Hey M4M
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Insane :
00:30:964 (5) - I like the way you have it but maybe CTRL + G the slider and do this ?
http://puu.sh/gOpTn/30fc4d8a52.jpg00:42:601 (4) - Blanket this note with this slider? 00:41:692 (1) -
00:41:692 (1) - Un select grid snap because the tail isnt properly stacked with 00:42:783 (5) -
00:57:692 (1,3) - Lower these two just a bit? I just don't like linear flow that much xD
http://puu.sh/gOqmh/0b926270f5.jpg01:09:692 (2,2) - Stack these two properly?
01:10:601 (4,4) - Same thing ^ (Super Nazi i'm so sorry :k )
01:21:328 (2,3) - Move 3 closer to the previous slider?
http://puu.sh/gOqvs/0ea4de6947.jpg01:28:055 (3) - x:452 y:280 ?
01:28:964 (2,3,4) - Into a triangle shape ? I just don't like linear flow :l Maybe ?
http://puu.sh/gOqAe/710528ada7.jpg01:35:328 (5,6,1) - Move this down a bit ?
http://puu.sh/gOqCN/d2144be68a.jpg01:39:874 (1) - CTRL + G ?
01:39:874 (1) - I would do something like this instead :
http://puu.sh/gOqFW/3c871760e7.jpg02:00:601 (2,3,5) - Spread these out ? Seems like a bit tight here
http://puu.sh/gOqJY/65c9d56652.jpg ( This looks nice 02:39:510 (1,2,3,4) - )
02:20:964 (2,3,4) - Increase distance just a bit here ?
02:26:237 - Add a note here ? Placement :
http://puu.sh/gOqQ9/38afae3ace.jpg / After you can blanket it with this slider ! 02:27:510 (2) -
02:31:328 (2,1,2,3) - Since earlier you stacked it , why not do the same here
? 01:24:419 (2,1,2,3) -
02:34:419 (3) - A stream instead of this slider?
02:42:237 (5) - Whistle ?
02:45:146 (6,7) - ^
02:59:874 (1,2,3) - Suggestion :
http://puu.sh/gOr3I/31053cfdaa.jpg03:04:237 (1) - Spinner here instead?
03:47:146 - Steam here maybe ?
Its fine with what you have right now though.
03:58:783 (3,4,5,6) - Spread it out just a tiny bit ?
http://puu.sh/gOrak/f67f257ba1.jpgHard :
00:48:237 (3,4) - Something like this ?http://puu.sh/gOrhE/f30471eb50.jpg
00:52:601 (4,5,6) - I would make it go from bottom to top flow :
http://puu.sh/gOrk7/05774e6a5e.jpg01:07:874 (1) - CTRL + G because I think the vocal is going from lower to higher voice , so it makes sense (to me atleast) for the note to end at the top quadrants.
01:27:874 (2,3) - More distance between these two ?
01:28:601 (1,2) - This looks nice to me :
http://puu.sh/gOrs6/170e62d3c9.jpg02:34:783 (2,3) - More distance here ?
02:39:510 (1,2,3,4) - Back and forth pattern ? It fits for the vocals !
02:42:419 (1) - Should have more distance here !
02:54:055 (1) - ^
03:20:055 (1) - More distance to emphasize the beat ? Maybe :
http://puu.sh/gOrEd/57108e3608.jpg03:28:237 (3,4) - Fix this stack !!
Normal :
00:28:601 (1,3) - Make one of these with the same shape ?
00:36:237 - Add a note or make this 00:35:874 (1) - into a slider
00:36:964 (4) - Change this? It ended on a white tick =w=
00:50:783 - Note here?
01:12:237 (3) - Move this to the right side a bit :
http://puu.sh/gOrTv/c6d534cdfe.jpg01:13:328 (4,1) - Try to blanket? I know it might ruin the distance though ;w; Or make it that it doesn't look like the slider's blanketing it ( new shape for it )
02:03:146 (1) - Whistle ?
02:27:510 (2,4) - Take grid snap off and re stack these ! ( Super Nazi )
02:52:601 (1) - Whistle ?
02:54:055 (2) - ^
03:55:146 (3) - ^
03:56:601 (4) - ^
Love your maps <3 ! + star !