last check i guess
623's・i'd like to ask you once again to remove the whistle on the end here 01:55:522 - since there is no loud sound in music for this and its pretty loud. i suggested you this before and you said you fixed everything but this is still not fixed
p/3588147 o.o
novice・00:49:359 (3,4) - what about avoiding that overlap with (1) slider by placing (3,4) upper?
・00:56:170 (2) - umm stack with 00:55:197 (4) - 's head?
・00:58:441 (1,2) - try to move these sliders to left to make more vide pattern, atm this part is visually cramped
・try highering OD and HP by 0.5 or 1. the jump to advanced settings is kinda big (3->6)
・what about adding a note here 00:47:251 - 00:53:738 - 00:58:927 - 01:04:116 - 01:50:819 - ? the rhythm in early parts is pretty simple, consisting mainly with just 1/1 sliders, i'd suggest making this difficulty slightly harder by adding there notes, it will feel like a decent normal diff
・01:54:873 (3) - im a bit worrying about this snap, i doesnt sound natural by music beats.. its 1/3 here so the 1/4 reverse slider doesnt really provide a natural responce. i would recommend you either removing the reverse and snap slider end white 01:55:197 - tick; or place 2 circles on those whites instead. you could also add a note on a place where your spinner starts now
(if you apply this dont forget to resnap spinner end)novice+・00:13:846 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part looks a bit messy, what about making these 00:13:522 (3,4,5) - as triangle and then move around objects a bit?:
SPOILER(in addition try round 00:14:819 (3) - to make it parallel with00:14:333 (1) - )
and watch out for this triplet 00:15:143 (4,5,6) - , space it manually by 1.20 because distance snap space it to 1.12 \:
・00:51:143 (2,3,4) - try to move these a bit down, away from (1) slider
・00:53:738 - 00:58:927 - 01:04:116 - i would really recommend you to add triplets
/reverse sliders here. you can alllow yourself making this diff harder because the difficulty progression after gamu's hard allows you to do so and jump to exhaust just asks you about it. lets try to make this spread even better
・01:01:522 (2,3,4) - 00:46:603 (4,5,1) - 01:45:630 (3,4,5) - space them manualy by 1.20 please
gurvy's・01:35:089 (1) - ah, 0.50->1.50 is pretty sudden sv change. try to make it more slight, at least 1.30 and 1.25, hm?
i am worrying a bit about the gap between advanced+ and exhaust, getting opinions now..
so i asked around and mostly BNs are fine with the gap but its still recommended to nerf looooong stream parts. if to be exact, we would like you to change:
・00:42:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part to this rhythm
SPOILER(would be also nice if these streams were 0.90x..)
and these 0.90x too 01:09:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:11:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:52:927 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:53:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe.. ・00:10:765 (1,2) - these sliders could be closer to each other
・01:53:251 (1,2) - same as above. could be like this instead:
that should be all. poke me when youre ready