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BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE?

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Topic Starter
Len
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Nuolong
Good luck :o
Will be your first ranked \o/
Topic Starter
Len
^^ おk
Racoon-
Aka
last check i guess


623's

・i'd like to ask you once again to remove the whistle on the end here 01:55:522 - since there is no loud sound in music for this and its pretty loud. i suggested you this before and you said you fixed everything but this is still not fixed p/3588147 o.o


novice

・00:49:359 (3,4) - what about avoiding that overlap with (1) slider by placing (3,4) upper?
・00:56:170 (2) - umm stack with 00:55:197 (4) - 's head?
・00:58:441 (1,2) - try to move these sliders to left to make more vide pattern, atm this part is visually cramped
・try highering OD and HP by 0.5 or 1. the jump to advanced settings is kinda big (3->6)
・what about adding a note here 00:47:251 - 00:53:738 - 00:58:927 - 01:04:116 - 01:50:819 - ? the rhythm in early parts is pretty simple, consisting mainly with just 1/1 sliders, i'd suggest making this difficulty slightly harder by adding there notes, it will feel like a decent normal diff
・01:54:873 (3) - im a bit worrying about this snap, i doesnt sound natural by music beats.. its 1/3 here so the 1/4 reverse slider doesnt really provide a natural responce. i would recommend you either removing the reverse and snap slider end white 01:55:197 - tick; or place 2 circles on those whites instead. you could also add a note on a place where your spinner starts now (if you apply this dont forget to resnap spinner end)


novice+

・00:13:846 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part looks a bit messy, what about making these 00:13:522 (3,4,5) - as triangle and then move around objects a bit?:
SPOILER



(in addition try round 00:14:819 (3) - to make it parallel with00:14:333 (1) - )
and watch out for this triplet 00:15:143 (4,5,6) - , space it manually by 1.20 because distance snap space it to 1.12 \:
・00:51:143 (2,3,4) - try to move these a bit down, away from (1) slider
・00:53:738 - 00:58:927 - 01:04:116 - i would really recommend you to add triplets/reverse sliders here. you can alllow yourself making this diff harder because the difficulty progression after gamu's hard allows you to do so and jump to exhaust just asks you about it. lets try to make this spread even better
・01:01:522 (2,3,4) - 00:46:603 (4,5,1) - 01:45:630 (3,4,5) - space them manualy by 1.20 please


gurvy's

・01:35:089 (1) - ah, 0.50->1.50 is pretty sudden sv change. try to make it more slight, at least 1.30 and 1.25, hm?


i am worrying a bit about the gap between advanced+ and exhaust, getting opinions now..
so i asked around and mostly BNs are fine with the gap but its still recommended to nerf looooong stream parts. if to be exact, we would like you to change:

・00:42:873 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part to this rhythm
SPOILER

(would be also nice if these streams were 0.90x..)
and these 0.90x too 01:09:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:11:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:52:927 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:53:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe..
・00:10:765 (1,2) - these sliders could be closer to each other
・01:53:251 (1,2) - same as above. could be like this instead:


that should be all. poke me when youre ready
Topic Starter
Len

Aka wrote:

last check i guess. dont give kd because i already modded it 4 months ago


novice+
・00:53:738 - 00:58:927 - 01:04:116 - i would really recommend you to add triplets/reverse sliders here. you can alllow yourself making this diff harder because the difficulty progression after gamu's hard allows you to do so and jump to exhaust just asks you about it. lets try to make this spread even better o.o no idea x_x


that should be all. poke me when youre ready
all fixed excpet ^
maybe?
Aka
in easy: aah better to also make this slider end 01:54:224 (3) - with soft sampleset, normal one is loud.. and maybe ending in on 01:55:414 - ?
in novice: 01:55:359 (4) - LOL no, there is 1/3, 1/4 note is totally a non-go ;_; just remove it, its not necessary :(
in gurvy's: 00:11:738 - this part is pretty quiet, even this 00:32:495 - is 75% but its supposed to be used with lower volume. try to make 75% for 00:11:738 - this part and 50% for this 00:32:495 - ;
00:42:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:44:819 (1,2,3,4) - 00:46:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:48:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:49:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 0.90x?


and then call me back =w=
Topic Starter
Len
okayy doneeeee
meii18
Konei
Nara
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Topic Starter
Len
NO PLEASE.
meii18

This Sky wrote:

Why you qualified it ? The same song is in qualified too https://osu.ppy.sh/s/248876
Topic Starter
Len

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

This Sky wrote:

Why you qualified it ? The same song is in qualified too https://osu.ppy.sh/s/248876



lol that troll
CookieNia
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Topic Starter
Len
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Aka
what .. the..
Sieg

Aka wrote:

what .. the..
D:
Reol
Σ(・□・;)
Irreversible
Mh, sorry but I have to take it out of Qualified for now, because https://osu.ppy.sh/s/248876 has recently been ranked. You need to wait 1 week until you can rank this..
Topic Starter
Len
D:
Dawns
plain unfortunate.
Aka
rebubbled

to the next BN: do NOTqualify it before 24th of april, untill BluOxy's set moves to ranked, please
hehe
ez dq ez life
Topic Starter
Len
move to pend
Frobe
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Euny
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아니 왜랭크를 시킨거지ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ..
Topic Starter
Len

Frobe wrote:

님아
왜요
happy623
:?
Racoon-
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Topic Starter
Len

- Racoon - wrote:

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FreshMint
HAHAHAHAHAH WHAT A MISTAKE
captin1
resolved green lines in a few diffs and raised OD of EXHAUST to 7.5 for smoother spread
bluoxy's set is now fully ranked

rip rank cap, be back in 6 hours
Topic Starter
Len
wow
Reol

Fast wrote:

wow
Congratz for your first rank
Racoon-
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Topic Starter
Len

- Racoon - wrote:

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