JamesHappy15 wrote:

sorry for the wait,a little bit busy irl. Here's the mod

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00:17:657 (17657|1) - delete (barely audible or no sound at all)There is sound and I decide to keep it for consistency
00:17:999 (17999|3) - ^^
01:37:285 (97285|3,97285|0) - move to 2 and 3 (different pitch)I am focusing on the kinds of sound here
02:11:485 (131485|2) - delete (barely audible)same as before, there is sound in the background that sounds like wind if played with 100%
02:13:371 (133371|3) - ^
03:05:828 (185828|0,185828|3) - delete one (not too loud)ok
03:22:971 (202971|0,203142|2,203314|1,203485|3) - i think it's barely audiblethere is sound if you listen with 100% you can hear the winds sound and if you make it 25% and increase the volume that hurts your head you can hear the pitch of the wind sound changing
05:12:685 (312685|0,312857|2,313028|1,313199|3) - ^^

sorry if does not much help for you

that's all

Kagu-chan wrote:

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Please reply soon and point out what rejected and why

Since i have trouble to play this map this mod is not the best... i hope it helps xD

poi

00:22:199 - until 00:42:771 - except 00:33:171 - please use single Notes for this piano, doubles dont fit well and also after that the drums seems undermapped with this doubles ^^The double of piano is totally fine here for me
01:41:171 (101171|2,101514|0) - Remove and 01:41:228 (101228|1,101285|0,101342|3,101399|2,101457|1) - stream into right
02:10:199 - until 02:14:657 - i dont get this stream - i hear this one, increasing sound in bg, but i dont think a stream fit this :/I didn't remove them because there are sounds and those are not ifor sound increasing, there are actually single sounds on the 1/4 lines
03:22:885 - here again :/
03:32:828 - Piano Part - see above
04:43:285 (283285|3,283342|2,283399|1,283457|0,283514|3,283571|2,283628|1,283685|0,283742|3,283799|2,283857|1,283914|0) - See above
05:12:599 - Stream again :/all explained above

Little reject from a aprt before:
01:03:342 - until 01:06:085 - please remove green lines - not required xDSVs, I don't see why not

I hope this can help, star for you :3

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi
M4M according to your queue :3

Poi
01:32:142 - Maybe triple? for Impact soundno change
01:35:399 (95399|0) - Change to LN, and finish it 2 ticks after it (1/4)ok
01:43:628 - add note? for vocalno sound
01:44:828 - add note? It's a same soubd like - 01:39:342ok
01:47:914 - Add one note on 3 for beatno change
02:10:199 - 02:13:285 - Does that stair really necessary? Idk if you use hitsound. but what does that stair notes follow?listen with 25% or check the reason I wrote on the respond to the mods above
03:22:971 - 03:25:971 - ^
05:12:685 - 05:15:685 - ^
02:51:171 - a beat. Add note?ok
03:07:628 - A beat. shouldn't be 2 note here?
03:50:485 - a low tune can be hearded. just like - 03:49:799
03:50:828 - ^
03:51:171 - ^no sound
04:38:742 (278742|2,278828|1,278914|0) - Ghost notes?
04:41:485 (281485|2,281571|1,281657|0) - ^

Also. your Mp3 is above 192kbpswill change after
Check AI

Good luck

please remove green lines - not required xDSVs, I don't see why not

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