1. 00:17:022(1) - This isn't lined up with the last circle of the stream.
2. 00:32:793(3,5) - 5 doesn't line up with 3's slider end.
3. 01:04:336 - The orange 2 and the green 3 don't line up. I think you probably tried keeping to distance spacing, but please do your best to make it work, to make those two things stack neater.
   
   See?

   
4. 01:10:850(2,3,4) - 3 and 4 don't line up with the 2's slider end.
5. 01:25:936(6,1) - 6 isn't exactly in the center of 1. Also, I found the SV of 1 to be a bit surprising when I played it. I think if you moved 6 out of the center, and more on the slider's start, it'd be easier to adjust to the speed change. Optional, really, but I think it's a change that would be worth making.
   
   Kind of like this...?

   
   
   Overall, this map is mechanically fine, in my opinion. I like your mapping style. It's very clean.

1. 00:39:222 - It's not difficult (for me at least), but something feels weird about the direction of this mini slider. I tried ctrl+g, and it feels better, in my opinion, but I'm not sure how you'd like that. I would also try aiming it downward, more in the direction of 3, OR in the opposite direction of 3.
   
   Try these...

   
2. 00:56:793(1,3) - 1 isn't pointing exactly right, to line up with 3.
   
   See?

   
3. 01:08:279(2,3) - I'm not sure if you were trying to blanket 3 with 2, but if you were, it's very off in its current state.
   Also well mapped. Naisu~

1. 00:43:422(2) - Move to x:136
2. 00:44:279(5) - Move this to accommodate the movement of 2.

• 
  I get really anal about blanketing issues in Normal and Easy maps because it's so much easier to tell whether something blankets well or not since there aren't as many objects to look at in the first place.

1. 00:09:479(5,1) - Fix 1. One way to tell is by taking advantage of slider ball indicators, approach circles, etc.
   
   Like so...

   
2. 00:11:879(6,1) - Fix 6.
   
   See?

   
3. 00:47:022(3,4) - Fix 4. The slider end is a little off.
4. 00:58:507(4,5) - Fix 5. The slider end of 5 is a little too low.
5. Lastly, I'm not sure if it's the best idea, but you could be consistent with the rest of the mapset by ending this with a spinner... but I can understand not doing so because this is a Normal diff.... your call (personally, I think anyone would be capable of a spinner at the end of a song).

1. 00:49:250(2,3) - FIX DAT BLANKT BRUH.
2. 01:03:479(2,3) - FIX DAT 3
3. 01:07:765(1,2) - DAS NASTY BRUH. FIX DAT (move 1 on the time line closer to 2 so you can use the approach circle to help you).
4. 01:21:479(1,2) - 2 is looking way too high bruh. It's not center. Fix pl0x.

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~

[Rinshan-Kaihou]

1. 00:17:022(1) - This isn't lined up with the last circle of the stream.
2. 00:32:793(3,5) - 5 doesn't line up with 3's slider end.They are not lined up because of stack leneiency, so I don't see a problem here
3. 01:04:336 - The orange 2 and the green 3 don't line up. I think you probably tried keeping to distance spacing, but please do your best to make it work, to make those two things stack neater.
   
   See?

   
4. 01:10:850(2,3,4) - 3 and 4 don't line up with the 2's slider end. ^
5. 01:25:936(6,1) - 6 isn't exactly in the center of 1. Also, I found the SV of 1 to be a bit surprising when I played it. I think if you moved 6 out of the center, and more on the slider's start, it'd be easier to adjust to the speed change. Optional, really, but I think it's a change that would be worth making.
   
   Kind of like this...?

   
   Put 6 in the center of 1
   
   Overall, this map is mechanically fine, in my opinion. I like your mapping style. It's very clean.

[Insane]

1. 00:39:222 - It's not difficult (for me at least), but something feels weird about the direction of this mini slider. I tried ctrl+g, and it feels better, in my opinion, but I'm not sure how you'd like that. I would also try aiming it downward, more in the direction of 3, OR in the opposite direction of 3.
   
   Try these...

   
2. 00:56:793(1,3) - 1 isn't pointing exactly right, to line up with 3.
   
   See?

   
3. 01:08:279(2,3) - I'm not sure if you were trying to blanket 3 with 2, but if you were, it's very off in its current state.
   Also well mapped. Naisu~

[Hard]

1. 00:43:422(2) - Move to x:136
2. 00:44:279(5) - Move this to accommodate the movement of 2.

[Normal]

• 
  I get really anal about blanketing issues in Normal and Easy maps because it's so much easier to tell whether something blankets well or not since there aren't as many objects to look at in the first place.

1. 00:09:479(5,1) - Fix 1. One way to tell is by taking advantage of slider ball indicators, approach circles, etc.
   
   Like so...

   
2. 00:11:879(6,1) - Fix 6.
   
   See?

   
3. 00:47:022(3,4) - Fix 4. The slider end is a little off.
4. 00:58:507(4,5) - Fix 5. The slider end of 5 is a little too low.
5. Lastly, I'm not sure if it's the best idea, but you could be consistent with the rest of the mapset by ending this with a spinner... but I can understand not doing so because this is a Normal diff.... your call (personally, I think anyone would be capable of a spinner at the end of a song).

[Easy]

1. 00:49:250(2,3) - FIX DAT BLANKT BRUH.
2. 01:03:479(2,3) - FIX DAT 3
3. 01:07:765(1,2) - DAS NASTY BRUH. FIX DAT (move 1 on the time line closer to 2 so you can use the approach circle to help you).
4. 01:21:479(1,2) - 2 is looking way too high bruh. It's not center. Fix pl0x.

Fixed everything else you mentioned above!
Thanks for your mod!!

1. 00:10:850 (3,4,5,6) - bad flow, i think you should ctrl+g on 00:11:022 (4,5) - , then move new to x136 y328, it would better
2. 00:13:765 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - overall i think it's uncomfortable for playing
3. 00:24:736 (4) - ctrl+g?
4. 00:26:622 - ~00:27:993 - x1.00 is ok, i don't think here need any speed up
5. 00:31:250 (3) - 1/1
6. 00:33:993 (4) - finish at the head
7. 00:45:136 (3,4,5) - suggestion
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:26:107 (1) - 跟前面的一樣速度就可以了....突然大幅減速很容易坑, 01:26:622 - 有音的話可以選擇停這裡, 01:26:793 - 01:27:307 - 加note就可以了

1. 00:11:879 (2,3) - imo these pattern and these ds is only fit on triple slider
2. 00:56:793 (1,3) - this entirely stack is very to read
3. 01:08:965 (1) - head finish
4. 01:10:507 (1) - ^
5. 01:19:936 (1) - ^
6. 01:22:850 (1) - 1/2 reverse?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:00:565 - sounds weird if ignore this drum

1. 00:11:707 (5,6) - stack better
2. 00:58:507 (4,5) - ds....

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Rinshan-Kaihou]

1. 00:10:850 (3,4,5,6) - bad flow, i think you should ctrl+g on 00:11:022 (4,5) - , then move new to x136 y328, it would better changed the shape of 00:11:365 (6) - and moved it around a bit. Flow should be better now
2. 00:13:765 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - overall i think it's uncomfortable for playing I feel those back-forth jumps are ok. Changed the pattern a little bit
3. 00:24:736 (4) - ctrl+g? Its no longer symmatrical after ctrl+g. I want to keep the pattern consistency with respect to 00:25:765 (4,5) -
4. 00:26:622 - ~00:27:993 - x1.00 is ok, i don't think here need any speed up lowered down to x1.15
5. 00:31:250 (3) - 1/1 fixed
6. 00:33:993 (4) - finish at the head added
7. 00:45:136 (3,4,5) - suggestion applid! ;w;
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:26:107 (1) - 跟前面的一樣速度就可以了....突然大幅減速很容易坑, 01:26:622 - 有音的話可以選擇停這裡, 01:26:793 - 01:27:307 - 加note就可以了 还是觉得要减速会比较合曲 加到到1.05 应该不会太坑了现在

[Insane]

1. 00:11:879 (2,3) - imo these pattern and these ds is only fit on triple slider ds decreased
2. 00:56:793 (1,3) - this entirely stack is very to read move away little bit
3. 01:08:965 (1) - head finish added
4. 01:10:507 (1) - ^ ^
5. 01:19:936 (1) - ^ ^
6. 01:22:850 (1) - 1/2 reverse? I feel this slider fits here perfectly ;_;
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 01:00:565 - sounds weird if ignore this drum Fixed it by shortening the slider and added a circle

[Normal]

1. 00:11:707 (5,6) - stack better fixed
2. 00:58:507 (4,5) - ds.... forgot to ctrl+g back ;_;.

Easy is fine for me..
welcome to ask me if you have any question on my mod~~~~

Tsuchimikado wrote:

fufufufu

1. 00:00:565 (1) - 2/1 slider, to follow the vocals (as in shorten slider to 00:01:250)
2. 00:01:936 (2) - ^

1. 00:03:307 (4) - Too far from the next object. I supposed that you're using 1.0 DS here.
2. 00:09:479 (5) - ^, Ctrl+J
3. 01:12:907 (5) - Too near from the next object

1. 00:20:793 (8) - Make the next object a little closer?

Neil Leo wrote:

From my modding queue, as you requested:
[Easy]

1. 00:00:565 (1) - 2/1 slider, to follow the vocals (as in shorten slider to 00:01:250) fixed!
2. 00:01:936 (2) - ^ To follow the vocal, I actually need a 5/2 slider. Since a 5/2 slider rarely appears in easy diff. I will just keep it for now.

[Normal]

1. 00:03:307 (4) - Too far from the next object. I supposed that you're using 1.0 DS here. fixed!
2. 00:09:479 (5) - ^, Ctrl+J fixed!
3. 01:12:907 (5) - Too near from the next object fixed!

[Hard]

1. 00:20:793 (8) - Make the next object a little closer? I think the distance is fine

GL, although this was short

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~! from my modding Q~
Moe backgrounds~! :3
Start~!

[General]

1. For Easy and Normal, the background seems to be cut at the wrong place, The girl face got cut >.< Take a look http://puu.sh/hnWqC/02e2f91233.jpg poor girl :'( I suggest to cut the right side a bit so the girl face won't get cut Changed to another moe background :3
2. Check song setup --> design, you don't need to check the "widescreen support" option since you don't have storyboard. Fixed!
3. ^ you don't need to check the "letterbox during break" as well. Fixed!

[Easy]

1. 00:01:936 (2) - I actually would suggest to end the slider here 00:02:450 since there's a big vocal sound there, but yes it will ruin the polarity... I don't know if adding a note here 00:02:965 would help http://puu.sh/hnWPx/4e69cf2e6b.jpg Changed into a reverse slider
2. 00:04:679 Adding a spinner here would be pretty good tho, or if you want to make it easy, just add a short break Added a break
3. 00:10:165 (1,2) - Maybe you can mirror these two so it would be symmetric :3 It is already symmetrical imo, changed a little bit
4. 00:39:479 (3) - This slider makes the flow become rough, from (2) and to (1), I suggest to change the shape a bit, like thishttp://puu.sh/hnX5d/c7d0a1ab58.jpg Apllied
5. 00:38:279 (2) - Furthermore, if you apply the mod above, you can change this slider shape as well, http://puu.sh/hnX8k/5e7a177cc1.jpg so the flow would feel smoother Apllied
6. 00:41:707 (3) - This kinda make polarity issue, from white to red tick... maybe you can change the rhythm into this http://puu.sh/hnXeJ/237effc09b.jpg If you decided to apply this, you can try this at the playfield http://puu.sh/hnXgr/766e9278ab.jpg Changed into another similar pattern ;w;
7. 00:49:250 (2) - Uhh, this is pretty bad for the flow... try this maybe http://puu.sh/hnXkO/8895763037.jpg applied
8. 00:53:707 Why don't add a note here? added
9. 01:27:479 Spinner? A spinner would be too short for easy diff

[Normal]

1. Woah, your beatmap sure uses high diff stats .-. try to reduce the HP to 4 applied
2. Actually AR 6 is too fast for Normal, but it's seems to match well with the SV, so maybe you can keep it...
3. Kinda tricky normal, I see...
4. 00:19:765 (3) - Don't overmap normal unless it's following significant sound, just change this to 1/1 slider I am following the drum here. If others say the same, I will consider to change it ><
5. 00:33:479 (3) - ^ ^
6. 00:41:707 (5,6,7) - This part seems kinda weird... Try to move (6) and (7) 1/2 tick forward http://puu.sh/hnXG1/1fc8258a27.jpg ^
7. The rest are fine

[Hard]

1. Actually AR 8 would be fine (and more fitting imo) applied
2. 00:01:936 (4) - Actually it's good without reverse, so the player could stop for a bit and they could feel the "pound" The spacing maybe confusing ;_;
3. 00:22:507 (5,6) - Maybe blanketing this two would make it look better applied
4. 00:29:279 Actually it's good to add a note here to make a triplet since the music support it, but the jump make it kinda impossible.... maybe you can change the previous note? Fixed!
5. 00:39:307 (7,8) - Fix blanket.... Make sure all your blanket is good after this since I don't like modding about blanketing Fixed some blankets
6. That's all, good map

[Insane]

1. 00:20:793 (5,1) - This is a pretty bad overlap tho... Try to change the position, like this for example... http://puu.sh/hnY8I/110d834fda.jpg Applied!
2. 00:55:936 (3,4) - ^ just stack (4)'s head with (3)'s sry.. I think this overlap is fine
3. 01:26:107 (1) - Nice slider *-* ;w;
4. that's all, nice jumps, even if they seem to far from my standard, but okay

I'll end my mod here since I can't mod extras, but I took a quick glance and it's seems good enough (kinda forcing I guess...) but okay
I'm amazed by your hard so...
Star~

Good Luck ^^

annika69 wrote:

Hello!

[Normal]
00:17:365 (5) - Maybe make it a slider until 00:18:050 ?? Just a suggestion;; I think mine is fine ;_;
00:55:250 - Add note here? It would be a little bit too confusing for a normal diff
01:27:650 - Maybe add spinner at the end? I will keep the end clear for now. May consider to change it if it is really a big issue

[Hard]
01:22:679 (4,5,6) - I think its a little too far up, its touching the health bar Fixed

[Insane]
00:01:765 - Add note? uhmm. I am not following the vocal
00:36:050 (1) - A little too far up, its like barely touching the health bar heh I think it is fine ;w;
00:56:450 (4) - Same as above with slider end. Maybe move it so its like this? http://puu.sh/hpn9r/4221221474.jpg ^
00:57:993 (1) - I think the flow is a little weird here. Maybe ctrl+g and make it blanket 00:57:307 (3) or something like that? Rearranged the entire pattern
01:22:336 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make the stream curved?? And a little closer? Actually the stream is symmtrical to this slider 01:22:850 (1) - Move a little bit closer tho ><

Easy:

Normal:

Hard:

Insane:

Rinshan-Kaihou:

Final Conclusions:

and Beenrz

LucaSA4 wrote:

Easy:

00:03:993 this slider could finish at 00:04:165 and a spinner start at 00:04:507 and end at 00:06:393 this makes alot of sense for me and I found it good :p A spinner here would be too diffcult for newbies to handle imo. If others say the same I will change it ><
The rest is fine imo, Loved your pattern!! Thank you!!

Normal:

Now looking your normal I noticed that you did the same thing I asked you to do on the Easy, so why not?!
00:07:079 circle here? I inserted up the slider in the curved pattern and it looks good plus follow the rhythm. Same as above ;_;

Hard:

Doesn't CS 4 for Hard seens too much Insane? ^^ I would like 3.8 more I feel CS 4 perfectly fits ;_;
00:38:793 this slider could end here 00:38:965 sounds better, there's nothing at 00:39:136 to make it end there imo. There is no song at 00:38:965 - either. I choose to ignore this beat 00:39:222 - because if I map it, it would be too difficult for a hard. So, I will just keep them for now ><

Insane:

00:01:336 add circle here to follow the stream? A triplet fits better imo

Rinshan-Kaihou:

00:11:793 circle here to follow the stream Changed the pattern a little bit
00:25:765 (4,5) could you lower the volume of the hitsounds here? I think the volume increase fits the song perfectly
00:28:936 circle here again to make the stream since its start ^^ ^

Final Conclusions:

Your beatmap is wayyy great, your pattern is awesome.
Nice job for a one person beatmap. and Beenrz >///<

Gaia wrote:

m4m o3o/

[general]
i LOVE saki ww wwwwwwww

[easy]
00:01:936 - 00:04:507 - finish? added clap on 00:01:936 - instead
00:08:107 (3) - clap on tail
00:09:822 (5) - clap
00:10:850 (2) - ^ on reverse..
00:41:707 (3) - clap

Fixed everything else

and there are some finishes that i personally think don't belong.. but up to u to decide if u wanna remove or not

[normal]
00:19:079 (2,3) - kinda doesnt flow well.. Changed a little bit. Hope its fine now owo
00:36:050 (4) - 3/2 spacing is really gross rhythming... consider changing this into a 1/1 slider o3o applied
00:43:765 (3,4,5) - this is pretty bad flow too ^
00:53:707 (5) - remove clap applied
01:06:393 (3) - yeah this flow is meh Changed into a straight slider.Hope the flow is fine now ;_;
01:09:479 (4) - ^ ^
01:20:793 (4) - ^ ^



[hard]
00:02:450 (5) - this jump is prettyy op o3o Fixed
00:03:650 (2) - ^ I didn't change this. The jump is fine imo
00:17:707 (5) - this rhythm is better imo Applied
00:19:422 (4) - well... looks like ur jumps are all kinda big but this one shouldn't be that big cuz the music isnt that strong hereFixed the jump
00:24:393 (3) - dont use this flow orz This flow is not bad imo ;_;
00:30:907 (5,6,7) - have equal spacing here Fixed
00:33:479 (5) - maybe finish on the head..? Removed
01:13:593 (3,4,5,6) - all thisss bad floww Changed the entire pattern owo

other than spacing its pretty alright owo
owo

[insane]
00:16:165 (4) - this isnt a good place for an antijump... space this out fixed
00:26:450 (1) - weird slidershape that doesnt flow well.. changed the shape a bit. Should be better now
00:30:050 (3,4) - flow Imporved the flow by ctrl+g 00:30:393 (4) -
00:57:993 (1) - ^ i think flow is fine here

[槓上開花]
well... as much as i love this song and series im kinda sad to say that this is kinda overmapped
in the way that jumps are just spammed everywhere 00:40:679 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
and SV speed is like... kinda abused 00:17:365 (2) -

01:04:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - calm dowwwn why is this so spaced?

flow, patterns, (random slider shapes), etc.. there's a lot of things going on in this diff, but unfortunately it's not organized well enough for me to say its rankable imo

I intend to make this extra diff more fun by increasing SV and creating some interesting patterns. However, it seems that those creations have become the main issues that most people are concerned about
I will try to find more mods on the diff and make more improvement on this diff. Hopefully I could manage to make this diff rankable someday owo

anyhow, good luck and have fun!

iMage-- wrote:

nice mapset! good luck~

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

NO KD

General

1. you can add more tags, i should say that.added

Rinshan-Kaihou

1. 00:12:222 (1,1) - no need to spam nc here. NC removed
2. 01:26:107 (1) - recommend you do ctrl+g to give anti-flow after large jump. applied
3. thou... too much anti-flow patterns with big jumps, plays a bit unfriendly. map's fine thou.

Insane

1. 00:33:993 (3) - i prefer curve this slider.applied

Easy

1. 01:24:222 (1,2) - change a fluent flow here for noobs.changed

Hard and Normal are fine to me. generally good map, star.

poke me later when you are ready. I will call you back when I am ready!!

Thank you HW <3
Fixed everything you mentioned above!!

Hollow Wings wrote:

bubbled.

1. 00:19:679 (6) - overmapped, please delete
2. 00:23:879 (1,2,3) - to follow the music, 00:24:222 (2,3) - this distance should be bigger than the previous jump
3. 00:25:079 (1,2,3,4) - same here with 00:25:593 (3,4) - which should have larger distance than the two previous notes
4. 00:24:736 (4) - 00:26:107 (5) - don't use 3/4 sliders here since they're ignoring a clap in the music that should be mapped.
5. 00:26:450 (6,1) - despite being a downbeat, there is actually nothing in the music where 00:26:622 (1) - starts, so just turn 00:26:450 (6) - into a slider.
6. 00:27:736 (6) - overmapped, delete
7. 00:29:107 (3) - ^
8. 00:30:565 (5,6) - both of these also aren't in the music, delete
9. 00:30:993 (2) - ^
10. 00:43:336 (2) - ^
11. 00:46:250 (2) - ^
12. 00:47:622 (2) -
13. 00:49:936 (1) - ctrl-G would play better
14. 00:57:136 (3,4) - plays badly because of the way the slider goes in the opposite direction of the cursor's movement before it
15. 00:59:278 (5) - overmapped

xxdeathx wrote:

From my queue. I took a look at your highest difficulty—it's quite overmapped, which can be a very likely reason to disqualify.

[Rinshan-Kaihou]

1. 00:19:679 (6) - overmapped, please delete Deleted
2. 00:23:879 (1,2,3) - to follow the music, 00:24:222 (2,3) - this distance should be bigger than the previous jump Arranged the pattern a little bit. Hope the distance is fine :3
3. 00:25:079 (1,2,3,4) - same here with 00:25:593 (3,4) - which should have larger distance than the two previous notes ^
4. 00:24:736 (4) - 00:26:107 (5) - don't use 3/4 sliders here since they're ignoring a clap in the music that should be mapped. Changed into 1/2 sliders
5. 00:26:450 (6,1) - despite being a downbeat, there is actually nothing in the music where 00:26:622 (1) - starts, so just turn 00:26:450 (6) - into a slider. Applied
6. 00:27:736 (6) - overmapped, delete Deleted
7. 00:29:107 (3) - ^ ^
8. 00:30:565 (5,6) - both of these also aren't in the music, delete Deleted both notes and changed 00:30:393 (4) - into a 3/4 slider
9. 00:30:993 (2) - ^ Removed
10. 00:43:336 (2) - ^ ^
11. 00:46:250 (2) - ^ ^
12. 00:47:622 (2) - ^
13. 00:49:936 (1) - ctrl-G would play better Applied
14. 00:57:136 (3,4) - plays badly because of the way the slider goes in the opposite direction of the cursor's movement before it Arranged the pattern a bit. Flow should be fine now
15. 00:59:278 (5) - overmapped Fixed

I stopped here, but I strongly recommend removing overmapped parts of all diffs before trying to get this qualified (ask me to check the other diffs if you do).
Checked all diffs about overmapping issue and removed all overmapped parts that I could find in Insane and Rinshan-Kaihou difficulties.

1. kiai time is inconsistent on the highest diff
2. 00:24:222 (2) - 00:25:593 (3) - 00:24:907 - 00:26:279 - check for claps
3. 01:22:850 - this finish doesn't fit in the music, remove

1. difficulty settings are too high: ar3, od2, hp2
2. 01:21:479 (1,2,3) - following vocals sounds better:
   

1. ar5, od4
2. 00:55:422 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider
3. 01:01:593 (4) - two 1/2 sliders here
4. 01:06:393 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider
5. 01:13:250 (1) - see below
   

1. ar9 is common for this bpm 4.5 star insanes
2. 00:17:022 (1,2,3) - spacing is misleading, try to adhere to distance snap here
3. 00:39:222 (2) - it's not a good idea to have a 1/4 slider start on a blue tick, so 2 circles would be better
4. 00:24:907 - 00:26:279 - you forgot to clap the sliderends and circles 00:24:222 (2) - 00:25:593 (3) -

1. 00:14:622 (3,4) - not exactly stacked
2. 00:23:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this whole pattern plays awkwardly; the following steps should fix it better:
3. 00:24:222 (2) - move above the previous slider end
4. 00:24:393 (3) - ctrl-G and then curve the other way
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:26:107 (5) - ctrl-G
6. 00:24:907 - 00:26:279 - you forgot to clap the sliderends and circles 00:24:222 (2) - 00:25:593 (3) -
7. 00:26:450 (1) - ctrl-G to create a bigger jump between 00:26:107 (5,1) - that fits the music and makes 00:26:450 (1,2) - play better
8. 00:50:793 (5,4,5,6) - not exactly stacked
9. 00:59:364 (5,6,1) - ^
10. 01:06:736 (2,3) - awkward flow, curve the slider the other way and ctrl-g it. maybe ctrl-g or otherwise rearrange 01:07:422 (4) - too
11. 01:23:193 (1,2,3,4,1) - please stack these on the sliderend too like you did with 01:22:850 (8,9,1) - or it will not seem like a 1/4 gap
12. 01:25:165 (4) - generally it's not a good idea to have a 1/4 slider start on a blue tick, so in this case 2 circles would be better
13. 01:25:422 (5,6,1) - big jump should be between 01:25:936 (6,1) - to fit the music

xxdeathx wrote:

Checking all other diffs now
[General]

1. kiai time is inconsistent on the highest diff fixed
2. 00:24:222 (2) - 00:25:593 (3) - 00:24:907 - 00:26:279 - check for claps fixed for all diffs
3. 01:22:850 - this finish doesn't fit in the music, remove ^

[Easy]

1. difficulty settings are too high: ar3, od2, hp2
2. 01:21:479 (1,2,3) - following vocals sounds better:
   

all applied!!

[Normal]
Object density in kiai should be a little higher since hard is somewhat harder than average.

1. ar5, od4
2. 00:55:422 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider
3. 01:01:593 (4) - two 1/2 sliders here
4. 01:06:393 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider
5. 01:13:250 (1) - see below
   

all applied!!

[Insane]

1. ar9 is common for this bpm 4.5 star insanes applid
2. 00:17:022 (1,2,3) - spacing is misleading, try to adhere to distance snap here fixed
3. 00:39:222 (2) - it's not a good idea to have a 1/4 slider start on a blue tick, so 2 circles would be better fixed
4. 00:24:907 - 00:26:279 - you forgot to clap the sliderends and circles 00:24:222 (2) - 00:25:593 (3) - fixed

[expert]

1. 00:14:622 (3,4) - not exactly stacked fixed
2. 00:23:879 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this whole pattern plays awkwardly; the following steps should fix it better:
3. 00:24:222 (2) - move above the previous slider end
4. 00:24:393 (3) - ctrl-G and then curve the other way
   
   SPOILER

   
   all applied
5. 00:26:107 (5) - ctrl-G applied
6. 00:24:907 - 00:26:279 - you forgot to clap the sliderends and circles 00:24:222 (2) - 00:25:593 (3) - fixed
7. 00:26:450 (1) - ctrl-G to create a bigger jump between 00:26:107 (5,1) - that fits the music and makes 00:26:450 (1,2) - play better applied
8. 00:50:793 (5,4,5,6) - not exactly stacked fixed
9. 00:59:364 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
10. 01:06:736 (2,3) - awkward flow, curve the slider the other way and ctrl-g it. maybe ctrl-g or otherwise rearrange 01:07:422 (4) - too
    rearranged the pattern a bit. flow should be better now
11. 01:23:193 (1,2,3,4,1) - please stack these on the sliderend too like you did with 01:22:850 (8,9,1) - or it will not seem like a 1/4 gap stacked
12. 01:25:165 (4) - generally it's not a good idea to have a 1/4 slider start on a blue tick, so in this case 2 circles would be better applied
13. 01:25:422 (5,6,1) - big jump should be between 01:25:936 (6,1) - to fit the music fixed

mm

xxdeathx wrote:

What's wrong

Lanturn wrote:

Basically a map was DQ'd for having the wrong Family / Given order.

If you look at the website: http://hashimotomiyuki.com/
The romanization goes Given Family (so swapped)

I'm not really sure what the 'preferred' romanization is anymore as lots of maps are still getting pushed through even reversed. It was just that one song that got DQ'd for it.

If you want to be 'safe' then reverse it, basically. Reversed!!


Anyways. nice map <3

xxdeathx wrote:

Congratz on your first ranked mapset!

1. 00:13:593 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These spacings seem random and too big for this relatively calm verse. With those jumps, you are putting a high emphasis on all notes here, which is in no way related to the music. Try to place jumps leading into the most important beats you want to stress, not just put them between every two circles.
2. 00:40:679 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - There is nothing in the music that would justify such huge jumps here. Same explanation as above.
3. 00:45:650 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - This insanely high SV mixed with big jumps is a difficulty spike and feels very overdone for what the song provides.
4. 00:50:450 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another overdone jump pattern. There is no strong beat every 1/2 here, that would justify such a pattern.

1. 00:02:450 (7,8) - Why is there such a huge jump here?
2. 00:15:649 (1,2,3,4) - The jumps between (1,2,3) are bigger than (3,4), even though 00:16:165 - is the most emphasized note here with the strong cymbal sound.
3. 00:30:736 (1,2,3,4) - Why is there such a big spacing between (1) and (2)?
4. 00:56:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1,2,3,4) has big jumps even though there is nothing special in the music, so (5,6) feels not enough for this strong cymbal at 00:57:993 -
5. 01:02:279 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Two of those notes are overmapped, 01:02:450 (2) and 01:02:964 (2) -, so why are they spaced equally to the other circles in this pattern? You should probably not map a circle at those beats anyways.
6. 01:08:279 (4,5) - Why suddenly small DS compared to previous patterns?

1. 00:17:022 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:28:507 (2,3) -

1. 00:59:879 (2) - There is a much stronger beat at 01:00:050 -. Also, it seems like you followed the vocals with 00:59:536 (1) but now the vocals are also at 01:00:050 so there is no reason to have a 3/4-slider here.
2. 01:14:107 (5) - Again, there is a much stronger beat at 01:14:279 -

1. 00:59:364 (5,6) -
2. 01:10:336 (4) -
3. 01:13:079 - and 01:13:165 -

Desperate-kun wrote:

###M

After internal discussion, we decided to disqualify this mapset over the following issues in the Rinshan-Kaihou difficulty:

Overdone SV-changes / jump patterns. Some of your patterns in this difficulty have insane SV and / or huge jumps. Those are often extreme difficulty spikes compared to the rest of the map and feel exaggerated. Examples:

1. 00:13:593 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These spacings seem random and too big for this relatively calm verse. With those jumps, you are putting a high emphasis on all notes here, which is in no way related to the music. Try to place jumps leading into the most important beats you want to stress, not just put them between every two circles. Actually, I was placing the circles based on their pitches which definitely relate to the music. But anyways, I changed the entire pattern so that the jumps are neither too big nor nearly equally spaced (loudest beats are emphasized)
2. 00:40:679 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - There is nothing in the music that would justify such huge jumps here. Same explanation as above. I admit that the jumps are too big for this part. However, I think the music is definitely getting more intense. The snares drum is coming out more frequently compared to the rest of the song. (It appears at every single 1/1 beat instead of appearing every other beat ). Therefore, I don't see why bigger jumps are not justified in this case. I did change the spacing of those jumps so that the jumps at the louder beats(or some change in music that I truely want to emphasize) are bigger
3. 00:45:650 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - This insanely high SV mixed with big jumps is a difficulty spike and feels very overdone for what the song provides. Significantly lowered down the spacing and also improved the flow.
4. 00:50:450 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another overdone jump pattern. There is no strong beat every 1/2 here, that would justify such a pattern. Reduced the spacing overall and emphasized those strong beats by the spacing change

Generally, the spacing seems like there has not been much thought put into it. Often you have jumps leading into not really intense notes, so the emphasis for more important notes gets completely lost. Jumps leading into cymbals or other loud, strong beats should be bigger than other jumps, to put more emphasis to these notes. Sometimes you also have strange variations of spacings, even though the emphasis between all notes stays the same. Examples:

1. 00:02:450 (7,8) - Why is there such a huge jump here? Rearranged the pattern to lower the spacing
2. 00:15:649 (1,2,3,4) - The jumps between (1,2,3) are bigger than (3,4), even though 00:16:165 - is the most emphasized note here with the strong cymbal sound. Same as above, the jumps are now emphasizing 00:16:165 -
3. 00:30:736 (1,2,3,4) - Why is there such a big spacing between (1) and (2)? Rearranged it, the spacing should be fine
4. 00:56:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1,2,3,4) has big jumps even though there is nothing special in the music, so (5,6) feels not enough for this strong cymbal at 00:57:993 - Reduced the spacing between 00:56:793 (1,2,3) -
5. 01:02:279 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Two of those notes are overmapped, 01:02:450 (2) and 01:02:964 (2) -, so why are they spaced equally to the other circles in this pattern? You should probably not map a circle at those beats anyways. Removed overmapped notes
6. 01:08:279 (4,5) - Why suddenly small DS compared to previous patterns? Fixed. Changed to the normal ds

Sometimes the Spacing of 1/2-gaps is so low compared to your usual spacings, that those look more like 1/4-gaps. Examples:

1. 00:17:022 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:28:507 (2,3) -

Fixed both

Some of your 3/4-sliders used are not fitting to the music. Examples:

1. 00:59:879 (2) - There is a much stronger beat at 01:00:050 -. Also, it seems like you followed the vocals with 00:59:536 (1) but now the vocals are also at 01:00:050 so there is no reason to have a 3/4-slider here.
2. 01:14:107 (5) - Again, there is a much stronger beat at 01:14:279 -

Fixed both

There are also hitsounding issues in this map. You are following snares with claps, but then you don't place claps when the snares break out of the usualy 2-4-pattern. You should place a clap everytime these sounds can be heard in the music, for a more consistent hitsounding. Examples:

1. 00:59:364 (5,6) -
2. 01:10:336 (4) -
3. 01:13:079 - and 01:13:165 -

All fixed

Please note that those are just examples, similar issues happen more often in your map. Fixed all similar issues I could find

Generally, we felt that the Insane difficulty covered what this song provides and Rinshan-Kaihou seems more or less unneeded, as it's overdone and unpolished in many instances. You have to decide that on your own, though.

This mapset will be handled by the BNG from now on! Good luck!

xxdeathx wrote:

What do you think? Do you want to remove Rinshan-Kaihou? Sounds like it will need a lot of work if you want to get it ranked.