Kagamine Ren wrote:

oh 6 diffs x.x sorry ><

[Normal]

• 
  00:31:973 (2,3) - blanket well yeah
  00:50:553 (2,3) - ^ ^
  sry for nazi mod x.x

[Hard]

• 
  00:20:747 (2,3) - this two crtl+G fits the flow more imo hmm,sorry i like current flow
  00:39:328 (5,6) - i think it's better to make them parallel cuz 00:39:328 (5,1) - are parallel nice! fixed :3
  00:46:876 (3,4) - make a blanket? yes
  01:52:489 (4) - move a little right yes!

[Insane]

• 
  00:06:811 (2,3) - move to 219,300 to make them look better with 00:05:263 (2,4) - cool
  00:52:876 (2,3) - blanket well OK
  01:03:134 (3) - it's better to make this jump bigger,i advise to move it to around 78,93 nope

nice mapset,sorry for short mod x.x

Rare wrote:

m4mのやつ

[Normal]
00:23:650 (2) - 単発のほうが好きだけどこのままでもOK 僕はこっちが好きだからとりあえずこのままで！
01:18:618 (1) - 始点にfinish欲しい 付けました～～
01:34:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - この7つの単発Normalにしては多いから心配。他の人にも言われたら考えてみて。 次言われたら直しまっす！
01:47:457 (2) - Clapは始点じゃなくて終点のほうがいいかなあと思う。 入れ替えました

[Hard]
00:23:650 (1) - 自分的にはこれがベスト https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2725791 神。
00:24:037 (1) - clapとfinishはちょっとうるさく感じちゃうからclap外したいところ。 OK
01:02:940 (5) - 始点にclap欲しい。 OK

全然指摘できませんでした。

Smoothie World wrote:

M4M ^^

[Insane]
00:19:973 (1) - Keep evenly in between 00:19:199 (3,4) fixed :3
01:09:521 (1,2) - Make parallel / neaten up? no,i kike it
01:52:102 (3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit sloppy but it might just be me. Plays awkward though. hmm... a little changed

[Hard]
00:15:715 (2,3,1) - Spacing doesn't look right. move (3) left a bit OK
00:58:682 (1,2) - Fix blanket OK~
01:39:328 (2,3,4) - Make this a perfect triangle pattern 01:39:715 (3,4,5,6,1) - I want to give priority to this form

Good luck

-Chata- wrote:

どうしただろう・・・思わず聴いてしまう・・・ あなたも運命に導かれていますね~( ˘ω˘ )~

※途中までは昨日書いたものだから変なのがいるかも

[b]
From M4M

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

1. Artist : 璃皇＆聖夜 Romanised Artist : Riou&Seiya Sourceはこことここ 変えました！
2. Combo Colorを255,255,255の完全な白にするのはアウト 灰色にした～～～
3. どうしようもないんだが最後のスピンの02:03:715ここの音が5％なのに気になる。 BAT様に怒られたら直します;o;
4. それ以上にどうでもいいことなんだけどsoft-hitclap14のノイズが気になる これが理由でアンランクしたらいやだから近いヒットサウンドに変えました

[Hard]

1. Hardまで見たけどこっちは何もない

ヨッシャ

[Insane]

1. 00:20:166 (1,2,) - この2つのNCを変えてみませんか？ OK
2. 00:23:940 (1) - このサークルの配置がやらしい。読みづらいし00:24:037 (2) - ここに重ねることをオススメ OK
3. 01:19:876 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - この部分が気になって仕方がないんだけど、ここだけ非常に難しいし切れるから難易度バランスを考えれば配置を変えたほうがいいと思う 難しいか…? まあ簡単そうな感じにしました

このへんかのぅ・・6時間位見た気がする・・・ oh.......

Good luck!

Adol Christin wrote:

Hi from alacat's queue, for M4M.

You and your partners' maps are really good. I found there's few things to write. Therefore I'll focus on Nazi more than other things.

Normal

I prefer straight sliders for 1/2 beats unless blanket is needed.

1. 01:42:037 (4,5,1) - You can slightly improved this blanket. OK
2. 01:55:973 (1,2) - ^ ^

Hard

1. 00:02:941 (1,3) - Blanket can be improved. OK
2. 00:03:908 (3,1,2) - I prefer not use small distance like this. Especially the next couple of stuffs are in the same distance and different rhythm. mmmm,I'm taking the balance by the NC. sorry no change
3. 00:07:005 (3,1,2) - Same ^
4. 00:09:134 (1,3) - Blanket can be improved. yeah :3
5. 00:11:457 (2,3) - ^ ^
6. 00:19:779 (1,2) - ^ ^
7. 00:23:650 (1,2) - Suggest not use this in hard. A bit too tricky. A 3/4 slider with slowed velocity would be nicer. i'll fix if then been pointed out
8. 00:40:102 (1,2,3) - Suggest slightly move the 3's tail (and next slider) to right hand side or downwards. Current one looks a bit unbalanced in distance (In player's vision, not the hitpoint distance). nice
9. 00:46:876 (3,4,5) - Blanket can be improved. kk
10. 01:07:586 (1) - Suggest changing this to reverse slider, which is the same as the previous two. no, i like this

That's all my mod. I'll shoot a star for you. Good luck for ranked!

Smoothie World wrote:

M4M ^^

[iMage's Insane]
00:08:553 (1,1,1) - Not a fan of this overlapping but its a small thing
00:12:231 (1,5) - Bad overlap
00:26:940 (1,2) - Swap these. Bad flow the way it is now.
00:27:715 (1,2,3,4) - To my knowledge these sliders can't be covering the notes like that fixed
01:01:586 (1,4) - Bad overlap
01:44:166 (2,3,1) - ^
01:52:102 (1,1) - Blanket?

Good luck

-Chata- wrote:

どうしただろう・・・思わず聴いてしまう・・・

※途中までは昨日書いたものだから変なのがいるかも

[b]
From M4M

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[iMage's Insane]

1. Insaneって名前してるし難易度からしてAR8はあわないと思う。AR 8.5~8.8くらいがオススメ fixed
2. 00:13:779 (1,2) - ここは1/4のリズムより強い音があるからそれについていこう。もしこのままにするならSpacingを考えなおしてほしい sliderとかにしました～
3. 00:22:489 (1,1) - どちらかはNC消すべきかな。そして00:24:037 (5) - ここに新たにNCをつけてほしい fixed
4. 00:27:715 (1,2,3,4) - これちょっと危ないよ。スライダーの動線にノートを置いて隠してはいけないって韓国のCriteriaにあったけど、英語版ではないので確信はない。 fixed
5. 01:19:102 (2) - Out of spacing fixed...?これでいいのかな
6. 01:39:715 (1) - 01:52:102 (1) - このようなリピートスライダーは今どきじゃ良くないと思うよ(・。・; これ変えたらこの譜面の個性なくなるし、時代を考えたからこそこのリピートを使ったとも言える(?) まぁ今までのスタイルとは少し変わったところを見せたいのでno changeってことです！

このへんかのぅ・・6時間位見た気がする・・・

Good luck!

Adol Christin wrote:

Hi from alacat's queue, for M4M.

iMage's Insane

Ummm... It's an interesting style. Really suitable for this song. haha this is my special mapping style ☆(ゝω・)v

1. 00:17:650 (1) - 01:39:715 (1) - 01:52:102 (1) - Many people don't like 1/2 reverse sliders with more than 2 turning points. no changed. it is important on this diff...
   (I see you declined this before, but don't know why. I don't understand Japanese. xD)
2. 00:17:650 (1,1) - 01:39:715 (1,1) - If you don't accept the previous one, the distance between slider and next circle is a bit too far away, which is not expected to be. Maybe keep them the same as this one: 01:52:102 (1,1) .

That's all my mod. I'll shoot a star for you. Good luck for ranked!

-Chata- wrote:

[Destiny]

1. バランスと難易度的にAR+0.2
   BPM150台で9以上にするのはきついかもです…
2. 1.5xの倍速があるけど正直New comboはあてにならないんだよな・・・Custom combo colorで赤系の色を使ってほしい。
   keep
3. 00:24:231 (7) - repeat回数を一回減らしてください。100ります
   OK!
4. 01:37:005 (1) - ２マス下へ
   OK!

[/b]

このへんかのぅ・・6時間位見た気がする・・・

Good luck!

Mei wrote:

=.=

• 00:54:811 (3) - missed vocal here 00:55:005 , so i dont think use a 3/4 slider here is a good choice, try use 1/2 slider

• 00:03:908 (3,4) - too close, try this
  
  image

  
  
  00:06:037 (1,2) - same ^

• ar+0.5?
  
  01:31:199 remove this green line
  
  00:04:682 (1) - move to x171 y342 make spacing consistence
  
  00:06:811 (2) - ^?
  
  00:39:134 (4) - remove this and try
  
  image

  

• 00:12:231 (1) - spinner too long, reduce to 00:13:779
  
  01:33:908 (1,1) - ^ so you can remove 01:36:618 (1) - and add note at 01:37:005
  
  01:46:682 (1) - ^ , but i dont know how to fix ;w; maybe remap this part

Mei wrote:

a little late |-` )

[iMage]

• 00:03:908 (3,4) - too close, try this
  
  image

  
  
  00:06:037 (1,2) - same ^

good map but kimoi

Mei wrote:

a little late |-` ) no no :3 congrats Laptop Restoration


[hard]

• ar+0.5? OK!
  
  01:31:199 remove this green line fixed~
  
  00:04:682 (1) - move to x171 y342 make spacing consistence use 0.8x~~
  
  00:06:811 (2) - ^? ^
  
  00:39:134 (4) - remove this and try super nice
  
  image

  

good map but kimoi

Mei wrote:

add tag 平川大輔 and 大川透 then i will bubble

1. Artistは公式サイトを参照してみると"&"の前後にスペース要らないようなので"璃皇&聖夜"こうましょう。Romanisedはこのままでもいいです。
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:12:037 (5,1) - ここ間隔一緒だけどリズム変わるところなのでNC変更しておきましょう。
2. 00:13:392 (1,1) - 短い方のスライダーの進路がほぼ隠されているので良くないです。右側に少しずらしましょう。
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:50:553 - ここの歌詞なんて言ってるか何回聞いてもわからない

1. 01:02:747 (1) - 初心者には取りづらいリズムなので01:02:553 - ここから1/1スライダー、01:03:328 - ここにnoteを置くリズムにしましょう。
   

Guy wrote:

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Artistは公式サイトを参照してみると"&"の前後にスペース要らないようなので"璃皇&聖夜"こうましょう。Romanisedはこのままでもいいです。 了解！！！
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:50:553 - ここの歌詞なんて言ってるか何回聞いてもわからない "カトレア"なのら

準備ができたらよんでください

IamKwaN wrote:

Hello, disqualified upon request by Guy because of the tag inconsistency.

On top of that, I have also done checking the whole map thoroughly to avoid repeating DQ, a couple of issues are found and I am afraid that it is a must to get them fixed:

1. 01:33:908 (1,1) - The recovery time is inadequate in Easy, and it is somewhat quite hard to catch the rhythm correctly because the post-spinner-object is a circle on the third white tick following the second syllable of the vocal. Therefore, deleting 01:37:005 (1) - is highly recommended. OK!
2. Metadata, the unicode artist specifically, is incorrect. Checking the official website and copying the artist, the '＆' in '璃皇＆聖夜' is an unicode one. oh... fixed!

It is supposed to be a quick fix, good luck with the requalification!