Reason for pop: Still a lot of things that require fixing and possible unrankable issues as well that will need confirmation from another BN.
From M4M.
I might have missed some places where you could have placed finishes, but I think I pointed out every place.
There’s still a lot of things that require fixing imo. Take a look at most of the aspects in “General” especially. Also, make sure of the metadata please. I think you might have to add “Hatsune Miku” somewhere in the artist.
Sorry to have to pop the bubble again, but I just feel this set can do with a bit more mods. I guess it will improve a lot if you take my mod into consideration. You may call me back when you think it’s ready.
From M4M.
General:
- I’m not that sure about the current metadata. I found this metadata on youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDOa-ctda3s
http://puu.sh/hsB6K/a6ac697acb.png
So I think the metadata will have to be: HoneyWorks feat. Hatsune Miku – Attakain Dakara
Maybe you’ll have to add “[cover]” as well but I’m not sure. Just doublecheck your metadata with an expert please. - The repeat arrow clashes with the hitcircle-skin a bit, since it’s not that visible when placed on the soft pink colour. http://puu.sh/hsHSL/687568e8ca.jpg I guess your choices are either to change the colours and make sure that the arrow is visible enough or to change the reverse arrow completely to something darker that’s more visible.
- Combo colour 1 and combo colour 3 are very close to each other. The pink and the pink. I highly suggest that you change combo colour 3 to a different colour since I think it might be unrankable if the two colours are too close to each other. Try green for combo 3.
That’s just an example of the two combo colours that look too similar. - The hitsounding in the Easy could do with work imo. In the Hard and Insane the hitsounds are great but then your easiest diff still lacks that hitsounding. I think you just used whistles in that diff if I’m not mistaken.
- I think the gap between Normal and Hard might be a problem. Hard is quite difficult and imo Normal can be harder. Try adding more difficult rhythms and patterns in Normal.
- You didn’t add your GD’er in the tags. “G’s Hard” Who is the GD’er?
- Uncheck “Widescreen support” in all diffs since you don’t have a SB. Just optional.
- Use a resolution of 1366X768 or 1024X768 for your BG. Your current resolution is a bit unsatisfying. I managed to fix your current BG’s resolution. It’s 1366X768 now. Here:
http://puu.sh/hsBP6/3f19df39f4.jpg - To be safe, change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. If you don’t know how, just contact me.
Easy:
- Imo, I really think you can map that break out since you mapped that section in all the other diffs.
- 00:02:872 (2) –I don’t really like the placement of this slider. It doesn’t make a nice blanket and it looks a bit crammed. I suggest trying this placement. It will also make the flow nicer imo.
- 00:04:284 (3) –Rather place a 1/1 slider here. That repeat slider might be a bit confusing for beginners.
- 00:05:696 (1) –Ctrl+J. To ensure better flow with 00:07:813 (2) –
- 00:07:107 –I hear a cymbal sound here. Rather place a finish on the tail for better emphasis. You might want to lower the volume then since the sound might be too loud.
- 00:09:931 –Hm, I hear a cymbal sound on this repeat. I think it would be better then to place a finish on the repeat then instead of the whistle. ^
- 00:14:166 (2) –Finish instead? It’s quite a loud sound there and I don’t think the whistle really supports it that well. ^
- 00:32:519 (4) –Again, rather a finish. There’s a cymbal sound in the background.
- 00:36:401 (4) –The vocals clearly starts here: 00:36:578 – again. So start the slider there as well. Like this:
- 00:38:166 (1) –Finish on head of slider.
- 00:38:166 (1,2) –Eh, I don’t really like this pattern: Bad flow and it just looks untidy. Something as simple as this will look better:
- 00:48:048 –Finish on the tail of the slider.
- 00:56:871 (2) –Finish please. There’s a clear cymbal sound in the music.
- 00:55:459 (1,2) –Eh, not best flow. In future, try not to place circles like right under the tail of a slider since it’s not the best flow. Here’s an example like what the best flow would be:
- 00:58:282 –Again, place a finish here please.
- 00:59:694 (4) -^ On the head of the slider.
- 01:02:518 –Finish on the head of the slider please.
- 01:05:341 (1) –Not the best flow imo. Maybe try something like this instead:
- 01:08:165 (4) –Finish here.
I might have missed some places where you could have placed finishes, but I think I pointed out every place.
Normal:
- 00:57:576 (1,2) –Can you please just check this spacing again please. 00:58:282 (2) – is too close to 00:57:576 (1) –
- 00:16:990 (1) –For better flow you can try stacking this slider on the head of this slider: 00:14:166 (1) –
- 00:33:578 (4) –That clapsound is very loud. I really advise you to lower the volume there a bit. There are other places as well of course, but I’m not gonna point them all out since I trust that you know where they are.
- 00:35:343 (1,2) –I don’t really approve this stack, since the rhythm here is so fast. Rather unstack.
- 00:46:637 (2,3) -^
- 00:55:459 (1) –Add a finish on the tail of the spinner. There’s a clear cymbal in the background.
- 00:57:576 (1) –I suggest you rather place this circle in the middle of the spinner to make it easier for the player to click it since the reaction time is not that long.
- 00:58:282 (2) –Finish on the head of the slider.
G’s Hard:
- Circle size 4? A hard always looks better with a circle size of 4.
- 00:14:078 –Hm, rather remove that 5% green line. I’m not sure if it’s really unrankable if placed on the tail of the slider. But just to be 100% safe rather remove it.
- 00:43:813 (1) –Finish on the head of this slider?
- 01:05:871 (2) –This circle is placed too high. It’s slightly touching the HP bar.
Insane:
- Ehh, not really fond of the whistle sounds that you used in this diff. It’s a really annoying sound and kind of ruins the cute song imo. Try to stick to the Hard’s hitsounding a bit. I kinda like the Hard’s hitsounding the best.
- 00:43:813 (6,1,1,2,3) –Hm, this placement looks a bit confusing. Can’t you try something like this instead:
- 01:01:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –This confused me a lot. You used the same spacings, but one part of that stream has a slow rhythm while the other part has a very fast rhythm. The NC’s won’t be enough for distinction imo.
There’s still a lot of things that require fixing imo. Take a look at most of the aspects in “General” especially. Also, make sure of the metadata please. I think you might have to add “Hatsune Miku” somewhere in the artist.
Sorry to have to pop the bubble again, but I just feel this set can do with a bit more mods. I guess it will improve a lot if you take my mod into consideration. You may call me back when you think it’s ready.