frost-b-spec wrote:

thx request

1st mod and...

[All]
check spacing(Especially, [Normal]) Yeah,done

[kiai]
00:53:067 - 1:31:197 I think it's too long to accept,the kiai time is fine now.
02:20:543 - 02:57:553 I consider kiai time are not always the same part,make some differents are better.
03:55:590 - end

[Normal]
02:31:478(1,1,1,1,1) - too hard... Done.
02:41:571(1,2) - Coming in succession is undesirable. Well,it dosen't matter I think.
02:52:786(1) - start 02:52:646,end 02:54:188 Done.
03:30:917(3,4) - not x2 slider(too hard) Done.

The star is passed when improving!
fight!!

Thank you very much!

LKs wrote:

\LK mod/
一上手就感觉很好，键位很舒适

normal
我喜欢你这种严谨的做图风格，但是有些地方的间距还是要注意的
[00:21:65] 向左一个格 Done
[00:34:00] 新颜色 Done
[00:35:12] 这种的间距问题就比较大，虽然美观但这样的话不易于玩
解决方法1，在2加上新颜色。2，更改间距 Done
[00:36:22] 新颜色，但这个不强求 Done
[00:37:36] 同[00:35:12] Done
[00:42:41] 新颜色 Done
[00:43:81] 2，3，4 ，5，6间距拉大一点 Done
[00:55:29] 这个部分，虽然间距有些不对但是没问题，主要是做到圆圈和slider的结束位置要完全重合
[01:23:34] 这个6，7，8 要么改变颜色，要么调整，有些BAT不愿意在NORMAL里面出现JUMP的所以最好改一下 Done
[01:25:45] 这个spinner，你可以考虑向我这样 Done[attachment=0:67000].PNG[/attachment:67000]
[01:59:23] 距离不对了 Done
[02:01:47] 新颜色 Done
[02:09:32] 间距调一下，不用非注重在原点上 ，另外马上之后的一部分的间距有点奇怪。。Done
[02:14:93] 向上一格 Done
[02:45:21] 向左或者下一格 Done
[02:47:17] 间距过紧了，可以考虑加大slider的斜率来获取间距 Done
[02:57:55] 其实我认为到这里就可以结束了，你之后的歌唱部分做的不错，但是太靠后了，中间的很多间奏实在让人提不起精神，我建议你以这里为结尾
这个我觉得2:57太短了,我觉得一首歌都有它的独特之处,而后面的这一段就是与前面不同的独特之处,我以为一首歌在第2个重复之前的衔接部分是一首歌的好坏的关键之一,也是精华所在,而之后才是高潮部分.衔接的这一段更多是用来欣赏的,以我的做法不会设计得很复杂而干扰了放松下来欣赏的状态.而我也会努力设计得各个部分有所不同,有所特色而防止审美疲劳.
以上为个人愚见.
这个难度，只要注意了我说的间距，或者还有一些我没提到的，就很完美了，gogo

hard
这个。。hard做的很精彩，但是间距的问题也比较大，这个我有点难以下手。。
我建议你细细的在edit里面过一遍，看到有不合适的就改一下，怎么说呢，为了美观是没错，但是有些的美观会导致你的图被unrank，所以你应该寻找一种既有间距又美观的键位
同样的，结尾处应该短一点，实在有点长了 你要说过一遍的话,我何止过了一遍,那是N遍了,不过当然还有疏漏的地方,我会仔细看看的,多谢了

如果有什么新的进展，PM我吧，我也会隔几天来看看这个帖子
再改一改，我会给你kudosu star
其实我现在就想给你的，但是我认为还能更完美，这有潜力成为高评价的rank歌曲

STAR FOR YOU!

1. 背景图片1600x1200的分辨率绝对大了,降到1024x768或者800x600就行
2. osb文件没有用到,请删除在full submit
3. source里已经有IDOLM@STER XENOGLOSSIA ED. tag里就不用加IDOLM@STER 和 XENOGLOSSIA
4. 最低的rarely stack现在是unrankable的,至少请移到左边第二格
   
5. 第一个note开始得比较快,所以设置countdown毫无意义(不会显示出来),所以请去掉countdown
   

1. 对于[Normal]来说感觉难了点,我个人并不喜欢太小的note,特别是我最喜欢的normal,不过这不是什么问题,看你自己的想法了:/
2. 00:12:132, 00:12:693, 00:13:253, 00:13:814 - timing section, 这4个timing section 都应该设置得提前点
   记住一点: 凡是有音量变化或者BPm改变的timing section, 都应该设置在开始这个变化的note之前一点而不是刚好在那个note上. 因为玩的时候点早了的话会导致不一样的音量/BPM
3. 00:35:123 (1) - spacing有点问题, normal里最好不要出现非常规的spacing
4. 00:37:366 (1) - ^
5. 01:23:347 (1,2) - 这个spacing在normal里也太夸张了lol, 这个一定要改改
6. 03:36:665 - 说实话,从这里开始的空白音效听起来虽然不错,但是玩起来就不知道自己是不是miss了,我建议别用空白音效,用小声点的音效就好了
7. 04:05:683 (1,1,1,1,1) - normal的jump...好吧,现在都喜欢这么用么,我没什么好抱怨的:/

1. 01:19:702 (3) - new combo, 因为jump
2. 02:10:450 (1) - 明明和前面一样的节拍间距但是却是2倍spacing,这个稍微有点让人无法理解,玩的时候瞬间反应不过来:/
3. 02:58:534 (1) - 距离前面spinner结束只有1/4拍,我不知道现在这种是不是rankable的 :/
4. 03:36:665 - 跟normal一样的sound建议

kino77 wrote:

很不错的图~对节奏的把握很到位~


[Normal]
00:04:281 (4) - 与3在一条线上? Done
00:14:936 (2) - new combo? 这个我觉得没关系~
00:20:543 (1,2,3) - 间距? 这里的间距没问题~
00:24:468 (1) - 这个new combo移到2处? Done
00:28:954 (7,8) - 间距? Done
00:33:440 (4,5,6) - ^5 new combo? 这个~我没找到~>.<
00:36:244 (8,9) - ^尽量不要把note放在slider上? 这里我已按照LKs的建议修改~
00:40:730 (3,4) - 间距与1,2保持一致? 1与2之间是0.5拍的间隔,2与3之间是1拍,这个间距一样不就有问题了么~>A<
00:45:216 (7) - 取消new combo? Done
00:55:029 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 不建议这么摆放,很难被读懂,可以改成01:11:852 (1)的样子? 这里是我的创意之处,如果前后一样,未免没有特点了吧,同一段旋律,用不同的Note形式来表示不是更好么,我认为作为Normal难度,不费吹灰之力,没有一点机关一样的地方,太简单了点吧.虽然是Normal难度,我认为也要搞点小花招来调剂调剂或者让他Retry,否则那真是平淡无奇了.改简单是件很容易的事情. ^_^
01:05:403 (5,6,7) - 间距与3,4保持一致? Done
01:23:347 (6) - 掉转slider? Done
01:42:973 (1) - 取消new combo? Done
01:49:702 (3) - 与2在一条线上? 这里主要是因为间距的问题,因为后面的间距是正常的,所以这里也要和它一样比较好吧.
01:54:749 (1,2,3,4) - 间距不对,建议用slider替换 Done
02:01:478 (7) - new combo? 这里是New combo.
02:08:207 (4) - ^与前句保持一致? Done
02:12:693 (1) - 取消new combo? Done
02:14:655 (3) - new combo? 这个没关系,我前面改动了
02:21:665 (1)~02:29:515 (5) - 个人不是很喜欢频繁的new combo,且希望这里所有的间距保持一致 Done
02:32:599 (1) - 向左一格? Done
02:31:478 (1,1,1,1,1) - 保持第一个,取消其余的new combo? 这里我是希望搞出个多彩的效果.
02:33:721 (1,1) - 取消new combo? Done
02:41:852 (2) - Unrankable slider 这个不是Unrankable slider吧,不能重叠是指Slider自己不能重叠自己,因为这种Slider我以前在很多Ranked map中见过.
02:52:646 (1) - 往后移到红线处开始? 这个是那个日本朋友建议提前1/4拍,这样感觉更好
04:05:683 (1,1,1,1,1) - 保持第一个,取消其余的new combo? 这里也是多彩效果.

[Rhythm]
00:22:786 (7) - new combo? 这个我觉得不合适
00:24:468 (1) - 这个new combo移到2处? Done
00:35:403 (1,1,1) - 保持第一个,取消其余的new combo? 多彩效果
00:37:786 (1,1,1) - ^
00:43:814 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ 这里除了多彩效果以外,还有一个迷惑作用
00:54:188 (5) - new combo? 我想这个没关系
00:55:029 (1) - 同Normal? 相同的创意
00:59:515 (4) - 往上一些? 往上移一点就不是正常的间距了
01:19:702 (3) - 这个跳的夸张了点,建议把slider掉转一下 这个方向是对的呀,如果调转不是出问题了~
01:42:973 (1) - 取消new combo? Done
02:11:291 (2) - 完全被1挡住了,不建议这么放... Done,我把它往下挪了一点
02:41:852 (2) - Unrankable slider 应该可以
02:58:534 (1) - 这部分4个note一个new combo? 我也是想这里颜色绚丽一点
04:05:683 (1,1,1,1,1) - 保持第一个,取消其余的new combo? 嗯~也是这样


Star~

LKs wrote:

aha~

normal

[00:12:69] 打开timing，把这条绿线声音减小1格（这里的音量就变成第5格了） Done
[00:13:25] 这里也减小一格（这里的音量就变成第7格了） Done
[00:13:81] 这里也减小一格（这里的音量就变成第9格了），然后你可以在后面再加一条线把声音调回最大 Done
[00:14:93](2,3) finish音效？ 这里我觉得不适合添加Finish
[02:52:64] 这个spinner开始在[02:53:06]如何？ 我感觉提前点转的更舒服

rhythm

[00:39:60] slider结尾地方和圆圈3有一点不齐了，对齐它 Done
[00:49:70] finish音效 Done
[00:59:79] 这个不好看 啊哈,这里我是为了搞点不寻常用了这种的
[01:19:70] new combo Done

这图简直越看越好，你要勤劳一点多找人让map快点rank了啊
kudosu star!

Breeze wrote:

看前面的mod对你评价都很高,应该是很不错的map : )
timing 我就不看了,因为我也对那个不擅长

[General]

1. 背景图片1600x1200的分辨率绝对大了,降到1024x768或者800x600就行 Done
2. osb文件没有用到,请删除在full submit Done
3. source里已经有IDOLM@STER XENOGLOSSIA ED. tag里就不用加IDOLM@STER 和 XENOGLOSSIA Done
4. 最低的rarely stack现在是unrankable的,至少请移到左边第二格 Done
   [attachment=1:fbc92]00.jpg[/attachment:fbc92]
5. 第一个note开始得比较快,所以设置countdown毫无意义(不会显示出来),所以请去掉countdown Done
   [attachment=0:fbc92]02.jpg[/attachment:fbc92]

[Normal]

1. 对于[Normal]来说感觉难了点,我个人并不喜欢太小的note,特别是我最喜欢的normal,不过这不是什么问题,看你自己的想法了:/
2. 00:12:132, 00:12:693, 00:13:253, 00:13:814 - timing section, 这4个timing section 都应该设置得提前点
   记住一点: 凡是有音量变化或者BPm改变的timing section, 都应该设置在开始这个变化的note之前一点而不是刚好在那个note上. 因为玩的时候点早了的话会导致不一样的音量/BPM 好建议!Done
3. 00:35:123 (1) - spacing有点问题, normal里最好不要出现非常规的spacing Done
4. 00:37:366 (1) - ^ Done
5. 01:23:347 (1,2) - 这个spacing在normal里也太夸张了lol, 这个一定要改改 Done
6. 03:36:665 - 说实话,从这里开始的空白音效听起来虽然不错,但是玩起来就不知道自己是不是miss了,我建议别用空白音效,用小声点的音效就好了 这里我觉得,如果用小音量的,也听不见什么,反而有Sliderside的呼呼声,所以我就这样设计了
7. 04:05:683 (1,1,1,1,1) - normal的jump...好吧,现在都喜欢这么用么,我没什么好抱怨的:/

>A<

[Rhythm]

1. 01:19:702 (3) - new combo, 因为jump Done
2. 02:10:450 (1) - 明明和前面一样的节拍间距但是却是2倍spacing,这个稍微有点让人无法理解,玩的时候瞬间反应不过来:/ 这里本来是在上面一点的,但是有人说被前面一个Slider完全遮住了,不太好,于是我就拿下来了点,让它们起点重合了
3. 02:58:534 (1) - 距离前面spinner结束只有1/4拍,我不知道现在这种是不是rankable的 :/ 这里我也有点担心,我需要更多人的建议
4. 03:36:665 - 跟normal一样的sound建议

不错的map
star

ignorethis wrote:

just suggestions

<Normal>
Circle size +1 Done
01:30:076 (1) - silence this at the end Done
02:20:543 (1,1) - these normal hitsounds sound bad Done
03:15:216 (5) - remove finish Done
03:36:805 (1) - don't completely silence this part, it's hard to hear the notes and will reduce acc Done
03:53:347 (6) - remove finish Done

<Hard>
01:30:076 (1) - same with normal Done
02:20:543 (1,1) - same Done
03:13:253 (3) - this silence doesn't fit Done
03:36:805 (1) - same Done

great map for mapping freshman. star'd, PM me when you need a pubble.

tsukamaete wrote:

beautiful ~^^

but it still has some trouble in this map

general:

there are lots of needless newcombo , pls don't set the too many newcombo just for trick
so I don't wanna check all about it

Rhythm:
it's a soft song , so u'd better to set the OA -1
00:14:235 (1,2,3,1,2) - really hard to read :p in fact , it not need 1/8 beat imo
just put the streams enough or make a slider like this

SPOILER

00:55:310 (2) - hidden slider sorry u have to move it to other space

03:26:151 (2) - ^

02:11:291 (2) - ^

02:01:057 - put a note on it imo

02:41:852 (2) - ╮(╯▽╰)╭ I don't think any bat can pass it

normal :

02:41:852 (2) - hidden slider and it's hard to read for the newbie
others fine for me

at the last
if i have time , I'll back with the hitsounds suggestion

anyway , keep on going ^^

Thank you for these good advices,and I set some new combo just want to make it more colorful.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Use offset 2,599 for start with the song.

[Difficulties]

[Standard]

00:11:571 (5) - New combo.
00:12:132 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:42:412 (1) - ^
00:55:029 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I find this patterns a bit too hard for the most easier difficulty, change the spacing please.
02:11:291 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:30:356 (1,2) - Like 00:55:029.
02:31:478 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove all of this new combos.
02:39:328 (1,2) - Spacing.
02:41:571 (1,2) - ^ and hard to read.
02:52:646 (1) - Never start spinners on blue ticks if not necessary.
04:05:683 (1,1,1,1,1) - Spacing too high and new combo spam, remove all of them.

[Rhythm]

There are some new combo spam, remove them here too.

00:45:216 (1) - Unrankable slider.
00:59:796 (5) - ^
02:39:328 (1,2,1,2) - Spacing and hard to read.
03:24:468 (1) - You need a 2x BPM warning.
03:26:151 (2) - Hidden slider.

Not bad for a first map, but I think you need more help about combo use, and about some spacings, etc.

orioncomet wrote:

[Standard]
-1 HP Drain Rate? Done
- BG Colour: Black? (like [Rhythm]) Done
00:54:188 (3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hard to read for 'Standard', fix spacing, plz I change the arrangement
02:21:664 - start kiai time here ~ ? Done,that's good idea
02:21:665 (1) - sound finish at begin of silder Done
03:50:963 - remove kiai time here and 03:55:870 - start kiai time here Done,good

[Rhythm]
- Silder Velocity abit solw ~ but alright Well,I'll take care of it next time
00:27:272 (4) - end this silder on white tick (00:27:832) I really don't think this is good,it's not match the vocal
02:21:664 - start kiai time here ~ ? Done
02:21:665 (1) - sound finish at begin of silder Done
03:24:327 - this part need some warning like "x2" or something like that Done
03:50:683 - remove kiai time here and 03:55:870 - start kiai time here Done

Starrr ~

Lissette wrote:

the gray combo color is awkward >.< Changed

Rhythm
00:04:141 - add note Done,great suggestion
00:06:384 - ^ Done
00:08:627 - ^ Done
00:10:870 - ^ Done
00:22:786 (7) - wrong spacing, if is a jump, put new comboto make it easy to read Done
00:30:637 (4) - wrong spacing Done
01:52:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - its ok but i didn't like it >.< Well,I think it's fine
02:37:085 (8) - stack under prev 4 to keep consistent distance Done
02:46:338 (1,2,3) - fix spacing of 3 to make it symmetrical Done,=.= just 2 or 3 pixel
02:58:533 - the kiai time in this section dont fit, imo I think it's great
02:58:534 (1) - this note is too close to the spinner end Yeah,it's a small obsession,but if make the spinner shorter,it well be more difficult to finish.Do you have some great idea?
03:07:366 (1) - separate a bit from prev combo Done

Standard
lower HP drain o.O Done
00:14:936 (3) - new combo Done
00:53:067 (1,2,3) - space evenly Done
04:07:085 (7,8,9) - same, remember this is easiest diff, spacing should be consistent cuz can be confufing for beginners Done

Star

VanMoNky wrote:

This is a good map. There are some things which I must pointed out.
1. The song of the map is around 4 minutes. But why the breaks are just around total of 20 seconds? Is it rankable?
2. The "star.png" file is unecessary. Remove it.
3. I recommend you to decrease the overall difficulty of [Rhythm] diff 1 level.
4. The "sliderfollowcircle.png" file is too large. Please reduce it, for me.

lcclarke wrote:

Lissette wrote:

02:58:534 (1) - this note is too close to the spinner end Yeah,it's a small obsession,but if make the spinner shorter,it well be more difficult to finish.Do you have some great idea?

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Standard]

Stack leniency is too low. Increase it, please.

02:37:366 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - This pattern is too hidden. Change it, please.

[Rhythm]

Stack leniency is too low. Increase it, please.

I suggest to use overall 7 and not 8. Follow more this song.

00:45:216 (7) - Weird slider. Change it.
00:59:796 (5) - ^
02:39:328 (1,2,1,2) - Same as normal. Pattern too hidden.

Much better now.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Finally seems good.

Bubbled~

yaya wrote:

sorry for pop this
[Rhythm]
02:34:001 (1) - I can't see this as a slider

delete "ED" on source.

anyway .good job.

Mafiamaster wrote:

You'll need a "cursortrail.png" in your folder before this is considered rankable. Fixed