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Avishay

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Avishay 2015-03-23T21:48:25+00:00

RMaltsaar wrote:
Nice job on great map! :3

Thank you very much, I really appreciate it!

schwarzvgrune

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Joined April 2014

schwarzvgrune 2015-03-24T11:48:05+00:00

uwah <3 gratz avishay >w<b
eventhough i cant play std ;w;

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-03-24T19:29:49+00:00

Hello Avishay! Nya requested a mod.

Sadly I have to pop the bubble, because of few general issues (spread, bg etc) + I think some diffs can be improved.

General

* b2.jpg is 1365x768. Please change to 1366x768.
* Only the ROLLING STAR diff has 1500ms audio lead-in. Add to the other diffs as well.
* Inconsistent KIAI times. With GD's it doesn't matter, but keep it consistent in your own diffs please.
* Sorry if it's stupid for me to ask, but why is 'sky' in the tags?
* -Nya-'s diff CS4, and yours CS3? Shouldn't be a big problem, but using decimals for your diff would be better imo (considering that your diff is harder than -Nya-'s)
* Letterbox in breaks is on @ WhiteAries and the ROLLING STAR diff, but they don't have breaks :<
* Spread looks like E-N-Nya---H--I-X now. Introducing 1/4 with the usage of reverse sliders in Nya's diff, can keep the spread in balance with both the normal and Avishay's hard diff.

-Nya-'s Hard

So you're rhythm usage is nice, and the placement is good! Flow is fine overall. One thing that bugged me, is how many hitsounds you left open. Sounds like 00:26:110 (1) - 00:29:092 (1) - and 00:32:073 (1) - etc... really miss something in my point of view, adding a finish there sounds better doesn't it? Same goes with claps.

Another thing is, as I mentioned earlier, is that the Nya/H isn't that good. The spread with the Normal diff is fine, but if you could introduce 1/4 with usage of repeat sliders could improve the spead greatly, while still keeping the diff rather easy to still keep it balanced with the Normal diff.

Hard

* 00:14:744 (3,4,1) - Really confusing and hard to time as well due to switching to the red tick. Can you space this out? Especially, because you have the same spacing as 00:14:371 (2,3) - , which is 1/2 - and (3,4,1) is 1/1.
* 00:34:402 (9) - For Hard diffs, I advise you to only use 1/4, when there is a 1/4 beat in the song - and not for emphasis. Beats like 00:37:943 (3) - are fine.
* 00:38:781 (6) - I'm a bit lost here, since I can't really see what you're following. Now, both the instruments and the vocal notes are offbeat, creating a rather confusing rhythm. Try something like this instead?

* 00:42:508 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Patterns like these are like.. really hard to read with AR7.
* 00:44:558 (1) - Keep your spacing 1.4? It's acceptable for a hard diff to have some spacing changes, but these notes are quite strong, and now they are reaaallly close.
* 00:49:216 (2,3,4,5) - Please simplify this. Since you can't even see the kickslider properly (look in-game, it's also partly covered due to stack leniency, and that combined with low SV) this kind of rhythm is just way too sudden. Try something like this?

* 00:49:961 (6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Single-tap diff spike!!11!! It's fine here I guess, but don't go all to crazy with the DS please.
* 01:08:968 (1) - I know it has a NC, but spacing it out more wouldn't hurt right?

I could go on, but it's basically the same issues all over again. I suggest you to make this diff more simple. Not as making even more complex rhythms, but more as in 'readable' and more 'flow' usage. I don't really know how to explain, but the diff feels a bit unbalanced. The 1/4 usage overall is passable, and fits well with the Nya-Hard-WhiteAries spread, but try to make everything a bit more clean, if you get what I mean :/

WhiteAries' Insane

* 00:11:204 (1) - A finish here sounds better to me.
* 00:37:943 - Kinda expected a note here to be honest. The vocal note is quite strong, and since you did overmap a bit at 00:19:402 (3,4,5) - I don't really understand why you left such an important 1/4 beat out. (You did map the same vocal at 01:42:042 (12) - though...)
* 00:58:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh this is cool c:
* 01:04:123 (8) - You dont want a clap here?
* 01:04:775 - Optional, but map this one out as well? The drums are still here.
* 01:22:384 (4) - Again, clap?
* 01:28:719 (1) - Ehh finish ._.? (you did put one at 01:25:738 (1) - )
* 02:07:384 (12,1) - 1/4 stacks make me cry ;____________; (its fine if you want to keep it though)

I like this diff c:

ROLLING STAR

* 00:03:471 (7) - Can't really hear a beat here...
* 00:05:055 (7,1) - You're intro is very jumpy, and when there's a strong sound like (1) you keep a very small DS. Kinda expected to have a jump here.
* 00:05:800 (4,1) - This gap, combined with the rather small spacing (considering your jumpy patterns) - plays really awkward imo. Turning (4) into a slider, or increasing the spacing here plays much better in my point of view.

* 00:08:222 (1,2) - Please don't use extended sliders like this ;-; - there's a sound on the red tick before that, and there's no sound on the blue tick.
* 00:08:595 (6,7,8,9) - (6,7) is huge compared to (8,9) - it'd make this jump pattern a bit more consistent in terms of spacing if I were you.

* 00:09:340 (10) - Same thing as 00:05:800 (4,1) -
* 00:10:086 (3,4) - The player has to jump from one side of the screen to the other - a large jump like this combined with your low SV doesn't play that well... Placing the slider differently could make this pattern play much smoother and also more forgiving at the same time.

* 00:13:067 (3,4) - Distance is so small here.. try to keep at least 1.0x spacing between these.
* 00:14:558 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just wanted to say that I like this pattern ^^
* 00:17:073 (5) - pls no overmap in slow parts pls ._. (notes like 00:18:564 (9) - are fine, because there's actually something in the song that it can go with)
* 00:21:266 (4) - Have no idea why you increased the SV here... this section is almost identical to the part before this
* 00:35:055 (2) - NC should be here, because of the downbeat.
* 00:51:266 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Can't really find a clear pattern here... I think you're trying to follow the changes of the instrument, but sorry this doesn't really work that well :c

i kinda thought u were going to do something like that with beats of 2, seperated by nc's with a triangular shape or something similar, this is just a quick example, you can do it neather c:

* 00:52:756 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - A triplet here and there to emphasize some parts is fine, but please don't put a stream where there is a hold note.
* 01:01:887 (5,1) - I know that there's a NC, but don't space them too far apart. Really confusing - considering how low the 1/4 spacing was at 01:01:141 (2,3) -
* 01:05:241 (2,3,4) - Using the rotate tool (120 degrees) would make this pattern look much better.
* 01:07:104 (1,2) - Same what I said earlier about the 1/4 spacing, patterns like this don't play that well and come really unexpected. The spacing here is even larger than 01:06:732 (7,8) - which is just 1/2.
* 01:17:819 (6) - Please delete this one, doesn't have a sound like 01:17:446 (3) - , and two triplets in a row (especially in a slow part) sounds like spammmMMmm.
* 01:19:775 (6) - Optional, but add NC? Would fit your pattern.
* 01:31:514 (1) - Totally up to you, but for me 1/8 does the job already.

* 01:32:259 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 'Create polygon circles' (otherwise than that, i really like this pattern owo)
* 02:03:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - blue ticks overmapped again ;-;
* 02:18:098 (3) - More a personal thing, but I find using shapes like these, create a very awkward motions - while you do want to have some consistency when you have streams. Using smoother angles would play much smooooother.

So next part is hitsounding. I don't really get what your HS patterns are - but it just seems really random to me. You can really notice the inconsistency of the hitsounds in slower parts.

Cymbal sounds like 01:24:247 (3) - 01:25:738 (1) - 01:27:228 (1) - and 01:28:719 (3) - have a clap, or nothing add all.

While just regular clap sounds have finishes, like 01:26:856 (5) - 01:24:806 (1) - and 01:29:278 (1) -

If you have trouble with hitsounds, I recommend looking at Kibbleru's hitsounding guide, or you could also take a look at WhiteAries' diff. His/her HS pattern is good and I think he/she tried to follow the same instruments as you did.

I could give you a whole list with what to remove and add but too lazy and it would take alooooooooot of time

I tried to not comment on style, but this diff needs a bit more work imo. The jumps are fun - but everything feels off at some points of the map due to inconsistent / unexpected patterns.

I really like the song, and this map is going towards the right direction.

I just think that we can both agree that there could be some improvement some of the diffs c:

Skipped the other diffs for now, since I wanted to focus on the harder diffs here.

If you have any question regarding my mod or anything else, contact me in-game o/

Avishay

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Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-03-24T22:46:24+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hello Avishay! Nya requested a mod.

Sadly I have to pop the bubble, because of few general issues (spread, bg etc) + I think some diffs can be improved.

:idea: General

* b2.jpg is 1365x768. Please change to 1366x768. Egh.. Will change tomorrow.
* Only the ROLLING STAR diff has 1500ms audio lead-in. Add to the other diffs as well. We talked about this and this is not necessary since RS has the start mapped while the other diffs don't.
* Inconsistent KIAI times. With GD's it doesn't matter, but keep it consistent in your own diffs please. It was a mistake with an inherited timing point, woops.
* Sorry if it's stupid for me to ask, but why is 'sky' in the tags? Describes the backgrounds, is it a no-no?
* -Nya-'s diff CS4, and yours CS3? Shouldn't be a big problem, but using decimals for your diff would be better imo (considering that your diff is harder than -Nya-'s) I'll prefer to leave it as it is to not ruin patterns.
* Letterbox in breaks is on @ WhiteAries and the ROLLING STAR diff, but they don't have breaks :< Fixed.
* Spread looks like E-N-Nya---H--I-X now. Introducing 1/4 with the usage of reverse sliders in Nya's diff, can keep the spread in balance with both the normal and Avishay's hard diff. I was asked by Sonnyc to have a gap filling diff, with star rating around 2.3~2.6, Nya did it well, if she wants to add 1/4 to her map I have no objections (for whatever choice she makes).

Hard

* 00:14:744 (3,4,1) - Really confusing and hard to time as well due to switching to the red tick. Can you space this out? Especially, because you have the same spacing as 00:14:371 (2,3) - , which is 1/2 - and (3,4,1) is 1/1. Changed.
* 00:34:402 (9) - For Hard diffs, I advise you to only use 1/4, when there is a 1/4 beat in the song - and not for emphasis. Beats like 00:37:943 (3) - are fine. ]I think this one is fine, it was added with Lally's suggestion as well.
* 00:38:781 (6) - I'm a bit lost here, since I can't really see what you're following. Now, both the instruments and the vocal notes are offbeat, creating a rather confusing rhythm. Try something like this instead? Changed.
* 00:42:508 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Patterns like these are like.. really hard to read with AR7. Really? Eitherway I spiked the AR a bit since the last time I modified the AR in this difficulty there was no decimal values.
* 00:44:558 (1) - Keep your spacing 1.4? It's acceptable for a hard diff to have some spacing changes, but these notes are quite strong, and now they are reaaallly close. The lower spacing is because of the SV change.
* 00:49:216 (2,3,4,5) - Please simplify this. Since you can't even see the kickslider properly (look in-game, it's also partly covered due to stack leniency, and that combined with low SV) this kind of rhythm is just way too sudden. Try something like this? Changed.

* 00:49:961 (6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Single-tap diff spike!!11!! It's fine here I guess, but don't go all to crazy with the DS please.Changed a bit with the previous note.
* 01:08:968 (1) - I know it has a NC, but spacing it out more wouldn't hurt right? Actually it will, will look too forced to me.

I could go on, but it's basically the same issues all over again. I suggest you to make this diff more simple. Not as making even more complex rhythms, but more as in 'readable' and more 'flow' usage. I don't really know how to explain, but the diff feels a bit unbalanced. The 1/4 usage overall is passable, and fits well with the Nya-Hard-WhiteAries spread, but try to make everything a bit more clean, if you get what I mean :/ I'll take a look by myself tomorrow, since it is really late now.

WhiteAries' Insane

* 00:11:204 (1) - A finish here sounds better to me. I agree, changed.
* 00:37:943 - Kinda expected a note here to be honest. The vocal note is quite strong, and since you did overmap a bit at 00:19:402 (3,4,5) - I don't really understand why you left such an important 1/4 beat out. (You did map the same vocal at 01:42:042 (12) - though...) I'll have to agree on this one too, I don't think WW would ignore it intentionally./color]
* 00:58:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh this is cool c:
* 01:04:123 (8) - You dont want a clap here?
* 01:04:775 - Optional, but map this one out as well? The drums are still here. I don't think he'd miss that on purpose, I think he might've thought that a 7 notes stream is too much, unchanged.
* 01:22:384 (4) - Again, clap? Added
* 01:28:719 (1) - Ehh finish ._.? (you did put one at 01:25:738 (1) - ) Added, in the next pattern too.
* 02:07:384 (12,1) - 1/4 stacks make me cry ;____________; (its fine if you want to keep it though) WA is unique :3

I like this diff c:

ROLLING STAR

* 00:03:471 (7) - Can't really hear a beat here... You can hear the after-sound (orwhatever it is called) of 00:03:378 (6) - I think it fits just fine and plays nice.
* 00:05:055 (7,1) - You're intro is very jumpy, and when there's a strong sound like (1) you keep a very small DS. Kinda expected to have a jump here. Actually my intention here was the opposite, this sound feels like a 'brake' to me, just like those 00:11:204 (1,2,3) - I could've made them with higher spacing, but I did the opposite.
* 00:05:800 (4,1) - This gap, combined with the rather small spacing (considering your jumpy patterns) - plays really awkward imo. Turning (4) into a slider, or increasing the spacing here plays much better in my point of view. I don't want to increase the spacing due to the same reason as before, but I've changed it into a slider.

* 00:08:222 (1,2) - Please don't use extended sliders like this ;-; - there's a sound on the red tick before that, and there's no sound on the blue tick. I felt like it was just fine.. But changed.
* 00:08:595 (6,7,8,9) - (6,7) is huge compared to (8,9) - it'd make this jump pattern a bit more consistent in terms of spacing if I were you. I guess it is acceptable, changed.

* 00:09:340 (10) - Same thing as 00:05:800 (4,1) - Spacing changed after the previous line.
* 00:10:086 (3,4) - The player has to jump from one side of the screen to the other - a large jump like this combined with your low SV doesn't play that well... Placing the slider differently could make this pattern play much smoother and also more forgiving at the same time.
* 00:13:067 (3,4) - Distance is so small here.. try to keep at least 1.0x spacing between these. Aren't you getting confused with 1 and 4? They're not close at all..
* 00:14:558 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just wanted to say that I like this pattern ^^ Thanks~
* 00:17:073 (5) - pls no overmap in slow parts pls ._. (notes like 00:18:564 (9) - are fine, because there's actually something in the song that it can go with) It feels really great to me, this is the start of the intenser parts (less sliders, bigger spacings), I even feel like the triplet emphasizes the vocal a bit more.
* 00:21:266 (4) - Have no idea why you increased the SV here... this section is almost identical to the part before this The strong vocal at the slider beginning made me feel like I need to increase the SV here, and imo it fits just fine and builds nicely into the next section.
* 00:35:055 (2) - NC should be here, because of the downbeat. The NC follows the stronger drums here, there's a pattern of NC in this section as well.
* 00:51:266 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Can't really find a clear pattern here... I think you're trying to follow the changes of the instrument, but sorry this doesn't really work that well :c Reworked pattern.
i kinda thought u were going to do something like that with beats of 2, seperated by nc's with a triangular shape or something similar, this is just a quick example, you can do it neather c:
* 00:52:756 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - A triplet here and there to emphasize some parts is fine, but please don't put a stream where there is a hold note. The stream was made to emphasize it.
* 01:01:887 (5,1) - I know that there's a NC, but don't space them too far apart. Really confusing - considering how low the 1/4 spacing was at 01:01:141 (2,3) - Changed.
* 01:05:241 (2,3,4) - Using the rotate tool (120 degrees) would make this pattern look much better. This is what I did.. But I did it again just to be sure.
* 01:07:104 (1,2) - Same what I said earlier about the 1/4 spacing, patterns like this don't play that well and come really unexpected. The spacing here is even larger than 01:06:732 (7,8) - which is just 1/2. I somewhat felt like the previous pattern was just fine but a bit irregular, but I decided to change it.
* 01:17:819 (6) - Please delete this one, doesn't have a sound like 01:17:446 (3) - , and two triplets in a row (especially in a slow part) sounds like spammmMMmm. Deleted and repositioned a bit.
* 01:19:775 (6) - Optional, but add NC? Would fit your pattern. Alright.
* 01:31:514 (1) - Totally up to you, but for me 1/8 does the job already. I'll leave it as it is, you should listen to this part at 25% PBR.
* 01:32:259 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 'Create polygon circles' (otherwise than that, i really like this pattern owo) I think it is fine as it is, I like the current symmetry.
* 02:03:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - blue ticks overmapped again ;-; Strong vocals
* 02:18:098 (3) - More a personal thing, but I find using shapes like these, create a very awkward motions - while you do want to have some consistency when you have streams. Using smoother angles would play much smooooother.I reworked the pattern, should be much much better.

So next part is hitsounding. I don't really get what your HS patterns are - but it just seems really random to me. You can really notice the inconsistency of the hitsounds in slower parts.

Cymbal sounds like 01:24:247 (3) - 01:25:738 (1) - 01:27:228 (1) - and 01:28:719 (3) - have a clap, or nothing add all.

While just regular clap sounds have finishes, like 01:26:856 (5) - 01:24:806 (1) - and 01:29:278 (1) -

If you have trouble with hitsounds, I recommend looking at Kibbleru's hitsounding guide, or you could also take a look at WhiteAries' diff. His/her HS pattern is good and I think he/she tried to follow the same instruments as you did.

I could give you a whole list with what to remove and add but too lazy and it would take alooooooooot of time

I tried to not comment on style, but this diff needs a bit more work imo. The jumps are fun - but everything feels off at some points of the map due to inconsistent / unexpected patterns.

I really like the song, and this map is going towards the right direction.

I just think that we can both agree that there could be some improvement some of the diffs c:

Skipped the other diffs for now, since I wanted to focus on the harder diffs here.

If you have any question regarding my mod or anything else, contact me in-game o/

Thank you, I'll re-do the hitsounds on RS tomorrow and check Hard again after the mod as well, it is really late right now, good night.

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-03-25T19:21:55+00:00

Here's my diff~
I made it a bit harder, by adding some more notes, trying to complicate some of the patterns, etc.
The hitsounds are also better now.

Update

osu file format v14

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Creator:Avishay
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Shushan

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Shushan 2015-03-26T14:00:42+00:00

hi there!
m4m in game
easy
00:08:595 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:09:713 (1) - ds?
00:26:110 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:32:819 (2,3) - ^^
00:48:471 (1,2) - ^^
01:32:819 (2) - overlap?
01:47:539 (2) - is it ok for and 1/4 in easy?
normal
00:15:489 (3) - stacking is not good in normal
00:19:961 -^^
00:23:502 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:26:110 (1,2) - ^^
00:44:558 (2,3) - ^^
white aries
01:07:850 (1,4,7) - NC?
01:20:148 (3) - x228 y200?
01:36:545 (3) - ctrl g?
01:41:949 (11) - NC? and then remove 01:42:322 (1) NC
hard-are you sure about CS 3? mb lower it to 3.5?
00:06:732 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:43:999 (1,1) - ^^
01:39:527 (4,5) - ^^
01:46:607 (1,1) - ^^
01:51:452 (2) - nc?
gl!

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-03-26T14:21:04+00:00

ohad1881 wrote:
hi there!
m4m in game
easy
00:08:595 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:09:713 (1) - ds? Well.. It is not really far away and I cahnged it because of the blanket fix.
00:26:110 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:32:819 (2,3) - ^^
00:48:471 (1,2) - ^^
01:32:819 (2) - overlap?
01:47:539 (2) - is it ok for and 1/4 in easy? It is 1/2.
normal
00:15:489 (3) - stacking is not good in normal Why not? Improving the player and such.
00:19:961 -^^
00:23:502 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:26:110 (1,2) - ^^
00:44:558 (2,3) - ^^
white aries
01:07:850 (1,4,7) - NC? I don't think NC spamming is good, but I added NC on 9.
01:20:148 (3) - x228 y200? Why? I don't think it is the purpose of the pattern.
01:36:545 (3) - ctrl g? It ruins the pattern, so no
01:41:949 (11) - NC? and then remove 01:42:322 (1) NC Good catch.
hard-are you sure about CS 3? mb lower it to 3.5? I think it is fine as it is.
00:06:732 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:43:999 (1,1) - ^^
01:39:527 (4,5) - ^^
01:46:607 (1,1) - ^^
01:51:452 (2) - nc? I don't think it is a good idea.
gl!

Some of the blankets had to be like that, and some of them were fixed. An other change I made: stacked the last note on Normal again since otherwise it feels a bit awkward to me, and honestly stacking on Normal should be just fine.

schwarzvgrune wrote:
uwah <3 gratz avishay >w<b
eventhough i cant play std ;w;

I'll get it ranked in the end

I re-did the hitsound on all of my diffs, should be much better, everything is updated!

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-03-27T18:59:04+00:00

Hey~ Rechecking ROLLING STAR, nokds

[ROLLING STAR]

00:01:887 (6) -
00:03:378 (6,7,8) -
00:04:868 (6,7) - These 3 sections all map to the same melody in the song, but you use 3 different rhythms. I would be nice if you reduced them to two at least, since you should still have some rhythmic pattern.
00:08:036 - This is the same melody as the previous, and now you don't have anything here. Rolling Star can be a bit repetitive in melody, so having a recurring rhythmic pattern would add a nice effect.
01:04:868 (1,2,3,4) - There is a lot of potential here for a better rhythm imo. 1/2 sliders definitely work, but try this rhythm and see if you like it better: Rough structure. Basically 1/2 slider > jump to circle > jump to next slider. If you like this pattern There are many ways to change this you to your liking too. Rhythm
01:12:881 (2,2) - This overlap isn't good imo. It's a slow section too, which makes this quite hard to read. And you already have a circle stacked under the tail.
01:22:756 (3) - I wish you could restructure this slider a bit so that it flows a bit better from 1>2>3. Something closer to this?
01:27:228 (1,2,3,4) - People are going to misclick this thinking they are streams because right before this pattern, you use a large jump 01:26:856 (5,6) - . You should reconsider the spacing here to make it clearer to the player that they are 1/2 spaced.
01:37:663 (1) - Moving the slider a bit more to the right while still blanketing 3 would improve the flow here
01:40:831 (2,3) - This is good, you're emphasizing the beat with a large jump, but you should be more consistent with the beats that you choose to map to such jumps. For example: 01:42:135 (3,4) - Here are the same beats again, but you didn't map 4 to a large jump

02:07:477 (1,2) -
02:08:968 (1,2,3) -
02:10:458 - Here again, i've highlighted 3 sections of the song with the same melody, but you've mapped them to different rhythms. I think this one is the odd one out, since you decide to map the start of the measure (large white tick) to a slider-end. This is an important beat that should be clickable, and I think mapping this beat is more important than the 1/1 slider you are currently using.
02:11:949 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I honestly don't think such extended spacing is necessary. This isn't the Kiai Section so the player isn't expecting difficult patterns like this.

Alright I hope this was helpful! Also, please recheck your NC pattern, sometimes it's not very consistent. Sections like 02:08:968 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - for example. I know everyone has different patterns which are equally fine, but on the majority of your map (and lower diff's) the NC is on every large white tick so try and do the same.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-03-28T22:15:17+00:00

monstrata wrote:
Hey~ Rechecking ROLLING STAR, nokds

[ROLLING STAR]

00:01:887 (6) -
00:03:378 (6,7,8) -
00:04:868 (6,7) - These 3 sections all map to the same melody in the song, but you use 3 different rhythms. I would be nice if you reduced them to two at least, since you should still have some rhythmic pattern. I think it is fine as it is.
00:08:036 - This is the same melody as the previous, and now you don't have anything here. Rolling Star can be a bit repetitive in melody, so having a recurring rhythmic pattern would add a nice effect. ^ There's no real reason to map after rules like these.
01:04:868 (1,2,3,4) - There is a lot of potential here for a better rhythm imo. 1/2 sliders definitely work, but try this rhythm and see if you like it better: Rough structure. Basically 1/2 slider > jump to circle > jump to next slider. If you like this pattern There are many ways to change this you to your liking too. Rhythm Changed
01:12:881 (2,2) - This overlap isn't good imo. It's a slow section too, which makes this quite hard to read. And you already have a circle stacked under the tail. So what if I have a circle on the tail? The pattern is not that hard to read imo and plays just fine
01:22:756 (3) - I wish you could restructure this slider a bit so that it flows a bit better from 1>2>3. Something closer to this? Instead of reconstructing the slider I moved 2 into a different position.
01:27:228 (1,2,3,4) - People are going to misclick this thinking they are streams because right before this pattern, you use a large jump 01:26:856 (5,6) - . You should reconsider the spacing here to make it clearer to the player that they are 1/2 spaced. I honestly don't think they'd get confused and think I'd have a stream spaced like this in such a slow part.
01:37:663 (1) - Moving the slider a bit more to the right while still blanketing 3 would improve the flow here You are right, changed.
01:40:831 (2,3) - This is good, you're emphasizing the beat with a large jump, but you should be more consistent with the beats that you choose to map to such jumps. For example: 01:42:135 (3,4) - Here are the same beats again, but you didn't map 4 to a large jump I honestly don't need to do that all the time, the way everything is positioned now is fine as well, I see a lot of maps that don't follow this rule completely and they are just great.

02:07:477 (1,2) -
02:08:968 (1,2,3) -
02:10:458 - Here again, i've highlighted 3 sections of the song with the same melody, but you've mapped them to different rhythms. I think this one is the odd one out, since you decide to map the start of the measure (large white tick) to a slider-end. This is an important beat that should be clickable, and I think mapping this beat is more important than the 1/1 slider you are currently using. It plays just fine, this one goes well as a slider end too.
02:11:949 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I honestly don't think such extended spacing is necessary. This isn't the Kiai Section so the player isn't expecting difficult patterns like this. I didn't make this kiai because there are no vocals, I felt like giving this part more difficulty because he deserves it.

Alright I hope this was helpful! Also, please recheck your NC pattern, sometimes it's not very consistent. Sections like 02:08:968 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - for example. I know everyone has different patterns which are equally fine, but on the majority of your map (and lower diff's) the NC is on every large white tick so try and do the same. Alright, changed.

Thank you monstrata~

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-04-05T18:19:06+00:00

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@appleeaterx

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-04-05T18:42:08+00:00

Easy

* 00:26:110 (1) - Finish on head, clap on repeat?
* 00:29:092 (1) - Finish on spinner end instead?
* 00:35:055 (1,3) - Since this is the easiest diff of the mapset, try to avoid stacks like these. Not unrankable, but changing it a bit could help a lot with readability.

* 00:41:017 (1) - Is really close to the slider body now, a bit nazi, but small tweaks can avoid that.

* 00:42:508 (4) - To keep pattern, I'd personally use finish + whistle instead - since the cymbal is really here :< (not to mention that you did do it at 00:44:371 (1) - and that sounds much better imo :/)
* 00:43:999 - To me, the cymbal/finish here should be mapped, and is stronger than the 3 beats you're following now with that repeat. Would be nice if you took advantage this sound as well. Keeping this consistent with 01:47:539 (2,3) - would work nice here.

* 00:44:371 (1) - Spinner came a bit unexpected, optional, but I'd map this part out. Especially, since you did map 01:48:471 (1) -
* 00:51:825 (5) - Clap at both head & end.
* 00:54:433 (3) - Put a finish + whistle on head if you changed it at 00:42:508 (4), or just have a finish on the head. Also add clap on the slider end for consistency.
* 00:56:669 (3) - Clap on head.
* 00:58:160 (5) - Clap on head, finish on the end.
* 00:59:651 (1) - I highly recommend mapping this section out, because this long slider doesn't fit at all. You shouldn't skip strong sounds like 01:01:887 - - also add a clap here. I really think that you should map this out...
* 01:04:123 (3) - Clap on head, finish on the end. Also, slider gets overlapped by the HP bar - I kinda expect you to map that part out (the slider I mentioned above), so maybe some rearrangement could work here to avoid that.
* 01:11:576 (2) - Remove the finish on the head, the slider end's finish should get more emphasis, also to keep it somewhat consistent with 01:13:067 (1) -
* 01:13:067 (1) - Change slider end's clap to a finish, since this sound is not that loud (?) Also to keep consistent with 01:11:576 (2) - 's end.
* 01:14:558 (3) - Remove clap at head, change to finish on end instead.
* 01:15:676 (4) - Different hitsound as 01:14:185 (2) - ? Can't really find a clear/good reason why these two should be different.
* 01:17:166 (1,2,3,4) - There are many other sounds that you can map, instead of placing these that are rather confusing (if you listen carefully, they land on rather dull notes as you can see, since a strong note like 01:18:284 (3) - is skipped). I recommend to follow the vocals instead.
* 01:24:620 (4) - Similar to what I said before, please don't skip cymbal sounds like 01:25:738 (5) - . They are core/basic notes, which should be the base of your rhythm. If you do want to keep that slider, use something like this instead.

* 01:26:856 (1) - Finish on end.
* 01:28:346 (3) - Either clap or finish here (depends, there's a cymbal sound, but I can see that you don't want 3 finishes in a row)
* 01:28:719 (1) - Clap on repeat.
* 01:39:154 (4) - NC here, this combo is quite long and it'd fit your NC-per-two-measure pattern.
* 01:42:135 (1) - Dunno if you did the slider points a bit off intentionally, but check with CTRL+G if everything is symmetrical.
Also, this slider is skipping the downbeat 01:43:626 (2) - , so ending the slider there seems much more logical to me.
* 01:42:135 (1) - Finish on head.
* 01:46:607 (1) - Same finish + whistle suggestion, depends what you did earlier.
* 01:49:961 (2) - Optional, but finish on slider end?
* 01:52:570 - Map this finish please ;_;
* 01:52:943 (1) - Clap.
* 02:04:496 (1) - Finish instead.
* 02:07:477 (1) - Use finish instead? Like 00:11:204 (1) -
* 02:11:949 (3,4) - Try to avoid 3/4 gaps (polarity issues), especially in easier diffs. Try something like this instead.

Hitsound things apply to all your diffs.

deejaydray's Normal

* 00:24:247 (4,5) - This 3/4 gap is ehh meh. Would better better to move (5) half a tick earlier to follow the cymbal-ish sound, or have something like this if you want to follow all the sounds here.

* 00:37:663 - Add note here to avoid 3/4 gap?
* 00:54:433 (4,5,6) - It's really hard to time these, and it's harsh on new players to have loose 1/2 notes like this. Please try to change most of these to more simple rhythms, that don't have polarity issues.
* 01:15:303 (4,1) - Try to avoid these kind of stacks in the easier diffs, space it out like 01:27:228 (4,1) - ?
* 01:28:719 (1) - You can easily reduce the amount of polarity issues, by taking advantage of the drums. Try something like this?
[box=]

* 01:33:750 (5,6) - Stacking (6,1) is fine, but don't hide them under the slider end please :c
* 01:43:626 (3,4) - Optional here, but polarity could be improved here.
* 02:20:893 (2,3) - you know.

I already talked to you about spacing, but yeah if you want to keep it - it can't be helped

Just please, fix the polarity issues :<

Nyaaaaaaan~

* 00:26:669 (2) - Don't want clap(s) here instead?

Hard

* 00:24:247 (1,2,3,4) - Ehh, I know it's slider -> slider, but try to shorten the DS here. Switch up the positions a bit?

* 00:34:309 (8,9,1) - Triplet here sounds really out of place here... You don't even have this in the Insane/Extra o_o

almost light insane w

Maybe you already noticed from my recheck, but I can't see a nice constant hitsounding pattern orz

-Nya-

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Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-04-05T18:57:09+00:00

Fixed that clap.
Thanks appleeaterx~!

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Avishay

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Avishay 2015-04-05T20:16:50+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Easy

* 00:26:110 (1) - Finish on head, clap on repeat?
* 00:29:092 (1) - Finish on spinner end instead?
* 00:35:055 (1,3) - Since this is the easiest diff of the mapset, try to avoid stacks like these. Not unrankable, but changing it a bit could help a lot with readability.

* 00:41:017 (1) - Is really close to the slider body now, a bit nazi, but small tweaks can avoid that.

* 00:42:508 (4) - To keep pattern, I'd personally use finish + whistle instead - since the cymbal is really here :< (not to mention that you did do it at 00:44:371 (1) - and that sounds much better imo :/)
* 00:43:999 - To me, the cymbal/finish here should be mapped, and is stronger than the 3 beats you're following now with that repeat. Would be nice if you took advantage this sound as well. Keeping this consistent with 01:47:539 (2,3) - would work nice here.

* 00:44:371 (1) - Spinner came a bit unexpected, optional, but I'd map this part out. Especially, since you did map 01:48:471 (1) -
* 00:51:825 (5) - Clap at both head & end.
* 00:54:433 (3) - Put a finish + whistle on head if you changed it at 00:42:508 (4), or just have a finish on the head. Also add clap on the slider end for consistency.
* 00:56:669 (3) - Clap on head.
* 00:58:160 (5) - Clap on head, finish on the end.
* 00:59:651 (1) - I highly recommend mapping this section out, because this long slider doesn't fit at all. You shouldn't skip strong sounds like 01:01:887 - - also add a clap here. I really think that you should map this out...
* 01:04:123 (3) - Clap on head, finish on the end. Also, slider gets overlapped by the HP bar - I kinda expect you to map that part out (the slider I mentioned above), so maybe some rearrangement could work here to avoid that.
* 01:11:576 (2) - Remove the finish on the head, the slider end's finish should get more emphasis, also to keep it somewhat consistent with 01:13:067 (1) -
* 01:13:067 (1) - Change slider end's clap to a finish, since this sound is not that loud (?) Also to keep consistent with 01:11:576 (2) - 's end.
* 01:14:558 (3) - Remove clap at head, change to finish on end instead.
* 01:15:676 (4) - Different hitsound as 01:14:185 (2) - ? Can't really find a clear/good reason why these two should be different.
* 01:17:166 (1,2,3,4) - There are many other sounds that you can map, instead of placing these that are rather confusing (if you listen carefully, they land on rather dull notes as you can see, since a strong note like 01:18:284 (3) - is skipped). I recommend to follow the vocals instead.
* 01:24:620 (4) - Similar to what I said before, please don't skip cymbal sounds like 01:25:738 (5) - . They are core/basic notes, which should be the base of your rhythm. If you do want to keep that slider, use something like this instead.

* 01:26:856 (1) - Finish on end.
* 01:28:346 (3) - Either clap or finish here (depends, there's a cymbal sound, but I can see that you don't want 3 finishes in a row)
* 01:28:719 (1) - Clap on repeat.
* 01:39:154 (4) - NC here, this combo is quite long and it'd fit your NC-per-two-measure pattern.
* 01:42:135 (1) - Dunno if you did the slider points a bit off intentionally, but check with CTRL+G if everything is symmetrical.
Also, this slider is skipping the downbeat 01:43:626 (2) - , so ending the slider there seems much more logical to me.
* 01:42:135 (1) - Finish on head.
* 01:46:607 (1) - Same finish + whistle suggestion, depends what you did earlier.
* 01:49:961 (2) - Optional, but finish on slider end?
* 01:52:570 - Map this finish please ;_;
* 01:52:943 (1) - Clap.
* 02:04:496 (1) - Finish instead.
* 02:07:477 (1) - Use finish instead? Like 00:11:204 (1) -
* 02:11:949 (3,4) - Try to avoid 3/4 gaps (polarity issues), especially in easier diffs. Try something like this instead.

Hitsound things apply to all your diffs.

deejaydray's Normal

* 00:24:247 (4,5) - This 3/4 gap is ehh meh. Would better better to move (5) half a tick earlier to follow the cymbal-ish sound, or have something like this if you want to follow all the sounds here.

* 00:37:663 - Add note here to avoid 3/4 gap?
* 00:54:433 (4,5,6) - It's really hard to time these, and it's harsh on new players to have loose 1/2 notes like this. Please try to change most of these to more simple rhythms, that don't have polarity issues. This honestly follows the song just perfectly, the spacing is really easy to recognize and I think it is just fine
* 01:15:303 (4,1) - Try to avoid these kind of stacks in the easier diffs, space it out like 01:27:228 (4,1) - ?
* 01:28:719 (1) - You can easily reduce the amount of polarity issues, by taking advantage of the drums. Try something like this?
[box=]
* 01:33:750 (5,6) - Stacking (6,1) is fine, but don't hide them under the slider end please :c
* 01:43:626 (3,4) - Optional here, but polarity could be improved here. Will leave dray's work
* 02:20:893 (2,3) - you know. I think the stack makes it look the best, I

I already talked to you about spacing, but yeah if you want to keep it - it can't be helped Just please, fix the polarity issues :<

Nyaaaaaaan~

* 00:26:669 (2) - Don't want clap(s) here instead?

Hard

* 00:24:247 (1,2,3,4) - Ehh, I know it's slider -> slider, but try to shorten the DS here. Switch up the positions a bit?
* 00:34:309 (8,9,1) - Triplet here sounds really out of place here... You don't even have this in the Insane/Extra o_o

almost light insane w

Maybe you already noticed from my recheck, but I can't see a nice constant hitsounding pattern orz

Everything fixed, except for what I noted, I am 100% sure I read everything but I might missed to reply on something I didn't apply.

Please note that some hitsounds may differ in my differ because of intensity changes and other gameplay, I hope I didn't miss anything crucial :S

Updated!

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-04-07T17:45:00+00:00

you were afk so posting here instead

Hitsounds your diff.
00:32:446 - Finish here -> clap?
01:07:850 (1,1,3) - Kinda expected finishes here :/

Easy
01:26:297 (6,1) - Spacing pleaaase c:
01:32:073 (1,2) - Same
02:01:514 (1,1) - Unrankable, spinner needs 1 full measure recovery. Consider shortening by 1/1.

Normal
02:16:421 (1) - Put something here, like a finish - you can hear the cymbal.

Nya
Still has the old Taiko GD'ers in the tag.

Rolling Star
00:38:409 (3,4) - These could be spaced out a bit more.
00:54:433 - Optional, but since the large jump ends here, the strong vocal here + the downbeat. NC this one instead?
01:00:955 (1) - Move this one a bit further away from (2), currently the distance between (1,2) is almost identical to (2,3) - try to avoid that if you use different snaps.
01:31:514 (1) - I still think this is mean and that 1/8 does the trick already... I always lose my combo here for some reason ._.

please let this be the last time that i recheck this w

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-04-07T18:37:42+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
you were afk so posting here instead

Hitsounds your diff.
00:32:446 - Finish here -> clap?
01:07:850 (1,1,3) - Kinda expected finishes here :/ I think clap to finish sounds great already :>

Easy
01:26:297 (6,1) - Spacing pleaaase c: Opps, why did I forget about changing it.
01:32:073 (1,2) - Same ~~If I change the spacing the blanket and pattern is ruined, I think it is a bit trivial :S~~Changed.
02:01:514 (1,1) - Unrankable, spinner needs 1 full measure recovery. Consider shortening by 1/1.

Normal
02:16:421 (1) - Put something here, like a finish - you can hear the cymbal. Added on the previous beats too

Nya
Still has the old Taiko GD'ers in the tag. Guess she forgot to update her diff after I updated it :S

Rolling Star
00:38:409 (3,4) - These could be spaced out a bit more. Increased slightly, to improve pattern.
00:54:433 - Optional, but since the large jump ends here, the strong vocal here + the downbeat. NC this one instead? I agree, changed.
01:00:955 (1) - Move this one a bit further away from (2), currently the distance between (1,2) is almost identical to (2,3) - try to avoid that if you use different snaps. Changed pattern a bit, should be better.
01:31:514 (1) - I still think this is mean and that 1/8 does the trick already... I always lose my combo here for some reason ._. Well it ends on the 1/4 tick and 1/16 fits here perfectly :3 I rarely break my combo here

please let this be the last time that i recheck this w

Sorry and thank you again ><

Updated.

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-04-07T19:11:52+00:00

Rebubbleeeeeee~

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-04-07T19:13:02+00:00

Yay

Aka

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Joined January 2012

Aka 2015-04-09T16:37:28+00:00

either timing is off or mp3 is fckd up, since notes are off and not randomly.. or the drummer was drunk
(at least at the very beginning, till 00:14:185 - )

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-04-09T16:59:04+00:00

Aka wrote:
either timing is off or mp3 is fckd up, since notes are off and not randomly.. or the drummer was drunk
(at least at the very beginning, till 00:14:185 - )

It seems just fine.. When I started mapping it I took the mp3 from the old mapset of Rolling star (lol) and it is not even the full song, so.. The beginning is a bit random but I got some timing points there and it seems fine.

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-04-09T23:19:54+00:00

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Aka

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Aka 2015-04-10T05:05:04+00:00

ахах ninja

Avishay

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Topic Starter

Avishay 2015-04-10T11:24:44+00:00

Sieg wrote:

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Reminder to self: DO NOT TAKE MP3s FROM OLD MAPSETS.

Updated everything snapped and bla bla, had to change some patterns because sliders ended on wrong timings and I can't really modify it.

@Nya please update your diff and remove / change the sliders that end on new timing points, or sliders that have timing points inside of them.

-Nya-

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-Nya- 2015-04-10T19:31:41+00:00

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32071
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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TitleUnicode:Rolling star
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:Avishay
Version:Nya's Hard
Source:BLEACH
Tags:sky opening full deejaydray WhiteAries -Nya- Can't Buy My Love
BeatmapID:631953
BeatmapSetID:129259

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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SliderMultiplier:1
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//Break Periods
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336,220,142009,2,0,L|356:280,1,50,0|4,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:

Made a slight adjustment~

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-04-11T10:50:01+00:00

Sieg wrote:
I've discussed timings with other BN. So we were able to find new more "stable" mp3 for you

http://puu.sh/h9xkv/6c0573e61d.mp3

with just tiny adjustments to last streams, because they were a bit unsync

[TimingPoints]
387,372.670807453416,4,1,1,60,1,0
132312,365.853658536585,4,1,1,65,1,0
132871,365.853658536585,4,1,1,65,1,0
133431,365.853658536585,4,1,1,65,1,0
133803,372.670807453416,4,1,1,65,1,0
138275,365.853658536585,4,1,1,65,1,0
139393,365.853658536585,4,1,1,65,1,0
141250,372.670807453416,4,1,1,65,1,0

Sorry for the inconvenience. Call me after applying.

Updated again.

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-04-11T11:45:20+00:00

recheck

general:
сheck ai-mod, your lead-in and letterbox setting are inconsistent

easy:
02:21:250 (1) - unsnapped

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-04-11T11:57:28+00:00

Sieg wrote:
recheck

general:
сheck ai-mod, your lead-in and letterbox setting are inconsistent Yeah, thats's fine, only ROLLING STAR starts at the first beat in the song, and it has no breaks too, while all of the other diffs don't start at the first beat and some has breaks too, it was acceptable by other BNs.

easy:
02:21:250 (1) - unsnapped AIMod didn't show that :S Fixed.

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2015-04-11T12:04:55+00:00

lead-in automated now, you shouldn't manually edit *.osu for this

to next BN, you can try to recheck timing, should be fine tho

NewRulerNA

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Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2015-04-11T17:25:22+00:00

Sieg wrote:
to next BN, you can try to recheck timing, should be fine tho

Im not BN, but long white tick does not fit on the melody imo. it mean strong beats do not have the correct position.

for example

00:14:548 -
00:32:436 -
00:44:362 -
always there is a changing on 2nd downbeat with current offset so I think this is incorrect.

therefore I suggest to move to 00:01:132 - (or -00:00:358 ).

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-04-12T03:55:20+00:00

1st offset is -372 batter. change please

call me back

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-04-12T09:21:47+00:00

I've updated everything, nothing wrong in AIBot, removed Audio lead-in in ROLLING STAR and it should be fine