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Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

General
01:19:034 (Ki) - pointless kiai time, remove this or do something

no major problems found in ALL diffs, good work! ;)
STAR!
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
Spread should be ENHI not ENII

[General]
How sweet song :3
I see a bit of Kiai Time, make it longer :D
A yuri bg! try do found other cute yuri bgs :D

[Easy]
Change Snap Divisore to 1/4, since you mapped with it.

[Hard]
Map is good, but check all map's spacing.

[Special !]
Diff's Title: Special! not Special(space)!
Topic Starter
Vikon
Thx tmokb93 and Arusha Shuna~

about the kiai time, I don't like those shining notes, they are too bright for me, that's why I just take if for fountain :D
and I'm not good at choosing a picture, so I think there is one and that is fine~

Also, The [Special !], I like [Special !] rather than [Special!] since the 「!」is too silmlar to the 「l」, so I use a space between them to make them clear~ I think it is good-looking.

OK~ I checked [Hard],
canceled all jumps in the first 30sec. And the other jumps, because they are all used in new combo sections, I think it is easy to identify these notes, right?
Astom
hi ~

[general]
-01:18:667 start kiai here?

well that x3

Star :3
Eirene
[Special] :
01:46:902 (1) - remove the first clap
01:51:314 (13,14) - IMO boring part *.*, you should follow the drum (and add a new combo)
02:06:755 (6) - a bit more rounded ?

[Hard] :
00:17:490 (1) - I feel this is odd with only one combo (because of the rythm of your circle)
01:42:196 (1) - new combo ?

:3
Topic Starter
Vikon
Thx Astom and Eirene

‧Fixed the start of Kiai time
‧[Hard] according to the pattern, add new combo on 01:41:902
00:17:931 (x,x) add 2 notes with low volume drum
‧[Special !] 02:06:755 (6) became rounded
01:51:314 (13,14) In my opinion, being the ending, this pattern is fine.
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
Maybe capitalize the word at Title to It's Just Farewell?

[Easy]
01:21:019 (4) - Make symetric?
01:24:549 (2) - Make parallel?
01:43:372 (2) - Make symetric?
01:43:372 (2,3) - Spacing?

[Normal]
This diff need an audio-lead

[Hard]
This diff need an audio-lead
01:08:372 (3) - Make symetric?
01:28:667 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:28:078 (11)?

[Special !]
1) This diff need an audio-lead
2) Delete "!" in diff name, it's awful
01:20:725 (6) - Overlapped by slider doesn't looks good, IMO
01:24:990 (5) - ^

Not bad
STAR
Topic Starter
Vikon
all fixed! thx Leorda!

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
Maybe capitalize the word at Title to It's Just Farewell?

[Easy]
01:21:019 (4) - Make symetric?
01:24:549 (2) - Make parallel?
01:43:372 (2) - Make symetric?
01:43:372 (2,3) - Spacing?

[Normal]
This diff need an audio-lead

[Hard]
This diff need an audio-lead

all fixed! thx Leorda
ALL fixed! Thx Leorda!
01:08:372 (3) - Make symetric?
01:28:667 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:28:078 (11)?

[Special !]
1) This diff need an audio-lead
2) Delete "!" in diff name, it's awful
01:20:725 (6) - Overlapped by slider doesn't looks good, IMO
01:24:990 (5) - ^

Not bad
STAR
tsuka
the last diffi should be add more funny and different pattern
or will be playing a bit boring

/.
Ekaru
Special:

01:17:196 (3) - Move from where it currently is [under the (1)]. Will make it much easier to read. :)
01:09:255 (1,2,3) - Try stacking the sliders, I think it looks better.
01:11:608 (4,5,6) - Same as the last one.

Hard:

Good job!

Normal:

Fine, I guess.

Easy:

Come up with patterns that do *not* have hit objects start or end on blue ticks (slider repeats on blue ticks are fine, though).

This pattern is really awkward for a newbie. Since the song itself is slow but the beat itself is fast you can use red ticks to your advantage. Don't overuse them, but use theme when it'll make a more intuitive pattern than these awkward blue ticks.

You can also apply this to Normal to make it better/funner, but it isn't needed.

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Good job, definitely rankable, though improving Easy would be nice.
Topic Starter
Vikon
Thx Ekaru!

Ekaru wrote:

Special:

01:17:196 (3) - Move from where it currently is [under the (1)]. Will make it much easier to read. :) but it is a good way to make them good-looking ( I think)
01:09:255 (1,2,3) - Try stacking the sliders, I think it looks better. fixed
01:11:608 (4,5,6) - Same as the last one. fixed

Hard:

Good job! thx~ :)

Normal:

Fine, I guess.

Easy:

Come up with patterns that do *not* have hit objects start or end on blue ticks (slider repeats on blue ticks are fine, though).
no objects start on blue ticks now, only sliders end on blue ticks

This pattern is really awkward for a newbie. Since the song itself is slow but the beat itself is fast you can use red ticks to your advantage. Don't overuse them, but use theme when it'll make a more intuitive pattern than these awkward blue ticks.

You can also apply this to Normal to make it better/funner, but it isn't needed.

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Good job, definitely rankable, though improving Easy would be nice.
O_O-long
:)
kodomonoyume
nice song~

star~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
SP超过20了...
看了下,可以说 fine~
Saturio
Cyril Scarlet
Nice map ~ Nice song XD

Sharon's

01:01:765 (6,7) - Move left 1 grid Lv 3 ?
01:29:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe move up 1 grid lv 3 for beautyful pile up with next part ? :3


ps. maybe you need to add Guest name in TAG :3
deepsea
Normal
Overall its nothing wrong but I pesonally dont like too many notes on 1/4 for normal difficulty, at least in fward half of a song. This is my personal opinon though.

Special
00:31:32(5)(1) Hard to read imo.

Overall its great first work so have a star.
DJPop
BPM: 204.000


~Easy~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.

~Normal~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.
00:12:794 (1) - remove new combo

~Hard~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.

~Special~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.
01:51:324 (13) - new combo


Wrong BPM, no star.
Topic Starter
Vikon
Thx S i R i R u, deepsea, DjPop, and other Star-giver!

S i R i R u wrote:

Nice map ~ Nice song XD

Sharon's waiting to ask Saturio
01:01:765 (6,7) - Move left 1 grid Lv 3 ?
01:29:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe move up 1 grid lv 3 for beautyful pile up with next part ? :3


ps. maybe you need to add Guest name in TAG :3 fixed

deepsea wrote:

Normal
Overall its nothing wrong but I pesonally dont like too many notes on 1/4 for normal difficulty, at least in fward half of a song. This is my personal opinon though.

Special
00:31:32(5)(1) Hard to read imo. repeated (5) one more time, is it better now?

Overall its great first work so have a star.

DJPop wrote:

BPM: 204.000
I was shocked when I see the BPM was wrong :o . Personally, I think 102 is fine,those slider in 204 are too fast, so, if 102 doesn't cause serious problems, could I keep it?


~Easy~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.

~Normal~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.
00:12:794 (1) - remove new combo fixed

~Hard~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.

~Special~
I don't like soft-hitclap in this map.
01:51:324 (13) - new combo fixed


Wrong BPM, no star.
Saturio
fixed....
Hey DJPop, mine is bpm204...:)
Fixed diff

Download: Rita - It's Just Farewell (Vikon) [Sharon's].osu
dvorak_old
star

I know her at CC and one of my fav voice actress.
DJPop

Vikon wrote:

DJPop wrote:

BPM: 204.000
I was shocked when I see the BPM was wrong :o . Personally, I think 102 is fine,those slider in 204 are too fast, so, if 102 doesn't cause serious problems, could I keep it?
Very easy to fix, just set BPM to 204 and reduce a half of slider velocity.

Saturio wrote:

fixed....
Hey DJPop, mine is bpm204...:)
lol
Topic Starter
Vikon
Thx for DjPop! I don't know such a ratio exists between slider velocity and BPM before :?
and for the clap, In Normal, Hard, and Special, I don't want to use finish and soft-whistle so many times, but I want a sound that can excite others and feel fresh. Still, I can't find The sound yet, so I used clap (which can fresh others mind) instead.
SamiPale
为什么名字变回大写呢?wiki上写的名字我记得是全小写的
al2e10
AL2e Mod 你想mod死我咩 =3=

[Special]
- HIT sound
01:27:500 (11) - Change to wistle
01:45:735 (10,Start) - Add finish
01:46:324 (11) - Change to wistle

[Hard]
- HIT sound
00:05:735 (3,4) - Add clap
01:11:177 (2,4) - Remove clap
01:23:382 (2,3) - Add clap
01:27:500 (9) - Add wistle
01:45:735 (5) - Finish

[ALL]
Better a lot ^^
Give you a STAR !!

聲音不錯呀~
hard可以做得唔好咁緊縛(唔明呀? XD
做得放d就好好多, 唔洗理個條 hard-=4.5 star 的roles ~
Topic Starter
Vikon

samipale wrote:

为什么名字变回大写呢?wiki上写的名字我记得是全小写的
我也看到歌名是小寫的,但整體上變大寫較整齊,所以實施了

al2e10 wrote:

AL2e Mod 你想mod死我咩 =3= 搵你mod果陣,只有3個難度的(速逃...)
而chirs同sharon ge難度因為無乜問題,所以好可憐 : sharon那個已經被人skip左幾次,chris果個更加無被人mod過 XD,BPM升高一倍後,我都未通知方佢添....而家D taiko notes快到睇都睇唔清-_-"


[Special] all accepted
- HIT sound
01:27:500 (11) - Change to wistle
01:45:735 (10,Start) - Add finish
01:46:324 (11) - Change to wistle

[Hard] accepted except the clap
- HIT sound
00:05:735 (3,4) - Add clap
01:11:177 (2,4) - Remove clap
01:23:382 (2,3) - Add clap
01:27:500 (9) - Add wistle
01:45:735 (5) - Finish

[ALL]
Better a lot ^^
Give you a STAR !!

聲音不錯呀~ thx~ :)
hard可以做得唔好咁緊縛(唔明呀? XD 我是沙包,程度只足夠我玩而家ge Hard,再升我就要fail了 (逃
做得放d就好好多, 唔洗理個條 hard-=4.5 star 的roles ~
Gens
  1. Rhm. There's something in the mp3 at 02:11:925 that bothers me... it's like a sudden involuntary volume change right there. Maybe change the mp3? :(
  2. The difficulty spread is bothering me a little bit... 3 [ I ]'s. If only you could nerf a bit more the jumps in [Hard] I will be happy. I won't force you though. I don't know if Taiko difficulties are an exception to this still...
  3. Maybe lower the OD on Normal? I guess I'm too used to see slow OD's on normal difficulties. Your choice.
  4. I just noticed the Countdown is only enabled on [Normal]. Is that intentional?
  5. The timing sections in Sharon's at 01:17:500 are a bit misaligned. Can you fix that?
  6. Rokodo always says that Taiko difficulties must have 1.4 as slider velocity, though I personally don't know why.
Everything else is fine. :)
Topic Starter
Vikon

Gens wrote:

  1. Rhm. There's something in the mp3 at 02:11:925 that bothers me... it's like a sudden involuntary volume change right there. Maybe change the mp3? :( I know there is a problem, and asking my friend to help..
  2. The difficulty spread is bothering me a little bit... 3 [ I ]'s. If only you could nerf a bit more the jumps in [Hard] I will be happy. I won't force you though. I don't know if Taiko difficulties are an exception to this still... 3 [I] are not good-looking, but actually [Hard[ is really a Hard, but not insane, after playing, and you will feel that. (I had already decrease the distance of jump in [Hard], form 2.0X to 1.8x.)
  3. Maybe lower the OD on Normal? I guess I'm too used to see slow OD's on normal difficulties. Your choice. ok~
  4. I just noticed the Countdown is only enabled on [Normal]. Is that intentional? my carelessness!
  5. The timing sections in Sharon's at 01:17:500 are a bit misaligned. Can you fix that?
  6. Rokodo always says that Taiko difficulties must have 1.4 as slider velocity, though I personally don't know why.
Everything else is fine. :) THX for modding!
MMzz
Taiko Mod:

Few things, 2.20 Slider velocity is a big nono >_>
1.6 for authentic scoll, or 1.4

The audio should be at 100 or at least 80-90 The whole song, I can't hear the hitsounds.
Audio at 75% the whole song is perfect. imo

I love your mapping style btw <3

That is all. Star~
deepsea
the last thing:
[Sharon's]
This is a really well made diff but ahhh the bright color with long period of kiai hurt my eyes. It's not a big problem though and yes my eyes are bad.

Decide this and MittenMasterzz's mod then contact me again.
Breeze
音效用得不错,就是感觉slider拉得不够漂亮

[Easy]
  1. 01:35:294 - 这之后不插入break?
  2. 01:37:500 (x) - 这里用KIAI做个喷泉效果?
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:500 (3) - New combo好认些
star
wmfchris

MittenMasterzz wrote:

Taiko Mod:

Few things, 2.20 Slider velocity is a big nono >_>
1.6 for authentic scoll, or 1.4

The audio should be at 100 or at least 80-90 The whole song, I can't hear the hitsounds.
Audio at 75% the whole song is perfect. imo

I love your mapping style btw <3

That is all. Star~
1)I'm not sure what's the timing/SV going on as it is 1.6 originally
maybe BPM changed and snapped away?
I'll check this~
2)Thanks, but my style is considered as osu-taiko and I'm a bit away from that...
MMzz

wmfchris wrote:

MittenMasterzz wrote:

Taiko Mod:

Few things, 2.20 Slider velocity is a big nono >_>
1.6 for authentic scoll, or 1.4

The audio should be at 100 or at least 80-90 The whole song, I can't hear the hitsounds.
Audio at 75% the whole song is perfect. imo

I love your mapping style btw <3

That is all. Star~
1)I'm not sure what's the timing/SV going on as it is 1.6 originally
maybe BPM changed and snapped away?
I'll check this~
2)Thanks, but my style is considered as osu-taiko and I'm a bit away from that...
Well to my standerd comparison, 1.6 is authentic speed, just since osu!'s taiko scroll is shorter than the original games, it's faster. So 1.4 is as close as we can get.
"maybe BPM changed and snapped away?"
That could work.
wmfchris
about the SV <- of coz you're right, 1.4
I'm sure that no one can play that if 2.2 (except cheats and... youngdow?!?)

About hitsound %: I will ask Vikon tomorrow as he has gone to sleep ><
Topic Starter
Vikon
經過了一天,要改的都改好了(累...)
THX ALL MODDERS!!
NatsumeRin
add wmfchris to tags.[小声]
deepsea
O_o
MMzz

wmfchris wrote:

about the SV <- of coz you're right, 1.4
I'm sure that no one can play that if 2.2 (except cheats and... youngdow?!?)

About hitsound %: I will ask Vikon tomorrow as he has gone to sleep ><
I only had 2or 3 misses with the 2.2 it's not hard, just annoying x3. (well for me it's easy, youngdow would kill it tho xD)
Lunah_old
Nice bg :oops: <3

General
hard (4.7 stars, 291 notes), Hard for osu's system is a Insane, go down to 4,5 and you have another 2 insane, must fix i think

Easy
01:23:382 (4) - hitsound finish
01:28:088 (4) - hitsound finish
Rukario
I am realllly sorry for the late mod. I was super busy.

Easy:
Fine

Normal:
00:29:559 - (1,2,3,4) In the spoilerbox is a bit different spacing than in yours which I think looks better.
Otherwise fine.

Hard:
00:04:853 - (1) One tick to the left.
Otherwise fine.

Will not mod Taiko like I said in my rules.

Special:
Fine.

Sharon's:
Everything fine,
except the really lng Kiai time. You might wanna reduce it a bit I mean this kiai time goes on for really long.
I can see the logic of putting kiai time on the chorus but the chorus in this case is a tad too long to be full with kiai time. I mean it's more than 1/4 of the song.

Really cool map and song. Star~
Topic Starter
Vikon
As the map was bubbled now, I don't want to make any unnecessary changes, sorry :?

@loweH

according to Official Ranking Submission Criteria ( viewtopic.php?f=6&t=439 )
" A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). "
many players told me that after they played, they can feel that this is a [Hard], not a [insane], so I think it's fine.

@Rukarioman

[Normal] about the spacing, they are fine, all notes are using 1.0x
[Sharon's] (the kiai time have been reduced for 10sec after I modded, so I think she won't reduce it anymore, may be such a long kiai time can be seen as her own style 8-) ?
masuo_old
star~ =ω=
Saturio
can be seen as her own style 8-) ?
hey, what do you mean Vikon?
Topic Starter
Vikon
XD
你Kiai time落果d位都算重要,所以我都無再反對,只係一開auto-mod 就會被發覺,因此有需要講下
其實都冇乜大問題,你別想太多了~ 8-)
Mafiamaster
[Easy, Normal, Hard]
Kiai Time (01:37:794) - Shouldn't this start at 01:37:500?

Edit: Bubbled
[KEKE]
star.....嘛,纯粹打酱油,我的水平找不出有意义的问题
ps:好听
owl13
STAR 8-)
MaxwellDemon
Okay, generally... I don't find any problems with this map and I am ready to rank this. However, I want to know why are the kiai times only on for the fountain? For the taiko map, I personally think the kiai time should definitely be on for the entire chorus, since it feels better that way.

Anyway, let me know about those kiai times, I suggest that the kiai should be on through the chorus for each difficulty, but that's your preferences. Nothing worth popping the bubble over though. :3

EDIT: Vikon told me that the flashy colors are too sharp (when kiai is active) for his taste, so he generally left it off. Done and done. Ranked. XD

And to anyone questioning the difficulty spread, it plays out more like E N H H/I I I instead of E N I I I I as reported in the listings.
SamiPale
Pop? I think Anime/Video game is more right

congrat~
tsuka
grats ~ 8-)
Topic Starter
Vikon
Thx my friends and all modders!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

終於有一個ranked的map了,~~!!
感動中 (淚奔~
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