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Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI

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pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk

Meyrink wrote:

Also wierd Thing ! Why when i try to play *:･٩(´・ω・)۶*:･'s Insane it give me this error ?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2883351
it's because I map with default skin and play with another skin so I changed the settings. I'll change it back to default when it gets bubbled
Meyrink
728 posts
Joined February 2014
Meyrink

pkk wrote:

it's because I map with default skin and play with another skin so I changed the settings. I'll change it back to default when it gets bubbled
Actually u can use this option to map with default skin ! but i'll play with ur current skin o,o ! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2884770
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Aerous
Another m4m from your queue :DD !

Extra : Such a nice diff !
00:00:736 (1) - Wanna blanket this with the previous note ? http://puu.sh/gzryv/b912657d75.jpg
00:06:402 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you should lower the distance just a bit?
00:10:402 (2) - Not stacked properly with the tail ! Uncheck grid snap to fix this ~
00:11:402 (1) - Delete this note and start the spinner here instead?
00:13:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the stream shouldn't go downwards. Just an opinion !
00:21:236 (2) - Rotate this a bit ? http://puu.sh/gzrIw/57551c3c17.jpg
00:22:902 (2) - Blanket this ? With 00:22:069 (1) -
00:24:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Replace with slider? The stream is fine though.
00:25:569 (2) - Move this here : x 424 y:256 ? So it blankets with the previous slider
00:48:569 (1) - Switch this to a double note ?
00:49:236 (1) - Move this here ? http://puu.sh/gzrTK/43b5449d6a.jpg
00:58:736 (1) - Nice :D !
01:04:736 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Lower the distance just a bit : D?
01:09:402 (1) CTRL + G
01:24:569 (1) - CTRL + G

pkkkkkk's insane :
00:05:736 (3) - Ayyyy wanna ctrl + g ?
00:06:402 (2,4) - Pick either one and blanket it with uhhhhhhhh 00:06:069 (1) -
00:08:736 (1,2,3) - You know , I would unstack these for like mad bank idk
00:14:569 (2) - lol move this to x:340 / y:64
00:17:291 (3,4) - u troll , stack these
00:23:736 (2) - Move this lower or blanket this
00:27:069 (5) - This looks sexy . http://puu.sh/gzshj/6cf38ca202.jpg
00:28:736 (4) - whyyyy u end it hereee
00:34:402 (2) ?!?!?!? http://puu.sh/gzsk6/a726cb6b5f.jpg
00:59:069 (2) - ctrl + g onegai
01:03:069 (5) - Senpai plz http://puu.sh/gzsoi/021ad592a2.jpg
01:13:736 (4) - How about this position ? http://puu.sh/gzsqy/3bf031fe97.jpg
01:17:069 (2) - ctrl + ggwp
01:25:736 (3,4,5,6,7) - wanna do dis ? http://puu.sh/gzsuR/c2699b3759.jpg

Hard :
00:03:420 (1) - Use some slider art so it blankets with the previous slider ? I suck at it tho :( http://puu.sh/gzsAn/f831919ad0.jpg
00:19:069 (5) - Want to try this ? http://puu.sh/gzsMY/c85f67ad58.jpg
00:48:069 (2) - Curve the other way ?
01:05:069 (2,3,4) - idk , maybe should use sliders and not repeat ones? Like @ 01:07:736 (2,3,4) -
01:12:736 (1) - Move this to here ? http://puu.sh/gzsK0/88d24bdb7d.jpg
Such a clean and nice diff !

Normal :
00:14:568 (2) - Stack this properly ! Take out grid snap
00:33:902 (4) - ^ same thing
00:39:402 (3) - Nazi but fix this blanket ? http://puu.sh/gzt0t/bf5c36565b.jpg
00:58:236 (2) - Move this under 1 and not above it
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk

Aerous wrote:

pkkkkkk's insane :
00:05:736 (3) - Ayyyy wanna ctrl + g ? I think it looks sexy the way it is
00:06:402 (2,4) - Pick either one and blanket it with uhhhhhhhh 00:06:069 (1) - I think it looks better without blanket
00:08:736 (1,2,3) - You know , I would unstack these for like mad bank idk since the vocal is pretty much all one pitch/tone, I think having it with really low DS fits
00:14:569 (2) - lol move this to x:340 / y:64 moved it somewhere around there
00:17:291 (3,4) - u troll , stack these lol umad
00:23:736 (2) - Move this lower or blanket this I like the way this looks and it plays well
00:27:069 (5) - This looks sexy . http://puu.sh/gzshj/6cf38ca202.jpg while this does look really nice, I put (5) the way it is so the flow from (4) goes down then curves upwards to match the emphasized vocal
00:28:736 (4) - whyyyy u end it hereee idk what you mean by this, there's a circle here
00:34:402 (2) ?!?!?!? http://puu.sh/gzsk6/a726cb6b5f.jpg I really like my current flow
00:59:069 (2) - ctrl + g onegai nah I like having both of them face the same direction
01:03:069 (5) - Senpai plz http://puu.sh/gzsoi/021ad592a2.jpg again, that looks nice but the current spacing is better imo
01:13:736 (4) - How about this position ? http://puu.sh/gzsqy/3bf031fe97.jpg this is a really nice suggestion, but I wanted the two sliders to face the same way, then having the jump between (4) and (1) to emphasize the vocal
01:17:069 (2) - ctrl + ggwp more like ctrl+ff@20
01:25:736 (3,4,5,6,7) - wanna do dis ? http://puu.sh/gzsuR/c2699b3759.jpg that downwards movement between (2) and (3) might not flow as well as the current position where it just goes straight up. Since it's a 1/4 slider and all idk
Thanks for modding Aerou$!!!

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TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
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Source:Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
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253,290,60236,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
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Ozato Fumika

Meyrink wrote:

Hi Mom ! M4M mod ! these all suggestions ! wtf why modding high diffs is hard for me ! ;w;

General
  1. Combo Colors Is Diffirent In Pk's Insane ! i think maby you should do same in your diffs cuz Green and yellow don't really fit with the bg fixed
  2. how about makin kiai in 2 parts ? 01:10:069 - nahhhhhh
  3. Why there's a video in the folder since it's not used in any diff ;w; ? Offset is 35 ok
  4. are u sure about using sv change in easy ? yes

Easy
  1. 00:06:069 (1) - why The Whistle in the head with finish ? it's kinda usless since finish is louder ok u did that in all the song ! xD !
    u maybe forgot it here ! 00:19:402 (1) - ok
  2. 00:26:402 (4) - Nazi ! Are all those points rlly necessary? http://puu.sh/gxK3J/a0d0e70b5c.jpg yes
  3. 00:45:402 (4) - head Remove Clap and put Finish , like in normal ok
  4. 00:54:069 (1) - ^ nah
  5. 00:38:402 (2) - ! this slider why u just make it like ? 00:35:736 (2) - cuz it looks rlly wierd ok
  6. 00:58:069 (1) - Remove Finish it's really noisy ! and also i don't hear any cymbal in the song there ok

Normal
  1. 00:02:736 (1,2) - Switch NC nah
  2. 00:04:736 (3) - just remove the NC here nah
  3. 00:58:069 (1,2,3) - Same as easy ! And wow there's even whistle in normal gg ! keep only claps it's more comfortable ok
  4. 00:58:402 (3,1) - This Stack May Cause A problem since there's vocal here 00:58:736 - ! novice players will pobably think it's for the vocal and click fast ! then cause miss RIP better learn to read approaching circles if they want to play hard diff
  5. 01:23:236 (6,1) - GG a Sudden Double at the end ! use http://puu.sh/gxMNG/33bae64a55.jpg ! or http://puu.sh/gxMPQ/26f57b16a2.jpg or anything it's fine

Hard
  1. 00:02:069 (1) - why nc ? cuz new beat
  2. 00:04:069 (2) - This is just a personal rhythm suggestion ! http://puu.sh/gxNa0/0eeb014c32.jpg nah
  3. 00:08:402 (1,2) - Switch NC ok
  4. 00:09:402 (1,3) - ^ ok
  5. 00:10:152 (1) - why here's a spinner and it's mapped in normal ? because of recovery time
  6. 00:50:069 (3) - a new combo fits good with this sound here ! imo and u can remove nc from this one 00:50:736 (1) - yup
  7. 00:54:736 (1) - remove nc ! ok
  8. 00:56:069 (1) - ^ ok
  9. 00:58:069 (1,2,3) - Again ;w; ! Remove Whistle and Finish ok

Extra
  1. 01:26:152 (1) - This spinner is not necessary imo , since all difs end here ! 01:26:069 - idk lol

good luck o/
tyty
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika

Aerous wrote:

Another m4m from your queue :DD !

Extra : Such a nice diff !
00:00:736 (1) - Wanna blanket this with the previous note ? http://puu.sh/gzryv/b912657d75.jpg
00:06:402 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think you should lower the distance just a bit?
00:10:402 (2) - Not stacked properly with the tail ! Uncheck grid snap to fix this ~ k
00:11:402 (1) - Delete this note and start the spinner here instead? nah
00:13:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the stream shouldn't go downwards. Just an opinion ! nah
00:21:236 (2) - Rotate this a bit ? http://puu.sh/gzrIw/57551c3c17.jpg nah
00:22:902 (2) - Blanket this ? With 00:22:069 (1) - nah
00:24:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Replace with slider? The stream is fine though. nah
00:25:569 (2) - Move this here : x 424 y:256 ? So it blankets with the previous slider nah
00:48:569 (1) - Switch this to a double note ? nah
00:49:236 (1) - Move this here ? http://puu.sh/gzrTK/43b5449d6a.jpg ok
00:58:736 (1) - Nice :D ! tyty
01:04:736 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Lower the distance just a bit : D? nah
01:09:402 (1) CTRL + G nah
01:24:569 (1) - CTRL + G nah

Hard :
00:03:420 (1) - Use some slider art so it blankets with the previous slider ? I suck at it tho :( http://puu.sh/gzsAn/f831919ad0.jpg lol that's horrible
00:19:069 (5) - Want to try this ? http://puu.sh/gzsMY/c85f67ad58.jpg nah
00:48:069 (2) - Curve the other way ? nah
01:05:069 (2,3,4) - idk , maybe should use sliders and not repeat ones? Like @ 01:07:736 (2,3,4) - nah
01:12:736 (1) - Move this to here ? http://puu.sh/gzsK0/88d24bdb7d.jpg nah
Such a clean and nice diff !

Normal :
00:14:568 (2) - Stack this properly ! Take out grid snap ok
00:33:902 (4) - ^ same thing ok
00:39:402 (3) - Nazi but fix this blanket ? http://puu.sh/gzt0t/bf5c36565b.jpg not meant to be blanket
00:58:236 (2) - Move this under 1 and not above it ok


tyty :)
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
흠....

General
  1. mp3 파일 보니까 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/262547 이맵에서 가져온거같던데 오프셋 다르네요. -597 님맵 -587 kw 맵 체크하세요. 전체적으로 +10 하면될듯
Easy
  1. 01:03:402 (3) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 휘슬추가
Normal
  1. 00:58:069 (1,2,3) - 그냥 개인적으로 심히 걱정되는부분인데 플레이어로써 감이긴한데, 갑작스런 1/2 디스탄스의 변화와 1/2 슬라이후 나오는 저 서클들을 초보자들이 생각하고 쳐내기에 좀 어렵지않을까생각되네요 앞쪽패턴에 1/1가 꾸준히 나오는구간 패턴상으로나 BPM상으로나 좀그렇네요. 제3자입장이서봐본다면 저렇게하느니 차라리 겹친다거나 또는 반복슬라로 두는편이 가장 좋네요.
pk's Insane
  1. 00:17:291 (3) - snap is wrong it's not 1/6 just 1/4, if you think 1/6 or something then first check offset and you really should listen the song carefully again
  2. 00:07:635 (2) - same here it should be 1/3
Extra
  1. AR9.4는 빠른감이없지않아있네요, 9.3이 좋아보입니다. 맵의 전체적인 패턴이나 곡으로 따져봤을때도 9.4쓸만한부분은아닌듯
  2. 00:24:079 (1,1) - 이부분은 분명하게 디스탄스를 좀 줄여야한다고 생각이드네요, 슬라이전 패턴 동선 고려해봤을때 충분히 리딩후 쳐낼수있는 동선도아니고 좀더 저기가 1/4라고 읽힐수있게끔 상황을 만들어야된다고 생각합니다.
  3. 00:49:968 (3,1) - 여기도마찬가지로 디스탄스좀 줄여서 좀더 readable 하게 조정하는게 좋네요. 엑스트라난이도라고 저렇게 재끼면좀그런듯 더군다나 1/8 앞쪽 노트랑 1/2 갭인것도아니고 충분히 플레이에 불편한 부분과 더불어 좋은건아니네요. 예로들면 저거 저렇게두면 http://puu.sh/gE5XW/c55b2fd575.jpg 이렇게 둔거랑 똑같은거
  4. 01:06:847 (2) - 아무리들어봐도 이부분은 노트들어갈자리는 아닌거같네요. 백그라운드소리도 그렇고 저기에 아무소리도없 그냥 1/2에 빨간틱에 클로즈햇소리말곤 아니면 스카이스타처럼 http://puu.sh/gE68t/6f496e1966.jpg 이렇게 그어버리는게 어떤가요.
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
Fixed snap and some hitsounds, thanks for modding kp ;)

SPOILER
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216,230,42902,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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260,259,44236,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
노말꺼는 5난이도 전부다 그부분 난이도를 늘렸기 때문에 괜찮다고 봅니다. 스택하면 임팩트가 없어서 별로네요

엑스트라 처음거도 충분히 리딩 된다고 생각됩니다.

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HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
흠....... 코펭님이 버블하시면 불러주세요
pkk
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Joined November 2013
pkk
rank my first insane gd already you skrub mom pls *:･٩(´・ω・)۶*:･
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
as requested


  • General
  1. just preview time unsnapped here lol


  • Easy
  1. 00:12:743 - somehow i was a little bit suprise with the volume hitsound here, try 55%? it feels better for me at least ;-;
  2. 00:21:076 (2) - just a tiny spacing error with 0,93x here
  3. 00:28:743 (3) - just nazi, imo the flow a little bit weird if we make a straight slider here whenever previous and next sliders are curvy, try make this slider a little bit has curve? http://puu.sh/gXDBk.jpg
  4. 01:19:409 (1,3) - actually the NC a little bit inconsistent here, should be swap nc and then 01:22:076 (1) - remove nc if we follow the music and vocal's power here
  5. 01:26:076 - the volume sounds too loud too here, try use 50% instead?
  6. great~


  • Normal
  1. 00:15:909 (5) - just a tiny spacing error again (0,89x)
  2. 00:19:909 (2) - i think the whistle should be on tail instead of head to keep consistent with 00:14:743 -
  3. 00:25:076 (2) - and nazi just flip the slider so the curve will be going to leftward instead, it will give more natural flow in my sight but just my taste i guess o-o
  4. 00:30:576 (2) - just a tiny spacing error (0,88x)
  5. 00:33:243 (2) - ^ (0,93x)
  6. 00:36:576 (3) - ^ (1,11x)
  7. 00:41:243 (2) - ^ (0,89x)
  8. 00:51:909 (2) - ^ (1,06x)
  9. 00:58:076 (1,2,3) - wtf 1/2 circle with huge spacing? they look a little bit questionable for Normal so better use 1/2 slider repeat instead
  10. 01:09:909 (5) - just a tiny spacing error (1,12x)
  11. 01:10:743 (2) - ^ (1,10x)
  12. 01:12:576 (6) - ^ (0,88x)


  • Hard
  1. 00:51:076 (4) - kwan said the jump was like wtf here, well i feel not really like that but you might consider for it since qat said like that
  2. 00:56:743 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ (but for this i kinda agree)
  3. wtf no dap elite mapper


  • Insane
  1. 00:17:326 (3,4) - you might stack these circles and i almost read this as 1/2 whenever the shape and distance is quite same with (4) to (5)
  2. 00:24:743 (9) - forgot to add finish? i hear cymbal here
  3. great insane either but i feel a little bit worry with the spread example for 01:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since in Hard only uses spin and for 1/3 like 01:07:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . unless for them, the diff is really clean <3


  • Extra
  1. 00:02:576 (2) - maybe remove whistle on tail for consistent with 00:01:243 (2) - , the whistle sounds not really good either
  2. 00:05:409 - maybe reduce the volume with 25 or 20 only since at the first time i thought this one was overmapped (i cant hear the music lol)
  3. 00:16:576 (2) - i'd say to stack this with previous circle so you can give the feel of little jump for 00:16:743 (1) - as the new stanza here
  4. 00:18:409 (1) - btw is this NC intentional? i think the NC looks a little bit random since i cant read what does the function here
  5. 00:35:743 (2) - tbh i prefer the flow if you ctrl+G this instead, that 1/4 space looks a little bit random for me either
  6. 00:49:965 (3) - somehow i feel the trumpet starts on 1/8 00:49:951 - instead of 1/6. welp my ears are bad
  7. 01:15:909 (2) - wtf 7,83x spacing, pls be kind no dappu san
  8. 01:23:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - if pk nerfs the stream because what i worry from the spread, nerf this one as well to keep the spread

damn so clean
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika

Xinely wrote:


  • Easy
  1. 00:28:743 (3) - just nazi, imo the flow a little bit weird if we make a straight slider here whenever previous and next sliders are curvy, try make this slider a little bit has curve? http://puu.sh/gXDBk.jpg its fine imo


  • Normal
  1. 00:15:909 (5) - just a tiny spacing error again (0,89x) all these spacing errors you mentioned are from the new editor stack. they are fine.
  2. 00:25:076 (2) - and nazi just flip the slider so the curve will be going to leftward instead, it will give more natural flow in my sight but just my taste i guess o-o my thing
  3. 00:30:576 (2) - just a tiny spacing error (0,88x)
  4. 00:33:243 (2) - ^ (0,93x)
  5. 00:36:576 (3) - ^ (1,11x)
  6. 00:41:243 (2) - ^ (0,89x)
  7. 00:51:909 (2) - ^ (1,06x)
  8. 00:58:076 (1,2,3) - wtf 1/2 circle with huge spacing? they look a little bit questionable for Normal so better use 1/2 slider repeat instead its fine imo
  9. 01:09:909 (5) - just a tiny spacing error (1,12x)
  10. 01:10:743 (2) - ^ (1,10x)
  11. 01:12:576 (6) - ^ (0,88x)


  • Hard
  1. 00:51:076 (4) - kwan said the jump was like wtf here, well i feel not really like that but you might consider for it since qat said like that it's fine tbh. it fits with the song
  2. 00:56:743 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ (but for this i kinda agree) same here


  • Extra
  1. 00:05:409 - maybe reduce the volume with 25 or 20 only since at the first time i thought this one was overmapped (i cant hear the music lol) it's fine imo
  2. 00:35:743 (2) - tbh i prefer the flow if you ctrl+G this instead, that 1/4 space looks a little bit random for me either it plays fine imo
  3. 00:49:965 (3) - somehow i feel the trumpet starts on 1/8 00:49:951 - instead of 1/6. welp my ears are bad i just deleted cuz its stupid ;w;
  4. 01:15:909 (2) - wtf 7,83x spacing, pls be kind no dappu san it's not really 7.83 since it's a slider jump..
  5. 01:23:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - if pk nerfs the stream because what i worry from the spread, nerf this one as well to keep the spread i'll talk to him about it
rest are fixed thanks ~
Kinshara
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Xinely wrote:


  • Insane
  1. 00:17:326 (3,4) - you might stack these circles and i almost read this as 1/2 whenever the shape and distance is quite same with (4) to (5) I think this part is fine after watching some testplays, but I'll keep it in mind
  2. 00:24:743 (9) - forgot to add finish? i hear cymbal here oops, fixed
  3. great insane either but i feel a little bit worry with the spread example for 01:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since in Hard only uses spin and for 1/3 like 01:07:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . unless for them, the diff is really clean <3 reduced spacing on 1/4 sliders on the last stream and also reduced spacing of stream
Thanks for modding, Xinely! ouo

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Xinely
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recheck

missing video on pkk's insane
Ozato Fumika
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fixed
Xinely
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Poi



@next BN : if pkk changes something from his diff, dont forget to check the video, i guess he didnt download the video www
Ozato Fumika
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Thank you nely <3
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Xinely wrote:

if pkk changes something from his diff, dont forget to check the video, i guess he didnt download the video www
!
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Qualified!! ~


아 그리고 병크, 죄책감때문에 하는소리 다 고분고분하게 들었는데. 다시한번만더 그딴식으로 태도보이시면 가만히 안둠
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LOL
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op
Sonnyc
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[Hard]
01:21:243 (2,3) - 간격 이거 왜이러나요 ㅎ

[Extra]
00:12:743 (1) - 직접적인 언랭 사유도 아니고 이러한 이유로 언랭 된 사례는 본적이 드뭅니다만 기본 스킨 기준으로 파란색 콤보 색상이 읽기 다소 어려운 점이 있어 노란색 콤보 색으로 변경해 주시는게 조금 더 안전하다고 판단됩니다.


확인하신 후에 펭귄님이 잘 해주시겠죠? ㅎ
PatZar
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ah no ones want to check my fubuki >_>
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빰빠카빰~!

붸에에에에에에에

빼에에에에에에에에엑
Ozato Fumika
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하드는 냅두고 엑스트라는 콤보고침
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랭크안함?ㅋ
Sonnyc
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No Dap wrote:

랭크안함?ㅋ
쿠도수안줌?ㅋ
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EDIT : p/4040039/
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ㅋㅋ
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하트표시 어디
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w nice
Euny
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축하해요

근데 진짜 하트 어딨떠영?
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and you were worried about your extra being bad, pssshh

grats sir
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gratz mom
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Meyrink
Grats pkk's Hard Insane *:･٩(´・ω・)۶*:･
And Gratz Mom ! Too Sad this is last mappu ;_;
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay
This.. is a really great map!

Congratulations!
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
4,496 posts
Joined February 2009
Loctav
Hello!

unfortunately, we have to disqualify this set, as its quality is not meeting our expectations for letting this into the Ranked section, yet. Please consider the points below as reason for the disqualification:

[General]

Add HIGE DRIVER to the tags, please

[Insane]

You want to remove that.

Generally, we observed the hitsounds to be very quiet. You want to raise the hitsound volume in this difficulty to make it be more audible
We also observed that the placement of 01:10:409 (2,3,4) - is a bit offthrowing directly after the stream, which you should fix!

[Extra]

In this difficulty, we observed a multitude of different issues we would like to see fixed. The super short kicksliders at the beginning are trying to follow something that is barely noticeable in this section and therefore partially flaws the pattern itself. Make sure to follow musical samples that are clearly recognizeable and try not to follow everything existent in the music, even if it is just barely noticeable. We also observed some questionable increased spacings, especially when they happened on the "less intense" parts, whereas the "more intense parts" appeared to be less spaced. This appeared contradicting to us. Moreover, you should not overuse the 1/4 spacing too much. Some patterns appeared to us to be more suitable as simple triplet rather than a slider-circle combination that contained a jump between both. That is unneccessary. Also some kick slider jumps appearing after short streams appeared to have some flow issues, which you should revise.
We also saw no apparent reason for the New Combo overusage you performed on one pattern. Also this diff is longer (due to the spinner) than the other diffs. This should be consistent across all of them, as we see no reason why this Extra should be longer than all other diffs.
Examples for the above criticism:
00:01:243 (2)
00:02:576 (2) -
00:04:576 (4) -
00:06:076 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - vs 00:08:632 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:19:909 (3,1) -
00:21:243 (2,1) -
00:34:576 (3,1) -
00:53:576 (2,1) -
00:58:743 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
01:15:743 (1,2) -
01:16:743 (1,2) -
01:26:159 (1) -

Please revise this difficulty and try to improve it further! Try not to overdo things too much, try to apply your creative concept to the entire difficulty, so it appears remarkable, recognizeable and unique!

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Please make sure to adjust your mapset accordingly to the above provided reason. Keep in mind that we are filing general criticism and improvement advises, so the above reason applies to more than just the provided examples. Whenever your mapset received further revision and improvement, the Beatmap Nominators will furtherly take care of that mapset.
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk

Loctav wrote:

Hello! loctav i'm your biggest fan please sign my map
Add HIGE DRIVER to the tags, please done!

[Insane]

You want to remove that. haha forgot about that, removed

Generally, we observed the hitsounds to be very quiet. You want to raise the hitsound volume in this difficulty to make it be more audible
I don't really like the default soft-hitnormal to be really loud, and since most people will be using skins with their own custom hitsounds, the hitsounds should be fine. However, for those few unfortunate souls still using the default skin (peppy please change the cursor I can barely see it), I raised the volume

We also observed that the placement of 01:10:409 (2,3,4) - is a bit offthrowing directly after the stream, which you should fix!
Interesting. I feel that this is rather subjective as I don't find it offthrowing at all, perhaps you mean the flow isn't very intuitive since the stream loops around in a circle, as do the slider that follows but not the placement of the circles? Anyways, my circle placement is intentional there as I 'break' up the flow on the next beat to emphasize the vocal, plus just having everything in a circle is rather boring. Since I only slightly overlapped the circle it's not hard to read, so that's not an issue either. If you still have an issue is, then I would like to know who 'we' is so we can discuss this. Other than that, I won't be changing anything here since I believe it plays out wonderfully!
Thanks Loctav + any other members who took a look at the mapset!
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