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TicClick

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TicClick 2015-04-07T17:40:39+00:00

you know you could just wait for him, right?

Euny

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Topic Starter

Euny 2015-04-07T17:46:26+00:00

TicClick wrote:
you know you could just wait for him, right?

he is busy. cause his school. and he already told me, he also want to delete it too. what should i do?

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2015-04-08T09:02:41+00:00

[Insane]
OD가 높아서 하락할때 힘들어요 bpm도 빠른게 아니니 6.5정도 추천

00:06:101 (2) - 앞에 ctrl+g 두번해서 조절점 정리해주시고 1,2랑 담요 잘맞춰주세요

ㅇㅅㅇ

00:09:529 (2) - 이쁘게 1/8 했을때 3째칸 에서 꺽어지게

ㅇㅂㅇ

00:12:101 (1) - 필요없는 조절점을 없애주세요

ㅁㅅㅁ

00:14:672 (1) - x240 y137 담요
00:15:958 (4,5,1,2) - 담요정리~
00:24:101 (1,2) - 담요?

ㅍㅅㅍ

00:27:529 (1,1) - 담요
00:30:529 (2,3) - 두개 담요씌우신거 같은데 슬라 조절점 이용해서 잘 다듬어주세요

ㅎㅅㅎ

00:30:958 (1) - 25도 정도 돌려서 저렇게놓고 ctrl+h했을때 변함없을정도로 다듬어주세요 00:30:529 (2) - 이거랑 담요도 잘맞춰주세요

ㅊㅅㅊ

00:37:815 (5) - 뉴콤
00:41:458 (1,2,3) - 이리듬이 더 좋은거같아요

ㅈㅅㅈ

00:39:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 다음 1에 동선 맞춰서 이게 더 좋은거 같아요 리버스 슬라 가는방향 동선에맞춰 잘 다듬어주세요
00:25:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 여기도 따라 맞춰서 바꾸실꺼면 바꾸서도 좋을것 같습니다

ㅋㅅㅋ

Last edited by Taeyang 2015-04-08T10:57:29+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Euny

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Euny 2015-04-08T09:34:19+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
[Insane]
OD가 높아서 하락할때 힘들어요 bpm도 빠른게 아니니 6.5정도 추천 - 엑스트라가 8이라서 하드플러스랑 사이에 조절하려고 7로 잡았어요!

00:06:101 (2) - 앞에 ctrl+g 두번해서 조절점 정리해주시고 1,2랑 담요 잘맞춰주세요
ㅇㅅㅇ
00:09:529 (2) - 이쁘게 1/8 했을때 3째칸 에서 꺽어지게
ㅇㅂㅇ
00:12:101 (1) - 필요없는 조절점을 없애주세요
ㅁㅅㅁ
00:14:672 (1) - x240 y137 담요
00:15:958 (4,5,1,2) - 담요정리~
00:24:101 (1,2) - 담요?
ㅍㅅㅍ
00:27:529 (1,1) - 담요
00:30:529 (2,3) - 두개 담요씌우신거 같은데 슬라 조절점 이용해서 잘 다듬어주세요
ㅎㅅㅎ
00:30:958 (1) - 25도 정도 돌려서 저렇게놓고 ctrl+h했을때 변함없을정도로 다듬어주세요 00:30:529 (2) - 이거랑 담요도 잘맞춰주세요 - 이거는 제가 나름 규칙성있게 놓은배치라 우선은두고, 말씀하신 슬라는 정리좀 했어요!

ㅈㅅㅈ
00:37:815 (5) - 뉴콤
ㅊㅅㅊ
00:41:458 (1,2,3) - 이리듬이 더 좋은거같아요

00:39:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 다음 1에 동선 맞춰서 이게 더 좋은거 같아요 리버스 슬라 가는방향 동선에맞춰 잘 다듬어주세요
00:25:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 여기도 따라 맞춰서 바꾸실꺼면 바꾸서도 좋을것 같습니다
ㅋㅅㅋ

하고 나머지는 다 고쳤어요~ 태양님 너무 고마워요 ㅎㅎ 진짜♥

Alarido

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Alarido 2015-04-08T23:29:15+00:00

TicClick wrote:
00:23:297 (3) on Alarido's Hard is still not snapped properly.

► Now it is.

@Euny > http://puu.sh/h6GFj/2efb8ee98a.osu

Att.

P. S.: For the school I lost AnreFM too ;'( </3

Euny

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Topic Starter

Euny 2015-04-08T23:58:27+00:00

Alarido wrote:
TicClick wrote:
00:23:297 (3) on Alarido's Hard is still not snapped properly.

► Now it is.

@Euny > http://puu.sh/h6GFj/2efb8ee98a.osu

Att.

P. S.: For the school I lost AnreFM too ;'( </3

yeah, we should be understand.
cause they have to focus on the academic.
i'll update your diff and fix offset after my working done.
thanks ala♥

Euny

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Topic Starter

Euny 2015-04-09T10:21:46+00:00

changed offset. ( +10ms )

and update Alarido's diff.

mod continue for insane

Dark Fang

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Dark Fang 2015-04-09T14:30:50+00:00

@ TicClick : i'm so sorry for that. but i'm really busy until 2015/11/12, and enough busy now. sure.

Euny

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Topic Starter

Euny 2015-04-09T14:37:09+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
@ TicClick : i'm so sorry for that. but i'm really busy until 2015/11/12, and enough busy now. sure.

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

check 'Fucking Calendar' on his user page

xD... and cheer up fang♥

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2015-04-09T20:23:33+00:00

HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- Easy :

00:13:396 (2) - You should change his direction like this http://puu.sh/h7stq/13077a5b0f.jpg to get a movement more intuitive with 00:14:253 (3) -
00:23:253 (2,3) - You could blanket this one too.
00:29:682 (2) - I think you could curve this one to get the flow more intuitive like this http://puu.sh/h7tzi/b384d99b12.jpg.
00:36:111 - NC here right ?

- Normal :

00:32:682 (1) - What happend with this slider ? You killed your blanket by using 2 anchor points. Use only one pls.
00:33:539 (2) - Same as above.
00:39:539 (1,2) - Make both shape the same. This will improve aesthetic for your map.

- Hard :

00:13:396 (1) - CTRL+G it. You shouldn't force this kind of transition with 00:13:825 (1) - but just let the end of slider continue with the next one. It play better.
00:14:682 (2,3) - The movement you start with 00:14:682 (2) - makes the flow unnatural. Move them like this to have a flow more coherent and still keep a good pattern with 00:15:968 (2) - http://puu.sh/h7Io4/65308340ef.jpg.
00:22:825 (2,3) - If you really want to blanket these, use a simple curve for 00:23:468 (3) - .
00:25:611 (4,1) - Failed blanket.
00:29:896 (1) - Move the end by 45° to the right, to get a better flow with 00:30:325 (2) - .
00:32:682 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:22:825 (2,3) -.
00:45:151 (1,2) - ^
00:47:520 (2,3) - ^

- Alarido's Hard+ :

Why not call it Alarido's Hyper ?
00:24:968 (3) - NC for SV change.
00:28:396 (2) - ^

- Insane :

00:18:539 (2) - I know you want to blanket but this make flow with newt slider really bad. I suggest you blanket with 00:18:111 (1) - instead like this http://puu.sh/h7JjI/4354628f6e.jpg.
00:47:520 - You should start decrease volume here, before the music is still loud. Or just decrease by 5% and then 10 but not 20% this is too much.

- EiNess's Extra :

00:12:111 (1,1) - Blanket a little off.
00:12:968 (1) - Better CTRL+J to make the movement with 00:13:396 (1) - better.
00:24:111 (1) - CTRL+G maybe. When I play it, this looks more logic for me.

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~

Alarido

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Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-04-09T23:57:31+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- Alarido's Hard+ :
Why not call it Alarido's Hyper ? ► Because of p/3997750
00:24:968 (3) - NC for SV change. ► For this, a NC should be made on 00:25:376 (4) too, so don't.
00:28:396 (2) - ^
► There's no SV change here.

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~

@Euny No changes.

@Nozhomi Thx

[ Zzz ]

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Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2015-04-10T07:34:19+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
- Hard :
00:13:396 (1) - CTRL+G it. You shouldn't force this kind of transition with 00:13:825 (1) - but just let the end of slider continue with the next one. It play better.
00:14:682 (2,3) - The movement you start with 00:14:682 (2) - makes the flow unnatural. Move them like this to have a flow more coherent and still keep a good pattern with 00:15:968 (2) - http://puu.sh/h7Io4/65308340ef.jpg.
00:22:825 (2,3) - If you really want to blanket these, use a simple curve for 00:23:468 (3) - .
00:25:611 (4,1) - Failed blanket.
00:29:896 (1) - Move the end by 45° to the right, to get a better flow with 00:30:325 (2) - .
00:32:682 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:22:825 (2,3) -.
00:45:151 (1,2) - ^
00:47:520 (2,3) - ^

Thank you~ Nozhomi

All Fix~ !!

Done!

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Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2015-04-10T08:44:26+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- Easy :
00:13:396 (2) - You should change his direction like this http://puu.sh/h7stq/13077a5b0f.jpg to get a movement more intuitive with 00:14:253 (3) - -little bit changed thanks
00:23:253 (2,3) - You could blanket this one too.
00:29:682 (2) - I think you could curve this one to get the flow more intuitive like this http://puu.sh/h7tzi/b384d99b12.jpg.
00:36:111 - NC here right ?

- Normal :
00:32:682 (1) - What happend with this slider ? You killed your blanket by using 2 anchor points. Use only one pls. - yeah, i dont using 4point xD.. but its for blanket.
00:33:539 (2) - Same as above.
00:39:539 (1,2) - Make both shape the same. This will improve aesthetic for your map.

- Insane :
00:18:539 (2) - I know you want to blanket but this make flow with newt slider really bad. I suggest you blanket with 00:18:111 (1) - instead like this http://puu.sh/h7JjI/4354628f6e.jpg.
00:47:520 - You should start decrease volume here, before the music is still loud. Or just decrease by 5% and then 10 but not 20% this is too much.

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~

fix them all with out red one. thanks > < Nozhomi.....♥

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-04-10T13:56:07+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- EiNess's Extra :
00:12:111 (1,1) - Blanket a little off. // ok
00:12:968 (1) - Better CTRL+J to make the movement with 00:13:396 (1) - better. // not bad now I think.
00:24:111 (1) - CTRL+G maybe. When I play it, this looks more logic for me. // not for me. sorry Q^Q

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~

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thanks mod~

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Sonico Makaron 2015-04-12T11:03:30+00:00

Hello~

[Insane]
00:13:396 (2,3) - How about add soft whistle at the beginner sliders?
00:15:539 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Remove NC and 00:15:968 (1) - add NC here, also 00:16:396 (1) - Remove NC here. Thats NC fits more well imo
00:20:039 (2) - Citrl+g and 00:20:467 (4) - this too for better flow
00:29:253 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - same thing as 00:15:539 (1,2,3)

thats all~
good luck ^^

Euny

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Euny 2015-04-12T11:15:58+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
Hello~ heyyyyyyy soni♥

[Insane]
00:13:396 (2,3) - How about add soft whistle at the beginner sliders? - sure
00:15:539 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Remove NC and 00:15:968 (1) - add NC here, also 00:16:396 (1) - Remove NC here. Thats NC fits more well imo - okay, i accept and changed that nc
00:20:039 (2) - Citrl+g and 00:20:467 (4) - this too for better flow - i love this more xD..
00:29:253 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - same thing as 00:15:539 (1,2,3) - kay

thats all~
good luck ^^

was nice mod really thanks friend♥

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2015-04-14T12:51:44+00:00

nice Insane diff! GL~

Last edited by HabiHolic 2015-04-14T14:25:10+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Euny

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Euny 2015-04-14T13:42:44+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
nice Insane diff! GL~

고마워 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2015-04-14T14:35:24+00:00

[Easy]

00:09:539 (1,2) - 쿵짝 박자를 표현하시는 상황에서 뉴콤보를 "짝"에 넣으시는 것은 어색한 처리입니다. 콤보를 00:10:396 부터 시작하셔서 단일 콤보 만드시는 게 더 음악에 맞는 설정입니다.
00:29:253 (1,2) - 이거도 콤보를 음이 급격히 강해지는 (2) 부터 시작하시는게 더 어울립니다.
00:43:572 - 여기에 박자가 존재하는 것은 어색합니다. 악기 소리, 가사 어디와도 어울리지 않네요. (1,2,3)에 ctrl+H,J 패턴을 넣기 위해 억지로 만들어진 느낌이 듭니다. 00:44:098 여기 부터 시작하는 1/1 슬라이더 하나로 대체하셔서 여백을 넣으시는 게 적합한 박자가 될 것입니다.

[Normal]

00:25:825 (3) - 원래 뉴콤 스팟 아닌가요?

[Zzz's Hard]

그냥 코멘트입니다만 00:13:825 (2) 이런 류의 Bezier 슬라이더 작도하실 때 처음과 두 번째 점이 너무 가까워서 슬라이더 모양이 시작점과 끝점으로 너무 눌린듯한 느낌이 들어서 아쉬움이 남습니다.

[Alarido's Hard+]

00:36:968 (3) - Please add a New combo! The distance is inconsistent with 00:36:111 (1,2), and it can lead to a confusion since an 3/8 rhythm is not something used often here. Also the zigzag pattern of 00:37:182 (4,5) gives more demand for a better readability which can be enhanced with your NC usage.

[Insane]

Slider tick은 1로 맞춰주세요. 슬라이더 이후 1/4 연타가 되는 경우가 많이 사용되었는데 이 슬라이더가 끝나기 전에 들어있는 틱 소리가 많이 어색합니다. 틱 없애는 게 더 깔끔한 맵입니다.
00:04:396 (2,2) - 1/4 더 늘리셔서 가사 "왜"에 딱 맞게 슬라이더가 끝나도록 설정해 주세요.
00:25:182 (2,3) - 음악과 맞지 않은 무리수 점프입니다. 플레이하기 매우 부자연스러워서 지적합니다. 음악의 변동이 심하지 않은 부분이어서 굳이 이렇게 큰 점프가 필요하지 않으며 점프를 넣는다면 가볍게 넣을만한 부분입니다.
00:41:994 - 00:42:125 - 드럼 소리에 맞춰서 넣으신 연타로 보이는데 이에 호응할 수 있는 드럼 힛사를 추가해 주시기 바랍니다. 안그러면 그냥 오버매핑으로만 느껴질 뿐입니다.
00:47:520 - 음량 감소가 너무 빨리 이루어졌습니다. 음악에 비해 힛사가 잘 들리지 않습니다. 00:48:572 여기서 부터 음량 감소 처리해 주시면 충분합니다.

Euny

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Euny 2015-04-14T15:32:27+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Easy]
00:09:539 (1,2) - 쿵짝 박자를 표현하시는 상황에서 뉴콤보를 "짝"에 넣으시는 것은 어색한 처리입니다. 콤보를 00:10:396 부터 시작하셔서 단일 콤보 만드시는 게 더 음악에 맞는 설정입니다.
00:29:253 (1,2) - 이거도 콤보를 음이 급격히 강해지는 (2) 부터 시작하시는게 더 어울립니다.
00:43:572 - 여기에 박자가 존재하는 것은 어색합니다. 악기 소리, 가사 어디와도 어울리지 않네요. (1,2,3)에 ctrl+H,J 패턴을 넣기 위해 억지로 만들어진 느낌이 듭니다. 00:44:098 여기 부터 시작하는 1/1 슬라이더 하나로 대체하셔서 여백을 넣으시는 게 적합한 박자가 될 것입니다.
[Normal]
00:25:825 (3) - 원래 뉴콤 스팟 아닌가요?
[Insane]
Slider tick은 1로 맞춰주세요. 슬라이더 이후 1/4 연타가 되는 경우가 많이 사용되었는데 이 슬라이더가 끝나기 전에 들어있는 틱 소리가 많이 어색합니다. 틱 없애는 게 더 깔끔한 맵입니다.
00:04:396 (2,2) - 1/4 더 늘리셔서 가사 "왜"에 딱 맞게 슬라이더가 끝나도록 설정해 주세요.
00:25:182 (2,3) - 음악과 맞지 않은 무리수 점프입니다. 플레이하기 매우 부자연스러워서 지적합니다. 음악의 변동이 심하지 않은 부분이어서 굳이 이렇게 큰 점프가 필요하지 않으며 점프를 넣는다면 가볍게 넣을만한 부분입니다.
00:41:994 - 00:42:125 - 드럼 소리에 맞춰서 넣으신 연타로 보이는데 이에 호응할 수 있는 드럼 힛사를 추가해 주시기 바랍니다. 안그러면 그냥 오버매핑으로만 느껴질 뿐입니다.
00:47:520 - 음량 감소가 너무 빨리 이루어졌습니다. 음악에 비해 힛사가 잘 들리지 않습니다. 00:48:572 여기서 부터 음량 감소 처리해 주시면 충분합니다.

다 고쳤어용~ 업로드하면 한번만 더 확인해주세요 너무너무감사합니다 손닉님

[ Zzz ]

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[ Zzz ] 2015-04-14T17:18:35+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Zzz's Hard]
그냥 코멘트입니다만 00:13:825 (2) 이런 류의 Bezier 슬라이더 작도하실 때 처음과 두 번째 점이 너무 가까워서 슬라이더 모양이 시작점과 끝점으로 너무 눌린듯한 느낌이 들어서 아쉬움이 남습니다.

ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

Tenseki

803 posts

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Tenseki 2015-04-14T18:28:00+00:00

it has a wrong on diff's name of eINess
plz change to eINess's Extra

Euny

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Euny 2015-04-14T18:34:42+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
it has a wrong on diff's name of eINess
plz change to eINess's Extra

no its correct xD....
check his other gd name.

Alarido

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Joined September 2012

Alarido 2015-04-14T21:40:56+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Alarido's Hard+]
00:36:968 (3) - Please add a New combo! The distance is inconsistent with 00:36:111 (1,2), and it can lead to a confusion since an 3/8 rhythm is not something used often here. Also the zigzag pattern of 00:37:182 (4,5) gives more demand for a better readability which can be enhanced with your NC usage.

@Sonnyc all done > Thx

@Euny > http://puu.sh/he90k/d19b44cf36.osu

@Lally > Read my pm pls

Euny

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Euny 2015-04-14T22:08:54+00:00

everything is done!