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  Timing 里面的position time没设置，设置在[00:07:17](前两个难度都改，我的难度我加过了
  关于 TAGs和source 首先应该把出处写在 source里而不是tags里面，而且"k-on" 写成“K-on!” 这个所有难度都要改。
  在所有难度的tags里面写LKs
  前两个难度最好设置一下audio track=0。5s
  H-boy'slol 写成 H-boy's lol

LKs wrote:

看了一下，关于这些，改一下

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  Timing 里面的position time没设置，设置在[00:07:17](前两个难度都改，我的难度我加过了
  关于 TAGs和source 首先应该把出处写在 source里而不是tags里面，而且"k-on" 写成“K-on!” 这个所有难度都要改。
  在所有难度的tags里面写LKs
  前两个难度最好设置一下audio track=0。5s
  H-boy'slol 写成 H-boy's lol

其他的还没看 ，先这些

Source: K-on!
Tags: LKs

Clare wrote:

看了一下 沒什麼問題

感覺LK CRAZY打起來應該很酸是不是加一小段休息時間會好點呢~?


nice map star~

xxheroxx wrote:

[LK Crazy]

Set a preview point.
00:05:237 (8) - New combo
00:23:767 (x) - Add a circle
00:34:355 (9) - New combo

Real1 wrote:

Good evening

[Fuwafuwa] done
01:12:649 - Add a note here?

[H-boy's lol]done
00:13:531 Sounds weird with soft hitsounds in this section.

[LK Crazy]done
00:45:825 (8) - Make this a new combo.
01:02:943 (5) - Should aslo be new combo.

Star.

samipale wrote:

跟之前你发给我的那张jpop的歌比，你这张已经做得很好了

LKs wrote:

绿线问题太大，改完了，更新一下[attachment=1:10865]Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (LKf) [Fuwafuwa].osu[/attachment:10865]
[attachment=0:10865]Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (LKf) [H-boy's lol].osu[/attachment:10865]

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- add TAG: h-boy √
- BG Colour: Black ?√
- kiai time too long for me.. (on 2nd)√

[Fuwafuwa]
- This diff don't need Audio lead in√
01:21:031 - DELETE... - this timing really need? maybe use x0.5 speed silder replace with it?√
01:23:413 - ^√
After you delete the timing mutiple plz resnap all note too√

[H-boy's]
- This diff don't need Audio lead in√
01:16:972 - this timing selection seem useless√
01:19:796 - ^√
01:02:943 - add note ~ ?√

[LK Crazy]
01:26:943 (1) - end this spinner at 01:28:002 sound better for me√

starrrrr ~

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

fuwafuwa done
00:19:531 (1) - make the slider shape symmetry
00:58:708 (4) - i think using 1/8 beat repeating slider in the easiest diff is a little bit too much, try just using 1/4 beat repeating slider
01:21:119 (5) - i don't think this slow slider fit the music, it's an energetic music by the way. i dunno, you decide
H-boy's loldone
00:11:767 (5) - start the slider at the next red red tick, shorten it by 1/2 beat, and then add a note in here
LK Crazy
lol if this diff keeps going like this it'll make this map less likely going to be ranked... unless it's for approval
...why? because it has so many random spacing, crazy jumps, and hard-to-read notes
...also that's just my piece of opinion... ON TO THE MOD
00:01:620 (3) - delete this?done
00:07:355 (1) - i think the kiai time better if starts at 00:07:884 (4)done
00:13:002 (4,5,6,1) - this jump is way too crazy for ranking. make it less intensedone
00:17:414 (7) - why so suddenly 2x? change shape
00:19:002 (1) - slider ends at previous white tick. it sounded betterdone
01:08:590 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - gah they're hard to read i think ok,if others say the same.i'll fix
01:11:414 (4) - new combodone
01:21:472 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - damn it's sooo hard to read this ^

but not bad tho... STAR!

1. Offset : -229 或者 123 (你现在的+3) 自己感觉这个听起比较顺,-229使长白线对准鼓声

1. Source应该是K-ON!,o和n应该是大写的吧?
2. 下载的osz文件里没有视频,如果是忘记上传了请加到文件夹里重新full submit,不然你就需要删掉osu文件里和视频相关的code,用记事本打开osu文件,event事件下:
   [notice][Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,0,"Cagayake! GIRLS (TV Size).avi"
   0,0,"2.jpg"
   //Break Periods
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   [notice]
   把蓝色那部分删掉后保存,所有难度的osu文件都是
3. 深蓝色note不容易看出来,因为背景有很多类色的颜色,换个颜色

1. 00:07:531 x - 这里少个note感觉比较奇怪,加个note或者00:07:355到00:07:708用slider
2. 00:16:355 (1) - 删掉这个note,感觉听起很奇怪

1. 01:02:237 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这一串太匪夷所思了,每次test都会掉,而且45也觉得不合音乐,试着想想怎么改改
2. 00:55:002 (5) - 遮住的slider

1. 00:32:061 (6) - new combo会好辨认些
2. 00:33:825 (7) - 这个被遮住的slider不好 :/ 得改改
3. 00:34:178 (8) - no,不要弄成jump,完全无法预期
4. 00:55:355 (7) - 反弹一下比较好,多反弹的那一下很有可能因为放手了而断combo :/
5. 00:57:649 (11,12) - 这个jump太大了,用普通间距好点,你现在摆的会让人误以为11,12也是隔了1拍的
6. 01:19:002 (5,6) - 有点不容易看出来是怎么放的...

Breeze wrote:

只有红色的部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他的都只是建议
话说这图有人做过还都做得很好,TV版和完整版的都有,做重复的图不太好 (*ﾟдﾟ*) 这个。。

[Timing]

1. Offset : -229 或者 123 (你现在的+3) 自己感觉这个听起比较顺,-229使长白线对准鼓声

offest采用的是DJPOP的，应该没问题吧

[General]

1. Source应该是K-ON!,o和n应该是大写的吧?done
2. 下载的osz文件里没有视频,如果是忘记上传了请加到文件夹里重新full submit,不然你就需要删掉osu文件里和视频相关的code,用记事本打开osu文件,event事件下:
   [notice][Events]
   //Background and Video events
   Video,0,"Cagayake! GIRLS (TV Size).avi"
   0,0,"2.jpg"
   //Break Periods
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   [notice]
   把蓝色那部分删掉后保存,所有难度的osu文件都是done
3. 深蓝色note不容易看出来,因为背景有很多类色的颜色,换个颜色

done

[Fuwafuwa]重新调了一些形状和节奏

1. 00:07:531 x - 这里少个note感觉比较奇怪,加个note或者00:07:355到00:07:708用slider
2. 00:16:355 (1) - 删掉这个note,感觉听起很奇怪

[H boy's lol]

1. 01:02:237 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这一串太匪夷所思了,每次test都会掉,而且45也觉得不合音乐,试着想想怎么改改这个我认为还好，如果别人也提的话我会去改的
2. 00:55:002 (5) - 遮住的slider

0.0?

[LK crazy]

1. 00:32:061 (6) - new combo会好辨认些done
2. 00:33:825 (7) - 这个被遮住的slider不好 :/ 得改改done
3. 00:34:178 (8) - no,不要弄成jump,完全无法预期这个我调整了slider
4. 00:55:355 (7) - 反弹一下比较好,多反弹的那一下很有可能因为放手了而断combo :/
5. 00:57:649 (11,12) - 这个jump太大了,用普通间距好点,你现在摆的会让人误以为11,12也是隔了1拍的done
6. 01:19:002 (5,6) - 有点不容易看出来是怎么放的...

star

deadbeat wrote:

omg...4.59 star rating is the LOWEST....make a easier diff...some BAT's will pull u up on that

deadbeat wrote:

omg...4.59 star rating is the LOWEST....make a easier diff...some BAT's will pull u up on that

gdeath wrote:

deadbeat wrote:

omg...4.59 star rating is the LOWEST....make a easier diff...some BAT's will pull u up on that

totally agree(因为BPM 170的缘故，过多的使用1/2拍，使得map变得有点困难。所以可能是需要一个更容易的diff.
不过具体需要蝙蝠来判断,毕竟每个蝙蝠的标准都不同lol) 我试试0.0

Overall :
吧slidertick降低为1.0(由于slidertick设置的过高，会导致拉slider的时候频繁地听到滴滴滴的声音，听起来不是很顺耳) fixed

图本身没什么问题(最后一个难度真的很难)

Star.

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[General]
1) Consider to make an easier diff?im try now

[Fuwafuwa]
01:03:119 (2) - Make curve?
01:03:825 (3) - ^

[H-boy's lol]
00:25:884 (4) - Move 1 grid down?

[LK Crazy]
00:24:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The combo is too long, crop it?!

Nice song
STAR

fartownik wrote:

You'll need to make easier difficulty. working


[H-boy's lol]

Capitalize the difficulty name. which part?

Raise HP Drain by 1-2 ticks.1

[00:47:414] - The slowdown part is a bit unexpectable (because of wrong placed). Any warnings here?i think they very Special , its good
01:01:707 (9) - New combo.done
01:02:943 (15,1) - Unintuitive jump.fixed
01:07:002 (6) - New combo.done
01:18:296 (6) - ^its good enough


[LK Crazy]

Argh, the map is full of unintuitive jumpsits made for people like challenges.and Explore song‘s all potential. It's not really fun to play in much places, sorry. Sometimes just clicking blindly.if i change this easier and easier.it will lost the significance what LKs wata show to people D:

00:00:825 (5,1) - Unintuitive jump. fixed
00:03:296 (6,1) - ^ no
00:07:884 (4) - New combo. why.needless
00:22:884 (6,7) - Unintuitive jumps.no D:
00:28:619 (5) - This pattern is really hard to read. The notes are placed innatural and they are hidden. At least new combo here. new combo at [00:28:35]
00:31:884 (8,1,2,3) - ^. You have to remap this.D:
00:33:737 (6) - Another hard to read pattern. At least new combo.moved place
00:45:825 (1) - Hidden note.moved place
00:46:355 (5) - Hidden slider repeat, from where the player should know when the slider ends? Please move it somewhere else.moved
00:55:002 (5) - Hidden slider~ New combo isn't enough in this case. Move it somewhere else.moved place
01:09:825 (1) - Argh, this slider is really weird. It's not an issue, but it just looks pretty odd.= =
01:17:590 (6) - Hidden note.its no influence
01:20:061 (9) - New combo.
01:21:296 (2) - Hidden note.its no influence
01:25:531 (1,2) - It's a spacing issue. You should continue the spacing change by this note too.D: Change it if more guys tell me

By the ending this diff gone REALLY confusing.


Well, your the most important problem is the spacing in [LK Crazy] and missing easier difficulty.
You'll need to work hard to get this one ranked.
It's starrable, so +star.

impossiblexu wrote:

~star~
另外，需要我做个[Easy]难度吗？

fartownik wrote:

A cold shower appears.


You'll need to make easier difficulty.

[Fuwafuwa]

It's fine.

[H-boy's lol]

Capitalize the difficulty name.

Raise HP Drain by 1-2 ticks.

[00:47:414] - The slowdown part is a bit unexpectable (because of wrong placed). Any warnings here?
01:01:707 (9) - New combo.
01:02:943 (15,1) - Unintuitive jump.
01:07:002 (6) - New combo.
01:18:296 (6) - ^


[LK Crazy]

Argh, the map is full of unintuitive jumps. It's not really fun to play in much places, sorry. Sometimes just clicking blindly.

00:00:825 (5,1) - Unintuitive jump.
00:03:296 (6,1) - ^
00:07:884 (4) - New combo.
00:22:884 (6,7) - Unintuitive jumps.
00:28:619 (5) - This pattern is really hard to read. The notes are placed innatural and they are hidden. At least new combo here.
00:31:884 (8,1,2,3) - ^. You have to remap this.
00:33:737 (6) - Another hard to read pattern. At least new combo.
00:45:825 (1) - Hidden note.
00:46:355 (5) - Hidden slider repeat, from where the player should know when the slider ends? Please move it somewhere else.
00:55:002 (5) - Hidden slider~ New combo isn't enough in this case. Move it somewhere else.
01:09:825 (1) - Argh, this slider is really weird. It's not an issue, but it just looks pretty odd.
01:17:590 (6) - Hidden note.
01:20:061 (9) - New combo.
01:21:296 (2) - Hidden note.
01:25:531 (1,2) - It's a spacing issue. You should continue the spacing change by this note too.

By the ending this diff gone REALLY confusing.


Well, your the most important problem is the spacing in [LK Crazy] and missing easier difficulty.
You'll need to work hard to get this one ranked.
It's starrable, so +star.

BanchoBot wrote:

The period of time between the beginning of a beatmap's song file and the instant the first beat of the rhythm is heard, from which the first beat is calculated

Arusha Shuna wrote:

holy crap overmap gogogo