Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo (TV Size) [Taiko · forum

JUDYDANNY

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JUDYDANNY 2015-05-06T15:54:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月21日 at 18:27:18

Artist: Wakeshima Kanon
Title: world's end, girl's rondo (TV Size)
Source: selector spread WIXOSS
Tags: Taiko 江口亮 Eguchi Ryo opening 2nd second season BlackHairEND music Particle.1
BPM: 173
Filesize: 1699kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

BlackHairEND's Oni (3.79 stars, 501 notes)
Futsuu (2.14 stars, 191 notes)
Kantan (1.42 stars, 121 notes)
Muzukashii (2.83 stars, 332 notes)
Oni (3.82 stars, 477 notes)

Download: Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo (TV Size)
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#47　(Ranked #4)
希望　願望　欲望…　それぞれの想いを胸に

少女たちは　危険なゲームの渦に　飲み込まれていく──

BlackHairEND's Oni - by ~~world~~ BlackHairEND

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~~取り戻したい未来～~~ Ryui's Taiko - by Ryui >>> puush

#46 >> #47 Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo (TV Size) >> #48

Last edited by JUDYDANNY 2015-07-22T04:07:07+00:00, edited 86 times in total.

BlackHairEND

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BlackHairEND 2015-05-06T16:05:44+00:00

希望、願望、欲望───
それぞれの想いを胸に少女達は、危険なゲームの渦に」飲み込まれていく──

world's end, girl's rondo

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Damnae

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Damnae 2015-05-06T18:09:39+00:00

Can you remove my name from tags?

JUDYDANNY

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JUDYDANNY 2015-05-07T09:31:17+00:00

Damnae wrote:
Can you remove my name from tags?

Fixed and I'm sorry. I forgot to reset tags..

JUDYDANNY

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JUDYDANNY 2015-05-07T09:43:08+00:00

changed the title.
world's end, girl's rondo >>> world's end, girl's rondo (TV Size)
http://vgmdb.net/album/49080

Nofool

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Nofool 2015-05-08T15:50:03+00:00

Hi' as requested via pm
nice song choice, i really like this one x_x

[Kantan]
- 00:48:519 - add k here and remove - 00:49:560 (21,23) - ? then you have two d kkd in a row but they sound similar so np, and removed notes to emphasize the following d k d. Not sure if my idea is good but you should change this part a bit imo.
- what about moving - 00:56:496 (9) - to - 00:56:149 - ? important beat missed there.
- move - 01:07:941 (10) - to - 01:07:258 - as d ? sounds a bit better and still fits the vocal.
- 01:10:716 - 01:13:490 - instead of K d d k, what about this (cursor is at - 01:10:716) :

The second d would be a finisher too (deserved finisher there imo, the kkk on red lines sounds good with the vocal).
If you apply this, do something similar at - 01:21:814 - i guess.

[Futsuu]
- got some idea for the beginning here, something more rythm than melody based :
change - 00:07:941 (2) -to k, remove the following k, add d at - 00:08:982 -, change - 00:09:328 (5) - to k and remove the following k again, then you should get something like d k ddk d k, which sounds pretty cool imo.
If you do, also change - 00:13:490 (2) - to k, remove the following k, and then move - 00:14:878 (5) - to - 00:14:531 -.
- maybe remove - 00:49:906 (50) - ? too many ks here imo, and also move - 00:51:467 (55) - to - 00:51:120 - ? sounds cooler.
- remove - 00:54:762 (64) - ? logic with - 00:51:987 -.
- mm the end sounds a bit wierd, some major beats are missed. remove - 01:24:415 (144) - (i know the vocal is still going here but the 3 previous K are different i would say), D K D 1/3 at - 01:24:935 - instead of D d k K, and then D D K 1/3 at - 01:27:016 - instead of D kd K ?

[Muzukashii]
ddk in kiai are dangerous, and k ddd d k > k d ddd k T_T!
- remove - 00:07:074 (3) - ? not needed imo.
- 00:09:328 - from here i would've done something like dkdk dk ddkd dk(...) instead of dkdkd kd dkkd k(...), fits better the melod, if you apply this, also move - 00:15:571 (13) - to - 00:15:745 -.
- 00:24:537 - risky.
- 00:50:947 (6) - remove ? break needed here imo, that beat is alright to miss i think.
im alright with the rest i guess.

[BlackHairEND's Oni]
some inconsistency here imo, can't always know what you follow even tho your repsect a k rythm, also maybe lack of finisher at the end.
- move - 00:22:074 (95) - to - 00:21:901 - as k ? vocal.
- 00:26:496 - i suggest you to add two notes here to make the structure similar to earlier at a similar part, so maybe add kk (and change the 3rd k to d ?).
- 00:33:606 (161,162) - mm i wonder if these k are good or not here, they don't follow the melody nor the vocal x_x..
- remove - 00:36:380 (176,177) -, change - 00:36:554 (178) - to d and add k at - 00:36:901 - ? vocal.
- remove - 00:49:906 (294) - ? another break since you style seems to be airy here.
- remove - 01:04:039 (348,349) - and do something like ddkkd instead of kkk d at - 01:04:646 - ? sounds more logic with the other break.
- 01:12:623 - ddk instead of kkk ? melody.
- add d at - 01:14:964 - and remove - 01:15:138 (421,422) -, then omething at - 01:15:571 - and move - 01:16:178 (4) - to - 01:15:831 - and - 01:16:525 (7) - to - 01:16:352 - as d ? not a so big change, that would fit more the vocal/melody.

[Oni]
- 00:10:022 (17) - move to 1/2 later ? melody.
- 00:18:346 - at this part, i would try to follow more the vocal even tho it is not as high as at - 00:29:444 -. i mean keeping a low amount of notes but using more 2 and 4 notes patterns, as the vocal is. well same for the Muzu but i have not pointed it since i can see some sort of build up which is good so as you pref.
- 00:33:606 (2) - i can see the effect here but i wonder if moving it to 1/2 is still not better ?
- 00:54:242 (25) - maybe remove ?
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Good luck'

MidSoul

288 posts

Joined July 2012

MidSoul 2015-05-08T16:58:48+00:00

[Kantan]
00:15:918 (7) - del
・この位置でノーツが増えなくても今までの流れが汲めるのと、次のノーツの間隔が狭くなっていることで変化は十分な表現ができると思うので、消してもいいかと思います。

01:11:409 (1,2,3) - change? (後述参照)
・面白い形ではあるし、スネアもよく響いていますがやっぱり基本的には01:11:063 - ここから2/1間隔で4つ配置するダウンビートでとるべきところかと思いました。
このような配置の流れが他に多少あればこれも良いとは思いましたが、置き換えるパターンが長くなってしまうのは不自然な感じがします。
1/1の2連続きになりますが、大きく曲調が変わらないため、01:13:143 - ここからの空白時間帯にも違和感があるために、私ならパターンを戻すことを選びます。

01:21:120 - add k for snare
-1 01:22:508 (1,2) - move to 01:22:161 -
-2 01:23:548 - add k ?
・上記とほぼ同じ理由です。置き換えるパターンが長くなる配置がこの2箇所で反復性が取れるようなものになればそういった調子の譜面い変えるのも良いと思います。

[Futsuu]
00:49:213 (48) - del
・大きくパターンが変化する地点であり、この前までがリズム難、直後に難所が続くため、小休憩をどこかで入れたいと思ったためです。
この位置だと次以降のパターンに無理を与えないと考えましたが、大きくスネアが鳴っている地点なので非常に好みによるとは思います。

01:24:415 (144) - move 1/2 >
・単純に音が多いこちらの方が適しているように感じました。
ボーカルやギターも伸びてるので、私には置き換えるのに問題のある場所ではないかと思いますが、この4連の状態も好きです。
いずれにしても、なかなか他の曲ではできない良い配置だと思うので選択は好みの割合が大きいと思います。

01:24:935 (145,146,147,148) -
01:27:016 (150,151,152,153) -
3/2配置に dkk 等
・序盤は3/2配置結構多かったように思うので特に1/1にする理由がなければ、この2箇所を3/2配置とすることで01:27:016 (150,151,152,153) - での2回目の音がはっきりとれてより感覚的な違和感を感じなくなると思います。
確かに1回目は1/1でとれるような音がありますが終盤の音が減ってきた箇所でより目立って太鼓音があると違和感が大きいためお願いしてみました。

低難易度を特に見てくれということだったと思うのでやってきました。
色については一貫性がある程度あるのでなかなか指摘できない‥
というか自分の感覚では特に思い浮かばない　というのか本音であります。
また時間があれば他の難易度のmodに回ります。相変わらず稚拙な文章で申し訳ない。
最近自作譜面すら1日ではまともに難易度完成させないので人の譜面見るのに時間かかってしまうぞ~

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JUDYDANNY

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JUDYDANNY 2015-05-09T03:27:55+00:00

~~Thanks for mod, Iwill check the mods after 7~8 hours.~~

Nofool

Hi' as requested via pm
nice song choice, i really like this one x_x

[Kantan]
- 00:48:519 - add k here and remove - 00:49:560 (21,23) - ? then you have two d kkd in a row but they sound similar so np, and removed notes to emphasize the following d k d. Not sure if my idea is good but you should change this part a bit imo.　

Applied to add k 00:48:519 - and remove 00:50:600 (23) -. 00:49:560 (21) - remove is doing keep. percussion sounds up to noisy. (Mainly Snare) I guess no breaking (2/1 divisor) would be better.
- what about moving - 00:56:496 (9) - to - 00:56:149 - ? important beat missed there.

Sure.
- move - 01:07:941 (10) - to - 01:07:258 - as d ? sounds a bit better and still fits the vocal.

Fixed.
- 01:10:716 - 01:13:490 - instead of K d d k, what about this (cursor is at - 01:10:716) :

changed some about the finishers.

The second d would be a finisher too (deserved finisher there imo, the kkk on red lines sounds good with the vocal).
If you apply this, do something similar at - 01:21:814 - i guess.

keep the basis rhythm. I want to giver other modders suggestion ><
[Futsuu]
- got some idea for the beginning here, something more rythm than melody based :
change - 00:07:941 (2) -to k, remove the following k, add d at - 00:08:982 -, change - 00:09:328 (5) - to k and remove the following k again, then you should get something like d k ddk d k, which sounds pretty cool imo.
If you do, also change - 00:13:490 (2) - to k, remove the following k, and then move - 00:14:878 (5) - to - 00:14:531 -.

That's a nice idea !!

Applied~
- maybe remove - 00:49:906 (50) - ? too many ks here imo, and also move - 00:51:467 (55) - to - 00:51:120 - ? sounds cooler.

00:49:213 - removed this (MidSoul's suggestion) instead of yours. ,moving suggestion is keep. I want to know other modders suggestion ><
- remove - 00:54:762 (64) - ? logic with - 00:51:987 -.

um... okay.
- mm the end sounds a bit wierd, some major beats are missed. remove - 01:24:415 (144) - (i know the vocal is still going here but the 3 previous K are different i would say), D K D 1/3 at - 01:24:935 - instead of D d k K, and then D D K 1/3 at - 01:27:016 - instead of D kd K ?

aplied the 3notes pattern. changed to D-d-K- k-D-k-K. :3
[Muzukashii]
ddk in kiai are dangerous, and k ddd d k > k d ddd k T_T!
- remove - 00:07:074 (3) - ? not needed imo.okay.
- 00:09:328 - from here i would've done something like dkdk dk ddkd dk(...) instead of dkdkd kd dkkd k(...), fits better the melod, if you apply this, also move - 00:15:571 (13) - to - 00:15:745 -.

keep. I want to know other modders suggestion ><;
- 00:24:537 - risky.

okay.....
- 00:50:947 (6) - remove ? break needed here imo, that beat is alright to miss i think.

Applied.
im alright with the rest i guess.

[Oni]
- 00:10:022 (17) - move to 1/2 later ? melody.

no change on general.before 2 bar lines, bass not sounds. But on this bar line, bass sounds.
- 00:18:346 - at this part, i would try to follow more the vocal even tho it is not as high as at - 00:29:444 -. i mean keeping a low amount of notes but using more 2 and 4 notes patterns, as the vocal is. well same for the Muzu but i have not pointed it since i can see some sort of build up which is good so as you pref.

hm, keep the strategy. This lonely part, I guess its better to follow the Instrumental and build up a little.
- 00:33:606 (2) - i can see the effect here but i wonder if moving it to 1/2 is still not better ?

keep for now, want to know other modders suggesiton. I will try to this effection.
- 00:54:242 (25) - maybe remove ?

chanaged some.
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Good luck'

Thanks for mod ><///

MidSoul

[Kantan]
00:15:918 (7) - del
・この位置でノーツが増えなくても今までの流れが汲めるのと、次のノーツの間隔が狭くなっていることで変化は十分な表現ができると思うので、消してもいいかと思います。

Applied.

01:11:409 (1,2,3) - change? (後述参照)
・面白い形ではあるし、スネアもよく響いていますがやっぱり基本的には01:11:063 - ここから2/1間隔で4つ配置するダウンビートでとるべきところかと思いました。
このような配置の流れが他に多少あればこれも良いとは思いましたが、置き換えるパターンが長くなってしまうのは不自然な感じがします。
1/1の2連続きになりますが、大きく曲調が変わらないため、01:13:143 - ここからの空白時間帯にも違和感があるために、私ならパターンを戻すことを選びます。

少しだけ変えましたけど今回はまだこのリズムはkeepで
曲調上唯一のドラム変化と始拍のノーツを置くことで手前のfinisherの余韻がかなり薄れてしまい,,現状強い違和感がぬぐえないのでもう少しmodderの意見を集めてから検討します

01:21:120 - add k for snare
-1 01:22:508 (1,2) - move to 01:22:161 -
-2 01:23:548 - add k ?
・上記とほぼ同じ理由です。置き換えるパターンが長くなる配置がこの2箇所で反復性が取れるようなものになればそういった調子の譜面い変えるのも良いと思います。

01:21:120 -に関しては1回目のバイオリンfinisherの余韻01:11:409 (1,2,3) - 同様休符が必要だと思ったのでno change　で、　他はほぼ変更しました
[Futsuu]
00:49:213 (48) - del
・大きくパターンが変化する地点であり、この前までがリズム難、直後に難所が続くため、小休憩をどこかで入れたいと思ったためです。
この位置だと次以降のパターンに無理を与えないと考えましたが、大きくスネアが鳴っている地点なので非常に好みによるとは思います。

fixed. その通りでした、まったくもって流れにぴったりでした

01:24:415 (144) - move 1/2 >
・単純に音が多いこちらの方が適しているように感じました。
ボーカルやギターも伸びてるので、私には置き換えるのに問題のある場所ではないかと思いますが、この4連の状態も好きです。
いずれにしても、なかなか他の曲ではできない良い配置だと思うので選択は好みの割合が大きいと思います。

周辺配色を変更してmoveし(て、finisherを消し)ました
01:24:935 (145,146,147,148) -
01:27:016 (150,151,152,153) -
3/2配置に dkk 等
・序盤は3/2配置結構多かったように思うので特に1/1にする理由がなければ、この2箇所を3/2配置とすることで01:27:016 (150,151,152,153) - での2回目の音がはっきりとれてより感覚的な違和感を感じなくなると思います。
確かに1回目は1/1でとれるような音がありますが終盤の音が減ってきた箇所でより目立って太鼓音があると違和感が大きいためお願いしてみました。

そのパターンの方が十分によかったです;; ddk>>dkkと変化させるように変更

低難易度を特に見てくれということだったと思うのでやってきました。
色については一貫性がある程度あるのでなかなか指摘できない‥
というか自分の感覚では特に思い浮かばない　というのか本音であります。
また時間があれば他の難易度のmodに回ります。相変わらず稚拙な文章で申し訳ない。
最近自作譜面すら1日ではまともに難易度完成させないので人の譜面見るのに時間かかってしまうぞ~

ほんとに見てくれてありがとうございます;;; バランスが認識されづらいmappingでスミマセン(;_;
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Update all of diffs. (app. from Nofool , to MidSoul's mod.)

Last edited by JUDYDANNY 2015-05-09T13:12:01+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-09T12:58:24+00:00

Nofool wrote:
Hi' as requested via pm
nice song choice, i really like this one x_x

[BlackHairEND's Oni]
some inconsistency here imo, can't always know what you follow even tho your repsect a k rythm, also maybe lack of finisher at the end.
- move - 00:22:074 (95) - to - 00:21:901 - as k ? vocal.　　ok~!
- 00:26:496 - i suggest you to add two notes here to make the structure similar to earlier at a similar part, so maybe add kk (and change the 3rd k to d ?). ok! change kkd
- 00:33:606 (161,162) - mm i wonder if these k are good or not here, they don't follow the melody nor the vocal x_x.. 　I also think so. move to 00:33:779 -
- remove - 00:36:380 (176,177) -, change - 00:36:554 (178) - to d and add k at - 00:36:901 - ? vocal. umm... No change.　I have now the state has determined that it is best.
- remove - 00:49:906 (294) - ? another break since you style seems to be airy here.　　ok~ change!
- remove - 01:04:039 (348,349) - and do something like ddkkd instead of kkk d at - 01:04:646 - ? sounds more logic with the other break.　　mm... ddkkd is No changed but,kkk d is fixed.
- 01:12:623 - ddk instead of kkk ? melody. ok change!
- add d at - 01:14:964 - and remove - 01:15:138 (421,422) -, then omething at - 01:15:571 - and move - 01:16:178 (4) - to - 01:15:831 - and - 01:16:525 (7) - to - 01:16:352 - as d ? not a so big change, that would fit more the vocal/melody. ok~ change!
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Good luck'

Thanks mod~

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kouzuki_karen

948 posts

Joined March 2013

kouzuki_karen 2015-05-09T14:22:25+00:00

some things listed here might have already been covered in the previous two mods. (since I'm slow)

Kantan

I think in general kantan has too many notes as it is, thus giving you a spread of N-N-H-H-I. so here I suggest some notes you could remove, without ruining the melody.

00:07:941 (2) - delete
00:10:716 (6) - ^
00:14:531 (4) - ^
00:20:427 (3) - change to kat to have some variation here. don't think it matters too much that it differs from 00:23:201 (6) - since there is an additional note at the second part and its different anyway.
00:22:508 (5) - change to kat. for vocal?
00:38:982 (8,9,10) - I don't think these notes all need finishers. the level of emphasis on these notes is different. (eg. you can change 00:39:502 (9) - to kat to fix vocal, but if you do that then you should remove finisher on 00:40:542 (10) - to balance it out).
00:52:681 (2) - don't know what you're trying to match here, try moving it to 00:52:334 instead.
00:53:721 (4,5,6) - make kat-don-kat. first two notes here you should change so it sounds consistent with the previous timing signature. third note is to cover vocal, and to make the next timing signature different from the previous part.
00:55:456 (7) - again move to 00:55:109 like before
01:03:432 (2) - change to don. I kind of doubt that this note as a kat fits the current arrangement (and I think it's a good lead into the next d-k-k pattern).
01:07:941 (10) - just a suggestion but I think you should move to 01:07:248 for better mapping of vocal and instrument? (I honestly have no idea about this part lol)
01:10:716 (1) - don't really like this, it feels awkward to play. maybe try to remap this section :/ (I suggested something here)

Futsuu

change SV to 1.4.... pretty please?

from 00:18:346 (1) - to 00:23:895 (13) - don't know if it's intended but I don't think you're using the melody really well. eg:
00:19:733 (3,4,5) - can change to kat-don-kat? makes better use of the vocal
00:21:120 (6,7) - make this kat-don. vocal here descends.
00:22:508 (8) - can change to kat. different to the note after this.
00:25:282 (15,16,17) - I think it would make more sense if changed to all kat notes.
00:38:808 (24) - could add a don note here to map vocal better, hopefully that doesn't make it too hard orz
01:28:576 (155,156) - change these both to large kat. it fits/sounds/plays better.

Muzukashii

00:17:479 (23) - remove finish and add kat at 00:17:652 - ? I think it's more appropriate for the melody here.
00:40:542 (1) - remove finish? I think this is a normal sound that doesn't need emphasis
00:54:589 (12,13) - suggest to move to 00:54:242 - , I think this would be a better lead in to 00:54:415 (11) - (considering you don't have finish at (11))
01:04:646 - I think you could add kkk pattern here, it would reflect the previous part nicely.
01:05:513 (2) - again, normal sound and I don't think it needs emphasis

so remove finisher
01:28:577 (24,25,26) - change all three to large kat. same reason as Futsuu (and just realised that's violin sound lol)

BlackHairEND's Oni

00:12:797 (40) - I think you should change this note to kat to match the violin sound. (also would make more sense since the sounds is high-low-high from here).
00:17:999 (72,73,74) - don't know if it matters but if you look at JUDY's diff he/she uses 1/6 here, so try to at least match this.
00:32:045 - I think you can add a kat note here, I think this section is a bit undermapped in general. adding a note here would flow well from the previous combo to the next.
00:37:074 - add a kat here if you accept ^ , to be consistent
from 00:51:641 (278) - to 00:57:190 (313) - , contrary to what I said before I think you should map this part less densely. you have plenty of 1/4 patterns before (278). eg: 00:54:416 (294,295,296,297,298) - : I think this is unneccesary, what exactly does this match? lol
01:15:571 - can add a kat note here, and maybe even change 01:15:398 (424) - to don. like before, it leads into next part better

Oni

00:12:797 (1) - move to 00:12:970 - and add a kat note at 00:12:797 - , I think it matches violin sound more and it flows well with the next combo.
00:25:976 (22,23,24,25,26) - dkddk?
00:54:589 (27,28,29) - I don't think the triple really fits in with the rest of the other notes in this section. maybe move 00:54:589 (27) - to 00:54:242 - ?
01:01:352 - I think you should add a note (don) here, considering BlackHairEND's (easier) diff has one here.
01:28:577 (31,32,33) - same as easier diffs, change to kat-kat-kat notes?

that's all, and good luck. i hope that my mod was helpful.

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

JUDYDANNY 2015-05-11T02:07:21+00:00

"mrdumpling64"

some things listed here might have already been covered in the previous two mods. (since I'm slow)

Kantan

I think in general kantan has too many notes as it is, thus giving you a spread of N-N-H-H-I. so here I suggest some notes you could remove, without ruining the melody.

keep... I cant have a idea dat decrease the more notes for now... ;_;
00:07:941 (2) - delete
00:10:716 (6) - ^
00:14:531 (4) - ^

keep cuz of backsounds noisy.its better to set that dense isnt same 00:18:346 (1) - ~ part.

00:20:427 (3) - change to kat to have some variation here. don't think it matters too much that it differs from 00:23:201 (6) - since there is an additional note at the second part and its different anyway.

Applied. , changed some the colors on this part.
00:22:508 (5) - change to kat. for vocal?

no change, other sounds being low. kick, bass etc.
00:38:982 (8,9,10) - I don't think these notes all need finishers. the level of emphasis on these notes is different. (eg. you can change 00:39:502 (9) - to kat to fix vocal, but if you do that then you should remove finisher on 00:40:542 (10) - to balance it out).

applied to remove all finnishers.
00:52:681 (2) - don't know what you're trying to match here, try moving it to 00:52:334 instead.

no change. It's better to vary the space of instrumental imo.
00:53:721 (4,5,6) - make kat-don-kat. first two notes here you should change so it sounds consistent with the previous timing signature. third note is to cover vocal, and to make the next timing signature different from the previous part.

changed some color and patterns to make more consistency pattern.
00:55:456 (7) - again move to 00:55:109 like before

^
01:03:432 (2) - change to don. I kind of doubt that this note as a kat fits the current arrangement (and I think it's a good lead into the next d-k-k pattern).

piano sounds and it needs to kat o basic pattern, no change on general.
01:07:941 (10) - just a suggestion but I think you should move to 01:07:248 for better mapping of vocal and instrument? (I honestly have no idea about this part lol)

changed some patterns. :3
01:10:716 (1) - don't really like this, it feels awkward to play. maybe try to remap this section :/ (I suggested something here)

keep for now, I want to know other modders suggestion.

Futsuu

change SV to 1.4.... pretty please?

Sure.

from 00:18:346 (1) - to 00:23:895 (13) - don't know if it's intended but I don't think you're using the melody really well. eg:
00:19:733 (3,4,5) - can change to kat-don-kat? makes better use of the vocal
00:21:120 (6,7) - make this kat-don. vocal here descends.
00:22:508 (8) - can change to kat. different to the note after this.
00:25:282 (15,16,17) - I think it would make more sense if changed to all kat notes.

On this lonely part, vocal can ignore. so no change to change the color that emphashized to vocal.
But recieved your comments, I decided to change to some notes don>kat that followed to Instrumental backsound.

00:38:808 (24) - could add a don note here to map vocal better, hopefully that doesn't make it too hard orz

yeap, fixed.
01:28:576 (155,156) - change these both to large kat. it fits/sounds/plays better.

Piano sounds very low. I cant ignore this low tone on general. no change.

Muzukashii

00:17:479 (23) - remove finish and add kat at 00:17:652 - ? I think it's more appropriate for the melody here.

applied. sounds good!
00:40:542 (1) - remove finish? I think this is a normal sound that doesn't need emphasis

ok. Removed the finisher all of my diff.
00:54:589 (12,13) - suggest to move to 00:54:242 - , I think this would be a better lead in to 00:54:415 (11) - (considering you don't have finish at (11))

okay.
01:04:646 - I think you could add kkk pattern here, it would reflect the previous part nicely.

no change. I guess it need to play a decreased dense for players.
01:05:513 (2) - again, normal sound and I don't think it needs emphasis

so remove finisher

keep for now. want to emphasis this low tone.
01:28:577 (24,25,26) - change all three to large kat. same reason as Futsuu (and just realised that's violin sound lol)

same as Futsuu.

Oni

00:12:797 (1) - move to 00:12:970 - and add a kat note at 00:12:797 - , I think it matches violin sound more and it flows well with the next combo.

nice patttern but, dense blance is broken... ;_; no change.... uuu....
00:25:976 (22,23,24,25,26) - dkddk?

no change, they followed the piano (24,25).
00:54:589 (27,28,29) - I don't think the triple really fits in with the rest of the other notes in this section. maybe move 00:54:589 (27) - to 00:54:242 - ?

applied to only remove.
01:01:352 - I think you should add a note (don) here, considering BlackHairEND's (easier) diff has one here.

no change on general. low tone don doesnt fit as Instrumental.
01:28:577 (31,32,33) - same as easier diffs, change to kat-kat-kat notes?

same as others.
that's all, and good luck. i hope that my mod was helpful.]

thanks ! your mod is useful

Thanks for mod!

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-11T05:52:50+00:00

mrdumpling64 wrote:
some things listed here might have already been covered in the previous two mods. (since I'm slow)

BlackHairEND's Oni

00:12:797 (40) - I think you should change this note to kat to match the violin sound. (also would make more sense since the sounds is high-low-high from here). ok~ change k!
00:17:999 (72,73,74) - don't know if it matters but if you look at JUDY's diff he/she uses 1/6 here, so try to at least match this.　　ok change 1/6. Pattern is kkkd
00:32:045 - I think you can add a kat note here, I think this section is a bit undermapped in general. adding a note here would flow well from the previous combo to the next.　　ok~ add k
00:37:074 - add a kat here if you accept ^ , to be consistent add k
from 00:51:641 (278) - to 00:57:190 (313) - , contrary to what I said before I think you should map this part less densely. you have plenty of 1/4 patterns before (278). eg: 00:54:416 (294,295,296,297,298) - : I think this is unneccesary, what exactly does this match? lol　　　fmm ... it will change a little bit compatibility.　00:56:930 (314) - move to 00:57:103 - and 00:57:190 (316) - big note delete
01:15:571 - can add a kat note here, and maybe even change 01:15:398 (424) - to don. like before, it leads into next part better ok~ change.

that's all, and good luck. i hope that my mod was helpful.

Thanks mod~!

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Grimbow

424 posts

Joined February 2012

Grimbow 2015-05-12T19:52:51+00:00

Howdy, sorry I'm a bit late!

d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:08:982 (4,5) - Ctrl+g these two notes, this will change it to a dkd pattern and the k will land on a snare that is audible in the music, and I feel that the kat maps this kind of sound better than the don. (The same sound that this note maps: 00:12:450 (10) - )
00:14:531 (4,5) - ^
00:37:074 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+g this pattern so it changes to dkk instead, the vocals here are increasing in pitch and dkk follows that flow nicely
01:23:895 (2) - I suggest changing this to a kat since the vocals get higher here and there is also a snare hit on the drums where this note lands. The reason why it is only a suggestion is because that would change the pattern that it is in to a d k k k d and that might be a bit difficult, so I'll leave it up to you to decide!

[Futsuu]

00:08:982 (4,5) - Ctrl+g these two notes for the same reason I suggested in the Kantan
00:14:531 (4,5) - ^
00:39:328 (25,26) - If you are following the vocals here, ignore this suggestion, but if not, I suggest using Ctrl+g on these notes since the sound of the drum is getting a lot deeper where these notes land and the k d will follow that a bit better than the d k you have currently

[Muzukashii]

00:59:444 (10) - Change this note to a k since there is a snare hit played where this note lands and it is a higher pitch than the notes played after it
01:11:409 (2,3) - Ctrl+g these two notes, both the vocals and the drums here are descending and this change would help map it nicely
01:16:612 (23) - Move this note to 01:16:785 - Where it is currently it doesn't feel as if it is mapping anything too meaningful, but if you move it to the suggested time it will map a part of the vocals and still leave you with the same gap you had before
01:21:641 (40) - Change this to a d? I don't have a real reason, but when I tried it out in the editor, it felt like it fit better as a d to me!

[BlackHairEND's Oni]

00:27:537 (131,132,133) - Ctrl+g this pattern, the drums here descend in tone instead of get higher and the kkd pattern flows nicely into the finisher you have straight after too
00:54:589 (299) - Change this to a d? I know the vocals kind of wave here, but to me it sounds and plays better as kdddk. The reason why this is just a suggestion is because it is perfectly fine as is, it was just something I noticed when I played the map with that change!

[Oni]

00:45:571 (9,10) - Ctrl+g these two notes. I noticed this section here closely follows the drums and it sounded a bit off they way you have it just now. If you swap these two notes around, the k will land where the snare hit in the music is and it will make this whole section wrap up really nicely!
00:48:346 (9) - Change this note to a k, there is a snare hit in the music here. If you do change this to a k, I would suggest changing 00:48:519 (10) - to a d so you don't have too many k's in this part. I feel like changing 00:48:519 (10) - to a d also maps this section of the drums more closely too since where this note lands there is no snare hit like there is on the three notes after it, plus it makes a neat dkkkd pattern!

Ahhh I love this mapset! All the difficulties are really good and it sounds really nice with the hitsounds I have on.

Have a star and good luck with rank! (∩｀-´)⊃━

.*･｡ﾟ

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-13T04:45:45+00:00

Grimbow wrote:
Howdy, sorry I'm a bit late!

d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[BlackHairEND's Oni]

00:27:537 (131,132,133) - Ctrl+g this pattern, the drums here descend in tone instead of get higher and the kkd pattern flows nicely into the finisher you have straight after too　　No change. 　Your opinion is there some truth, it is, but I now place felt good.
00:54:589 (299) - Change this to a d? I know the vocals kind of wave here, but to me it sounds and plays better as kdddk. The reason why this is just a suggestion is because it is perfectly fine as is, it was just something I noticed when I played the map with that change! 　　　sorry, No change. I want to place the kdkdk in order to express the sound hoarse.

Ahhh I love this mapset! All the difficulties are really good and it sounds really nice with the hitsounds I have on. Have a star and good luck with rank! (∩｀-´)⊃━.*･｡ﾟ

thanks mod~ :3

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2015-05-13T05:16:19+00:00

Yo! w

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is Finish don note
K is Finish kat note
Purple is UnRankable , Please change
Green is I would strongly recommend
black is Pointed out that

[

General]

( TV Size ) いるのかな？ Rankedしてるほうにはないから気になった程度で :3

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[

Kantan]

01:06:554 (1) - Delete ? ( Kantanだしいらないんじゃないかな？って思ったよ )
01:20:080 (2) - move 01:19:906 (2) - ( Futsuuなら確実にこうしたほうがいいと思うって言えるけどkntnだしお任せ～ )

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Futsuu]

00:12:623 (12) - Delete ( 音はある　けど最初の方だしって意見 00:12:797 (1,2) - ここの感覚もあるし1/4で置かなくてもいいんじゃないかな？
00:40:889 (30) - 00:43:664 (35) - 00:46:438 (40) - Delete & 00:44:184 (35) - move 00:44:011 (35) - / 00:46:958 (40) - move 00:46:785 (40) - / ( どうだろうか　？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？ )

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[

Muzukashii]

・ちょっとノーツを削る方針での指摘していきますね～
00:17:826 (25,26,27,28) - k kkk -> kkk delete ? ( 3連を１ノーツ分せっかちさせて後ろdeleteはどうですか？ )
00:40:282 (9) - Delete ( ddd k k でもいいと思うんだゾ )
01:24:675 (9) - ^
00:53:721 (9) - move 00:53:895 (9) - ( 卍タイコフメン卍っぽくない？ってだけです単発の２連ほしい )

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BlackHairオイコノヤロウ's Oni]

IRC

15:34 *toara_fict is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/692819 Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo (TV Size)]
15:35 toara_fict: お　ま　た　せ
15:35 BlackHairEND: おうあくしろよ（せっかち）
15:35 toara_fict: しょうがねぇなあ(悟空)
15:35 toara_fict: じゃけん指摘していきますよ～イクイク！ヌッ！
15:35 BlackHairEND: あぁ＾～いいっすね＾～
15:35 toara_fict: 00:22:421 (99) -  Change k
15:36 toara_fict: 00:22:508 (100) -  ここのてまえ ( 00:22:421 (99) - )からおとがあがっている
15:36 toara_fict: と　おもう
15:36 BlackHairEND: ok change~
15:37 toara_fict: 00:24:675 (113) - 　some
15:38 BlackHairEND: ok
15:38 toara_fict:  00:27:537 (131,132,133) -  こ↑こ↓
15:38 toara_fict: 何にあわせてる
15:39 BlackHairEND: drum
15:39 toara_fict: 00:27:537 (131,132,133) - 　Drum ( タム音にあわせてるなら ) Ctrl g ?
15:40 toara_fict: 00:27:537 (131,132) - ここ同じ高さで00:27:710 (133) - ここ低い
15:41 BlackHairEND: ok change~
15:42 toara_fict: 00:28:924 (136) - 　00:29:184 (138,139) - delete 00:29:097 (137) - change d ( d kkk -> * d** ) {*=Delete}
15:42 toara_fict: Drum follow なら 
15:42 toara_fict: 00:29:184 (138,139) -  ここどらむなっしんぐ先輩Maybe
15:44 BlackHairEND: 00:29:097 (137) -
15:44 BlackHairEND: 00:28:924 (136,137) -
15:44 BlackHairEND: Ctrl+g
15:44 toara_fict: 00:35:687 (175,176,177) -  Change dkk or dkd 先輩
15:45 toara_fict: I feel sそう思った
15:47 BlackHairEND: 00:35:687 (175) - 　ok change d
15:47 BlackHairEND: dkd
15:47 toara_fict: okay
15:49 toara_fict: 00:58:317 (322) -  move 00:58:143 (321) -  & 00:58:404 (323) -  change d
15:49 toara_fict: 00:58:143 (321) -  ハイハットおじさんわこつしてる
15:50 toara_fict: if それを変えたのならば 00:58:837 (326) -  add k　先輩
15:50 toara_fict: 00:58:057 (320,321,322,323) - 　d kkk -> dkk d
15:51 toara_fict: 00:58:837 (326) - 
15:51 toara_fict: ここ？
15:52 BlackHairEND: 00:58:837 -
15:52 BlackHairEND: No change
15:52 toara_fict: ﾎﾟｯﾁｬﾏ...
15:53 toara_fict: 01:13:577 (415) -  add d入れたら楽しそう(こなみかん）
15:57 BlackHairEND: No change~
15:57 toara_fict: ﾎﾟｯﾁｬﾏ...
15:57 BlackHairEND: ??
15:57 toara_fict: もう言うこと特にないんよ～
15:57 toara_fict: お疲れナス！
15:57 BlackHairEND: ありがとナス！

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[

Oni]

00:33:432 (1,2) - swap? ( 00:33:606 (2) - こっち可で拾いたいなあ )
01:11:583 (4,5) - swap ? dkdどうですか？なんかアリだとおもう
01:23:028 (7,8) - ^

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いつも通りといいますかこんな感じしか思ったのないです
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3: :3

Last edited by toara_fict 2015-05-13T07:02:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-13T06:58:18+00:00

toara_fict thanks mod

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JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

JUDYDANNY 2015-05-13T07:04:36+00:00

Update BlackHairEND's Oni.

Renka

858 posts

Joined May 2014

Renka 2015-05-13T15:06:24+00:00

こんにちは～！ＰＭから　

Kantan

00:14:531 - change k,00:14:878 - change d? - こっちもいいかなと思います、提案
00:48:172(19,20,21) - Ctrl+G? - こっちの方が音もよく聞こえて譜面の見栄え？も良くなるかなと思います
00:54:068(4,5) - Ctrl+G?

Futsuu

00:14:531 - change k? - かんたんと同じ
00:51:467 - change k? - こちらでも良さげかな～と・・
01:12:970 - change d? - こっちの方が統一感？出ると思います

Muzukashii

00:27:710 - change k? - 音が一定に感じたので、kkkでも良いかと
00:40:282 - delete? - ddd kkkにする必要ないかな？と感じました
00:42:276(4,5,6,7) - change dkkd? - kddkときてるのでdkkdと置いたら統一感出るかなと。音の方はこちらでもよく感じます。
00:45:831 - move to 00:45:658 ? -　こちらでも合うかと、好み？
00:48:606 - move to 00:48:432 ? - ^

BlackHairEND's Oni

00:07:941(11,12,13) - change ddk? - こっちの方がしっくりくるかな？と思います
00:38:115 - change k? - ボーカルが前の音と比べて高くなっているように感じました。
00:38:288 - change d? - 上の音と比べ低くなっているので

Oni

特に気になるところはありませんでした！good map!

良い曲、いい譜面！ランクド頑張ってください！good luck~!~~よかったらじゅださんツイッターフォローして；ｗ；~~

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

JUDYDANNY 2015-05-14T15:28:18+00:00

Replys: ~~Editing...~~

Done.
Update : Done.

"Grimbow"

Howdy, sorry I'm a bit late!

d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:08:982 (4,5) - Ctrl+g these two notes, this will change it to a dkd pattern and the k will land on a snare that is audible in the music, and I feel that the kat maps this kind of sound better than the don. (The same sound that this note maps: 00:12:450 (10) - )

no change. dkd varyed the pace of Instrumental. I think snare flow is good only 00:12:450 (10) - (stronger than others).
00:14:531 (4,5) - ^

same as above.
00:37:074 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+g this pattern so it changes to dkk instead, the vocals here are increasing in pitch and dkk follows that flow nicely

no change.consistent with 00:29:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
01:23:895 (2) - I suggest changing this to a kat since the vocals get higher here and there is also a snare hit on the drums where this note lands. The reason why it is only a suggestion is because that would change the pattern that it is in to a d k k k d and that might be a bit difficult, so I'll leave it up to you to decide!

fixed~.

[Futsuu]

00:08:982 (4,5) - Ctrl+g these two notes for the same reason I suggested in the Kantan

same as Kantan.
00:14:531 (4,5) - ^

same as Kantan.
00:39:328 (25,26) - If you are following the vocals here, ignore this suggestion, but if not, I suggest using Ctrl+g on these notes since the sound of the drum is getting a lot deeper where these notes land and the k d will follow that a bit better than the d k you have currently

skip, yes followed vocal.

[Muzukashii]

00:59:444 (10) - Change this note to a k since there is a snare hit played where this note lands and it is a higher pitch than the notes played after it

Applied , and deleted 1/4 triplet.
01:11:409 (2,3) - Ctrl+g these two notes, both the vocals and the drums here are descending and this change would help map it nicely

wow, sounds good. fixed~:3
01:16:612 (23) - Move this note to 01:16:785 - Where it is currently it doesn't feel as if it is mapping anything too meaningful, but if you move it to the suggested time it will map a part of the vocals and still leave you with the same gap you had before

moved as your suggestion and changed some colors.
01:21:641 (40) - Change this to a d? I don't have a real reason, but when I tried it out in the editor, it felt like it fit better as a d to me!

lol , fixed.

[Oni]

00:45:571 (9,10) - Ctrl+g these two notes. I noticed this section here closely follows the drums and it sounded a bit off they way you have it just now. If you swap these two notes around, the k will land where the snare hit in the music is and it will make this whole section wrap up really nicely!

Applied.
00:48:346 (9) - Change this note to a k, there is a snare hit in the music here. If you do change this to a k, I would suggest changing 00:48:519 (10) - to a d so you don't have too many k's in this part. I feel like changing 00:48:519 (10) - to a d also maps this section of the drums more closely too since where this note lands there is no snare hit like there is on the three notes after it, plus it makes a neat dkkkd pattern!

changed some.

Ahhh I love this mapset! All the difficulties are really good and it sounds really nice with the hitsounds I have on.

Have a star and good luck with rank! (∩｀-´)⊃━

.*･｡ﾟ

Thanks for mod and Star~~ヾ(*'-'*)

"toara_fict"

Yo! w

Yo! w

[

General]

( TV Size ) いるのかな？ Rankedしてるほうにはないから気になった程度で :3

既存mapsetの大半はhttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4131396/に記載してるソースのCDが出る(Feb 25, 2015)前にRankedしてしまったので表記がないってことです。
公式ソースが存在する現在は(TV Size)が必須ですね。
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[

Kantan]

01:06:554 (1) - Delete ? ( Kantanだしいらないんじゃないかな？って思ったよ )
no chagne で;;
01:20:080 (2) - move 01:19:906 (2) - ( Futsuuなら確実にこうしたほうがいいと思うって言えるけどkntnだしお任せ～ )
直前で怪しいリズムを用いてしまっているのでno change ><

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[

Futsuu]

00:12:623 (12) - Delete ( 音はある　けど最初の方だしって意見 00:12:797 (1,2) - ここの感覚もあるし1/4で置かなくてもいいんじゃないかな？
1/1手前にmoveしました, 後ろの間隔の違和感の緩和のみ考慮
00:40:889 (30) - 00:43:664 (35) - 00:46:438 (40) - Delete & 00:44:184 (35) - move 00:44:011 (35) - / 00:46:958 (40) - move 00:46:785 (40) - / ( どうだろうか　？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？ )
Muzuとのspread差が;;;;;;;;;;;

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[

Muzukashii]

・ちょっとノーツを削る方針での指摘していきますね～
00:17:826 (25,26,27,28) - k kkk -> kkk delete ? ( 3連を１ノーツ分せっかちさせて後ろdeleteはどうですか？ )
okay.
00:40:282 (9) - Delete ( ddd k k でもいいと思うんだゾ )
ソウデスネ
01:24:675 (9) - ^
ハイ
00:53:721 (9) - move 00:53:895 (9) - ( 卍タイコフメン卍っぽくない？ってだけです単発の２連ほしい )

GOD.
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[

Oni]

00:33:432 (1,2) - swap? ( 00:33:606 (2) - こっち可で拾いたいなあ )
hihatはAメロの最初ですでにdで置いてるんでここにd置くだけで十分にfitしてると思いまし
01:11:583 (4,5) - swap ? dkdどうですか？なんかアリだとおもうタムがダンダン低いのでアリですね
01:23:028 (7,8) - ^ GOD.

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いつも通りといいますかこんな感じしか思ったのないです
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3: :3

"chaica"

こんにちは～！ＰＭから　

[Kantan]00:14:531 - change k,00:14:878 - change d? - こっちもいいかなと思います、提案

聞こえがいいといえばいいのですが,, 前奏でd-k-dkdを用いるとサビでの緩急表現が怪しくなるのでno　changeで;;
00:48:172(19,20,21) - Ctrl+G? - こっちの方が音もよく聞こえて譜面の見栄え？も良くなるかなと思います

no change ;; ただ、配色は少し検討します
00:54:068(4,5) - Ctrl+G?

no change;;

[Futsuu]00:14:531 - change k? - かんたんと同じ

fixed.
00:51:467 - change k? - こちらでも良さげかな～と・・

fixed.
01:12:970 - change d? - こっちの方が統一感？出ると思います

iidesune !

[Muzukashii]00:27:710 - change k? - 音が一定に感じたので、kkkでも良いかと

applied.
00:40:282 - delete? - ddd kkkにする必要ないかな？と感じました

okay.
00:42:276(4,5,6,7) - change dkkd? - kddkときてるのでdkkdと置いたら統一感出るかなと。音の方はこちらでもよく感じます。

1/4の3連以外は基本的にドラムフローで配置したいのでno changeで
00:45:831 - move to 00:45:658 ? -　こちらでも合うかと、好み？

applied. ランダム要素と思われる可能性もあるので 3連の位置統一します
00:48:606 - move to 00:48:432 ? - ^

same.

[Oni]特に気になるところはありませんでした！good map!

良い曲、いい譜面！ランクド頑張ってください！good luck~!~~よかったらじゅださんツイッターフォローして；ｗ；~~

ありがとうございます!! ツイッターフォローどもです><

Thanks for mods!

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-14T16:46:26+00:00

chaica wrote:
こんにちは～！ＰＭから　

BlackHairEND's Oni
00:07:941(11,12,13) - change ddk? - こっちの方がしっくりくるかな？と思います　　No change. ここはハイハットの音に合わせていて自分はkkdに聞こえているので変えません。
00:38:115 - change k? - ボーカルが前の音と比べて高くなっているように感じました。　　No change. ここは後ろの音は低いように感じるのでdのままで。
00:38:288 - change d? - 上の音と比べ低くなっているので　　No change. ここは少し高い音が聞こえます　kのままがいいと判断したので変更はしないです。

良い曲、いい譜面！ランクド頑張ってください！good luck~!~~よかったらじゅださんツイッターフォローして；ｗ；~~

Thanks mod~

EdamaMe411

512 posts

Joined April 2014

EdamaMe411 2015-05-19T05:05:41+00:00

こんにちわ～。modさせてもらいます。うまくできないと思うのですが、頑張ってやっていきます。
？は自信がいないかそんなに強い提案ではないって意味です。

Ｋａｎｔａｎ

00:38:982 (8) - ここの音はどこ拾ってるのかなって感じになります。音の変化の付けたかはおかしくないのですがこれが、Kantanというのを考えると
私は00:39:155 - ここにしますね、声に合わせているなら、急に外すのもあれかな~っと思ったので!
01:10:716 (5) - ここなんか変化感じに聞こえちゃいます

（てか、リズムがムズイっすね。。。）自分ならｄにして01:11:063 - ここにｋ入れます。
どうっすかね。。。

Ｆｕｔｓｕｕ

00:40:889 (30) - これをｄにして00:41:063 - に移動。00:41:409 (31) - を00:41:236 - に移動。
00:41:236 - ^ふまえてｄ追加?（ここはこんなリズムもありかな~くらいの提案です）
01:25:456 (145,146) - Ctrl+Gボーカルのしゃくり方からこっちのがいいと判断しました

Ｍｕｚｕｋａｓｈｉｉ

00:09:328 (9,10,11,12,13) - (k d k k d)?バイオリンの音をたんにとって見ました。
01:16:612 (23) - これ、01:16:785 - 個々のほうがスキっすね～、表伯から入ってきてるんで裏箔で統一したほうがきれいだと思いました！

くろかみさんのOni

00:09:242 - ｋ追加？00:09:415 (20) - delete?,,,,00:07:074 (5,6,7) - ここは裏箔から入ってるので、せめて最初は統一したいなって思いました！
00:45:398 (239) - ｄ？00:46:091 (244) - ボーカルの声に合わせてみました。こっちのが個人的にすっきり聞こえます！

00:52:594 - ｄ　00:52:768 (287) - delete...00:52:681 (286,287,288) - 直前に同じようなパートで裏箔できれいに決まっていたので、表伯にすると、ここ浮いて聞こえちゃいます

00:54:069 (294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301) - ^同様です。裏箔からスタートするのをお勧めします。
01:16:352 (434) - delete この１/４ノーツは違和感感じました、、、
01:16:872 - d追加？^ふまえて

じゅださんのOni

00:26:149 (23) - k　ボーカルはここから裏声してません？
00:51:467 (13) - ｋ？　これ難しくなるのですが、音程どがえしで、ｄｄｄｄｄは個人的に避けちゃうので

01:05:513 (2) - 個々の大音符はん？って思いました、、、その次から大音符続くし、いらなくてもいいかもっす。
01:16:612 (32) - これを01:16:785 - に移動。Muzuとおんなじところです。

以上です=くろかみさんもじゅださんもファイティンなのです！

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-19T07:56:25+00:00

EdamaMe411 wrote:
こんにちわ～。modさせてもらいます。うまくできないと思うのですが、頑張ってやっていきます。
？は自信がいないかそんなに強い提案ではないって意味です。

くろかみさんのOni
00:09:242 - ｋ追加？00:09:415 (20) - delete?,,,,00:07:074 (5,6,7) - ここは裏箔から入ってるので、せめて最初は統一したいなって思いました！　　　ok~ 納得できるのでchange.
00:45:398 (239) - ｄ？00:46:091 (244) - ボーカルの声に合わせてみました。こっちのが個人的にすっきり聞こえます！ 00:45:398 (239) - ここは後ろのシンバルに合わせているのでNo change.　00:46:091 (244) - こっちはdでも違和感がなかったので変えました！
00:52:594 - ｄ　00:52:768 (287) - delete...00:52:681 (286,287,288) - 直前に同じようなパートで裏箔できれいに決まっていたので、表伯にすると、ここ浮いて聞こえちゃいます　　ok change.
00:54:069 (294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301) - ^同様です。裏箔からスタートするのをお勧めします。　　ok ここも変えます、ですが、00:54:416 (297,298,299,300,301) - この部分はボーカルに沿って配置しているのでNo changeで。
01:16:352 (434) - delete この１/４ノーツは違和感感じました、、、　　No change.　ボーカルに合わせて置いていますが、最後の盛り上げとして少し追加している部分です。消さないほうが良いと感じたので変えません。
01:16:872 - d追加？^ふまえて　　ここに追加するのはたしかに良いとおもうのですが、純粋にドラムの音をとってddkkという配置を楽しめなくなってしまうのでNoi change.

以上です=くろかみさんもじゅださんもファイティンなのです！

Mod ありがとうございます！

い　つ　も　の　

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Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2015-05-24T12:53:10+00:00

hi~ world's end × BlackHairEND =w=!

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

General]

Good?

[

Kantan]

00:57:890 - ここにk入れてもいいと思います。多分バイオリンだとは思うのですが、その音に合わせた提案です。

[

Futsuu]

00:40:377 - k追加。ボーカルに合わせた提案です。

[

Muzukashii]

00:22:502 - を 00:22:690 - へ移動 00:22:861 - を 00:23:019 - へ移動。この配置のが好みです。

00:26:138 - d入れてもいいかな～と思いました。

00:58:748 - ここにもノーツ入れてもいいかな～でも1/2パターンが長くなるのでお任せです。

[

BlackHairEND's Oni]

01:28:400 - 削除、bigが1/2-3連で飛んでくるような場合、dがあると浮き、なければbigが映えるような気がします。

1/2の音の取り方とかGood.

[

Oni]

見つけられませんでした。Awesome!

Oniのどっちか"求めてなぁぁぁぁい"で1/3拾ってもいいと思った。変かなw？　ranked頑張ってください

morijo-

44 posts

Joined August 2012

morijo- 2015-05-26T06:57:01+00:00

Hi~/
遅くなってしまい申し訳ありません

※ (? はあまり自信ないです

BlackHairEnd' Oni

・00:12:623 -　ドラム音が普通に聞こえるのでノーツ置いた方が良いと思います
　　　

k を配置して 00:12:797 (40) - k→d とかどうですか？

・01:01:352 (338) - k→＾ (?
・01:05:687 (364) - d→＾ (?
・01:16:612 (436) - d→＾歌詞もここでブレス(?　入ってて一旦区切ってもいいかなと思いました

・01:25:629 (491) - d add (?

Oni

・00:42:537 (7) - k→d　(?

・01:16:612 (32) - d→^ 上と同じく

良譜面でした!!

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-26T17:06:00+00:00

Charlotte wrote:
hi~ world's end × BlackHairEND =w=!

[ about]
d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note
[ BlackHairEND's Oni]

01:28:400 - 削除、bigが1/2-3連で飛んでくるような場合、dがあると浮き、なければbigが映えるような気がします。　ok~ 削除しました！

1/2の音の取り方とかGood.　Thank you~ :3
Oniのどっちか"求めてなぁぁぁぁい"で1/3拾ってもいいと思った。変かなw？　ranked頑張ってください

Modありがとうございました！

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-05-26T17:12:26+00:00

morijo- wrote:
Hi~/
遅くなってしまい申し訳ありません

※ (? はあまり自信ないです
BlackHairEnd' Oni
・00:12:623 -　ドラム音が普通に聞こえるのでノーツ置いた方が良いと思います
　　　 k を配置して 00:12:797 (40) - k→d とかどうですか？　　ok~ 納得できるので変更します！

・01:01:352 (338) - k→＾ (?　　No change
・01:05:687 (364) - d→＾ (? No change
・01:16:612 (436) - d→＾歌詞もここでブレス(?　入ってて一旦区切ってもいいかなと思いました　　No change　ここは最後の盛り上げとしては撮っておきたいノーツなので変更しません　すいません；；

・01:25:629 (491) - d add (?　　No change ここ　01:25:629 -　に配置してしまうと、01:27:709 - この部分にもおかなくてはいけなくなるのでNoで。。。　

良譜面でした!!

Modありがとうございました！

しゃーろっとさんともりじょーさんのmodで変更した部分全部一緒です

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Apl_old_1

Apl_old_1 2015-05-26T17:56:11+00:00

Mod Request by JUDYDANNY

[General]
Offset -7

[Kantan]
00:57:190 - change a o
00:58:577 - change a o
01:18:519 - change a o

[Futsuu]
00:59:271 - change a o

[Muzukashii]
00:23:721 or 00:23:028 - add a o
00:59:617 - change a o

[BlackHairEND's Oni]
00:09:849 - change a o
00:10:022 - delete

[Oni]
00:33:606 (2) move→ 00:33:779
01:16:612 (32) move→ 01:16:785

頑張ってね

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

JUDYDANNY 2015-06-07T16:21:40+00:00

"EdamaMe411"

こんにちわ～。modさせてもらいます。うまくできないと思うのですが、頑張ってやっていきます。
？は自信がいないかそんなに強い提案ではないって意味です。

[Ｋａｎｔａｎ]00:38:982 (8) - ここの音はどこ拾ってるのかなって感じになります。音の変化の付けたかはおかしくないのですがこれが、Kantanというのを考えると
私は00:39:155 - ここにしますね、声に合わせているなら、急に外すのもあれかな~っと思ったので!

音の取ってる部類として間違っていないのでno changeで。
01:10:716 (5) - ここなんか変化感じに聞こえちゃいます

（てか、リズムがムズイっすね。。。）自分ならｄにして01:11:063 - ここにｋ入れます。
どうっすかね。。。

keepで;;

[Ｆｕｔｓｕｕ]00:40:889 (30) - これをｄにして00:41:063 - に移動。00:41:409 (31) - を00:41:236 - に移動。
00:41:236 - ^ふまえてｄ追加?（ここはこんなリズムもありかな~くらいの提案です）

アリっちゃアリですが、現状のスネアの形を取った方が綺麗且つやさしいと判断したのでno changeで。
01:25:456 (145,146) - Ctrl+Gボーカルのしゃくり方からこっちのがいいと判断しました

fixed.

[Ｍｕｚｕｋａｓｈｉｉ]00:09:328 (9,10,11,12,13) - (k d k k d)?バイオリンの音をたんにとって見ました。

バスドラのフローから外す程でもないと思ったのでddkkdで代わりに置きました。
01:16:612 (23) - これ、01:16:785 - 個々のほうがスキっすね～、表伯から入ってきてるんで裏箔で統一したほうがきれいだと思いました！

重低音のピアノが鳴ってるのでno change

[じゅださんのOni]00:26:149 (23) - k　ボーカルはここから裏声してません？

ピアノとドラムパート意識でボーカルは二の次にしてます

00:51:467 (13) - ｋ？　これ難しくなるのですが、音程どがえしで、ｄｄｄｄｄは個人的に避けちゃうので

changed some.
01:05:513 (2) - 個々の大音符はん？って思いました、、、その次から大音符続くし、いらなくてもいいかもっす。

弱アクセント鳴ってるのでno changeで
01:16:612 (32) - これを01:16:785 - に移動。Muzuとおんなじところです。

Same as muzukashii.

以上です=くろかみさんもじゅださんもファイティンなのです！

"Charlotte"

hi~ world's end × BlackHairEND =w=!

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

General]

Good?

[

Kantan]

00:57:890 - ここにk入れてもいいと思います。多分バイオリンだとは思うのですが、その音に合わせた提案です。
fixed.

[

Futsuu]

00:40:377 - k追加。ボーカルに合わせた提案です。
少し難しくなった気がしますが,,ひとまずaddしときました!

[

Muzukashii]

00:22:502 - を 00:22:690 - へ移動 00:22:861 - を 00:23:019 - へ移動。この配置のが好みです。
no change. 伴奏意識なのでリズムは変えない体でいきます

00:26:138 - d入れてもいいかな～と思いました。
no change. spread的にもホントはどこかに1/1を超える休憩を作りたいくらいなので無理にこれ以上詰める方針は避けたいです

00:58:748 - ここにもノーツ入れてもいいかな～でも1/2パターンが長くなるのでお任せです。
no change. 1/2が長くなるので;;

[

Oni]

見つけられませんでした。Awesome!

Oniのどっちか"求めてなぁぁぁぁい"で1/3拾ってもいいと思った。変かなw？　ranked頑張ってください

"morijo-"

Hi~/
遅くなってしまい申し訳ありません

※ (? はあまり自信ないです

[Oni]・00:42:537 (7) - k→d　(?

fixed.

・01:16:612 (32) - d→^ 上と同じく

重低音ピアノ鳴っているのでno changeで

良譜面でした!!

"kiicha"

Mod Request by JUDYDANNY

[General]
Offset -7

後日再確認します><

[Kantan]
00:57:190 - change a o

changed some.
00:58:577 - change a o

changed some.
01:18:519 - change a o

fixed.

[Futsuu]
00:59:271 - change a o

no changeでバスドラフローから外す程必要な変化でもないと思いました
[Muzukashii]
00:23:721 or 00:23:028 - add a o

no change. これ以上詰めると (というか現状でも)spreadが心配なので最小限に留めておきたいです;;
00:59:617 - change a o

no change.

[Oni]
00:33:606 (2) move→ 00:33:779

ドラムパートの移行で変化つけてます no changeで
01:16:612 (32) move→ 01:16:785

重低音のピアノが鳴っているので no changeで

頑張ってね

Thanks for mods ! そして返信がとても遅れてしまいスミマセンでした

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

JUDYDANNY 2015-06-07T16:23:13+00:00

Futsuu , Muzukashii , Oni >>> decreased the some density.

Oni >>> SR 3.96 → 3.79 , 1/6 kkkd changed to 1/4 kkk . It seems not to suit as the whole difficulty.

And I will check the offset again.

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-06-11T15:44:36+00:00

kiicha wrote:
Mod Request by JUDYDANNY

[BlackHairEND's Oni]
00:09:849 - change a o　　　ok~
00:10:022 - delete ok! change~

頑張ってね

Thanks mod!

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JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

JUDYDANNY 2015-06-11T16:30:29+00:00

Updated and Moved to Pending.
Offset -5ms.

SKSalt

551 posts

Joined September 2013

SKSalt 2015-06-27T01:40:00+00:00

Hi, Juda. ほんとうっっっっっに遅くなってすいません;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

KantanとFutsuuについては特に何も提案が見つからなかったので割愛。。。

[Muzukashii]

00:50:595 ~ 00:51:636 - 実際にプレイしてみました。そしたらここだけリズムが行き詰まっている感じがしました。僕的には00:51:375 を 00:51:202に移動したほうがいいと思いました。もし移動するなら移動した後の3連の前後のノーツはdで統一するのがbestだと思います。

[BlackHairEND's Oni]

00:56:318 - change to k, 前後のノーツのドンとカツのバランスを考慮するとこういう結論に。

[Oni]

01:24:063(4,5) 入れ替える, 主観です。もう少しBlackHairEND's Oniとの差分をつけたいのであればここを変更するのがベターかと。

あぁ...かなり内容の薄いmodになってしまった...kudosuはいらないです

Rankedがんばってください！

-Sh1n1-

3,402 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2015-06-27T16:37:38+00:00

Sorry, I'm really late DD: but hope to help you

[About]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note

[Kantan]

00:34:295 (9,10) - delete both, you need a rest here because from 00:29:439 - to 00:39:497 - you didn't add a break, moreover, voice is decreasing and you will find a better rhythm.
01:24:584 (4) - two options:
1. Delete to add more emphasis to 01:24:930 (5) -
2. Change to d, 01:24:237 (3,4,5) - It feels like high-low-high and 01:24:237 (3) - sounds good as k, 1 is the best imo
This part it's only my opinion but the beginning should be with less density, I'll select notes that in my opinion you should delete, try this and if you are not agree only ctrl+z xD, 00:07:936 (2) - 00:08:977 (4) - 00:10:711 (7) - 00:13:485 (2) - 00:14:526 (4) - and 00:16:260 (7) -

[Futsuu]

00:15:913 (7) - delete for consistency with preview pattern.
00:21:809 (7) - change to k for high vocal pitch
00:50:595 (52) - 00:51:462 (55) - should be removed to keep consistency with 00:53:716 (61,62,63,64,65) -, feels better imo
01:16:607 (122) - move to 01:15:219 - to follow voice better, here is not important to keep consistency with first part of kiai because isn't the same melody

[Muzukashii]

00:11:404 (19) - I think that this note is better at 00:11:578 - than 00:11:404 -
00:51:289 (7,8,9) - sounds weird, 00:51:375 (8) - move to 00:51:202 - and change to d, them change 00:51:289 - change to d too
01:14:266 (9,10) - delete these notes, feels like overmapped and a forced tripletn
Nice diff

[BlackHairEND's Oni]

00:10:190 (24) - move to 00:10:017 - , you are adding a rest on this sound 00:08:456 - 00:11:231 - 00:14:006 - , the same sound is on 00:10:017 - 00:12:792 -, your rest were on red tick and the other two points are on white tick, this is like your breaks should be .
00:12:965 (41) - remove this note, for consistency with previews patterns
00:21:896 (95) - move to 00:21:722 - for a better rhythm
00:24:584 (112,113) - same here move to 00:24:497 -
from 00:18:341 - to 00:27:878 - calm part of the song, you should reduce some triplets and add more breaks.
You don't have consistency with previews patterns, example: 00:30:479 (146,147) - with 00:36:029 (178,179) - , try to keep consistency from 00:29:439 - to 00:33:427 - with 00:34:988 - to 00:37:763 - to make this diff more clean, because at first impresion It's like you put triplets randomly
You make long combos on kiai, I'll mark where you should add breaks: 01:03:601 - 01:06:375 - 01:14:699 - 01:16:607 -

[Oni]

00:53:543 (7) - should be d because is the same high vocal pitch as 00:53:023 (5) - , yo need to change 00:53:370 (6,7,8,9,10) -
01:21:809 (62,63) - change to d d, more playable and follow voice nice
I love this Oni, really

Best of luck Judy, Take my star and hope to see this mapset ranked asap

tina71129

115 posts

Joined June 2013

tina71129 2015-06-30T04:44:37+00:00

Hi~ Mod request. Sorry for the long delay

Muzukashii

00:17:300 (22,23) - Ctrl+G
01:07:763 (1,2) - ^

BlackHairEND's Oni

00:24:583 (112,113,114) - kkd?

Oni

00:16:780 (6) - D?
01:16:953 (33,34) - Ctrl+G

good luck!

BlackHairEND

305 posts

Joined March 2013

BlackHairEND 2015-07-04T18:58:51+00:00

-Sh1n1-'s Mod

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Sorry, I'm really late DD: but hope to help you

[About]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note
[BlackHairEND's Oni]

00:10:190 (24) - move to 00:10:017 - , you are adding a rest on this sound 00:08:456 - 00:11:231 - 00:14:006 - , the same sound is on 00:10:017 - 00:12:792 -, your rest were on red tick and the other two points are on white tick, this is like your breaks should be .　　ok~ changed
00:12:965 (41) - remove this note, for consistency with previews patterns ok delete
00:21:896 (95) - move to 00:21:722 - for a better rhythm No change. I want to take care of the sound of the vocal。
00:24:584 (112,113) - same here move to 00:24:497 - 　No change. It is fit to drum behind sound.
from 00:18:341 - to 00:27:878 - calm part of the song, you should reduce some triplets and add more breaks.　　I especially feel that it is not the part to worry about.And it will not be changed.
You don't have consistency with previews patterns, example: 00:30:479 (146,147) - with 00:36:029 (178,179) - , try to keep consistency from 00:29:439 - to 00:33:427 - with 00:34:988 - to 00:37:763 - to make this diff more clean, because at first impresion It's like you put triplets randomly　　ok I've added here 00:33:601 -
You make long combos on kiai, I'll mark where you should add breaks: 01:03:601 - 01:06:375 - 01:14:699 - 01:16:607 - 　ok~ add break point here 01:06:375 - 01:16:607 -
Best of luck Judy, Take my star and hope to see this mapset ranked asap

thanks mod!!

-Eternal Love-'s Mod

-Eternal Love- wrote:
Hi~ Mod request. Sorry for the long delay

[box=BlackHairEND's Oni]00:24:583 (112,113,114) - kkd? No change.

good luck!

Thanks mod! but No change ;w;

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BlackHairEND

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BlackHairEND 2015-07-04T18:59:52+00:00

Sorry I'm baka ;; 2post;;

JUDYDANNY

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JUDYDANNY 2015-07-06T13:38:54+00:00

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Hi, Juda. ほんとうっっっっっに遅くなってすいません;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

KantanとFutsuuについては特に何も提案が見つからなかったので割愛。。。

[Muzukashii]

00:50:595 ~ 00:51:636 - 実際にプレイしてみました。そしたらここだけリズムが行き詰まっている感じがしました。僕的には00:51:375 を 00:51:202に移動したほうがいいと思いました。もし移動するなら移動した後の3連の前後のノーツはdで統一するのがbestだと思います。:arrow: fixed

[Oni]

01:24:063(4,5) 入れ替える, 主観です。もう少しBlackHairEND's Oniとの差分をつけたいのであればここを変更するのがベターかと。よりシンプルにさせるために複合を分解して連打２つに変えました。なるべく配色は整えたいのでkdddkkkはスルーで;;

あぁ...かなり内容の薄いmodになってしまった...kudosuはいらないです

Rankedがんばってください！

modありがとです!!!

"-Sh1n1-"

Sorry, I'm really late DD: but hope to help you

[Kantan]

00:34:295 (9,10) - delete both, you need a rest here because from 00:29:439 - to 00:39:497 - you didn't add a break, moreover, voice is decreasing and you will find a better rhythm. keep, flow is drums and simple imo.
01:24:584 (4) - two options: decided to delete only.
1. Delete to add more emphasis to 01:24:930 (5) -
2. Change to d, 01:24:237 (3,4,5) - It feels like high-low-high and 01:24:237 (3) - sounds good as k, 1 is the best imo
This part it's only my opinion but the beginning should be with less density, I'll select notes that in my opinion you should delete, try this and if you are not agree only ctrl+z xD, 00:07:936 (2) - 00:08:977 (4) - 00:10:711 (7) - 00:13:485 (2) - 00:14:526 (4) - and 00:16:260 (7) -
This part sounds very noisy, but I also agree to make an easier as beginning. So, I changed to some colors.

[Futsuu]

00:15:913 (7) - delete for consistency with preview pattern. Sure.
00:21:809 (7) - change to k for high vocal pitch No change , this part is for drums.
00:50:595 (52) - 00:51:462 (55) - should be removed to keep consistency with 00:53:716 (61,62,63,64,65) -, feels better imo changed some patterns.
01:16:607 (122) - move to 01:15:219 - to follow voice better, here is not important to keep consistency with first part of kiai because isn't the same melody It's important to keep consistency with 1st cuz of low-tone bass and piano sounds, not vocal.

[Muzukashii]

00:11:404 (19) - I think that this note is better at 00:11:578 - than 00:11:404 - yeas.
00:51:289 (7,8,9) - sounds weird, 00:51:375 (8) - move to 00:51:202 - and change to d, them change 00:51:289 - change to d too changed some.
01:14:266 (9,10) - delete these notes, feels like overmapped and a forced tripletn for spread , keep for now.
Nice diff

[Oni]

00:53:543 (7) - should be d because is the same high vocal pitch as 00:53:023 (5) - , yo need to change 00:53:370 (6,7,8,9,10) - uuuuuum...... okay, tried to change.
01:21:809 (62,63) - change to d d, more playable and follow voice nice followed to violin, no change.
I love this Oni, really thx

Best of luck Judy, Take my star and hope to see this mapset ranked asap

Nice to hear that

c'mon BNs.

"-Eternal Love-"

Hi~ Mod request. Sorry for the long delay

[Muzukashii]00:17:300 (22,23) - Ctrl+G

no change, for drum flows.
01:07:763 (1,2) - ^

Same.

[Oni]00:16:780 (6) - D?

Sure.
01:16:953 (33,34) - Ctrl+G

changed some.

good luck!

Thanks for mod

Sorry to reply , and Thanks for mods !!

Oni and Muzukashii changed some by myself.

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