[General]
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[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
- The background doesn't fit the song because i can't see Hayano's bikini. Consider to change it.
- Is the source right? It's supposed to be 'Love Live! School idol project' imo.Please check it.
- Add 'ラブライブ! µ's Kousaka Honoka Minami Kotori Koizumi Hanayo 高坂穂乃果 南ことり 小泉花陽 新田恵海 内田彩 久保ユリカ Nitta Emi Uchida Aya Kubo Yurika' into the tags.
- Though it's not a big issue,i suggest you to add a sliderslide hitsound.
- 00:33:815 - this is the end of a part. I suggest you to add Finish here.
- 01:10:888 - ^
- 01:17:230 - delete the clap here since it's no need and there is nothing like this in the music.
- 01:18:205 - ^
- 01:17:718 - 01:18:205 - hmm.. add whistle to follow the....(idk what it is.
- 01:49:913 - add finish ^
- 02:26:986 - ^
- 02:33:327 - ^ delete
- 02:34:303 - ^
- 02:33:815 (1,1) - ^ whistle
- 03:17:718 - ^ use finish instead of hitnormal
- 03:26:010 - 03:26:986 - 03:26:498 (1,1) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
- 04:19:473 - here is a piano, whistle sound better imo.
[Normal]
- 00:10:401 (1) - In lower difficulty diffs,i suggest to follow more vocal,especially something like this. So here i suggest to use 1/6 snap slider to follow the vocal.Like you did at 01:32:352 (1) - this
- 00:15:279 (3,2) - overlaps like this are weird,try to move 00:16:742 (2) - to avoid the overlapping pls.
Here is the suggestion: - 00:17:230 (3) - also,considering the spacing with00:16:254 (1,2,3) - ,i suggest to stack 00:17:230 (3,4) - them because
- 00:21:864 - highly suggest to add a note here and it will be better, also ofc slider is ok too.
- 00:44:547 (3,2) - well, same problem,it's better to move it a little down,maybe(288,288)is ok so 00:44:303 (2,3,2) - the spacing of this will be better imo.
Here is the pic: - 00:53:327 (1,2,3) - this flow can still be improved imo,i'd say ctrl+g this.and then,if you take this advice,the following notes(00:55:035 (4,1,2) - )must be placed in another way for better flow. Here is my suggestion:
- 00:58:205 (2) - move a bit down,it may touch the HP bar.
- 01:00:157 (2,3) - this blanket can be improved a lot.
- 01:04:059 (3,1,2) - this flow is a little bad.To improve this,i advise you to ctrl+g 01:05:035 (1,2) - this. If you take this,pls take care of the DS btw.
- 01:06:986 (1,2,3) - these straight sliders look very bad,pls curve them for better looking~ For example:
- 01:22:352 (4,1,2,3) - omg,this flow and placement are both weird to me. Pls pls change this in another way like this:
- 02:09:913 (2,2) - Try to stack them for better looking.
- 02:23:084 (1,2,3) - same with above,too straight flow.Here is my another way which can improve this:
- 02:38:450 (4,3) - oh try to stack them pls.
- 03:10:888 (3,1) - this flow is bad imo,maybe you can ctrl+g 03:10:888 (3) - this for better flow. Ofc take care of the spacing between 03:10:401 (2,3) -
Here is my suggestion: - 03:11:864 (1) - why this slider's shape is different from 03:12:840 (3) - ?please make them be the same.
- 03:46:011 (3,4,1,2,3) - well,this is copied from the first kiai time.So take a look at my advice above and do some changes as above pls.
- 04:01:620 (3,1) - still same with above. If you insist to use this pattern,i suggest to place them like this:
- 04:09:425 (3) - curve this like 04:10:401 (1) -
- 04:12:352 (1,2) - use ctrl+c&v to make them parallel.
[Hard]
- Why CS3? CS3.5 fits the spread best. Though it's too late to change.
- 00:24:059 (1,2,3) - the spacing here is very confusing since the notes are not on white ticks. Here is my advice:
- 00:28:937 (4,5) - this flow is a little bad imo,could be improved like this:
- 01:02:596 (5,2) - the overlap looks weird,try to stack them.
- 01:04:059 (2,3) - hmm...this spacing and this flow are both confusing imo. You can improve this a bit. Try this:
- 01:34:303 (1,2) - these two look so weird. Try this:
- 01:37:230 (4) - move down to 198,159 so the flow of01:37:230 (4,5) - will be better imo. Like this:
- 01:45:523 (5,1) - the spacing is too big imo. i'd say ctrl+g 01:45:523 (5) - this then it would be better.
- 01:47:962 (1,2,3) - why not use 1.4DS as you did before?
- 02:52:352 (1) - oh the spacing is too big . Try to move 02:52:352 (1) - to 259,288 to balance the spacing. like this:
- 03:43:084 (1,2) - same with above, it'll look better if you do like this:
- 03:46:011 (4) - again,316,159 would be better
- 03:54:304 (5,1) - same,ctrl+g 5 please . WHY ARE YOU SO LAZY?
- 04:01:864 (3,1) - try to stack them.
- 04:04:547 (1,2,3,4) - these notes semm so random,please place them in a beter way. Here is my advice:
lazy zzb
[Insane]
- 00:26:498 (2,7) - please avoid the overlap. I'd say move 00:26:986 (3,4,5,6,7) - a little left.
- 00:54:059 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm..this flow is a bit hard to play, try to ctrl+g 00:54:791 (8,9) - this. Then it would be fine
- 00:57:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stream is too boring for playing. Try another way please. For example,like this:
and then the flow of 00:57:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be better at the same time - 01:02:108 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same
- 01:06:986 (1,2) - this looks weird, i think it's better to do it like this:
- 01:18:205 (1,1) - move a bit right since 01:17:474 (5,6,1,1,1) - this seems not a straight line.
- 01:21:132 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this can be more fun and more beautiful imo.Here is my suggestion:
- 01:24:303 (9,10,1) - if you wanna use this kind of overlap, pls use it at the whole map. Or i highly suggest to to stack them
- 02:23:084 (1,2) - same with above.
- 03:17:230 (7,8) - this flow doesn't fit here imo since you should consider 03:16:986 (6,7) - this, this flow is a bit hard but you suddenly make 03:17:230 (7,8) - this flow very easy,it may make players confused. I'd say try to make them kepp the same spacing. like this:
- 03:46:254 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g this because 03:46:010 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this flow is tooooo bad.
- 03:50:523 (10,11) - spacing error? they are supposed to be 1.0 DS.