yanaginagi - landscape · forum

Ciyus Miapah

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-03-21T02:13:55+00:00

hi~ From Heaven

General:
- no kawaii Animu girl BG ok o.ob .
- drum custom hitwhistle just used on pho's normal? maybe you can use it in you diff :3.
- about volume, it's okay if that volume have 15% or maybe 5% volume in here? i really recommend you to increase volume a bit. yeah about 35%~65%.
- add some mute sliderslide maybe can make this map feel better, especially in pho's normal. But its okay if you didnt do it because newbie player cant feel slider with that muted sliderslide

Insane:
Gud map, i really love this song. <3

00:00:416 - you should set volume to 30% for timing point (avoid some error)
00:12:341 (5) - volume to high i guess, consider reduce to ~40%
00:30:975 (3,4,5) - i guess you should add 1/2 pattern here (piano sound is there, so it feels loss sense if you didnt map it) and looks the spacing like a anti jump
01:44:018 (3) - make wave or curve slider?
02:02:652 (1) - i hear something in sliderslide, maybe add soft sliderslide whistle hitsound there can make sense
02:08:428 (7) - finish him
02:13:086 (1) - finish? you miss it or you doing it on purpose?
02:24:825 (5,6,1) - too much triplets, make 1/2 pattern pls (but idk i feel this map overmap with tripletz, better make jump than triplets ;_;)
02:38:801 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - nice bridge
02:44:950 (3,4) - im sure triplet between this instead of 02:44:391 (1,2,3) -
03:30:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow ;_; (pls make 1/2 pattern in 03:30:229 (5,6,7) - )
i guess you miss some finish hitsound, or maybe you're doing it on purpose. you can recheck your map and take a look for finish sounds, yeah atleast that hitsounds makes sense more :3

Hard:
hope i can mod this map
hope you hitsounding this map
pantun ane bagus kan? :v

00:49:608 (1) - increase distance little bit pls, i know that slider almost touching this slider 00:49:049 (3) -
00:49:049 (3,3) - and this overlap (but its okay since this map has high ar)
01:17:931 (1,2,3) - i dont have idea for this..... i guess you should make this slider more readable and feels comfortable
01:59:670 (1,2) - its clearly looks you need to fix blanket in there
02:02:093 (3,4) - make 1.5x distance in here(i guess it'll be hard to do it)
02:20:540 (1,2,3,4) - this distance looks messy ;_;
02:35:446 (1,2) - why didnt blanket? /:D/
03:12:155 (2,1) - you should fix stacking here
03:34:329 (2) - slider end in 03:34:701 - ?
03:37:310 (3,4) - yeah finally i can see this one, so 01:03:024 (1,2,3,4) - add 1 arrow pls
03:46:627 - its okay if you made repeat slider like 03:47:558 (2) - and add some circle in 03:46:999 - and NC it (because in 03:46:999 - has strong beat)

Pho's Normal:
im just wondering why you use 5% hitsound on your map, i cant even hear soft hitsound with that volume
i think nice placement to your map, i like this plz lmao wow

03:25:198 (5) - maybe blanket this
03:33:583 (4) - oops this slider out of bonds (y=-5), you must move it pls, that slider end hit my HP bar alot
lol in this map im just look for some blanket fixed, but i didnt want Nazi mod this map, not necessary i guess

Easy?:
i think you need make this diff. why? because pho's normal is 1.99 SR (very close to 2 SR), and newbie will love you if you make EZ diff

-------------
OK GOOD LUCK !

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-03-21T10:06:41+00:00

Summoned from the team queue ^^ Before I start I'm going to apologise if I don't find much to comment on in this set since it already looks really clean and well made, and has had a number of good NM/BN mod posts already, but here we go:

General Comments:

Maybe include a third combo colour, something like a yellow or orange?
I know it's a quiet intro so you don't want to be overbearing, but the hitsound volume is too low for me. I'd increase it to maybe 35% until 00:14:577 - (when the drum track begins) and then 55% up until the start of the kiai
Personal preference and it may not be for you, but I like to drag the start of breaks out to the next white tick (or sometimes red if the bpm is high enough) - I just feel like this makes the transition to break during play feel smoother, but it's very minor
Preview point should be snapped to 01:04:142 - (where the white tick is here) for all difficulties

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Pho's Normal

Can't find a lot wrong with this so this difficulty so this will be a nazi blanketing mod (sorry ;_;)

00:18:304 (1) - Blanket is slightly off here, move to [x-382,y-236]

00:22:217 (3,4) - If these are supposed to be blanketed, move (4) to [x-368,y-160], otherwise ignore this

00:42:900 (3) - Rotate the tail of (2) 2 degrees cw to perfect the blanket here

01:16:440 (1) - Move this to [x-50,y-320] to perfect the blanket with (6) from the previous combo

01:50:167 (3) - Move to [x-11,y-189] to perfect the blanket with (2) here. If you do this you may need to reblanket 01:50:726 (4,5) - I feel as things are, you should rotate the tail of (4) 1 degree ccw (yes, super nazi lol)
02:02:652 (4) - ^ As above, rotate the tail 1 degree ccw

02:03:397 (5,1,2) - Maybe reflow slightly so you can stck (1) with the head of 02:02:093 (3) ?

02:34:701 (6) - Move to [x-330,y-208] to create a neat double blanket with (5)
02:43:645 (4) - ^ As above, move (4) to [x-136,y-240]

Hard

01:03:024 (1,2,4) - I can't hear a note in the music to justify the reverse on these like I can for 01:03:770 (3) so maybe make these regular 1/2 sliders?

02:02:093 (3,4,5,1,2) - Rearrange this slightly so that you can stack the head of (1) on top of (3) and the head of (2) on top of (4)

02:16:068 (1,2,3,4) - Someone complained at me for putting a pattern like this in a Hard diff on one of my maps, so it's nice to see someone else doing it! I think it's fine (:

02:31:534 (2,3) - Rotate the tail of (2) ccw so you can blanket these two if you think it fits. If you do this, make sure to do the same with 02:32:465 (1)

02:40:105 - There's a *slightly* weaker kick drum beat here that's probably still strong enough to warrant mapping. Maybe make 02:40:291 (1) a 1/2 slider starting here?

03:48:490 (1,1) - Woah, a double spinner! Haven't seen one of these in a while

maybe you could make the volume on the second spinner fade out over time? I think 03:54:453 is a good place to start gradually reducing the volume

Insane

I don't have an issue with triplets but I think they're *slightly* overused in this diff. I would consider whether all of them are really necessary and/or justified, but I guess this is just my personal preference

00:03:956 (2,3) - Maybe you're not bothered about blanketing in the Insane diff, but if you are, consider giving (2) more of a curve to blanket (3)

00:09:360 (3) - This would look better as a smooth curve IMO

01:11:969 (1,2,3,4) - You could arrange these into a more uniform diamond shaped pattern if you like. The blanketing around (2) is spot-on, so keep this note where it is and use it as an anchor point for the others

03:48:490 (1,1) - Same comment about the spinner volume as for Hard

Hope this helped! Let me know if you want me to explain anything further.

Best of luck - this is looking really good! (:

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-21T12:39:19+00:00

Fort wrote:
hi~ From Heaven jauh amat

General:
- no kawaii Animu girl BG ok o.ob .
- drum custom hitwhistle just used on pho's normal? maybe you can use it in you diff :3. On progress, patient lol
- about volume, it's okay if that volume have 15% or maybe 5% volume in here? i really recommend you to increase volume a bit. yeah about 35%~65%. They're still audible imo (nunggu modder lain ngomong apa)
- add some mute sliderslide maybe can make this map feel better, especially in pho's normal. But its okay if you didnt do it because newbie player cant feel slider with that muted sliderslide

Insane:
Gud map, i really love this song. <3

00:00:416 - you should set volume to 30% for timing point (avoid some error) Fixed
00:12:341 (5) - volume to high i guess, consider reduce to ~40% Fixed
00:30:975 (3,4,5) - i guess you should add 1/2 pattern here (piano sound is there, so it feels loss sense if you didnt map it) and looks the spacing like a anti jump I don't know how to deal with this, no change for now
01:44:018 (3) - make wave or curve slider? I like straight better :3
02:02:652 (1) - i hear something in sliderslide, maybe add soft sliderslide whistle hitsound there can make sense tbh, i don't really understand what you mean
02:08:428 (7) - finish him FATALITY!!!
02:13:086 (1) - finish? you miss it or you doing it on purpose? Yupz, on purpose
02:24:825 (5,6,1) - too much triplets, make 1/2 pattern pls (but idk i feel this map overmap with tripletz, better make jump than triplets ;_;) I changed this part into jumps
02:38:801 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - nice bridge =w=
02:44:950 (3,4) - im sure triplet between this instead of 02:44:391 (1,2,3) - I'm sure you're right
03:30:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow ;_; (pls make 1/2 pattern in 03:30:229 (5,6,7) - ) I changed this whole pattern
i guess you miss some finish hitsound, or maybe you're doing it on purpose. you can recheck your map and take a look for finish sounds, yeah atleast that hitsounds makes sense more :3

Hard:
hope i can mod this map
hope you hitsounding this map
pantun ane bagus kan? :v
~~Fort 4 Pantun Nominator~~

00:49:608 (1) - increase distance little bit pls, i know that slider almost touching this slider 00:49:049 (3) - Fixed
00:49:049 (3,3) - and this overlap (but its okay since this map has high ar) This is fine imo
01:17:931 (1,2,3) - i dont have idea for this..... i guess you should make this slider more readable and feels comfortable No change for now
01:59:670 (1,2) - its clearly looks you need to fix blanket in there Oops
02:02:093 (3,4) - make 1.5x distance in here(i guess it'll be hard to do it) Muzukashii
02:20:540 (1,2,3,4) - this distance looks messy ;_; Should be a bit better now
02:35:446 (1,2) - why didnt blanket? /:D/ Blanketed
03:12:155 (2,1) - you should fix stacking here Fixed
03:34:329 (2) - slider end in 03:34:701 - ? Too empty
03:37:310 (3,4) - yeah finally i can see this one, so 01:03:024 (1,2,3,4) - add 1 arrow pls Maybe later
03:46:627 - its okay if you made repeat slider like 03:47:558 (2) - and add some circle in 03:46:999 - and NC it (because in 03:46:999 - has strong beat) Nice one

Pho's Normal:
im just wondering why you use 5% hitsound on your map, i cant even hear soft hitsound with that volume
i think nice placement to your map, i like this plz lmao wow

03:25:198 (5) - maybe blanket this
03:33:583 (4) - oops this slider out of bonds (y=-5), you must move it pls, that slider end hit my HP bar alot
lol in this map im just look for some blanket fixed, but i didnt want Nazi mod this map, not necessary i guess

Easy?:
i think you need make this diff. why? because pho's normal is 1.99 SR (very close to 2 SR), and newbie will love you if you make EZ diff Bikinin dong

-------------
OK GOOD LUCK !

Thanks for modding

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-03-21T12:41:36+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
Bikinin dong

ane mana ada bakat bikin diff easy di lagu ini xP

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-21T13:33:07+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Summoned from the team queue ^^ Before I start I'm going to apologise if I don't find much to comment on in this set since it already looks really clean and well made, and has had a number of good NM/BN mod posts already, but here we go:

General Comments:
Maybe include a third combo colour, something like a yellow or orange? It has 4 combo colours owo
I know it's a quiet intro so you don't want to be overbearing, but the hitsound volume is too low for me. I'd increase it to maybe 35% until 00:14:577 - (when the drum track begins) and then 55% up until the start of the kiai I'll consider this later
Personal preference and it may not be for you, but I like to drag the start of breaks out to the next white tick (or sometimes red if the bpm is high enough) - I just feel like this makes the transition to break during play feel smoother, but it's very minor Umm
Preview point should be snapped to 01:04:142 - (where the white tick is here) for all difficulties Fixed
Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Pho's Normal
Can't find a lot wrong with this so this difficulty so this will be a nazi blanketing mod (sorry ;_;)

00:18:304 (1) - Blanket is slightly off here, move to [x-382,y-236]

00:22:217 (3,4) - If these are supposed to be blanketed, move (4) to [x-368,y-160], otherwise ignore this

00:42:900 (3) - Rotate the tail of (2) 2 degrees cw to perfect the blanket here

01:16:440 (1) - Move this to [x-50,y-320] to perfect the blanket with (6) from the previous combo

01:50:167 (3) - Move to [x-11,y-189] to perfect the blanket with (2) here. If you do this you may need to reblanket 01:50:726 (4,5) - I feel as things are, you should rotate the tail of (4) 1 degree ccw (yes, super nazi lol)
02:02:652 (4) - ^ As above, rotate the tail 1 degree ccw

02:03:397 (5,1,2) - Maybe reflow slightly so you can stck (1) with the head of 02:02:093 (3) ?

02:34:701 (6) - Move to [x-330,y-208] to create a neat double blanket with (5)
02:43:645 (4) - ^ As above, move (4) to [x-136,y-240]

Hard
01:03:024 (1,2,4) - I can't hear a note in the music to justify the reverse on these like I can for 01:03:770 (3) so maybe make these regular 1/2 sliders? Umm no, actually I might change this whole pattern into something different

02:02:093 (3,4,5,1,2) - Rearrange this slightly so that you can stack the head of (1) on top of (3) and the head of (2) on top of (4) I might re-arange this whole pattern

02:16:068 (1,2,3,4) - Someone complained at me for putting a pattern like this in a Hard diff on one of my maps, so it's nice to see someone else doing it! I think it's fine (: ^^

02:31:534 (2,3) - Rotate the tail of (2) ccw so you can blanket these two if you think it fits. If you do this, make sure to do the same with 02:32:465 (1) Actuall, thats on purpose

02:40:105 - There's a *slightly* weaker kick drum beat here that's probably still strong enough to warrant mapping. Maybe make 02:40:291 (1) a 1/2 slider starting here? The beat is not strong enough to be mapped imo, especially on hard diff

03:48:490 (1,1) - Woah, a double spinner! Haven't seen one of these in a while maybe you could make the volume on the second spinner fade out over time? I think 03:54:453 is a good place to start gradually reducing the volume Yup :3

Insane
I don't have an issue with triplets but I think they're *slightly* overused in this diff. I would consider whether all of them are really necessary and/or justified, but I guess this is just my personal preference

00:03:956 (2,3) - Maybe you're not bothered about blanketing in the Insane diff, but if you are, consider giving (2) more of a curve to blanket (3) Blanket them even further makes the flow kinda off imo

00:09:360 (3) - This would look better as a smooth curve IMO I guess, I'll keep this as it is

01:11:969 (1,2,3,4) - You could arrange these into a more uniform diamond shaped pattern if you like. The blanketing around (2) is spot-on, so keep this note where it is and use it as an anchor point for the others I liked how them placed kinda "randomly" lol

03:48:490 (1,1) - Same comment about the spinner volume as for Hard ofc

Hope this helped! Let me know if you want me to explain anything further.

Best of luck - this is looking really good! (:

Thank you for your mod

I'll update this later...

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-03-21T13:44:47+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
Maybe include a third combo colour, something like a yellow or orange? It has 4 combo colours owo

Ok so I did a recheck, your diffs have 4 combo colours, but Pho's Normal currently only has two, a bright green and a deep blue. I really like the colours you've chosen so just update the Normal with these (:

Apologies for assuming this was a problem in all diffs :3

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-03-21T17:54:29+00:00

Fixed the CC from Arcubin~

Fort

Fort wrote:
hi~ From Heaven

Pho's Normal:
im just wondering why you use 5% hitsound on your map, i cant even hear soft hitsound with that volume
i think nice placement to your map, i like this plz lmao wow I left the hitsounds and everything concerning that to yaldo

03:25:198 (5) - maybe blanket this It should be fine as it is right now.
03:33:583 (4) - oops this slider out of bonds (y=-5), you must move it pls, that slider end hit my HP bar alot
lol in this map im just look for some blanket fixed, but i didnt want Nazi mod this map, not necessary i guess

Easy?:
i think you need make this diff. why? because pho's normal is 1.99 SR (very close to 2 SR), and newbie will love you if you make EZ diff yaldo can decide if he wants to make one, I feel my diff is still handable for new players, the rhythms are not too difficult and i put high priority on readability (no stacks whatsoever).

-------------
OK GOOD LUCK !

JBHyperion

JBHyperion wrote:
Summoned from the team queue ^^ Before I start I'm going to apologise if I don't find much to comment on in this set since it already looks really clean and well made, and has had a number of good NM/BN mod posts already, but here we go:

General Comments:
Maybe include a third combo colour, something like a yellow or orange?
I know it's a quiet intro so you don't want to be overbearing, but the hitsound volume is too low for me. I'd increase it to maybe 35% until 00:14:577 - (when the drum track begins) and then 55% up until the start of the kiai
Personal preference and it may not be for you, but I like to drag the start of breaks out to the next white tick (or sometimes red if the bpm is high enough) - I just feel like this makes the transition to break during play feel smoother, but it's very minor
Preview point should be snapped to 01:04:142 - (where the white tick is here) for all difficulties
Difficulty-Specific Comments:

[Pho's Normal]
Can't find a lot wrong with this so this difficulty so this will be a nazi blanketing mod (sorry ;_;)

00:18:304 (1) - Blanket is slightly off here, move to [x-382,y-236]

00:22:217 (3,4) - If these are supposed to be blanketed, move (4) to [x-368,y-160], otherwise ignore this not supposed to

00:42:900 (3) - Rotate the tail of (2) 2 degrees cw to perfect the blanket here

01:16:440 (1) - Move this to [x-50,y-320] to perfect the blanket with (6) from the previous combo

01:50:167 (3) - Move to [x-11,y-189] to perfect the blanket with (2) here. If you do this you may need to reblanket 01:50:726 (4,5) - I feel as things are, you should rotate the tail of (4) 1 degree ccw (yes, super nazi lol)
02:02:652 (4) - ^ As above, rotate the tail 1 degree ccw

02:03:397 (5,1,2) - Maybe reflow slightly so you can stck (1) with the head of 02:02:093 (3) ? No intention of stacking on the easiest diff, I'll keep it as it is.

02:34:701 (6) - Move to [x-330,y-208] to create a neat double blanket with (5)
02:43:645 (4) - ^ As above, move (4) to [x-136,y-240] This doesn't have to be blanketed, flows pretty well already.

Hope this helped! Let me know if you want me to explain anything further.

Best of luck - this is looking really good! (:

No comment = fixed, thank you guys!

Pho

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Landscape.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64156
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:yaldo_27
Version:Pho's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shinya Saito ポリオミノ Polyomino Pho
BeatmapID:654312
BeatmapSetID:288852

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88566,98286
2,173535,178037
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
416,372.670807453416,4,2,1,5,1,0
13086,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
14577,-100,4,3,1,44,0,0
64515,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
76254,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
76440,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
88366,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
99546,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
137558,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
149297,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
149484,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
161409,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
191223,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
191409,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
192714,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
193086,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
194204,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
202962,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
203148,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
218055,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
84,112,416,6,0,P|120:76|256:96,1,180
298,173,1347,2,0,L|370:181,2,60
260,211,1906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,315,2652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,3397,6,0,P|128:140|136:220,1,120
138,263,3956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,321,4329,2,0,L|224:401,2,60
270,287,4888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,191,5260,2,0,P|364:156|443:153,2,120
408,251,6378,6,0,L|444:50,1,180
333,56,7310,2,0,L|268:15,2,60
320,108,7869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,269,8614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,79,9360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,79,10850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
97,184,11223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,242,11596,2,0,P|248:257|316:241,1,120
394,188,12341,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,79,12714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,47,13086,2,0,B|246:129|353:226|297:289|262:284|262:284|231:284|205:235|260:216,1,360.000013732911
144,219,14950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,324,15322,5,0,0:0:0:0:
263,372,15695,2,0,P|314:364|370:310,1,120
377,267,16254,2,0,L|384:196,2,60
463,201,16999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,152,17186,2,0,P|398:130|320:144,2,120
376,236,18304,6,0,P|326:263|253:256,1,120
182,187,19049,2,0,L|184:125,2,60
128,197,19608,2,0,P|94:243|133:376,1,180
163,377,20353,2,0,B|222:366|222:366|281:381|281:381|355:364,1,180
409,285,21285,6,0,P|446:281|482:286,2,60
357,268,21844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,203,22217,2,0,P|261:165|268:126,2,60
356,136,22962,2,0,P|365:98|358:59,2,60
276,64,23707,2,0,L|132:71,1,120
104,76,24266,6,0,P|80:119|86:204,1,120
109,293,25012,2,0,L|124:355,2,60
151,259,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,333,26316,2,0,P|383:294|383:219,1,120
346,187,26875,2,0,L|280:187,2,60
427,116,27620,5,0,0:0:0:0:
402,67,27807,2,0,P|364:52|283:73,1,120
215,147,28552,2,0,P|170:175|70:103,1,180
73,62,29297,2,0,P|118:17|179:22,1,120
252,90,30043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,143,30229,6,0,B|250:159|260:181|260:181|256:226|256:226|266:250|263:268,1,120
289,308,30788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,333,30975,2,0,P|395:334|446:281,1,120
380,205,31720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,135,32093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,68,32465,2,0,L|371:1,2,60
287,130,33211,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,77,33583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,70,33770,2,0,P|93:73|34:116,1,120
27,236,34515,2,0,P|36:280|161:357,1,180
192,354,35260,2,0,L|335:338,1,120
419,331,36006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,277,36192,6,0,P|408:220|429:141,1,120
446,111,36751,2,0,P|391:90|326:102,1,120
260,180,37496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,204,37683,2,0,P|156:209|185:72,1,240
215,78,38614,2,0,L|291:92,2,60
222,24,39173,5,0,0:0:0:0:
329,33,39546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,79,39732,2,0,P|343:130|281:171,1,120
185,194,40478,2,0,P|172:251|194:319,1,120
233,338,41037,2,0,L|319:331,1,60
379,268,41596,2,0,P|340:231|273:216,1,120
272,161,42155,6,0,B|265:100|265:100|239:75|203:86,1,120
162,108,42714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,136,42900,2,0,P|60:132|5:91,1,120
95,32,43645,6,0,L|225:41,1,120
258,139,44391,2,0,L|384:107,1,120
455,36,45136,6,0,L|457:164,1,120
440,207,45695,2,0,P|392:231|410:355,1,180
293,306,46627,2,0,L|163:308,1,120
119,312,47186,2,0,P|128:263|48:164,1,180
20,208,47931,6,0,L|25:277,2,60
17,99,48676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,40,49049,2,0,L|182:11,2,60
128,90,49608,5,0,0:0:0:0:
182,183,49981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,189,50353,2,0,P|315:234|401:267,1,120
469,215,51099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,51471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,135,52217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,320,52962,5,0,0:0:0:0:
293,158,53521,2,0,L|293:94,2,60
291,212,54080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,250,54453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,98,55198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,44,55571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,112,55943,2,0,P|230:171|211:241,2,120
124,174,57061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,237,57434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,328,57807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,268,58179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,346,58552,6,0,L|393:326,1,120
461,261,59297,2,0,L|325:241,1,120
262,169,60043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,64,60415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,32,60788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
483,91,61161,2,0,L|486:158,2,60
397,157,61906,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,155,62279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,107,62652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,62,63024,2,0,L|68:204,1,120
171,223,63770,2,0,L|194:365,1,120
299,362,64515,6,0,P|357:362|411:325,1,120
422,277,65074,2,0,B|422:243|422:243|400:191|400:191|400:141,1,120
399,107,65633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,148,66006,2,0,P|253:148|186:102,1,120
155,72,66565,2,0,P|103:69|33:101,1,120
22,146,67124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,229,67496,6,0,L|82:315,2,60
142,214,68055,2,0,P|180:204|260:255,1,120
311,326,68801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,336,68987,2,0,P|407:328|454:258,1,120
404,173,69732,2,0,P|360:165|313:95,1,120
225,47,70478,6,0,L|232:173,1,120
234,220,71037,2,0,P|182:251|113:247,1,120
76,225,71596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,133,71968,2,0,P|74:116|142:134,1,120
182,150,72527,2,0,P|249:170|308:153,1,120
332,118,73086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,84,73459,6,0,L|430:212,1,120
329,238,74204,2,0,L|333:110,1,120
301,73,74763,2,0,P|250:54|180:71,1,120
139,93,75322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,167,75695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,247,76068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,324,76440,6,0,P|90:347|179:353,1,120
218,340,76999,2,0,L|230:209,1,120
236,166,77558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,221,77931,2,0,P|345:172|321:102,1,120
282,76,78490,2,0,L|157:77,1,120
124,115,79049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,221,79422,6,0,P|190:246|224:318,1,120
234,353,79981,2,0,L|366:340,1,120
407,338,80540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
494,275,80912,2,0,P|488:224|444:164,1,120
340,164,81658,2,0,P|300:208|286:265,1,120
195,322,82403,6,0,P|155:329|74:282,1,120
70,246,82962,2,0,P|97:201|40:92,1,180
152,72,83894,2,0,L|277:50,1,120
323,40,84453,2,0,P|369:92|365:207,1,180
281,261,85384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,176,85757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,169,86130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,86502,2,0,L|28:369,2,120
34,249,88366,5,4,0:0:0:0:
116,172,99546,6,0,L|129:107,2,60
171,264,100291,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,197,100664,2,0,L|332:201,1,60
348,302,101223,2,0,P|393:272|422:202,1,120
424,159,101782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,102155,2,0,L|267:94,1,60
192,160,102714,2,0,P|143:182|69:156,1,120
43,127,103273,6,0,L|50:266,1,120
56,300,103832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,335,104018,2,0,P|137:354|226:337,1,120
242,243,104763,5,0,0:0:0:0:
349,236,105136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,289,105509,2,0,L|449:364,2,60
487,190,106254,5,0,0:0:0:0:
410,113,106627,2,0,L|344:113,1,60
264,47,107186,2,0,P|206:43|144:86,1,120
124,118,107745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,185,108117,2,0,L|275:185,1,60
349,256,108676,2,0,P|338:299|277:343,1,120
227,332,109235,6,0,L|98:320,1,120
65,286,109794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,189,110167,2,0,P|63:174|131:194,1,120
182,198,110726,2,0,P|238:164|258:102,1,120
151,95,111471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,187,111844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,277,112217,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,112589,2,0,L|322:277,1,60
406,341,113148,2,0,P|437:300|442:206,1,120
431,181,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,114080,2,0,L|265:141,1,60
179,205,114639,2,0,P|107:176|43:186,1,120
28,217,115198,6,0,P|26:278|65:348,1,120
93,362,115757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,345,115943,2,0,P|197:332|273:347,1,120
366,313,116689,2,0,L|355:180,1,120
248,199,117434,2,0,L|261:58,1,120
161,31,118179,6,0,P|120:50|86:131,1,120
91,167,118738,2,0,B|100:224|100:224|145:274|145:274|162:347,1,180
259,295,119670,2,0,P|314:267|389:284,1,120
423,281,120229,2,0,B|453:196|453:196|454:151|407:97,1,180
385,71,120975,6,0,P|370:32|369:10,2,60
332,86,121534,2,0,L|249:100,1,60
190,166,122093,2,0,L|107:152,1,60
44,91,122652,2,0,P|92:56|160:52,1,120
249,101,123397,2,0,L|312:99,2,60
174,179,124142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,286,124515,2,0,P|217:308|305:307,1,120
334,275,125074,2,0,B|338:225|338:225|352:197|352:197|357:147,1,120
390,56,125819,2,0,L|323:59,1,60
236,106,126378,2,0,L|164:91,1,60
125,78,126751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,146,127124,6,0,P|25:205|44:283,1,120
129,318,127869,2,0,L|170:367,2,60
138,264,128428,2,0,P|181:217|247:207,1,120
288,208,128987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,277,129360,2,0,L|361:346,2,60
468,231,130105,6,0,B|466:190|466:190|440:159|440:159|427:112,1,120
359,37,130850,2,0,L|288:30,2,60
354,91,131409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,138,131596,2,0,P|248:140|192:115,1,120
118,70,132341,2,0,P|78:66|38:83,2,60
123,123,132900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,169,133086,6,0,L|92:315,1,120
183,348,133832,2,0,L|258:352,2,60
239,256,134577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,262,134950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,203,135322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,95,135695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,19,136068,6,0,L|249:33,1,120
224,137,136813,2,0,L|103:123,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,187,137558,6,0,P|13:241|44:316,1,120
75,337,138117,2,0,L|200:347,1,120
240,317,138676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,240,139049,2,0,P|377:214|443:231,1,120
474,251,139608,2,0,L|477:109,1,120
473,76,140167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,26,140540,6,0,B|342:30|342:30|302:57|302:57|247:63,1,120
210,56,141099,2,0,P|156:40|76:68,1,120
53,88,141658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,195,142030,2,0,L|76:324,1,120
176,272,142776,2,0,L|187:145,1,120
253,69,143521,6,0,P|305:75|352:141,1,120
356,177,144080,2,0,P|304:183|257:249,1,120
260,285,144639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,357,145012,2,0,P|142:356|73:297,1,120
68,254,145571,2,0,L|59:129,1,120
55,80,146130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,65,146502,6,0,P|219:86|292:64,1,120
320,46,147061,2,0,P|359:50|390:75,1,60
418,94,147434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,202,147807,2,0,L|410:335,1,120
368,356,148366,2,0,L|300:348,1,60
275,305,148738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,352,149111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,310,149484,6,0,P|62:263|66:185,1,120
101,153,150043,2,0,L|224:153,1,120
264,120,150602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,208,150975,2,0,P|382:226|459:200,1,120
482,178,151534,2,0,B|483:140|483:140|463:104|463:104|460:45,1,120
478,11,152093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,58,152465,6,0,L|251:64,1,120
207,69,153024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,146,153397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,254,153770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,298,153956,2,0,P|204:316|283:290,1,120
328,208,154701,2,0,P|285:190|206:216,1,120
108,220,155447,6,0,P|59:192|35:125,1,120
41,81,156006,2,0,L|187:69,1,120
214,64,156565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,57,156937,2,0,P|347:116|332:181,1,120
307,213,157496,2,0,B|226:244|191:179|122:216,1,180
172,311,158428,5,0,0:0:0:0:
273,348,158801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,283,159173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,321,159546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,214,159919,2,0,L|453:94,1,120
131,52,161409,6,0,P|186:31|262:40,1,120
253,142,162155,2,0,L|255:262,1,120
178,338,162900,2,0,P|135:342|53:311,1,120
138,243,163645,2,0,P|181:239|263:270,1,120
341,324,164391,6,0,P|403:308|445:263,1,120
456,162,165136,2,0,L|458:95,2,60
403,177,165695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,121,166068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,203,166440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,262,166813,2,0,P|277:304|212:307,1,120
172,307,167372,6,0,P|140:291|112:259,1,60
93,228,167745,2,0,L|106:154,1,60
170,84,168304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,155,168676,2,0,P|301:175|387:155,1,120
436,80,169422,2,0,P|391:60|305:80,1,120
370,167,170167,6,0,B|373:226|373:226|394:268|394:268|396:347,1,180
288,351,171099,2,0,L|214:358,2,60
224,263,171844,2,0,L|85:276,1,120
155,179,172589,2,0,L|294:166,1,120
337,79,173335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,61,179297,6,0,B|337:118|337:118|361:180,1,120
453,226,180043,2,0,B|472:169|472:169|448:107,1,120
359,174,180788,2,0,L|239:176,1,120
180,267,181534,2,0,L|305:264,1,120
360,174,182279,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,83,182652,2,0,L|226:83,1,60
135,115,183211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,59,183583,2,0,P|27:119|54:189,1,120
62,223,184142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,255,184515,2,0,L|295:255,1,120
367,185,185260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,185633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,186006,2,0,L|258:357,1,120
201,272,186751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,317,187124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,216,187496,2,0,L|51:85,1,120
143,38,188242,5,0,0:0:0:0:
201,128,188614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,175,188987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,154,189360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,69,189732,2,0,P|381:50|304:112,1,180
315,152,190478,2,0,L|315:229,1,60
198,324,191223,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,74,192155,2,0,L|71:8,2,60
144,87,192714,6,0,L|210:81,1,60
329,257,193645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,230,194018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,194204,6,0,P|466:118|440:59,1,120
391,61,194763,2,0,P|328:89|267:68,1,120
232,52,195322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,88,195695,2,0,P|95:144|86:203,1,120
193,186,196440,2,0,P|228:242|237:301,1,120
322,361,197186,6,0,P|385:357|439:318,1,120
442,273,197745,2,0,B|440:227|440:227|423:198|423:198|416:144,1,120
425,104,198304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,55,198676,2,0,B|326:101|326:101|309:130|309:130|302:184,1,120
303,224,199235,2,0,P|267:258|183:257,1,120
149,241,199794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,168,200167,6,0,P|109:140|186:141,1,120
286,141,200912,2,0,P|340:129|389:66,1,120
420,44,201471,2,0,P|451:98|450:182,1,120
449,208,202030,2,0,P|442:246|425:269,1,60
402,309,202403,2,0,P|379:336|335:355,1,60
308,368,202776,2,0,P|257:377|231:371,1,60
198,357,203148,6,0,B|179:324|207:277|181:216,1,120
164,189,203707,2,0,P|119:176|32:217,1,120
58,251,204266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,280,204639,2,0,P|211:266|250:196,1,120
253,156,205198,2,0,P|233:117|161:84,1,120
113,95,205757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,191,206130,6,0,P|189:229|282:252,1,120
309,257,206689,2,0,L|433:257,1,120
459,212,207248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,104,207620,2,0,P|428:75|343:55,1,120
269,123,208366,2,0,P|224:161|166:173,1,120
71,226,209111,6,0,P|58:166|88:99,1,120
91,60,209670,2,0,B|165:24|214:80|270:32,1,180
333,120,210602,2,0,P|383:146|451:139,1,120
484,178,211161,2,0,B|523:270|450:291|498:368,1,180
382,342,212093,6,0,P|326:357|261:347,1,120
180,280,212838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,213211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,213583,2,0,L|184:18,1,120
72,26,214329,2,0,L|-11:35,2,60
52,132,215074,6,0,L|47:262,1,120
68,304,215633,2,0,P|112:344|188:344,1,120
208,312,216192,2,0,P|236:297|280:304,1,60
316,316,216565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,220,216937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,274,217310,2,0,L|501:333,2,60
456,165,218055,5,0,0:0:0:0:
369,99,218428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,147,218801,2,0,L|244:216,2,60
254,95,219360,2,0,P|182:68|136:80,1,120
94,102,219919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,202,220291,2,0,L|65:332,1,120
165,359,221037,6,0,L|155:229,1,120
252,191,221782,2,0,L|258:265,2,60
242,137,222341,2,0,P|272:95|354:81,1,120
389,83,222900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,123,223086,2,0,B|427:183|427:183|466:231|466:231|472:305,1,180
376,341,224018,6,0,P|345:361|309:362,2,60
376,286,224577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,214,224950,2,0,P|269:218|231:253,2,60
396,179,225695,2,0,P|405:158|394:107,2,60
377,288,226440,2,0,P|393:306|442:323,1,60
482,230,226999,6,0,P|493:185|491:101,1,120
407,45,227745,2,0,L|344:11,2,60
389,96,228304,2,0,P|339:158|241:60,1,240
133,46,229422,2,0,L|52:31,2,60
146,98,229981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230167,12,0,235881,0:0:0:0:

bigfeh

1,149 posts

Joined January 2013

bigfeh 2015-03-21T19:28:19+00:00

This mod was requested in bigfeh's 24h Modding Queue.

Accepting guest Insane diffs?

Pho's Normal

• 00:12:341(4,1) - Consider changing to two returning 1/4 sliders and starting them a 1/2 note earlier, as in pic related. However, as this is a normal difficulty, also consider decreasing the distance between the notes in this part

Pic related

• 00:21:285(5) - Consider changing slider as in pic related. Feels more natural to me

Pic related

• 00:45:136(2,4) -Sliders should end 1/2 of a note earlier. That's when the vocal ends
• 01:28:366(1) - Maybe move this more elsewhere on the screen?
• 02:00:975(3) - You should add a return to this slider due to the length of the vocal
• 02:10:105(3) - Note should be removed and 02:10:105(4) should start in that time, as in pic related

Pic related

• 02:10:105(5) - ^ Same, but with 02:13:086(1) instead
• 02:17:558(1,2,3) - Combo feels best as in pic related due to vocals

Pic related

• I get the multiple Kiais starting at 03:11:223 but this might be a problem. There are three in a row, which could get you in trouble

Hard

I absolutely love the general map flow here. Looks great!
• 00:27:620(3) - Slider should end 1/2 of a note earlier to sync with vocal. Also, consider making a single circle if you don't like how it works out
• 00:31:720(1,2) - I don't like this combo, particularly the second slider. It feels like there is no big connection to the music - try adding more notes, removing the sliders and mapping it to the piano
• 00:57:061 - I love the map flow here up until the spinner
• 01:21:285(4) - Consider deleting this slider and adding a single circle where it ends instead. Feels out of beat
• 01:22:962(1) - Maybe cut 1/2 a note from the end of this slider? Would sync with vocals and make more sense
• 01:24:453(1) - ^ Same
• 02:41:596 - Maybe - and a BIG maybe here - you should consider making the slider a bit shorter, because the note at the end is only a 1/2 note away
• 03:50:167 - Slidah 2 long 4 me. Maybe make the first one longer and remove this?

Insane

Love the map overall. Will be playing this once it gets ranked <3
• 00:57:061(3) - Return feels weird. Recommend making a bigger slider with same start and end times
• 01:27:061(1) - This shouldn't be here. No beat, no vocals, nothing. If you want a circle in the vocals, cut the last slider in half and place it there as in pic related

Pic related

• 01:46:254(5,6,1) - I don't get the triple here. Feels overmapped
• 01:50:726(2,3,4) - Same
• 01:50:726(7,8) - Consider adding note inbetween to sync with percussion
• 01:52:217(2,3,4) - I don't feel strongly for this triple either
• 02:02:652(1) - Consider making changes here. There is percussion before the end of the slider; Suggest doing as in pic related

Pic related

• 02:08:987(1,2,3,4,5) - Consider making similar changes as explained above
• 02:17:558(1,2,3,4) - Combo misses percussion. Suggest doing as in pic related

Pic related

• 02:19:049(1,2,3,4) - Exact same as above
• 02:40:664(3) - Weeeeeird design decision. Maybe make a long slow slider of same duration instead?
• 02:42:714(2,3,4) - Feels overmapped to, same as 01:46:254(5,6,1) and 01:50:726(2,3,4)
• 02:44:391(2,3) - ^
• 03:03:583(5,6) - Missing circle between these notes
• 03:03:583(5,6) - Should add a note inbetween in the blue tick because of percussion hits
• 03:03:583(6) - Consider making returning slider because there's a big hit in the middle of it

Overall, love the map and hope it gets ranked soon(tm). Will be playing insane diff as soon as it comes out! Very fun play <3

Last edited by bigfeh 2015-03-23T17:43:21+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-21T21:16:43+00:00

Updated!

Will apply bigfeh's mod by the next update...
Thanks guys~

Krauv

50 posts

Joined August 2014

Krauv 2015-03-22T03:09:16+00:00

Why jello. From Krauv's Queue.

Pho's Normal

00:20:353 (4) - move up a bit so it's not off the grid lines
02:45:695 (3) - NC maybe
02:45:695 (3,4,5,6) - add finishers?
03:14:204 (1) - finish
03:29:670 (2) - ^
03:31:161 (4) - ^
Regarding these last two, I'm not sure why these two sound like they should be finishes while the same parts in your other kiai's don't. But that's just my opinion. Idk. Feel like you could place finishes in a lot of places, actually.

Hard

01:59:670 (1) - have this curve and blanket (2)
03:14:204 (1) - move up a grid space
I don't think I heard a single finish, clap, or whistle.

Insane

now I hear hitsounds
01:22:962 (3) - finish (just on first circle)
01:24:453 (3) - ^
02:36:006 (3) - ^
02:37:496 (4) - ^
03:29:670 (4) - ^
03:31:161 (3) - ^
These finishes should also go into Normal/Hard, imo.

Le suggestions. Good luck with your map.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-23T09:56:51+00:00

@bigfeh

I think you should fix your mod..
Your linked "editor shortcut (or whatever this things called)" have no relation at all with what you said

Also, adding another Insane will make the difficulty spread worse imo, so sorry abou that...
how2english

EDIT :

bigfeh wrote:
This mod was requested in bigfeh's 24h Modding Queue.

Accepting guest Insane diffs?

Pho's Normal
• 00:12:341(4,1) - Consider changing to two returning 1/4 sliders and starting them a 1/2 note earlier, as in pic related. However, as this is a normal difficulty, also consider decreasing the distance between the notes in this part
Pic related
• 00:21:285(5) - Consider changing slider as in pic related. Feels more natural to me
Pic related
• 00:45:136(2,4) -Sliders should end 1/2 of a note earlier. That's when the vocal ends
• 01:28:366(1) - Maybe move this more elsewhere on the screen?
• 02:00:975(3) - You should add a return to this slider due to the length of the vocal
• 02:10:105(3) - Note should be removed and 02:10:105(4) should start in that time, as in pic related
Pic related
• 02:10:105(5) - ^ Same, but with 02:13:086(1) instead
• 02:17:558(1,2,3) - Combo feels best as in pic related due to vocals
Pic related
• I get the multiple Kiais starting at 03:11:223 but this might be a problem. There are three in a row, which could get you in trouble

Hard
I absolutely love the general map flow here. Looks great!
• 00:27:620(3) - Slider should end 1/2 of a note earlier to sync with vocal. Also, consider making a single circle if you don't like how it works out
• 00:31:720(1,2) - I don't like this combo, particularly the second slider. It feels like there is no big connection to the music - try adding more notes, removing the sliders and mapping it to the piano
• 00:57:061 - I love the map flow here up until the spinner
• 01:21:285(4) - Consider deleting this slider and adding a single circle where it ends instead. Feels out of beat
• 01:22:962(1) - Maybe cut 1/2 a note from the end of this slider? Would sync with vocals and make more sense
• 01:24:453(1) - ^ Same
• 02:41:596 - Maybe - and a BIG maybe here - you should consider making the slider a bit shorter, because the note at the end is only a 1/2 note away
• 03:50:167 - Slidah 2 long 4 me. Maybe make the first one longer and remove this?

Insane
Love the map overall. Will be playing this once it gets ranked <3
• 00:57:061(3) - Return feels weird. Recommend making a bigger slider with same start and end times Ok, I changed this, should be better now
• 01:27:061(1) - This shouldn't be here. No beat, no vocals, nothing. If you want a circle in the vocals, cut the last slider in half and place it there as in pic related I think, leaving this unmapped will make it feels too empty. No change for now
Pic related
• 01:46:254(5,6,1) - I don't get the triple here. Feels overmapped If you listen closely, there's a beat
• 01:50:726(2,3,4) - Same I think this one is fine
• 01:50:726(7,8) - Consider adding note inbetween to sync with percussion ^
• 01:52:217(2,3,4) - I don't feel strongly for this triple either ^
• 02:02:652(1) - Consider making changes here. There is percussion before the end of the slider; Suggest doing as in pic related I like it how it is
Pic related
• 02:08:987(1,2,3,4,5) - Consider making similar changes as explained above ^
• 02:17:558(1,2,3,4) - Combo misses percussion. Suggest doing as in pic related
Pic related
• 02:19:049(1,2,3,4) - Exact same as above ^
• 02:40:664(3) - Weeeeeird design decision. Maybe make a long slow slider of same duration instead? Umm, I think this one fits perfectly (?)
• 02:42:714(2,3,4) - Feels overmapped to, same as 01:46:254(5,6,1) and 01:50:726(2,3,4) ^
• 02:44:391(2,3) - ^^
• 03:03:583(5,6) - Missing circle between these notes I don't think that it is missing something
• 03:03:583(5,6) - Should add a note inbetween in the blue tick because of percussion hits
• 03:03:583(6) - Consider making returning slider because there's a big hit in the middle of it

Overall, love the map and hope it gets ranked soon(tm). Will be playing insane diff as soon as it comes out! Very fun play <3

Sorry, I really can't reply your mod very well
fixed maybe some mentioned above, especially on hard diff

Thanks for modding anyway

Last edited by Yohanes 2015-03-25T13:30:20+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-23T10:01:54+00:00

Krauv wrote:
Why jello. From Krauv's Queue.

Pho's Normal
00:20:353 (4) - move up a bit so it's not off the grid lines
02:45:695 (3) - NC maybe
02:45:695 (3,4,5,6) - add finishers?
03:14:204 (1) - finish
03:29:670 (2) - ^
03:31:161 (4) - ^
Regarding these last two, I'm not sure why these two sound like they should be finishes while the same parts in your other kiai's don't. But that's just my opinion. Idk. Feel like you could place finishes in a lot of places, actually.
Hard
01:59:670 (1) - have this curve and blanket (2)
03:14:204 (1) - move up a grid space
I don't think I heard a single finish, clap, or whistle. Becasue I havent make it yet
Insane
now I hear hitsounds
01:22:962 (3) - finish (just on first circle)
01:24:453 (3) - ^
02:36:006 (3) - ^
02:37:496 (4) - ^
03:29:670 (4) - ^
03:31:161 (3) - ^
These finishes should also go into Normal/Hard, imo.

Le suggestions. Good luck with your map.

Everything fixed
Thank you for modding ^^

bigfeh

1,149 posts

Joined January 2013

bigfeh 2015-03-23T17:44:10+00:00

yaldo_27 wrote:
@bigfeh

I think you should fix your mod..
Your linked "editor shortcut (or whatever this things called)" have no relation at all with what you said

It works fine for me but I'll take a look at it as soon as I can

yaldo_27 wrote:
Also, adding another Insane will make the difficulty spread worse imo, so sorry abou that...
how2english

Nope, no problem. Don't sweat it

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Silky 2015-03-24T11:33:19+00:00

Hi

[General]

AIBat wrote:
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Hard] : 64142
- [Insane] : 64142
- [Pho's Normal] : 64156

Audio Lead-In 1000 pls
hitsound WIP? 　I think hitsounds is insufficient.

[Pho]

00:43:645 (1) - remove NC
02:53:335 (5) - add NC for consistency
03:49:981 (5) - ^

[Hard]

00:51:099 (1) - It's purposely? Resnaping please.

[Insane]

AIBat wrote:
Unsnapped or duplicate inherited (green) sections at:
02:40:764 - snap to 02:40:757

AR+0.2 or OD-0.5~1 please
00:49:422 (4) - ctrl+G
01:03:770 (4) - add NC
01:40:850 (2,3) - ctrl+G
02:16:813 (3) - add NC
03:48:117 (6,7) - ctrl+G

gl

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-03-24T17:41:14+00:00

From modding queue

I talked ~~ranted~~ with Pho about the normal difficulty so I'm not gonna mod it in this post

Hard

00:01:347 (2) - ctrl+g
00:08:614 (2) - there isn't really anything in the music that hints sharp turn like this, consider using more smooth/elliptical slider shape. (and why is there a finish)
00:09:360 (1,2,3,4) - Ok, so you were mapping to piano before the inherited timing point and you suddenly change it to chime. Please, continue mapping to the piano
rhythm like this would suffice
00:22:217 (1) - errr you could remove NC but on the other hand you could leave itttt ehhhhhiano
00:30:229 (1,2) - try this rhythm, you are mapping to vocals, don't miss that red tick
00:34:515 (3) - either NC here or NC 00:35:074 (4) - here depending on your NC style
00:36:192 (1) - 1/1 slider to circle with 1/2 gap please.
00:51:099 (1) - I have no idea why this is snapped to 1/16
01:04:515 (1) - when there is such a distinct strong sound on the white tick, its just better off using 1/2 slider to circle instead of 1/2 reverse. A small jump from 1/2 slider to circle would fit nicely here.
01:11:968 (5) - NC m8
01:17:931 (1,2,3) - lol
02:12:900 (5) - you really need to be consistent with how you NC sliders that overlap downbeats, sometimes you do not NC at this kind of places and NC the next object, or sometimes you NC it like you did on 02:05:447 (1) - ,02:08:428 (1) - . Please choose one and stick with it.

There were a lot of minor blanket errors, so if somebody points them out, please take your time and actually check them.
The way you used varied distancing so extensively in this hard diff coupled with some overlap kinda worries me lol, wouldn't have really mattered if the song was short, but at longer maps it is quite taxing on players.

Insane

00:09:360 (3) - NC for SV change, there is downbeat anyways, probably a good place to start transitioning into NC per 1 downbeat from 2 downbeat
00:10:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can we have more movement here? the chime sounds are actually distinct per hit and that usually means its a pretty dang good idea to use varied distancing
00:24:266 (4) - NC
01:01:534 (4) - NC
01:02:465 (1) - remove NC
01:03:024 (2) - NC
01:07:496 (1) - would definitely use three circles here instead of 1/1
01:43:832 (2,3) - something like this would be neat

Again, same as hard diff, some blanket errors, keep an eye out for them yourself, they are easy to fix.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-25T13:34:31+00:00

fuyuyu- wrote:
Hi

[General]

AIBat wrote:
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Hard] : 64142
- [Insane] : 64142
- [Pho's Normal] : 64156 Fixed
Audio Lead-In 1000 pls Yupz
hitsound WIP? 　I think hitsounds is insufficient. It's done now
[Pho]
00:43:645 (1) - remove NC
02:53:335 (5) - add NC for consistency
03:49:981 (5) - ^
[Hard]
00:51:099 (1) - It's purposely? Resnaping please. What to re-snap?
[Insane]

AIBat wrote:
Unsnapped or duplicate inherited (green) sections at:
02:40:764 - snap to 02:40:757
AR+0.2 or OD-0.5~1 please I think it is fine as it is
00:49:422 (4) - ctrl+G this will make the flow kinda awkward
01:03:770 (4) - add NC
01:40:850 (2,3) - ctrl+G ^
02:16:813 (3) - add NC
03:48:117 (6,7) - ctrl+G ^
gl

Fixed the NC mod
Thank you for modding

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-25T14:56:21+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
From modding queue

I talked ~~ranted~~ with Pho about the normal difficulty so I'm not gonna mod it in this post

Hard
00:01:347 (2) - ctrl+g Okay
00:08:614 (2) - there isn't really anything in the music that hints sharp turn like this, consider using more smooth/elliptical slider shape. (and why is there a finish) Yupz
00:09:360 (1,2,3,4) - Ok, so you were mapping to piano before the inherited timing point and you suddenly change it to chime. Please, continue mapping to the piano I make something different
rhythm like this would suffice
00:22:217 (1) - errr you could remove NC but on the other hand you could leave itttt ehhhhhiano owowowowo
00:30:229 (1,2) - try this rhythm, you are mapping to vocals, don't miss that red tick Fixed
00:34:515 (3) - either NC here or NC 00:35:074 (4) - here depending on your NC style ^
00:36:192 (1) - 1/1 slider to circle with 1/2 gap please. Okhay
00:51:099 (1) - I have no idea why this is snapped to 1/16 lol fixed
01:04:515 (1) - when there is such a distinct strong sound on the white tick, its just better off using 1/2 slider to circle instead of 1/2 reverse. A small jump from 1/2 slider to circle would fit nicely here. You're right
01:11:968 (5) - NC m8 g8
01:17:931 (1,2,3) - lol Look a mah face baby!
02:12:900 (5) - you really need to be consistent with how you NC sliders that overlap downbeats, sometimes you do not NC at this kind of places and NC the next object, or sometimes you NC it like you did on 02:05:447 (1) - ,02:08:428 (1) - . Please choose one and stick with it. I'll try

There were a lot of minor blanket errors, so if somebody points them out, please take your time and actually check them.
The way you used varied distancing so extensively in this hard diff coupled with some overlap kinda worries me lol, wouldn't have really mattered if the song was short, but at longer maps it is quite taxing on players.

Insane
00:09:360 (3) - NC for SV change, there is downbeat anyways, probably a good place to start transitioning into NC per 1 downbeat from 2 downbeat Fixed
00:10:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can we have more movement here? the chime sounds are actually distinct per hit and that usually means its a pretty dang good idea to use varied distancing Changed
00:24:266 (4) - NC NC-ed
01:01:534 (4) - NC NC-ed
01:02:465 (1) - remove NC un-NC-ed
01:03:024 (2) - NC NC-ed
01:07:496 (1) - would definitely use three circles here instead of 1/1 Yep
01:43:832 (2,3) - something like this would be neat Cool
Again, same as hard diff, some blanket errors, keep an eye out for them yourself, they are easy to fix.

Thanks for modding

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-03-26T16:43:37+00:00

bigfeh

bigfeh wrote:
This mod was requested in bigfeh's 24h Modding Queue.

Accepting guest Insane diffs?

Pho's Normal
• 00:12:341(4,1) - Consider changing to two returning 1/4 sliders and starting them a 1/2 note earlier, as in pic related. However, as this is a normal difficulty, also consider decreasing the distance between the notes in this part That rhythm pattern is really not recommended for easier diffs, 1/4 beats in general. Not going to change that
[box=Pic related]

• 00:21:285(5) - Consider changing slider as in pic related. Feels more natural to me It is not, 5 doesn't have to be changed into a slider since there's not beat t follow on the white tick at 00:22:030 - as in your picture

Pic related

• 00:45:136(2,4) -Sliders should end 1/2 of a note earlier. That's when the vocal ends True, but I prefer the current rhythm since it is easier to follow imo and isn't bad either.
• 01:28:366(1) - Maybe move this more elsewhere on the screen? Not going to happen, stack is fine here since both objects are far enough in the timeline to recognize it
• 02:00:975(3) - You should add a return to this slider due to the length of the vocal That'd be too confusing to play. Consider this is the easiest diff in the set.
• 02:10:105(3) - Note should be removed and 02:10:105(4) should start in that time, as in pic related No change, the current rhythm is fine.

Pic related

• 02:10:105(5) - ^ Same, but with 02:13:086(1) instead That's actually the same point lol.
• 02:17:558(1,2,3) - Combo feels best as in pic related due to vocals I am no fan of pure vocal mapping, and since this rhythm makes this unnecessarily difficult, I'd rather keep what I have.

Pic related

• I get the multiple Kiais starting at 03:11:223 but this might be a problem. There are three in a row, which could get you in trouble It's fine, this isn't an unrankable issue.

Krauv

Krauv wrote:
Why jello. From Krauv's Queue.

[box=Pho's Normal]00:20:353 (4) - move up a bit so it's not off the grid lines
02:45:695 (3) - NC maybe Nicht nötig, macht die Sache nur unnötig kompliziert.
02:45:695 (3,4,5,6) - add finishers? Die Hitsounds überlasse ich yaldo.
03:14:204 (1) - finish
03:29:670 (2) - ^
03:31:161 (4) - ^
Regarding these last two, I'm not sure why these two sound like they should be finishes while the same parts in your other kiai's don't. But that's just my opinion. Idk. Feel like you could place finishes in a lot of places, actually.

@fuyuyu: Fixed the first, the last two are not necessary.

No fix from your mod bigfeh, sry :/ Things not mentioned red are fixed!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Landscape.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64142
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:yaldo_27
Version:Pho's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shinya Saito ポリオミノ Polyomino Pho
BeatmapID:654312
BeatmapSetID:288852

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88566,98286
2,173535,178037
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
416,372.670807453416,4,2,1,5,1,0
13086,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0
14577,-100,4,3,1,44,0,0
64515,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
76254,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
76440,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
88366,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
99546,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
137558,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
149297,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
149484,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
161409,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
191223,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
191409,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
192714,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
193086,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
194204,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
202962,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
203148,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
218055,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
84,112,416,6,0,P|120:76|256:96,1,180
298,173,1347,2,0,L|370:181,2,60
260,211,1906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,315,2652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,3397,6,0,P|128:140|136:220,1,120
138,263,3956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,321,4329,2,0,L|224:401,2,60
270,287,4888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,191,5260,2,0,P|364:156|443:153,2,120
408,251,6378,6,0,L|444:50,1,180
333,56,7310,2,0,L|268:15,2,60
320,108,7869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,269,8614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,79,9360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,79,10850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
97,184,11223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,242,11596,2,0,P|248:257|316:241,1,120
394,188,12341,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,79,12714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,47,13086,2,0,B|246:129|353:226|297:289|262:284|262:284|231:284|205:235|260:216,1,360.000013732911
144,219,14950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,324,15322,5,0,0:0:0:0:
263,372,15695,2,0,P|314:364|370:310,1,120
377,267,16254,2,0,L|384:196,2,60
463,201,16999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,152,17186,2,0,P|398:130|320:144,2,120
376,236,18304,6,0,P|326:263|253:256,1,120
196,176,19049,2,0,L|198:114,2,60
143,187,19608,2,0,P|109:233|148:366,1,180
178,367,20353,2,0,B|237:356|237:356|296:371|296:371|370:354,1,180
417,270,21285,6,0,P|454:266|490:271,2,60
363,265,21844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,210,22217,2,0,P|260:172|267:133,2,60
349,138,22962,2,0,P|358:100|351:61,2,60
269,64,23707,2,0,L|125:71,1,120
95,77,24266,6,0,P|71:120|77:205,1,120
109,293,25012,2,0,L|124:355,2,60
151,259,25571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,333,26316,2,0,P|383:294|383:219,1,120
346,187,26875,2,0,L|280:187,2,60
427,116,27620,5,0,0:0:0:0:
402,67,27807,2,0,P|364:52|283:73,1,120
215,147,28552,2,0,P|170:175|70:103,1,180
73,62,29297,2,0,P|118:17|179:22,1,120
252,90,30043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,143,30229,6,0,B|250:159|260:181|260:181|256:226|256:226|266:250|263:268,1,120
289,308,30788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,333,30975,2,0,P|395:334|446:281,1,120
380,205,31720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,135,32093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,68,32465,2,0,L|371:1,2,60
287,130,33211,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,77,33583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,70,33770,2,0,P|93:73|34:116,1,120
27,236,34515,2,0,P|36:280|161:357,1,180
192,354,35260,2,0,L|335:338,1,120
419,331,36006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,277,36192,6,0,P|408:220|429:141,1,120
446,111,36751,2,0,P|391:90|326:102,1,120
260,180,37496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,204,37683,2,0,P|156:209|185:72,1,240
215,78,38614,2,0,L|291:92,2,60
222,24,39173,5,0,0:0:0:0:
329,33,39546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,79,39732,2,0,P|343:130|281:171,1,120
185,194,40478,2,0,P|172:251|194:319,1,120
233,338,41037,2,0,L|319:331,1,60
387,280,41596,2,0,P|348:243|281:228,1,120
274,174,42155,6,0,B|267:113|267:113|241:88|205:99,1,120
159,106,42714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,136,42900,2,0,P|60:132|5:91,1,120
95,32,43645,2,0,L|225:41,1,120
258,139,44391,2,0,L|384:107,1,120
455,36,45136,6,0,L|457:164,1,120
440,207,45695,2,0,P|392:231|410:355,1,180
293,306,46627,2,0,L|163:308,1,120
119,312,47186,2,0,P|128:263|48:164,1,180
20,208,47931,6,0,L|25:277,2,60
17,99,48676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,40,49049,2,0,L|182:11,2,60
128,90,49608,5,0,0:0:0:0:
182,183,49981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,189,50353,2,0,P|315:234|401:267,1,120
476,230,51099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,149,51471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,136,52217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,320,52962,5,0,0:0:0:0:
293,158,53521,2,0,L|293:94,2,60
291,212,54080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,250,54453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,98,55198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,44,55571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,112,55943,2,0,P|230:171|211:241,2,120
124,174,57061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,237,57434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,328,57807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,268,58179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,346,58552,6,0,L|393:326,1,120
461,261,59297,2,0,L|325:241,1,120
262,169,60043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,64,60415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,32,60788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
483,91,61161,2,0,L|486:158,2,60
397,157,61906,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,155,62279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,107,62652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,62,63024,2,0,L|68:204,1,120
171,223,63770,2,0,L|194:365,1,120
299,362,64515,6,0,P|357:362|411:325,1,120
422,277,65074,2,0,B|422:243|422:243|400:191|400:191|400:141,1,120
399,107,65633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,148,66006,2,0,P|253:148|186:102,1,120
155,72,66565,2,0,P|103:69|33:101,1,120
22,146,67124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,229,67496,6,0,L|82:315,2,60
142,214,68055,2,0,P|180:204|260:255,1,120
311,326,68801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,336,68987,2,0,P|407:328|454:258,1,120
404,173,69732,2,0,P|360:165|313:95,1,120
225,47,70478,6,0,L|232:173,1,120
234,220,71037,2,0,P|182:251|113:247,1,120
76,225,71596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
14,136,71968,2,0,P|70:119|138:137,1,120
177,154,72527,2,0,P|244:174|303:157,1,120
335,131,73086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,97,73459,6,0,L|433:225,1,120
332,251,74204,2,0,L|336:123,1,120
304,86,74763,2,0,P|253:67|183:84,1,120
141,102,75322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,177,75695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,255,76068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,324,76440,6,0,P|90:347|179:353,1,120
218,340,76999,2,0,L|230:209,1,120
236,166,77558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,221,77931,2,0,P|345:172|321:102,1,120
282,76,78490,2,0,L|157:77,1,120
124,115,79049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,221,79422,6,0,P|190:246|224:318,1,120
234,353,79981,2,0,L|366:340,1,120
407,338,80540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
494,275,80912,2,0,P|488:224|444:164,1,120
340,164,81658,2,0,P|300:208|286:265,1,120
195,322,82403,6,0,P|155:329|74:282,1,120
70,246,82962,2,0,P|97:201|40:92,1,180
152,72,83894,2,0,L|277:50,1,120
323,40,84453,2,0,P|369:92|365:207,1,180
281,261,85384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,176,85757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,169,86130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,86502,2,0,L|28:369,2,120
34,249,88366,5,4,0:0:0:0:
116,172,99546,6,0,L|129:107,2,60
171,264,100291,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,197,100664,2,0,L|332:201,1,60
348,302,101223,2,0,P|393:272|422:202,1,120
424,159,101782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,102155,2,0,L|267:94,1,60
192,160,102714,2,0,P|143:182|69:156,1,120
43,127,103273,6,0,L|50:266,1,120
56,300,103832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,335,104018,2,0,P|137:354|226:337,1,120
242,243,104763,5,0,0:0:0:0:
349,236,105136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,289,105509,2,0,L|449:364,2,60
487,190,106254,5,0,0:0:0:0:
410,113,106627,2,0,L|344:113,1,60
264,47,107186,2,0,P|206:43|144:86,1,120
124,118,107745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,185,108117,2,0,L|275:185,1,60
349,256,108676,2,0,P|338:299|277:343,1,120
227,332,109235,6,0,L|98:320,1,120
65,286,109794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
10,192,110167,2,0,P|58:177|126:197,1,120
177,200,110726,2,0,P|233:166|253:104,1,120
146,97,111471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,188,111844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,275,112217,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,112589,2,0,L|322:277,1,60
406,341,113148,2,0,P|437:300|442:206,1,120
431,181,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,114080,2,0,L|265:141,1,60
179,205,114639,2,0,P|107:176|43:186,1,120
28,217,115198,6,0,P|26:278|65:348,1,120
93,362,115757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,345,115943,2,0,P|197:332|273:347,1,120
366,313,116689,2,0,L|355:180,1,120
248,199,117434,2,0,L|261:58,1,120
161,31,118179,6,0,P|120:50|86:131,1,120
91,167,118738,2,0,B|100:224|100:224|145:274|145:274|162:347,1,180
259,295,119670,2,0,P|314:267|389:284,1,120
423,281,120229,2,0,B|453:196|453:196|454:151|407:97,1,180
385,71,120975,6,0,P|370:32|369:10,2,60
332,86,121534,2,0,L|249:100,1,60
190,166,122093,2,0,L|107:152,1,60
44,91,122652,2,0,P|92:56|160:52,1,120
249,101,123397,2,0,L|312:99,2,60
174,179,124142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,286,124515,2,0,P|217:308|305:307,1,120
334,275,125074,2,0,B|338:225|338:225|352:197|352:197|357:147,1,120
390,56,125819,2,0,L|323:59,1,60
236,106,126378,2,0,L|164:91,1,60
125,78,126751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,146,127124,6,0,P|25:205|44:283,1,120
129,318,127869,2,0,L|170:367,2,60
138,264,128428,2,0,P|181:217|247:207,1,120
288,208,128987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,277,129360,2,0,L|361:346,2,60
468,231,130105,6,0,B|466:190|466:190|440:159|440:159|427:112,1,120
359,37,130850,2,0,L|288:30,2,60
354,91,131409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,138,131596,2,0,P|248:140|192:115,1,120
118,70,132341,2,0,P|78:66|38:83,2,60
123,123,132900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,169,133086,6,0,L|92:315,1,120
183,348,133832,2,0,L|258:352,2,60
239,256,134577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,262,134950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,203,135322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,95,135695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,19,136068,6,0,L|249:33,1,120
224,137,136813,2,0,L|103:123,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,187,137558,6,0,P|13:241|44:316,1,120
75,337,138117,2,0,L|200:347,1,120
240,317,138676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,240,139049,2,0,P|377:214|443:231,1,120
474,251,139608,2,0,L|477:109,1,120
473,76,140167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,26,140540,6,0,B|342:30|342:30|302:57|302:57|247:63,1,120
210,56,141099,2,0,P|156:40|76:68,1,120
53,88,141658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,195,142030,2,0,L|76:324,1,120
176,272,142776,2,0,L|187:145,1,120
253,69,143521,6,0,P|305:75|352:141,1,120
356,177,144080,2,0,P|304:183|257:249,1,120
260,285,144639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,357,145012,2,0,P|142:356|73:297,1,120
68,254,145571,2,0,L|59:129,1,120
55,80,146130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,65,146502,6,0,P|219:86|292:64,1,120
320,46,147061,2,0,P|359:50|390:75,1,60
418,94,147434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,199,147807,2,0,P|445:263|417:330,1,120
380,342,148366,2,0,L|312:334,1,60
275,305,148738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,352,149111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,310,149484,6,0,P|62:263|66:185,1,120
101,153,150043,2,0,L|224:153,1,120
264,120,150602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,208,150975,2,0,P|382:226|459:200,1,120
482,178,151534,2,0,B|483:140|483:140|463:104|463:104|460:45,1,120
478,11,152093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,58,152465,6,0,L|251:64,1,120
207,69,153024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,146,153397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,254,153770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,298,153956,2,0,P|204:316|283:290,1,120
328,208,154701,2,0,P|285:190|206:216,1,120
108,220,155447,6,0,P|59:192|35:125,1,120
41,81,156006,2,0,L|187:69,1,120
214,64,156565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,57,156937,2,0,P|347:116|332:181,1,120
307,213,157496,2,0,B|226:244|191:179|122:216,1,180
172,311,158428,5,0,0:0:0:0:
273,348,158801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,283,159173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,321,159546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,214,159919,2,0,L|453:94,1,120
131,52,161409,6,0,P|186:31|262:40,1,120
253,142,162155,2,0,L|255:262,1,120
178,338,162900,2,0,P|135:342|53:311,1,120
138,243,163645,2,0,P|181:239|263:270,1,120
341,324,164391,6,0,P|403:308|445:263,1,120
456,162,165136,2,0,L|458:95,2,60
403,177,165695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,121,166068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,203,166440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,262,166813,2,0,P|277:304|212:307,1,120
172,307,167372,6,0,P|140:291|112:259,1,60
93,228,167745,2,0,L|106:154,1,60
170,84,168304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,155,168676,2,0,P|301:175|387:155,1,120
436,80,169422,2,0,P|391:60|305:80,1,120
370,167,170167,6,0,B|373:226|373:226|394:268|394:268|396:347,1,180
288,351,171099,2,0,L|214:358,2,60
224,263,171844,2,0,L|85:276,1,120
155,179,172589,2,0,L|294:166,1,120
337,79,173335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,61,179297,6,0,B|337:118|337:118|361:180,1,120
453,226,180043,2,0,B|472:169|472:169|448:107,1,120
359,174,180788,2,0,L|239:176,1,120
180,267,181534,2,0,L|305:264,1,120
360,174,182279,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,83,182652,2,0,L|226:83,1,60
135,115,183211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,59,183583,2,0,P|27:119|54:189,1,120
62,223,184142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,255,184515,2,0,L|295:255,1,120
367,185,185260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,185633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,186006,2,0,L|258:357,1,120
201,272,186751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,317,187124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,216,187496,2,0,L|51:85,1,120
143,38,188242,5,0,0:0:0:0:
201,128,188614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,175,188987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,154,189360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,69,189732,2,0,P|381:50|304:112,1,180
315,152,190478,2,0,L|315:229,1,60
198,324,191223,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,74,192155,2,0,L|71:8,2,60
144,87,192714,6,0,L|210:81,1,60
329,257,193645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,230,194018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,194204,6,0,P|466:118|440:59,1,120
391,61,194763,2,0,P|328:89|267:68,1,120
232,52,195322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,88,195695,2,0,P|95:144|86:203,1,120
193,186,196440,2,0,P|228:242|237:301,1,120
322,361,197186,6,0,P|385:357|439:318,1,120
442,273,197745,2,0,B|440:227|440:227|423:198|423:198|416:144,1,120
425,104,198304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,55,198676,2,0,B|326:101|326:101|309:130|309:130|302:184,1,120
303,224,199235,2,0,P|267:258|183:257,1,120
149,241,199794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,168,200167,6,0,P|109:140|186:141,1,120
286,141,200912,2,0,P|340:129|389:66,1,120
420,44,201471,2,0,P|451:98|450:182,1,120
449,208,202030,2,0,P|442:246|425:269,1,60
402,309,202403,2,0,P|379:336|335:355,1,60
308,368,202776,2,0,P|257:377|231:371,1,60
198,357,203148,6,0,B|179:324|207:277|181:216,1,120
164,189,203707,2,0,P|119:176|32:217,1,120
58,251,204266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,280,204639,2,0,P|211:266|250:196,1,120
253,156,205198,2,0,P|213:104|138:97,1,120
109,105,205757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,201,206130,6,0,P|184:239|277:262,1,120
304,267,206689,2,0,L|428:267,1,120
458,225,207248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
467,117,207620,2,0,P|439:88|354:68,1,120
269,123,208366,2,0,P|224:161|166:173,1,120
71,226,209111,6,0,P|58:166|88:99,1,120
91,60,209670,2,0,B|165:24|214:80|270:32,1,180
333,120,210602,2,0,P|383:146|451:139,1,120
484,178,211161,2,0,B|523:270|450:291|498:368,1,180
382,342,212093,6,0,P|326:357|261:347,1,120
180,280,212838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,213211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,213583,2,0,L|184:18,1,120
72,26,214329,2,0,L|-11:35,2,60
52,132,215074,6,0,L|47:262,1,120
68,304,215633,2,0,P|112:344|188:344,1,120
208,312,216192,2,0,P|236:297|280:304,1,60
316,316,216565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,220,216937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,274,217310,2,0,L|501:333,2,60
456,165,218055,5,0,0:0:0:0:
369,99,218428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,147,218801,2,0,L|244:216,2,60
254,95,219360,2,0,P|182:68|136:80,1,120
94,102,219919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,202,220291,2,0,L|65:332,1,120
165,359,221037,6,0,L|155:229,1,120
252,191,221782,2,0,L|258:265,2,60
242,137,222341,2,0,P|272:95|354:81,1,120
389,83,222900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,123,223086,2,0,B|427:183|427:183|466:231|466:231|472:305,1,180
376,341,224018,6,0,P|345:361|309:362,2,60
376,286,224577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,214,224950,2,0,P|269:218|231:253,2,60
396,179,225695,2,0,P|405:158|394:107,2,60
377,288,226440,2,0,P|393:306|442:323,1,60
482,230,226999,6,0,P|493:185|491:101,1,120
407,45,227745,2,0,L|344:11,2,60
389,96,228304,2,0,P|339:158|241:60,1,240
133,46,229422,2,0,L|52:31,2,60
146,98,229981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230167,12,0,235881,0:0:0:0:

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-27T09:13:56+00:00

Thanks Pho
Will update soon

Winek

887 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2015-03-28T09:25:02+00:00

took some time sorry.
i just modded this song
recently, what a coincidence.

Pho's Normal

- There is a huge lack of hitsounds in the map. I checked kiai, non-kiai, i couldn't spot much hitsound. This is a major issue you need to fix.
- Check AiMod: Preview point is different from both Hard & Insane diffs.
- - What about adding a finish or clap drum hitsound at the end of (3) and (4)? It's not me asking this! It's the music! Blame her!
-The blanket with 00:18:304 (1) is good but then it waste away all the blanket with 00:16:254 (3), who appears even before 00:18:304 (1) . I think you should do like this as I'm pretty sure people will more notice the fact that 00:16:254 (3,5) are not blanketed properly rather than 00:17:186 (5,1). Honestly, when I look at (1) I don't see much relation to 00:17:186 (5) even if there's a good blanket.
- - (1)'s X coordinate is 157 and (2) is 155. And suddenly (3)'s coordinate is like 100. I think I understand what you tried to do, but I'd rather see it like this: http://puu.sh/gP8gX/d6d0bc4286.jpg
- - It's really just me but I honestly don't like the sounding of the note, I don't know why. I'd rather remove completely the note.
- -
Nice map, just the lack of hitsound breaks me.

Hard

- - I'm not the master of the blankets (and i'm reaaallllyyy far from being it) but i feel like (1)'s head is a bit too near from (2)'s tail. Maybe space them just a bit? Something like this?
- - I don't know for you but I REALLY couldn't spot the note because of the combo color, the background, and it being under the slider. I suggest to replace 00:25:198 (3,4,5) to a completely different pattern where none of these note aren't hidden by the slider.
- - Just maybe for a better transition with the next note, what about placing this note somewhere around x74 y290 ? Try for yourself and see if you like it.
- - Now the slider's end land on a downbeat. I'd suggest you remove it and place a note elsewhere instead, it's toally doable, there are many place where you can place a circle, and you will be making a correct combo; The new note at 00:33:211 would be a New Combo while 00:33:583 (1) wouldn't be anymore.
- - Why does these two notes does not follow the hitsound it is supposed to have? From 00:52:589 (1) you start backbeat normal claps, why doesn't these two note get claps as well?
- - It's just my preferance, but see about Ctrl + G this note. I've always liked those kind of flow, all the slider trying to get to a single invisible spot... hard to explain. Just see if you like it.
- - I did say this earlier, when the downbeat fall in the middle of a slider?
You,ve got quite the technique.. But really, why that huge lack of hitsound? It really annoys me.

Insane

- - Here instead of the shape that I think is random (dunno for you), then i'd rather blanket with 00:01:534 (3) . If you had any other reason to have the slider, keep it like that.
- - It's just me, but I feel the slider is going somewhere and the next circle isn't with it. Hard to explain, but if you blanket these two notes, the flow wil be better;
- - Those two note aren't very in coherence, they don't have the Harmony ~ necessary: what about taking the slider (6) , copy paste it on (5) , then Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J. Afterwhat, replace the slider where it was before. This way the slider are gonna be (I THINK) symmetrical or something.
- - Just my opinion but the costum drum whistle does not fit at all; If you would use the drum whistle on all the notes 00:10:850 (1,2,3,4,5) with an ascending volume it would be good.
- - Maybe to get a better flow from the 2 previous notes, try this: additionaly, you could bend more 00:19:608 (5) .
- - For a better harmony with 01:49:794 (2) , maybe you should remove the double anchor and replace by a single anchor, making a simple curve.
Overall the map is quite great; There might be some place where i think the slider formation is quite random. exemple, transition between the new combo: 02:33:956 (7,1) - But I won't point all of them, because it's your map, and it's my opinion.

Overall I like that map. But the lack of hitsound destroys it. Every map should have their hitsound, even backbeat clap. As long as you can make a difference between the song and the map, then for me, It's good.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-03-28T11:19:31+00:00

Winek wrote:
took some time sorry.
i just modded this song
recently, what a coincidence.

Pho's Normal
- There is a huge lack of hitsounds in the map. I checked kiai, non-kiai, i couldn't spot much hitsound. This is a major issue you need to fix.
- Check AiMod: Preview point is different from both Hard & Insane diffs.
- - What about adding a finish or clap drum hitsound at the end of (3) and (4)? It's not me asking this! It's the music! Blame her!
-The blanket with 00:18:304 (1) is good but then it waste away all the blanket with 00:16:254 (3), who appears even before 00:18:304 (1) . I think you should do like this as I'm pretty sure people will more notice the fact that 00:16:254 (3,5) are not blanketed properly rather than 00:17:186 (5,1). Honestly, when I look at (1) I don't see much relation to 00:17:186 (5) even if there's a good blanket.
- - (1)'s X coordinate is 157 and (2) is 155. And suddenly (3)'s coordinate is like 100. I think I understand what you tried to do, but I'd rather see it like this: http://puu.sh/gP8gX/d6d0bc4286.jpg
- - It's really just me but I honestly don't like the sounding of the note, I don't know why. I'd rather remove completely the note.
- -
Nice map, just the lack of hitsound breaks me.

Hard
- - I'm not the master of the blankets (and i'm reaaallllyyy far from being it) but i feel like (1)'s head is a bit too near from (2)'s tail. Maybe space them just a bit? Something like this?
- - I don't know for you but I REALLY couldn't spot the note because of the combo color, the background, and it being under the slider. I suggest to replace 00:25:198 (3,4,5) to a completely different pattern where none of these note aren't hidden by the slider.
- - Just maybe for a better transition with the next note, what about placing this note somewhere around x74 y290 ? Try for yourself and see if you like it.
- - Now the slider's end land on a downbeat. I'd suggest you remove it and place a note elsewhere instead, it's toally doable, there are many place where you can place a circle, and you will be making a correct combo; The new note at 00:33:211 would be a New Combo while 00:33:583 (1) wouldn't be anymore.
- - Why does these two notes does not follow the hitsound it is supposed to have? From 00:52:589 (1) you start backbeat normal claps, why doesn't these two note get claps as well?
- - It's just my preferance, but see about Ctrl + G this note. I've always liked those kind of flow, all the slider trying to get to a single invisible spot... hard to explain. Just see if you like it. I prefer mine better
- - I did say this earlier, when the downbeat fall in the middle of a slider?
You,ve got quite the technique.. But really, why that huge lack of hitsound? It really annoys me. On Process Fixing it

Insane
- - Here instead of the shape that I think is random (dunno for you), then i'd rather blanket with 00:01:534 (3) . If you had any other reason to have the slider, keep it like that. Umm, yeah. I kep it
- - It's just me, but I feel the slider is going somewhere and the next circle isn't with it. Hard to explain, but if you blanket these two notes, the flow wil be better;
- - Those two note aren't very in coherence, they don't have the Harmony ~ necessary: what about taking the slider (6) , copy paste it on (5) , then Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J. Afterwhat, replace the slider where it was before. This way the slider are gonna be (I THINK) symmetrical or something.
- - Just my opinion but the costum drum whistle does not fit at all; If you would use the drum whistle on all the notes 00:10:850 (1,2,3,4,5) with an ascending volume it would be good. I'm considering to remove the custom drum whistle entirely, but idk. I'll decide that in near future
- - Maybe to get a better flow from the 2 previous notes, try this: additionaly, you could bend more 00:19:608 (5) .
- - For a better harmony with 01:49:794 (2) , maybe you should remove the double anchor and replace by a single anchor, making a simple curve. I think I'll keep this
Overall the map is quite great; There might be some place where i think the slider formation is quite random. exemple, transition between the new combo: 02:33:956 (7,1) - But I won't point all of them, because it's your map, and it's my opinion. ^^

Overall I like that map. But the lack of hitsound destroys it. Every map should have their hitsound, even backbeat clap. As long as you can make a difference between the song and the map, then for me, It's good.

Actually I'm the one who responsible to hitsounding all the diff. I've been very busy lately, so I can't get myself to create a nice hitsound across all difficulties. And I'm still not sure whether or not I can fixing the hitsound anytime in near future because all of my assesment due next week and followed by test in the next 2 weeks, not to mention that my health has been dropped lately wtf am I talking about

Anyway, thank you for modding

No reply = fixed
will update soon

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2015-03-28T11:47:09+00:00

From my modding queue

Insane

01:18:490 (3,4) - Use same shape.
01:26:502 (4,5,6) - It feels better to play like this:
Image
02:11:502 (6) - This is overmap, delete it. There's not really a sound there. Fix it like:
Image
Ctrl + G on 02:11:596 (1) - and Ctrl + J to flip it. and place it to x:85 y:318, and move this 02:11:223 (5) 's last curve point a bit to the left. for a better flow.
02:20:540 (8) - Add NC.
02:38:148 (2) - Delete and make a triple from here 02:38:242 - like:
Image
02:40:664 (3) - This actually starts here 02:40:291 - and 1/6 sounds much better, and not so intense.
02:43:645 (2,3) - Triples sounds weird when they start on a white tick. Delete this circle 02:43:738 (3) -
03:31:720 (4,5,6) - Delete this 03:31:813 (5) - And make a triple from 03:31:906 - that starts on the head of this slider 03:32:093 (1) -

Feedback

Sorry for only modding 1 diff, but be happy that u get 1 kudosu!
I like the song, good luck~

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-03-28T15:32:39+00:00

Winek wrote:
took some time sorry.
i just modded this song
recently, what a coincidence.

Pho's Normal
- There is a huge lack of hitsounds in the map. I checked kiai, non-kiai, i couldn't spot much hitsound. This is a major issue you need to fix. Yup, yaldo is working on the hitsounds for my diffs.
- Check AiMod: Preview point is different from both Hard & Insane diffs. Are you sure this isn't fixed already? oO
- - What about adding a finish or clap drum hitsound at the end of (3) and (4)? It's not me asking this! It's the music! Blame her! ^
-The blanket with 00:18:304 (1) is good but then it waste away all the blanket with 00:16:254 (3), who appears even before 00:18:304 (1) . I think you should do like this as I'm pretty sure people will more notice the fact that 00:16:254 (3,5) are not blanketed properly rather than 00:17:186 (5,1). Honestly, when I look at (1) I don't see much relation to 00:17:186 (5) even if there's a good blanket.
- - (1)'s X coordinate is 157 and (2) is 155. And suddenly (3)'s coordinate is like 100. I think I understand what you tried to do, but I'd rather see it like this: http://puu.sh/gP8gX/d6d0bc4286.jpg I placed them with DS and wanted an oval flow here, there's nothing special about it. Besides, your suggestion has a big spacing inconsistency.
- - It's really just me but I honestly don't like the sounding of the note, I don't know why. I'd rather remove completely the note. I agree that these piano notes are relatively weak in the track and don't need to be followed, but I like it.
- -
Nice map, just the lack of hitsound breaks me.

Overall I like that map. But the lack of hitsound destroys it. Every map should have their hitsound, even backbeat clap. As long as you can make a difference between the song and the map, then for me, It's good.

No comment = fixed. Hope you will recover soon yaldo o/

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Landscape.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64142
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:yaldo_27
Version:Pho's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shinya Saito ポリオミノ Polyomino Pho
BeatmapID:654312
BeatmapSetID:288852

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88566,98286
2,173535,178037
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
416,372.670807453416,4,2,1,25,1,0
13086,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,25,0,0
14577,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
27248,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
27620,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
37683,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
38428,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
51099,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
57061,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
64515,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
76254,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
76440,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
88366,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
91347,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
99546,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
100291,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
137558,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
149297,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
149484,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
161409,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
191223,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
191409,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
192714,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
193086,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
194204,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
202962,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
203148,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
218055,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
234453,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
235198,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
235943,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
236689,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
237434,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
238179,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
84,112,416,6,0,P|120:76|256:96,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
298,173,1347,2,0,L|370:181,2,60,0|2|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,211,1906,1,0,2:0:0:0:
70,315,2652,1,0,2:0:0:0:
100,100,3397,6,0,P|128:140|136:220,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
138,263,3956,1,0,2:0:0:0:
228,321,4329,2,0,L|224:401,2,60,2|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
270,287,4888,1,0,2:0:0:0:
319,191,5260,2,0,P|364:156|443:153,2,120,0|2|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
408,251,6378,6,0,L|444:50,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
333,56,7310,2,0,L|268:15,2,60,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,7869,1,2,2:0:0:0:
176,269,8614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,79,9360,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,10850,5,2,0:0:0:0:
97,184,11223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,242,11596,2,0,P|248:257|316:241,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,188,12341,5,2,3:0:0:0:
397,79,12714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,47,13086,2,0,B|246:129|353:226|297:289|262:284|262:284|231:284|205:235|260:216,1,360.000013732911,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,219,14950,1,0,1:0:0:0:
165,324,15322,5,4,1:0:0:0:
263,372,15695,2,0,P|314:364|370:310,1,120,0|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
377,267,16254,2,0,L|384:196,2,60,0|2|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
463,201,16999,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,152,17186,2,0,P|396:124|320:152,2,120,2|2|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,18304,6,0,P|326:263|260:240,1,120,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,19049,2,0,L|194:106,2,60,0|2|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
143,187,19608,2,0,P|109:233|148:366,1,180,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
178,367,20353,2,0,B|237:356|237:356|296:371|296:371|370:354,1,180,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
417,270,21285,6,0,P|454:266|490:271,2,60,4|0|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
363,265,21844,1,0,1:0:0:0:
269,210,22217,2,0,P|260:172|267:133,2,60,2|0|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
349,138,22962,2,0,P|358:100|351:61,2,60,2|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
269,64,23707,2,0,L|125:71,1,120,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
95,77,24266,6,0,P|71:120|77:205,1,120,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
109,293,25012,2,0,L|124:355,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
151,259,25571,1,4,1:0:0:0:
353,333,26316,2,0,P|383:294|383:219,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,187,26875,2,0,L|280:187,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
427,116,27620,5,2,2:0:0:0:
402,67,27807,2,0,P|364:52|283:73,1,120,0|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
215,147,28552,2,0,P|170:175|70:103,1,180,0|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
73,62,29297,2,0,P|118:17|179:22,1,120,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
252,90,30043,1,0,2:0:0:0:
254,143,30229,6,0,B|250:159|260:181|260:181|256:226|256:226|266:250|263:268,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,308,30788,1,0,2:0:0:0:
336,333,30975,2,0,P|395:334|446:281,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,205,31720,1,0,2:0:0:0:
462,135,32093,1,2,2:0:0:0:
376,68,32465,2,0,L|371:1,2,60,0|0|2,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
287,130,33211,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,77,33583,1,0,2:0:0:0:
138,70,33770,2,0,P|93:73|34:116,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
27,236,34515,2,0,P|36:280|161:357,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,354,35260,2,0,L|335:338,1,120,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
419,331,36006,1,0,2:0:0:0:
416,277,36192,6,0,P|408:220|429:141,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
446,111,36751,2,0,P|391:90|326:102,1,120,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,37496,1,0,2:0:0:0:
211,204,37683,2,0,P|156:209|185:72,1,240,2|8,2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
215,78,38614,2,0,L|291:92,2,60,2|8|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
222,24,39173,5,4,1:0:0:0:
329,33,39546,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,79,39732,2,0,P|343:130|281:171,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,194,40478,2,0,P|172:251|194:319,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,338,41037,2,0,L|319:331,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,280,41596,2,0,P|348:243|281:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,174,42155,6,0,B|267:113|267:113|241:88|205:99,1,120,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
159,106,42714,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,136,42900,2,0,P|60:132|5:91,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,32,43645,2,0,L|225:41,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,44391,2,0,L|384:107,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,36,45136,6,0,L|457:164,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,207,45695,2,0,P|392:231|410:355,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,306,46627,2,0,L|163:308,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,312,47186,2,0,P|128:263|48:164,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,208,47931,6,0,L|25:277,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,99,48676,1,2,1:0:0:0:
109,40,49049,2,0,L|182:11,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,90,49608,5,2,0:0:0:0:
182,183,49981,1,10,1:0:0:0:
289,189,50353,2,0,P|315:234|401:267,1,120,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
476,230,51099,1,4,1:0:0:0:
404,149,51471,1,8,1:0:0:0:
188,136,52217,1,8,1:0:0:0:
297,320,52962,5,10,1:0:0:0:
293,158,53521,2,0,L|293:94,2,60,2|8|0,2:0|1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
291,212,54080,1,2,2:0:0:0:
189,250,54453,1,8,1:0:0:0:
34,98,55198,1,10,1:0:0:0:
127,44,55571,5,2,2:0:0:0:
213,112,55943,2,0,P|230:171|211:241,2,120,8|0|8,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
124,174,57061,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,237,57434,1,8,1:0:0:0:
94,328,57807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,268,58179,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,346,58552,6,0,L|393:326,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,261,59297,2,0,L|325:241,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,169,60043,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,64,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,32,60788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
483,91,61161,2,0,L|486:158,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,157,61906,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,155,62279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,107,62652,1,8,1:0:0:0:
91,62,63024,2,0,L|68:204,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,223,63770,2,0,L|194:365,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,362,64515,6,0,P|357:362|411:325,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,277,65074,2,0,B|422:243|422:243|400:191|400:191|400:141,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,107,65633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,148,66006,2,0,P|253:148|186:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,72,66565,2,0,P|103:69|33:101,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,146,67124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
90,229,67496,6,0,L|82:315,2,60,12|0|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,214,68055,2,0,P|180:204|260:255,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,326,68801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,336,68987,2,0,P|407:328|454:258,1,120,10|10,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,173,69732,2,0,P|360:165|313:95,1,120,10|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,47,70478,6,0,L|232:173,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,220,71037,2,0,P|182:251|113:247,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,225,71596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
14,136,71968,2,0,P|70:119|138:137,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,154,72527,2,0,P|244:174|303:157,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,131,73086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,97,73459,6,0,L|433:225,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,251,74204,2,0,L|336:123,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,86,74763,2,0,P|253:67|183:84,1,120,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,102,75322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
63,177,75695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,255,76068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,324,76440,6,0,P|90:347|179:353,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,340,76999,2,0,L|230:209,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,166,77558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,221,77931,2,0,P|345:172|321:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,76,78490,2,0,L|157:77,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,115,79049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,221,79422,6,0,P|190:246|224:318,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,353,79981,2,0,L|366:340,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,338,80540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
494,275,80912,2,0,P|488:224|444:164,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,164,81658,2,0,P|300:208|286:265,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,322,82403,6,0,P|155:329|74:282,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,246,82962,2,0,P|97:201|40:92,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,83894,2,0,L|277:50,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,40,84453,2,0,P|369:92|365:207,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,261,85384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,176,85757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,169,86130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,86502,2,0,L|28:369,2,120,8|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,88366,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,99546,6,0,L|129:107,2,60
171,264,100291,5,2,0:0:0:0:
255,197,100664,2,0,L|332:201,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,302,101223,2,0,P|393:272|422:202,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,159,101782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,102155,2,0,L|267:94,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,102714,2,0,P|143:182|69:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,127,103273,6,0,L|50:266,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,300,103832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,335,104018,2,0,P|137:354|226:337,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,243,104763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,236,105136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
443,289,105509,2,0,L|449:364,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,190,106254,5,4,0:0:0:0:
410,113,106627,2,0,L|344:113,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,47,107186,2,0,P|206:43|144:86,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,118,107745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,185,108117,2,0,L|275:185,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,256,108676,2,0,P|338:299|277:343,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,332,109235,6,0,L|98:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,286,109794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
10,192,110167,2,0,P|58:177|126:197,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,200,110726,2,0,P|233:166|253:104,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,97,111471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,188,111844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,275,112217,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,276,112589,2,0,L|322:277,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,341,113148,2,0,P|437:300|442:206,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,181,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,114080,2,0,L|265:141,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,205,114639,2,0,P|107:176|43:186,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,217,115198,6,0,P|26:278|65:348,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,362,115757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,345,115943,2,0,P|197:332|273:347,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,313,116689,2,0,L|355:180,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,199,117434,2,0,L|261:58,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,31,118179,6,0,P|120:50|86:131,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,167,118738,2,0,B|100:224|100:224|145:274|145:274|162:347,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,295,119670,2,0,P|314:267|389:284,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,281,120229,2,0,B|453:196|453:196|454:151|407:97,1,180,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,71,120975,6,0,P|370:32|369:10,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,86,121534,2,0,L|249:100,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,166,122093,2,0,L|107:152,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,91,122652,2,0,P|92:56|160:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,101,123397,2,0,L|312:99,2,60,2|0|10,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,179,124142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,286,124515,2,0,P|217:308|305:307,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,275,125074,2,0,B|338:225|338:225|352:197|352:197|357:147,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,56,125819,2,0,L|323:59,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,106,126378,2,0,L|164:91,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,78,126751,1,10,0:0:0:0:
41,146,127124,6,0,P|25:205|44:283,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,318,127869,2,0,L|170:367,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,264,128428,2,0,P|181:217|247:207,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,128987,1,10,0:0:0:0:
370,277,129360,2,0,L|361:346,2,60,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,231,130105,6,0,B|466:190|466:190|440:159|440:159|427:112,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,37,130850,2,0,L|288:30,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,91,131409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,138,131596,2,0,P|248:140|192:115,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,70,132341,2,0,P|78:66|38:83,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,123,132900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,169,133086,6,0,L|92:315,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,348,133832,2,0,L|258:352,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,256,134577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,262,134950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,203,135322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,95,135695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,19,136068,6,0,L|249:33,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,137,136813,2,0,L|103:123,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,187,137558,6,0,P|13:241|44:316,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,337,138117,2,0,L|200:347,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,317,138676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,240,139049,2,0,P|377:214|443:231,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,251,139608,2,0,L|477:109,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,76,140167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,26,140540,6,0,B|342:30|342:30|302:57|302:57|247:63,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,56,141099,2,0,P|156:40|76:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,88,141658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,195,142030,2,0,L|76:324,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,142776,2,0,L|187:145,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,69,143521,6,0,P|305:75|352:141,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,177,144080,2,0,P|304:183|257:249,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,285,144639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,357,145012,2,0,P|142:356|73:297,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,254,145571,2,0,L|59:129,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,80,146130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,65,146502,6,0,P|219:86|292:64,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,46,147061,2,0,P|359:50|390:75,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,94,147434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,199,147807,2,0,P|445:263|417:330,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,342,148366,2,0,L|312:334,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,305,148738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,352,149111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
77,310,149484,6,0,P|62:263|66:185,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,153,150043,2,0,L|224:153,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,150602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,208,150975,2,0,P|382:226|459:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,178,151534,2,0,B|483:140|483:140|463:104|463:104|460:45,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,11,152093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,58,152465,6,0,L|251:64,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,69,153024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,146,153397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,254,153770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,298,153956,2,0,P|204:316|283:290,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,154701,2,0,P|285:190|206:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,220,155447,6,0,P|59:192|35:125,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,81,156006,2,0,L|187:69,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,64,156565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,57,156937,2,0,P|347:116|332:181,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,213,157496,2,0,B|226:244|191:179|122:216,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,311,158428,5,0,0:0:0:0:
273,348,158801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,283,159173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,321,159546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,214,159919,2,0,L|453:94,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,52,161409,6,0,P|186:31|262:40,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,142,162155,2,0,L|255:262,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,338,162900,2,0,P|135:342|53:311,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,243,163645,2,0,P|181:239|263:270,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,324,164391,6,0,P|403:308|445:263,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,162,165136,2,0,L|458:95,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,177,165695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
310,121,166068,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,203,166440,1,2,3:0:0:0:
330,262,166813,2,0,P|277:304|212:307,1,120,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,307,167372,6,0,P|140:291|112:259,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,228,167745,2,0,L|106:154,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,84,168304,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,155,168676,2,0,P|301:175|387:155,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,169422,2,0,P|391:60|305:80,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,167,170167,6,0,B|373:226|373:226|394:268|394:268|396:347,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,351,171099,2,0,L|214:358,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,263,171844,2,0,L|85:276,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,179,172589,2,0,L|294:166,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,79,173335,1,12,0:0:0:0:
356,61,179297,6,0,B|337:118|337:118|361:180,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
453,226,180043,2,0,B|472:169|472:169|448:107,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
359,174,180788,2,0,L|239:176,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
180,267,181534,2,0,L|305:264,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
360,174,182279,5,0,2:0:0:0:
300,83,182652,2,0,L|226:83,1,60,0|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
135,115,183211,1,2,2:0:0:0:
42,59,183583,2,0,P|27:119|54:189,1,120,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,223,184142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,255,184515,2,0,L|295:255,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,185,185260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,185633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,186006,2,0,L|258:357,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,272,186751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,317,187124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,216,187496,2,0,L|51:85,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,38,188242,5,2,0:0:0:0:
201,128,188614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
297,175,188987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,154,189360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,69,189732,2,0,P|381:50|304:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,152,190478,2,0,L|315:229,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,324,191223,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,74,192155,2,0,L|71:8,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,87,192714,6,0,L|210:81,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,257,193645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,230,194018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,194204,6,0,P|466:118|440:59,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,61,194763,2,0,P|328:89|267:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,52,195322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,88,195695,2,0,P|95:144|86:203,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,186,196440,2,0,P|228:242|237:301,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,361,197186,6,0,P|385:357|439:318,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,273,197745,2,0,B|440:227|440:227|423:198|423:198|416:144,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,104,198304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,55,198676,2,0,B|326:101|326:101|309:130|309:130|302:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,224,199235,2,0,P|267:258|183:257,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,241,199794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,168,200167,6,0,P|109:140|186:141,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,141,200912,2,0,P|340:129|389:66,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,44,201471,2,0,P|451:98|450:182,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,208,202030,2,0,P|442:246|425:269,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,309,202403,2,0,P|379:336|335:355,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,368,202776,2,0,P|257:377|231:371,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,357,203148,6,0,B|179:324|207:277|181:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,189,203707,2,0,P|119:176|32:217,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,251,204266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,280,204639,2,0,P|211:266|250:196,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,205198,2,0,P|213:104|138:97,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,105,205757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,201,206130,6,0,P|184:239|277:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,267,206689,2,0,L|428:267,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,225,207248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,117,207620,2,0,P|439:88|354:68,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,123,208366,2,0,P|224:161|166:173,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,226,209111,6,0,P|58:166|88:99,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,60,209670,2,0,B|165:24|214:80|270:32,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,120,210602,2,0,P|383:146|451:139,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,178,211161,2,0,B|523:270|450:291|498:368,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,342,212093,6,0,P|326:357|261:347,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,212838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,228,213211,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,148,213583,2,0,L|184:18,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,26,214329,2,0,L|-11:35,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,132,215074,6,0,L|47:262,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,304,215633,2,0,P|112:344|188:344,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,216192,2,0,P|236:297|280:304,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,316,216565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,220,216937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,274,217310,2,0,L|501:333,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,165,218055,5,8,0:0:0:0:
369,99,218428,1,4,0:0:0:0:
272,147,218801,2,0,L|244:216,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,95,219360,2,0,P|182:68|136:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,102,219919,1,10,0:0:0:0:
55,202,220291,2,0,L|65:332,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,359,221037,6,0,L|155:229,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,191,221782,2,0,L|258:265,2,60,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,137,222341,2,0,P|272:95|354:81,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,83,222900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,123,223086,2,0,B|427:183|427:183|466:231|466:231|472:305,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,341,224018,6,0,P|345:361|309:362,2,60,12|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,286,224577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,214,224950,2,0,P|269:218|231:253,2,60,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,179,225695,2,0,P|405:158|394:107,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,288,226440,2,0,P|393:306|442:323,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,230,226999,6,0,P|493:185|491:101,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,45,227745,2,0,L|344:11,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,96,228304,2,0,P|339:158|241:60,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,46,229422,2,0,L|52:31,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,98,229981,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,230167,12,0,235881,0:0:0:0:

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-03-29T01:18:25+00:00

Halloooo kakaaaa from my queue
Some small sugestion from me,

[Pho's Normal]

00:02:652 (4) - Add whistle there? to emphize more the piano sound
00:03:397 (1,2) - I think you misplaced whistle there, whistle on (1)'s tail is better deleted and add whistle on (2) instead, because the strong piano sound is on red tick instead on white
00:13:086 (3) - Maybe you can add whistle on head to fit with music and that long slider
00:14:950 (4) - That one is better to have default drum-finish for fit the bass sound more imo, instead using normal hit
00:17:186 (5) - Minor blanket, you can move that to x:448 y:148
00:26:316 (4,5) - Why no hitsound there? I think you can put somewhistle there to follow the piano sound
00:23:707 (5,1) - That one not really fit with the music imo, I think this rhythm is way better http://puu.sh/gTGrD/11dacd3537.jpg
01:01:906 (1) - For a better flow you can stack that circle (1) under this 01:00:788 (5) - and then move this 01:02:279 (2) - to x:304 y:100 or else, so it'll looks like this http://puu.sh/gTHwZ/5907b25345.jpg
02:53:335 (1) - I think that's better on NC to indicate the break time
03:13:645 (2) - That one is better to have default drum-finish for fit the bass sound more imo and here 03:14:018 (3) - use normal-hit
03:21:471 (3,4,5,6) - Wow that one so niceeee, but do you mind to add something sounded like default drum-finish on each head of this 03:22:030 (4,5,6) - Idk it feel so good if use that and maybe can add some green line on that to adjust the volume so it sounded like fade-out (higher volume->low volume). Sorry for bad explaination XD
03:28:366 (5) - Maybe rotate 20 degree, so it'll blanket this 03:29:670 (2) -
Lower the volume on this one 03:49:049 - since it have no drum sound and a bit calm there, and so like 03:49:422 (4,5) - normal-hit on that really sounds bad because not really emphize any drum sound, maybe use whistle instead to fit the piano sound
03:50:167 (1) - Don't you think that spinner is kinda wrong, should be end here 03:58:179 - and use soft sampleset for silence end

[Hard]

00:01:906 (1) - Mungkin add whistle on reverse, to emphize the piano
00:03:583 (2,3) - Whitle di akhir slider (2) kayanya lebih bagus didelete deh kak terus tambah whistle di (3), coba didengerin pasti lebih klop sama pianonya
00:14:577 (1) - Agak sulit kak yang itu kliknya, antara terlalu dekat sama spinner atau apa, coba mungkin didelete aja? terus spinnernya dipanjangin sampe 00:14:577 -
00:24:825 (2) - Pake normal-hit deh kak dibagian reverse sama akhirnya, pas sama drumnya soalnya, ngerti kan yah normal-hit yang aku maksud apa http://puu.sh/gTKBY/e54aa66016.jpg?
00:25:198 (3,4) - Pake suara default drum-finish http://puu.sh/gTKuY/6bed42ccbe.jpg aja kak lebih cocok deh menurut aku sama suara "bumbum" di sana XD
00:38:428 (1) - Memang sih bener suara drumnya segitu, tapi kurang nyaman kak note berikutnya jadi suka miss gitu karena nge-hold (1) terlalu lama jadi suka lupa sama beat selanjutnya, jadi mungkin saran aku ritmenya diubah aja jadi kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/gTQlv/613d711977.jpg
01:05:074 (3,4) - Kayanya (3) flownya lebih baik di ctrl+g deh kak, terus yang (4) itu mungkin bisa dibuat tegak aja kak? terus blanket sama ini 01:05:819 (5) - jadi kesannya jadi lebih rapih gituuu, kaya gini mungkin http://puu.sh/gTQFT/0cad0ddb94.jpg
01:07:310 (4) - Mungkin bisa agak turun ke x:452 y:52?
01:08:428 (3,4) - Minor sih sebenrnya kak, tapi mungkin (3) bisa dirotate -20 drajat, terus dibenerin deh blanketnya sama (4)
01:24:453 (1) - Kayanya itu terlalu datar deh kak kalo cuma lurus aja, mungkin bagian akhirnya bisa dibuat melengkung sedikiit jadi bisa blanket sama ini 01:25:198 (2) - http://puu.sh/gTQYU/1b94d09612.jpg

02:21:099 (2,3) - Eh kaaaakk beneran deh kurang bagus diliatnya, terus kayanya terlalu mepet ke kiri jadi aneh, mungkin tertarik sama patern yang ini http://puu.sh/gTRuV/2a1982b07e.jpg kalo butuh codenya ada di bawah

312,248,140540,6,0,B|272:256|272:256|224:220|168:244,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,352,141099,2,0,P|168:360|132:352,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,328,141471,2,0,P|31:292|56:265,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,243,141844,1,2,0:0:0:0:

02:31:906 (3,1) - Minor lagi kak, mungkin itu bisa diblanket lebih bagus
02:33:770 (4) - Kenapa ga pake ritme circle-slider aja kak? kan di lagunya ada irama yg bunyinya "tengtongtengtongteng" gitu hahaha XD ya mirip kaya yg ini deh gampangnya 02:21:844 (4,1,2,3,4) -
02:36:006 (2,1,2,3) - Bener deh kak yang itu overlapnya bener bener ga bagus menurut aku, coba deh slider panjang yang ini 02:36:006 (2) - diflip ctrl+j terus dipindah gitu, mungkin jadinya bisa kaya gini http://puu.sh/gTRQT/08cfd2386d.jpg atau bisa cari patern lain yang lebih appealable sama lagunyaaa

Untuk hitsound sama Nc nya diatur lagi ya kak, kayanya ada yang panjaang bgt combonya ada yang pendek cuma dua XD

[Insane]
01:03:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Mungkin bisa dirapihin streamnya, kalo mau dibuat bentuk S kayanya bisa deh, atau stream melengkung bisa juga bisa
01:05:447 (4) - Bisa diflip kak ctrl+h rotate -70 drajat terus bentuknya bisa kaya gini http://puu.sh/gTSwt/69a1e112f2.jpg
01:47:558 (5,6,1) - Yang itu ga keliatan deh kan beneran pas dimainin, coba sendiri deh jadi miss buat bingung soalnya
01:50:540 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Untuk pattern jump yang itu kayanya kurang bagus deh kak kalo cuma jump depan belakang di tempat yang sama, jadi saran aku mah dibuat pola segitiga aja memutar, dari segitiga besar memutar ke segitiga kecil, ini gambarnya kalo bingung segitiga yg besar http://puu.sh/gTT2p/81af3695a5.jpg ini segitiga yang kecil http://puu.sh/gTT41/cb1f2f7cd6.jpg, kebayang enggaaaa hahah XD aku ga bisa ngejelasin sesuatu yg susah, kalo butuh codenya
```
160,188,110540,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,40,110726,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,110912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,168,111285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,39,111471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111658,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,188,111844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,104,112030,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,104,112217,6,0,P|255:172|220:264,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:53:521 (7) - Itu lebih baik stack dibawah ini deh 01:53:148 (5) - nerusin patern segitiganya
02:11:502 (6) - Kalo itu didelete bgmn kak? kayanya agak overmap gitu
02:14:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kalo jumpnya dibuat segitiga bgmn kak? jadi dari segitiga kecil ke segitiga besar gitu jumpnya, kaya gini mungkin http://puu.sh/gTTv7/0e46459596.jpg ngeh engga maksud aku hahaha XD

Sebenernya cuma dipercantik sedikit lagi aja kak udah ok, hitsound sama NC nya juga diatur lagi ya kak

[]
I see, so the creator do the hitsound, so I guess hitsound is still wip, untung diffnya Pho dibawah bintang dua kalo engga mungkin butuh easy diff haha XD
Gws kakaaaak jangan sakit doong, semoga membantu yah modnya, goodluck~

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-04-01T15:55:55+00:00

-Tochi wrote:
From my modding queue

Insane
01:18:490 (3,4) - Use same shape.
01:26:502 (4,5,6) - It feels better to play like this:
Image
02:11:502 (6) - This is overmap, delete it. There's not really a sound there. Fix it like: Fixed, but not exactly as you suggested lol
Image
Ctrl + G on 02:11:596 (1) - and Ctrl + J to flip it. and place it to x:85 y:318, and move this 02:11:223 (5) 's last curve point a bit to the left. for a better flow.

02:20:540 (8) - Add NC.
02:38:148 (2) - Delete and make a triple from here 02:38:242 - like:
Image
02:40:664 (3) - This actually starts here 02:40:291 - and 1/6 sounds much better, and not so intense. 1/6 would be difficult imo, and I think that the current one fits the song nicely
02:43:645 (2,3) - Triples sounds weird when they start on a white tick. Delete this circle 02:43:738 (3) -
03:31:720 (4,5,6) - Delete this 03:31:813 (5) - And make a triple from 03:31:906 - that starts on the head of this slider 03:32:093 (1) -

Feedback

Sorry for only modding 1 diff, but be happy that u get 1 kudosu! (^o^)
I like the song, good luck~

Sorry for the late reply.. T_T
No mention = fixed
Thank you for modding

Last edited by Yohanes 2015-04-01T16:04:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-04-01T16:02:44+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Halloooo kakaaaa from my queue
Some small sugestion from me,

[Hard]
00:01:906 (1) - Mungkin add whistle on reverse, to emphize the piano
00:03:583 (2,3) - Whitle di akhir slider (2) kayanya lebih bagus didelete deh kak terus tambah whistle di (3), coba didengerin pasti lebih klop sama pianonya
00:14:577 (1) - Agak sulit kak yang itu kliknya, antara terlalu dekat sama spinner atau apa, coba mungkin didelete aja? terus spinnernya dipanjangin sampe 00:14:577 -
00:24:825 (2) - Pake normal-hit deh kak dibagian reverse sama akhirnya, pas sama drumnya soalnya, ngerti kan yah normal-hit yang aku maksud apa http://puu.sh/gTKBY/e54aa66016.jpg?
00:25:198 (3,4) - Pake suara default drum-finish http://puu.sh/gTKuY/6bed42ccbe.jpg aja kak lebih cocok deh menurut aku sama suara "bumbum" di sana XD Akuk kok lebih suka hitnormal ya
00:38:428 (1) - Memang sih bener suara drumnya segitu, tapi kurang nyaman kak note berikutnya jadi suka miss gitu karena nge-hold (1) terlalu lama jadi suka lupa sama beat selanjutnya, jadi mungkin saran aku ritmenya diubah aja jadi kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/gTQlv/613d711977.jpg Hmmm, jadi agak gimana gitu kalo aku ubah. No change ._.
01:05:074 (3,4) - Kayanya (3) flownya lebih baik di ctrl+g deh kak, terus yang (4) itu mungkin bisa dibuat tegak aja kak? terus blanket sama ini 01:05:819 (5) - jadi kesannya jadi lebih rapih gituuu, kaya gini mungkin http://puu.sh/gTQFT/0cad0ddb94.jpg
01:07:310 (4) - Mungkin bisa agak turun ke x:452 y:52?
01:08:428 (3,4) - Minor sih sebenrnya kak, tapi mungkin (3) bisa dirotate -20 drajat, terus dibenerin deh blanketnya sama (4)
01:24:453 (1) - Kayanya itu terlalu datar deh kak kalo cuma lurus aja, mungkin bagian akhirnya bisa dibuat melengkung sedikiit jadi bisa blanket sama ini 01:25:198 (2) - http://puu.sh/gTQYU/1b94d09612.jpg I'm a straight man
02:21:099 (2,3) - Eh kaaaakk beneran deh kurang bagus diliatnya, terus kayanya terlalu mepet ke kiri jadi aneh, mungkin tertarik sama patern yang ini http://puu.sh/gTRuV/2a1982b07e.jpg kalo butuh codenya ada di bawah
312,248,140540,6,0,B|272:256|272:256|224:220|168:244,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,352,141099,2,0,P|168:360|132:352,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,328,141471,2,0,P|31:292|56:265,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,243,141844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
02:31:906 (3,1) - Minor lagi kak, mungkin itu bisa diblanket lebih bagus
02:33:770 (4) - Kenapa ga pake ritme circle-slider aja kak? kan di lagunya ada irama yg bunyinya "tengtongtengtongteng" gitu hahaha XD ya mirip kaya yg ini deh gampangnya 02:21:844 (4,1,2,3,4) -
02:36:006 (2,1,2,3) - Bener deh kak yang itu overlapnya bener bener ga bagus menurut aku, coba deh slider panjang yang ini 02:36:006 (2) - diflip ctrl+j terus dipindah gitu, mungkin jadinya bisa kaya gini http://puu.sh/gTRQT/08cfd2386d.jpg atau bisa cari patern lain yang lebih appealable sama lagunyaaa Sekarang ini belum dapet inspirasi, no change for now

Untuk hitsound sama Nc nya diatur lagi ya kak, kayanya ada yang panjaang bgt combonya ada yang pendek cuma dua XD

[Insane]
01:03:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Mungkin bisa dirapihin streamnya, kalo mau dibuat bentuk S kayanya bisa deh, atau stream melengkung bisa juga bisa
01:05:447 (4) - Bisa diflip kak ctrl+h rotate -70 drajat terus bentuknya bisa kaya gini http://puu.sh/gTSwt/69a1e112f2.jpg Aku lebih suka punyaku sih
01:47:558 (5,6,1) - Yang itu ga keliatan deh kan beneran pas dimainin, coba sendiri deh jadi miss buat bingung soalnya Aku sih nggak bingung . but changed
01:50:540 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Untuk pattern jump yang itu kayanya kurang bagus deh kak kalo cuma jump depan belakang di tempat yang sama, jadi saran aku mah dibuat pola segitiga aja memutar, dari segitiga besar memutar ke segitiga kecil, ini gambarnya kalo bingung segitiga yg besar http://puu.sh/gTT2p/81af3695a5.jpg ini segitiga yang kecil http://puu.sh/gTT41/cb1f2f7cd6.jpg, kebayang enggaaaa hahah XD aku ga bisa ngejelasin sesuatu yg susah, kalo butuh codenya Nice one! but I make the pattern a bit different (or totally different idk)
160,188,110540,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,40,110726,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,110912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,168,111285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,39,111471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111658,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,188,111844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,104,112030,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,104,112217,6,0,P|255:172|220:264,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:53:521 (7) - Itu lebih baik stack dibawah ini deh 01:53:148 (5) - nerusin patern segitiganya
02:11:502 (6) - Kalo itu didelete bgmn kak? kayanya agak overmap gitu
02:14:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kalo jumpnya dibuat segitiga bgmn kak? jadi dari segitiga kecil ke segitiga besar gitu jumpnya, kaya gini mungkin http://puu.sh/gTTv7/0e46459596.jpg ngeh engga maksud aku hahaha XD Too many triplets and triangles already

Sebenernya cuma dipercantik sedikit lagi aja kak udah ok, hitsound sama NC nya juga diatur lagi ya kak
Nice~
[]
I see, so the creator do the hitsound, so I guess hitsound is still wip, untung diffnya Pho dibawah bintang dua kalo engga mungkin butuh easy diff haha XD
Gws kakaaaak jangan sakit doong, semoga membantu yah modnya, goodluck~ (^o^)b

Thank you Mako for modding and star

No mention = fixed

EDIT :
All edited, except the hitound
I haven't touch it yet

Updated~

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-04-14T08:25:14+00:00

~~Update!~~

Finally I can ~~overcome my holy laziness~~ get some time working on this map
Hitsound updated, although it didn't change much I'm still clueless when comes to hs-ing
I change some pattern on insane diff, not much tho. such as
02:19:981 (5,6,1,2) -
02:31:347 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
03:41:037 (1,2,3,1,2) -

This should be better now

EDIT : UPDATED~
All diff, especially Pho's Normal
Thanks Pho

Last edited by Yohanes 2015-04-15T03:55:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-04-14T15:58:58+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
[Pho's Normal]
00:02:652 (4) - Add whistle there? to emphize more the piano sound I'll leave all hitsound suggestions blank, yaldo will take care of it ~
00:03:397 (1,2) - I think you misplaced whistle there, whistle on (1)'s tail is better deleted and add whistle on (2) instead, because the strong piano sound is on red tick instead on white
00:13:086 (3) - Maybe you can add whistle on head to fit with music and that long slider
00:14:950 (4) - That one is better to have default drum-finish for fit the bass sound more imo, instead using normal hit
00:17:186 (5) - Minor blanket, you can move that to x:448 y:148 It should be fine as it is right now.
00:26:316 (4,5) - Why no hitsound there? I think you can put somewhistle there to follow the piano sound
00:23:707 (5,1) - That one not really fit with the music imo, I think this rhythm is way better http://puu.sh/gTGrD/11dacd3537.jpg It works fine for me, the last slider fits well to the bell sound and the first one i had to ease rhythm up a bit.
01:01:906 (1) - For a better flow you can stack that circle (1) under this 01:00:788 (5) - and then move this 01:02:279 (2) - to x:304 y:100 or else, so it'll looks like this http://puu.sh/gTHwZ/5907b25345.jpg Pushed the backslider's end more to the right, otherwise I don't really see an issue with the flow here.
02:53:335 (1) - I think that's better on NC to indicate the break time Not needed imo.
03:13:645 (2) - That one is better to have default drum-finish for fit the bass sound more imo and here 03:14:018 (3) - use normal-hit
03:21:471 (3,4,5,6) - Wow that one so niceeee, but do you mind to add something sounded like default drum-finish on each head of this 03:22:030 (4,5,6) - Idk it feel so good if use that and maybe can add some green line on that to adjust the volume so it sounded like fade-out (higher volume->low volume). Sorry for bad explaination XD
03:28:366 (5) - Maybe rotate 20 degree, so it'll blanket this 03:29:670 (2) - I think I fixed this already
Lower the volume on this one 03:49:049 - since it have no drum sound and a bit calm there, and so like 03:49:422 (4,5) - normal-hit on that really sounds bad because not really emphize any drum sound, maybe use whistle instead to fit the piano sound
03:50:167 (1) - Don't you think that spinner is kinda wrong, should be end here 03:58:179 - and use soft sampleset for silence enDone.

Thanks for the mod, appreciate it

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Landscape.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64142
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:yaldo_27
Version:Pho's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shinya Saito ポリオミノ Polyomino Pho
BeatmapID:654312
BeatmapSetID:288852

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88566,98286
2,173535,178037
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
416,372.670807453416,4,1,1,30,1,0
8987,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
9360,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
10478,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
10850,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
11223,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
11596,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
11968,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
12341,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
13086,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
14391,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,25,0,0
14577,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
27248,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
27620,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
37683,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
38428,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
39546,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
51099,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
52589,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
53335,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
56875,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
57061,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
64515,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
76254,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
76440,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
88366,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
91347,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
99546,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
100291,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
137558,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
149297,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
149484,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
160664,-100,4,1,1,10,0,1
160757,-100,4,1,1,15,0,1
160850,-100,4,1,1,25,0,1
160943,-100,4,1,1,35,0,1
161037,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
161130,-100,4,1,1,45,0,1
161223,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
161316,-100,4,1,1,65,0,1
161409,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
171099,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
179297,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
179484,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
179670,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
179856,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
180043,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
180229,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
180415,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
181813,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
191223,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
191409,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
192714,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
193086,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
194204,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
202962,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
203148,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
218055,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
218242,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
218428,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
234453,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
235198,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
235943,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
236689,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
237434,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
238179,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
84,112,416,6,0,P|120:76|256:96,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
298,173,1347,2,0,L|370:181,2,60,0|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,211,1906,1,0,2:0:0:0:
70,315,2652,1,0,2:0:0:0:
100,100,3397,6,0,P|128:140|136:220,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
138,263,3956,1,2,2:0:0:0:
228,321,4329,2,0,L|224:401,2,60,0|2|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
270,287,4888,1,0,2:0:0:0:
319,191,5260,2,0,P|364:156|443:153,2,120,2|2|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
408,251,6378,6,0,L|444:50,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
333,56,7310,2,0,L|268:15,2,60,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,7869,1,2,2:0:0:0:
176,269,8614,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,9360,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,10850,5,0,2:0:0:0:
97,184,11223,1,2,2:0:0:0:
187,242,11596,2,0,P|248:257|316:241,1,120,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
394,188,12341,5,2,3:0:0:0:
397,79,12714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,47,13086,2,0,B|246:129|353:226|297:289|262:284|262:284|231:284|205:235|260:216,1,360.000013732911,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,219,14950,1,0,1:0:0:0:
165,324,15322,5,4,1:0:0:0:
263,372,15695,2,0,P|314:364|370:310,1,120,8|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
377,267,16254,2,0,L|384:196,2,60,2|10|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
463,201,16999,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,152,17186,2,0,P|396:124|320:152,2,120,10|2|8,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,18304,6,0,P|326:263|260:240,1,120,2|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,19049,2,0,L|194:106,2,60,0|2|10,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
143,187,19608,2,0,P|109:233|148:366,1,180,6|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
178,367,20353,2,0,B|237:356|237:356|296:371|296:371|370:354,1,180,6|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
417,270,21285,6,0,P|454:266|490:271,2,60,4|0|10,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
363,265,21844,1,2,1:0:0:0:
269,210,22217,2,0,P|260:172|267:133,2,60,2|8|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
349,138,22962,2,0,P|358:100|351:61,2,60,2|8|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
269,64,23707,2,0,L|125:71,1,120,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
95,77,24266,6,0,P|71:120|77:205,1,120,2|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
109,293,25012,2,0,L|124:355,2,60,0|6|12,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
151,259,25571,1,4,1:0:0:0:
353,333,26316,2,0,P|383:294|383:219,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,187,26875,2,0,L|280:187,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
427,116,27620,5,0,2:0:0:0:
402,67,27807,2,0,P|364:52|283:73,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
215,147,28552,2,0,P|170:175|70:103,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
73,62,29297,2,0,P|118:17|179:22,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
252,90,30043,1,0,2:0:0:0:
254,143,30229,6,0,B|250:159|260:181|260:181|256:226|256:226|266:250|263:268,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
289,308,30788,1,2,2:0:0:0:
336,333,30975,2,0,P|395:334|446:281,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
380,205,31720,1,2,2:0:0:0:
462,135,32093,1,0,2:0:0:0:
376,68,32465,2,0,L|371:1,2,60,2|0|2,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
287,130,33211,5,2,2:0:0:0:
192,77,33583,1,2,2:0:0:0:
138,70,33770,2,0,P|93:73|34:116,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
27,236,34515,2,0,P|36:280|161:357,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,354,35260,2,0,L|335:338,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
419,331,36006,1,0,2:0:0:0:
416,277,36192,6,0,P|408:220|429:141,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
446,111,36751,2,0,P|391:90|326:102,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,37496,1,0,2:0:0:0:
211,204,37683,2,0,P|156:209|185:72,1,240,2|8,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,78,38614,2,0,L|291:92,2,60,0|8|8,0:3|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
222,24,39173,5,4,1:0:0:0:
329,33,39546,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,79,39732,2,0,P|343:130|281:171,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,194,40478,2,0,P|172:251|194:319,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,338,41037,2,0,L|319:331,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,280,41596,2,0,P|348:243|281:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,174,42155,6,0,B|267:113|267:113|241:88|205:99,1,120,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
159,106,42714,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,136,42900,2,0,P|60:132|5:91,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,32,43645,2,0,L|225:41,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,44391,2,0,L|384:107,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,36,45136,6,0,L|457:164,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,207,45695,2,0,P|392:231|410:355,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,306,46627,2,0,L|163:308,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,312,47186,2,0,P|128:263|48:164,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,208,47931,6,0,L|25:277,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,99,48676,1,2,1:0:0:0:
109,40,49049,2,0,L|182:11,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,90,49608,5,2,0:0:0:0:
182,183,49981,1,10,1:0:0:0:
289,189,50353,2,0,P|315:234|401:267,1,120,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
476,230,51099,1,4,1:0:0:0:
404,149,51471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,136,52217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,320,52962,5,10,0:0:0:0:
293,158,53521,2,0,L|293:94,2,60,2|8|2,2:0|1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
291,212,54080,1,2,2:0:0:0:
189,250,54453,1,8,2:1:0:0:
34,98,55198,1,8,1:0:0:0:
127,44,55571,5,2,2:0:0:0:
213,112,55943,2,0,P|230:171|211:241,2,120,8|8|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,174,57061,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,237,57434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,328,57807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,268,58179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,346,58552,6,0,L|393:326,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,261,59297,2,0,L|325:241,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,169,60043,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,64,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,32,60788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
483,91,61161,2,0,L|512:148,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,61906,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,155,62279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,107,62652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,62,63024,2,0,L|68:204,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,223,63770,2,0,L|194:365,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,362,64515,6,0,P|357:362|411:325,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,277,65074,2,0,B|422:243|422:243|400:191|400:191|400:141,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,107,65633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,148,66006,2,0,P|253:148|186:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,72,66565,2,0,P|103:69|33:101,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,146,67124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
90,229,67496,6,0,L|82:315,2,60,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,214,68055,2,0,P|180:204|260:255,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,326,68801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,336,68987,2,0,P|407:328|454:258,1,120,10|10,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,173,69732,2,0,P|360:165|313:95,1,120,10|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,47,70478,6,0,L|232:173,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,220,71037,2,0,P|182:251|113:247,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,225,71596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
14,136,71968,2,0,P|70:119|138:137,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,154,72527,2,0,P|244:174|303:157,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,131,73086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,97,73459,6,0,L|433:225,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,251,74204,2,0,L|336:123,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,86,74763,2,0,P|253:67|183:84,1,120,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,102,75322,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,177,75695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,255,76068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,324,76440,6,0,P|90:347|179:353,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,340,76999,2,0,L|230:209,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,166,77558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,221,77931,2,0,P|345:172|321:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,76,78490,2,0,L|157:77,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,115,79049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,221,79422,6,0,P|190:246|224:318,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,353,79981,2,0,L|366:340,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,338,80540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
494,275,80912,2,0,P|488:224|444:164,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,164,81658,2,0,P|300:208|286:265,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,322,82403,6,0,P|155:329|74:282,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,246,82962,2,0,P|97:201|40:92,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,83894,2,0,L|277:50,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,40,84453,2,0,P|369:92|365:207,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,261,85384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,176,85757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,169,86130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,86502,2,0,L|28:369,2,120,8|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,88366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,99546,6,0,L|129:107,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,264,100291,5,2,0:0:0:0:
255,197,100664,2,0,L|332:201,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,302,101223,2,0,P|393:272|422:202,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,159,101782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,102155,2,0,L|267:94,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,102714,2,0,P|143:182|69:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,127,103273,6,0,L|50:266,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,300,103832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,335,104018,2,0,P|137:354|226:337,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,243,104763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,236,105136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
443,289,105509,2,0,L|449:364,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,190,106254,5,4,0:0:0:0:
410,113,106627,2,0,L|344:113,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,47,107186,2,0,P|206:43|144:86,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,118,107745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,185,108117,2,0,L|275:185,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,256,108676,2,0,P|338:299|277:343,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,332,109235,6,0,L|98:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,286,109794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
10,192,110167,2,0,P|58:177|126:197,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,200,110726,2,0,P|233:166|253:104,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,97,111471,1,8,3:0:0:0:
88,188,111844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,275,112217,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,276,112589,2,0,L|322:277,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,341,113148,2,0,P|437:300|442:206,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,181,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,114080,2,0,L|265:141,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,205,114639,2,0,P|107:176|43:186,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,217,115198,6,0,P|26:278|65:348,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,362,115757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,345,115943,2,0,P|197:332|273:347,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,313,116689,2,0,L|355:180,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,199,117434,2,0,L|261:58,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,31,118179,6,0,P|120:50|86:131,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,167,118738,2,0,B|100:224|100:224|145:274|145:274|162:347,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,295,119670,2,0,P|314:267|389:284,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,281,120229,2,0,B|453:196|453:196|454:151|407:97,1,180,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,71,120975,6,0,P|370:32|369:10,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,86,121534,2,0,L|249:100,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,166,122093,2,0,L|107:152,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,91,122652,2,0,P|92:56|160:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,101,123397,2,0,L|312:99,2,60,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,179,124142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,286,124515,2,0,P|217:308|305:307,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,275,125074,2,0,B|338:225|338:225|352:197|352:197|357:147,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,56,125819,2,0,L|323:59,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,106,126378,2,0,L|164:91,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,78,126751,1,10,0:0:0:0:
41,146,127124,6,0,P|25:205|44:283,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,318,127869,2,0,L|170:367,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,264,128428,2,0,P|181:217|247:207,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,128987,1,10,0:0:0:0:
370,277,129360,2,0,L|361:346,2,60,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,231,130105,6,0,B|466:190|466:190|440:159|440:159|427:112,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,37,130850,2,0,L|288:30,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,91,131409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,138,131596,2,0,P|248:140|192:115,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,70,132341,2,0,P|78:66|38:83,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,123,132900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,169,133086,6,0,L|92:315,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,348,133832,2,0,L|258:352,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,256,134577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,262,134950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,203,135322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,95,135695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,19,136068,6,0,L|249:33,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,137,136813,2,0,L|103:123,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,187,137558,6,0,P|13:241|44:316,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,337,138117,2,0,L|200:347,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,317,138676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,240,139049,2,0,P|377:214|443:231,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,251,139608,2,0,L|477:109,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,76,140167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,26,140540,6,0,B|342:30|342:30|302:57|302:57|247:63,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,56,141099,2,0,P|156:40|76:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,88,141658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,195,142030,2,0,L|76:324,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,142776,2,0,L|187:145,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,69,143521,6,0,P|305:75|352:141,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,177,144080,2,0,P|304:183|257:249,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,285,144639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,357,145012,2,0,P|142:356|73:297,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,254,145571,2,0,L|59:129,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,80,146130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,65,146502,6,0,P|219:86|292:64,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,46,147061,2,0,P|359:50|390:75,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,94,147434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,199,147807,2,0,P|445:263|417:330,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,342,148366,2,0,L|312:334,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,305,148738,1,10,0:0:0:0:
177,352,149111,1,10,0:0:0:0:
77,310,149484,6,0,P|62:263|66:185,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,153,150043,2,0,L|224:153,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,150602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,208,150975,2,0,P|382:226|459:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,178,151534,2,0,B|483:140|483:140|463:104|463:104|460:45,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,11,152093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,58,152465,6,0,L|251:64,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,69,153024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,146,153397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,254,153770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,298,153956,2,0,P|204:316|283:290,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,154701,2,0,P|285:190|206:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,220,155447,6,0,P|59:192|35:125,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,81,156006,2,0,L|187:69,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,64,156565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,57,156937,2,0,P|347:116|332:181,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,213,157496,2,0,B|226:244|191:179|122:216,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,311,158428,5,0,0:0:0:0:
273,348,158801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,283,159173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,321,159546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,214,159919,2,0,L|453:94,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,52,161409,6,0,P|186:31|262:40,1,120,6|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,142,162155,2,0,L|255:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,338,162900,2,0,P|135:342|53:311,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,243,163645,2,0,P|181:239|263:270,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,324,164391,6,0,P|403:308|445:263,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,162,165136,2,0,L|458:95,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,177,165695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
310,121,166068,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,203,166440,1,2,3:0:0:0:
330,262,166813,2,0,P|277:304|212:307,1,120,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,307,167372,6,0,P|140:291|112:259,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,228,167745,2,0,L|106:154,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,84,168304,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,155,168676,2,0,P|301:175|387:155,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,169422,2,0,P|391:60|305:80,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,167,170167,6,0,B|373:226|373:226|394:268|394:268|396:347,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,351,171099,2,0,L|214:358,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,263,171844,2,0,L|85:276,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,179,172589,2,0,L|294:166,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,79,173335,1,12,0:0:0:0:
356,61,179297,6,0,B|337:118|337:118|361:180,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
453,226,180043,2,0,B|472:169|472:169|448:107,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
359,174,180788,2,0,L|239:176,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
180,267,181534,2,0,L|305:264,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
360,174,182279,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,83,182652,2,0,L|226:83,1,60,0|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
135,115,183211,1,2,1:0:0:0:
42,59,183583,2,0,P|27:119|54:189,1,120,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,223,184142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,255,184515,2,0,L|295:255,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,185,185260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,185633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,186006,2,0,L|258:357,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,272,186751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,317,187124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,216,187496,2,0,L|51:85,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,38,188242,5,2,0:0:0:0:
201,128,188614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
297,175,188987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,154,189360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,69,189732,2,0,P|381:50|304:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,152,190478,2,0,L|315:229,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,324,191223,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,74,192155,2,0,L|71:8,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,87,192714,6,0,L|210:81,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,257,193645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,230,194018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,194204,6,0,P|466:118|440:59,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,61,194763,2,0,P|328:89|267:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,52,195322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,88,195695,2,0,P|95:144|86:203,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,186,196440,2,0,P|228:242|237:301,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,361,197186,6,0,P|385:357|439:318,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,273,197745,2,0,B|440:227|440:227|423:198|423:198|416:144,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,104,198304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,55,198676,2,0,B|326:101|326:101|309:130|309:130|302:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,224,199235,2,0,P|267:258|183:257,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,241,199794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,168,200167,6,0,P|109:140|186:141,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,141,200912,2,0,P|340:129|389:66,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,44,201471,2,0,P|451:98|450:182,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,208,202030,2,0,P|442:246|425:269,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,309,202403,2,0,P|379:336|335:355,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,368,202776,2,0,P|257:377|231:371,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,357,203148,6,0,B|179:324|207:277|181:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,189,203707,2,0,P|119:176|32:217,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,251,204266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
162,280,204639,2,0,P|211:266|250:196,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,205198,2,0,P|213:104|138:97,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,105,205757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,201,206130,6,0,P|184:239|277:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,267,206689,2,0,L|428:267,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,225,207248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,117,207620,2,0,P|439:88|354:68,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,123,208366,2,0,P|224:161|166:173,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,226,209111,6,0,P|58:166|88:99,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,60,209670,2,0,B|165:24|214:80|270:32,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,120,210602,2,0,P|383:146|451:139,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,178,211161,2,0,B|523:270|450:291|498:368,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,342,212093,6,0,P|326:357|261:347,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,212838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,228,213211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,213583,2,0,L|184:18,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,26,214329,2,0,L|-11:35,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,132,215074,6,0,L|47:262,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,304,215633,2,0,P|112:344|188:344,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,216192,2,0,P|236:297|280:304,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,316,216565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,220,216937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,274,217310,2,0,L|501:333,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,165,218055,5,8,0:0:0:0:
369,99,218428,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,147,218801,2,0,L|244:216,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,95,219360,2,0,P|182:68|136:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,102,219919,1,10,0:0:0:0:
55,202,220291,2,0,L|65:332,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,359,221037,6,0,L|155:229,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,191,221782,2,0,L|258:265,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,137,222341,2,0,P|272:95|354:81,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,83,222900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,123,223086,2,0,B|427:183|427:183|466:231|466:231|472:305,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,341,224018,6,0,P|345:361|309:362,2,60,12|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,286,224577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,214,224950,2,0,P|269:218|231:253,2,60,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,179,225695,2,0,P|405:158|394:107,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,288,226440,2,0,P|393:306|442:323,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,230,226999,6,0,P|493:185|491:101,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,45,227745,2,0,L|344:11,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,96,228304,2,0,P|339:158|241:60,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,46,229422,2,0,L|52:31,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,98,229981,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,230167,12,0,238179,2:0:0:0:

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-04-22T16:21:54+00:00

Insane

00:07:869 (1,2) - I really think this 2 sliders should finish in the blue tick, because the rhythm is constant, and there's no need to finish them at reds.

00:21:844 (3) - Move it above, trying to avoid the overlap with (1), somewhere near x288 y36

00:27:620 (1) - Damn, Whistle sounds pretty good.

00:29:111 (4) - NC maybe?
03:44:204 (6) - ^

00:31:534 - Circle here; also try someone over here 00:32:279 - aaand 00:33:024 -
Also, try at: 00:34:329 -

00:55:012 (3) - Whistle as well!

01:17:372 (4) - Ctrl+G will follow the flow you use for the entire map.
02:21:471 (4) - ^

01:26:689 (5,6) - Whistles, honey.

01:45:788 (4,5) - Clap cause of the drums, baby!!

02:14:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - All hitsounds with Clap.

02:15:136 (3) - Don't overlap this circle! Move it below.

02:36:565 (4,5) - Unnecessary triplets.

03:12:341 (3,4) - I would use Clap, instead.

03:16:441 (4) - No hitsound?

03:33:956 (2) - Can I suggest a slider here? Up to 03:34:142 -

Pho, I think your difficulty should have AT LEAST OD4. 3 is really low for a Normal diff (2 stars). Also, since Insane has OD8 and Hard 6, it wouldn't be that bad if you think about it.

Yaldo, Hard fits better with CS3,5 / 3,6, try with any of those!

Sorry for modding only 1 map, I am not having enough time to mod lately, I really need to re-arrange my schedule

Good luck with this, guys! You have my total support.

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2015-04-23T23:22:20+00:00

Mod from pm request

Insane

00:01:534 (3,4,1) - I think making a zig-zag pattern would feel more natural which could be accomplished by Ctrl + G on (3,4)
00:03:583 (2) - I'd move this to (331,331) to make it look like it has equal spacing as 00:03:956 (3,4) and it removes the overlap
00:04:888 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical?
00:12:714 (1) - Spinner should be moved to like 00:13:179 and an object on 00:12:714 and 00:13:086
00:30:788 (2) - Move to (264, 80)?
00:38:242 (2) - I don't see the point in this normal sample-set
00:38:987 (8,9) - These should be a bigger jump imo. I'd move (9) to somewhere like (77, 97)
01:03:397 (2) - Should move this somewhere further away from (1) so it's not overlapping. It'll still be playable if its further spaced from the stream
01:13:459 (1) - Ctrl + G this and maybe move 01:13:273 (6) a little higher up
01:41:596 (1) - Remove whistle from head
02:38:801 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This NC spam doesn't really work with the music tbh
03:19:235 (3,4) - Use the same slider?
03:44:950 (1,2,3) - This triangle's pretty off compared to 03:44:204 (6,7,8)

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-04-24T11:47:38+00:00

Yuii-

Yuii- wrote:
Insane

00:07:869 (1,2) - I really think this 2 sliders should finish in the blue tick, because the rhythm is constant, and there's no need to finish them at reds.

00:21:844 (3) - Move it above, trying to avoid the overlap with (1), somewhere near x288 y36 Nice

00:27:620 (1) - Damn, Whistle sounds pretty good.

00:29:111 (4) - NC maybe? Nuh..
03:44:204 (6) - ^^

00:31:534 - Circle here; also try someone over here 00:32:279 - aaand 00:33:024 -
Also, try at: 00:34:329 - I don't want to make this slow part cramped soo... yeah...

00:55:012 (3) - Whistle as well!

01:17:372 (4) - Ctrl+G will follow the flow you use for the entire map. I changed the pattern, check it out!
02:21:471 (4) - ^ No, I like this

01:26:689 (5,6) - Whistles, honey.

01:45:788 (4,5) - Clap cause of the drums, baby!!

02:14:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - All hitsounds with Clap. I kinda agree, but don't think this is necessary

02:15:136 (3) - Don't overlap this circle! Move it below. My life is full or overlap

02:36:565 (4,5) - Unnecessary triplets.

03:12:341 (3,4) - I would use Clap, instead.

03:16:441 (4) - No hitsound?

03:33:956 (2) - Can I suggest a slider here? Up to 03:34:142 - You can't! \^w^/

Pho, I think your difficulty should have AT LEAST OD4. 3 is really low for a Normal diff (2 stars). Also, since Insane has OD8 and Hard 6, it wouldn't be that bad if you think about it. Changed to 4 with Pho's approval ofc

Yaldo, Hard fits better with CS3,5 / 3,6, try with any of those! I like 3.8 better...

Sorry for modding only 1 map, I am not having enough time to mod lately, I really need to re-arrange my schedule

Good luck with this, guys! You have my total support. Thankss!!

Knotts

Knotts wrote:
Mod from pm request

Insane
00:01:534 (3,4,1) - I think making a zig-zag pattern would feel more natural which could be accomplished by Ctrl + G on (3,4)
00:03:583 (2) - I'd move this to (331,331) to make it look like it has equal spacing as 00:03:956 (3,4) and it removes the overlap
00:04:888 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical? That is straight out ctrl+c, ctrl+v
00:12:714 (1) - Spinner should be moved to like 00:13:179 and an object on 00:12:714 and 00:13:086 Kinda agree, changed a bit here
00:30:788 (2) - Move to (264, 80)?
00:38:242 (2) - I don't see the point in this normal sample-set
00:38:987 (8,9) - These should be a bigger jump imo. I'd move (9) to somewhere like (77, 97)
01:03:397 (2) - Should move this somewhere further away from (1) so it's not overlapping. It'll still be playable if its further spaced from the stream
01:13:459 (1) - Ctrl + G this and maybe move 01:13:273 (6) a little higher up
01:41:596 (1) - Remove whistle from head
02:38:801 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This NC spam doesn't really work with the music tbh Idk about this, but I made no change. I'll fix this if it mentioned again later
03:19:235 (3,4) - Use the same slider?
03:44:950 (1,2,3) - This triangle's pretty off compared to 03:44:204 (6,7,8) This is also straight out ctrl+c, ctrl+v

No mention = fixed
Thanks so much guys for modding!
And sorry knotts for bugging you earlier

Updated!

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-04-25T03:17:17+00:00

niceme.me i just cacme back from modding a pho map and the first thing i see is a pho normal n i c e

general

lol sik hitsound memes
i wont mention hitsounds then (not like i do anyway)

Foe

y are ur ncs so fuckin scary to mod nothx
01:26:502 (4,5) - would space them or at least add an nc to circle 5 so it's easier to read or smth
02:37:496 (5,1) - nazi blanket ddxDxdxDdxddxd
03:13:645 (2,3,1) - Id make the angle here more sharper so it fits with the curve of the slider u feel
03:36:192 (3) - i think u kinda overdid the curve on it lol

HD

I just feel that the map could overall be better in terms of structure mostly because it doesn't look like the sliders and circles e.t.c don't work together. An example is like this slider at 00:17:931 (3) - looks like it was forced blanketing, and it doesn't look like it flows with the two sliders that u had before, for studd like that I'd recommend to just use like a 2 circle jump or smth instead like this so it looks more... "fit in" I suppose? idk but yea i hope u get wot im tryna say. That's literally like my only problem with this map is that it doesn't look tidy enough lol (I'M NOT SAYING TO REMAP IT THO SDKFNDSKSMF)
00:53:521 (2,3,4) - here's another example.. It doesn't hve bad spacing but it just aesthetically looks kinda bad cuz u have these 2 1/2 sliders really really close together on one side and then a really nice slider art slider on the other side. One way to fix the look of this wud be to just put a circle at 00:53:521 and move the 2 sliders 1/2 to the right, moving them closer to the slider at the right, which could potentially look much better imo
yea stuff like that happens throughout the map, idklol. It's fine to play and stuff but it just looks untdy u feel. ur insane is really nice tho ayee

INS

03:00:788 (2,3) - high potential for sliders to be offscreen/unrankable on some resolutions idk. The third one can be covered like halfway by the hp bar on some resolutions tho thats 4 sure
sik meme brvh

ok addadda

EDIT: that hard mod is so bad so bad ignore evrything i said about ur hard diff if u wanna

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-04-27T04:25:11+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
niceme.me i just cacme back from modding a pho map and the first thing i see is a pho normal n i c e

general
lol sik hitsound memes
i wont mention hitsounds then (not like i do anyway)
HD
I just feel that the map could overall be better in terms of structure mostly because it doesn't look like the sliders and circles e.t.c don't work together. An example is like this slider at 00:17:931 (3) - looks like it was forced blanketing, and it doesn't look like it flows with the two sliders that u had before, for studd like that I'd recommend to just use like a 2 circle jump or smth instead like this so it looks more... "fit in" I suppose? idk but yea i hope u get wot im tryna say. That's literally like my only problem with this map is that it doesn't look tidy enough lol (I'M NOT SAYING TO REMAP IT THO SDKFNDSKSMF) =w=
00:53:521 (2,3,4) - here's another example.. It doesn't hve bad spacing but it just aesthetically looks kinda bad cuz u have these 2 1/2 sliders really really close together on one side and then a really nice slider art slider on the other side. One way to fix the look of this wud be to just put a circle at 00:53:521 and move the 2 sliders 1/2 to the right, moving them closer to the slider at the right, which could potentially look much better imo =w=
yea stuff like that happens throughout the map, idklol. It's fine to play and stuff but it just looks untdy u feel. ur insane is really nice tho ayee =w=
INS
03:00:788 (2,3) - high potential for sliders to be offscreen/unrankable on some resolutions idk. The third one can be covered like halfway by the hp bar on some resolutions tho thats 4 sure Alright
sik meme brvh Wat? lol

ok addadda

EDIT: that hard mod is so bad so bad ignore evrything i said about ur hard diff if u wanna Alright lol

Thanks mah boi VINXIS!

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-04-30T18:39:11+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
niceme.me i just cacme back from modding a pho map and the first thing i see is a pho normal n i c e ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/288974

general
lol sik hitsound memes
i wont mention hitsounds then (not like i do anyway)
Foe
D:

y are ur ncs so fuckin scary to mod nothx I'M sure they are fine.
01:26:502 (4,5) - would space them or at least add an nc to circle 5 so it's easier to read or smth They are far enough away in the timeline, shouldn't be that hard to read.
02:37:496 (5,1) - nazi blanket ddxDxdxDdxddxd Can't blanket :c
03:13:645 (2,3,1) - Id make the angle here more sharper so it fits with the curve of the slider u feel Not really, this flows pretty smooth already and i don't want it to be sharp here.
03:36:192 (3) - i think u kinda overdid the curve on it lol Uhh, made it flatter I guess.
HD
I just feel that the map could overall be better in terms of structure mostly because it doesn't look like the sliders and circles e.t.c don't work together. An example is like this slider at 00:17:931 (3) - looks like it was forced blanketing, and it doesn't look like it flows with the two sliders that u had before, for studd like that I'd recommend to just use like a 2 circle jump or smth instead like this so it looks more... "fit in" I suppose? idk but yea i hope u get wot im tryna say. That's literally like my only problem with this map is that it doesn't look tidy enough lol (I'M NOT SAYING TO REMAP IT THO SDKFNDSKSMF)
00:53:521 (2,3,4) - here's another example.. It doesn't hve bad spacing but it just aesthetically looks kinda bad cuz u have these 2 1/2 sliders really really close together on one side and then a really nice slider art slider on the other side. One way to fix the look of this wud be to just put a circle at 00:53:521 and move the 2 sliders 1/2 to the right, moving them closer to the slider at the right, which could potentially look much better imo
yea stuff like that happens throughout the map, idklol. It's fine to play and stuff but it just looks untdy u feel. ur insane is really nice tho ayee
INS
03:00:788 (2,3) - high potential for sliders to be offscreen/unrankable on some resolutions idk. The third one can be covered like halfway by the hp bar on some resolutions tho thats 4 sure
sik meme brvh

ok addadda

EDIT: that hard mod is so bad so bad ignore evrything i said about ur hard diff if u wanna

Aye, much thanks again for the mod vinxis lol

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Landscape.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64142
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:yaldo_27
Version:Pho's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shinya Saito ポリオミノ Polyomino Pho
BeatmapID:654312
BeatmapSetID:288852

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88566,98286
2,173535,178037
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
416,372.670807453416,4,2,1,30,1,0
8987,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
9360,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
10478,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
10850,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
11223,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
11596,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
11968,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
12341,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
13086,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
14391,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,25,0,0
14577,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
27248,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
27620,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
37683,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
38428,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
39546,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
51099,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
52589,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
53335,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
56875,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
57061,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
64515,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
76254,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
76440,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
88366,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
91347,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
99546,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
100291,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
137558,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
149297,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
149484,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
160664,-100,4,1,1,10,0,1
160757,-100,4,1,1,15,0,1
160850,-100,4,1,1,25,0,1
160943,-100,4,1,1,35,0,1
161037,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
161130,-100,4,1,1,45,0,1
161223,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
161316,-100,4,1,1,65,0,1
161409,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
171099,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
179297,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
179484,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
179670,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
179856,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
180043,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
180229,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
180415,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
181813,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
191223,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
191409,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
192714,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
193086,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
194204,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
202962,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
203148,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
218055,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
218242,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
218428,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
234453,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
235198,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
235943,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
236689,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
237434,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
238179,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
84,112,416,6,0,P|120:76|256:96,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
298,173,1347,2,0,L|370:181,2,60,0|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,211,1906,1,0,2:0:0:0:
70,315,2652,1,0,2:0:0:0:
100,100,3397,6,0,P|128:140|136:220,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
138,263,3956,1,2,2:0:0:0:
228,321,4329,2,0,L|224:401,2,60,0|2|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
270,287,4888,1,0,2:0:0:0:
319,191,5260,2,0,P|364:156|443:153,2,120,2|2|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
408,251,6378,6,0,L|444:50,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
333,56,7310,2,0,L|268:15,2,60,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,7869,1,2,2:0:0:0:
176,269,8614,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,9360,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,10850,5,0,2:0:0:0:
97,184,11223,1,2,2:0:0:0:
187,242,11596,2,0,P|248:257|316:241,1,120,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
394,188,12341,5,2,3:0:0:0:
397,79,12714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,47,13086,2,0,B|246:129|353:226|297:289|262:284|262:284|231:284|205:235|260:216,1,360.000013732911,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,219,14950,1,0,1:0:0:0:
165,324,15322,5,4,1:0:0:0:
263,372,15695,2,0,P|314:364|370:310,1,120,8|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
377,267,16254,2,0,L|384:196,2,60,2|10|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
463,201,16999,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,152,17186,2,0,P|396:124|320:152,2,120,10|2|8,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,18304,6,0,P|326:263|260:240,1,120,2|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,19049,2,0,L|194:106,2,60,0|2|10,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
143,187,19608,2,0,P|109:233|148:366,1,180,6|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
178,367,20353,2,0,B|237:356|237:356|296:371|296:371|370:354,1,180,6|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
417,270,21285,6,0,P|454:266|490:271,2,60,4|0|10,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
363,265,21844,1,2,1:0:0:0:
269,210,22217,2,0,P|260:172|267:133,2,60,2|8|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
349,138,22962,2,0,P|358:100|351:61,2,60,2|8|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
269,64,23707,2,0,L|125:71,1,120,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
95,77,24266,6,0,P|71:120|77:205,1,120,2|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
109,293,25012,2,0,L|124:355,2,60,0|6|12,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
151,259,25571,1,4,1:0:0:0:
353,333,26316,2,0,P|383:294|383:219,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,187,26875,2,0,L|280:187,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
427,116,27620,5,0,2:0:0:0:
402,67,27807,2,0,P|364:52|283:73,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
215,147,28552,2,0,P|170:175|70:103,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
73,62,29297,2,0,P|118:17|179:22,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
252,90,30043,1,0,2:0:0:0:
254,143,30229,6,0,B|250:159|260:181|260:181|256:226|256:226|266:250|263:268,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
289,308,30788,1,2,2:0:0:0:
336,333,30975,2,0,P|395:334|446:281,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
380,205,31720,1,2,2:0:0:0:
462,135,32093,1,0,2:0:0:0:
376,68,32465,2,0,L|371:1,2,60,2|0|2,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
287,130,33211,5,2,2:0:0:0:
192,77,33583,1,2,2:0:0:0:
138,70,33770,2,0,P|93:73|34:116,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
27,236,34515,2,0,P|36:280|161:357,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,354,35260,2,0,L|335:338,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
419,331,36006,1,0,2:0:0:0:
416,277,36192,6,0,P|408:220|429:141,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
446,111,36751,2,0,P|391:90|326:102,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,37496,1,0,2:0:0:0:
211,204,37683,2,0,P|156:209|185:72,1,240,2|8,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,78,38614,2,0,L|291:92,2,60,0|8|8,0:3|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
222,24,39173,5,4,1:0:0:0:
329,33,39546,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,79,39732,2,0,P|343:130|281:171,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,194,40478,2,0,P|172:251|194:319,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,338,41037,2,0,L|319:331,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,280,41596,2,0,P|348:243|281:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,174,42155,6,0,B|267:113|267:113|241:88|205:99,1,120,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
159,106,42714,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,136,42900,2,0,P|60:132|5:91,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,32,43645,2,0,L|225:41,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,44391,2,0,L|384:107,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,36,45136,6,0,L|457:164,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,207,45695,2,0,P|392:231|410:355,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,306,46627,2,0,L|163:308,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,312,47186,2,0,P|128:263|48:164,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,208,47931,6,0,L|25:277,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,99,48676,1,2,1:0:0:0:
109,40,49049,2,0,L|182:11,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,90,49608,5,2,0:0:0:0:
182,183,49981,1,10,1:0:0:0:
289,189,50353,2,0,P|315:234|401:267,1,120,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
476,230,51099,1,4,1:0:0:0:
404,149,51471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,136,52217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,320,52962,5,10,0:0:0:0:
293,158,53521,2,0,L|293:94,2,60,2|8|2,2:0|1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
291,212,54080,1,2,2:0:0:0:
189,250,54453,1,8,2:1:0:0:
34,98,55198,1,8,1:0:0:0:
127,44,55571,5,2,2:0:0:0:
213,112,55943,2,0,P|230:171|211:241,2,120,8|8|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,174,57061,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,237,57434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,328,57807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,268,58179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,346,58552,6,0,L|393:326,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,261,59297,2,0,L|325:241,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,169,60043,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,64,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,32,60788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
483,91,61161,2,0,L|512:148,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,61906,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,155,62279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,107,62652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,62,63024,2,0,L|68:204,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,223,63770,2,0,L|194:365,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,362,64515,6,0,P|357:362|411:325,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,277,65074,2,0,B|422:243|422:243|400:191|400:191|400:141,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,107,65633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,148,66006,2,0,P|253:148|186:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,72,66565,2,0,P|103:69|33:101,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,146,67124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
90,229,67496,6,0,L|82:315,2,60,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,214,68055,2,0,P|180:204|260:255,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,326,68801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,336,68987,2,0,P|407:328|454:258,1,120,10|10,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,173,69732,2,0,P|360:165|313:95,1,120,10|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,47,70478,6,0,L|232:173,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,220,71037,2,0,P|182:251|113:247,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,225,71596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
14,136,71968,2,0,P|70:119|138:137,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,154,72527,2,0,P|244:174|303:157,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,131,73086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,97,73459,6,0,L|433:225,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,251,74204,2,0,L|336:123,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,86,74763,2,0,P|253:67|183:84,1,120,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,102,75322,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,177,75695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,255,76068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,324,76440,6,0,P|90:347|179:353,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,340,76999,2,0,L|230:209,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,166,77558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,221,77931,2,0,P|345:172|321:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,76,78490,2,0,L|157:77,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,115,79049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,221,79422,6,0,P|190:246|224:318,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,353,79981,2,0,L|366:340,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,338,80540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
494,275,80912,2,0,P|488:224|444:164,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,164,81658,2,0,P|300:208|286:265,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,322,82403,6,0,P|155:329|74:282,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,246,82962,2,0,P|97:201|40:92,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,83894,2,0,L|277:50,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,40,84453,2,0,P|369:92|365:207,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,261,85384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,176,85757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,169,86130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,86502,2,0,L|28:369,2,120,8|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,88366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,99546,6,0,L|129:107,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,264,100291,5,2,0:0:0:0:
255,197,100664,2,0,L|332:201,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,302,101223,2,0,P|393:272|422:202,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,159,101782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,102155,2,0,L|267:94,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,102714,2,0,P|143:182|69:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,127,103273,6,0,L|50:266,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,300,103832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,335,104018,2,0,P|137:354|226:337,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,243,104763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,236,105136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
443,289,105509,2,0,L|449:364,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,190,106254,5,4,0:0:0:0:
410,113,106627,2,0,L|344:113,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,47,107186,2,0,P|206:43|144:86,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,118,107745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,185,108117,2,0,L|275:185,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,256,108676,2,0,P|338:299|277:343,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,332,109235,6,0,L|98:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,286,109794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
10,192,110167,2,0,P|58:177|126:197,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,200,110726,2,0,P|233:166|253:104,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,97,111471,1,8,3:0:0:0:
88,188,111844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,275,112217,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,276,112589,2,0,L|322:277,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,341,113148,2,0,P|437:300|442:206,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,181,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,114080,2,0,L|265:141,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,205,114639,2,0,P|107:176|43:186,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,217,115198,6,0,P|26:278|65:348,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,362,115757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,345,115943,2,0,P|197:332|273:347,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,313,116689,2,0,L|355:180,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,199,117434,2,0,L|261:58,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,31,118179,6,0,P|120:50|86:131,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,167,118738,2,0,B|100:224|100:224|145:274|145:274|162:347,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,295,119670,2,0,P|314:267|389:284,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,281,120229,2,0,B|453:196|453:196|454:151|407:97,1,180,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,71,120975,6,0,P|370:32|369:10,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,86,121534,2,0,L|249:100,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,166,122093,2,0,L|107:152,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,91,122652,2,0,P|92:56|160:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,101,123397,2,0,L|312:99,2,60,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,179,124142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,286,124515,2,0,P|217:308|305:307,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,275,125074,2,0,B|338:225|338:225|352:197|352:197|357:147,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,56,125819,2,0,L|323:59,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,106,126378,2,0,L|164:91,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,78,126751,1,10,0:0:0:0:
41,146,127124,6,0,P|25:205|44:283,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,318,127869,2,0,L|170:367,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,264,128428,2,0,P|181:217|247:207,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,128987,1,10,0:0:0:0:
370,277,129360,2,0,L|361:346,2,60,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,231,130105,6,0,B|466:190|466:190|440:159|440:159|427:112,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,37,130850,2,0,L|288:30,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,91,131409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,138,131596,2,0,P|248:140|192:115,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,70,132341,2,0,P|78:66|38:83,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,123,132900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,169,133086,6,0,L|92:315,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,348,133832,2,0,L|258:352,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,256,134577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,262,134950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,203,135322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,95,135695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,19,136068,6,0,L|249:33,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,137,136813,2,0,L|103:123,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,187,137558,6,0,P|13:241|44:316,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,337,138117,2,0,L|200:347,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,317,138676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,240,139049,2,0,P|377:214|443:231,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,251,139608,2,0,L|477:109,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,76,140167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,26,140540,6,0,B|342:30|342:30|302:57|302:57|247:63,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,56,141099,2,0,P|156:40|76:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,88,141658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,195,142030,2,0,L|76:324,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,142776,2,0,L|187:145,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,69,143521,6,0,P|305:75|352:141,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,177,144080,2,0,P|304:183|257:249,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,285,144639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,357,145012,2,0,P|142:356|73:297,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,254,145571,2,0,L|59:129,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,80,146130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,65,146502,6,0,P|219:86|292:64,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,46,147061,2,0,P|359:50|390:75,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,94,147434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,199,147807,2,0,P|445:263|417:330,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,342,148366,2,0,L|312:334,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,305,148738,1,10,0:0:0:0:
177,352,149111,1,10,0:0:0:0:
77,310,149484,6,0,P|62:263|66:185,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,153,150043,2,0,L|224:153,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,150602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,208,150975,2,0,P|382:226|459:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,178,151534,2,0,B|483:140|483:140|463:104|463:104|460:45,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,11,152093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,58,152465,6,0,L|251:64,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,69,153024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,146,153397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,254,153770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,298,153956,2,0,P|204:316|283:290,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,154701,2,0,P|285:190|206:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,220,155447,6,0,P|59:192|35:125,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,81,156006,2,0,L|187:69,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,64,156565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,57,156937,2,0,P|347:116|332:181,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,213,157496,2,0,B|226:244|184:180|120:220,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,316,158428,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,348,158801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,284,159173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,321,159546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,214,159919,2,0,L|453:94,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,52,161409,6,0,P|186:31|262:40,1,120,6|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,142,162155,2,0,L|255:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,338,162900,2,0,P|135:342|53:311,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,243,163645,2,0,P|181:239|263:270,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,324,164391,6,0,P|403:308|445:263,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,162,165136,2,0,L|458:95,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,177,165695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
310,121,166068,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,203,166440,1,2,3:0:0:0:
330,262,166813,2,0,P|277:304|212:307,1,120,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,307,167372,6,0,P|140:291|112:259,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,228,167745,2,0,L|106:154,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,84,168304,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,155,168676,2,0,P|301:175|387:155,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,169422,2,0,P|391:60|305:80,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,167,170167,6,0,B|373:226|373:226|394:268|394:268|396:347,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,351,171099,2,0,L|214:358,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,263,171844,2,0,L|85:276,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,179,172589,2,0,L|294:166,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,79,173335,1,12,0:0:0:0:
356,61,179297,6,0,B|337:118|337:118|361:180,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
453,226,180043,2,0,B|472:169|472:169|448:107,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
359,174,180788,2,0,L|239:176,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
180,267,181534,2,0,L|305:264,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
360,174,182279,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,83,182652,2,0,L|226:83,1,60,0|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
135,115,183211,1,2,1:0:0:0:
42,59,183583,2,0,P|27:119|54:189,1,120,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,223,184142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,255,184515,2,0,L|295:255,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,185,185260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,185633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,186006,2,0,L|258:357,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,272,186751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,317,187124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,216,187496,2,0,L|51:85,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,38,188242,5,2,0:0:0:0:
201,128,188614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
297,175,188987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,154,189360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,69,189732,2,0,P|381:50|304:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,152,190478,2,0,L|315:229,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,324,191223,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,74,192155,2,0,L|71:8,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,87,192714,6,0,L|210:81,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,257,193645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,230,194018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,194204,6,0,P|466:118|440:59,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,61,194763,2,0,P|328:89|267:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,52,195322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,88,195695,2,0,P|95:144|86:203,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,186,196440,2,0,P|228:242|237:301,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,361,197186,6,0,P|385:357|439:318,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,273,197745,2,0,B|440:227|440:227|423:198|423:198|416:144,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,104,198304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,55,198676,2,0,B|326:101|326:101|309:130|309:130|302:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,224,199235,2,0,P|267:258|183:257,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,241,199794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,168,200167,6,0,P|109:140|186:141,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,141,200912,2,0,P|340:129|389:66,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,44,201471,2,0,P|451:98|450:182,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,208,202030,2,0,P|442:246|425:269,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,309,202403,2,0,P|379:336|335:355,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,368,202776,2,0,P|257:377|231:371,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,357,203148,6,0,B|179:324|207:277|181:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,189,203707,2,0,P|119:176|32:217,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,251,204266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
162,280,204639,2,0,P|211:266|250:196,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,205198,2,0,P|213:104|138:97,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,105,205757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,201,206130,6,0,P|184:239|277:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,267,206689,2,0,L|428:267,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,225,207248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,117,207620,2,0,P|439:88|354:68,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,123,208366,2,0,P|224:161|166:173,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,226,209111,6,0,P|58:166|88:99,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,60,209670,2,0,B|165:24|214:80|270:32,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,120,210602,2,0,P|383:146|451:139,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,178,211161,2,0,B|523:270|450:291|498:368,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,342,212093,6,0,P|326:357|261:347,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,212838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,228,213211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,213583,2,0,L|184:18,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,26,214329,2,0,L|-11:35,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,132,215074,6,0,L|47:262,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,304,215633,2,0,P|112:344|188:344,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,216192,2,0,P|236:297|280:304,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,316,216565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,220,216937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,274,217310,2,0,L|501:333,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,165,218055,5,8,0:0:0:0:
369,99,218428,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,147,218801,2,0,L|244:216,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,95,219360,2,0,P|182:68|136:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,102,219919,1,10,0:0:0:0:
55,202,220291,2,0,L|65:332,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,359,221037,6,0,L|155:229,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,191,221782,2,0,L|258:265,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,137,222341,2,0,P|272:95|354:81,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,83,222900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,123,223086,2,0,B|427:183|427:183|466:231|466:231|472:305,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,341,224018,6,0,P|345:361|309:362,2,60,12|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,286,224577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,214,224950,2,0,P|269:218|231:253,2,60,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,179,225695,2,0,P|405:158|394:107,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,288,226440,2,0,P|393:306|442:323,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,230,226999,6,0,P|493:185|491:101,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,45,227745,2,0,L|344:11,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,96,228304,2,0,P|339:158|241:60,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,46,229422,2,0,L|52:31,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,98,229981,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,230167,12,0,238179,2:0:0:0:

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-04-30T20:46:24+00:00

M4M

[General]

1. Audio Lead-in : +84
2. Spinner Length : 03:50:167 (1) - This spinner is 8012 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms. it may get tiring to play. (all difficult)
[Pho]

01:20:540 (3) - move to x:388 y:300 it's following 01:18:490 (5,6)
unused inherit line (green)
```
91347,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
```
01:03:770 (5) - sound's better : http://puu.sh/hwgQa/2b36d1bc9e.jpg
02:16:813 (2) - same ^

[Hard]

00:59:111 (1,2) - spacing ? 00:59:111 (1) - x:220 y:280 . 00:59:484 (2) - x:376 y:248 -> http://puu.sh/hwj7I/ac4f1887f9.jpg
01:40:850 (2,3) - blanked
01:49:235 (1) - remove NC?
01:50:726 (3) - NC
02:21:099 (2) - x:192 y:320 better.
02:25:012 (2) - +20 degree ? -> http://puu.sh/hwjqe/86947910bd.jpg
02:27:434 (3) - x:304 , y:336 better.
00:01:720 (3) - x:172 , y:124 better.
00:04:515 (4) - same spacing with 00:03:583 (2,3) - soo move to x:160, y:240
00:19:422 (3) - x:60 , y:260 better.
00:30:975 (3) - x:436 , y:296 better.
01:08:801 (4) - x:216 , y:272 better.

[Insane]

01:22:776 - add not
00:07:310 (3) - change into 1/2 slider , then add not on 00:07:683 - sound's better and following the rhythm before and same with 00:03:956 (3,4,5)
-> http://puu.sh/hwF84/45c9a2f087.jpg
00:39:546 (1,2) - stack better.
03:30:415 (5) - x:176 , y:188 better.
03:33:304 (5) - remove , no beat there.

GoodLuck!

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2015-05-01T19:53:37+00:00

[General]
Data and settings and such seem to be correct. Great!

[Normal]
00:19:608 (3) - Would play better if moved a bit down-right - 152|204 for example.
00:58:552 (1) - I think it would flow better if the ending point was around 372|312.
02:27:061 (2,3) - Not really liking this beat placement here. It would work if (3) was replaced by a 1/2 slider, or moved 1/2 forwards.

Really liking this mapping style. No useless symmetry-based stuff, but still keeping the aesthetics well done and playability at its best.

[Hard]
Remove widescreen support.
01:06:565 (2) - Think you could make it point downwards and curve it a bit? http://i.imgur.com/5Xg2AGf.png
01:14:577 (4) - Would work better as two circles to have the finish clicked, too.
01:22:217 (4) - ^
01:24:453 (2,3,1) - Please keep the spacing constant here. It's inconsistent here for no real reason, and it looks bad.
01:42:714 (3,4,1) - Would play better if the path wasn't so straight.
01:48:117 (1,2) - A repeat slider stack is not a good idea. Move (2) elsewhere.
02:27:061 (2) - 396|364 for a neater placement visual-wise.
02:47:372 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please remake this section in a way that the distance snaps would make sense. It's annoying to try to read this kind of varying spacing at this approach rate.
02:53:148 (6) - Would work better as two circles to have the finish clicked, again.

Just small problems, quite nice otherwise.

[Insane]
AR could be 9 right away, you know. Unnecessary decimal usage here.
02:21:471 (4) - Ctrl+G.
03:00:788 (2) - Touches the HP bar, move away.
03:09:732 (1) - 228|256, would flow better.

Really nice, again.

Poke me via PM for a bubble after fixing these.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-05-02T05:44:55+00:00

Sky Trias

M4M

[General]

1. Audio Lead-in : +84 Whoops why?
2. Spinner Length : 03:50:167 (1) - This spinner is 8012 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms. it may get tiring to play. (all difficult) I don't think this is a problem
[Hard]

00:59:111 (1,2) - spacing ? 00:59:111 (1) - x:220 y:280 . 00:59:484 (2) - x:376 y:248 -> http://puu.sh/hwj7I/ac4f1887f9.jpg Alright
01:40:850 (2,3) - blanked-ted
01:49:235 (1) - remove NC? yup
01:50:726 (3) - NC ^
02:21:099 (2) - x:192 y:320 better. alright
02:25:012 (2) - +20 degree ? -> http://puu.sh/hwjqe/86947910bd.jpg move slightly
02:27:434 (3) - x:304 , y:336 better. ummm. no
00:01:720 (3) - x:172 , y:124 better. Nope ^^
00:04:515 (4) - same spacing with 00:03:583 (2,3) - soo move to x:160, y:240 ofc
00:19:422 (3) - x:60 , y:260 better.move slightly
00:30:975 (3) - x:436 , y:296 better. nouphe
01:08:801 (4) - x:216 , y:272 better. nouphe

[Insane]

01:22:776 - add not change into slider instead
00:07:310 (3) - change into 1/2 slider , then add not on 00:07:683 - sound's better and following the rhythm before and same with 00:03:956 (3,4,5)
-> http://puu.sh/hwF84/45c9a2f087.jpg nice one
00:39:546 (1,2) - stack better. yea
03:30:415 (5) - x:176 , y:188 better. kinda changed
03:33:304 (5) - remove , no beat there. ok

GoodLuck!

Thanks Trias ^^

SNB

[General]
Data and settings and such seem to be correct. Great!

[Hard]
Remove widescreen support. fixed
01:06:565 (2) - Think you could make it point downwards and curve it a bit? http://i.imgur.com/5Xg2AGf.png alright
01:14:577 (4) - Would work better as two circles to have the finish clicked, too. Agreed, changed
01:22:217 (4) - ^ Not for this one ^^
01:24:453 (2,3,1) - Please keep the spacing constant here. It's inconsistent here for no real reason, and it looks bad. Okay
01:42:714 (3,4,1) - Would play better if the path wasn't so straight. changed slightly
01:48:117 (1,2) - A repeat slider stack is not a good idea. Move (2) elsewhere. alright
02:27:061 (2) - 396|364 for a neater placement visual-wise. fixed
02:47:372 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please remake this section in a way that the distance snaps would make sense. It's annoying to try to read this kind of varying spacing at this approach rate. lol I always think that this gonna be a problem. changed =w=
02:53:148 (6) - Would work better as two circles to have the finish clicked, again. fixed again

Just small problems, quite nice otherwise.

[Insane]
AR could be 9 right away, you know. Unnecessary decimal usage here. idk why, but I like 8.8 better

02:21:471 (4) - Ctrl+G. After many mods, I finally applied this
03:00:788 (2) - Touches the HP bar, move away. oops
03:09:732 (1) - 228|256, would flow better. okay

Really nice, again. Thanks!

Poke me via PM for a bubble after fixing these.
Alright! After Pho finished applied those mods
Thanks for mod SNB!

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-05-02T13:06:10+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
M4M

[General]
Audio Lead-in : +84
Spinner Length : 03:50:167 (1) - This spinner is 8012 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms. it may get tiring to play. (all difficult) Sounds like you're using AiBAT. It's still fine, no need to change the spinner.
[Pho]
01:20:540 (3) - move to x:388 y:300 it's following 01:18:490 (5,6) Can't really see a reason to change it, still plays fine.
unused inherit line (green)
91347,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
01:03:770 (5) - sound's better : http://puu.sh/hwgQa/2b36d1bc9e.jpg That'd cause too much tempo for this diff, sorry no change.
02:16:813 (2) - same ^ ^
GoodLuck!

Static Noise Bird wrote:
[General]
Data and settings and such seem to be correct. Great!

[Normal]
00:19:608 (3) - Would play better if moved a bit down-right - 152|204 for example.
00:58:552 (1) - I think it would flow better if the ending point was around 372|312.
02:27:061 (2,3) - Not really liking this beat placement here. It would work if (3) was replaced by a 1/2 slider, or moved 1/2 forwards. Fixed the rhythm pattern, should be much better now.

Really liking this mapping style. No useless symmetry-based stuff, but still keeping the aesthetics well done and playability at its best. Thanks :3

Poke me via PM for a bubble after fixing these.

Thanks for the mods guys

No comment = fixed!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Landscape.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64142
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:yaldo_27
Version:Pho's Normal
Source:
Tags:Shinya Saito ポリオミノ Polyomino Pho
BeatmapID:654312
BeatmapSetID:288852

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88566,98286
2,173535,178037
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
416,372.670807453416,4,2,1,30,1,0
8987,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
9360,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
10478,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
10850,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
11223,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
11596,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
11968,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
12341,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
13086,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
14391,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,25,0,0
14577,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
27248,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
27620,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
37683,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
38428,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
39546,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
51099,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
52589,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
53335,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
56875,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
57061,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
64515,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
76254,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
76440,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
88366,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
99546,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
100291,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
137558,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
149297,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
149484,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
160664,-100,4,1,1,10,0,1
160757,-100,4,1,1,15,0,1
160850,-100,4,1,1,25,0,1
160943,-100,4,1,1,35,0,1
161037,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
161130,-100,4,1,1,45,0,1
161223,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
161316,-100,4,1,1,65,0,1
161409,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
171099,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
179297,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
179484,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
179670,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
179856,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
180043,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
180229,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
180415,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
181813,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
191223,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
191409,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
192714,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
193086,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
194204,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
202962,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
203148,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
218055,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
218242,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
218428,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
234453,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
235198,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
235943,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
236689,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
237434,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0
238179,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

[HitObjects]
84,112,416,6,0,P|120:76|256:96,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
298,173,1347,2,0,L|370:181,2,60,0|0|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,211,1906,1,0,2:0:0:0:
70,315,2652,1,0,2:0:0:0:
100,100,3397,6,0,P|128:140|136:220,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
138,263,3956,1,2,2:0:0:0:
228,321,4329,2,0,L|224:401,2,60,0|2|0,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
270,287,4888,1,0,2:0:0:0:
319,191,5260,2,0,P|364:156|443:153,2,120,2|2|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
408,251,6378,6,0,L|444:50,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
333,56,7310,2,0,L|268:15,2,60,2|0|0,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,7869,1,2,2:0:0:0:
176,269,8614,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,9360,1,2,2:0:0:0:
76,79,10850,5,0,2:0:0:0:
97,184,11223,1,2,2:0:0:0:
187,242,11596,2,0,P|248:257|316:241,1,120,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
394,188,12341,5,2,3:0:0:0:
397,79,12714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,47,13086,2,0,B|246:129|353:226|297:289|262:284|262:284|231:284|205:235|260:216,1,360.000013732911,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,219,14950,1,0,1:0:0:0:
165,324,15322,5,4,1:0:0:0:
263,372,15695,2,0,P|314:364|370:310,1,120,8|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
377,267,16254,2,0,L|384:196,2,60,2|10|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
463,201,16999,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,152,17186,2,0,P|396:124|320:152,2,120,10|2|8,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,18304,6,0,P|326:263|260:240,1,120,2|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,19049,2,0,L|194:106,2,60,0|2|10,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,19608,2,0,P|114:246|153:379,1,180,6|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,372,20353,2,0,B|243:361|243:361|302:376|302:376|376:359,1,180,6|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
417,270,21285,6,0,P|454:266|490:271,2,60,4|0|10,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
363,265,21844,1,2,1:0:0:0:
269,210,22217,2,0,P|260:172|267:133,2,60,2|8|2,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
349,138,22962,2,0,P|358:100|351:61,2,60,2|8|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
269,64,23707,2,0,L|125:71,1,120,2|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
95,77,24266,6,0,P|71:120|77:205,1,120,2|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
109,293,25012,2,0,L|124:355,2,60,0|6|12,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
151,259,25571,1,4,1:0:0:0:
353,333,26316,2,0,P|383:294|383:219,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,187,26875,2,0,L|280:187,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
427,116,27620,5,0,2:0:0:0:
402,67,27807,2,0,P|364:52|283:73,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
215,147,28552,2,0,P|170:175|70:103,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
73,62,29297,2,0,P|118:17|179:22,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
252,90,30043,1,0,2:0:0:0:
254,143,30229,6,0,B|250:159|260:181|260:181|256:226|256:226|266:250|263:268,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
289,308,30788,1,2,2:0:0:0:
336,333,30975,2,0,P|395:334|446:281,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
380,205,31720,1,2,2:0:0:0:
462,135,32093,1,0,2:0:0:0:
376,68,32465,2,0,L|371:1,2,60,2|0|2,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
287,130,33211,5,2,2:0:0:0:
192,77,33583,1,2,2:0:0:0:
138,70,33770,2,0,P|93:73|34:116,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
27,236,34515,2,0,P|36:280|161:357,1,180,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,354,35260,2,0,L|335:338,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
419,331,36006,1,0,2:0:0:0:
416,277,36192,6,0,P|408:220|429:141,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
446,111,36751,2,0,P|391:90|326:102,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,37496,1,0,2:0:0:0:
211,204,37683,2,0,P|156:209|185:72,1,240,2|8,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,78,38614,2,0,L|291:92,2,60,0|8|8,0:3|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
222,24,39173,5,4,1:0:0:0:
329,33,39546,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,79,39732,2,0,P|343:130|281:171,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,194,40478,2,0,P|172:251|194:319,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,338,41037,2,0,L|319:331,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,280,41596,2,0,P|348:243|281:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,174,42155,6,0,B|267:113|267:113|241:88|205:99,1,120,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
159,106,42714,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,136,42900,2,0,P|60:132|5:91,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,32,43645,2,0,L|225:41,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,44391,2,0,L|384:107,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,36,45136,6,0,L|457:164,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,207,45695,2,0,P|392:231|410:355,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,306,46627,2,0,L|163:308,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,312,47186,2,0,P|128:263|48:164,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,208,47931,6,0,L|25:277,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,99,48676,1,2,1:0:0:0:
109,40,49049,2,0,L|182:11,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,90,49608,5,2,0:0:0:0:
182,183,49981,1,10,1:0:0:0:
289,189,50353,2,0,P|315:234|401:267,1,120,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
476,230,51099,1,4,1:0:0:0:
404,149,51471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,136,52217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,320,52962,5,10,0:0:0:0:
293,158,53521,2,0,L|293:94,2,60,2|8|2,2:0|1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
291,212,54080,1,2,2:0:0:0:
189,250,54453,1,8,2:1:0:0:
34,98,55198,1,8,1:0:0:0:
127,44,55571,5,2,2:0:0:0:
213,112,55943,2,0,P|230:171|211:241,2,120,8|8|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,174,57061,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,237,57434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,328,57807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,268,58179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,346,58552,6,0,L|392:336,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,59297,2,0,L|312:236,1,120
256,156,60043,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,52,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,32,60788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
483,91,61161,2,0,L|512:148,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,61906,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,155,62279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,107,62652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,62,63024,2,0,L|68:204,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,223,63770,2,0,L|194:365,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,362,64515,6,0,P|357:362|411:325,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,277,65074,2,0,B|422:243|422:243|400:191|400:191|400:141,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,107,65633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,148,66006,2,0,P|253:148|186:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,72,66565,2,0,P|103:69|33:101,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,146,67124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
90,229,67496,6,0,L|82:315,2,60,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,214,68055,2,0,P|180:204|260:255,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,326,68801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,336,68987,2,0,P|407:328|454:258,1,120,10|10,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,173,69732,2,0,P|360:165|313:95,1,120,10|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,47,70478,6,0,L|232:173,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,220,71037,2,0,P|182:251|113:247,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,225,71596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
14,136,71968,2,0,P|70:119|138:137,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,154,72527,2,0,P|244:174|303:157,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,131,73086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,97,73459,6,0,L|433:225,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,251,74204,2,0,L|336:123,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,86,74763,2,0,P|253:67|183:84,1,120,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,102,75322,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,177,75695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,255,76068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,324,76440,6,0,P|90:347|179:353,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,340,76999,2,0,L|230:209,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,166,77558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,221,77931,2,0,P|345:172|321:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,76,78490,2,0,L|157:77,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,115,79049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,221,79422,6,0,P|190:246|224:318,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,353,79981,2,0,L|366:340,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,338,80540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
494,275,80912,2,0,P|488:224|444:164,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,164,81658,2,0,P|300:208|286:265,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,322,82403,6,0,P|155:329|74:282,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,246,82962,2,0,P|97:201|40:92,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,83894,2,0,L|277:50,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,40,84453,2,0,P|369:92|365:207,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,261,85384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,176,85757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,169,86130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,86502,2,0,L|28:369,2,120,8|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,249,88366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,99546,6,0,L|129:107,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,264,100291,5,2,0:0:0:0:
255,197,100664,2,0,L|332:201,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,302,101223,2,0,P|393:272|422:202,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,159,101782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,102155,2,0,L|267:94,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,102714,2,0,P|143:182|69:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,127,103273,6,0,L|50:266,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,300,103832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,335,104018,2,0,P|137:354|226:337,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,243,104763,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,236,105136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
443,289,105509,2,0,L|449:364,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,190,106254,5,4,0:0:0:0:
410,113,106627,2,0,L|344:113,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,47,107186,2,0,P|206:43|144:86,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,118,107745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,185,108117,2,0,L|275:185,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,256,108676,2,0,P|338:299|277:343,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,332,109235,6,0,L|98:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,286,109794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
10,192,110167,2,0,P|58:177|126:197,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,200,110726,2,0,P|233:166|253:104,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,97,111471,1,8,3:0:0:0:
88,188,111844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,275,112217,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,276,112589,2,0,L|322:277,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,341,113148,2,0,P|437:300|442:206,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,181,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,141,114080,2,0,L|265:141,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,205,114639,2,0,P|107:176|43:186,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,217,115198,6,0,P|26:278|65:348,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,362,115757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,345,115943,2,0,P|197:332|273:347,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,313,116689,2,0,L|355:180,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,199,117434,2,0,L|261:58,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,31,118179,6,0,P|120:50|86:131,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,167,118738,2,0,B|100:224|100:224|145:274|145:274|162:347,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,295,119670,2,0,P|314:267|389:284,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,281,120229,2,0,B|453:196|453:196|454:151|407:97,1,180,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,71,120975,6,0,P|370:32|369:10,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,86,121534,2,0,L|249:100,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,166,122093,2,0,L|107:152,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,91,122652,2,0,P|92:56|160:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,101,123397,2,0,L|312:99,2,60,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,179,124142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,286,124515,2,0,P|217:308|305:307,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,275,125074,2,0,B|338:225|338:225|352:197|352:197|357:147,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,56,125819,2,0,L|323:59,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,106,126378,2,0,L|164:91,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,78,126751,1,10,0:0:0:0:
41,146,127124,6,0,P|25:205|44:283,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,318,127869,2,0,L|170:367,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,264,128428,2,0,P|181:217|247:207,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,128987,1,10,0:0:0:0:
370,277,129360,2,0,L|361:346,2,60,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,231,130105,6,0,B|466:190|466:190|440:159|440:159|427:112,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,37,130850,2,0,L|288:30,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,91,131409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,138,131596,2,0,P|248:140|192:115,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,70,132341,2,0,P|78:66|38:83,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,123,132900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,169,133086,6,0,L|92:315,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,348,133832,2,0,L|258:352,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,256,134577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,262,134950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,203,135322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,95,135695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,19,136068,6,0,L|249:33,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,137,136813,2,0,L|103:123,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,187,137558,6,0,P|13:241|44:316,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,337,138117,2,0,L|200:347,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,317,138676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,240,139049,2,0,P|377:214|443:231,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,251,139608,2,0,L|477:109,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,76,140167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,26,140540,6,0,B|342:30|342:30|302:57|302:57|247:63,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,56,141099,2,0,P|156:40|76:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,88,141658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,195,142030,2,0,L|76:324,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,142776,2,0,L|187:145,1,120,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,69,143521,6,0,P|305:75|352:141,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,177,144080,2,0,P|304:183|257:249,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,285,144639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,357,145012,2,0,P|142:356|73:297,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,254,145571,2,0,L|59:129,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,80,146130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,65,146502,6,0,P|219:86|292:64,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,56,147248,2,0,P|413:73|440:108,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,199,147807,2,0,P|445:263|417:330,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,342,148366,2,0,L|312:334,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,305,148738,1,10,0:0:0:0:
177,352,149111,1,10,0:0:0:0:
77,310,149484,6,0,P|62:263|66:185,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,153,150043,2,0,L|224:153,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,150602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,208,150975,2,0,P|382:226|459:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,178,151534,2,0,B|483:140|483:140|463:104|463:104|460:45,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,11,152093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,58,152465,6,0,L|251:64,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,69,153024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,146,153397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,254,153770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,298,153956,2,0,P|204:316|283:290,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,154701,2,0,P|285:190|206:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,220,155447,6,0,P|59:192|35:125,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,81,156006,2,0,L|187:69,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,64,156565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,57,156937,2,0,P|347:116|332:181,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,213,157496,2,0,B|226:244|184:180|120:220,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,316,158428,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,348,158801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,284,159173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,321,159546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,214,159919,2,0,L|453:94,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,52,161409,6,0,P|186:31|262:40,1,120,6|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,142,162155,2,0,L|255:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,338,162900,2,0,P|135:342|53:311,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,243,163645,2,0,P|181:239|263:270,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,324,164391,6,0,P|403:308|445:263,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,162,165136,2,0,L|458:95,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,177,165695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
310,121,166068,1,2,3:0:0:0:
240,203,166440,1,2,3:0:0:0:
330,262,166813,2,0,P|277:304|212:307,1,120,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,307,167372,6,0,P|140:291|112:259,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,228,167745,2,0,L|106:154,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,84,168304,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,155,168676,2,0,P|301:175|387:155,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,169422,2,0,P|391:60|305:80,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,167,170167,6,0,B|373:226|373:226|394:268|394:268|396:347,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,351,171099,2,0,L|214:358,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,263,171844,2,0,L|85:276,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,179,172589,2,0,L|294:166,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,79,173335,1,12,0:0:0:0:
356,61,179297,6,0,B|337:118|337:118|361:180,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
453,226,180043,2,0,B|472:169|472:169|448:107,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
359,174,180788,2,0,L|239:176,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
180,267,181534,2,0,L|305:264,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
360,174,182279,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,83,182652,2,0,L|226:83,1,60,0|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
135,115,183211,1,2,1:0:0:0:
42,59,183583,2,0,P|27:119|54:189,1,120,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,223,184142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,255,184515,2,0,L|295:255,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,185,185260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,185633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,186006,2,0,L|258:357,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,272,186751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,317,187124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,216,187496,2,0,L|51:85,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,38,188242,5,2,0:0:0:0:
201,128,188614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
297,175,188987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,154,189360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,69,189732,2,0,P|381:50|304:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,152,190478,2,0,L|315:229,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,324,191223,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,74,192155,2,0,L|71:8,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,87,192714,6,0,L|210:81,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,257,193645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,230,194018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,180,194204,6,0,P|466:118|440:59,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,61,194763,2,0,P|328:89|267:68,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,52,195322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
130,88,195695,2,0,P|95:144|86:203,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,186,196440,2,0,P|228:242|237:301,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,361,197186,6,0,P|385:357|439:318,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,273,197745,2,0,B|440:227|440:227|423:198|423:198|416:144,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,104,198304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,55,198676,2,0,B|326:101|326:101|309:130|309:130|302:184,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,224,199235,2,0,P|267:258|183:257,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,241,199794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,168,200167,6,0,P|109:140|186:141,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,141,200912,2,0,P|340:129|389:66,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,44,201471,2,0,P|451:98|450:182,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,208,202030,2,0,P|442:246|425:269,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,309,202403,2,0,P|379:336|335:355,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,368,202776,2,0,P|257:377|231:371,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,357,203148,6,0,B|179:324|207:277|181:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,189,203707,2,0,P|119:176|32:217,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,251,204266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
162,280,204639,2,0,P|211:266|250:196,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,205198,2,0,P|213:104|138:97,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,105,205757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,201,206130,6,0,P|184:239|277:262,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,267,206689,2,0,L|428:267,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,225,207248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,117,207620,2,0,P|439:88|354:68,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,123,208366,2,0,P|224:161|166:173,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,226,209111,6,0,P|58:166|88:99,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,60,209670,2,0,B|165:24|214:80|270:32,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,120,210602,2,0,P|383:146|451:139,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,178,211161,2,0,B|523:270|450:291|498:368,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,342,212093,6,0,P|326:357|261:347,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,212838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,228,213211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,213583,2,0,L|184:18,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,26,214329,2,0,L|-11:35,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,132,215074,6,0,L|47:262,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,304,215633,2,0,P|112:344|188:344,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,216192,2,0,P|236:297|280:304,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,316,216565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,220,216937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,274,217310,2,0,L|501:333,2,60,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,165,218055,5,8,0:0:0:0:
369,99,218428,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,147,218801,2,0,L|244:216,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,95,219360,2,0,P|182:68|136:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,102,219919,1,10,0:0:0:0:
55,202,220291,2,0,L|65:332,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,359,221037,6,0,L|155:229,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,191,221782,2,0,L|258:265,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,137,222341,2,0,P|272:95|354:81,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,83,222900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,123,223086,2,0,B|427:183|427:183|466:231|466:231|472:305,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,341,224018,6,0,P|345:361|309:362,2,60,12|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,286,224577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,214,224950,2,0,P|269:218|231:253,2,60,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,179,225695,2,0,P|405:158|394:107,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,288,226440,2,0,P|393:306|442:323,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,230,226999,6,0,P|493:185|491:101,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,45,227745,2,0,L|344:11,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,96,228304,2,0,P|339:158|241:60,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,46,229422,2,0,L|52:31,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,98,229981,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,230167,12,0,238179,2:0:0:0:

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2015-05-02T19:58:00+00:00

Fixed one additional NC problem and now it's fine by me.

blub blub

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-05-03T16:13:51+00:00

Intentional self-pop

Made improvement on this map, especially on Insane diff...
Change patten and rhythm choice on this following
00:18:304 (1,2,3,1) -
00:35:633 (3,4,5) -
00:40:664 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
00:48:676 (3,4,5,6,1) -
01:05:447 (4,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:14:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
02:12:155 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:17:931 (2,3) -
03:06:937 (1,2,3,4) -

Apologize SNB~ ._.

EDIT : Mod Again~~~

yanaginagi - landscape

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

yanaginagi - landscape

Fort wrote:

yaldo_27 wrote:

JBHyperion wrote:

yaldo_27 wrote:

Fort wrote:

JBHyperion wrote:

Pho's Normal

Hard

Insane

bigfeh wrote:

Pho's Normal

Hard

Insane

Krauv wrote:

yaldo_27 wrote:

yaldo_27 wrote:

AIBat wrote:

AIBat wrote:

Hard

Insane

fuyuyu- wrote:

AIBat wrote:

AIBat wrote:

guineaQ wrote:

Hard

Insane

bigfeh wrote:

Pho's Normal

Krauv wrote:

Pho's Normal

Hard

Insane

Winek wrote:

Pho's Normal

Hard

Insane

Insane

Feedback

Winek wrote:

Pho's Normal

-Tochi wrote:

Insane

Feedback

Mako Sakata wrote:

Mako Sakata wrote:

Insane

Yuii- wrote:

Insane

Knotts wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

Sky Trias wrote:

Static Noise Bird wrote:

New reply