1. Hard - 4Key (3.11 stars, 1025 notes)
2. Maximum - 4Key (3.92 stars, 1349 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (2 stars, 611 notes)

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_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Normal

01:02:436 - add one
01:04:872 - add one
01:06:091 - add one
01:42:030 (102030|3,102182|2,102258|1,102334|0,102487|1) - makes like 01:40:811 (100811|0,100964|1,101116|2,101268|3) -

Too hard in normal
I think. you should make a Easy diff

Hard

00:05:862 - add one
00:06:547 (6547|3) - remove
00:06:700 (6700|0) - remove
00:06:700 (6700|3) - move to 3
00:46:370 (46370|2) - remove
00:17:512 (17512|3) - finish it 00:17:817 -
00:19:948 (19948|0) - finish it 00:20:253 -

Maximum

00:05:862 - add one
00:24:974 (24974|0,25012|1,25050|2,25088|3,25126|0,25164|1,25202|2,25240|3) - I don't understand These.
00:33:730 (33730|3) - remove
01:38:832 (98832|1) - remove

I think. this map is so over mapping but.It was really fun.
You hope that helps.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Hokin-chan >.<)/
Mod from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( √ )
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio : ( X ) you must use hitsound
Background : ( X ) change with rasio 4:3

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)

Normal

00:22:385 (22385|2) remove, only 1 sound i hear
00:42:182 (42182|3) move to 3
00:51:624 add note
01:22:842 ^
01:23:223 ^
Nice pattern

Hard

00:22:461 (22461|0) move to 3, then 00:22:537 (22537|3) move to 2, make it stair
00:36:928 (36928|0,37004|2,37080|1,37157|3,37157|2) change pattern like 00:12:258 (12258|0,12334|1,12410|2,12487|1,12487|3)
00:46:751 (46751|1,46827|2,46903|1) you know i mean?
01:44:771 (104771|1,104923|0) Ctrl G, then 01:45:075 (105075|1) move to 3, it will be nice
wow, awesome pattern

Maximum

00:17:969 try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2933856
00:25:278 add note? check sound like 00:22:842
00:30:152 ^
00:35:177 add note? check 00:44:923
00:35:786 ^
01:01:827 add note, high pitch sound
01:14:009 ^ + kiai
01:26:040 (86040|3) delete, check 01:18:730
01:28:476 add note for consistency
01:45:075 (105075|1) change into LN?
Good Pattern~

Nice Song~
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

paperlens wrote:

前辈好！！从贴吧滚过来了
bia! bia! bia! bia! bia!!
column1234

maximum

00:03:502 (3502|3,3578|2,3959|0) - 你看这些地方的音和00:04:035 (4035|1) - 这个note的音（其实我没听见这个音），轻重明显不一样- -应该用不同的note数吧

00:03:959 - 00:04:111 - 00:04:263 - 00:04:415 - 何不在这四个地方放同键位的note (jack) 表示萝莉音

00:04:872 - add

然后开头这一段我怎么觉得你放双键的地方的音比你放三键地方的音要重- -

00:14:771 (14771|2) - 和00:17:207 (17207|1) - 和00:19:644 (19644|3) - 建议改成note 不用LN
00:22:233 - add

00:42:639 (42639|3,42639|1,42639|0) - ，00:44:771 (44771|2,44771|1,44771|0) - ，00:45:380 (45380|2,45380|1,45380|3) - ，00:45:989 (45989|0,45989|3,45989|2) - 建议挪一下 我觉得这样三连点挺不舒服的……况且音也不一样

00:47:207 - add

00:49:948 (49948|0,50101|2) - ctrl+J，00:50:405 (50405|3,50481|2,50558|1) - ctrl+J， 可以体现一下00:49:492 (49492|3,49644|3,49644|1,49796|1) - 的连点

00:56:649 - add

01:07:309 (67309|1) - 01:08:223 (68223|1) - 挪到1

01:11:268 - add

01:15:075 - 01:17:512 - 考虑add？

……这么诗怎么摸

= =抱歉我要去上课啦 晚上回来再补摸-w-

edit：补摸：

Hard

00:15:075 (15075|3) - 这个ln错了吧 在00:15:380 - 结束吧
00:37:157 - 我觉得可以add
01:07:309 (67309|2,68223|2) - 考虑挪到4呗 原因同maximum
01:43:476 (103476|1) - 挪到4

……

、

normal摸不了……

hokin1995 wrote:

前輩好~
前輩你太誇張了 如果是詩圖就不會被你抓一堆問題出來
thanks for mod

paperlens wrote:

hokin1995 wrote:

前輩好~
前輩你太誇張了 如果是詩圖就不會被你抓一堆問題出來
thanks for mod

啊啊啊啊啊不要吓我 不要叫我前辈

hokin1995 wrote:

[quote="paperlens"
啊啊啊啊啊不要吓我 不要叫我前辈

paperlens wrote:

吓得我浑身发抖啊啊啊啊啊---前辈饶了我吧

Takane6 wrote:

hi hokin!!
mod here

[general]
fine...

Maximum

Many missing notes i think...
00:04:263 - add note
00:07:766 (7766|1,7817|0,7867|2,7918|3) - its not 1/6 but 1/4 here :3
00:08:375 (8375|0,8451|1,8527|3,8527|2) - this is 1/6 !!
00:22:385 (22385|2,22461|2,22537|2) - i know what will you say... but yes you have to move this >>> 00:22:461 (22461|2) -
01:37:918 (97918|3,97994|3,98070|3) - ^
01:43:400 (103400|3,103476|3,103553|3) - ^
00:26:192 - add note
00:26:801 - ^
00:26:954 - ^
00:28:020 - ^
00:28:172 - ^
00:28:629 - ^
00:30:608 - 3 note are too much ><
00:39:974 - add note
00:52:385 - ^
00:56:649 - ^
00:57:258 - ^
01:19:187 - ^
01:27:106 - ^
01:24:365 (84365|3) - move to 01:24:517 -
01:33:426 - theres a sound here :3

Hard

00:04:872 - add note
00:05:481 - ^
00:23:756 - ^
00:26:192 - ^
01:15:152 - ^
01:17:588 - ^
01:23:299 - move to 01:23:146 -
01:27:334 - add note
01:44:009 (104009|0,104162|0,104314|0) - move to col 2
01:44:542 - add note (short stream looks fit)
01:44:847 - ^

Normal

00:07:613 (7613|2) - seems better to change it into normal note and add note every 1/2
00:22:385 (22385|2) - ^
01:12:334 - add note
01:32:436 (92436|2,92588|2,92740|2,92893|2) - i know what will you say... but same problem as the other diff... :3
01:34:720 (94720|1,95329|0) - switch column

only that ._.
too simple? idk...
thats all

-LASU- wrote:

Hi

|1|2|3|4|

Maximum mod

00:07:766 - 1/6 e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2946877
00:23:756 - add note (Hard 2notes)
00:58:933 - add note 3
01:02:131 - add note 1
01:02:740 - add note 4
01:03:197 - add note 1
01:04:415 - ^
01:05:025 - ^
01:05:786 - add note 2

good luck (^ω^)

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,

General

be careful about dif gap between normal and hard

normal

00:06:547 (6547|2) - move to 3
00:25:735 (25735|2) - move to 3
00:26:344 (26344|2) - ^ 3
00:38:070 (38070|0) - ^ 3
00:38:375 (38375|2) - ^ 1
00:39:289 (39289|1) - ^ 4
01:32:588 (92588|1,92893|1) - move to 2

Hard

01:07:309 (67309|0) - move to 2
01:08:223 (68223|0) - ^ 2, then ctrl + H
01:43:857 (103857|0) - move to 2
01:44:162 (104162|1,104314|1) - ^ 3

just little sugesstion

please reply before
30/4/2015

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, I'm sorry for the late mods
My modding column format for 4k is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4


Normal

SPOILER

00:06:243 (6243|0) - this is better on 4, pitch-wise
00:06:700 (6700|1) - Move to 4, preserve stair pattern 00:05:938 (5938|1,6091|2,6243|3,6395|1,6547|2,6700|3) - same sound repeated

00:15:075 (15075|0,15075|3) - I don't think widening the gap is a good choice here. try to narrow them instead, moving them to 2 and 3 respectively for proper notes presentation

00:17:512 (17512|0) - move to 3, more comfortable and following pitch relevancy

well, about time you input slight pattern changes:
00:18:273 (18273|3) - Move to 1
00:18:578 (18578|2,18730|1) - Press ctrl + H
00:19:644 (19644|3) - Move to 1
00:19:948 (19948|3) - Move to 2
--

00:20:710 (20710|0) - Move to 4,
00:21:014 (21014|1) - Move to 3, and
00:21:167 (21167|2,21167|3,21471|1,21471|0) - Umm, press ctrl + H

00:22:385 (22385|3,22537|2) - I think this 2 notes should be hammer instead, how about making them jack notes? the sound playing at this point suggest so, at least to me

-

Hard

SPOILER

00:07:918 (7918|3,8070|3) - add 1 more note to each of them, I suggest adding notes on column 1, quite loud impact here

00:11:268 (11268|1,11421|0,11421|2,11573|1,11573|3,11725|2) - feels as if they were randomly plotted, just doesn't feel right- my suggestion:
starting at this time - 00:11:116 (11116|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3007977

*For this one, please try to apply all before attempting to reject them
00:11:725 (11725|2) - Move to 2
00:11:877 (11877|1) - Move to 4
The rest is as following, starting at this time 00:11:725 (11725|1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3007983 OR this is good too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3007986, your choices.
I personally think that jack notes side by side 00:11:877 (11877|0,12030|0,12182|3,12182|0,12334|3,12487|3) - and the zig-zag notes synchronize
and fitting well with the on-going rhythm

Hmm.. i think this 00:51:471 (51471|2) - is better on 4, and
00:51:624 (51624|3,51700|2,51776|1) - press ctrl + J on these notes, ascending/increasing pitch here

01:07:157 (67157|0,67157|2,67309|3,67309|1) - press ctrl + h, 01:06:852 (66852|1,66852|3,67157|1,67157|3,67613|3,67613|1,67766|3,67766|1) - same sound, therefore try to place them along the same column

- Mod Ends -

Good luck with your map c:

MeowPaz wrote:

你好，霍金o/
本渣渣来求M4M啦。;w;

[General]

音效没加呀，加了音效感觉这图更棒了。
增加Tag：C81
BG的分辨率有点小，所以我帮你找到并修改了：
4:3 : http://puu.sh/hkl9A/a2d2b61344.jpg
16:9 : http://puu.sh/hklao/08fb1e33bd.jpg
原图(1611x1411扫描图): http://puu.sh/hklcI/6a2dc42c00.jpg
BG用哪个你决定啦

最後我選了4:3 那個 ;w; 16:9 看不到歌名 原圖感覺超大 所以不用
[Normal]

00:06:395 (6395|1,6547|2,6700|3) - 这段有点微妙呢。。感觉不应该和前面的一样，因为背景的萝莉音变了，我建议改一下这三个note的排列吧。
00:07:766 (7766|3,7918|2,8070|1) - 这三个也许可以试试这样http://puu.sh/hklIX/4bf84d12f2.jpg
00:09:441 (9441|0,9745|1) - 这里为什么突然抓起了鼓音呢o,o
00:46:218 (46218|0,46294|1,46903|3,46903|2) - 有些不顺手，建议与前面一样http://puu.sh/hklXi/eef2f9df7c.jpg
01:07:613 (67613|1,67766|3) - Ctrl+G 感觉与前面不同的梗会好一些
01:08:070 (68070|3,68223|1) - ^Ctrl+G

[Hard]

这个差不多可以算难度Hard+了吧w
00:33:959 (33959|0,33959|1,34035|3,34035|2,34111|0,34111|1) - 感觉这里不用double比较好，建议改为楼梯。
00:43:705 (43705|2,43705|3,43781|1,43781|0,43857|2,43857|3) - ^同上
01:07:613 (67613|3,67613|1,67766|1,67766|3,68070|1,68070|3,68223|2,68223|0) - 这里感觉应该换一下梗
其他我摸不出来啦，感觉很棒。

All fixed
前辈的Maximum难度以我的水平我摸不动啦，就是连点好鬼畜。;_;
[]
我摸的不多啦，才两个难度，所以我的图你也不用摸太多难度了;w;
曲子和谱面都好棒。祝早日rank

其實我覺得最多問題的應該是Maximum 可是你不摸 有點可惜呢;w;
至於hisounds方面 我習慣最後才加 謎之聲 :　根本是你懶
不過也沒關係啊 先謝謝你喔

• [Maximum]
  00:03:502 - to 00:03:654 - 1/6
  00:05:786 - to 00:05:938 - ^
  
  00:41:421 (41421|3,41421|2,41421|1) - move to 234 123 or ctrl+H
  00:42:639 (42639|1) - ^ to 3
  00:51:167 (51167|1,51167|2,51167|3) - ^234 123 or ctrl+h
  01:00:913 (60913|0) - ^2
  
  
  [Hard]
  00:03:502 - to 00:03:654 - 1/6
  00:05:786 - to 00:05:938 - ^
  00:08:375 - to 00:08:527 - ^
  
  00:41:421 (41421|0,41421|1) - move to 12 34
  
  00:47:512 (47512|3) - or 00:47:207 (47207|3) - move to 2
  
  01:36:547 (96547|2,96547|1,96547|0) - ctrl+H
  
  01:44:771 (104771|1,104923|0) - ctrl+g
  01:45:075 - add 2

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's Normal modding

from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

• [Maximum]
  00:03:502 - to 00:03:654 - 1/6
  00:05:786 - to 00:05:938 - ^
  
  00:41:421 (41421|3,41421|2,41421|1) - move to 234 123 or ctrl+H
  00:42:639 (42639|1) - ^ to 3
  00:51:167 (51167|1,51167|2,51167|3) - ^234 123 or ctrl+h
  01:00:913 (60913|0) - ^2
  
  
  [Hard]
  00:03:502 - to 00:03:654 - 1/6
  00:05:786 - to 00:05:938 - ^
  00:08:375 - to 00:08:527 - ^
  
  00:41:421 (41421|0,41421|1) - move to 12 34
  
  00:47:512 (47512|3) - or 00:47:207 (47207|3) - move to 2
  
  01:36:547 (96547|2,96547|1,96547|0) - ctrl+H
  
  01:44:771 (104771|1,104923|0) - ctrl+g
  01:45:075 - add 2

good luck

MeowPaz wrote:

射射射!!!!

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~

From MODHOUSE

Here's my mod as requested, Sorry for the delay

Column 1|2|3|4

Normal

00:03:045 (3045|3,3197|2,3350|1) - move one ccolumn to the left and so 00:02:131 (2131|0) - move LN to 4 for balance
00:18:578 - make it like this v an exact mirrored version on the next pattern

00:22:233 (22233|1) - double note? for~hmm i just think double note goes along with your previous pattern here
00:36:471 (36471|2,36547|0) - this is condusing, i suggest to not using LN here, just map to the 1/2 snap to emphasize the drum roll, like this maybe v or something along the pattern

00:41:877 (41877|3) - move, the sound is here 00:41:954
00:46:218 (46218|1,46294|3) - same as 00:36:471 (36471|2,36547|0)
00:52:994 (52994|2) - double note?
00:54:212 (54212|2) - ^
00:55:431 (55431|2) - ^
00:56:649 (56649|2) - ^
00:57:867 (57867|1) - ^
etc. for the same sound
00:53:299 (53299|3,53299|2) - single note is enough, it has no cymbal sound like 00:54:517 (54517|3,54517|2)
00:55:735 (55735|1,55735|3) - ^
00:58:172 (58172|1,58172|2) - ^
01:20:862 (80862|1) - move to 1 and 01:21:014 (81014|2) - move to 4 for balance
01:22:842 (82842|2) - move to 4^
01:26:192 (86192|3,86192|1) - add another note?
01:44:466 (104466|0) - not suitable for jack anymore i think

Hard

00:05:329 (5329|1,5329|3,5481|1,5481|3) - not suitable for double minijack, the sound is different, the second one is stronger. But using triplets would be pulling it too hard so just use single noter for the first sound. This applies to the whole song, there are a lot of part like this, for instance 00:03:654 (3654|3,3654|0,3806|3,3806|2) , 00:04:111 (4111|0,4111|1,4263|1,4263|2) , etc.
00:09:289 (9289|0) - remove, ghost note
00:47:664 - add note
00:48:882 - ^
00:50:101 - ^
00:51:167 (51167|0,51167|2) - move one column to the right
that's all i found, nice pattern

Maximum

00:24:974 (24974|0,25012|1,25050|2,25088|3,25126|0,25164|1,25202|2,25240|3) - not 8 notes, should be 6 notes snapped to 1/6th divisor
00:27:106 (27106|1) - ghost note, remove
00:29:847 (29847|3,29885|2,29923|1,29961|0,29999|3,30037|2,30075|1,30113|0) - same as my mod on 00:24:974
00:44:771 (44771|2,44771|1,44771|0) - the first two triplets in this minijack have the same sound, but this one is different, move 1 column to the right
00:45:380 (45380|1,45380|3,45380|2) - move 1 column to the right^
00:45:989 (45989|2,45989|0,45989|3) - change to 1-2-4, simply 00:45:989 (45989|2) - move to 2
00:49:111 (49111|2) - remove, ghost note
00:57:867 (57867|2) - double note
01:04:568 (64568|0) - ^
01:10:050 (70050|3) - ^
01:33:121 (93121|3) - ^
01:33:350 (93350|2) - ^

Nice work

GO RANK!~

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY

M4M
Requested by hokin1995

4K

[1|2|3|4]

[General]
*hmmm.... i dont sure with this but... the Offset should be 3342 ? ehh ==a
*Uncheck Widescreen Support :v
*Delete hokin1995 from Beatmap Creator whuawhuawhuahwuawhua

[Maximum]
00:02:131 - http://puu.sh/idfFY/24a7500b00.png might wanna try something like this
00:03:350 (3350|0,3350|1,3350|2) - should just be 2 note since theres no cymbal not snare and.... ==a ?? xD
00:07:918 (7918|0,7918|1,8070|2,8070|3,8070|1) - actually they are same :3
00:08:679 (8679|0,8679|2,8832|3) - Ctrl H ?
00:17:512 (17512|2) - hmmm actually this must end 00:17:893 - here but nvm -.-
00:31:598 - 00:31:751 - 00:31:903 - Inconsisten ! u should add note here since u follow those hit hat before :v
00:32:207 (32207|3,32284|2) - swich column and 00:32:436 (32436|2,32588|3) - swich column again
00:33:502 (33502|1) - move to 3 for some little diffrent pitch
00:33:806 - should be 3 note
00:42:943 (42943|1,43096|2) - move them to be at the same column ? *for consistency pattern my suggestion 00:42:943 (42943|1) - to move this to 3 :3
00:50:405 (50405|3,50481|2,50558|1) - ehhh ? then why u didnt follow it here: 00:47:360 - 00:47:893 - 00:48:045 - 00:48:273 - 00:48:578 - 00:49:111 - 00:50:329 - ???
00:51:776 (51776|2,51928|1) - should be on the same column ? ^^ same pitch and thats what u do before :v
00:52:080 (52080|2) - move to 4 ? 00:52:080 (52080|2,52157|1,52233|2,52309|1,52385|2) - cause i hate this
01:10:126 (70126|1) - hmmm, ghost note ^^
01:16:903 (76903|2,76903|3,77360|0,77360|3) - why are these 2 note ? 01:14:009 - i didnt see those on this part O.Oa
01:22:766 (82766|2) - move to 1?
01:32:588 (92588|2,92588|3,92740|0,92740|1) - Ctrl G ?
01:35:938 (95938|3,96547|0) - should end on the Red Line :v
01:36:852 (96852|3,97004|2,97157|1) - are u following the vocal ? 01:36:243 - 01:36:395 - then add here too :3
01:37:309 (97309|3,97309|2,97461|0,97461|1,97613|2,97613|3,97766|1,97766|0) - inb4 3 note >< *suggest: http://puu.sh/idgC0/f5e21d978b.png
01:37:918 (97918|3,97994|3,98070|3) - move to 3 please x_x *at least 01:38:223 (98223|2) - this should be at the same column with 01:37:918 (97918|3,97994|3,98070|3) - just like before
01:39:974 (99974|1) - Ghost Note AAAA !
01:40:355 - should be 2 note for consistency and kick
01:40:811 - should be 3 note if 01:41:268 (101268|0,101268|3,101268|2,101573|3,101573|1,101573|0) - they're 3 note too :3
01:42:030 - ^
01:43:248 (103248|2,103400|3,103476|3,103553|3,103705|3,103857|3,104009|3,104162|3,104314|3,104466|2) - Please reverse column T_T for pitch and better play
01:44:466 - are u sure u wouldnt make 2 note for the sound like 01:43:400 (103400|3,103476|3,103553|3,103705|3,103857|3,104009|3,104162|3,104314|3) - this ? something like: http://puu.sh/idgMW/6c7dab15f3.png


[Hard]
00:03:502 (3502|0,3553|2,3603|1,3654|0) - are u sure ? this is even harder than MX ><
00:05:837 (5837|3,5888|2,5938|1) - ^ yeah the problem is cause of that mini jacks like 00:05:786 (5786|1,5938|1) - 00:03:502 (3502|0,3654|0) -
00:08:375 (8375|3,8426|1,8476|2,8527|3) - ^ ETC
00:07:766 - will be comfortable if u follow that 1/4 sound, just like what u do on MX
00:13:096 (13096|0,13096|1) - move 2 column to right ? for pitch
00:14:162 (14162|3) - move to 2 ? for ^
00:16:598 (16598|0) - move to 3 ? same pitch with 00:16:903 (16903|2,16903|3) -
00:19:339 (19339|0,19339|3,19492|1,19492|2,19644|3,19644|0) - swich column ? for pitch :v
00:17:512 (17512|3) - just end the LN 00:17:969 - here, so its easier than the MX
00:21:014 (21014|3,21014|0,21167|1,21167|2) - Ctrl G ?
00:31:674 - should be 2 note for consistency
00:31:979 - ^
00:34:263 (34263|1,34263|0,34415|2,34415|3) - Ctrl G ? pitch
00:36:471 (36471|0,36471|1,36547|3,36547|2,36624|1,36700|2,36700|0,36776|1,36852|2,36852|3,36928|0,37004|1,37080|2,37157|3,37157|1) - honestly this is harder than MX. maybe cause of 00:36:471 (36471|1,36547|2,36624|1,36700|2,36776|1,36852|2) -
00:46:218 (46218|2,46218|3,46294|0,46294|1,46370|2,46446|3,46446|1,46522|2,46598|1,46598|0,46674|3,46751|2,46827|1,46903|2,46903|0) - ^
00:40:202 (40202|0) - move to 3 ? to avoid 00:39:898 (39898|0,40050|1,40202|0,40355|1,40507|0,40659|1) - -.-
00:40:355 (40355|1,40507|2,40659|1,40811|2,40964|3,41116|0,41116|1) - Ctrl H ? for pitch ^^
01:11:040 - add note at 2 ?
01:14:999 (74999|3,75075|1) - move to 2 and 3 ? since this is the reverse pattern of 01:16:598 - this part
01:23:223 - better to add note here. its feel so akward
01:23:756 - should be 2 note for kick
01:31:674 (91674|0,91674|1,91827|2,91979|3) - Ctrl H ? for variation with the pattern :v
01:32:588 (92588|1,92588|0,92740|2,92740|3,92893|1,92893|0) - Ctrl H ? for pitch !
01:40:811 - should be 2 note ! for consistency just like 01:42:030 -

Thats my mod :3
Good Luck hokin o/

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
M4M as requested. please mod this map back in return
t/334013
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

overall there are several inconsistencies and seemingly random layering that i have observed, i hope this mod would prove to be helpful to improve your map >w<b

NM

00:04:568 - adding a note to 4 would be better. it looks awkward with the current placing. there is also a beat that you have been following here
00:10:202 - add a note to 2 due to aforementioned reason above

00:23:299 (23299|2,23603|1,23908|2) - ctrl H here would be better to train newbie to press note alternately because at the moment i think your patterning focuses heavily on either left, or right (12 or 34 in general, without much alternating pattern)

00:36:547 - adding a note to 4 would be better to retain consistency in layering and patterning just like this here 00:36:243 -
00:36:852 - use 2 notes as well for aforementioned reason above
00:46:294 (46294|3,46598|0) - same as above, it would be better for layering imo :3
00:48:121 (48121|1) - move this to 1 for hand balance
00:48:426 (48426|0) - and move this one to 4 for the same reason

00:56:040 - using two notes here would be better, to keep consistency as well since this is of the same beat strength and emphasis as 00:55:431 -

00:57:258 - same reason as above ^^
00:58:476 - ^^^
00:58:933 (58933|1,59086|3) - add a note to 3, and then 1, would be better for consistency in layering. it doesn't raise the difficulty pass the current star rating so i think this is much better and should still be acceptable for NM diff.
00:59:390 (59390|3,59695|2,59847|3,60304|1) - utilise 2 ntoes here for the same reason?

01:09:136 (69136|0,70355|0) - using 2 notes here would be better to signify new phase, as well as the emphasis.

HD

00:05:177 - add a note to 2, better emphasis
00:05:329 (5329|1,5481|1) - move this to 3, for hand balance consideration
00:05:634 (5634|2) - move this to 1 for hand balance and avoid uneccessary jacking
00:06:395 (6395|1) - move this to 3 to avoid unnecessary jack, atm i see no reason for you to jack this map here >_<
00:06:852 (6852|2) - moving this to 2 would be better in terms of hand balance

00:07:004 (7004|1) - and move this to 1 to follow earlier pattern
00:25:278 (25278|0) - move this to 3 for hand balance consideration and to avoid jacking with previous notes
00:38:984 - add a note to 4, 2 notes here are more suitable since emphasis is similar with 00:38:679 -
00:57:258 - obvious emphasis here, add a note to 3
00:57:410 (57410|2) - move this to 4 to avoid jacking
01:09:136 (69136|3) - moving this to 3 would be better to avoid jacking with the note after this phase

Maximum

00:14:771 (14771|3) - change ths into 2/4 LN just like previous note, for consistency, the sustained sound is still here in this time
00:17:207 (17207|0) - change this into 2/4 LN same reason as above >_<
00:19:644 (19644|3) - still the same, for consistency

00:22:461 (22461|2) - move this to 4 would be better i think. 1/4 jack at this bpm doesn't look suitable imo >_<
00:23:756 - better to use 3 notes since the emphasis is much stronger here
00:23:603 - you use 3 here, most probably because of the fainter beat + main melody that you're following, in which case the note i mentioned above, is better to be expressed with 3 notes, to also emphasis that there is a change in beat (even if there is no melody anymore at that part)
00:25:583 - add a note to 1, you have been using 3 notes to express this note, its very much preferred if you could keep this in terms of consistency. there is still space to place the note as well so imo there is no reason for you to omit on this particular part :3
00:26:192 - same reason as above

00:26:497 (26497|1,26497|0,26573|3,26649|2,26801|3,26801|1,26954|2,26954|0) - how about rearranging this place, and add LNs to follow that sustained main melody, and placing them from 1 to 2 to 3 to 4 following the ascends of the pitch? i think this would represent the song much better!

00:28:629 - i think 3 notes here is much better because of the much stronger emphasis than previous placing, in which 2 notes are utilised.
00:29:238 - add a note to 2 for the same following reason mentioned above

00:30:456 - add a note to 1, there is an obvious change in the emphasis of the beat. this one here is of the same beat strength with 00:30:152 (30152|3,30152|1,30152|0) - , thus i think there is no reason for you to only place 2 notes here and not utilising 3 instead.
00:31:065 - add a note to 1 would be much better since the beat is of the same strength as well with previous one mentioned above

00:31:979 - add a note to 2 would be better for emphasis imo.
00:33:806 - add a note to 1 is better since the beat is of the same strength with previous placement

00:33:654 (33654|0) - moving this to 3 would be much better in terms of hand balance since at the moment the placing is a bit heavy on the left hand

00:38:984 - i think 3 notes would be better here because of the emphasis, placing it at 2 would be better and it does not obstruct with your current patterning. it also looks neat because by this placing you jack the 2 notes on 2, and then 2 notes on 4, making it also balanced in terms of notes jack even if it's in a higher diffs.

00:39:441 (39441|0,39517|1,39593|2) - i think utilising two notes would be much better here, how about placing it as 13 24 13. to follow your current pattern of 1 2 3. the beat is rather strong here, and in a 4 star rating difficulty i don't think this will obstruct with how the difficult will flow, rather imo this is more suitable for this diff, and also to signify that you indeed express the song based on the emphasis of the note, PR, hand balancing, as well as aesthetic of the map >w<b

00:40:202 - using 2 or 3 notes would be better because of the difference in emphasis. placing it at 1 or 4 would do, or both at 1 and 4
00:40:811 - this would be the same with reasons expounded upon above
00:41:877 (41877|0,41954|1,42030|2,42182|2) - how about using 2 notes as well, because of reasons mentioned above?

00:42:943 (42943|1,42943|0,42943|3,43096|3,43096|2,43096|0,43248|2,43248|0,43248|1,43400|2,43400|0,43400|3,43553|3,43553|1,43553|0,43705|2,43705|3,43781|0,43781|1,43857|3,43857|2,44009|0,44009|3,44009|1,44162|3,44162|2,44162|0) - just like this here, you consistently express the beat strength correctly. keeping this consistency across the whole diffs i think would be important and neat. as well as giving your map an extra aesthetic touch
00:47:512 (47512|1,48121|0) - how about using 2 notes for every white lines in this phase, this fits the song much better and with this you express the song much more accurately because of the difference in beat, you can readjust the patterning as imo it won't destroy your current patterning, rather you'd only need to make a minor revision based on your current placing.

00:48:426 (48426|3,48730|3,48882|2) - i think whether you agree with my point above or not, you should use 2 notes here because of the obvious very loud emphasis. this would improve the readability of your map as well imo thus i think this one is extremely encouraged to be followed

00:49:644 (49644|1,50253|1,50558|1) - this would be the case as the aforementioned reason above

00:52:080 - add a note to 3 would be better for emphasis and to emphasise the change in the phase change
00:59:390 - add a note to 3 as the emphasis is clearly different and highly emphasised on this part
00:59:542 (59542|2,59619|1) - dragging this 1x to the left would be nice to avoid jacking if you agree with my aforementioned recommendations above
01:00:608 - add to 4, aforementioned rationale expounded upon above
01:00:913 - you should use 2 notes here to keep your consistency. there is an audible emphasised beat as well here, 1 note does not make any sense for me and by using 2 notes it makes your map more easily readable and aesthetically pleasing
01:09:441 - 3 notes would be better here because of the difference in emphasis. add to 4 if you agree. this is extremely recommended
01:10:355 - same reason as above, utilisation of 3 notes would be extremely recommended
01:12:182 (72182|0,72182|2,72334|2,72334|1,72487|0,72487|3,72639|3,72639|1,72791|0,72791|2) - utilising 3 notes would be better since this beat is of the same strength with the earlier points in which 3 notes are utilised... see below for reference
00:42:943 (42943|1,42943|0,42943|3,43096|3,43096|2,43096|0,43248|2,43248|0,43248|1,43400|2,43400|0,43400|3,43553|3,43553|1,43553|0,43705|2,43705|3,43781|0,43781|1,43857|3,43857|2,44009|0,44009|3,44009|1,44162|3,44162|2,44162|0) - just like this here

01:15:989 (75989|3,76065|2,76141|1) - dragging this 1x to the left would be better in terms of layering and hand balancing. this would ensure the flow of the note when pressed imo
01:18:426 (78426|0,78502|1,78578|2) - dragging this 1x to the right due to aforementioned rationale above
01:25:735 (85735|0,85811|1,85888|2) - 01:28:172 (88172|3,88248|2,88324|1) - same as aforementioned reason above

01:21:319 (81319|1,81319|2,81471|3,81624|2,81624|1) - i think using 2 notes or 3 notes consistently here would be better to emphasise the part of the song in which the chord is being played at a loud volume setting
01:21:928 (81928|1,81928|3,82080|2,82080|0,82233|3,82233|1) - just like this point here in which 2 notes are consistently utilised

01:23:451 - you forgot to add a note here, add for consistency in layering in this phase

01:29:390 (89390|1) - i think this one should be only 1 note, there is no reason to put 2 notes here, instead put two notes here for emphasis 01:29:542 -
01:29:847 - welps<3 need to add another note here, 2 note just like this emphasis here 01:29:086 (89086|2,89086|1) - and 01:30:304 (90304|3,90304|0) -
01:30:608 (90608|3) - i think this one should also be deleted, this place should be better with being expressed with 1 note, and instead utilise two notes at 01:30:761 -

01:37:309 (97309|2,97461|1,97613|2,97766|1) - adding another note at 2 and 3 would be better, since this is nearing the end of the song and mroe emphasis on the beat on this part would suit the song much better imo!
01:37:994 (97994|3) - move this to 3? just like the reason mentioned before at the beginning of the mod of this diff

01:38:375 (98375|1,98375|0,98527|2,98679|1,98679|3,98832|2,98984|1,98984|3,99060|2,99136|1,99136|3,99289|2,99289|3,99441|1,99593|2,99593|3) - there are several issues with layering here, i would recommend you to revamp this part totally. i will mentioned some examples

01:38:375 - 3 notes should be utilised here because of the clear beat emphasis
01:38:984 (98984|1,98984|3,99060|2,99136|3,99136|1) - 1 note is enough here, no need to use 2, this is because you need to differentiate with the strength of the beat and emphasis here 01:39:289 (99289|2,99289|3) - , in which 2 notes are utilised already.

01:39:593 (99593|3,99745|1,99898|0,99898|2,100050|2,100050|0,100202|1,100202|0,100278|2,100355|0,100355|1,100431|2,100507|1,100507|0,100659|1,100811|0,100811|2) - please implement the following recommendations above to this phase as well due to the same possible issues that i have observed here

01:43:476 (103476|2) - the pitch is actually different here, so move to 2 would be better, and also it looks neater to make a short trill here!

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

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NlHIL wrote:

NM

00:22:461 - add a note

MX

00:17:512 - compared to other LNs, this seems too strange. why not end at 00:17:969
01:40:278 and 01:40:431 - add note


00:35:177 - add a note
00:35:710 - ^
00:35:786 - ^
00:35:862 - ^
00:44:923 - ^
00:45:456 - ^
00:47:360 - ^
00:48:578 - ^
00:55:507 - ^
01:07:004 - ^
01:07:918 - ^
01:08:679 - ^
01:10:431 - ^
01:11:344 - ^
01:11:497 - ^
01:11:649 - ^
01:13:556 - ^
01:13:629 - ^
01:13:857 - ^

xtrem3x wrote:

welcome to akiba-pop world with mosaic.wav For this (ok no XD)
Nice post
well, can make taiko diffs?
Nope, I do not intend to add the taiko diffs in this map, sorry @~@
(or copypaste your files for a taiko mapset)??
You means mp3 file?

xtrem3x wrote:

just mp3 file (is short ver.) I have full version but have lazy for mapping full XDDD

ssss12399 wrote:

練習

Hard

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抱歉不太會看簡單的譜 QQ
00:05:862 - 這邊好像往上偏了一格? 00:05:938 -
00:17:512 (17512|3) - 跟1交換?

Max

1|2|3|4
00:12:791 - add note?
00:31:674 - add note at 4
00:31:827 - add note at 3
01:16:294 - add note at 2
01:18:730 (78730|1) - del
01:26:040 - add note at 3
01:28:476 (88476|2) - del
01:30:761 (90761|3) - 縮短到 01:30:913 -
01:30:913 (90913|1) - 換成LN到 01:31:065 -
01:31:522 - add note?
01:33:502 - 這邊要不要塞滿4/1? 01:35:938 -

Crowe22-S4L wrote:

Good job