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Krfawy

Joined March 2012

Krfawy 2015-05-14T08:53:48+00:00

#BUBBLED

Next BN -> I am totally sure video has the same offset in the whole mapset. Just make sure it is. Also I think metadata is correct, but would be better if another person would confirm or something.

Good luck Pornero! (>o3o)> DON'T LET IT BE LIKE "Don't Stop Push It Now" AGAIN OR I WILL MEET YOU IN A DARK HALLWAY AT THE MIDNIGHT.

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-05-14T09:40:15+00:00

Thanks a lot Krfawy, I checked the metadata with Sekai-nyan and we have concluded that is correct as is and about the video offset is also fine, don't worry.

Metadata can be found here:

EDIT: Fixed some things on the last difficulty per Irreversible's request also I've added new hitsounds there.

Updated ~

Krfawy

1,374 posts

Joined March 2012

Krfawy 2015-05-15T21:34:03+00:00

#REBUBBLED

Yauxo

1,622 posts

Joined June 2011

Yauxo 2015-05-16T14:32:44+00:00

Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

Unrankable
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion

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[General]
■ I think it'd be better if you'd change [ zzz ] to [_zzz_], as the search function will see these tags as [, zzz, ] (basically not as one thing). To show the problem, try to search for Cherry Blossom's maps. Example of a different, but underscored name
■ Same goes for Fatfan_Kolek

■ I dont think that blank hits are rankable, are they? -> drum-hitnormal2.wav, normal-hitnormal100.wav
I havent seen any before, so Im kinda confused by that.

[Irre]
■ 00:00:953 (2,3,4) - shouldnt these be the same spacing all along? (like the following combos 00:03:353 (2,3,4) - )
■ 00:37:403 (1,2) - I dont know why this buggs me. I guess my mind tells me that this should be stacked, since it kinda acts/looks like 00:18:353 (1,2) - 's type of combos
■ 01:07:403 (1) - I expected some more crazy jumps here :^)

[Kolek]
■ I'd say that AR9.2 would be more than enough. AR9.5 seems too high

■ 00:11:003 (4,5,6) - Not a big fan of these, as you have to slow your movement down while still in a, basically, straight line. I'd be okay if it was after a direction change (since you'd have to slow down to change the direction anyway), but since it's straight, the player might slow down too early (missing 5) or too late (missing 6).
Some equalized spacing would be great.
■ I think the NC's should be on 00:36:503 (2) - 's kind of Sliders, as the original sound starts there. 00:36:803 (1) - also feels more like it should be together (combo wise) with the previous Slider. Similar to how it is in Gero's Extra
■ 00:45:353 (6) - 228/268 for some zig-zaggish movement maybe?
■ 00:55:703 (2) - Similar above. (Basically: Slider is stronger than Circle, Slider should be NC'd)
■ 01:17:153 (2) - Having this stacked under 1 feels and plays better (for me)
■ 01:21:953 (2) - ^

■ 00:10:703 (3) - etc. I dont think these hitsounds fit at all D:

00:05:603 (3,4) - 00:06:503 (2,3) -

[Extra]
■ 00:05:603 (3,4) - 00:06:503 (2,3) - Not a fan of these, they feel weird to me (I expected movement on these beats)
■ 00:21:353 (3,4) - ^ not as weird as the above ones for some reason, but still something I wanted to mention this
■ 00:22:103 (1,2,3,4) - How about spacing these like 00:31:703 (1,2,3,4) - ?
■ 01:07:404 (2) - Maybe some jumps here? >w<
■

[Habi]
■ 00:05:003 (1) - You could silence this Sliderend
■ Shouldnt the NCs be on 00:12:503 (5) - and 00:14:903 (2) - ?
■ 00:30:803 (5) - How about this rhythm for this short section? To me, it'd feel better that way, since you'd have an opportunity to map 00:31:553 (8) - (which is currently unmapped)
■ 00:38:303 (1) - The NCing from this part on feels weird to me. Is everything the way it is supposed to be? Compare your NCing to pkhg's for example. You might see what I mean.
■ 01:07:553 (6) - Another stacked Circle here? (because strong beats be strong)
■ 01:17:153 (2) - That blanket could be improved :<

[pkhg]
■ 00:44:903 (4) - blanket pls? ;w;
■ 01:07:103 (1,2,3,1) - This is actually the only real spike in your diff and I feel like it's a bit much (comparably) if you take the overlappy-ness in mind. Mind nerfing it a bit?

[Dariano]
■ OD/HP 5

[zzz]
■ I'd put AR 4.5, since we're dealing with 200BPM here

■ 01:19:553 (1) - That Slider (pause) Slider feels kinda awkward for me. Is there no way around that for you?

[Easy]
■ All of the following have a 1.1 DS to 1.2 DS increase. If you can, move them slightly to be in range of around 1.15 DS at least

■ 00:12:953 (3) - I dont think that the redtick use is neccessary and/or good here. How about this instead?

■ 00:28:103 (5) - Similar thing here, it feels rather weird to me. How about this instead? (1 and 2 are changed as well)

■ Add a Circle on 00:32:603 - and move the Slider to 00:32:903 - ? Supporting the beat as opposed to the vocals (which may seem sudden for an unexperienced player) sounds like a better idea to me
(Also, let me push a small example in here: You preferred the beats over the vocals on 00:58:103 (1) - as well)

Fatfan Kolek

589 posts

Joined January 2013

Fatfan Kolek 2015-05-16T17:27:33+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[Kolek]
■ I'd say that AR9.2 would be more than enough. AR9.5 seems too high I think it should be fine, because of the other Extras. It brings more variety for the playerbase that like to play high AR.

■ 00:11:003 (4,5,6) - Not a big fan of these, as you have to slow your movement down while still in a, basically, straight line. I'd be okay if it was after a direction change (since you'd have to slow down to change the direction anyway), but since it's straight, the player might slow down too early (missing 5) or too late (missing 6).
Some equalized spacing would be great. Equalized! :3
■ I think the NC's should be on 00:36:503 (2) - 's kind of Sliders, as the original sound starts there. 00:36:803 (1) - also feels more like it should be together (combo wise) with the previous Slider. Similar to how it is in Gero's Extra Yeah lol, dumb me. Fixed
■ 00:45:353 (6) - 228/268 for some zig-zaggish movement maybe? I like the current state.
■ 00:55:703 (2) - Similar above. (Basically: Slider is stronger than Circle, Slider should be NC'd) Yarp, dumb me strikes again. Fixed!
■ 01:17:153 (2) - Having this stacked under 1 feels and plays better (for me) Mmh, wouldn't change much. D: I leave it like that. :3
■ 01:21:953 (2) - ^ ^

■ 00:10:703 (3) - etc. I dont think these hitsounds fit at all D: Gero made the hitsounds, not me. :p Anyways, I think they're fine!

Thanks for the mod!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Yusuke - V.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57728
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 503,88103
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:V
TitleUnicode:Ｖ
Artist:Yusuke
ArtistUnicode:遊助
Creator:Gero
Version:Fatfan Kolek's Extra
Source:ポケットモンスター ＸＹ
Tags:[ Zzz ] Dariano pkhg HabiHolic Fatfan Kolek Irreversible Kamiji 上地 Volt (ボルト) Bolt ボルト V / Jikyuu 850 yen no Santa Claus 時給850円のサンタクロース TV Size TVサイズ Pokémon the Series: XY Pokemon Pocket Monsters XY エックスワイ （エックスワイ） (ExWye) Nintendo GAME FREAK J-Pop Jpop ジェイポップ TVアニメ
BeatmapID:535278
BeatmapSetID:224136

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.3
ApproachRate:9.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-05-16T20:14:08+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

[pkhg]
■ 00:44:903 (4) - blanket pls? ;w; please
■ 01:07:103 (1,2,3,1) - This is actually the only real spike in your diff and I feel like it's a bit much (comparably) if you take the overlappy-ness in mind. Mind nerfing it a bit? i think its fine

thanks

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2015-05-16T23:01:02+00:00

Fixed 1, changed 2, didn't change 3 (because well, I think it's crazy enough)
http://puu.sh/hPTbY/1a758435dd.txt

About the drum-hitnormal, my diff is the only one which uses it.. currently asking around if it's unrankable or not, but somehow my technique doeeesn't work that good if it's not completely silenced.. that's why.

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2015-05-18T07:52:29+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[General]
■ I think it'd be better if you'd change [ zzz ] to [_zzz_], as the search function will see these tags as [, zzz, ] (basically not as one thing). To show the problem, try to search for Cherry Blossom's maps. Example of a different, but underscored name
■ Same goes for Fatfan_Kolek Fixed ^

■ I dont think that blank hits are rankable, are they? -> drum-hitnormal2.wav, normal-hitnormal100.wav
I havent seen any before, so Im kinda confused by that. Check Irreversible's post.

[Extra]
■ 00:05:603 (3,4) - 00:06:503 (2,3) - Not a fan of these, they feel weird to me (I expected movement on these beats) Fixed in another way.
■ 00:21:353 (3,4) - ^ not as weird as the above ones for some reason, but still something I wanted to mention this Same as above.
■ 00:22:103 (1,2,3,4) - How about spacing these like 00:31:703 (1,2,3,4) - ? A huge jump here doesn't hurts imo.
■ 01:07:404 (2) - Maybe some jumps here? >w<
■

[Easy]
■ All of the following have a 1.1 DS to 1.2 DS increase. If you can, move them slightly to be in range of around 1.15 DS at least Fixed.

■ 00:12:953 (3) - I dont think that the redtick use is neccessary and/or good here. How about this instead?
I want to follow the vocal

■ 00:28:103 (5) - Similar thing here, it feels rather weird to me. How about this instead? (1 and 2 are changed as well)
The same reason, sorry but I won't change them.

■ Add a Circle on 00:32:603 - and move the Slider to 00:32:903 - ? Supporting the beat as opposed to the vocals (which may seem sudden for an unexperienced player) sounds like a better idea to me No way.
(Also, let me push a small example in here: You preferred the beats over the vocals on 00:58:103 (1) - as well) Yes, because following vocals all the time is kinda repetitive and boring so another kind of variation is always good.

Updated ~

Just waiting for @HabiHolic.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-05-18T07:57:35+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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368,152,65753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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92,356,68153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,140,68903,1,4,0:0:0:0:
412,208,69053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,232,70103,6,0,L|88:316,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,380,70403,2,0,L|239:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,70703,2,0,P|413:202|459:140,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,120,71153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,104,71303,6,0,L|220:184,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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140,56,71903,2,0,P|204:20|296:56,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,336,72803,2,0,L|468:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,108,73103,6,0,P|272:96|212:152,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,180,74303,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,300,74453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,56,77903,1,2,0:3:0:0:
320,56,78053,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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104,176,79403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Gero

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Gero 2015-05-18T07:58:36+00:00

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ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2015-05-18T20:40:21+00:00

o.o

[General]
Hitsounds are too soft... sometimes this is like does not feel xD

[easy]
gero... por qué es tan aburrido este easy D:, las esquinas de los sliders no están siguiento la música ._.

[normal]
00:50:003 (2) - waaa, why this flow :S ... why dont add a repeat?

(remember fix spacing)

[extra]

00:05:453 (2) - imo, is more natural if stack over (3)
00:35:903 (1,2,3,1,2) - okay, this is difficult to read bc brown and pink looks a bit similars... idk if you want to change the color combo order for avoid this. (espero que los qat no se peguen de este patron >_<)
01:02:903 (1,2,3) - dat wifi pattern (?) jajaja

[Fatfan Kolek's Extra]

00:54:503 (5,6) - wath? this jump is weird... why not try stack (5) over (6)?
Combos feel too longs in some seccion. I want to suggest NC in 00:59:303 (8) - 01:08:903 (8) - 01:13:703 (5) - (may be in other places also, but well, i think you will choose better )

[Irre's extra]

00:11:153 (5) - mm.. why not place for get same spacing in this jump? (feels a bit werid for me):
To 3.5x of DS
01:13:703 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol, this is very troll (the natural flow is making a "zigzag" to right-left-right-left... but 01:13:853 (2,1) - are both to right side )

Good look!

Gero

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Gero 2015-05-18T21:07:19+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
o.o

[General]
Hitsounds are too soft... sometimes this is like does not feel xD But I like them :<

[easy]
gero... por qué es tan aburrido este easy D:, las esquinas de los sliders no están siguiento la música ._. Si siguen la música, solo que los ritmos que he usado son muy simples también que la easy sea vieja tampoco ayuda mucho xD

[normal]
00:50:003 (2) - waaa, why this flow :S ... why dont add a repeat? You know, Zzz is following only the music at the background and I bet that he wanna keep the consistency in the whole part.

(remember fix spacing)

[extra]
00:05:453 (2) - imo, is more natural if stack over (3) You're right, Fixed.
00:35:903 (1,2,3,1,2) - okay, this is difficult to read bc brown and pink looks a bit similars... idk if you want to change the color combo order for avoid this. (espero que los qat no se peguen de este patron >_<) Is not that hard, I asked for a lot testplays before and they passed this kind of pattern without problems so I think it's fine.
01:02:903 (1,2,3) - dat wifi pattern (?) jajaja I know right xD
Good look!

Waiting for @Irreversible and @Fatfan Kolek.

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Irreversible

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Irreversible 2015-05-18T21:12:42+00:00

Fixed second one, it had a bad flow yeah. But first one no.

Fatfan Kolek

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Fatfan Kolek 2015-05-18T21:13:25+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Fatfan Kolek's Extra]
00:54:503 (5,6) - wath? this jump is weird... why not try stack (5) over (6)? No, It's there for emphasize purposes
Combos feel too longs in some seccion. I want to suggest NC in 00:59:303 (8) - 01:08:903 (8) - 01:13:703 (5) - (may be in other places also, but well, i think you will choose better ) Should be ok, I guess. D:

Sorry, no changes, still thank you! :3

Gero

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Gero 2015-05-18T21:34:56+00:00

Everything should be fine to go now.

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pkhg

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pkhg 2015-05-19T00:08:34+00:00

fixed a few hitsounds >.<

http://puu.sh/hSps0/59cfb5ee4e.rar

Gero

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Gero 2015-05-19T05:57:53+00:00

I forgot to write something, already updated again.

ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2015-05-19T18:32:51+00:00

Gero wrote:
You know, Zzz is following only the music at the background and I bet that he wanna keep the consistency in the whole part.
Lo digo es por el flow, no por el ritmo como tal xD

Is not that hard, I asked for a lot testplays before and they passed this kind of pattern without problems so I think it's fine.
Seguro no lo jugaron desde el editor , el patron no es dificil de jugar, solo digo que los colores no ayudan, hehehe.

Good luck with rank o/

Yauxo

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Yauxo 2015-05-22T14:33:11+00:00

Actually, did Dariano and zzz even read the tiny mod?

Gero

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Gero 2015-05-22T15:23:49+00:00

Yes, they told me that I could make the changes since it was a minor stuff.