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Nivrad00
osu!maniera P:

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[Normal+]
00:58:638 - can't figure out why this LN ends early .u.
01:13:060 and 01:13:636 - maybe add notes for snares
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap like on Insane
[Hard]
00:10:176 - I think it's a little unintuitive for this pattern to switch from the right hand to the left hand on an offbeat?
00:09:888 - also here, since there's an accented note too
00:58:638 - are you charting the percussion in the right hand? it doesn't seem to fit but maybe I'm not hearing something :c
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap
[Insane]
00:32:099 - ooooooo i like this
00:40:176 - wo interesting pattern .o.
01:06:137 - not sure if these jacks fit in this section
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - I think these might be 1/6 snap
01:17:386 - maybe spread this pattern out, it's kinda biased towards the right
01:17:675 and 01:17:867 - I suggest placing these two notes on the same lane to make the triplet more intuitive
01:41:616 - maybe look over this section? I found the jack patterns really awkward compared to the rest of the map
[Collab Another]
00:09:888 - can I suggest putting the three-note jacks on alternating hands (like 1-1-1-7-7-7-2-2-2-6-6-6) so that it doesn't feel so much harder than the rest of the triplet section?
01:17:771 - using jacks here is a cool idea but the space jacks feel really uncomfortable in the middle of the stream
01:31:233 - I think jacks would fit nicely here since it sounds like a climax!
[Masterpiece]
00:06:715 and 01:41:616 - in my opinion these jacks are already hard enough without being squished into three lanes by the LN
00:14:936 and 00:15:513 and 00:24:744 - in this part of the map, all three 1/4 snap three-note jacks are in the right hand x:
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - again, might be 1/6 snap
01:18:252 - LMAO vibro while holding down spacebar

OKAY go get ranked
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Nivrad00 wrote:

osu!maniera P:

I replied back with everything but they are gone for some reason... o.o dammit osu forums
c: = applied

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[Normal+]
00:58:638 - can't figure out why this LN ends early .u. Whoops how did this happen o.o fixed
01:13:060 and 01:13:636 - maybe add notes for snares c:
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap like on Insane c:
[Hard]
00:10:176 - I think it's a little unintuitive for this pattern to switch from the right hand to the left hand on an offbeat? fixed xP
00:09:888 - also here, since there's an accented note too ^
00:58:638 - are you charting the percussion in the right hand? it doesn't seem to fit but maybe I'm not hearing something :c Whoops, some parts are a bit off, fixed it c:
01:31:233 - should be 1/3 snap c:
[Insane]
00:32:099 - ooooooo i like this c:
00:40:176 - wo interesting pattern .o. ccc:
01:06:137 - not sure if these jacks fit in this section Fixed xD
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - I think these might be 1/6 snap Checked the original bms chart, it is 1/4 haha
01:17:386 - maybe spread this pattern out, it's kinda biased towards the right c:
01:17:675 and 01:17:867 - I suggest placing these two notes on the same lane to make the triplet more intuitive c:
01:41:616 - maybe look over this section? I found the jack patterns really awkward compared to the rest of the map Definitely feels so to me too. I dunno what i was thinking xD fixed
[Collab Another]
00:09:888 - can I suggest putting the three-note jacks on alternating hands (like 1-1-1-7-7-7-2-2-2-6-6-6) so that it doesn't feel so much harder than the rest of the triplet section? Good idea! fixed
01:17:771 - using jacks here is a cool idea but the space jacks feel really uncomfortable in the middle of the stream Good point. Fixed
01:31:233 - I think jacks would fit nicely here since it sounds like a climax! Jaaaaacks c:
[Masterpiece]
00:06:715 and 01:41:616 - in my opinion these jacks are already hard enough without being squished into three lanes by the LN I mean, it's supposed to be a 7.5* diff, so might as well make it challenging enough c:
00:14:936 and 00:15:513 and 00:24:744 - in this part of the map, all three 1/4 snap three-note jacks are in the right hand x: Fixed
01:07:795 and 01:08:949 - again, might be 1/6 snap Checked bms chart
01:18:252 - LMAO vibro while holding down spacebar ;c but the ln is mapped to the guitar so it fits well~

OKAY go get ranked
Thanks for the beautiful mod, niv c:
Reba
모딩큐에서 리퀘를 받아 모딩하러 왔습니다~
동의 하지 않으시는 부분을 바꾸지 않으셔도 됩니다

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

노멀은 개인적으로 괜찮다고 봅니다...

Hyper
00:25:393 (25393|3) - to 2
00:25:465 (25465|2) - to 4
00:25:970 (25970|3) - to 4
00:26:042 (26042|4) - to 2
01:21:281 여기에 소리가 있으므로 노트를 넣으시는것을 추천합니다
01:21:858 ^

Insane
00:17:749 (17749|5) - 소리가 있습니다, 노트추가
00:54:023 드럼으로 탁 치는 소리가 없음에도 불구하고 노트가 3개 입니다, 수정하시는것을 추천.
00:55:176 ^

Collab Another 과 Masterpiece 는 모딩을 도저히 못하겠어서 하지 않았습니다...죄송합니다
랭크 화이팅~
Topic Starter
Jinjin

- R e b a - wrote:

모딩큐에서 리퀘를 받아 모딩하러 왔습니다~
동의 하지 않으시는 부분을 바꾸지 않으셔도 됩니다

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

노멀은 개인적으로 괜찮다고 봅니다...

Hyper
00:25:393 (25393|3) - to 2 Applied
00:25:465 (25465|2) - to 4 ^
00:25:970 (25970|3) - to 4 약간 다르게 수정해봤습니다
00:26:042 (26042|4) - to 2 ^
01:21:281 여기에 소리가 있으므로 노트를 넣으시는것을 추천합니다 제가 이곳은 드럼 위주로 노트를 넣어서 피아노 소리가 있긴 하지만 안넣겠습니다.
01:21:858 ^
^

Insane
00:17:749 (17749|5) - 소리가 있습니다, 노트추가 이부분도 snare drum은 강조하지만 그 hihat 소리는 그냥 두고 싶네요 ^^ (대신 collab another 랑 masterpiece 난이도에는 이 소리에 노트가 추가되었습니다.)
00:54:023 드럼으로 탁 치는 소리가 없음에도 불구하고 노트가 3개 입니다, 수정하시는것을 추천. 수정했습니다
00:55:176 ^ ^

Collab Another 과 Masterpiece 는 모딩을 도저히 못하겠어서 하지 않았습니다...죄송합니다
랭크 화이팅~
고맙습니다~ ^^
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
Mapset : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the difficulty ladder is unrankable, the difficulty between each diff should not exceed 1.5 star rating from each diff. (your HD to insane exceeded that, and also the 7.5 star has 2.5 star diff with the next lower diff)
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ no tags? and also you should only write the source if it's from anime if i remember it correctly, i'm not sure about BMS.
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



NM
00:04:407 (4407|3,4407|5,4407|1,4984|2,5561|3) - they are all of the same chord strength and phase, why 3 notes, then 1 and 1? emphasis seems random to me
and limit your use of 3 notes for NM diffs, currently you use a lot of 3 notes for NM. it should be NM+ instead, or delete those overused 3note chord if you want to keep it as NM
decrease OD to 6.5 for NM

01:28:060 (88060|2,88636|4,89213|1,89790|5) - 4 especially is a no no i think, for normal.

other diffs are fine, just need minor polishing <3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Topic Starter
Jinjin

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
Mapset : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the difficulty ladder is unrankable, the difficulty between each diff should not exceed 1.5 star rating from each diff. (your HD to insane exceeded that, and also the 7.5 star has 2.5 star diff with the next lower diff) After the talk with BNS / QATs, I learned that the 1.5* diff gap isn't actually a rule, but more of a guideline to follow. In other words, it isn't mandatory to follow. I have thought about making a separate difficulty between Hyper and Insane, but the music makes it vague to make patterns that would fit in between the two difficulties. The gap between Masterpiece and Collab Another difficulties is also expected, and it is definitely okay to deviate from the guidelines on the X diffs (Ex: See AiAe and AXION)
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ no tags? and also you should only write the source if it's from anime if i remember it correctly, i'm not sure about BMS. Haven't added tags yet. Will do soon~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )



NM
00:04:407 (4407|3,4407|5,4407|1,4984|2,5561|3) - they are all of the same chord strength and phase, why 3 notes, then 1 and 1? emphasis seems random to me mmm good catch, fixed~
and limit your use of 3 notes for NM diffs, currently you use a lot of 3 notes for NM. it should be NM+ instead, or delete those overused 3note chord if you want to keep it as NM I removed most of the 3 note chords
decrease OD to 6.5 for NM Applied

01:28:060 (88060|2,88636|4,89213|1,89790|5) - 4 especially is a no no i think, for normal. Fixed the lns

other diffs are fine, just need minor polishing <3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Thanks for the mod ^-^/
x M e l
Hey :3 mod for req via queue (hi page 2)

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7


I don't mod the hyper because, for me, is perfect :cry: (?

Excelent map~ and sorry for the short mod u.u so, star :3 good luck!
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hey :3 mod for req via queue (hi page 2)

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Normal
00:11:619 - http://puu.sh/hl83L/c1c85b27f4.png change for this? → http://puu.sh/hl84m/99ec6ce961.png Fixed, and changed some patterns after that
01:05:128 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037028 I think these mini-jacks are hards for Normal, idk I agree, made them into non jack patterns
01:09:021 - http://puu.sh/hl8dh/6dd91c440e.png change for this? → http://puu.sh/hl8ew/35758cd7b9.png Good idea!
01:18:252 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037034https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3037038 ^ ? Changed

I don't mod the hyper because, for me, is perfect :cry: (?

Excelent map~ and sorry for the short mod u.u so, star :3 good luck!
Thanks for the mod and the star :)~
schwarzvgrune
ah, so its only a guideline! thanks for your clarification <3

good luck with the map XD
Yuzeyun
incoming 1,000pp scores :^)
Topic Starter
Jinjin

_Gezo_ wrote:

incoming 1,000pp scores :^)
:^)
DrawdeX
Hello! :)
M4M as promised :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Everything modded
[Normal]
OD +0.5
• 00:06:426 (6426|2) - Move to 4 or 6, for hand balance
• 00:15:946 (15946|0) - Move to 6 or 7, ^ also for pattern balance from 00:14:792 -
• 00:29:503 (29503|6) - Move to 1 or 3, for hand balance
• 01:10:752 (70752|1,70896|2) - Ctrl+J? to follow up on 01:11:040 -
• 01:52:001 - Add a note, for strong beat

[Hyper]
• 00:09:023 - Add a note? I hear a strong beat here
• 00:20:561 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:25:465 - 00:26:042 - Add a note, since you made 00:26:330 - three notes for the strong beat
• 00:27:773 - 00:28:349 - ^
• 01:12:483 (72483|2) - Move to 2, for pattern balance on 01:11:329 - 01:11:906 -

[Insane]
• 00:20:561 - Add a note? Strong beat
• 01:14:213 - ^
• 01:26:329 - Add a note, since you made 01:25:752 - three notes
• 01:26:906 - ^
• 01:27:483 - ^

[Collab Another]
• 00:32:965 - Add a note, for the strong beat
• 01:23:444 - ^, for the cymbal sound
• 01:25:752 - ^
• 01:26:329 - ^
• 01:26:906 - ^

[Masterpiece]
• 00:19:984 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:20:561 - ^
• 00:37:869 (37869|6) - Move to 00:37:893 - ? It still has the piano sound
• 00:44:215 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:10:175 - ^
• 01:19:983 - ^

Sorry, I can mod only a little on streams. :?
Good luck~! :)
Also, here's the M4M. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/303649 :D
Topic Starter
Jinjin

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello! :)
M4M as promised :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Everything modded
[Normal]
OD +0.5
• 00:06:426 (6426|2) - Move to 4 or 6, for hand balance Applied to 6
• 00:15:946 (15946|0) - Move to 6 or 7, ^ also for pattern balance from 00:14:792 - Applied to 7
• 00:29:503 (29503|6) - Move to 1 or 3, for hand balance Applied
• 01:10:752 (70752|1,70896|2) - Ctrl+J? to follow up on 01:11:040 - I kept as is for the pitch
• 01:52:001 - Add a note, for strong beat Added

[Hyper]
• 00:09:023 - Add a note? I hear a strong beat here Added
• 00:20:561 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 00:25:465 - 00:26:042 - Add a note, since you made 00:26:330 - three notes for the strong beat Applied
• 00:27:773 - 00:28:349 - ^ ^
• 01:12:483 (72483|2) - Move to 2, for pattern balance on 01:11:329 - 01:11:906 - Applied

[Insane]
• 00:20:561 - Add a note? Strong beat Applied
• 01:14:213 - ^ ^
• 01:26:329 - Add a note, since you made 01:25:752 - three notes Added
• 01:26:906 - ^ ^
• 01:27:483 - ^ ^

[Collab Another]
• 00:32:965 - Add a note, for the strong beat Added
• 01:23:444 - ^, for the cymbal sound ^
• 01:25:752 - ^ ^
• 01:26:329 - ^ ^
• 01:26:906 - ^ Don't think it's necessary here because it's soft

[Masterpiece]
• 00:19:984 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 00:20:561 - ^ ^
• 00:37:869 (37869|6) - Move to 00:37:893 - ? It still has the piano sound Fixed
• 00:44:215 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 01:10:175 - ^ Added
• 01:19:983 - ^

Sorry, I can mod only a little on streams. :?
Good luck~! :)
Also, here's the M4M. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/303649 :D
Thanks for the helpful mod! I'll get to the M4M req when I am free ^^
Frim4503
this map still WIP ?
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Frim4503 wrote:

this map still WIP ?
Chart is finished, just wip Cuz of hitsounds
Julie
Sorry took me a while ><...I got lazy =w=

From modqueue
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Normal]

00:40:898 (40898|6,41042|5,41186|4) - you been following the chord a lots, till here lolol, do the same here? :D

00:43:061 (43061|5,43205|3) - ctrl+g? Shouldn't be the same as 00:42:484 (42484|6,42628|4,42773|2,42917|1) -

00:44:936 (44936|1,45080|2,45224|1,45369|6,45513|5,45657|4,45801|5) - um follow the chord, also feel a bit to one handed from one size and another xD. This 00:44:936 (44936|1,45224|1) - and this 00:45:513 (45513|5,45801|5) - shouldn't be in same column. While these 00:45:369 (45369|6,45657|4) - should be xD. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/hpaeB.jpg ?

00:48:253 (48253|0,48542|2) - shouldn't LN start here 00:48:398 - like you did on your hyper

00:49:407 - to 00:54:023 - try keep piano consistent here ><, feel like losing rhythmn in some part.

00:57:773 (57773|2,57917|4,58061|6,58205|2,58349|6,58494|4) - maybe try follow the chord for this part 00:58:061 (58061|6,58205|2,58349|6,58494|4) - like you did before? http://puu.sh/hpaFQ.png

01:09:021 (69021|0,69165|2,69310|4,69454|6) - this shouldn't be a stair xD. Should be something like this http://puu.sh/hpaV7.jpg ><

01:37:289 (97289|2) - delete, the only sound there is the 1/6 sound that your not mapping for your normal.

01:38:443 - delete a note and make one jack with this 01:38:732 - like you did here 01:33:828 - :D. Keep it consistent for that part.

01:39:309 (99309|0,99597|0,99885|0,100174|0) - not sure if all these should be same column? not the same sound ><

[Hyper]

00:11:907 - 00:12:484 - delete a note, shouldn't be 3 note like this 00:13:061 - and this 00:11:330 -

01:15:511 - a LN should start here?

[Insane]

00:13:926 (13926|0,13926|2) - This part really don't feel much piano impact , mostly same number of note and same column then this 00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|0) - ><

00:14:792 (14792|4,14936|4) - don't put them same column, not the same chords.

00:39:744 (39744|4,39816|5) - shouldn't this be jack? xD

00:47:676 - add a note at 4 ? should have at least 3 notes like this 00:47:099 - and this 00:48:253 - for the cymbal xD

Really nice mapset O.O!! This is way to amazing *stars* XD
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Julie wrote:

Sorry took me a while ><...I got lazy =w=

From modqueue
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Normal]

00:40:898 (40898|6,41042|5,41186|4) - you been following the chord a lots, till here lolol, do the same here? :D Rearranged~

00:43:061 (43061|5,43205|3) - ctrl+g? Shouldn't be the same as 00:42:484 (42484|6,42628|4,42773|2,42917|1) - Applied and rearranged

00:44:936 (44936|1,45080|2,45224|1,45369|6,45513|5,45657|4,45801|5) - um follow the chord, also feel a bit to one handed from one size and another xD. This 00:44:936 (44936|1,45224|1) - and this 00:45:513 (45513|5,45801|5) - shouldn't be in same column. While these 00:45:369 (45369|6,45657|4) - should be xD. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/hpaeB.jpg ? Followed your suggestion and rearranged ^^

00:48:253 (48253|0,48542|2) - shouldn't LN start here 00:48:398 - like you did on your hyper Ah, I was going for a more stable rhythm ln for the normal diff but I think it's better to rearrange like hyper. Fixed ^^

00:49:407 - to 00:54:023 - try keep piano consistent here ><, feel like losing rhythmn in some part. Oh this part is mapped to the bass, not the piano ouo;; (but rearranged so that it is more beginner friendly o/)

00:57:773 (57773|2,57917|4,58061|6,58205|2,58349|6,58494|4) - maybe try follow the chord for this part 00:58:061 (58061|6,58205|2,58349|6,58494|4) - like you did before? http://puu.sh/hpaFQ.png Fixed

01:09:021 (69021|0,69165|2,69310|4,69454|6) - this shouldn't be a stair xD. Should be something like this http://puu.sh/hpaV7.jpg >< Rearranged with pitch in mind

01:37:289 (97289|2) - delete, the only sound there is the 1/6 sound that your not mapping for your normal. Removed o/

01:38:443 - delete a note and make one jack with this 01:38:732 - like you did here 01:33:828 - :D. Keep it consistent for that part. Good catch! Rearranged

01:39:309 (99309|0,99597|0,99885|0,100174|0) - not sure if all these should be same column? not the same sound >< Rearranged~

[Hyper]

00:11:907 - 00:12:484 - delete a note, shouldn't be 3 note like this 00:13:061 - and this 00:11:330 - Removed o/

01:15:511 - a LN should start here? Emphasized the downbeats only, I think starting here isn't necessary

[Insane]

00:13:926 (13926|0,13926|2) - This part really don't feel much piano impact , mostly same number of note and same column then this 00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|0) - >< deleted one of the notes at the third piano sound

00:14:792 (14792|4,14936|4) - don't put them same column, not the same chords. moved~

00:39:744 (39744|4,39816|5) - shouldn't this be jack? xD You're right, but a 208 bpm 1/4 triple jack might be too hard in this diff ;-;

00:47:676 - add a note at 4 ? should have at least 3 notes like this 00:47:099 - and this 00:48:253 - for the cymbal xD Added~

Really nice mapset O.O!! This is way to amazing *stars* XD
Thanks for the star and a really helpful mod, Julie >w<
PANDAAAAAAAA
Rank harder and quality , take my stars.
Topic Starter
Jinjin

nowsmart wrote:

Rank harder and quality , take my stars.
:o thanks for the stars nowsmart!! :D :)
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General
1. i think about dif gap between Hyper and Insane is too big(1.66) try to reduce Insane dif star dif or add anther dif to fill this gap
2. increase hs 30% :arrow: 40%

Normal
00:11:330 (11330|0) - move to 4. feeling empty in col. 4
00:14:648 (14648|5) - ^
00:27:340 (27340|6) - move to 4. to follow prev pattern
00:54:888 (54888|0,54888|3,55176|3,55176|6) - something like this.maybe
01:01:523 (61523|2) - move to 3
01:01:811 (61811|4) - ^ 5
01:52:001 (112001|4) - ^ 4

Hyper
00:20:128 - http://puu.sh/hxIji/1929b070e9.png <<< suggestion. feel free to reject
00:21:138 - http://puu.sh/hxIkc/e989679296.png ^
00:24:744 (24744|4) - move to 4
01:54:453 (114453|6,114597|4,114741|5,114885|3,115030|4,115174|2,115318|3) - it will be good if you make another stir. like prev. pattern

sorry just 2 dif
this map is too hard for me :o
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General
1. i think about dif gap between Hyper and Insane is too big(1.66) try to reduce Insane dif star dif or add anther dif to fill this gap
2. increase hs 30% :arrow: 40% 1. I'll try to lower the star rating gap 2. I'm still working on hitsounds and they aren't finished. But yes, it will be around 40%

Normal
00:11:330 (11330|0) - move to 4. feeling empty in col. 4 Applied
00:14:648 (14648|5) - ^ ^
00:27:340 (27340|6) - move to 4. to follow prev pattern ^
00:54:888 (54888|0,54888|3,55176|3,55176|6) - something like this.maybe Took your suggestion, thanks
01:01:523 (61523|2) - move to 3 Rearranged my pattern here in my own way
01:01:811 (61811|4) - ^ 5 Still kept at left hand because the piano is on the left hand side (bass clef)
01:52:001 (112001|4) - ^ 4 Applied

Hyper
00:20:128 - http://puu.sh/hxIji/1929b070e9.png <<< suggestion. feel free to reject
00:21:138 - http://puu.sh/hxIkc/e989679296.png ^ I'll keep the patterns as it because of the pitch
00:24:744 (24744|4) - move to 4 Stayed at column 5 because of the pitch (same as previous note)
01:54:453 (114453|6,114597|4,114741|5,114885|3,115030|4,115174|2,115318|3) - it will be good if you make another stir. like prev. pattern Applied

sorry just 2 dif
this map is too hard for me :o
Thanks for the mod! It was helpful :)
Tristan97
Looking good Jinjin! Incoming 10kpp

Take mah stars
rhalp10


Musical Masterpiece
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Normal]
00:12:773 (12773|4) - Move to 6
00:42:484 (42484|6,42628|4) - Ctrl+J
[Insane]
00:09:023 (9023|4,9888|5) - Ctrl+H & Right Arrow 3x
00:09:984 (9984|4,10080|3) - Ctrl+H
00:33:109 (33109|6,33253|5) - Remove
[Masterpiece]
00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|1) - Ctrl+Right Arrow
Sorry For Delay , Wow , i like your map hmm, go for rank it, ^_^ Good Luck
Topic Starter
Jinjin

rhalp10 wrote:

Musical Masterpiece
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Normal]
00:12:773 (12773|4) - Move to 6 Keeping a specific pattern here where long notes and the regular notes are 2 columns apart
00:42:484 (42484|6,42628|4) - Ctrl+J Keeping because of pitch relevance
[Insane]
00:09:023 (9023|4,9888|5) - Ctrl+H & Right Arrow 3x Applied, changed something to avoid minijacks
00:09:984 (9984|4,10080|3) - Ctrl+H Rearranged
00:33:109 (33109|6,33253|5) - Remove I'm mapping those little 1/32 runs as long notes, so i'll keep them
[Masterpiece]
00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|1) - Ctrl+Right Arrow Keeping it since 00:14:359 (14359|2,14359|1,14648|1,14648|2) - are the same pitch
Sorry For Delay , Wow , i like your map hmm, go for rank it, ^_^ Good Luck
Thank you~
Takane6
Hi jin /o/
mod here :D

[General]
Too lazy to check it no problem

[Masterpiece]
SPOILER
00:19:696 - add note?
00:32:965 - add note(or maybe LN? since you make 3 LN at 00:30:080 - 00:32:388 - 00:30:657 - )
00:43:782 - there is a snare, add note?
00:49:263 - em.. delete 1 note? too strong for 4 note in here (even the pitch is a bit different with 00:50:994 - )
01:22:146 - add note
01:26:906 - only 2 note? because 01:26:329 - is 4 note :3


[Collab Another]
SPOILER
00:06:138 - em.. there is a finish sound right? add more note?
00:12:196 - add note
00:20:849 - and 00:21:426 - add note (just like 00:22:003 - 00:22:580 - )
00:22:869 - add 2 note ( just like 00:21:715 - 00:20:561 - )
00:37:580 - add note ( just like 00:36:715 - 00:37:003 - 00:37:292 - )
00:47:676 - add note because of finish sound
00:48:974 - not sure about this 3 note since its not so strong sound
00:50:994 - 00:52:724 - 00:54:455 - 00:54:888 - 00:55:609 - 00:56:042 - add note (snare sound same as 00:49:263 - )
01:05:128 - 01:05:272 - add note
01:11:329 - 01:12:483 - 01:13:060 - 01:13:636 - add note (same as 01:10:752 - 01:11:906 - )
01:22:579 - 01:22:867 - 01:23:156 - 01:24:886 - 01:25:175 - 01:25:463 - add note for snare (just like 01:21:425 - 01:22:002 - 01:23:733 - 01:24:310 -
01:26:906 - 2 note only?
01:48:251 - add note because of high pitch and a snare..
--
from 01:53:155 - until 01:56:616 - Collab another in this part is harder than the Masterpiece (just saying)

er... i hope its helpfull :3
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Takane6 wrote:

Hi jin /o/
mod here :D

[General]
Too lazy to check it no problem

[Masterpiece]
SPOILER
00:19:696 - add note? Added
00:32:965 - add note(or maybe LN? since you make 3 LN at 00:30:080 - 00:32:388 - 00:30:657 - ) Looks good!
00:43:782 - there is a snare, add note? The patterns are a bit uncomfortable here when i add this note in ;-;
00:49:263 - em.. delete 1 note? too strong for 4 note in here (even the pitch is a bit different with 00:50:994 - ) Deleted
01:22:146 - add note Added
01:26:906 - only 2 note? because 01:26:329 - is 4 note :3 Added


[Collab Another]
SPOILER
00:06:138 - em.. there is a finish sound right? add more note? For the sake of the pattern, I think the current one works well
00:12:196 - add note Added
00:20:849 - and 00:21:426 - add note (just like 00:22:003 - 00:22:580 - ) Added
00:22:869 - add 2 note ( just like 00:21:715 - 00:20:561 - ) ^
00:37:580 - add note ( just like 00:36:715 - 00:37:003 - 00:37:292 - ) Altered
00:47:676 - add note because of finish sound Added
00:48:974 - not sure about this 3 note since its not so strong sound I agree, made into 2 note
00:50:994 - 00:52:724 - 00:54:455 - 00:54:888 - 00:55:609 - 00:56:042 - add note (snare sound same as 00:49:263 - ) Added
01:05:128 - 01:05:272 - add note Added
01:11:329 - 01:12:483 - 01:13:060 - 01:13:636 - add note (same as 01:10:752 - 01:11:906 - ) ^
01:22:579 - 01:22:867 - 01:23:156 - 01:24:886 - 01:25:175 - 01:25:463 - add note for snare (just like 01:21:425 - 01:22:002 - 01:23:733 - 01:24:310 -
01:26:906 - 2 note only? Added
01:48:251 - add note because of high pitch and a snare.. Added
--
from 01:53:155 - until 01:56:616 - Collab another in this part is harder than the Masterpiece (just saying) U sure? I think the masterpiece diff is mapped harder because of the 1/4 and the jacks happening at column 1 o.o collab another version here is pretty easy to do imo

er... i hope its helpfull :3
It was very helpful, thanks takane ^^
lenpai
Hi!
*throws stars
Topic Starter
Jinjin
Thanks for all the stars >w<
17VA
[Masterpiece]

00:26:186 - 여기부분이 좀 어색해보이는데 http://puu.sh/io1DM/c802c2fb6e.png 이런 패턴도 좋을듯

00:28:494 - ^

01:05:056 (65056|3) - 여기 뒤에 스페이스가 다른줄에 반복되니 http://puu.sh/io1Uc/44e3cdac6b.jpg

01:18:252 (78252|3) - 01:18:721 - 여기서 커트

01:31:040 (91040|2,91136|2) - 01:31:040 (91040|2,91136|2) -

01:31:040 (91040|2,91136|2) - 로 이동?

[Collab Another]

00:02:676 (2676|5,2749|6,2821|4) - 여기처럼 00:02:821 (2821|0) - 이걸 2로 이동 (대칭)

00:08:061 - 7에 추가

00:19:407 - 이런패턴이 치기 더 편할듯 http://puu.sh/ioKz2/5c1c412725.png

00:26:619 - 여기 드럼이 있으니 7에 추가해도 될듯

00:30:946 - 스페이스바에 추가?

01:03:253 (63253|0) - 대칭으로 보이기 위해 7로 이동하는것도 좋아보일듯

01:23:156 - . 5번째 줄이 반복되므로 01:23:300 (83300|4) - 6으로 이동

또한 계단라인 강조 (01:22:867 (82867|0,82939|1,83011|2,83084|3,83156|4,83300|5,83372|6) - ) 를 위해

01:25:608 (85608|2) - ^

[Insane]
stryver12
Masterpiece HT 6.1 stars o.o
Jackhammer 2 stronk >.<

Some opinions
[Masterpiece]
01:59:321 (119321|3,119429|3) - Make 2 notes? Like 01:59:537 (119537|4,119537|2,119735|2,119735|4)

[Insane]
01:57:193 (117193|2,117337|1,117482|0,117626|1) - It's placed 3-2-1-2, make it 4-3-2-1? (pitching...)

[Normal]
01:22:290 (82290|1,82290|0,82579|1,82579|2,82867|3,82867|2,83156|4,83156|3) - leave 1 column space? (Might be too hard for beginners)
01:24:598 (84598|6,84598|5,84886|4,84886|5,85175|3,85175|4,85463|2,85463|3) - ^
Topic Starter
Jinjin

17VA wrote:

[Masterpiece]

00:26:186 - 여기부분이 좀 어색해보이는데 http://puu.sh/io1DM/c802c2fb6e.png 이런 패턴도 좋을듯 음 근데 spacebar에 1/3 잭이 생기네요;;

00:28:494 - ^ 위와 마찬가지

01:05:056 (65056|3) - 여기 뒤에 스페이스가 다른줄에 반복되니 http://puu.sh/io1Uc/44e3cdac6b.jpg

01:18:252 (78252|3) - 01:18:721 - 여기서 커트

01:31:040 (91040|2,91136|2) - 01:31:040 (91040|2,91136|2) -

01:31:040 (91040|2,91136|2) - 로 이동? 무슨 뜻인지 잘 모르겟...@_@

[Collab Another]

00:02:676 (2676|5,2749|6,2821|4) - 여기처럼 00:02:821 (2821|0) - 이걸 2로 이동 (대칭)

00:08:061 - 7에 추가

00:19:407 - 이런패턴이 치기 더 편할듯 http://puu.sh/ioKz2/5c1c412725.png 네 그런 것 같네요

00:26:619 - 여기 드럼이 있으니 7에 추가해도 될듯 이부분은 그냥 피아노 위주로 매핑을 하였기 때문에 드럼노트를 안 넣을 생각입니다

00:30:946 - 스페이스바에 추가? ^

01:03:253 (63253|0) - 대칭으로 보이기 위해 7로 이동하는것도 좋아보일듯

01:23:156 - . 5번째 줄이 반복되므로 01:23:300 (83300|4) - 6으로 이동 계속 1357 계단을 써왔고, 또 이부분에 드럼이 반복을 약간 알맞게 해주네요

또한 계단라인 강조 (01:22:867 (82867|0,82939|1,83011|2,83084|3,83156|4,83300|5,83372|6) - ) 를 위해 ^

01:25:608 (85608|2) - ^ ^
모드 감사합니다~ 후에 다른 난이도 모딩또 끝나면 계속 써가겠습니다.

stryver12 wrote:

Masterpiece HT 6.1 stars o.o
Jackhammer 2 stronk >.<

Some opinions
[Masterpiece]
01:59:321 (119321|3,119429|3) - Make 2 notes? Like 01:59:537 (119537|4,119537|2,119735|2,119735|4) Yeah i guess this is more reasonable in terms of pitch, thanks

[Insane]
01:57:193 (117193|2,117337|1,117482|0,117626|1) - It's placed 3-2-1-2, make it 4-3-2-1? (pitching...) I was trying to avoid the spacebar but I guess this works (could be a bit left-hand spacebar biased, but i think it's fine)

[Normal]
01:22:290 (82290|1,82290|0,82579|1,82579|2,82867|3,82867|2,83156|4,83156|3) - leave 1 column space? (Might be too hard for beginners) Good point, made it into 2 column gaps
01:24:598 (84598|6,84598|5,84886|4,84886|5,85175|3,85175|4,85463|2,85463|3) - ^ Same as above
Thanks for the mod ^^
Shinzo-

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with iJinjin


7K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7]


[General]
  1. hmmmm Collab Another ? collab with who ? u should add him/her on the tags
[Collab Another]
00:01:667 - add note, its same with 00:01:811 -
00:02:893 - missing note for the sound... emm i dont know what sound is that hahaha xD but it same with 00:02:821 - and 00:03:109 -
00:03:253 (3253|1) - u can just delete this or the other note since its not even louder than 00:02:099 -
00:04:407 - ^ here too but u can even delete 2 note ? just like 00:04:984 - :3
00:11:907 (11907|3) - delete no snare
00:15:585 - should add note
00:36:138 (36138|4,36156|5) - Ctrl G for consistency pattern
00:37:887 (37887|3) - i dont sure with this
01:01:811 - add note 4
01:17:891 (77891|5) - just delete and i yes, 01:17:783 (77783|4) - end 01:17:963 -
01:23:300 - add note cymbal
01:51:929 (111929|5,112001|6) - ctrl G for better pattern

[Masterpiece]
00:20:273 (20273|3,20417|2) - delete ? no piano
00:23:950 (23950|4,24023|0) - Ctrl G ?
00:38:374 (38374|3) - should be ghost note
00:40:465 (40465|2,40753|3,41042|2) - move to 6 ? for the thrill sound
01:17:242 - might want to try something like http://puu.sh/iOySU/5fb3bf51db.jpg
01:18:396 (78396|0,78396|1,78486|0,78486|1,78576|0,78576|1,78667|0,78667|1) - actually this should be just 1 note
01:23:733 (83733|0) - move to 2?
01:24:310 (84310|1,84382|2,84454|3,84526|4) - move 1 to left ?
01:25:608 - 01:25:680 - missing another note ?
01:48:347 (108347|1,108443|2,108539|1,108635|2) - Ctrl G for better pattern in 01:48:635 (108635|2,108684|5,108732|0,108756|6) -
01:51:809 (111809|1,111905|2,112001|1) - Switch collumn ? if yes, then 01:52:145 (112145|2,112217|3,112289|4) - move 1 to left

Nice Map ^^ Take my star owo
Good Luck ~~
Topic Starter
Jinjin
Thanks Shinzo! Will apply when i can :)
Topic Starter
Jinjin

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with iJinjin


7K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7]


[General]
  1. hmmmm Collab Another ? collab with who ? u should add him/her on the tags Will do~
[Collab Another]
00:01:667 - add note, its same with 00:01:811 - Applied
00:02:893 - missing note for the sound... emm i dont know what sound is that hahaha xD but it same with 00:02:821 - and 00:03:109 - yeah i agree, added xp
00:03:253 (3253|1) - u can just delete this or the other note since its not even louder than 00:02:099 - Wanna keep it because same instruments xp
00:04:407 - ^ here too but u can even delete 2 note ? just like 00:04:984 - :3 I think it's fine.. x3
00:11:907 (11907|3) - delete no snare Fixed
00:15:585 - should add note Applied
00:36:138 (36138|4,36156|5) - Ctrl G for consistency pattern Agreed~
00:37:887 (37887|3) - i dont sure with this I'll just keep this as one big chord xp
01:01:811 - add note 4 Changed the pattern as a whole
01:17:891 (77891|5) - just delete and i yes, 01:17:783 (77783|4) - end 01:17:963 - There is an audible note there so I don't think i can ;-;
01:23:300 - add note cymbal Want to keep this part more melody based so i won't add here ;w;
01:51:929 (111929|5,112001|6) - ctrl G for better pattern Agreed~

[Masterpiece]
00:20:273 (20273|3,20417|2) - delete ? no piano Yes piano :c
00:23:950 (23950|4,24023|0) - Ctrl G ? Okk
00:38:374 (38374|3) - should be ghost note The sound is barely audible, but it is there
00:40:465 (40465|2,40753|3,41042|2) - move to 6 ? for the thrill sound Becomes pretty uncomfortable to play tho xp
01:17:242 - might want to try something like http://puu.sh/iOySU/5fb3bf51db.jpg Made a huge change here actually
01:18:396 (78396|0,78396|1,78486|0,78486|1,78576|0,78576|1,78667|0,78667|1) - actually this should be just 1 note Yeh, agree. rip star rating
01:23:733 (83733|0) - move to 2? kk
01:24:310 (84310|1,84382|2,84454|3,84526|4) - move 1 to left ? okies
01:25:608 - 01:25:680 - missing another note ? added
01:48:347 (108347|1,108443|2,108539|1,108635|2) - Ctrl G for better pattern in 01:48:635 (108635|2,108684|5,108732|0,108756|6) - okay
01:51:809 (111809|1,111905|2,112001|1) - Switch collumn ? if yes, then 01:52:145 (112145|2,112217|3,112289|4) - move 1 to left Nahh due to pitch

Nice Map ^^ Take my star owo
Good Luck ~~

Thanks for the really helpful mod !_! owo
Blocko
needs full keysounds and the actual overjoy chart in there tbh
Akasha-
Musical Masterpiece - MANIERA [OsuMania]


Hi there, here is the BPM result after the check, any problems please call me on PM

[TimingPoints]
2105,288.461538461538,4,2,1,30,1,0
64988,288.461538461538,4,2,1,30,1,0
92391,288.461538461538,4,2,1,30,1,0
116621,292.682926829268,4,2,1,30,1,0
117791,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
118439,300,4,2,1,30,1,0
118776,342.857142857143,4,2,1,30,1,0
119118,413.793103448276,4,2,1,30,1,0
119738,521.739130434783,4,2,1,30,1,0

Notice: File and then Open .osu in Notepad, after then you brag and stop on the [TimingPoints]
After that, just Additional blocks the old code and paste the new code into it




Good luck with the map, keep up the good work ~ I like this map
Yuzeyun

_Gezo_ wrote:

incoming 1,000pp scores :^)
now that the diff is 8 stars i start to wonder
Harbyter
fine to me
lemonguy
INCOMING JHLEE 1200 PP PLAY, oh boy the hype
Fullerene-

Gekido- wrote:

INCOMING JHLEE 1200 PP PLAY, oh boy the hype
More like incoming DQ and mania PP rework
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