98719|2) - yang ini bukannya ada suara di 1/4nya?
2015-07-11 22:02 Ichigaki: diabaikan?
2015-07-11 22:03 LNP-: tapikan disitu cuman ikutin drum nya aja `-`
2015-07-11 22:03 Ichigaki: 01:38:052 (98052|2,98386|2,98719|2) - eh bukannya ini harusnya mulai dari 01:37:719 - ?
2015-07-11 22:03 LNP-: welp
2015-07-11 22:03 Ichigaki: 01:40:386 (100386|1,100552|0,100719|1,101052|1) - kalo diliat dari ini
2015-07-11 22:03 LNP-: ganti LN
2015-07-11 22:05 Ichigaki: ok done
2015-07-11 22:06 LNP-: yey
2015-07-11 22:07 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/668727 Memme - BSPower Explosion [Lv.22]]
2015-07-11 22:07 Ichigaki: 00:07:886 (7886|2,7886|1,8052|2,8052|1) - triple kaya awal?
2015-07-11 22:08 Ichigaki: 00:15:886 (15886|1) - normal note, di 15 sama 32 sama2 cuma 1 `-`
2015-07-11 22:09 LNP-: both fixed
2015-07-11 22:09 Ichigaki: 00:24:136 - note di lv15 dihapus deh, disini lv 22 ga ada
2015-07-11 22:09 LNP-: kan ini masih lv 22 :v
2015-07-11 22:09 Ichigaki: :v
2015-07-11 22:09 Ichigaki: yo wes
2015-07-11 22:12 Ichigaki: btw ln ln mini di lv22 kok kaya ga konsisten gitu kalo dibandingin sama lv 15
2015-07-11 22:13 Ichigaki: kadang ada, kadang ga
2015-07-11 22:13 LNP-: ini lagi di fix
2015-07-11 22:13 Ichigaki: oke deh
2015-07-11 22:13 Ichigaki: kalau gitu abis fix itu langsung update dulu biar nanti bisa aku bandingin lagi
2015-07-11 22:13 Ichigaki: inet oke kan?
2015-07-11 22:14 LNP-: oke
2015-07-11 22:21 LNP-: updated
2015-07-11 22:24 Ichigaki: brb
2015-07-11 22:25 LNP-: ok
no reply mean fixed, thanksDixonBlackwing wrote:
So, wandering for a while and found this map..
want to map this for a while, but already been mapped XD..
this map has been bubbled before huh..
Maybe my mod is useless, but whatever XD..Lv.3200:16:219 - add one? same sound with 00:16:552 - and it's alright because lv 32 i think.
00:42:219 - add one? have the similar sound as 00:41:886 - 00:42:552 - // no, 2 note is fine
00:49:886 - add one? same sound as 00:48:552 - 00:51:219 - ?
00:53:386 (53386|2) - move this to column 2? this has the same pitch as 00:53:552 -
00:59:136 (59136|1,59136|0,59219|2,59219|3) - Ctrl+G this? because 00:59:136 - doesn't have the same pitch as 00:59:052 -, if applied, rearrange the notes after this timing.
01:20:219 - add one? same sound as 01:20:552 - // no , 2 note is fine
01:35:886 - add one here? this has the longer cymbal sound, like 01:36:552 - and 01:33:886 - // ^
01:37:219 - also add one? // ^
01:47:052 - missing note here?
01:59:136 - add one here? there's a melody similar with 01:58:802 -
02:04:302 - add notes? i hear something here. // no, focus beat drum
02:05:219 - add one? similar with 02:05:532 -Lv.2200:25:386 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980860
00:36:386 (36386|1,36386|0,36552|2,36552|3) - Ctrl+G this?
01:09:052 (69052|3) - move to 1? column 1 seems quite empty here.
01:13:386 (73386|2) - move to 1?-
01:56:552 (116552|3) - also move to 1? column 4 seems too heavy here.// no
Good luck for rebubbled
yang punya pantat dah pergiSurono wrote:
pantad karton cynahnya kemana om?