[Doyak's Easy]
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[-Yuzuriha's insane]
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[Kami's Insane]
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[Expert]
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01:48:936 (1,2,3,4) - 리듬을 같은 부분인 00:17:736 (1,2,3,4)와 비슷한 패턴으로 짜는 게 음악에 더 맞다고 생각합니다.
01:30:036 (1) - 시작부분에 클랩 추가
- 일요일에 잠시 봤을 땐 좀 더 패턴을 고칠 부분이 많았는데 그 사이에 많이 좋아졌네요 ' ')b
[Euny's Normal]
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00:26:136 (3) - (310, 83)으로 이동, 그리고
00:27:036 (4) - (225, 143)으로 이동. 모양이 좀 더 예쁘게 된다고 생각합니다.
00:53:736 (3) - 이 부분을 잘 들어보시면 비트가 00:53:736, 00:53:961, 그리고 00:54:186가 아닌 00:54:261에 있습니다. 00:53:736에 노트를 두고 00:53:961부터 00:54:261까지 슬라이더를 둬도 되겠지만, 그냥 현재 있는 슬라이더의 반복을 없애는 편이 더 자연스럽다고 생각합니다.
01:47:586 (2,3,4) - 현재 보컬을 따라가고 있기 때문에 01:47:586 (2)을 01:48:186로 옮기는 게 더 자연스럽다고 생각합니다. (292, 88)정도가 적당하겠네요.
01:49:386 (2) - 위와 같은 이유로 이 노트는 지우는 게 더 자연스럽다고 생각합니다.
01:54:936 (1) - 01:56:136까지 연장. 01:55:986 전후의 볼륨의 변화보다 01:56:136 전후의 볼륨의 변화가 더 크기 때문에 마무리를 이 지점에서 짓는 게 더 맞다고 생각합니다.
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00:37:536 (3) - 00:37:911까지 반복, 그리고
00:38:736 (3) - 00:39:186까지 반복. 다음 노트가 슬라이더기 때문에 난이도적으로 그렇게까지 문제가 되지 않을 거라 생각합니다.
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[-Yuzuriha's insane]
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00:08:736 (3,4) - Make these two parallel.SPOILER00:09:336 (1,2) - Generally you want to avoid this kind of overlap since it disrupts the clockwise flow (you would expect a slider that goes from right to left) as well as being very difficult to see the second note, but there is no compelling reason to place the objects in this way. And243,196,9036,2,0,L|334:205,1,80
00:10:236 (4,5,6) - This triangular jump would play much better if they were evenly spaced. For this part, try something like:SPOILER00:11:961 - There is an obvious beat here that you need to fill in. Add a note here.142,245,9336,6,0,P|130:168|182:111,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,133,9786,2,0,P|274:166|240:195,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,194,10086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,59,10236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,285,10386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,225,10536,1,8,0:0:0:0:
00:14:436 (2,3,4,5,6) - While I do not want to force a mapping style onto you, I do think that when you can make things aesthetically pleasing, you should. For instance, these five notes can be better arranged to form a regular pentagon:SPOILER00:21:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same goes for this one. You can try fixing this on your own (If you are not familiar with it already, there is an option in editor that lets you make regular polygon shaped patterns--look under Compose - Create Polygon Circles, or simply Ctrl+Shift+D).207,84,14436,2,0,P|220:135|239:167,1,80
306,220,14736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,116,14886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,252,15036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,168,15186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:23:136 (3,4,5,1) - The end of 3, 4, 5, and the beginning of 1 can form a square or a rhombus to look good.
00:23:736 (1,2,3,4) - Likewise, the beginning of 1, 2, 3, and the beginning of 4 can form a rhombus to look good.
00:25:536 (4,5,6,1) - Likewise, the beginning of 4, 5, 6, and the beginning of 1 can form a rhombus to look good.
00:28:236 (5,6,1,2,3) - This could be rearranged into a regular pentagon.
00:30:261 (2) - This note does not represent anything new in the music, and therefore does not really have a place. It would be a much better fit to the music to add one more repeat to 00:29:736 (1) and remove this note.
00:30:861 (2) - Same as above, add one more repeat to 00:30:336 (1) and remove this note.
00:35:136 (4,5,6,7,1) - These could also be arranged better.
01:03:786 (3,4,5,6,7) - These could also be arranged better; for example,SPOILER01:04:986 (2) - Move to (201, 257)201,257,63786,1,4,0:0:0:0:
279,170,63936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,182,64086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,265,64236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,87,64386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:16:236 (5) - The partial overlap between this slider and 01:16:686 (2) is not very pretty, either overlap them completely or separate them completely.
01:16:836 (3,4,5,6) - The end of 3, 4, 5, and the beginning of 6 could either form a square or a parallelogram to look good.
01:25:836 (5) - This note would play better if it was under the end of 01:25:236 (2) instead of the beginning of it.
01:27:186 (6) - This note would play better if it was placed straight down the middle between the beginning of 01:26:586 (3) and 01:26:886 (4).
01:29:136 (3,4,5,1) - 3, 4, 5, and the beginning of 1 can form a rhombus to look good.
01:29:586 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Your placement of objects here is very good, it would be great if you could keep up this sort of placement rule throughout the map.
01:39:786 (4) - Move to (176, 303), and you'll immediately see why I'm pointing this out.
01:43:236 (3,4) - You may want to keep the distance between these two notes the same as the distance between 01:42:936 (1) and 01:43:086 (2) for consistency and better play.
01:44:136 (1,2,3,4) - Again, really no good reason to partially overlap the end of 1 and 3. Space them out, and try forming a rhombus with the end of 1, 2, 3, and the beginning of 4.
01:45:936 (3) - Move to (385, 211).
01:50:136 (1,2,3,4) - The beginning of 1, 2, the beginning of 3, and the beginning of 4 could form either a square or a rhombus to look good.
01:52:536 (1,2,3,4) - Better placement, try going for a parallelogram here.
01:55:086 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:10:236 (4,5,6), make them equidistance by moving 01:55:386 (4) to (459, 208).
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[Kami's Insane]
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00:10:086 (3,4,5,1) - Any specific reason why these are not equidistant? If not, I would make them so.
00:37:686 (5) - This note and 00:37:986 (7) is only partially overlapped, but in the next part, 00:38:736 (4) and 00:39:036 (6) are fully overlapped. For consistency's sake, I recommend only partially overlapping the latter as well since partial overlap of single notes seem to be the theme in this phase of the map.
00:40:536 ~ 00:40:686 - Add a slider here, preferralby the same one as 00:39:936 (3) and 00:40:236 (4), to better represent the music.
00:53:886 (2) - I feel like this note is closer to 00:53:961 than it is to 00:53:886. Maybe it's on 00:53:936 on the 1/3 scale?
01:06:336 (3) - This is definitely a 1/3. The repeat should be on 01:06:536 and the end on 01:06:736.
01:15:186 - Add a note here to represent the music better.
01:24:036 (3) - Move to (223, 88) and see if you like the arrangement better, in my opinion this plays a bit better.
01:25:836 (5,6) - I can't quite understand what logic you used to place these two notes where they are right now. Wouldn't it be better if they were completely horizontal? If you could give me an answer on this one I'd greatly appreciate it.
01:26:736 (5) - Move the endpoint to (284, 28) for better placement with 01:26:586 (4).
01:55:236 (3,4) - Move the midpoint to (437, 237) and the endpoint to (461, 156). Now the end forms a straight line with 01:54:936 (1) and 01:55:236 (3).
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01:11:811 (1) - 01:15:186까지 연장하는게 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
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00:23:136 (3,4,5,6,1) - 정오각형 모양으로 놓는 게 더 보기 좋을 것 같아요
00:29:136 (3,4,5,6,1) - 위와 같이 정오각형 모양으로
00:32:436 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이 패턴 규칙이 뭔지 설명해주실 수 있나요? 계속 생각해봤는데 도저히 어떻게 찍은건지 모르겠어서..
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