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orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-03-19T00:31:02+00:00

Just some point out and some suggestion, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me.

[General]
- Add Tag ignorethis to all of your diff
- Artist is Nekomata Master 猫叉 is Nekomata
Full Submission with Title/Artist Change
- I prefer that the offset all diff should be the same, Then set 2000offset to other diff too

[Hyper]
01:37:744 (11) - spacing? or new combo
01:52:000 - this timing selection seem useless?

[Another]
01:37:958 (10) - new combo?

Starrr ~

skranger

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Topic Starter

skranger 2010-03-19T01:10:48+00:00

orioncomet wrote:
Just some point out and some suggestion, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me.

[General]
- Add Tag ignorethis to all of your diff
- Artist is Nekomata Master 猫叉 is Nekomata
Full Submission with Title/Artist Change
- I prefer that the offset all diff should be the same, Then set 2000offset to other diff too

[Hyper]
01:37:744 (11) - spacing? or new combo
01:52:000 - this timing selection seem useless?

[Another]
01:37:958 (10) - new combo?

Starrr ~

All fixed.
Thank you very much

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2010-03-19T02:42:51+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
[Ignorethis]

• Add kiai

No, I hate kiai time. Thanks.

uranuss8600

99 posts

Joined July 2009

uranuss8600 2010-03-20T06:32:42+00:00

star

mod in qq
wish u will finish it soon

Zekira

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Joined September 2008

Zekira 2010-03-26T12:37:43+00:00

[Normal]
00:32:638 (7) - New Combo
Actually, quite a number of the beat patterns here really sound weird.
01:31:361 (1,3) - swap NCs
01:34:339 (1,2) - ^
01:45:403 (1,3) - swap NCs?
01:50:084 (6) - NC

[Hyper]
00:19:660 (1,4) - swap NCs
00:26:681 (1,3) - ^

...actually in general the only problems I have with the maps at the moment are the New Combos, except in ignore's diff.

skranger

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Topic Starter

skranger 2010-03-27T20:43:16+00:00

Zekira wrote:
[Normal]
00:32:638 (7) - New Combo
Actually, quite a number of the beat patterns here really sound weird.
01:31:361 (1,3) - swap NCs
01:34:339 (1,2) - ^
01:45:403 (1,3) - swap NCs?
01:50:084 (6) - NC

[Hyper]
00:19:660 (1,4) - swap NCs
00:26:681 (1,3) - ^

...actually in general the only problems I have with the maps at the moment are the New Combos, except in ignore's diff.

All fixed. Thank you very much.

Shulin

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Joined August 2009

Shulin 2010-03-30T18:40:13+00:00

General:

-- Remove "Beatmania IIDX" from tags.
-- You have two .osb files, delete both and full submit.
-- Start kiai at 01:42:425 looks much better.

Normal:

Kiai is different to the other difficulties, starts 01:41:148.

Hard:

00:11:362 (2,3) - Well these are a bit too far down screen imo, they look bad in game move them up a couple of squares (3 or 4 maybe?)
01:37:319 (10,1) - Anti jump D:
01:40:936 -- Start kiai on a beat.

!ignorethis:

01:40:936 Kiai looks weird starting here.

Hyper:

00:32:745 (2,3) - Jump here is a little confusing.
01:22:639 (4,5,6) - Raise 5 a bit imo so it's like the rest of your triples.
01:40:936 -- Kiai looks weird starting here, start on a beat, or change kiai like I suggested?
01:54:340 (5) - Maybe move this so it's more visible?

Nice maps overall

~ Star.

skranger

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Topic Starter

skranger 2010-03-30T21:05:10+00:00

Shulin wrote:
General:

-- Remove "Beatmania IIDX" from tags.
-- You have two .osb files, delete both and full submit.
-- Start kiai at 01:42:425 looks much better.

Normal:

Kiai is different to the other difficulties, starts 01:41:148.

Hard:

00:11:362 (2,3) - Well these are a bit too far down screen imo, they look bad in game move them up a couple of squares (3 or 4 maybe?)
01:37:319 (10,1) - Anti jump D:
01:40:936 -- Start kiai on a beat.

!ignorethis:

01:40:936 Kiai looks weird starting here.

Hyper:

00:32:745 (2,3) - Jump here is a little confusing.
01:22:639 (4,5,6) - Raise 5 a bit imo so it's like the rest of your triples.
01:40:936 -- Kiai looks weird starting here, start on a beat, or change kiai like I suggested?
01:54:340 (5) - Maybe move this so it's more visible?

Nice maps overall
~ Star.

Fixed
thank you for modding

ccbp

411 posts

Joined August 2009

ccbp 2010-03-31T00:26:12+00:00

star

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-04-07T10:51:49+00:00

~Normal~
01:57:743 (1) - silence it

~Hyper~
01:56:255 (1) - silence it
01:57:957 (1) - ^

~!ignore this~
01:59:554 (1) - silence the hitsound

~Another~
00:25:724 (9) - move left & up 1 grid (Lv3)

+Star

Vanmonky

986 posts

Joined June 2009

Vanmonky 2010-04-08T09:47:03+00:00

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Consider compressing the video file size?
2. There's a .osb file in the map's folder. Remove it since you don't use it.

[Normal]
-- Decrease the overall difficulty to 4th level or lower.
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes and claps.
-- The half speed sections don't make any sense to me.
00:14:340 (1) - Move it a little farther from (6). They look like 1/2 stream with the current distance.
00:39:446 (1,2,3,4) - Move them one tiny grid right.
01:02:425 - Add break here. Following 01:39:446.
01:12:212 (3,4) - Move them one tiny grid up. Check the rest notes, make them symmetry.
01:21:999 (1) - Move one or two 1/4 tick(s). Choose one. Noth are okay.
01:44:552 (8) - Add new combo. [?]

[Hyper]
-- I recomend you to decrease the overall difficulty one level. The current overall difficulty is not fit to the song IMO.
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes and claps.
-- The half speed sections don't make any sense to me.
00:40:298 (10) - Move one tiny grid left.
00:58:170 (1) - Move it to right under the end of the slider.
01:00:298 (10) - Move it farther from (9), please.
01:39:021 (2) - Move it to right under the end of the slider.
01:44:553 (8) - Move it to the (5) position.

[!ignore this]
-- I don't like the "!" mark on the diff's name.
-- Some parts are overmapped but I think they are okay.
00:38:384 (3) - It's not snapped. [!]
00:38:597 (5) - ^ [!]
01:15:831 (6) - ^ [!]
01:52:214 (9) - ^ [!]

[Another]
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes and claps.
00:17:320 (2) - Move it farther from (1).
01:09:022 (9) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
01:22:745 (5) - Move one tiny grid up.
01:50:937 (10) - Add new combo. [?]

Star.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-04-12T13:14:57+00:00

STAR ~

yaya

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yaya 2010-04-28T22:55:44+00:00

Hyper:
刚开始的声音太小了。加一点
00:17:319 (2) - 建议声音从这里开始变大。
01:00:298 (10) - 箭头怎么回事。。
01:01:149 (12) - ^
01:22:637 (11) - 改成note
01:22:850 (12) - 加一个2拍的slider
01:28:808 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8275 这样改
01:41:149 (1) - 从这开始声音又小了。。

Normal有点难了。3星左右。

skranger

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Topic Starter

skranger 2010-04-29T12:27:01+00:00

yaya wrote:
Hyper:
刚开始的声音太小了。加一点
00:17:319 (2) - 建议声音从这里开始变大。
01:00:298 (10) - 箭头怎么回事。。
01:01:149 (12) - ^
01:22:637 (11) - 改成note
01:22:850 (12) - 加一个2拍的slider
01:28:808 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8275 这样改
01:41:149 (1) - 从这开始声音又小了。。

Normal有点难了。3星左右。

all fixed. thanks