Hi_Hello wrote:

M4M~~~

GENERAL
Suggestion: Move the viewing point here 01:23:927 because this part is the most recognized. - Fixed!

Cosmic Mind
Hi!

01:17:206 (1) - move it/ the stream a bit to the left because it's too hard to catch. make 00:17:124 (7) hdash. - Fixed!
01:23:927 (1,2) - fix these unheard hitsounds. - They are supposed to be like that!
02:28:025 (5) - move closer to 02:27:861 (4). hard to catch (it's possible but low-end devices (like mine) cant catch this) have mercy. lol - Wont change this. It fits the map IMO.
02:41:468 (2) - move a bit to the left (make 02:41:304 (1) hdash). - Moved. But wont make (1) a HDash!
02:41:623 (3) - x:400 -make it closer to 02:41:793 (4)- - Fixed!
02:57:073 (1) - make it closer to 02:56:878 (6) - Wont change! I like it as it is!
03:51:796 (4) - lessen those hdash back and forth patterns. move (4) closer to 03:51:960 (5). But make sure 03:51:632 (3) is still on hdash. - Wont change this, as it fits the map quiet well!
03:56:058 (1) - combo breaker!!! fix this by clicking ctrl+h - Fixed!
05:05:566 to 05:26:550 - make sure the patterns here are possible. many users will fail here. - I have no problem FC'ing this part at all. Its just timing consistent! And its meant to be hard here. Wont change!


That's all!
Overall: Nice map! Streams are well placed and good hitsounding skills. fun to play!

Good Luck with your map!

Withered Lotus wrote:

Modderino

00:23:435 (8) - 00:24:911 (1) - 00:26:058 (8) - 00:27:533 (1) - 00:28:681 (8) - I feel there should maybe be a clap at these points for the higher notes in the music. - Fixed!
00:32:779 - Doesn't seem to be any change on this green line from the previous 1 so don't need it. - Fixed!
00:33:927 (7,8,1) - I think this small jump is here for the high note in the song (like at 00:35:320 (8,1,2) - ) but it is delayed. Suggest moving 00:33:927 (7,8) - to the next stream so that it is in sync. - Fixed!
00:36:550 (7,8,1) - ^ - Fixed!
00:39:173 (7,8,1) - ^ - Fixed!
00:33:927 (7) - Whistle - Fixed!
00:36:550 (7) - ^ - Fixed!
00:39:173 (7) - ^ - Fixed!
00:47:943 (6,7,3,4,5,6,7) - prehaps you could add a bit more spacing here? - Fixed!
00:51:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ - Fixed!
02:49:173 - Again, doesn't seem to be any change on this green line from the previous 1 so don't need it. - Fixed!
04:55:074 - ^ - Fixed!
05:31:796 (1) - prehaps a finish here like at the start of the song? - Fixed!
I noticed the BG you use is a very odd resoution 1234 x 768. This isn't a typical 4:3 or 16:9 format, though it isn't prohibited, it's better to use an image with 1 of these formats. - Where to find? D:
The map genre isn't specified, I suppose it would be Video game (Japanesse) (totally not copying metadata from the ranked version *COUGH*) - I cant set this?

Sorry for the short mod but I honestly can't find anything else to say (I tried, I really did QAQ!) it's just such a good map! Good luck with approval and take my stars! - Thank you very much!

alienflybot wrote:

Mod Requested by Razor Sharp (I will tell you the map for M4M later)

[ General]

• 
  Background Image

1. Change the resolution to 1366x768. 1234x768 is not in a 4:3 ratio which is not meeting the ranking criteria. - I need help finding image D:
   
   Tags
2. You might want to add the tags in *this mapset as it is ranked. Perhaps adding Aqua Trytone, Hotaru, Kanshou no Matenrou -Fixed!

[ Cosmic Mind]

• 
  Gameplay

1. 00:21:632 (1) - Even though this is accepted in the ranked version (HW one), I think this spinner should be longer instead because ranking criteria of Standard is different from CtB one. I recommend starting the spinner at 00:20:812 or 00:20:976 (just at your own preference). - Fixed!
2. 00:29:665 (3,4) - Kind of missing a HDash here, as the previous 2 patterns have it there. - Fixed!
3. 00:43:189 (5,1) - I would prefer a HDash here, indicating a stanza change and it is swaggily cool nice after the long-combo stream. - Fixed!
4. 01:02:943 (6) - Maybe a NC works well here? - Fixed!
5. 01:22:288 (7,8,1) - This part is opposing the flow IMO. Make something like *this? - Fixed!
6. 01:22:943 (1,1,1) - Fix this part if you made the changes on previous mod. - Fixed!
7. 02:17:042 (1) - Actually the spinner is way too short... Change it to a 1/8 stream or an easy 4/3 slider. - Think its ok now!
8. 02:20:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well this part feels like it is overmapped because the song stanza hasn't change yet. I think you should map this part like the one after spinner with 1/2 patterns. - Fixed!
9. 02:26:714 (4,1) - HDash? Otherwise it feels so weird that I will see it a bad flow. - Should be ok now!
10. 02:56:058 (2,3) - ^ - Should be ok now!
11. 03:02:779 (2,3) - Add HDash, maybe Ctrl+G'ing it. - Fixed!
12. 03:09:337 (4,1) - Add HDash. - Fixed!
13. 03:30:320 (1) - I think you should replace this with a 1/2 slider instead to make the whole pattern complete. Timeline: *Click. - Fixed!
14. 03:40:976 (1) - Same as 02:17:042 (1) . - Fixed!
15. 03:44:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 02:20:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) . - Fixed!
16. 03:50:648 (4,1) - Same again. - Fixed!
17. 05:04:911 (1) - Ctrl+G it for an easier jump to (2). - Fixed!
18. 05:21:632 (2,3) - Add HDash, it is too hard and inconsistent with the previous patterns. - Fixed!
19. 05:26:714 (1,1) - You are gonna make people rage when they got spin-trapped. I recommend moving 05:31:796 (1) to the middle or just Ctrl+G the whole pattern. - Fixed!
    
    Hitsounds
20. 01:36:714 (4) - Don't add clap on blue ticks. Silent the note instead by using audio inherited section. - Fixed!
21. 04:09:828 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed!
22. 04:56:058 (4) - ^ - Fixed!
    
    General Comments
23. The patterns are quite similar and it seems that you copy pasta pasted the patterns in first part to the second part. You should change a little bit if you copy pasted the patterns. - Changed!
24. The diff seems too easy because the stream patterns are quite similar. Then it is time for you to brainstorm to have more creative jumps / streams! - Changed!
25. Hitsounds are nice! - Thanks!

Good luck ranking the mapset!
-AFB

Kyuare wrote:

Cosmic minD

00:28:845 (1) - x:256 - Fixed!
00:29:665 (3,4) - jump unjustified, I suggest to reduce the distance - Wont change, prefer it as it is!
00:45:402 (7,8) - keep up the flow here, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006358 - I ctrl+g the (8) instead, and moved a little bit to the right.
00:46:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - not enough, more space https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006372 - Fixed!
00:58:681 (9) - This slider is too short, increase the velocity of 1,5 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004525 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004529 - I like this as it is now.
01:04:255 (1) - x: 224 - ^
00:53:681 (9) - x: 48 the jump must be between the blue and white tic - Fixed!
00:54:091 (2) - x: 256 jump - I like this as it is now.
01:15:402 (3) - x 256 - Fixed!
01:16:550 (2) - x 288 - Fixed!
01:16:714 (3) - x 144 - Fixed!
01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - for streams like this, start by placing a gap of 1 circle then you reduce the distance gradually like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006413 - Fixed!
01:22:943 (1,1) - it shouldn't have jumps here '^' - Fixed!
01:44:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same for 01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006459 - Fixed!
01:45:566 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006464 - Fixed!
04:01:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I strongly advise you to do as 01:44:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006499 - Fixed!

If you apply these suggestions in your map, the stars will fall enormously
I let you improve based on changes you make, I would check a 2nd time later
Good map, good luck ! - Thanks!

Tokufi wrote:

Hi hi~! First time modding ;w;

Tokufi's Hitsound Mods

Cosmic Mind

00:30:156 (1) - Whistle - Fixed!
00:31:304 (6) - ^ - Fixed!
00:34:255 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
00:36:878 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
00:39:501 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
01:02:861 (5) - Remove Whistle - Fixed!
01:38:025 (3) - Add clap - Fixed!
01:38:189 (4) - ^ - Fixed!
01:39:501 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
01:40:812 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
01:42:288 (1) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
01:45:894 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
01:46:058 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
01:57:042 (2) - Remove whistle - I like this whistle ;w;
01:57:697 (3) - Remove clap - Wont fit ;w;
01:58:025 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
01:59:665 (2) - Remove whistle - Wont fit ;w;
01:59:993 (3) - Remove clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:00:648 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:02:943 (3) - Remove whistle - Wont fit ;w;
02:02:288 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:03:271 (1) - Remove clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:04:911 (2) - Remove whistle - Wont fit ;w;
02:05:238 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:26:714 (4) - Add finish - Wont fit ;w;
02:32:124 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Added clap, but not remove!
02:32:615 (2) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:33:435 (1) - Same as previous 2 - Wont fit ;w;
02:33:927 (2) -
02:34:747 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:35:238 (2) -
02:36:058 (1) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:36:222 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:36:550 (4) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:37:370 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:03:435 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
03:04:255 (3) - ^ On both ends - Added on start!
03:04:747 (4) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:24:911 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:25:074 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:25:730 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:30:894 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:30:976 (5) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:31:058 (7) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:50:648 (4) - Add finish - Wont fit ;w;
03:58:681 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
03:59:992 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:34:091 (1) - Add finish - Fixed!
04:38:354 (2) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
04:38:517 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:39:173 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:40:485 (5) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:40:649 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
04:58:845 (1) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
04:59:500 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
05:00:156 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
05:10:812 (1) - Add finish - Wont fit ;w;
05:21:304 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;

GL with ranking ^^ There is probably more hitsounds to fix but i cant find all ;w; *hides*

1. Could add Touhou, Undefined Fantastic Object, boss, theme to tags
2. Where is my credit for providing you with the diff name? *runs*

JBHyperion wrote:

Finally getting around to this, so yeah: mod request by PM. Just gonna look at metadata, patterns and hitsounds since this is beyond my ability to playtest and I'd hate to give you bad suggestions.

General Comments:

1. Could add Touhou, Undefined Fantastic Object, boss, theme to tags - Fixed!
2. Where is my credit for providing you with the diff name? *runs* - Thanks again cx

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Cosmic Mind

01:04:091 - There's a weak guitar note here, maybe make 01:03:927 (2) a 1/2 slider? - Fixed!

01:56:714 - I'd make some of the single fruits in this calm section into 1/2 sliders for variety. The ones I'd go for are 01:57:042 (2) - 01:58:353 (2,3) - 01:59:665 (2) - 02:00:976 (2,3) - 02:02:288 (2) - 02:03:599 (2,3) - and 02:04:911 (2) - since these white tick notes all have piano sounds on the following red tick 1/2 further forward - I like the rythm i made here.. I want to keep it as it is for now. Will change if other modders complain!

02:15:074 (2) - NC here and remove from 02:14:747 (1) for the strong vocal note on the downbeat - Fixed!

02:22:779 - I'd add a circle here for the snare drum and place it close to the tail of 02:22:452 (6) - this will create a Hdash 02:22:943 (1) - which I feel is justified considering the prominent vocal note and your use of a finish hitsound - Fixed!

02:56:878 (6,1) - I'd combine these into a 1/1 slider, since the saxophone sound 02:56:878 (6) is long and more prominent than the drums that begin at 02:57:042 (1) - I would preffer not to change this :/ I really like it.

03:08:845 (1,2,3,4) - Using finish repeatedly is a bit overbearing for me. I'd remove it from (2,4) - Fixed!

03:47:452 (1) - Remove NC here and put on the next note 03:47:533 (2) instead (white tick) - Fixed!

05:26:550 (6) - If we're being really nitpicky, this should also be NC for the downbeat, and since there's a finish, make a Hdash between 05:26:386 (5,6) - Fixed!

This is all from me. Give me another shout if you need anything else and best of luck getting this approved! (: - Thanks!
A wild star appeared! o_O

murutattack wrote:

Someone pull me ow >_<
Btw jk, mod request

Cosmic Mind

Timing : Recheck
There`s Unsnapped Circles/Sliders

SPOILER

Maybe you use 1/8, since the map set is 1/4 default.

Background Image:
I think the MB Files is too big for 1 song, download this one and replace to current now, its 336kb instead of 2.4mb
http://puu.sh/hhneH/d7cf65cba6.jpg

Since i`m rarely modding more than 5 star map, excuse me if something that isn`t good lol.

00:30:156 - Add Clap
00:31:304 - Same ^ - All fixed to this point.
01:22:943 and 01:23:271 - Try make it separate? - I would preffer to keep it as it is.

SPOILER

05:36:386 - Not sure this is ok or not, since this is too short. - It is ok.

Great map
Just small issues like Filesize and Timing, good luck ranking

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey Razor babe <3
Here for you mod request finally ;w;
I don't know how well i will be on this because it's a bit fast for me but i will try my best ;w;

Cosmic Mind

00:26:058 (1) - just a little suggestion but for stopping the repetition that goes on at the start add sliders like this here instead. Plus the glide fits nice and smoothly :3 - Fixed!


00:43:271 (1) - add a finish to the start - Fixed!
00:49:501 (8) - change to this at it also can fit the vocals too then - Wont change, as there is a note in the background here ;_;


00:51:140 (1) - add finish to the start since it's cool on the drum audio HS's - Fixed!
01:43:272 (4) - add triplet notes instead. it's sounds much better with music and vocals - Fixed!


01:51:796 (2,3) - swap these 2 over on the timeline and reposition. now (3) will sound better with the piano - Fixed!
02:26:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this sounds like a 1/8 section instead. Either add the notes in or create a quick reverse - Fixed!


02:49:255 - i feel there should be a note here for it to blast back into the music again >w< - I dont here note here D:
03:09:501 (1,2) - i think you should get rid of (2) and extend (1) to the white tick. This gives a good emphasis to blast off again x3 (and maybe make 1.00 sv :3?) - But i like this as it is ;_; Wont change for now!
04:23:599 - turn this timing points audio down lower to something like 25%. it's a bit loud for this quiet moment - Fixed!
04:49:173 (7) - bit of a silly suggestion but maybe have this part like this cx? i know it looks different to the rest but think of the emphasis!! x3 - I prefer this as it is now ;_;


05:31:796 - turn timing point audio down to 15% - Fixed!
05:37:042 - Honestly i think you need a different ending finish HS instead. Sounds a bit weird for the grand finish using the same one ;w; - I like this one ;_; But if i find better i will change!

Hope this helped a bit >w<
Such a great map :O
Best of luck buddy :3

afk98 wrote:

Thx for m4m - Will do yours when i got time!

Cosmic Mind

SPOILER

00:24:911 (1,2) - Replace these hit circles with a 1/2 slider, I think it first the song better? (Also the slider after that) - I like this as it is. Wont change for now.
00:36:550 (7) - New combo here instead of at 00:36:714 (1)? (Yeah, I see the logic of 8) - Wont change. Its better at the 8.
00:42:288 (1) - Possibly increase the volume 5%-15% more here? - No. The sliders will be even more annoying to here then Dx
01:23:927 (1,2) - Make these sliders louder to support the singer? - It is silenced to make the next part more exiting, in a way kinda. Wont change.
01:55:894 (2,1) - Not sure if you just want to make this a single slider. - There is a piano sound here: 01:55:730 (1) doe, and the Sound the slider (2) is following starts at (2). Wont change!
04:22:288 (1) - Consider shortening this slider to the white tick before? - This is made as a snap jump for a reason. It follows the pattern of the other snap jumps. Wont change!

I'm sorry I didn't have a lot of comments: i can go through it again if you want-- it's really, really good.

osu_gangster wrote:

first ctb mod I've done > w<)

[Cosmic Mind]
00:20:812 (1) - would be better if spinner started at 00:19:665 (also, make the spinner's volume lower) - Fixed!
01:19:337 (1,2,3,4) - change to this? ↓ - Fixed!

SPOILER

04:01:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing here is kinda crazy x .x) Consider reducing the spacing? - I wont change it. As i like it this way.

It's not much, so I'll also give a star~ - Thanks!

Feerum wrote:

I.. i cant beleave!
I play CtB for a little bit more then a Week.. and found this. I love this song so much (I Mapped this in Mania)
Cant wait to be good enough to pass this ^_^
I cant Mod CtB but i wish you so many luck to get this Ranked!
I hope my Stars can help you

BennyBananas wrote:

Modding because Razor told me weeks ago to mod but never got to do it! o.o (at least it feels like weeks ago xD)

mod .-.

So my mod is basically just looking through your map making sure you use the same distance everywhere because I'm a distance-nazi x_x Therefore all "Move to blahblah" is just making sure you use the same distance everywhere >.<

00:43:763 (3,4,5,6,7) - Please make streams like this a little more curved, I think it gives a better flow. Move (7) to x400 and (5) to x464. - Fixed!
00:45:238 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move (5) to x16 and (3) and (7) to x80 - Fixed!
00:45:812 (9) - I find this extremely hard to hit, either make it hyper or put it closer. Moving 00:45:566 (8) - to 240 looks nice. - Fixed!
00:46:550 (5) - Move to x368 - Fixed!
00:47:697 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move (3) and (7) to x160 and (5) to x224 - Fixed!
00:48:845 (2) - Move to x208 - Nah, i dont think so.
00:51:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move (4) to x208 and (2) and (6) to x272 - Fixed!
00:52:370 (8) - Move to x304 - Fixed!
00:55:730 (5) - Move to x469 - Think you meant x496? If so, fixed!
00:55:566 (3,7) - Move to x432 - Fixed!
04:23:599 - 04:33:107 - This part is pretty much the same as above. Spot the same things and fix it ^^ - Idk how to find ;w;

01:35:484 (6) - Move to x368 - Fixed!

Just making the streams curved .-.
02:23:107 (3) - x400 - Fixed!
02:23:517 (1) - x368 - Fixed!
02:23:681 (3) - x416 - Fixed!
02:24:173 (9) - x64 - Fixed!
02:24:829 (8) - x288 - Fixed!
02:25:074 (3) - 128 - Fixed!
02:25:238 (5) - x128 - Fixed!
02:25:320 (6) - x160 - Fixed!
02:25:402 (7) - x192 - Fixed!

02:26:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try making it somewhat like this? - No, wont change this for now ;;
04:33:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same goes for this stream, try to make it just slightly curved, not much just a littleeeee. - I dont want this part curved ;w;
04:43:271 - 04:44:542 - ^ - Fixed for the 2 first!

Hope this helps and good luck!

Cameragod wrote:

These parts here needs some fine tunement to make it look nicer.

01:17:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - - Seems good for me?
01:16:550 (1,1,2,3,4) - - ^
01:17:288 (5,6,7,8,9,5,6) - - ^
01:19:091 (2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - - Fixed!

JBHyperion wrote:

Here's a recheck by Razor's request - since this either gonna be really picky or somewhat experimental, I won't be offended if you don't take any of these (: - \o/

Cosmic Mind:

01:22:943 (1,1) - Maybe you could space these two repeat sliders slightly? The drum roll is building intensity throughout 01:22:615 (1,1,1,1) so maybe increase the spacing between successive stacks to compliment this? E.g. moving left with stacks at x:512, x:432 (spacing 80), x:302 (spacing 130) and x:122 (spacing 180) and then 01:23:927 (1) can stay where it is with minimal change in jump size - I do preffer this as it is, so wont change it for now!

01:56:878 - I like the way the volume slowly builds up from this point, but personally I feel that the volume is too high (especially on the snare) by the time you get to 02:04:419 - maybe try something like 20/22/25/28 % volume in these sections? - Fixed!

02:23:435 (7,1) - Since this stream is constructed as 1/4 notes, I feel it makes more sense to keep them in sections of 8. Here you have one of 7 and one of 9, which makes the jump here feel awkward in that you think it should come 1/4 later than it does. I'd move 02:23:517 (1) on to the end of the first stream (may need to reduce the spacing of 02:23:189 (4,5,6,7) to avoid an unreasonably large jump back to 02:23:599 (2) -) and then swap the NC on these two. Basically something like this: - Fixed!

SPOILER

Notice that I also moved 02:24:091 (7,8) onto the end of this stream, as I feel moving this jump to 02:24:173 (8,1) makes more sense for the reasons stated above. However, since there's a 1/2 difference here rather than a 1/4, it's more noticeable, and you may want to keep it - Fixed!

03:47:369 (7,8,1) - Same here, may want to make the jump between (8,1) rather than (7,8) and again at 03:47:943 (6,7,8) - Fixed!

04:20:976 (1,1,1,1) - Same as at 01:22:615 (1,1,1,1) -, you're reaching the climax of an intense piece of the music and are about to enter a calmer section, so maybe space these stacks slightly more to complement this? (Though not as much as 01:22:615 (1,1,1,1) since the following section is stronger here than what followed that section) - I preffer this as it is!

Hope this helped (or at least wasn't completely useless lol) - best of luck! (:

Krfawy wrote:

We changed a whistle hitsound to *THIS*

#BUBBLED

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Recheck.

Cosmic Mind

00:29:829 (4) - Move this to x:448. Forcing a player to the edge of the screen isn't recommended, and this jump is currently quite big from 3 anyway. - Fixed!
00:36:550 (7,8,1) - Hyper jump at 7 for the strong piano sound. Move 7 to x:336, 8 to x:368, and 1 to x:400. - Want to keep this as it is, since im following that sound thingy..
00:40:648 (1) - This jump is too difficult to make, as you have to stop as you reach this, or you overshoot. What I would do is remove 2 of the repeats, move it to 00:40:730 - , add two circles in place of where the first two slider ends were, placing the first one at 176, second one at x:144, Ctrl+H the slider and move it to x:112. This feels a lot more comfortable to play, to me. - This is ok as it is. Be carefull on this.
00:44:255 (8) - Hyper does not fit to or from this, it's a very weak sound going to a sound very similar. Move this to x:256, fits the song better. - Fixed!
00:45:074 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This section feels overmapped to me in terms of patterns, there shouldn't be any hypers here, this section is weak. Click 00:45:074 (3,4,5,6,7) - and drag back to x:128. Then ctrl+H 8, for an interesting pattern, and move it to x:304. Then move 9 to x:336, and 1 to x:416. This gets rid of all those unnecessary hypers quite well, whilst also creating a fun pattern. - It is ok.
00:46:714 (7,8,9) - Antiflow hyper here feels weird to me, put 7 on x:368, 8 on x:144, and 9 on x:48. - I wont change this. I preffer it as it is.
00:47:206 (1) - What, why such a strong snap hyper? Move to x:224, still hypers, but is a lot weaker. Then move 00:47:533 (2) - to x:128, maintains difficulty whilst avoiding a timing jump, and feels nice to play. - Fixed!
00:49:747 (9) - I like how this flows if you move it to x:240, on top if the slider, and it also gets rid of the snap hyper, whilst keeping a normal hyper. - Fixed!
00:51:140 (1) - Again, this hyper feels too strong. Move this slider to x:320. I also like how if you do this there's a slight breathing space before the stream. - I wont change this. Like it as it is.
00:52:452 (1) - ^, Move to x:160. - ^
00:54:255 (3,4,5,6,7) - Having a HDash from 2 to 3 feels strange to me, there's not much sound at this place, just a light drum beat. Drag this stream to x:352. - ^
00:55:074 (1) - Move this to x:144, this hyper doesn't really fit the song. - I think it fits.
00:55:566 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+H this stream and move it to x:80, this hyper doesn't fit, this drum beat is weak, then Ctrl+H 00:56:058 (8) - and move it to x:320, to avoid a slider in the opposite direction after a jump. - ^
00:56:386 (1) - This is bad, a slider in the opposite direction after such a strong snap jump. Ctrl+H and move it to x:160, this flow feels a lot better. - This is completely fine.
00:56:878 (3,4,5,6,7) - Drag this stream to x:368 to get rid of the hyper, and then ctrl+H 8 and move it to x:80. - I want to keep this as it is.
00:57:697 (1) - Move this to x:240, this snap hyper is too strong right now. - It is fine.
00:58:025 (2) - Move this to x:208, this hyper doesn't suit the music, the beat is weak (except on 2, but your hyper is to 3). - Made hyper to 2.
01:00:976 (1) - Similar problem to with 00:40:648 (1) - , so similar solution. Remove 2 of the repeats, move the slider forward to 01:01:058 - , add 2 circles where the repeats were, first one on x:160, 2nd on x:128, and then ctrl+H the slider and move it to x:144. - It is ok.
01:01:468 (1,2,3,4) - Hypers on these notes feel weird to me, this isn't really strong enough part to induce hypers. Move 2 to x:224 and 4 to x:240, this creates quite an interesting pattern which is fun. - I think it fits good. WOnt change!
01:06:386 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+H this section, a hyper to 4 doesn't fit, and then ctrl+H 1 and move it to x:48 to keep a hyper to this. - Fixed!
01:07:206 (2) - Ctrl+H this too, and move it to x:304, for a more fun pattern, and to get rid of the unnecessary hyper to 3. - ^
01:08:517 (2) - Ctrl+H and move to x:320 for an interesting pattern, and then move 3 to x:288. This gets rid of a few unnecessary hypers as well as making a fun pattern. - ^
01:10:484 (5) - Move this to x:448 to avoid a timing jump. - ^
01:11:632 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+g this, to avoid a weird jump (The sound here is very minimalistic, a jump like this looks weird at this point), and then move 01:11:960 (7) - to x:160, this is an unnecessary hyper, and then ctrl+H 1 and move it to x:400, this makes sure you still have a fitting hyper, and also flows nicely. - Fixed first thing. WOnt remove the hyper.
01:13:271 (1) - Move this to x:112 to avoid forcing the catcher against the wall, this can easily throw a player off. - Fixed!
01:13:763 (2) - Move this to x:16, same reason. - ^
01:13:927 (3) - Move this to x:384, as to not force the catcher against the wall. - ^
01:14:337 (4,5) - Drag these two and move it to x:336, a hyper doesn't fit. - It is ok.
01:15:238 (2,3) - Swap the place of these two notes on the timeline, and then ctrl+h the new 2, and move it to x:304. This gets rid of the unneccessary hypers here. - Fixed!
01:16:550 (2,3) - Swap places of these two notes on the timeline, fits the song a lot better, you should only have a hyper on the stronger brass sound. - ^
01:17:697 (7,1,2) - Move 7 to x:160, angle it so that it ends at x:192, move 1 to x:96 and 2 to x:32. This leaves a hyper from 6 to 7, which fits, whilst getting rid of the unnecessary hyper from 7 to 1. - Like it as it is.
01:19:665 (1) - Move this to x:144, this hyper is unnecessary, the brass is weak here. - ^
01:20:320 (5) - Move this to x:336, these hypers don't feel necessary or fitting for the very weak sounds here. - ^
01:20:976 (1) - Move this to x:176, same reason as above, I don't feel these drums are strong enough to constitute a hyper. - ^
01:22:124 (6) - Move this to x:336, same reason as above only with the brass. - ^
01:22:615 (1) - Ctrl+H this (Maybe? I might be getting mixed up, I want it so the first movement is to the left.) and then move to x:416. A HDash to a 1/8 repeating slider is very annoying to catch, and having it against the wall can throw off players. - Wont change. It is ok.
01:22:943 (1) - Move this to x:368, to avoid a hyper to a 1/8 repeating slider. - ^
01:23:599 (1) - Remove 2 repeats from this, move it to 01:23:681 - , and then add two circles where the repeats used to be, the first at x:160, the second at x:128, and then ctrl+H the slider and move it to x:96. - ^
01:24:583 (2) - Ctrl+G this and move it to x:384, flows a lot better and reduces the dashes whilst keeping the HDash. - ^
01:29:009 (1) - I think this works better as just 2 circles, there isn't really a continuous sound here. If you do this, move the first circle to x:256, and the second to x:160. - Vocal.
01:31:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern should be changed a bit, a hyper chain doesn't fit really. Move 1 to x:416, 2 to x:208, 3 to x:480, 4 to x:368, and ctrl+h 5 and move it to x:112. This makes hypers on strong drum beats only. - It fits the vocals.
01:33:763 (4) - Move this to x:112, the hyper should be to 4, not 5, as this is the strong keyboard sound. - This hyper fits.
01:36:222 (2,3) - 1 should not hyper to 2, nor 2 to 3, as these are weak drum sounds, but 3 should hyper to 4 as this is a strong sound. Move 2 to x:192 and ctrl+g 3. - This is ok, i feel it fits.
01:38:189 (4) - Move to x:144, the sound here is weak, and so 3 shouldn't hyper to it. - Vocal.
01:42:124 (5,1) - Ctrl+H this two notes, flows nicely and gets rid of the unnecessary hyper from 4 to 5. - It is ok.
01:45:566 (1) - Move this to x:32, the jump from this to 2 after such a strong hyper feels awkward. - It fits.
01:45:894 (1) - Ctrl+H and move it to x:48, this jump feels less awkward like that. - This is ok, feels good for me.
01:46:222 (1) - Make this a straight line slider, after such a strong HDash this is weird to catch because you have to slow down so quickly. - Be more carefull. Wont change.
01:56:714 (1) - Move this to x:320, leaves the hyper but stops it from being as strong, and makes the jump to 2 less awkward. - I think this fits.
02:05:894 (1,2,3) - I feel this hyper should be to 2, not 3. Move 2 to x:48, and this part feels fine to me. - I think this is ok.
02:16:386 (2) - Move this to x:128, gets rid of the hyper from 1 whilst maintaining a hyper to 3, 3 feels like the strongest vocal to me. - I want to keep both.
02:23:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Drag this whole stream and move it to x:272. Hypers between these streams don't really fit, as the notes here are weak. - It fits.
02:24:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Drag this stream and move it to x:224, same reason as above. - ^
02:25:566 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section feels very overmapped to me, the hypers seem to be spammed without much to follow. For 02:25:566 (1,2,3,4) - , move 1 to x:432, 2 to x:463, 3 to x:303, 4 to x:288, and then for 02:26:222 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 to x:464, 2 to x:464 too, ctrl+g 3 and move it to x:288, and then move 4 to x:304. - I feel like this fits the map. WOnt change!
02:27:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - These vocals are to weak to constitute hypers in my opinion. A better pattern I feel is moving 2 to x:192, 3 to x:64, 4 to x:224, and 5 to x:112 (Some of these notes might already be in these places, but I can't remember). - This fits.

Just posting in case I accidentally delete the post, still modding (although might take a break to nap). (Up to second kiai)

Edit: At this point, idk whether to continue, because I would just be repeating myself, for the most part, the map doesn't have a lot of variety past this point in terms of hypers being in similar places, so you could just look through the map and try to (mainly) get rid of a few hypers. This song is relatively calm at most points, definitely not active enough to constitute a 6 star map, and hypers have been added on calm parts a lot, try to get rid of these. Call me back if you want me to continue my mod anyway, or if you want me to check after you get rid of hypers.

Granger wrote:

Shame that everyone always maps this song hard as shit because HW... i really like this song and would love a map with it which i could actually play. Oh well, downloading anyways. Good luck with rank!

Ichigaki wrote:

Little check hehe

20:59 Razor Sharp: Hello? ;w;
20:59 Ichigaki: Umm, yeah?
21:00 Razor Sharp: i got told my Kuo Kyoka that you know a little ctb ;w; and are a BN ;w; and i wanted to ask if you can check my bubbled map ;W;
21:00 Ichigaki: woah
21:00 Ichigaki: I see
21:00 Razor Sharp: if you dont mind ;w;
21:01 Ichigaki: Your map already bubbled?
21:01 Razor Sharp: yes
21:01 Ichigaki: I couldn't find it in the list
21:01 Ichigaki: So, popped?
21:01 Razor Sharp: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/298951
21:02 Razor Sharp: is marathon, so not on pending for weird reason
21:05 Ichigaki: marathon, i see
21:05 Ichigaki: it's common problem though
21:05 Razor Sharp: oh?
21:06 Ichigaki: you need to call QATs after got the 2nd bubble
21:06 Razor Sharp: yes i will
21:06 Ichigaki: every QATs that can help
21:06 Razor Sharp: true
21:06 Ichigaki: who bubbled this first?
21:06 Razor Sharp: but they always tell me
21:06 Razor Sharp: krwafy
21:06 Razor Sharp: but quats always tell me to wait till its qualified, then they check
21:07 Ichigaki: Yeah, that's why QAT existed
21:07 Ichigaki: anyway, I'll just help modding
21:07 Razor Sharp: irc mod?
21:08 Ichigaki: yes
21:08 Ichigaki: Since I can't help you to the next ranking procedure
21:08 Razor Sharp: then lets do this
21:12 Ichigaki: Just telling you that you can ask JBHyperion and ZiroX because they now being a BN. They have good skill of modding CtB
21:13 Razor Sharp: JBH dont want to do it he sais .-.
21:13 Razor Sharp: ZiroX never answers when i ask him >.<
21:13 Ichigaki: Ah :'c
21:14 Razor Sharp: im in editor now
21:14 Razor Sharp: so ready for the mod :3
21:18 Ichigaki: 01:39:009 (3) - ctrl + g?
21:18 Ichigaki: so it has hdash for 01:39:501 (1) - 
21:19 Ichigaki: 01:40:320 (3) - this too
21:19 Razor Sharp: yeah, i like that actually
21:19 Razor Sharp: fixed both
21:22 Ichigaki: 01:44:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - This part somehow bothering me, :c, how about something like this? the flow are okay imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3135178
21:22 Ichigaki: 01:45:894 (1,1) - this part is should be not too far
21:23 Razor Sharp: where to move it?
21:23 Ichigaki: that kinda hard for only 1/4 sec to move in another part which is far away from the first part. So, move it closer
21:23 Ichigaki: just like the pic i just sent
21:24 Razor Sharp: is x272 ok?
21:24 Ichigaki: which one?
21:24 Razor Sharp: 01:46:222 (1) -
21:25 Ichigaki: not bad, okay
21:26 Razor Sharp: then its all fixed what you said
21:29 Ichigaki: 04:42:288 (5) - nc
21:30 Razor Sharp: fixed
21:30 Ichigaki: 04:44:542 (8,1) - make it closer?
21:31 Ichigaki: but this part is dense, it's okay to keep
21:31 Razor Sharp: id prefer to keep it
21:33 Razor Sharp: dc lol
21:33 Ichigaki: lol
21:34 Ichigaki: hitsound has no prob
21:35 Ichigaki: bg has no prob
21:35 Razor Sharp: sweet
21:35 Ichigaki: mp3 too
21:37 Razor Sharp: everything is fine?
21:37 Ichigaki: I saw in timing point there're some points that having 5% for its volume, i suggest you to change it at least 15%, because hitsound should be audible
21:38 Razor Sharp: fixed
21:38 Razor Sharp: so, ready to update it?
21:39 Ichigaki: is that okay with AR and OD 9,4?
21:39 Razor Sharp: ar = od in ctb
21:39 Razor Sharp: they should be the same
21:39 Razor Sharp: since od does not change anything in ctb
21:40 Ichigaki: I see
21:40 Ichigaki: i think it's already okay
21:41 Razor Sharp: ill update now
21:42 Razor Sharp: done
21:43 Razor Sharp: need to reupdate lol
21:44 Ichigaki: you put 2 Skyscraper in tags
21:44 Razor Sharp: woops
21:44 Razor Sharp: removed
21:45 Razor Sharp: and updated again
21:46 Ichigaki: well, all done, but as i said before, i only do normal check, because i can't do bubble now. That's all from me. Nice map anyway though I'm not a big fans for hard maps in CtB (because I can't play it LOL :') ). So, Good luck for you~ Better to find specific CtB BN because seems they haven't do something like bubbling or qualifying nowadays :3
21:46 Razor Sharp: thanks :'3 ctb people are too lazy these days to bubble and stuff..
21:47 Razor Sharp: but remember to post chatlog as i can kudosu you D:
21:47 Ichigaki: Hmm, okay! ><

Good luck!