Neil Leo wrote:

From my modding queue, as you requested:

Ordinary Modding

General:

1. Your kiai time is too short to have an emphasis on this part. okay~

Kantan:

1. 00:02:787 (4) - Don, the pitch is low here like on (3)

Futsuu:

1. 00:40:521 (2) - Remove and move 00:40:756 (3) to 00:40:639 as a beat clearly falls into the blue line
2. 00:39:818 (82) - Remove
3. 00:31:381 (59) - Don, the pitch is low here and move to 00:31:615
4. 00:16:381 (19) - Don, and move to 00:16:615, same as above
5. 00:03:256 (6,10) - Remove

Muzukashii:

1. 00:01:380 (4,6) - Ctrl+G
2. 00:04:193 (11,14) - Don, the pitch is low here
3. 00:10:170 - Add note here and make (4) kat, then remove 00:10:756 (6) to have some break
4. 00:13:568 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - Do rhythm similar to above (and you may do it on some parts)
5. 00:40:521 (2) - Remove and move 00:40:756 (3) to 00:40:639 as a beat clearly falls into the blue line

Oni:

1. 00:01:380 (4) - Kat, similar to Muzukashii
2. 00:03:256 (8) - ^
3. 00:03:725 (9) - Don
4. 00:06:420 (22) - Kat hmm.. ddk is feel good to me
5. Other than that, Oni is well-mapped.

Inner Oni:

1. 00:12:631 - Add don and make 00:12:515 (20) kat
2. 00:16:381 - Add don
3. 00:31:381 - ^

That's all, good luck on mapping!

PatZar wrote:

eeq

untungnya gw masih TAMFAN

• For all diffs

1. 00:24:584 - Move the inherit point to 00:24:350 -
   
   
   Kantan
2. 00:16:849 (9) - remove the k
3. 00:31:849 (25) - ^^
   
   

Inner00:00:444 - to 00:03:490 - try to do a combination of D D D K, something like this 00:09:350 (1) - Add finish00:14:272 (31) - change to D00:16:851 (46) - Add finish00:28:921 (118) - Change to D00:29:155 (120) - Change to K00:29:272 (121) - Change to D00:31:732 (136) - Change to K00:33:491 (147) - Change to D

Alepat wrote:

Hi surono~~ for chat req, I'll do the best I can

• For all diffs

1. 00:24:584 - Move the inherit point to 00:24:350 -
   
   
   Kantan
2. 00:16:849 (9) - remove the k no~ not fits if remove with song, but i change D xD
3. 00:31:849 (25) - ^^

^

Futsuu00:39:350 (79) - remove the finish (?) hmm no, maybe 00:39:818 (80) - move this xD, but thx for remints meh

Muzu00:22:240 (52) - change to D00:24:115 (60) - ^^00:39:350 (120) - remove the finish (?) no~

Oni00:09:350 (1) - Add finish 00:16:850 (37) - ^^00:24:232 (73) - delete00:24:350 (73) - Add Finish00:31:850 (109) - ^^

Inner00:00:444 - to 00:03:490 - try to do a combination of D D D K, something like this 00:09:350 (1) - Add finish00:14:272 (31) - change to D00:16:851 (46) - Add finish00:28:921 (118) - Change to D hmm kdkdk no gud, i am change to dkkdk xD00:29:155 (120) - Change to K ^00:29:272 (121) - Change to D hmm i see kdkkd, okay i thinking this xD00:31:732 (136) - Change to K 00:33:491 (147) - Change to D

That's all... good bye Surono~~~~~~

Warfu wrote:

Timing request... ? -w-
I don't know why so much timing points in the beginning, maybe because the offset is not "real"... it should be -31 but you can't put the first circle in a minus-time.

For now, let's do this:
First Timing Point: BPM: 128.000 | Offset: 0
Second Timing Point: BPM: 128.000 | Offset 440

I think the rhythm fits better like that.

Mrriichi wrote:

Hello pm

[Kantan]
00:39:625 non finish is better for Newbee. DONE

[Hutsuu]
00:22:515~00:23:921 DONE
put them Finish is better. Before Kiai, players want to feel Exciting. DO..NE

[Muzukashii]
00:00:000~00:03:531
I feel these sounds were same...its better change ka to don.

00:04:468
on the same. Don is better.

00:16:421 00:31:421
102→220feeles good.

00:30:250~00:32:125
It seems bad because theres no 1/16...

01211122,
→00001020111022002020,

00:38:453
112 -> 221 I feel better.

I think its not bad more difficult in Kiai than others...its better thing adding 1/16 into Kiai.

[Oni]
noting to say...
[Inner Oni]
Ditto.

Thank you for reading my Bad English. NO PROBLUME

DarkVortex wrote:

Mod on request

[Kantan]
00:20:875 (13) - change to k due to the higher pitch
00:35:875 (29) - ^

[Futsuu]
00:23:921 (37) - The finisher here is a liittle confusing in a futsuu. Make it a k
00:37:046 - Add k, the gap feels like there is something missing

[Muzukashii]
00:07:632 (23) - Plays weird, maybe add a d here 00:07:515 - thx
00:27:671 (73) - k? just for different hit xD

[Oni]
00:31:421 (104,105,106) - kkd instead
00:38:453 (137,138,139,140,141,142) - kkddd k sounds better imo as there are something like doubles in the background woh thx

[Inner Oni]
00:23:453 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - how about a dkdkk ddddk pattern here? The combination with the double doesn't fit that well imo nice

That's all I found, good luck with your mapset!

1. first of all, the offset is COMPLETELY WRONG ;w; it should be -10.
2. itu preview time, green lines-nya jgn lupa di snap
3. kiainya start di 00:24:365 -

10:07 10nya: yo?
10:08 10nya: gw dlnya kemaren sih
10:08 10nya: ..coba gw redl deh
10:08 10nya: or
10:08 10nya: z
10:09 10nya: yg offsetnya jd -10
10:09 10nya: mungin gr2 new mp3 kali ya
10:09 10nya: nah udah sip
10:10 10nya: diupload apanya?
10:10 10nya: tar
10:11 10nya: eh yg lama apa yg baru
10:11 10nya: gw udah apdet td wkwk
10:11 10nya: ooh udah pas kok
10:12 10nya: eeh bentar
10:12 10nya: 260 oke kok
10:49 10nya: lanjut kok wkkwk udah offset sm mp3nya?
10:49 10nya: tadi mau gw ajak irc aja
10:50 10nya: 260
10:50 10nya: imo
10:50 10nya: soalnya gw juga kesel sendi
10:50 10nya: ri
10:51 10nya: selalu -10 atau +10 kalo nemuin offfset wkwk
10:51 10nya: makanya nda begitu yakin _:3
10:54 10nya: tergantung __:3 biasanya selalu meleset wkwk
10:54 *10nya is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/688144 #Litevlow - Reworked (Let's Get Beat) [Kantan]]
10:54 10nya: preview timenya ga di 250 aja?
10:56 10nya: gap kantan ke futsuunya agak jauh ya ._.
10:57 10nya: wow pay attention juga ya
10:57 10nya: gw mah bodo wkwkw
10:58 10nya: anyway
10:59 *10nya is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/688144 #Litevlow - Reworked (Let's Get Beat) [Kantan]]
10:59 10nya: 00:10:562 - move ke 00:10:796 - biar ngikutin beatnya
11:00 10nya: 00:11:500 - yg ini pindahin ke 00:11:265 -
11:00 10nya: ada sekitar break 1/1 kok jadi gpp buat kantan
11:01 10nya: pls wkwkwk
11:03 10nya: 00:12:671 - ini off banget, ga ngikutin apa2 imo ._. pindahin aja ke 00:12:203 - , ada awalan piano disitu
11:04 10nya: 00:14:312 (6,7) - sama kea awalan tadi
11:05 10nya: yg 6 dimundurin ke red tick, yg 7 dimajuin ke red tick
11:06 10nya: 00:16:421 - yg ini juga ditaroh di 00:15:953 -
11:09 10nya: 00:18:062 (10,11) - sama D:
11:10 10nya: 00:25:562 (18,19) - sama
11:11 10nya: 00:29:312 (22,23) - 
11:11 10nya: sama xD
11:12 10nya: he emang daritadi lu open futsuu apa gimana akwkawkaw
11:12 10nya: 00:33:062 (26,27) - same
11:13 10nya: wkwkw santai mz
11:13 10nya: saya post forum aja kali ya ._.
11:13 Surono: jgn
11:13 10nya: ooh okeoke haha
11:19 Surono: aaa
11:19 10nya: lool welcome back
11:20 Surono: kwkwkw anjirrr
11:20 Surono: dah dah lanjut, kehasut para manusia alien namek
11:21 10nya: futsuu
11:21 Surono: oke
11:22 10nya: gapnya jauh ._. futsuunya banyak bgt 1/2nya haha
11:22 Surono: ._. ..........
11:22 10nya: well lets see what we can do
11:23 Surono: ._` /
11:24 10nya: 00:10:093 - coba disini di remove, terus 00:11:031 - majuin ke 00:10:796 -
11:24 10nya: soalnya current punya lo kea banyak bgt xD
11:24 10nya: kasian futsuu playernya
11:24 10nya: jd mending dikasih break
11:24 Surono: weh weh
11:24 Surono: di DT lemes
11:24 10nya: i know how dat feels tapi kan ga semua bisa taiko gituu 
11:25 Surono: iya iya, well situ ahli map hueeeeeeee aku baru terjun 2 minggu <(``)
11:25 10nya: im not tbh kalo taiko gw dulu seringnya muzu oni doang akwakw
11:26 10nya: 00:11:734 - gamau d aja? soalnya beatnya turun disini
11:26 Surono: wah wah pro, aku yg maen keras kek robot gedek, salah2 gini ngemapnya..
11:26 Surono: wah pendengaran telinga patrik star nih.. patzar... hebat hebat, lanjut
11:27 10nya: 00:14:078 - diremove aja, gaada apa2 disini plus note selanjutnya 1/2, kasian playernya _:3
11:28 10nya: 00:17:593 - remove, udah rame banget patternya, dikasih break aja
11:28 10nya: 00:19:234 - sama disini d aja, soalnya beatnya turun 
11:29 Surono: yo
11:29 10nya: 00:21:343 - remove, kasian playernya
11:29 10nya: 00:24:390 - remove, tbh 1/2 terus big D itu agak susah dikejar imo
11:29 10nya: big D
11:29 10nya: ..
11:30 10nya: nvm
11:30 10nya: 00:25:093 - remove juga, kasian playernya
11:30 Surono: this about kasian ;w; oke i am monster
11:30 Surono: okay, dat kasian staphh
11:30 Surono: xD
11:31 10nya: 00:29:078 - remove, gw tau sih mau ngikutin pianonya, tapi note selanjutnya 1/2 jadi
11:31 10nya: kasian
11:31 10nya: HEHE
11:31 10nya: 00:32:828 - 
11:31 10nya: same
11:31 Surono: hue
11:32 10nya: 00:37:281 - 00:37:984 - remove
11:32 10nya: diakhir ini patternnya lebih mirip muzu
11:32 10nya: q-q
11:32 10nya: 00:38:921 - remove, ini pattern muzu
11:34 Surono: huehh
11:35 10nya: kalo banyak 1/2 itu biasanya untuk muzu~
11:35 10nya: futsuu itu ada tapi diiikiiit bgt
11:35 Surono: oh.. ada batas
11:35 10nya: iyap :D
11:35 Surono: wah thx infonya lho kak kwkwkw
11:35 10nya: kalo Kantan, biasanya cuma di garis putih semua
11:35 10nya: terus banya kosong
11:35 10nya: banyak*
11:35 Surono: yup.. nubi for
11:35 Surono: and #1 with DT Ha eR www
11:36 10nya: woles, gw juga baru kok mapping taiko
11:36 Surono: map gini bisa ranked? kwkwkwkwk well ngeri ngeri kwkw
11:37 10nya: with a lot of works i think
11:37 10nya: muzu~
11:37 Surono: well buang aja.. hueh ngemap suatu lagu pertama well ga ada problem.. trus ad ayg lebih tau.. ya pengen hue hue
11:37 Surono: kwkwk strike dat wurd first, okay muzu
11:37 10nya: wkwkw xD
11:38 10nya: muzu ini sebenernya rame gpp, tapi jgn terlalu rame
11:38 Surono: yah kk, maen gem ginian juga baru brapa waktu.. dan juga ngerasa sepi aja ni gem..
11:38 10nya: kea diawal, sebenernya bisa dikasih break
11:38 Surono: oke, plis recommend~
11:38 10nya: 00:02:125 - remove
11:38 10nya: tbh jadi aga keren
11:38 10nya: *plak*
11:39 Surono: xD
11:39 Surono: kwkwkw
11:39 10nya: 00:11:031 - remove
11:39 Surono: demn kok hebat bener ;w; pake jingset apa?//??
11:40 10nya: 00:13:140 - remove soalnya udh rame banget
11:40 10nya: 00:14:781 - remove
11:40 10nya: ooh makasih owo"
11:40 Surono: demn ternyata kk care dan lembut yah :3333
11:41 10nya: udah lama modding sih hehehe ___:3
11:41 Surono: kwkwkw langsung di jawab 0.1
11:41 Surono: demn ngrei
11:41 10nya: well gaada alasan buat rude kan? wkwk
11:41 Surono: ahh masa, jelas taco bisa ;w; weh dipikir2 mode tako tinggal mencet
11:41 10nya: tbh seriusan
11:41 10nya: gue gabisa taiko dulu
11:41 10nya: wkwkw
11:41 Surono: @_@
11:41 Surono: rudenya lembut kogs
11:42 10nya: 00:16:890 - remove
11:42 10nya: ada gitu ya xD
11:42 Surono: ...
11:42 10nya: 00:18:531 - remove
11:43 10nya: 00:20:640 - disini d terus 00:20:875 - k lebih pas 
11:43 Surono: yo, ini mods bermanfaat.. well.. orang luar2 kok ga berkualitas ;w;
11:44 10nya: 00:21:812 - remove. sebenernya note ini harusnya ada di 00:21:695 - malahan wkwk tapi aneh nanti patternnya, jd remove aja
11:45 Surono: dk gpp?
11:46 10nya: jgn
11:46 10nya: sebenernya kalo muzu itu ddk atau kkd itu ga boleh
11:46 10nya: ddd / kkk aja
11:47 10nya: kalo dd gapapa sih
11:47 10nya: 00:24:156 - remove
11:47 Surono: yup dd
11:48 10nya: 00:26:031 - remove
11:48 10nya: 00:29:781 - re
11:48 10nya: move
11:48 10nya: 00:33:531 - remove
11:49 Surono: yo lanjut
11:49 10nya: 00:35:640 - sama 00:35:875 - lebih bagus dk
11:49 10nya: d k
11:49 Surono: iya sih map santai, keknya aku kurang kasian ;w;
11:49 10nya: 00:36:812 - remove
11:49 10nya: kadang godaan ngemap di low bpm ya gitu xD
11:50 Surono: wah wah kebaca pikirannya xD banyak hitsound lagu sieh kkww
11:51 10nya: oni
11:51 Surono: oke
11:52 10nya: udah bagus kok o.o
11:52 10nya: 00:37:515 - remove
11:52 10nya: 00:39:390 - remove
11:53 Surono: oh a break =w=
11:53 10nya: 00:40:445 - remove 
11:53 Surono: okay ke inner ini?
11:53 10nya: iitu oni
11:53 10nya: yg remove2
11:53 Surono: weh remove..
11:53 Surono: iya2..
11:54 10nya: 00:40:914 - tambah k
11:54 Surono: trus stream di akhir ? xD
11:54 10nya: yah gapapa sih imo
11:54 Surono: weh...
11:57 10nya: innernya udah bagus kok
11:57 10nya: tbh gw malah gabisa mod diatas muzu wkwk
11:57 10nya: tapi udah cocok aja kok, since inner oni kan emang gitu
11:57 10nya:  /_/
11:57 Surono: dah jadi konsisten diff?
11:57 10nya: yep
11:58 Surono: okeay xD savelucky yea kk~ membantu banget arhhgg

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  Good?

• 
  
  00:06:339 - add k because,follow the back sound.
  
  00:07:280 - ^
  
  00:07:746 - This slider=really need?
  
  00:38:228 - change to d.more fit imo.try please~

• 
  
  OD3.5→3 & I think spread is bad imo. (Futsuu<<Muzukashii)↓
  
  00:00:238 - 00:07:278 - http://puu.sh/hO7rJ.jpg (Futsuu)
  
  00:00:238 - 00:07:278 - http://puu.sh/hO7RC.jpg (Muzukashii)
  
  so Futsuu = add notes please .
  
  my suggestion pattern↓
  
  00:00:246 - 00:07:524 - http://puu.sh/hO8n9.jpg
  
  00:07:746 - same as Kantan
  
  00:09:629 - 00:35:633 - somewhere add 1/1 break time imo.
  
  00:40:914 - I don't like 1/4 notes. (Futsuu)

• 
  
  HP+1

• 
  
  HP+0.5. Kantan~Inner Oni=2,3,4,5,6 (good spread)

1. 00:07:750 to 00:09:625 - Maybe add a spinner/drumroll? (applies for all diffs except kantan and futsuu)

1. 00:17:125 - Remove finisher?
2. 00:32:125 - ^

1. 00:13:375 - k
2. 00:17:593 - ^
3. 00:20:875 - ^
4. 00:34:234 - d

1. 00:11:265 - k?
2. 00:17:593 - ^
3. 00:18:765 - ^
4. 00:27:437 - k
5. 00:27:906 - k

1. 00:12:671 - Change pattern to dkd?
2. 00:27:671 - ^
3. 00:34:937 - k
4. 00:37:046 - ^
5. 00:40:562 - ^?

1. 00:13:609 - k
2. 00:17:359 - ^
3. 00:21:109 - ^
4. 00:31:773 - d?
5. 00:39:625 - Change to http://puu.sh/hO9Uq/c25973221e.jpg this instead?

Awesome mapset, GL

1. Good as it is imho. No Major Problems

1. 00:15:484 (15) - d (and maybe 17 too)
   
   
2. 00:26:734 (41) - d
   
   
3. 00:30:484 (50) - Same as with 00:15:484

1. 00:27:906 (74) - k

1. 00:40:328 (148) - I would change it to:
   

1. 00:40:445 (188) - I would remove 188, 191, 193, and make 192 a d.

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Hey, here's that check you wanted xD

d = don
k = katsu
D = Big don
K = Big katsu

Kantan:

1. Good as it is imho. No Major Problems <(`w`)7

Futsuu:

1. 00:15:484 (15) - d (and maybe 17 too) 17 keep k
   
   
2. 00:26:734 (41) - d
   
   
3. 00:30:484 (50) - Same as with 00:15:484 maybe keep k, for different~

Still good imho. Just some inconsistencies that are bugging me.

Muzu:

1. 00:27:906 (74) - k keep

Nice job.

Oni:

1. 00:40:328 (148) - I would change it to:
   

Very fun to play. Could stand to be a little easier, as the easier Oni in the set, but due to the length of the song I think it's fine

Inner Oni:

1. 00:40:445 (188) - I would remove 188, 191, 193, and make 192 a d.

Super hard, but brilliant

Loved the map, glhf with ranking!

10nya wrote:

requested via in-game des

[General]

1. first of all, the offset is COMPLETELY WRONG ;w; it should be -10.
2. itu preview time, green lines-nya jgn lupa di snap
3. kiainya start di 00:24:365 -

kalo udah fix yg ini, bisa poke saya lagi. soalnya ini off banget;;;;;;;;; (kalo bisa poke secepatnya azzz)

1. Why is kiai end time point 00:35:877 ? I think it's wierd.

1. 1/2s are too difficult for beginner player. Main snap divisor should be 1/1 in kantan. I recommend to remap.

1. 00:24:627 (31) D is better. k is too continuous.
2. 00:05:173 Why don't you put k here?

1. 00:02:127 put note here. kick sound.

1. No problem.

1. 00:04:002 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) I think that there is better pattern than kdkdkdkd. Try other pattern.

1. 00:22:752 (15) - why alone? keep your previews patterns 00:14:548 (6,7) - 00:18:298 (10,11) -
2. 00:07:752 (1,1) - too close, It can be confusing for newbies

1. 00:14:783 (11) - move to 00:14:548 - consistency with 00:10:564 (2,3) -
2. 00:18:533 (18) - same here ^move to 00:18:298 -
3. 00:32:595 (47) - delete, where is the rest? to keep consistency with 00:24:627 (31,32) -

1. 00:07:752 - hey!! where is spin? xD but without spin feels better should remove on kantan and futsuu for general pattern
2. 00:21:814 - to weird without note, add a note please

1. 00:07:752 (1) - again? ._.
2. I feel that is more necessary a note here 00:23:806 - than 00:24:041 - It's up to you

1. 00:13:611 (24,25) - where is the rest? delete here is a nice place to add a perfect rest
2. 00:17:361 (47,48) - same here
3. 00:21:111 (69,70) - same ^

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.
[ General]

1. Why is kiai end time point 00:35:877 ? I think it's wierd. okay~ i fix this xD

[ Kantan]

1. 1/2s are too difficult for beginner player. Main snap divisor should be 1/1 in kantan. I recommend to remap. okay

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:24:627 (31) D is better. k is too continuous.
2. 00:05:173 Why don't you put k here?

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:127 put note here. kick sound.

[ Oni]

1. No problem.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:04:002 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) I think that there is better pattern than kdkdkdkd. Try other pattern. okay xD

Good luck.

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hi~~ (mod requested via PM)

[Kantan]

1. 00:22:752 (15) - why alone? keep your previews patterns 00:14:548 (6,7) - 00:18:298 (10,11) - must fix xD
2. 00:07:752 (1,1) - too close, It can be confusing for newbies okay i think this

[Futsuu]

1. 00:14:783 (11) - move to 00:14:548 - consistency with 00:10:564 (2,3) -
2. 00:18:533 (18) - same here ^move to 00:18:298 -
3. 00:32:595 (47) - delete, where is the rest? to keep consistency with 00:24:627 (31,32) -

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:752 - hey!! where is spin? xD but without spin feels better should remove on kantan and futsuu for general pattern aaa forget, sry xD
2. 00:21:814 - to weird without note, add a note please

[Oni]

1. 00:07:752 (1) - again? ._.
2. I feel that is more necessary a note here 00:23:806 - than 00:24:041 - It's up to you

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:13:611 (24,25) - where is the rest? delete here is a nice place to add a perfect rest
2. 00:17:361 (47,48) - same here
3. 00:21:111 (69,70) - same ^

Nice mapset GL

AxelHino wrote:

Here's that mod you requested. Please tell me also what you changed and not changed. i want to make my mods better in the future

[General]
It would be nice to start the preview point in 00:09:627 - it represents the song better imo (since it's also the melody of the kiai time) okay, nice

[Kantan]
00:01:189 (2,4) - delete notes to emphasize the buildup from start to 00:07:752 - . Plus, it's nice to keep it easy and simple during the beginning of a kantan woah, okay
00:32:127 (27) - shouldn't this be a K? ohh i forget xD Change K

[Futsuu]
00:00:720 (2) - delete to emphasize bulidup ok
00:02:127 (4) - change to d. i don't see why this should be a k (and it would be nice to match this part with kantan) woah, ok
00:02:595 (5) - same as 00:00:720 (2) o right
00:05:173 (10) - delete. i like the emphasis but it doesn't really match the previous part and the music itself xD
00:06:814 (15) - change to k. a d ruins the buildup and it doesn't match the music ok~
00:13:845 (9) - delete. feels a little crowded to have a d there. don't forget futsuu players need breaks too ohh my diff xD *DLT
00:28:845 (39) - ^ ^
00:39:158 (60) - ^ ^


[Muzukashii]
00:02:595 (6,8) - change to d. it...doesn't fit with the music ok, right..
00:04:470 (11) - change to k to match the following notes (y)
00:06:931 (20) - delete. keep the beginning simple ok
00:11:970 (8) - delete. crowded and doesn't match the music ok
00:15:720 (21) - ^ ok
00:19:470 (34) - ^ ok
00:23:220 (50,52,53) - i don't think kkd is such a good idea. the jump between futsuu and muzukashii is already big due to the mono-triple notes. simple is best sometimes. @_@
00:26:970 (63) - like 00:11:970 (8) ok
00:34:470 (91) - ^
00:34:939 (94) - change to k. keep the diff jump steady
00:38:689 (108) - ^

the muzukashii already looks like an easy oni, which is sometimes undesirable. better to restrain your mapping to keep a good diff spread

[Oni]
00:05:994 (18) - delete. i don't get why this is a 5 note cluster when the following one is a 3 note cluster
00:41:033 (150) - delete. melody ends at the previous note

your mapping style reminds me so much of mine, i can't give you much pointers if this happens lol xD

[Inner Oni]
00:02:830 (10,11,12) - change to d k d. it feels weird to suddenly change pattern

That's all i guess. the one thing that i'm concerned with is that the muzukashii feels totally overmapped. Pretty nice set I guess~

2015-05-20 04:50 Surono: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700791 #Litevlow - Reworked (Let's Get Beat) [Kantan]]
2015-05-20 04:52 Surono: kantan ga ada problem, dah konsisten lel, kalau futsuu - inner baru perlu rubah2 kwkw
2015-05-20 04:53 Nishizumi: btw kantan patternnya gitu gitu doang ya =-=
2015-05-20 04:53 Nishizumi: gapapa lah itu style sampeyan `-`
2015-05-20 04:53 Surono: iyalah KWKWKW
2015-05-20 04:53 Surono: ye
2015-05-20 04:53 Surono: itu remap, si tasuke bilang rekomen 1/1, ya dah gitu aja
2015-05-20 04:54 Surono: 00:39:627 (1) - mungkin pake finish biar feel, yok futsuu
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: ya emang
2015-05-20 04:54 Surono: kwkwkw
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: jangan
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: ga cocok imo
2015-05-20 04:54 Surono: ya elah kok bisa xD
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: 00:35:877 - mending ini kasih finish ?
2015-05-20 04:55 Nishizumi: lebih enak aja ngakhirin kiai time pake finish
2015-05-20 04:55 Surono: iya sih
2015-05-20 04:55 Nishizumi: ganti ke D lebih tepatnya
2015-05-20 04:56 Surono: e  y, low sound
2015-05-20 04:56 Surono: dh
2015-05-20 04:56 Nishizumi: ok futsuu
2015-05-20 04:57 Nishizumi: oiya btw 00:07:752 - notenya maksain menurut gw
2015-05-20 04:57 Surono: weh jadi di apain
2015-05-20 04:57 Nishizumi: musiknya hampir ga ada
2015-05-20 04:57 Nishizumi: hapus ?
2015-05-20 04:58 Nishizumi: mau ditaro spinner juga ga cocok
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: wkwkw
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: lagu keramat kwkwk
2015-05-20 04:58 Nishizumi: berarti kalo kamu hapus note itu green line disitu juga dihapus
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: dah gw hps, biar angka 13 itu
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 04:58 Nishizumi: 00:09:509 - juga
2015-05-20 04:59 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 04:59 Nishizumi: 00:05:877 - ganti ke k ?
2015-05-20 04:59 Nishizumi: white ticknya bagian situ kat semua
2015-05-20 04:59 Surono: 00:07:517 (14) - di isi d keknya well, masa angka 13, trus kosong 14 nya www
2015-05-20 04:59 Nishizumi: ngapa jadi don sendiri disitu
2015-05-20 05:00 Surono: kwkwk oke done
2015-05-20 05:00 Surono: ddk kwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:01 Nishizumi: nah iya
2015-05-20 05:01 Surono: opo
2015-05-20 05:01 Nishizumi: mending 00:07:752 - kamu pindahin ke 00:07:517 -
2015-05-20 05:01 Surono: WES INI MAP RANKED LUCU, PENDEK, MODDER KEBANYAKAN, KWKWKW
2015-05-20 05:01 Nishizumi: ilangin finishnya
2015-05-20 05:02 Nishizumi: belom banyak mah segitu
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: UDAH
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: jadi hars brapa kwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:02 Nishizumi: green line nya jangan lupa dihapus
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: well hampir kena ajaran si axel itu, muzunya gitu kwkwk
2015-05-20 05:02 Nishizumi: ya ga tau, tapi pernah liat sampe 8 page lebih ada `-`
2015-05-20 05:03 Surono: `-` map pendek segitu mah e& 10an
2015-05-20 05:03 Surono: dah kirim minta bubel tapi orangnya ga nongol, dasar anak mahasiswa sibuks
2015-05-20 05:03 Surono: mending juga ngemud2.. kalau diDQ kan kern, gimana futsuu ada lagi
2015-05-20 05:03 Nishizumi: btw 00:10:564 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - itu mapping style kamu juga ? `-`
2015-05-20 05:04 Nishizumi: siapa yang minta bubble ? `-`
2015-05-20 05:04 Surono: ga tau `-` aku...
2015-05-20 05:04 Surono: weh itu dari saran 10nya, trus aku mboh di remap.. ya setailku
2015-05-20 05:05 Nishizumi: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3148196 gimana kalo patternnya kaya gini aja ? saran doang lho ya]
2015-05-20 05:07 Surono: bentar, mepetin timelinezum
2015-05-20 05:09 Nishizumi: ok
2015-05-20 05:09 Surono: http://puu.sh/hTujJ/a3e7900e06.jpg
2015-05-20 05:09 Surono: gini kwkw
2015-05-20 05:09 Surono: ya elah bener ga ni xD
2015-05-20 05:10 Nishizumi: ya, menurut situ enak ga
2015-05-20 05:10 Nishizumi: kan map map situ `-`
2015-05-20 05:10 Surono: wkwkwkw, dun tek dung dung lel
2015-05-20 05:10 Surono: enak yg masih ini, yg ss ga tau orang suka to gak
2015-05-20 05:11 Nishizumi: kalo ngemap berdasar yang kamu suka lah
2015-05-20 05:11 Nishizumi: nah dari yang kamu suka itu orang juga ikutan suka atau ngga
2015-05-20 05:11 Surono: kwwkw
2015-05-20 05:11 Surono: kalau yg di ss enaknya apa @_@
2015-05-20 05:12 Nishizumi: entah
2015-05-20 05:12 Surono: kwkwkw, ya dah lanjut
2015-05-20 05:12 Surono: masih pake yg lama, soalnya masih enak sama lagu~
2015-05-20 05:12 Nishizumi: jadi pake pattern kamu ya
2015-05-20 05:12 Nishizumi: ok
2015-05-20 05:12 Surono: iya
2015-05-20 05:13 Nishizumi: kok bagian kiainya beda
2015-05-20 05:13 Nishizumi: sama yang bukan kiai
2015-05-20 05:15 Surono: ha
2015-05-20 05:16 Nishizumi: iya
2015-05-20 05:16 Surono: @_@ where, beri saya petunjuks
2015-05-20 05:16 Nishizumi: kaya not 2 kan kalo di non kiai itu di bagian awal
2015-05-20 05:16 Nishizumi: kaya 00:10:564 (2,3)
2015-05-20 05:17 Surono: oh di kiai jadi dk?
2015-05-20 05:17 Nishizumi: tapi di 00:25:564 - kenapa malah jadi dibiarin sendiri
2015-05-20 05:17 Nishizumi: ga 2 not lagi ?
2015-05-20 05:18 Surono: weh..
2015-05-20 05:18 Surono: 00:26:033 (32,33) -
2015-05-20 05:18 Surono: ini dua nya.. lel genti haluan~
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: nah iya, kok 2 nya jadi ada agak ketengah gitu ga kaya non kiai
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: pilih aja, mau yang kaya non kiai atau kaya kiai time
2015-05-20 05:19 Surono: ya biar differetent
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: mungkin
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: ooh ok deh `-`
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: kwwkw
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: ehh bentar
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: 00:39:158 (58) -
2015-05-20 05:20 Nishizumi: 00:35:877 - tambahin finish juga ? sama kaya kantan
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: bagian daerah sini, ada ss? atau saran
2015-05-20 05:21 Nishizumi: udah bagus kok sampe di akhir
2015-05-20 05:21 Surono: wah okelah, buat rest ya tu?
2015-05-20 05:21 Nishizumi: eh mending (57) nya pindahin ke situ
2015-05-20 05:21 Nishizumi: saran
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: oke dichoba
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: cocok, thx
2015-05-20 05:22 Nishizumi: btw 00:39:627 - kantan ganti k aja ? biar konsisten sama diff lain
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: ini lagu sialan, kok ngeri bener perjuangannya
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:22 Nishizumi: gimana map fripside saya mas
2015-05-20 05:22 Nishizumi: dikritik sama senritsu habis habisan wkwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: wah
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: blom liat
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: ntar liat wkwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: njir, kritik, suruh jadi QAT AJA itu wlwlw
2015-05-20 05:23 Nishizumi: dikritik = mod
2015-05-20 05:23 Nishizumi: ok lanjut ke muzu
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:24 Surono: DQ map orang kwkwk kerjanya, di kritik doang
2015-05-20 05:24 Nishizumi: 00:05:877 - ini ganti kat ? 
2015-05-20 05:24 Nishizumi: awalannya don sendiri, yang lain pada kat
2015-05-20 05:24 Surono: 00:07:752 (23) -
2015-05-20 05:25 Surono: ini aneh juga ya kwkwk
2015-05-20 05:25 Surono: yg 15 dah
2015-05-20 05:25 Nishizumi: ya emang aneh, terkesan dipaksain note disitu
2015-05-20 05:26 Nishizumi: 00:06:580 - sampe 00:06:814- ganti ddd aja ?
2015-05-20 05:26 Nishizumi: also, 00:06:580 - ga cocok kat menurutku
2015-05-20 05:27 Nishizumi: btw jangan lupa green line yang aku bilang tadi di delete di semua diff
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: ya ya
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: lupa ntar tinggal recheck kwkw
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: triplet?
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: ?
2015-05-20 05:27 Nishizumi: 00:11:970 - add note ? saran d
2015-05-20 05:27 Nishizumi: ya
2015-05-20 05:28 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 05:28 Nishizumi: 00:15:720 - ini juga, add d
2015-05-20 05:28 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 05:28 Surono: yg add d dah~
2015-05-20 05:29 Surono: yo hitsound lainnya
2015-05-20 05:29 Nishizumi: 00:16:423 (25,26) - swap aja ? ctri + g ?
2015-05-20 05:29 Nishizumi: 00:16:423 - diff lain pada k semua, emang lebih cocok k sih
2015-05-20 05:29 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 05:29 Surono: weh, semua diff? wah di ctrl ghe ga ni kwkw, ok ttp
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: eh bener2, lanjut.. oke ctrl g
2015-05-20 05:30 Nishizumi: loh kan di semua diff yang 00:16:423 - pada kat di bagian situ
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: ya ya kwkwkw, #gafokus
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: mana lagi
2015-05-20 05:30 Nishizumi: 00:20:642 - delete ? buat little spacing aja
2015-05-20 05:30 Nishizumi: jeda dikit
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:31 Nishizumi: 00:31:423 (78,79) - ini delete juga ?
2015-05-20 05:31 Nishizumi: eh ctrl + g maksudnya
2015-05-20 05:32 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:32 Surono: ctrl g
2015-05-20 05:32 Nishizumi: dah segitu aja buat muzu
2015-05-20 05:32 Nishizumi: afk dulu

1. 00:07:752 - delete ? ga ada suara disini, terlihat maksain imo `-` sekalian delete green linenya ? ga berguna soalnya ga ada apa apa sampe 00:09:509
2. 00:09:509 - delete green linenya juga
3. 00:35:877 - tambahin finish ? biar lebih enak buat ngakhirin kiai time, dan cocok juga kok

1. 00:07:752 - delete ? ga ada suara disini, terlihat maksain imo `-` sekalian delete green linenya ? ga berguna soalnya ga ada apa apa sampe 00:09:509
2. 00:09:509 - delete green linenya juga
3. 00:10:798 - d ? biar konsisten akhirannya don kaya 00:14:548 - dan 00:18:298
4. 00:13:845 - ganti ke d ? nadanya sama kaya 00:13:377 - dan juga konsisten sama diff lainnya
5. 00:17:595 - ^
6. 00:22:869 - delete ? ga ada suara
7. 00:23:220 - d ? musiknya sama kaya 00:23:103
8. 00:33:181 (137, 138) - ctrl + g ? biar konsisten musik bagian ini akhirannya kat semua di kiai time
9. 00:35:877 - tambahin finish ? biar lebih enak buat ngakhirin kiai time, dan ngepas juga kok
10. 00:39:744 - delete ? ga ada suara
11. 00:40:681 - ini pindahin aja ke 00:40:798 - ? kayaknya suara musiknya lebih ada di 00:40:798 - dibanding 00:40:681 - menurutku juga lebih enak disitu

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi mas, Requested via chat in-game

Bales semua mod gw mas, atau..... atau apa ccd, haha humu <(``) ntar malem, soalnya skul, on jam 12 mlm lagi ntar aku bls mod~

IRC Mod Kantan ~ Muzukashii

2015-05-20 04:50 Surono: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/700791 #Litevlow - Reworked (Let's Get Beat) [Kantan]]
2015-05-20 04:52 Surono: kantan ga ada problem, dah konsisten lel, kalau futsuu - inner baru perlu rubah2 kwkw
2015-05-20 04:53 Nishizumi: btw kantan patternnya gitu gitu doang ya =-=
2015-05-20 04:53 Nishizumi: gapapa lah itu style sampeyan `-`
2015-05-20 04:53 Surono: iyalah KWKWKW
2015-05-20 04:53 Surono: ye
2015-05-20 04:53 Surono: itu remap, si tasuke bilang rekomen 1/1, ya dah gitu aja
2015-05-20 04:54 Surono: 00:39:627 (1) - mungkin pake finish biar feel, yok futsuu
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: ya emang
2015-05-20 04:54 Surono: kwkwkw
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: jangan
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: ga cocok imo
2015-05-20 04:54 Surono: ya elah kok bisa xD
2015-05-20 04:54 Nishizumi: 00:35:877 - mending ini kasih finish ?
2015-05-20 04:55 Nishizumi: lebih enak aja ngakhirin kiai time pake finish
2015-05-20 04:55 Surono: iya sih
2015-05-20 04:55 Nishizumi: ganti ke D lebih tepatnya
2015-05-20 04:56 Surono: e  y, low sound
2015-05-20 04:56 Surono: dh
2015-05-20 04:56 Nishizumi: ok futsuu
2015-05-20 04:57 Nishizumi: oiya btw 00:07:752 - notenya maksain menurut gw
2015-05-20 04:57 Surono: weh jadi di apain
2015-05-20 04:57 Nishizumi: musiknya hampir ga ada
2015-05-20 04:57 Nishizumi: hapus ?
2015-05-20 04:58 Nishizumi: mau ditaro spinner juga ga cocok
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: wkwkw
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: lagu keramat kwkwk
2015-05-20 04:58 Nishizumi: berarti kalo kamu hapus note itu green line disitu juga dihapus
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: dah gw hps, biar angka 13 itu
2015-05-20 04:58 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 04:58 Nishizumi: 00:09:509 - juga
2015-05-20 04:59 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 04:59 Nishizumi: 00:05:877 - ganti ke k ?
2015-05-20 04:59 Nishizumi: white ticknya bagian situ kat semua
2015-05-20 04:59 Surono: 00:07:517 (14) - di isi d keknya well, masa angka 13, trus kosong 14 nya www
2015-05-20 04:59 Nishizumi: ngapa jadi don sendiri disitu
2015-05-20 05:00 Surono: kwkwk oke done
2015-05-20 05:00 Surono: ddk kwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:01 Nishizumi: nah iya
2015-05-20 05:01 Surono: opo
2015-05-20 05:01 Nishizumi: mending 00:07:752 - kamu pindahin ke 00:07:517 -
2015-05-20 05:01 Surono: WES INI MAP RANKED LUCU, PENDEK, MODDER KEBANYAKAN, KWKWKW
2015-05-20 05:01 Nishizumi: ilangin finishnya
2015-05-20 05:02 Nishizumi: belom banyak mah segitu
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: UDAH
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: jadi hars brapa kwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:02 Nishizumi: green line nya jangan lupa dihapus
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:02 Surono: well hampir kena ajaran si axel itu, muzunya gitu kwkwk
2015-05-20 05:02 Nishizumi: ya ga tau, tapi pernah liat sampe 8 page lebih ada `-`
2015-05-20 05:03 Surono: `-` map pendek segitu mah e& 10an
2015-05-20 05:03 Surono: dah kirim minta bubel tapi orangnya ga nongol, dasar anak mahasiswa sibuks
2015-05-20 05:03 Surono: mending juga ngemud2.. kalau diDQ kan kern, gimana futsuu ada lagi
2015-05-20 05:03 Nishizumi: btw 00:10:564 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - itu mapping style kamu juga ? `-`
2015-05-20 05:04 Nishizumi: siapa yang minta bubble ? `-`
2015-05-20 05:04 Surono: ga tau `-` aku...
2015-05-20 05:04 Surono: weh itu dari saran 10nya, trus aku mboh di remap.. ya setailku
2015-05-20 05:05 Nishizumi: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3148196 gimana kalo patternnya kaya gini aja ? saran doang lho ya]
2015-05-20 05:07 Surono: bentar, mepetin timelinezum
2015-05-20 05:09 Nishizumi: ok
2015-05-20 05:09 Surono: http://puu.sh/hTujJ/a3e7900e06.jpg
2015-05-20 05:09 Surono: gini kwkw
2015-05-20 05:09 Surono: ya elah bener ga ni xD
2015-05-20 05:10 Nishizumi: ya, menurut situ enak ga
2015-05-20 05:10 Nishizumi: kan map map situ `-`
2015-05-20 05:10 Surono: wkwkwkw, dun tek dung dung lel
2015-05-20 05:10 Surono: enak yg masih ini, yg ss ga tau orang suka to gak
2015-05-20 05:11 Nishizumi: kalo ngemap berdasar yang kamu suka lah
2015-05-20 05:11 Nishizumi: nah dari yang kamu suka itu orang juga ikutan suka atau ngga
2015-05-20 05:11 Surono: kwwkw
2015-05-20 05:11 Surono: kalau yg di ss enaknya apa @_@
2015-05-20 05:12 Nishizumi: entah
2015-05-20 05:12 Surono: kwkwkw, ya dah lanjut
2015-05-20 05:12 Surono: masih pake yg lama, soalnya masih enak sama lagu~
2015-05-20 05:12 Nishizumi: jadi pake pattern kamu ya
2015-05-20 05:12 Nishizumi: ok
2015-05-20 05:12 Surono: iya
2015-05-20 05:13 Nishizumi: kok bagian kiainya beda
2015-05-20 05:13 Nishizumi: sama yang bukan kiai
2015-05-20 05:15 Surono: ha
2015-05-20 05:16 Nishizumi: iya
2015-05-20 05:16 Surono: @_@ where, beri saya petunjuks
2015-05-20 05:16 Nishizumi: kaya not 2 kan kalo di non kiai itu di bagian awal
2015-05-20 05:16 Nishizumi: kaya 00:10:564 (2,3)
2015-05-20 05:17 Surono: oh di kiai jadi dk?
2015-05-20 05:17 Nishizumi: tapi di 00:25:564 - kenapa malah jadi dibiarin sendiri
2015-05-20 05:17 Nishizumi: ga 2 not lagi ?
2015-05-20 05:18 Surono: weh..
2015-05-20 05:18 Surono: 00:26:033 (32,33) -
2015-05-20 05:18 Surono: ini dua nya.. lel genti haluan~
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: nah iya, kok 2 nya jadi ada agak ketengah gitu ga kaya non kiai
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: pilih aja, mau yang kaya non kiai atau kaya kiai time
2015-05-20 05:19 Surono: ya biar differetent
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: mungkin
2015-05-20 05:19 Nishizumi: ooh ok deh `-`
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: kwwkw
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: ehh bentar
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: 00:39:158 (58) -
2015-05-20 05:20 Nishizumi: 00:35:877 - tambahin finish juga ? sama kaya kantan
2015-05-20 05:20 Surono: bagian daerah sini, ada ss? atau saran
2015-05-20 05:21 Nishizumi: udah bagus kok sampe di akhir
2015-05-20 05:21 Surono: wah okelah, buat rest ya tu?
2015-05-20 05:21 Nishizumi: eh mending (57) nya pindahin ke situ
2015-05-20 05:21 Nishizumi: saran
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: oke dichoba
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: cocok, thx
2015-05-20 05:22 Nishizumi: btw 00:39:627 - kantan ganti k aja ? biar konsisten sama diff lain
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: ini lagu sialan, kok ngeri bener perjuangannya
2015-05-20 05:22 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:22 Nishizumi: gimana map fripside saya mas
2015-05-20 05:22 Nishizumi: dikritik sama senritsu habis habisan wkwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: wah
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: blom liat
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: ntar liat wkwkwkw
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: njir, kritik, suruh jadi QAT AJA itu wlwlw
2015-05-20 05:23 Nishizumi: dikritik = mod
2015-05-20 05:23 Nishizumi: ok lanjut ke muzu
2015-05-20 05:23 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:24 Surono: DQ map orang kwkwk kerjanya, di kritik doang
2015-05-20 05:24 Nishizumi: 00:05:877 - ini ganti kat ? 
2015-05-20 05:24 Nishizumi: awalannya don sendiri, yang lain pada kat
2015-05-20 05:24 Surono: 00:07:752 (23) -
2015-05-20 05:25 Surono: ini aneh juga ya kwkwk
2015-05-20 05:25 Surono: yg 15 dah
2015-05-20 05:25 Nishizumi: ya emang aneh, terkesan dipaksain note disitu
2015-05-20 05:26 Nishizumi: 00:06:580 - sampe 00:06:814- ganti ddd aja ?
2015-05-20 05:26 Nishizumi: also, 00:06:580 - ga cocok kat menurutku
2015-05-20 05:27 Nishizumi: btw jangan lupa green line yang aku bilang tadi di delete di semua diff
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: ya ya
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: lupa ntar tinggal recheck kwkw
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: triplet?
2015-05-20 05:27 Surono: ?
2015-05-20 05:27 Nishizumi: 00:11:970 - add note ? saran d
2015-05-20 05:27 Nishizumi: ya
2015-05-20 05:28 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 05:28 Nishizumi: 00:15:720 - ini juga, add d
2015-05-20 05:28 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 05:28 Surono: yg add d dah~
2015-05-20 05:29 Surono: yo hitsound lainnya
2015-05-20 05:29 Nishizumi: 00:16:423 (25,26) - swap aja ? ctri + g ?
2015-05-20 05:29 Nishizumi: 00:16:423 - diff lain pada k semua, emang lebih cocok k sih
2015-05-20 05:29 Surono: dah
2015-05-20 05:29 Surono: weh, semua diff? wah di ctrl ghe ga ni kwkw, ok ttp
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: eh bener2, lanjut.. oke ctrl g
2015-05-20 05:30 Nishizumi: loh kan di semua diff yang 00:16:423 - pada kat di bagian situ
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: ya ya kwkwkw, #gafokus
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: mana lagi
2015-05-20 05:30 Nishizumi: 00:20:642 - delete ? buat little spacing aja
2015-05-20 05:30 Nishizumi: jeda dikit
2015-05-20 05:30 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:31 Nishizumi: 00:31:423 (78,79) - ini delete juga ?
2015-05-20 05:31 Nishizumi: eh ctrl + g maksudnya
2015-05-20 05:32 Surono: oke
2015-05-20 05:32 Surono: ctrl g
2015-05-20 05:32 Nishizumi: dah segitu aja buat muzu
2015-05-20 05:32 Nishizumi: afk dulu

[Oni]

1. 00:07:752 - delete ? ga ada suara disini, terlihat maksain imo `-` sekalian delete green linenya ? ga berguna soalnya ga ada apa apa sampe 00:09:509
2. 00:09:509 - delete green linenya juga
3. 00:35:877 - tambahin finish ? biar lebih enak buat ngakhirin kiai time, dan cocok juga kok DONE semua

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:07:752 - delete ? ga ada suara disini, terlihat maksain imo `-` sekalian delete green linenya ? ga berguna soalnya ga ada apa apa sampe 00:09:509
2. 00:09:509 - delete green linenya juga
3. 00:10:798 - d ? biar konsisten akhirannya don kaya 00:14:548 - dan 00:18:298
4. 00:13:845 - ganti ke d ? nadanya sama kaya 00:13:377 - dan juga konsisten sama diff lainnya
5. 00:17:595 - ^
6. 00:22:869 - delete ? ga ada suara
7. 00:23:220 - d ? musiknya sama kaya 00:23:103
8. 00:33:181 (137, 138) - ctrl + g ? biar konsisten musik bagian ini akhirannya kat semua di kiai time
9. 00:35:877 - tambahin finish ? biar lebih enak buat ngakhirin kiai time, dan ngepas juga kok
10. 00:39:744 - delete ? ga ada suara
11. 00:40:681 - ini pindahin aja ke 00:40:798 - ? kayaknya suara musiknya lebih ada di 00:40:798 - dibanding 00:40:681 - menurutku juga lebih enak disitu

dah segitu aja, mudah-mudahan membantu. good luck~

00:29:080 (101,102,103,104,105) - ddkdd
00:38:572 - tuker 00:38:689 -
00:39:392 - tuker 00:39:627 -
00:39:861 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkddd
00:40:564 - k

[R] wrote:

Suggestion

[General]
song setup > tag > "surono" delete y

[Oni] Menyusul hurry

[Inner Oni]

00:29:080 (101,102,103,104,105) - ddkdd keep, soalnya di kiai streamnya di akhir 00:29:549 (115) - kebanyakan k,
00:38:572 - tuker 00:38:689 - Keep, soalnya 166 itu high~
00:39:392 - tuker 00:39:627 - d terus k well~
00:39:861 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkddd kkkdddk? no keep~, i change to kddkddk
00:40:564 - k ok~

kiicha wrote:

Mod Request from Surono

Kantan
00:34:471 - change a o ok~

Futsuu
00:34:706 - change a o ok~

Muzukashii
00:27:674 - change a o ok~
00:31:893 - change a o nice, ok~

Oni
00:35:409 - change a o oki~
00:41:034 - add a o Oki~

Inner Oni
00:07:049 - change a o keep, in this area is same ppitch, is not fit for me if k xD
00:24:628 - change a o keep, like in another diff too xD
00:32:128 - change a o hmm, while change it, but must +auto www

Nofool wrote:

Hi' requested via ing chat
sorry for the delay
I think i didn't really find issues, you may want to find BN now x_x. yeah, u reading my mind

[Kantan]
- 00:09:628 (1) - why no D like at - 00:24:628 (19) - ? better keep it the same because kantan. ok

[Futsuu]
- 00:09:628 (1) - refer to the kantan. ok

[Muzukashii]
- 00:00:721 (2) - could be removed. ok
- 00:09:628 (1) - refer to the kantan. ok
- maybe move - 00:11:971 (8) - to - 00:11:503 - ? fits more the melody and easier to play. keep, k d k and then meet stream and no with prepetation to hit stream? xD yeah keep
- 00:15:721 (21) - ^. ^
- 00:19:471 (34) - ^. ^
- 00:29:971 (62) - ^. etc, you get it i guess ? ^ maybe change kkk and ddd, in order not to get bored
- remove - 00:41:034 (3) - ? i know if fits drums but kinda weird to play here. okay, ur right~

[Oni]
- as i suggested in the muzu, you could move - 00:11:034 (8) - to - 00:11:503 - and then remove - 00:11:971 (11) -, to follow more the melody. but you structure seems fine so as you prefer. ^
- 00:23:456 - what about kd dk k instead of kdd dkk here ? you don't really need that k at - 00:24:042 -, drums rythm is ok. okay change kd dk kkd

[Inner Oni]
- begining feels kinda overmapped, what about removing - 00:00:956 (2,4,8,10,12) - ? so you get something like d d k ddk d k ddkdkdk... Nice idea, thx
- remove - 00:24:279 (82,83,84) - and add finisher at - 00:24:628 (85) - ? to prepare for the kiai that has no break. okay while add it~ *need watch auto www
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Good luck'

Culedesu wrote:

Gotta get rich

Kantan

00:24:159 (18) - change k nice
00:34:940 - add k ^
00:35:409 (31) - change k ^
00:40:878 - add d no

Futsuu

00:12:909 - add k
00:16:659 - add d
00:20:409 - add d
00:27:909 - add k
00:31:659 - add d
00:35:409 - add d
(pattern?)
00:39:862 - add k
fix all

Muzukashii

00:12:206 (10) - remove
00:12:557 - add d
00:12:674 (12) - change d
00:12:909 (13) - change k
00:19:237 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - ^try to do the same pattern with this one
00:26:737 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - ^same, without that note that's left (you know what I mean) not change

Good luck!

WoahE wrote:

mod req from in game chat
nice bg yeah they are face like that bcuz ate mosquito

Oni

00:16:893 (36) - Try d done
00:22:284 (61,62) - Try k d ^

Inner Oni

00:11:034 (10,11,12,13) - Try d kkk kkk.. hmm i try kkd
00:31:424 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130) - Try kkddd d okay change kkddd D
00:32:362 (131,132) - Try delete , need some break keep, well in Kiai is time to epic.. if delete is weird play..

overall look nice and reasonable , really don't have much to mod ( not to destroy your mapping style yeah sometime i think about modder, huu doubts bcuz many change..
so good luck

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• 
  Uncheck ''widescreen support'' in all diffs, is not necessary unless you have a Storyboard

• 
  00:34:940 (30) - i suggest you to delete this note to make this more consistent with the other sections

• 
  00:38:221 - how about add a d here for consistency with 00:36:346 - ?

• 
  00:23:690 (52) - You have a Oni and a Inner Oni, i don't recommend to use kkd in the Muzukashii so.. change this to k?
  00:24:393 (54) - delete this note for make a ''mini'' break for the Muzu

• 
  Nothing to suggest here

• 
  00:38:690 (165) - i feel this a bit ''forced'', how about delete this note? this will make more consistent with 00:36:815 -

Chromoxx wrote:

Hey this is my M4M, sorry its a little bit late but i had a lot of things to take care of
I'll be modding Oni and Inner Oni

Oni

00:22:284 (61,62) - maybe change to d k (sounds better imo but entirely optional ) nice
00:38:456 (136,137,138,139,140) - maybe change to kkdkd might fit better but also entirely optional oki~

Cant really point o ut anything else other than these optional pattern changes, the map is pretty solid
hope its still helpful

Inner Oni

00:11:737 (14,15) - maybe change to d k (sounds better imo, entirely optional though) yo~
00:23:456 (76,77,78,79,80) - maybe change to dkkdk (fits more to the music i think) nah~, oke

Same as for oni, only a few optional pattern changes, again: solid map!

Sorry for only making a short mod, im kinda swamped with school stuff at the moment, i hope its still helpful though

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Surono~ dat BG xD dat face.. bcuz ate mosquito~

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• 
  Uncheck ''widescreen support'' in all diffs, is not necessary unless you have a Storyboard done in K and F

[Kantan]

• 
  00:34:940 (30) - i suggest you to delete this note to make this more consistent with the other sections oke

[Futsuu]

• 
  00:38:221 - how about add a d here for consistency with 00:36:346 - ? yea~

[Muzukashii]

• 
  00:23:690 (52) - You have a Oni and a Inner Oni, i don't recommend to use kkd in the Muzukashii so.. change this to k? ur right, i forget
  00:24:393 (54) - delete this note for make a ''mini'' break for the Muzu oke mini break <(``), nice 4 musu~

[Oni]

• 
  Nothing to suggest here

[Inner Oni]

• 
  00:38:690 (165) - i feel this a bit ''forced'', how about delete this note? this will make more consistent with 00:36:815 - ok, nice listen..

A short mod for a short map [b]well, is madness if long mod ww, good luck! :3[/b]