Girls' Generation - Echo · forum

_llkey_18

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

_llkey_18 2010-05-11T12:47:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 17 de mayo de 2010 at 18:08:52

Artist: Girls' Generation
Title: Echo
Tags: SNSD
BPM: 121
Filesize: 11000kb
Play Time: 03:25
Difficulties Available:

Loud!!! (4,75 stars, 411 notes)
Normal (2,7 stars, 246 notes)

Download: Girls' Generation - Echo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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hope you guys enjoy xD any help (comments , mod ,etc..) will be really appreciatee
i will work hard for rank this pretty song xD

changed to stong colour to fix brightness , fixed transparency on hitcircle and reduce size, added number , approachcircle etc...

Last edited by _llkey_18 2010-05-17T16:08:54+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

Hurude Rika

Hurude Rika 2010-05-11T13:01:01+00:00

checked it

zaru-d

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zaru-d 2010-05-11T13:10:01+00:00

your skin is cuuute

good map~

Alace

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Alace 2010-05-11T13:13:25+00:00

+2 OD for normal diff (easier to read )
it`s good enough for a new mapper

lxy

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lxy 2010-05-11T13:16:23+00:00

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-05-11T13:18:27+00:00

* Just Suggestion. if you feel weird please ignore this ^^

and I'm not good about Sounds and Timing , sorry for can't help about this two.

Normal

00:08:637 (1,2,3) - down 2 Grid
00:45:580 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:51:530 (1) - ^
00:52:026 (2) - add new combo ?
00:53:513 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:37:150 (5,6) - Left 1 Grid
01:47:563 (2) - Down 1 Grid
03:08:885 (5,6,7) - up 1 Grid

Loud

00:30:951 (6) - try to set new 6 for 100% stack point ?
00:40:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move down 1 Grid Lv3.
00:54:505 (4) - move right 1 ?
00:55:249 (5,6) - up 1 ?
01:34:670 (7) - I think not need to add Break time to this point (for me)
01:41:613 (1) - move last □ in slider down 1 grid for same point with line (2)
02:05:414 (7,8,9,10) - right 2 grid

ZHAO YU

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Joined July 2009

ZHAO YU 2010-05-11T13:19:34+00:00

Good!
star!

cloness

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cloness 2010-05-11T13:21:35+00:00

lol

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2010-05-11T13:22:23+00:00

★star★

Axey

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Axey 2010-05-11T13:23:27+00:00

Kensei Akio

Kensei Akio 2010-05-11T13:28:38+00:00

Star

kioukiou

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kioukiou 2010-05-11T13:29:50+00:00

No problem for me.

Star.

Secu_old

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Joined January 2009

Secu_old 2010-05-11T13:30:15+00:00

WTF!!! you are the best KEY your map rulz

Last edited by Secu_old 2010-05-11T13:39:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Avfunny

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Avfunny 2010-05-11T13:38:51+00:00

Nice map

northa

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northa 2010-05-11T13:56:19+00:00

42342

Sumeragi Amane

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Joined October 2009

Sumeragi Amane 2010-05-11T13:58:35+00:00

very good map

idk how to mod it

i cant find any mistake .
00:23:637 (4) -I think 00:23:761 is better
dont give kds

star

Cheery

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Joined July 2008

Cheery 2010-05-11T14:14:34+00:00

Stard

Sure

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Joined February 2009

Sure 2010-05-11T14:17:53+00:00

[Skin]
approachcircle.png needs.

[Normal]
How about change diff's name? ex> Quiet or what you like.

01:25:249 (4) - 1 grid down
01:37:150 (5,6) - 1 grid left
03:25:249 (1) - finish

[Loud!!!]
Fine!!!

Very nice map.

gdeath

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Joined May 2009

gdeath 2010-05-11T14:25:47+00:00

[Normal]
03:25:249 (1) - add finish

[Loud!!!]
01:34:670 (8) - remove this break
03:22:274 (5) - what about new combo?

nice map and song
Star~

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2010-05-11T14:26:17+00:00

general

The biggest size of "STAR2.PNG" is 50x50 , i think you should fix it

Normal

[01:25:249] move 1 grid down?
[01:48:059] clap

Loud!!!

[00:18:059] whistle?
[01:34:670] too short break, remove
[02:47:811] (1,2) spacing too close

This is a pretty map , but the normal-whistle dose not fit the song imo

star~

AdRon Zh3Ro

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-05-11T16:11:09+00:00

Good map, only the colours is hard to see

Utena

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Utena 2010-05-11T16:37:11+00:00

Nice map, hit sounds are fine for me, the skin is cute, If i were to complain about anything it would be the brightness, i though it was kinda hard to see the beats sometimes xD maybe pick a bit stronger colors for the beats?! I dunno... overall nice map

indeed star

Garven

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Garven 2010-05-11T17:03:13+00:00

[Skin]
I wouldn't recommend having so much transparency with the hit circle. It's probably the root of a lot of the complaints about hit circles being hard to see (I agree with them). Add some grays in there so you can't see through the circle onto a white background. Also the way osu! resizes the images, some of the text is being covered up by the hitcircleoverlay.
comboburst-1.png ends up really tiny compared to the rest of the comboburst images. Enlarge her and get rid of the unnecessary transparencies.

[Normal]
I'm not liking the combo changing so frequently during the "echo echo" choruses, but that's more up to you for that.
Same with the kiai fountain spurting on every "echo."
03:09:877 (7) - You may as well make the straight up and down instead of at a very slight angle.

[Loud!!!]
Still not liking the kiai fountain use, but eh.
00:16:075 (4) - Line this up with the end of 3 and the 1 afterward.
02:35:662 (5) - Maybe have this slider curve down one grid point to line up with the 6 afterward.

The maps are fine technically, though they really get samey after a while. Not sure what to tell you for that, though.

JamesLeao

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JamesLeao 2010-05-11T17:31:16+00:00

Loud:
00:23:266 (3,4) - hmmmm
01:15:084 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:125 (1,6) - clap

Normal:
Fine

whoa , first map yep ? nicely done , i'm feeling comfortable

star 4 u

Ignacio_old

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Ignacio_old 2010-05-11T17:43:19+00:00

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-05-11T18:04:13+00:00

[Normal]:

seems good to me

[Loud!!!]:

00:23:637 (4) - this should start at 00:23:761

that's all I can find :3

btw, I have to remove the skin to mod lol

LaunchedthousandShip

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LaunchedthousandShip 2010-05-11T18:41:25+00:00

got a ss on normal and s on Loud!! on first try x)

Its good enough to be ranked, although, there may still have problems, but to me, all fine. Just one thing, you use repeat patterns too much. Its OK for a normal or easy diff, but for hard or insane, try to make more patterns. Well, it still good, even with many repeat patterns. Also, I dont like skins, but this one is OK to me. Get this rank, nice map.

MaxwellDemon

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Here since the beginning

MaxwellDemon 2010-05-11T21:34:54+00:00

As many modder before me have already noted, the skin does have some issue. Aside from that, there is also that because you skinned the hit circles, but didn't skin other parts of the hitcircle like numbers, approach circles, etc., it is highly recommended that you skin them as well. If you really don't want to, then at least set the default skin as the standard. You can get this option like this:

Song Setup > Storyboarding

It is underneath skinning, just simply choose Default.

Also, for your hitcircle.png, try to crop it into a circle, because right now, a little bit of that actually is outside of the hitcircle overlay.

I also think the offset is late. XD XD
It sounds more like 8,380 than 8,390.

Anyway, I didn't notice anything wrong than those things, so here is a star for now. :3

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-05-12T09:20:01+00:00

Mod by requested.

First, notes are freaking hard to read because of the skin D:

~Normal~
00:40:621 (1,2,1,1) - Why combos are different?
00:56:489 (1,2,1,1) - ^
01:18:803 (1) - remove new combo
01:44:092 (1,2,1,1) - Why combos are different?
01:59:960 (1,2,1,1) - ^
02:31:695 (1,2,1,1) - ^

~Loud!!!~
Fine.

+Star

_llkey_18

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Topic Starter

_llkey_18 2010-05-12T09:34:41+00:00

thankss all for mod it ^_^ i going fix skin part

[Exit]

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[Exit] 2010-05-12T15:44:38+00:00

Wow. good map !

I will give a star for u

Furawa

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Furawa 2010-05-12T15:45:13+00:00

nice

WubWoofWolf

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WubWoofWolf 2010-05-12T15:55:00+00:00

Echo echo echo~

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-12T17:19:26+00:00

Buenas~ <3

~All Diffs~
Skin:
- Podrias cambiar el color del spinner-approachcircle? Al ser el fondo blanco es dificil verlo xD
- Como ya te dije por IRC, la transparencia de los hitcircles los hacia un poco dificiles de ver, asi que te mando este con el default de fondo para arreglarlo xD
Para comparar:
Hitcircle original: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9425
Hitcircle nuevo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9424

~Normal~
02:09:877 (2) - Se hace menos confuso si lo pones encima del (3), como en los demas xD

~Loud!!!~
00:23:637 (4) - Suena un poco raro estando en el tick azul... No se si es a proposito o no, pero en mi opinion suena mejor si lo dejas en al misma longitud que (1,2,3).
00:26:737 (2) - Arregla el spacing.
02:57:480 (2,3,4) - ^
03:13:348 (4) - Arregla el spacing, se ve mejor sin ese salto repentino.
03:23:513 (2,3) - ^

Nada mal, muy buena suerte con este map ^^ *star*

James

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James 2010-05-12T17:22:11+00:00

good map, not sure about the skins and kiai fountains...

Sunny Holic

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Sunny Holic 2010-05-12T19:54:59+00:00

WOW! Song of Girls' Generation! I love you!!

I recomend you use these characters~ It's very cute

Download: all.zip

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-05-13T09:07:36+00:00

[all]

Insert background pic plz.

nice map.

_llkey_18

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Topic Starter

_llkey_18 2010-05-13T09:24:37+00:00

yeah finally fixed skin part thank to beuni-chan ^_^

hvick225

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hvick225 2010-05-13T10:15:29+00:00

STAR

Al-Azif

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Al-Azif 2010-05-13T12:56:11+00:00

solid map, looks good

only one thing throw me out is... (if you disagree, just igone this)
[Loud]
00:23:266 (3,4) - those sliders doesn't match the song ,imo

maybe change to this?

Coy

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Coy 2010-05-13T16:39:45+00:00

nice skin,
i like :3

*star*

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2010-05-14T10:35:54+00:00

Good for me~
nothing to mod
nice map
star for you

(boring song :3)

m980

Elite Mapper

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Here since the beginning

m980 2010-05-15T10:37:28+00:00

IRC Mod

Overview:
Comboburst Change (were cut off)
Difficulty spread changed from [E][I] to [N][I]

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-05-16T17:28:43+00:00

Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely.

It's in the general rules.
Everything else is good.

_llkey_18

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Topic Starter

_llkey_18 2010-05-17T09:43:56+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely.
It's in the general rules.
Everything else is good.

Done

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-05-17T20:38:55+00:00

Looks good now.
Ranked!

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-05-17T21:31:27+00:00