Gelbana wrote:

Wrong "te" (手）... It still reads the same, right? ;_;
But that's all I could find.

No Dap wrote:

if you wanna fix the lyrics feel free to request dq

but if you do, do it fast before more people lose their score.

Also make sure your lyrics are actually wrong before you do it cuz I don't speak Japanese I don't know

permission

1. 00:31:160 (3,4) - This flow change is a bit extreme and leads to sort of an awkward play. 3 flows left and up with the repeat while 4 comes back down the same way. I recommend orienting 00:31:719 (4) - in a way that leads to a more easier angle of approach
2. 00:48:769 (3,4) - The stacked pattern underneath of 00:48:489 (2) - really kills the momentum coming back down, maybe orient this in a way so that the flow continues to 00:49:048 (5) - . I am aware you have a pattern based off of this, but its something to keep in mind
3. 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) - The angle 4 and 5 take moving downward is a bit awkward and jerky to play. Perhaps try something like this so the flow continues from the previous pattern
   
   example

   
4. 02:02:651 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really enjoyed how this pattern plays and looks, nice work here!
5. 02:37:868 (2,3,4,5) - Same issue as 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) -
6. 02:48:303 (1,2,1,2,1) - Pretty creative usage of stop and gos in the music, I enjoyed this!

Lust wrote:

Disqualification for the wrong lyrics in the storyboard (by request).

permission

Here is just some additional modding you can take under consideration, these are opinions of my own and not that of the QAT
[Insane]

1. 00:31:160 (3,4) - This flow change is a bit extreme and leads to sort of an awkward play. 3 flows left and up with the repeat while 4 comes back down the same way. I recommend orienting 00:31:719 (4) - in a way that leads to a more easier angle of approach Moved 3 closer. I wanted to provide a snap in flow to show the change in chord, but yeah it was a little far(was originally much closer lol but the mods came gg)
2. 00:48:769 (3,4) - The stacked pattern underneath of 00:48:489 (2) - really kills the momentum coming back down, maybe orient this in a way so that the flow continues to 00:49:048 (5) - . I am aware you have a pattern based off of this, but its something to keep in mind Was actually looking for someone to pick up on this lol. I will try changing it a little to keep the momentum going a little bit more
3. 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) - The angle 4 and 5 take moving downward is a bit awkward and jerky to play. Perhaps try something like this so the flow continues from the previous pattern That section was purposely desinged to be zigzagy/jerky ~ just felt right to do with the song
   
   example

   
4. 02:02:651 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really enjoyed how this pattern plays and looks, nice work here! Thanks! Was definitely fun mapping that part
5. 02:37:868 (2,3,4,5) - Same issue as 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) -
6. 02:48:303 (1,2,1,2,1) - Pretty creative usage of stop and gos in the music, I enjoyed this! I love stacking the same pitch percussion melodies in the same spot in my maps

Rest of the diffs look good.

The BNG will handle this mapset from now on. Good luck with requalification!

Spectator wrote:

awesome

Spectator wrote:

awesome

Kocari wrote:

what's with this change of profile pictures by everyone?!

No Dap wrote:

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flac wrote:

Greate storyboard, but um...you applied Chinese font on Japanese script.
You can try real Japanese font next time. Such as Morisawa series.

Gelbana wrote:

Screw you Photoshop default font...
I might handwrite it instead, less hassle and legibility. Perfect. ;_;

But thanks flac for that info