[Teichan] wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]

1. Why is your soft-hitclap.wav totally same as soft-hitclap.wav?

I wanted the clap sound on the 2nd and 4th white tick to be the same, it didn't make any sense to me have them sound different c:

[Easy]

1. 01:01:687 (2) - Seems a bit dangerous. Check this:
   
   SPOILER

   

Thanks for pointing this one out. I'll keep an eye on this during future remaps, though I will not change this asap since it does not seem to actually touch the health bar

Totally fine.

[Normal]

1. 01:15:978 (1) - end at 01:19:640 -
   
   idk it feels kind of weird to keep spinning when to vocals have already faded out. I'll keep this in mind and then extend this one in case this actually is the way to go. It's not like changing this is a big bother c:
   
2. 01:35:703 (2,4) - stack nazi

done!

[Others]
This mapset is on high quality, however as sieg said, it still needs a Hard because I've heard some 1/4 drumsound that you didn't follow.

Again, adding the GD will ultimately depend on it's quality and whether or not it'll be fixable (I don't feel like finding a better way of wording this haha)

I'll be glad to help if this is not full ver. Sorry
Take my star!

liangv587 wrote:

nice song and nice map

[General]

1. why not add a Hard diff? commented on this above
2. offset -20 (F6→ctrl+A→-20→move→ok）hmm the offset honestly sounds fine to me. I'll apply this if this gets pointed out again, doing this is a quik fix anyways!
3. tags: 块→冰块，ziji de fangjian→zi ji de fang jian done!

[Normal]

1. how about nc with very two section I did this a little bit, though I ended up swapping a few NCs while applying Nya's mod!
2. 00:29:561 (5,1) - play bad, how about http://puu.sh/h0PIf.jpg I actually disagree. I think the slider works well with the vocals + I feel like it's a nice buildup for the downbeat, which also feels strong enough to deserve something clickable
3. 00:48:458 (3) - out of playfield a little I was told that as long as Aimod doesn't have any complaints, no objects are off-screen :/
4. 01:11:372 (3) - out of playfield ^
5. 01:15:624 (3,4) - play bad, how about http://puu.sh/h0PXB.jpg done!
6. 01:35:703 (2,4) - we should creat a stack efect http://puu.sh/h0PZt.jpg uuh why? no kidding I really just don't understand the purpose of doing this
7. 02:03:813 (2) - delet I'd actually say that this works better with than without this circle. having a gap here feels sorta weird with the note density of the map being quite high
8. 02:35:703 (1) - out of playfield a little same as above
9. 03:09:010 (2,3) - the same

^

-Nya- wrote:

Thanks a bunch!

From my M4M queue~

General:

1. I love this song <3
2. You don’t need “Chou” in the tags since it’s already in the artist section. done!
3. Add these two soundfiles into your song’s folder to get rid of that annoying sliderslide:
   http://puu.sh/h3KfV/a92ebc5893.wav
   http://puu.sh/h3KiQ/3bfa4b1c86.wav
   
   cool, thank you!
   
4. Combo 1 and 2 looks a bit too similar to each other imo. I suggest switching the places of combo 2 and 3. So combo 2 must then be combo 3 now and combo 3 must be combo 2. This is just to be safe and avoid colour confusion while playing.
   
   done!

Easy:

1. 00:15:388 (1,3) –Nazi, but it definitely caught my eye. Please just improve this blanket. fixed! though I'm not sure how this one caught your attention since it was almost perfect to begin with and with the way the objects are placed catching this looks very hard haha c:
2. 00:49:876 (1) –I’d say remove new combo here and add new combo here: 00:50:348 (2) – Imo, the new combo has to start on the vocals again. works for me!
3. 00:53:655 (1) -^, remove new combo and add new combo here: 00:54:128 (2) – This is obviously my own NC’ing taste, so feel free to ignore this. I used to NC in a simliar way because following vocals often felt a lot nicer than strictly sticking to the downbeats so I absolutely agree c:
4. 00:56:962 –Rather try to place a single note/circle on a strong beat like this. Right now, that’s a downbeat which is pretty ineffective. So rather do something like this:
   
   Picture

   
   As you can see in the above pic: That new circle that was added is also the new combo and you can also clearly hear it in the music. Try to use this to help you with knowing when a beat should rather be emphasized with a circle or not. done! No need to explain yourself, you're definately right!
5. 01:01:214 (1) –Rather remove new combo here and add new combo here: 01:01:214 – Same reason as here: 00:49:876 (1) – Again just my own taste. done!
6. 01:04:994 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 01:05:466 (2) – ^
7. 01:08:301 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 01:09:246 (2) – ^
8. 01:32:395 (3,5) –Try to avoid this overlap. It’s just unnecessary imo, especially in an Easy diff. I knew this one was going to bite me back, was just hoping it wouldnt >< slightly re-arranged this to avoid the overlap
9. 01:39:010 –Hm, this beat sounds pretty important imo, so I suggest mapping it out by placing a circle there. aight. done!
10. 01:46:569 -^ ya this one too
11. 01:49:876 –Like my previous suggestion here: 00:56:962 – rather try to place a single note on an important beat like that. It’s also where the new combo has to start. yeah. I think I found a good way of making this look visually appealing too
    
    Picture

    
12. 01:51:766 (3) –Hm, I like this rhythm more:
    
    Picture

    
    It just follows the music better imo. I actually think that the slider works well as a build-up, and I actually feel like following vocals here is better, so I'd like to keep this :c
13. 01:57:907 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 01:58:380 (2) – duunnn
14. 02:01:687 (1) –Same combo suggestion as above. ^
15. 02:04:994 –Same suggestion as here: 00:56:962 – 01:49:876 – obviously changed this one aswell
16. 02:09:246 (1) –Same combo suggestion as above. I still think it would be better to start the new combo where the vocals start again, which is here: 02:09:718 (2) – agreed
17. 02:13:025 (1) –Same combo suggestion as above. ^
18. 02:16:332 (1) -^ ^^^^^^^^^
19. 02:19:640 (3) –Not really a great placement for flow purposes in an Easy diff. Rather place it on the right side of this slider: 02:17:277 (2) – Remember that flow in an Easy diff is very important. ugh I kinda expected this on too be a bother >< changed both the slider shaped and remapped the following seconds for a better flow
20. 02:54:600 (1) –Same combo suggestion. done!
21. 02:58:380 (1) -^ ^
22. 02:59:797 (3) –Hm, maybe place a finish on this repeat instead? Imo, it will fit nicely. missed this one! had a finish placed during the Normal too so ugh yeah
23. 02:59:797 (3,1) –Why not make a nice blanket here? done!

Normal:

1. Since this a Normal and you’re going to receive a Hard diff soon, I suggest changing the circle size to 3.
2. Something else that bothered me was the fact that the slider velocity is rather fast for a Normal diff. And since you’re getting a Hard, I think it would be better to lower the SV. I suggest rather using a SV of 1.2X.
   
   Already commented on these issues earlier c:
   
3. 01:14:915 (2) –Ctrl+J here? I like the flow more. works forme!
4. 01:29:797 (5) –Rather place this slider like this. It will make the pattern look a bit better imo: sure thing. I mean this is the obvious thing to do, I guess I was just hoping to have this flow nicer or something..idk ><
   
   Picture

   
5. 01:38:301 (7,1) –Try to make a blanket here. honestly, I'm not 100% sold on how this looks right now. having this blanket looks ok, but I feel like it also makes this connect with the next pattern in a way to look a little weird to me (looks AND flows actually) I'll keep this in mind during future remaps, though I don't think blanketing this looks nicer
6. 02:20:821 (2,3) –This overlap is clearly visible. Rather try to avoid it. I'd argue that the overlap is gone waaaaay before the player actually has to click the long slider, so I really think that breaking up a lot of patterns is not worth it over such a minor inconnvenience

I have to be honest and say that this diff doesn’t look like a Normal at all to me. The spacing is pretty big and it’s mapped like one would map a Hard. I would say that you should name your Easy “Normal” and your Normal “Hard”.

But since you’re going to receive a Hard diff now, I highly suggest you try and make that Normal easier for a balanced spread. I believe most BN’s will tell you this.

Commented on all these already c:


Overall, it’s a pretty decent mapset. Nice structures, rhythms, placements, etc.
Good Luck~!

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good luck

Rakuen wrote:

As requested by walaowey!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

General

• Wow, very neat map, a lot better than some ranked mappers

Thank you!

Hitsound

• Suggest a silenced "slider slide" to decrease noise when sliding I'm pretty sure I already did this while applying Nya's mod c:
  
  Try this: http://puu.sh/h95ZN/c653f6dda6.wav
  
  And then make another copy and name it soft-sliderslide2 (for the clap tick)

Easy

1. 02:20:112 - Finish? yes!
2. 03:05:466 - ^ this one too!

Normal

1. Suggests AR5, current one is a bit slow (tested with DT too) works for me!
2. 03:07:356 (5,1) - Swap NC? done!

Do a quick check on hitsounds and see if there's any missing (just in case)

will do after applying/responding too all mods!

Others are quite nice

Call me back!

@-Nya- if you're reading:

For the Normal it's okay, it doesn't depend on arrangements, just BPM and if it's okay to tap as Normal

1. Why does Normal and Hard have the same Slider Velocity?. That's not good

1. 00:18:695 (8) Honestly I'd like to know what are these Claps following here?. Sounds really weird and doesn't fit the music. The default whistle will work much better here
2. 00:27:612 (3) I'm not really sure why this sliders has been placen in a 1/8 tick. What about to move it to 00:27:671 ?. For a better consistency, you know
3. 00:52:947 (6,7,8) Your current distance spacing is becoming really weird in many places. Sometimes you are using a 2.30x spacing in 1/4 rhythms and sometimes you use 1.6x spacing at 1/4 rhythm too (00:53:892 (2,3,4) . You should be more consistent with your spacing, after all this is a hard and not an insane with a peaceful song that doesn't deserve bad jumps
4. 01:14:915 (1) The NC here is not necessary, You should remove it
5. 01:41:372 (2,3) This sounds REALLY weird and doesn't fit the music/voice. You should delete (2) and replace it with a circle at 01:41:372. It looks better!
6. 00:45:624 (1) Consider adding some "Finish" hitsounds at first note when kiai time starts
7. 01:00:742 (^)
8. For all the beatmap, consider using some default "Whistle" since music really needs them

1. Take this beatmap as reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112589

Alheak wrote:

Hi, M4M

General

Maybe find a 192kbps .mp3

eh I might. bad at finding those ><

Easy

Raise AR to 3 aight. it's not like changing this is a big bother anyways
00:15:388 (1,2) - Blanket? I like this better without having it blanket
00:35:230 (3,4) - Break the flow imo. Plus it might mislead beginners to click on 4's end instead of its start huh I'd actually disagree. I think this flows decent enough + I don't really see why this would be confusing. I'll be willing to change this if it gets pointed out during future mods, though I really doubt this'll cause any problems
00:50:348 (1,2) - How about this: sure thing! looks better than a blunt curved one

01:43:262 (2,3) - I feel those two sliders' shapes should be interverted for a better flow: you're very right about that

01:53:655 (1,2) - Like earlier, broken flow uuh yeah like already commented on this
01:58:380 (1,2) - It doesn't look too bad but I'd avoid overlaping if possible no issues in terms of readability or looks so this should be fine
02:35:703 (1) - How about putting one more red anchor here 02:36:411 - to emphasize the beat? sure thing
02:56:962 (3,4) - Blanket? same as the similar pattern during the intro
02:59:797 (2,1) - ^ I feel like this'd look a bit to crowded since I have the next slider blanket too. This works fine without having it blanket
03:02:632 (2,1) - Like earlier, doesn't look bad but I'd avoid overlaps same as earlier, though I'll be more willing to change it up a bit should it be pointed out more often

Also, redo your NCs, they should be more consistent. Just place 1 NC every measure for dynamic parts with lots of objects and 1 NC every two measures for more chill parts.

Some of the Combos are following vocals since it does feel a lot more natural to me for a lot of them. I don't feel like this is an issue

Normal

Reduce AR to 4 to reduce the gap with Easy, and you should probably put CS to 3.5 or something like that as well AR and CS are fine due to the high note density of the map
01:29:088 (4,5) - The transistion doesn't look very good, move 5 so it looks seamless hmm I get your point. I'll keep this for now as I love having perfect symmetry, though I'll consider moving this
02:01:923 (2,3) - Looks and flows better by blanketing 2 imo I disagree that having this blanket flows better, though do agree that the current pattern can be improved. I feel as though simply turning this into a straight 1/2 makes this flow a lot nicer

NCs are good here tho. Don't know what happened with Easy

Cute song, good luck with ranking it!

P A N wrote:

done.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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Tags:冰块 張逸帆 盧文韜 zi ji de fang jian Where  zhou hui 自己的房間 Own Room
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walaowey wrote:

Hi >w</ .. just some simple mod..hope it helps out everything that helps me polsih this is very much appreciated ><

Easy

01:37:120 (3,4) - blanket can be improve done ~
02:23:892 (1,2) - ^ doneeee
02:56:962 (3,4) - why not try to blanket this two? I'd like to keep it like this to have it match the pattern in the intro, ya know for consistencies sake

Normal

00:24:600 (3,4) - blanket can be improve yusss
02:10:191 (4,1) - ^ yuuhusss

thats all..good luck.. and get it ranked fast
I'll be supporting u :3 Thank you <3~

shooting for u >w< although its a bit late lol

It's never to late for a starrrr...thank youu!

1. You might add the simplified Chinese for 張逸帆 盧文韜 which is 张逸帆 and 卢文韬. Furthermore, you might add pinyin? Zhang Yifan and Lv Wentao for these two people.
2. Simplified Chinese as 自己的房间 for 自己的房間 as well. lol that's really confusing, isn't it?
3. Letterbox in breaks is different in Hard. Close it :3
4. You can del your .osb file.

1. 01:28:616 (2,3,1) - try to make (the head of) these three notes a triangle?
2. 02:35:703 (1) - due to the drum sound, it might be better to shorten it at 02:36:411?
3. 02:55:073 (1) - make it a little bit down ward? Form a stright line with previous circle
4. 03:08:301 (2) - well, may be prolong to 03:09:010, so that it fits the vocal very well :3

1. 01:38:537 (1) - move right a bit?
2. 03:07:120 (4,1) - make the spacing same with 03:06:884 (3,4) -
   
   see the difference? ovo

1. I would prefer a AR 7.5 or 8
2. 01:14:915 (2) - well, try to mute the sliderslide.I'm not sure why you use default hitsound set here, but the sliderslide sound really destroy the slide :<
3. 01:57:671 (2) - I feel like missing a note here. Might be good if you add a circle btw 01:57:435 (1,3) - ?
4. 03:07:356 (1) - The fin sounds too strong for me. I think whistle is enough :3

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[General]

1. You might add the simplified Chinese for 張逸帆 盧文韜 which is 张逸帆 and 卢文韬. Furthermore, you might add pinyin? Zhang Yifan and Lv Wentao for these two people. done~
2. Simplified Chinese as 自己的房间 for 自己的房間 as well. lol that's really confusing, isn't it? done! also yes this is hella confusing ><
3. Letterbox in breaks is different in Hard. Close it :3 I'll leave that to P A N I don't want to mess anything up
4. You can del your .osb file. done
   

[Easy]

1. 01:28:616 (2,3,1) - try to make (the head of) these three notes a triangle? done. also remapped a few secs after that because it looked a lot cleaner c:
2. 02:35:703 (1) - due to the drum sound, it might be better to shorten it at 02:36:411? oh god yes
3. 02:55:073 (1) - make it a little bit down ward? Form a stright line with previous circle I actually like that little curvy shape these objects form c:
4. 03:08:301 (2) - well, may be prolong to 03:09:010, so that it fits the vocal very well :3 yes!
   

[Normal]

1. 01:38:537 (1) - move right a bit? did that and the remapped the next two sliders to make these connect in a nicer way
2. 03:07:120 (4,1) - make the spacing same with 03:06:884 (3,4) - yep!
   
   see the difference? ovo

[Hard]

1. I would prefer a AR 7.5 or 8
2. 01:14:915 (2) - well, try to mute the sliderslide.I'm not sure why you use default hitsound set here, but the sliderslide sound really destroy the slide :<
3. 01:57:671 (2) - I feel like missing a note here. Might be good if you add a circle btw 01:57:435 (1,3) - ?
4. 03:07:356 (1) - The fin sounds too strong for me. I think whistle is enough :3

A very good mapset :3! I like it :3~~~ Thank you!

（づ￣3￣）づ╭☆～Take my star

1. normal-sliderslide.wav is unused, delete it
2. I feel like offset -8 gives better results

1. tags: remove "?" from "pinyin", also there is excessive space before "zhou", add "ice cube"
2. your tags\metadata is wrecked on P A N's Hard http://puu.sh/hkgXb/2ed8ff04d2.png

1. OD: Normal should have +1 for more smooth spread and there is no reason to keep it such low on P A N's Hard so I recommend 6 here
2. AR: you may consider to use AR 7 on Hard since bpm is really low

1. 01:50:821 (3,4) - I suggest you to cover 01:51:529 () - beat with slider because it strongly stressed in the music and having nothing on it may confuse beginner players, e.g. http://puu.sh/hki5D/435686aa56.jpg should work fine

Sieg wrote:

as requested

[General]

1. normal-sliderslide.wav is unused, delete it oops mustve accidentally added this
2. I feel like offset -8 gives better results fixed across all diffs

[Metadata]

1. tags: remove "?" from "pinyin", also there is excessive space before "zhou", add "ice cube" not sure how ice cube wasn't in the tags already..ouch
2. your tags\metadata is wrecked on P A N's Hard http://puu.sh/hkgXb/2ed8ff04d2.png rip. fixed all of those c:

[Settings]

1. OD: Normal should have +1 for more smooth spread and there is no reason to keep it such low on P A N's Hard so I recommend 6 here
2. AR: you may consider to use AR 7 on Hard since bpm is really low

all of these suggestions seemed very reasonable, so I applied them! I did use AR 7.3 for the Hard though, since the mapper felt like it might be more fitting

[Easy]

1. 01:50:821 (3,4) - I suggest you to cover 01:51:529 () - beat with slider because it strongly stressed in the music and having nothing on it may confuse beginner players, e.g. http://puu.sh/hki5D/435686aa56.jpg should work fine
   
   done. new pattern flows nicer than the previous one, plus it does look quite clean!
   

Mapping is great. Glad to see you decided to find Hard gd for the mapset.

Thanks!

1. 01:09:710 (5) - missing add clap in begin
2. 03:07:112 (5) - Missing add whistle, the rhythm is still there

Pereira006 wrote:

hi, Random BN, will put only important

[Pan's hard]

hitsound

1. 01:09:710 (5) - missing add clap in begin
2. 03:07:112 (5) - Missing add whistle, the rhythm is still there

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Peachtrees wrote:

Done! That ended up popping the bubble though? I'm guess there was no way of avoiding that right? ..kind of unfamiliar with this haha

Good job spotting those and thanks for checking the map!