It's k, believe in outselves we can make it 666
Okoratu wrote:
all i can say is that some of your lyrics are split wronlgy and would probably conflict with japanese grammar
examples:
02:13:108 - You split 笑う In 2 lines while it is one word Pronounced warau
01:05:302 - You don't split 好き Up pretty sureee
01:21:049 - You also don't split up しない
01:50:432 - PLSDON'TSPLIT 降る
These are just examples, I would get someone who's actually a native or something to confirm that these don't make sense with japanese grammar but the ones i pointed out is doing something similar like
Splitting verses like
'and then the rain fa
lls'
this so it may look extremely stupid to someone who actually speaks the language??
Ganbare!Kibbleru wrote:
im done the sb..
fixed thank youKSHR wrote:
bad jokes which may offend you lolKibbleru wrote:
I'm prepared to;
a. get bashed on how bad i made this.
b. ask someone else cuz its so bad you don't want to deal with itOkay, I probably should choose both then.
a. You should never make lyrics SB again. NEVER AGAIN! im sorry senpai i will never try again ;_; ok time to start my next SB
b. Not only I but also others don't want to either for sure!!
The following are issues should be pointed out;
1. Most of lyrics images are too late to appear.
2. Lyrics have mistakes.Let me correct mistakes firstSource: supercell's special site for Melt http://supercell.sc/melt/ (Click the menu named "word" and you will find the lyrics)
- 00:25:991 - 朝_目がさめて
- 00:39:755 - 前髪を切った
- 00:41:520 - 「どうしたの?」って
- 00:59:520 - かわいいのよ!
- 01:06:932 - 好きだなんて 絶対に言えない… (Because of the font, this looks different from the one written on the special site.)
-----Deleted my mistake------- 01:14:697 - 目も合わせられない (会 means "meet" which doesn't fit with the meaning of lyrics.) umm. idk what to do for this one
- 01:29:697 - …好きなの
- 02:09:755 - 隣にいる_君が笑う
- 02:19:638 - 息がつまりそう (This kanji is indeed correct, but according to the special site, not used here.)
- 02:24:049 - 触れてる右手が_震える
- 02:28:814 - 高(taka)鳴(na)る It looks like you are misunderstanding the reading of this word.
- 02:37:991 - どうしよう…!
- 02:46:814 - 時間を / 止めて In Japanese grammar, it's strange to put a particle at the start of the sentence.
- 02:56:344 - 死んでしまうわ!
- 03:33:049 - 駅に着いてしまう…
- 03:37:285 - 会えない_近くて_遠いよ
- 03:44:344 - 手をつないで歩きたい!
- 03:51:402 - いけないの?
- 03:57:049 - 抱きしめて!
- 03:59:344 - …なんてね
Let me know again when you are done fixing them. I still have lots of things to point out..! B) oh god owo
By the way, you may add "supercell" (which ryo belongs to) to the Tags.
i think we are done o-oHinsvar wrote:
uh dunno poke me when you're done dealing with the words
which reminds me
I'm supposed to start learning Japanese grammar right now
but I still can't even memorize the kana characters perfectly
lel
iknowiknowiknow >< but i can't do anything about it now lolAka wrote:
SPOILERum um um, some lyrics shows up at the end/middle of the phrase, it feels kinda awkwardddd..
("→" is where the previous timestamp should look better)
00:42:579 - →00:41:167 -
00:45:402 - →00:43:285 -
01:47:520 - →01:46:108 -
02:12:932 - →02:14:344 -
Frostings wrote:
no
redo the lyrics or else mom will find you, and he will kill me first, and then he'll kill me again
15:21 Kibbleru: i need u bae
15:21 sukiNathan: hhuuuuuhh
15:21 *Kibbleru tries to be as seductive as possible
15:21 sukiNathan: u-uh
15:22 Kibbleru: [http://anime-pictures.net/pictures/get_image/275285-1443x938-imouto+no+katachi-sena+miyuki-mutou+kurihito-long+hair-single-blush.jpg bubble my map]
15:22 sukiNathan: god damn it kibb
15:22 Kibbleru: does that picture not turn u on :<
15:23 sukiNathan: i thought that was just a link to your map
15:23 Kibbleru: oh
15:23 sukiNathan: LOL
15:23 Kibbleru: ahem that comes after
15:23 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/654520 ChouCho - Melt]
15:24 Kibbleru: [http://anime-pictures.net/pictures/get_image/85485-1276x854-k-on%21-akiyama+mio-sadakofxe-blue+eyes-light+erotic-black+hair.jpg onegaiii~]
15:24 Kibbleru: i swear this isn't cyber-sexual harassment
15:24 sukiNathan: im a girl
15:24 sukiNathan: jk
15:24 Kibbleru: oh
15:24 Kibbleru: god
15:24 Kibbleru: almost gave me a heart attack there
15:24 sukiNathan: LMAO
15:25 Kibbleru: for a second there i thought i wouldve needed to go find free fan-art
15:25 Kibbleru: 'FREE!" fan-art
15:25 Kibbleru: or do u prefer eternal summer
15:25 sukiNathan: i
15:25 sukiNathan: am
15:25 sukiNathan: good
15:25 sukiNathan: thanks
15:25 sukiNathan: c:
15:25 Kibbleru: ok
15:26 sukiNathan: uh
15:26 sukiNathan: aren't the sb lyrics
15:26 sukiNathan: kinda late or somethin
15:26 Kibbleru: shh
15:26 Kibbleru: just accept it
15:26 sukiNathan: AREN'T
15:27 sukiNathan: THE SB LYRICS
15:27 sukiNathan: KINDA LATE
15:27 sukiNathan: OR SOMETHIN
15:27 Kibbleru: hushushushushuushhh
15:27 sukiNathan: jk
15:27 sukiNathan: who actually
15:27 sukiNathan: uses the sb anyways
15:27 Kibbleru: ikr
15:27 Kibbleru: its fine because im only giving 1/1000 cancer for my off-timed lyrics
15:28 Kibbleru: inb4 rrtyui plays this on stream and goes like 'what the fuck is this sb'
15:28 Kibbleru: and rates my map a 0
15:28 sukiNathan: 02:24:579 (2) - is this missing a clap
15:28 Kibbleru: causing a chain effect
15:28 Kibbleru: u can't actually hear one in the music
15:29 sukiNathan: ya I guess
15:29 sukiNathan: im not really modding btw
15:29 sukiNathan: im just looking for
15:29 sukiNathan: technical stuff
15:29 Kibbleru: ok
15:29 Kibbleru: its okay who mods these days
15:29 sukiNathan: ikr
15:31 sukiNathan: do you have
15:31 sukiNathan: a metadata saucerino
15:31 sukiNathan: just so u can save me 5 mins
15:32 Kibbleru: nop :X
15:32 sukiNathan: wowwwwwwwww
15:32 Kibbleru: fyi hinsvar gave permission for someone else to bub
15:32 Kibbleru: leme go find something
15:32 sukiNathan: this sb is actually pretty nice tho
15:32 Kibbleru: or ask lanturn
15:32 Kibbleru: lol
15:32 Kibbleru: ty <3
15:34 Kibbleru: how do u find metadata for dubbed versions of vocaloid songs like this lol
15:34 sukiNathan: errrr
15:34 Kibbleru: http://iwill-music.co.jp/choucho/
15:34 Kibbleru: welp this is awk
15:34 Kibbleru: she sang this before she became pro
15:34 sukiNathan: find
15:34 sukiNathan: the vocaloid metadata
15:35 sukiNathan: mayb
15:36 Kibbleru: the song was made by supercell
15:36 Kibbleru: http://supercell.sc/melt/
15:36 sukiNathan: god damn it
15:36 sukiNathan: why didn't I take
15:36 sukiNathan: japanese
15:37 sukiNathan: instead
15:37 sukiNathan: of fukin spanish
15:37 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/hOGYo/ede4710069.png
15:37 Kibbleru: i woulda taken japanese B)
15:37 Kibbleru: our schools force french
15:37 Kibbleru: fuck u
15:37 sukiNathan: :C
15:37 Kibbleru: japanese > all :C
15:38 Kibbleru: pinku no sukaato
15:39 sukiNathan: kk
15:39 Kibbleru: also apparently choucho prefers her name being just "ChouCho"
15:39 Kibbleru: english ver
15:39 Kibbleru: so
15:41 sukiNathan: fukin
15:41 sukiNathan: Choucho
15:41 sukiNathan: and
15:41 sukiNathan: ChouCho
15:42 sukiNathan: well most use ChouCho actually nvm
15:42 sukiNathan: ok metadata good
15:42 Kibbleru: mostly ChouCho yea
15:43 sukiNathan: 01:20:167 (3) - would u change this rhythm
15:43 sukiNathan: it ends on a stronger sound
15:43 sukiNathan: than the start of the head
15:44 sukiNathan: only thing I'm worried about
15:44 sukiNathan: are some 1/2 sliders
15:45 sukiNathan: that end on stronger sounds
15:45 sukiNathan: most of them make sense though
15:45 Kibbleru: ok fix
15:45 sukiNathan: 01:55:461 (5) - same thing here
15:45 sukiNathan: QATs are strict about stuff like this now :C
15:46 Kibbleru: easier to end triplet on slider :X
15:46 Kibbleru: and it looks better lol
15:46 Kibbleru: that way
15:46 sukiNathan: :<
15:48 sukiNathan: ok well it was only a few
15:48 sukiNathan: it's fine
15:48 Kibbleru: \o/
15:50 sukiNathan: ok
15:50 sukiNathan: give me like
15:50 sukiNathan: wait nvm
15:51 *Kibbleru gives a 'wait nvm'
15:51 sukiNathan: thanks man
15:51 Kibbleru: np B)
15:52 sukiNathan: on hard
15:52 sukiNathan: 03:42:226 (3) -
15:52 sukiNathan: isnt this a bit muchhhh
15:53 Kibbleru: is this good? http://puu.sh/hOHX9/90afdefcbd.jpg
15:53 sukiNathan: 03:45:491 (4,5) - looks like 1/4 rhythm with this spacing
15:53 sukiNathan: yeah thats better
15:53 Kibbleru: fix
15:53 Kibbleru: both
15:54 sukiNathan: actually
15:54 sukiNathan: you have some more 2x spacing jumps
15:54 sukiNathan: I'd nerf it to like 1.8 :C
15:55 sukiNathan: everything else is gud
15:55 Kibbleru: like
15:56 Kibbleru: where lol
15:56 sukiNathan: ur bed
15:56 sukiNathan: 03:48:226 (4) -
15:56 Kibbleru: fix that one
15:57 Kibbleru: i fixed the ones that end with a circle i guess
15:58 sukiNathan: yeh
16:00 Kibbleru: k fixed most
16:00 sukiNathan: ok
16:00 sukiNathan: updoot
16:00 sukiNathan: nao
16:01 Kibbleru: updated
16:04 sukiNathan: ok just
16:04 sukiNathan: go through all ur snappings
16:04 sukiNathan: one more time
16:05 sukiNathan: then tell me when ur done
16:05 sukiNathan: I already checked but maybe I missed something
16:06 Kibbleru: 00:24:932 (3) - this is definitely 1/6
16:06 sukiNathan: ye
16:11 Kibbleru: we good
16:11 Kibbleru: i also got garven to check timing
16:11 sukiNathan: ok
16:11 Kibbleru: and he said it was okay
16:11 sukiNathan: I think
16:11 sukiNathan: you need
16:11 sukiNathan: more stars tho
16:12 Kibbleru: lol.
You never know what you can find in chatlogs looolKibbleru wrote:
Artorias wrote:
kibbl pls, too lewd
who the hell reads irc chatlogs..
mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmNo Dap wrote:
logged in just for this. Congratz
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u better log in again for my next qualified mapNo Dap wrote:
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I have to charge you for the copyright of the emote. \3/Meyrink wrote:
*3*) Credit to Kwan for the emote =w=/IamKwaN wrote:
I have to charge you for the copyright of the emote. \3/
IamKwaN wrote:
I have to charge you for the copyright of the emote. \3/
wtf you guys why did you rank this while I was on vacation asdfkljas;klfj;alekfja;sldkjfNo Dap wrote:
logged in just for this. Congratz
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