- Veritica - wrote:

Hi , random mod~

Column = 1/2/3/4

NM

00:02:196 (2196|3,2384|3,2759|3,3040|3) - Move 1 column to left I think move to 3 will be better
00:06:321 (6321|2) - Move to 2 Changed
00:08:196 (8196|2,8384|2,8759|2,9040|2) - Move 1 column to right Changed
00:09:321 (9321|3,9415|2,9509|1,9884|1,10259|1,10540|1,10821|1) - Move 1 column to left Changed
00:11:384 (11384|1) - Move to 3 Changed
01:20:196 (80196|3,80384|3,80759|3,81040|3) - Move 1 column to left I think move to 3 will be better
01:24:321 (84321|2) - Move to 2 Changed
01:26:196 (86196|2,86384|2,86759|2,87040|2) - Move 1 column to right Changed
01:29:196 (89196|1,89384|1) - ^ Changed

HD

00:02:196 (2196|3,2384|3,2759|3,3040|3) - Move 1 column to left Changed
00:08:196 (8196|1,8384|1,8759|1,9040|1) - Move 1 column to right Changed
00:09:509 (9509|3,9884|3) - Move 1 column to left Not change it.Because it not smoothly
00:10:259 (10259|3) - Delete No.There are Sound and Finish
00:10:540 (10540|3) - Move to 3 Not change it.Because it not smoothly
00:11:196 (11196|1,11384|1) - Move 1 column to right Changed
00:11:759 (11759|0,11759|2,12040|0,12040|2,12321|0,12321|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2353396 Changed
00:19:634 (19634|3) - Move to 2 Changed
00:20:009 (20009|1) - Move to 4 ^
00:25:634 (25634|3) - Move to 2 ^
00:26:009 (26009|0) - Move to 4 ^
00:27:134 (27134|1,27134|0,27321|3,27509|1,27884|2,27884|3,28071|1,28259|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2353403 Changed
00:31:634 (31634|3) - Move to 2 Changed
00:32:009 (32009|0) - Move to 4 ^
00:35:009 (35009|0) - ^ ^
00:37:634 (37634|3) - Move to 2 ^
00:38:009 (38009|1) - Move to 4 ^
00:55:071 (55071|1) - Move to 1
00:55:071 (55071|1,55071|3) - Move 1 column to left ^
00:56:009 (56009|0) - Move to 4 Not change it.
00:59:009 (59009|0,59384|3,60134|3) - Ctrl + H Not change it.
01:02:009 (62009|0) - ^ Not change it.
01:24:509 (84509|3,84884|3,85259|3,85540|3,85821|3) - Move 1 column to left Not change it.
01:29:196 (89196|0,89196|2,89384|0,89384|2,89759|3,89759|1,90040|1,90040|3,90321|3,90321|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2353425 Changed
01:30:509 (90509|1) - Move to 1 Changed

Good Luck ~

ruberusu wrote:

hi ~

from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod

[NM]
00:23:009 (23009|0) - delete Deleted
00:23:196 (23196|2) - start to 00:23:009 - Fixed
00:35:009 (35009|0) - delete Deleted
00:35:196 (35196|3) - start to 00:35:009 - Fixed

01:12:509 - to 01:14:384 - I think it will be difficult to play for beginners. Changed /Delete each section of the two note.

01:30:509 (90509|3,90509|1) - end to 01:36:884 - Fixed


[HD]
00:30:040 - add 2 Added

01:30:509 (90509|0,90509|3) - end to 01:36:884 - Fixed


[MX]
HD8 Fixed
00:11:009 - to 00:11:759 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2353668 Fixed

00:19:259 - add Added
00:20:009 - ^ Added
00:20:759 - ^ Added

00:42:509 (42509|2) - move to 1 Changed
00:42:462 - add 3 Added

01:30:509 (90509|3,90509|1) - end to 01:36:884 - Fixed

good luck >w< /

Ryouta- wrote:

From queque~
Sorry i'm late :'(

Mod

Collumn : |1|2|3|4|

NM
00:01:540 (1540|3) - move to 2 and 00:01:634 add note Not changed.I hear this.I think it will difficult for the beginners.
00:03:134 - add note ^
00:04:634 - ^ ^
00:26:009 (26009|0) - move to 4 Not changed
00:28:071 (28071|2,28259|3) - Ctrl + G Fixed
00:37:071 (37071|2,37259|3) - ^ Fixed
01:12:884 - add note Added

HD
00:06:509 (6509|1,6509|2,6509|3) - why different with 00:06:509 (6509|1,6509|2,6509|3) - ? Two the same times.I dont know where is it. This way have finish.So i added a note.
00:53:009 - add note Added
00:53:759 - ^ ^
00:59:759 - ^ ^

Sorry just it. Nice pattern

-LASU- wrote:

Hi-MeowPaz (^ω^)

|1|2|3|4|

mod

NM
00:02:009 - add note Added
00:05:009 - ^ ^
00:05:759 - ^ ^
00:06:509 - ^ ^
00:10:259 - ^ ^
00:11:009 - ^ ^
00:47:009 (47009|1) - LN end 00:48:134 - (because HD,MX diff LN end 00:48:134 -) Fixed
00:52:259 (52259|3) - LN end 00:54:134 - Fixed
00:59:009 (59009|1) - LN end 01:00:134 - Fixed These places I'm rigidly where is the end of this sound.><
01:13:727 (73727|0) - move to 01:13:634 - Changed
01:13:821 - add note Added
01:13:915 (73915|3) - move to 01:14:009 - Changed
01:14:102 (74102|1) - move to 01:14:196 - ^

HD
00:18:134 - add note 2 (because NM 00:18:134 - add note) Just added one note.This way had note.It's just hidden in 1 LN inside.My mistake.
01:05:759 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2381884 Fixed
01:12:884 - add note 1 Not add.
01:14:384 - add note 4 Added
01:15:509 - ^ ^
01:18:509 - ^ ^

MX
00:10:259 - add note 3 Added
00:54:134 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2381896 Changed. wow!!
01:00:134 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2381904 Changed. Nice
01:05:759 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2381909 Changed

good luck

SanadaYukimura wrote:

wa，先马
For rank 的话要要有Hitsound哦 明白了(●>◡<●)
对了，那个 Widescreen最好也勾上吧~ 已勾上
[NM]
00:46:259 (46259|0) - 应该结束在00:46:821 - 已改
00:48:509 (48509|0) - 应该结束在00:48:884 - （参考这根LN 00:42:509 (42509|0) - ），如果fix了的话就把后面同样的地方也改了，不一一列举了
00:49:259 (49259|0) - 应该结束在00:49:821 - 同上 同上
00:48:134 - add 没加
00:54:134 - add 已加
[HD]
00:29:384 - 加一个在2，鼓点重音 已加
00:35:384 - 加一个在4，↑ ^
00:39:134 - 为何突然用triple呢？ 已修复，可能当时把音和重音混在一起了。
然后就是LN了，参考NM的Mod 已修复
01:14:009 - 加一个在3，01:12:509 (72509|2,72509|0) - 这里用了double，所以同样音最好也加成double 已加
[MX]
00:18:790 (18790|0,19540|1,20290|2,21040|2,21790|0,22540|3) - 这些蓝线上的Note，我开25%才听出的是钢琴音，这种不太明显的音最好不抓（建议
已删除
然后，00:18:696 - 00:19:446 - 00:19:821 - 00:20:196 - 00:21:696 - 00:22:446 - 00:22:821 - 漏音，这么明显镲的音你不抓... 已加
上面两条mod同理后面的几段小节
LN和NM的mod一样 已修复

[-END-]
好歌好谱，希望mod能起到帮助
祝你好运

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

Remove tags:
Touhou Jun.A (It's on the metadata already not necessary to be included here)Fixed> <

|1|2|3|4|

NM

00:12:509 (12509|3) - End it here 00:18:509 (End of pitch) Changed
00:43:259 (43259|0) - End it here 00:43:821 ^ Before the mod has been fixed. > <
00:46:259 (46259|0) - End it here 00:46:821 ^ ^
00:48:509 (48509|0) - End it here 00:48:884 ^ ^
00:49:259 (49259|0) - End it here 00:49:821 ^ ^
00:52:259 (52259|3) - End it here 00:54:040 ^ ^
00:54:134 Add note to |2| (Pattern | Drumbeat | Impact) Added
00:55:259 (55259|0) - End it here 00:55:821 (End of pitch) Fixed
00:58:259 (58259|0) - End it here 00:58:821 ^ ^
01:01:259 (61259|3) - End it here 01:01:821 ^ ^
01:30:509 (90509|3,90509|1) - End it here 01:36:134 (End of pitch) Fixed

HD

00:08:009 Add note to |1| - |2| - |3| (Drumbeat - Cymbal - Piano | Impact | Pattern) Added
00:39:134 (39134|3) - Remove not necessary (Pattern) Changed
00:43:259 (43259|0,43259|2) - End it here 00:43:821 (End of pitch) Before the mod has been fixed. > <
00:46:259 (46259|2,46259|0) - End it here 00:46:821 ^ ^
00:49:259 (49259|2,49259|0) - End it here 00:49:821 ^ ^
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - End it here 00:55:821 ^ ^
00:58:259 (58259|3,58259|1) - End it here 00:58:821 ^ ^
01:01:259 (61259|3,61259|1) - End it here 01:01:821 ^ ^
01:30:509 (90509|3,90509|0) - End it here 01:36:134 (End of pitch) Fixed

MX

00:43:259 (43259|2,43259|0) - End it here 00:43:821 (End of pitch) Before the mod has been fixed. > <
00:46:259 (46259|2,46259|0) - End it here 00:46:821 ^ ^
00:49:259 (49259|2,49259|0) - End it here 00:49:821 ^ ^
00:55:259 (55259|1,55259|3) - End it here 00:55:821 ^ ^
00:58:259 (58259|1,58259|3) - End it here 00:58:821 ^ ^
01:01:259 (61259|3,61259|1) - End it here 01:01:821 ^ ^
01:08:384 (68384|2) - Move to |4| (Pattern) Changed
01:30:509 (90509|3,90509|0) - End it here 01:36:134 (End of pitch) Fixed

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b

SanadaYukimura wrote:

噗，我好像搞错了...Widescreen的话，没有SB貌似是不用勾上的，我的锅;w;
No kudosu

biemote wrote:

这么一股浓厚的myo2风味....额...

SorenNoKitsune wrote:

Hi there, quick question. Where abouts did you find this remix, if it's even a remix x.x Can't find it anywhere qq

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, I'll be modding your mania and my column format will be 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

NM

SPOILER

00:39:134 (39134|2) - move to 4, pitch Fix
00:39:509 (39509|3) - move to 3, pitch ^
00:44:946 (44946|3,45134|2,45321|1) - the rhyme doesn't just descending there, i reccomend 00:45:134 (45134|2,45321|1) - press Ctrl + H Fix
00:51:134 (51134|1) - move to 4, pitch fix
00:51:321 (51321|2) - move to 1 ^
00:51:509 (51509|3) - move to 3
00:52:259 (52259|3) - move to 3, aligning the long notes Fix
00:54:134 (54134|1) - move to 4
00:57:134 (57134|2,57321|1) - Ctrl + H fix

HD

SPOILER

00:54:134 (54134|2) - add 1 more note to emphasize loudness Added
00:54:509 (54509|3,54509|1) - Ctrl + H Fix
00:55:071 (55071|0,55071|2) - Ctrl + H ^
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - Ctrl + H ^
00:56:009 (56009|2,56009|0) - Ctrl + H ^
01:00:134 (60134|1) - add 1 more note Added
you might want to fix same issue as above, starting from 00:58:071 (58071|0) - to 01:02:009 (62009|0) - (LN Placement)fix

MX

SPOILER

01:11:946 (71946|2) - move to 4 changed
01:12:040 (72040|1) - move to 3 ^
01:12:134 (72134|3,72134|2) - move to 1 and 2 respectively ^
01:12:227 (72227|1) - move to 4 ^

Good luck with your map C:
edit: what a bad time to download, this maybe unupdated one im modding.. coconut milkshake otl

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
Mod as requested

I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

4K = |1|2|3|4|

Everything modded

[NM]
OD -1
• 00:08:009 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added
• 00:09:509 - ^ This way add a note will be difficult to play for beginners.So LN represents two sound.
• 00:18:509 - ^
• 00:30:509 - ^
• 00:36:509 - ^
• 00:42:509 - ^
• 00:54:509 - ^
• 01:00:134 - ^
• 01:00:509 - ^
• 01:03:509 - ^
• 01:04:259 - ^
• 01:12:509 - ^ Added
• 01:14:009 - ^ ^
• 01:15:509 - ^ ^
• 01:16:259 - ^ ^
• 01:16:634 - ^
• 01:17:009 - ^ ^
• 01:18:509 - ^
• 01:24:509 - ^
• 01:30:509 (90509|1) - Move to 1, for spread note on ending part

[HD]
• 00:02:009 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Before has been added.
• 00:05:009 - ^ ^
• 00:11:009 - ^ ^
• 00:18:509 - ^ Added
• 00:27:134 (27134|2) - Move to 1, for spread note Changed
• 00:30:509 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:36:509 - ^
• 00:40:634 - Add a note, for the snare Added
• 00:41:384 - ^
• 00:54:134 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Before the mod has been added.
• 00:54:509 - ^ Added
• 01:00:134 - ^
• 01:00:509 - ^ Added
• 01:03:509 - ^ Added
• 01:17:384 - ^

[MX]
• 00:02:009 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Before has been added.
• 00:05:009 - ^
• 00:09:509 - ^
• 00:30:134 - ^
• 00:30:509 - ^
• 00:36:509 - ^
• 01:03:509 - ^
• 01:04:259 - ^
• 01:12:509 - ^ Added
• 01:30:509 - ^ or two notes, for the cymbal sound and ending part

Good luck~!

Starry- wrote:

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing: ☒

1. Offset -> 509

Changed
Audio: ☑
BG: ☑
Metadata: ☑
Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑

[]

I suggest to make NM OD7 HP7, then make HD OD7.5HP7.5 , this is common trend with most maps nowadays Accept

[]

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| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |		(4K)

[NM]

00:00:509 (509|3) - Make LN to be consistent with rest Changed

00:20:946 (20946|2) - Better to move to 3, works better with pitch and balance Changed

00:22:071 (22071|1) - Move to 3 Changed
00:22:259 (22259|3) - Move to 1, better pitch Changed

00:24:509 (24509|1) - Move to 0, to spread things out Changed
00:25:071 (25071|2) - Move to 3 Changed
00:25:259 (25259|3) - Move to 1, pitch Changed

00:26:946 (26946|2) - Move to 1 ^
00:27:321 (27321|2) - Move to 0 ^
00:27:509 (27509|0) - Move to 2, pitch ^

00:28:259 (28259|2) - Move to 0 for balance ^

00:33:134 (33134|2) - Move to 0 ^
00:33:321 (33321|1) - Move to 2, better playability and pitch. ^

00:36:509 (36509|1) - Move to 0, better to spread out (finish) ^

00:37:071 (37071|3) - Move to 2 ^
00:37:259 (37259|2) - Move to 1 ^
So you can move
00:38:009 (38009|0) - Move to 3, ^
better pitch

01:02:946 (62946|2) - Move to 0 ^
01:03:134 (63134|1) - Move to 2 ^
01:03:321 (63321|2) - Move to 1, better playability and pitch. ^

01:08:009 (68009|2) - Move to 3 ^
01:08:196 (68196|1) - Move to 2, better spread / balance ^

01:09:321 (69321|1,69509|2) - CTRL+H for balance (you used 3210 pattern already) Changed

[HD]

00:00:509 (509|3,509|1) - Again make this LN Changed

00:11:009 (11009|2) - Add to 0? Since you use finishes when there is more than 1 note No

00:20:384 (20384|1) - Move to 0, spread out and playability Changed

00:21:509 (21509|1) - Move to 0, so you can Changed
00:21:884 (21884|3) - Move to 1 Changed
00:22:071 (22071|1) - Move to 3 Changed
00:22:259 (22259|3) - Move to 0, for better pitch Changed

00:22:634 (22634|2) - Move to 3 so it's less repetitive Changed
00:23:009 (23009|3) - Move to 2 because of that, for more balance Changed

00:25:634 (25634|2,25634|1) - Move to 0-1, more balanced Changed

00:31:634 (31634|1) - Move to 0, less repetitive ^

00:36:509 (36509|2) - Works better if move to 3 ^

00:39:321 (39321|2) - Move to 0 ^
00:39:509 (39509|1) - Move to 2, pitch ^

01:08:665 (68665|2) - Move to 0, more balance ^

01:26:196 (86196|1,86384|1,86759|1,87040|1) - These are higher pitched, so move to col2 to make it different from first I remake it this way.

[]

Actually a nice map :3 and song too
goodluck <3

REDYUMiKA wrote:

From Sta☆R's HQ Modding Team

• Overview : Our team gives you a double check to make chart's metadata more accurate.

• [list:1337]Timing : ☑
  
  Audio : ☒
  
  

1. wav files : ☒ & mp3 file : ☑
2. soft-hitwhistle.wav has an ineffectual space over 1 second, please replace soft-hitwhistle.wav with this.

Fixed

Metadata : ☒

1. Title : "少女綺想曲 - Dream Battle" ---> "少女綺想曲 ~ Dream Battle" Changed
2. Romanised Title : "Shojo Kiso Kyoku - Dream Battle" ---> "Shoujo Kisou Kyoku ~ Dream Battle" Changed
   References : (e.g.1) by sound sepher
   
   
3. Preferable to add a tag of "妖々剣戟夢想 or (Youyou Kengeki Musou)" & "sound sepher" into your tag's space. Added
4. "东方永夜抄" has been expressed by simplified Chinese. It's recommended to fix this letter to "東方永夜抄"

Fixed

《DOUBLED》

Wonderful chart, here's my star.

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

tag add
' eiyashou ' (romanised : 東方永夜抄)
' Youyou Kengeki Musou ' (romanised : 妖々剣戟夢想)

no kud

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

Hi! Here is requested modding from forum!

I will try to modify your HD,MX as your request.

Let me check about general things at first..

Metadata : OK
BG Size : OK ( but i might suggest to delete 'FANTASY HEAVEN' ponts if you didn't intend. it's not related to topic of song )
^I will change another BG or add some font here.
MP3 : OK ( but i highly suggest to delete album / title unicodes in mp3 detail setting.
it became.. blabla in korean os http://puu.sh/eU6LN/134827ba3d.png ) Ok,album / title is gone :3
TAG / Source : OK ( yumika is quite op about this kind of things )
Timing : http://puu.sh/eU6SP/c02f66df99.png exactly fine.
Offest : OK
AiMod : Check NM difficulty, it has different preview time with other difficultys. Fixed
Difficulty Spread : fine, but remember that don't over 1.5 star gaps. it's unacceptable for ranked rule. Thank you for reminding><


second, i saw your mx difficulty has different drain time with other difficultys. ( idk what happened to this mapset )

so. i suggest to add notes on 2,3 01:36:134 - in here Hmm...I think it's fix now.;w;


third, i just highly recommend to change hitsounds which are more fit to song.. how about take from other touhou ranked map?

and did you use all of hitsounds in folder file? you must not have unused hitsound file for ranked. remind it.

in other words, you can further hitsound work than now yourself if you felt necessarry.

and last. imo, hitsound 50% parts are quite noise. Ok.I take it.>w<


[HD]

Click!

• 
  * 00:18:884 - why don't u put hitsound?
  i highly recommend to put hitsound except finish things. it included instrument sounds, and you used 2 notes here.
  also, there is a lot of 2 notes in above measure lines.
  i will skip to copy all of things. perhaps you would know what i want to point out
  
  * 00:21:509 (21509|0) - move to 2 for balance Changed
  
  * 00:23:196 - how about this? http://puu.sh/eU8a9/a80379c709.jpg Changed
  
  * 00:29:665 - i guess you missed a note here Ok.I think added a note will be better;w;
  * 00:30:415 - ^ ^
  
  * 00:32:571 (32571|3) - move to 1, for music interval ( don't mind if you intended it ) Chaned
  * 00:38:571 (38571|0) - ^ 4 ^
  
  * 00:40:352 (40352|3) - delete clap sound here. something faster than exact sound Deleted
  
  * 00:41:759 - 01:04:259 - the part reflects that why i suggested to change hitsound setting.
  the parts are has good sounds to put hitsound. but, the problem is that these are not fit with your hitsound mp3 files.
  whatever it's up to you. and .... i suggest to variate to polish here. at least using ctrl h for a part? if you know what i mean.
  
  Hmmm, Ctrl+H Like this?IMG
  
  * 01:04:727 (64727|3) - delete clap sound Deleted
  
  * 01:06:884 - if you just want to keep your hitsound mp3 file setting, you can add whistle sounds on here. I take it
  also, it would be fine even if you will change mp3 files too. since the part included sounds.
  * 01:07:634 - ^
  * 01:08:384 - ^
  * 01:09:134 - ^
  * 01:09:884 - ^
  * 01:10:634 - ^
  * 01:11:384 - ^
  * 01:12:134 - ^
  * 01:12:040 - ^ ( same sound here too )
  
  * 01:09:509 - i think the part is not necessary to use jack pattern here. there's something no good sound to emphasize.
  so, i suggest such this. http://puu.sh/eUaHN/b54a250054.jpg it would be flow well since i checked intervals too. Changed
  
  * 01:13:352 (73352|2,73446|3) - move to 23 Changed
  
  * 01:14:759 - you can add on 1 like 01:14:384 - here. or delete 01:14:384 - 's 4 note one Changed

[MX]

Click!

• 
  
  * 00:00:509 (509|1) - add finish sound here too Added
  * 00:02:759 (2759|3) - ^ ^
  * 00:08:759 - ^ ^
  * 00:10:259 - ^ ^
  
  * 00:09:134 - add on 3 ^
  
  * 00:10:540 (10540|0) - move to 2 changed
  
  * 00:00:509 - 00:12:509 - about LNs. the stream patterns are fine at all. Chnged
  but i can't understand what do you want to represent sounds from using LN.
  i suggest to re-arrange here. to catch exact sound to emphasize by using LN.
  example : you can move LN to which parts are have finish sound. it would be better to emphasize finish sounds too.
  
  * 00:11:759 - http://puu.sh/eUc9n/2e17449562.jpg something like this. since intervals are same. ( you don't have to change if you mind. ) I thought about it.But not sure..Now Changed
  
  * 00:18:040 - http://puu.sh/eUcAp/2186ea72d9.jpg it can catch new appeared sound too Changed
  
  * 00:18:884 - it would be same suggestion as HD's one. I take it.
  
  * 00:23:759 - you can add a note. i know you intended to empty here. >< Ok,added
  BUT Generally, 1/1 beatsnap has more sound. you can make empty other parts instead of here.
  * 00:29:196 - ^ ^
  
  * 00:40:446 (40446|2) - include clap sound here added
  
  * 00:40:727 (40727|1) - delete clap sound here deleted
  
  * 00:41:759 - i think stair pattern should be start from here Fixed
  
  * 00:42:696 - add on 3? Hmmm.Why add on 3?><Are you mean here? *00:42:462 (42462|2) -
  
  * 00:52:352 (52352|1) - delete. stair pattern sounds are start from 00:52:446 - here Deleted
  * 01:04:352 (64352|1) - ^ ^
  
  * 01:06:602 (66602|3) - move to 2 Changed
  
  * 01:06:509 - 01:12:509 - woa.. good job Thanks ><
  
  * 01:06:884 - it would be same as HD's hitsound suggestions. and skip ( blame my lazy hhhh ) ;w; ok
  
  * 01:15:134 (75134|3,75134|0) - how about change to LN like below patterns? ( meaning just one note ) Changed
  
  * 01:16:821 - http://puu.sh/eUdQv/a20f37dff6.jpg b..better imo Changed
  
  * 01:24:040 - i think you can add a note here too. same as below 2 notes sounds Ah...I missed it.Changed
  
  * 01:24:321 (84321|0,84321|2,84415|2,84415|0,84509|0,84509|2) - wocao ( /me hides ) ;w;
  
  * 01:24:509 (84509|3,85540|3,86384|0,87509|0,88821|0) - these are would be same as 00:00:509 - 00:12:509 -'s suggestion. Changed
  
  just. remember that this is just suggestion.
  
  * 01:29:384 (89384|0) - did you intend it shorter than 01:29:384 (89384|2) - it? Changed

good map overall. gl

Pharos21 wrote:

Heya~

Mod from (See my Signature) Here.... sorry i'm late. (making GD)

The Generals are fine so let's skip to the MOD

Column 1.2.3.4

NM

Wew.. soo many Hammy
kay

00:05:196 (5196|0,5384|0) - Move to 2 (pattern) Not changed

00:40:446 (40446|3) - Delete (what is this note doing in here?) Delete

01:13:821 (73821|2) - Move to 2 Changed

01:30:509 (90509|0,90509|3) - end here ? =>01:36:509 Not changed><

HD

00:02:009 (2009|2) - add note on 1 Not changed
00:05:009 (5009|2) - ^^

01:09:415 (69415|2) - Move to 2 Changed

i'll skip the MX (Out of my reach.. Sorry ^.^)

GL~ ^.^

SanadaYukimura wrote:

更新完直接没声辣，写个redownload的提示吧，貌似换了MP3文件（？

Marirose wrote:

irc mod

19:34 Marirose: HD开始
19:34 MeowPaz: 好
19:35 Marirose: 老实说开头直接上2note的确不错，但是你这样一直放到00:12:509 - 的话建议排列多改改 Take it
19:36 MeowPaz: 唔。。好吧，我会想想排列的
19:37 Marirose: 00:12:509 - 而这个位置,抓sound FX的音效也不错，关键是我建议开头就一条LN就行 Take it
19:37 Marirose: 另一个LN的位置动note替代
19:37 Marirose: 用
19:38 Marirose: 00:17:571 - 这个地方在右手的位置加条LN
19:38 MeowPaz: 噢噢，想这样吗？http://puu.sh/eUtBR/40788922e5.jpg
19:38 MeowPaz: 像*
19:39 Marirose: 00:21:321 (21321|3) - 这个放在col3，并且加一个00:21:509 - 的col4强调 Added and changed
19:39 Marirose: 恩差不多，我不过我觉得开头的LN在左手比较好 Take it
19:40 MeowPaz: 嗯，好。
19:41 Marirose: 00:21:884 - 左手的clap，调整和00:21:134 - 一样 Changed
19:42 Marirose: 00:23:196 (23196|0,23290|1) - 这两个调整下，打着有些不舒服 Changed
19:42 Marirose: http://puu.sh/eUtXR/2978878a1e.jpg的话http://puu.sh/eUtXR/2978878a1e.jpg
19:43 Marirose: 错了，是00:24:134 - 的http://puu.sh/eUtXR/2978878a1e.jpg Changed
19:44 MeowPaz: ;w;我速度太慢，跟不上的我会等下回头慢慢改
19:44 MeowPaz: 你尽管摸图就行了
19:45 Marirose: 用savelog命令可以转换成txt
19:45 Marirose: 好
19:45 Marirose: 00:28:821 (28821|3,28915|2) - 同理，不舒服，调整 Changed
19:46 Marirose: 00:42:509 (42509|0,42509|2) - LN在00:43:071 - 结束 Fixed
19:46 Marirose: 00:44:571 (44571|2,44571|0,44665|1,44665|3,44759|0,44759|2) - 每条线各删除一个，这里的音没必要强调 Deleted
19:47 MeowPaz: 那条LN，后面的LN全都同理吗
19:47 Marirose: 00:45:509 (45509|0,45509|2) - 在00:46:071 - 结束 Fixed
19:47 Marirose: 不是啊
19:47 Marirose: 你听清楚啊。。。
19:47 Marirose: 50%
19:48 Marirose: 00:47:009 (47009|3,47009|1) - 在上面的00:48:321 - 结束 Fixed
19:48 MeowPaz: 好吧;w;
19:48 Marirose: 00:50:571 (50571|3,50571|1,50665|0,50665|2,50759|3,50759|1) - 也是各删除一个 Deleted
19:49 Marirose: 00:52:634 - 从这里开始变成col1,3交替 Changed
19:49 Marirose: 然后仔细检查下LN的起始 Fixed
19:50 MeowPaz: 嗯
19:51 Marirose: 01:04:259 - 这里的两条LN，删了01:04:259 (64259|2) - ，之后跟着背景音 Changed
19:52 Marirose: 01:06:509 - 的话，加一个，因为是finish的音 Added
19:52 MeowPaz: 感觉这些音的LN结束的位置有些不统一;w; 有些地方感觉不顺手，刚开始作这图时我是认真对好结束的。。。只是别人摸图推荐我这么改orz
19:52 MeowPaz: 嗯
19:54 MeowPaz: wocao...有时我也觉得有些mod有些莫名其妙，唉好吧
19:54 Marirose: 01:15:227 (75227|1,75321|2,75415|1) - 这样http://puu.sh/eUuVb/f58b660cc6.jpg
19:55 Marirose: 01:15:227 (75227|2,75321|1,75415|2) - 这个地方怎么不抓音啦？
19:55 MeowPaz: 待会要认真检查一遍了orz
19:56 Marirose: HD就是这样啦
19:56 Marirose: 比我的第一张图好多啦
19:57 MeowPaz: 抓音那个地方要加个note吗？
19:57 Marirose: 看你咯
19:57 Marirose: 关键是这是你的图啦
19:57 MeowPaz: 没有啦，刚开始这图不怎么行的;w; 自己改了好几遍
19:58 Marirose: 稍等，有事。。
19:58 MeowPaz: 好~
20:23 Marirose: back to work
20:24 MeowPaz: 嗯。好:3
20:25 Marirose: 恩
20:26 MeowPaz: http://puu.sh/eUxnH/b239f61230.png 你说我该给kudos吗？NM我就看中两点改了。。。。
20:26 MeowPaz: 太少，有些浑水摸鱼
20:26 Marirose: 给吧
20:26 Marirose: 给了你自己的图也+1
20:28 MeowPaz: 好吧w
20:28 Marirose: 怎么说
20:29 Marirose: 00:09:321 (9321|2,9321|0,9415|3,9415|1,9509|0,9509|2) - 这三个double的不错
20:29 MeowPaz: 继续吧。
20:29 Marirose: 可是00:09:134 (9134|2,9134|0) - 我看不懂 Deleted
20:30 MeowPaz: 好吧;w; 摆错
20:32 Marirose: 00:29:665 - 这些地方我觉得可以加上，而且double的位置有的地方有些奇怪，你仔细检查看看 Take it
20:33 MeowPaz: 好
20:33 Marirose: 而且这个位置也有bass的音，你可以考虑抓bass的音（类似iidx的谱面 Fixed
20:34 Marirose: 00:40:821 (40821|3,40915|0) - 删去，这里抓主音，从00:41:009 - 开始左右拍 Changed
20:35 Marirose: 00:41:009 - 然后从这里开始检查LN起始，和HD一样 Take it
20:35 Marirose: 后面大部分差不多
20:39 Marirose: 00:50:852 - http://puu.sh/eUyxD/7b3c3c5a06.jpg变化排列，毕竟音不同 Changed
20:40 MeowPaz: 2015-01-23 20:33 Marirose: 00:41:009 - 然后从这里开始检查LN起始，和HD一样 [应该是00:42:509噢。我懂就好了w ]
20:41 Marirose: 01:09:321 (69321|0,69321|2,69415|0,69415|2) - 这里的鼓点放连点可以但是另一个轨道你变一下就行啦 Changed
20:43 MeowPaz: ok
20:43 Marirose: 01:13:634 - 这个地方这样http://puu.sh/eUyRr/5f4c5aa1c0.jpg Changed

from my queue
Good luck XD

Simple_Star wrote:

小小的贴士
MX中的类似于00:44:009 (44009|2,44009|1) - 的摆法 有些音不是在蓝线结束的而是在红线结束的
00:52:446 - 既然当中都这么简单了 这边显得很奇怪 我的建议是删掉
01:04:446 - 这边同上 或者要么跟明显的鼓点才会比较好打 我测试了下感觉如果抓这个十分诡异
01:15:134 (75134|3) - 有2个漏抓的短条 仔细再听听怎么样?

加油啦~

puxtu wrote:

awesome map! star'd