Rakuen wrote:

Recheck!

Sorry was a bit busy

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Easy

1. 00:45:839 (4) - NC

Regraz's Normal

1. 01:01:313 (1) - 1.2 DS? only use 1.0 at 01:02:576 (1) -
2. 03:41:102 (2,3,4) - Symmetry middle?

Irie's Hard

1. 00:15:050 - Remove whistle? (not sure abt hitsound)
2. 02:39:522 - Finish

yf's Extra

1. 01:27:208 (4) - Normal set?
2. 02:33:996 (5) - NC?

Umbrella

1. 01:57:602 (5) - What hitsound?
2. 02:08:655 (2) - Wrong snap

Call me back!

yf_bmp wrote:

help me

OniJAM wrote:

思考 我好像画过一个伞

Elaine wrote:

OniJAM wrote:

思考 我好像画过一个伞

哎 之前好像被批判了一番然后被取缔 苦苦

OniJAM wrote:

怎么每次想找mapper irc的时候总是不在线

1. Easy and Unbrella diffs should have consistency in combo colours

1. 00:01:945 - Different sampleset between red line and green line
2. 00:54:997 -
3. 01:02:892 -
4. 02:13:313 -
5. 03:00:049 -
6. 03:52:312 -
7. 03:53:575 -
8. 03:54:996 -
9. 04:26:101 -
10. 04:26:575 - useless green lines above

1. 03:40:155 -
2. 03:53:576 - useless green lines above

1. 00:22:155 - useless green line
2. 02:13:313 - Different sampleset and volume between green line and red line
3. 03:40:155 - same as above

1. 02:39:523 - useless and unsnapped green line
2. 02:59:734 - same as above
3. 03:17:418 - 1ms unsnapped and cause the different slider length. btw, i think 03:17:417 (1) - should snapped to 1/2 or 3/4 for consistency, I fell that vocal falls later than 2/3 but a little earlier than 3/4, so 3/4 is more closed and reasonable point to me. If you're not sure, snapped at 1/2 for drum.

1. 00:07:629 (5) - branket
2. 00:17:734 (5) - same

yf_bmp wrote:

help me agian XD
话说你萌都上狗了呀

tm1209 wrote:

[Irie's Hard]


OD5太低？

00:01:945 (1) - 拉长了还是故意的？

00:17:102 (1,2) - 这两个从音乐上听起来似乎比较适合用相反方向的滑条？2朝下比较好？不过考虑到2之后还有很多东西那么1朝下也不错？

00:46:945 (4,5) - 00:49:471 (4,5) - 这地方似乎应该摆个3连啊，00:47:023 - 应该也有鼓点的，反正AR8应该也不介意这么个东西吧

01:15:839 (1) - 01:16:471 (1) - 加快一点滑条速度？

02:41:259 (2) - 02:41:891 (1) - 02:42:522 (1) - ^

02:41:733 (3,2,2) - 这三个NC应该比较好，这样的话后面跟的滑条也都是2了，统一一点总是好的

02:38:180 (1) - 这个转盘的音量似乎不用这么大




[Hard]



总感觉AR6看上去舒服点我他吗能3mod

00:15:997 (4) - 这个似乎应该出现在00:15:839 - 这里更好？

00:45:681 (3) - 开头的地方没啥东西啊，00:45:997 - 倒是这里似乎有个音节没放

01:04:155 - 这个鼓点应该非常明显了

01:22:787 (1) - 这一段开始减小一点滑条的速度？

03:09:680 - 其实我觉得这里也可以放一个，感觉效果也还可以

04:35:417 (1) - 不用放感觉都可以。。

yf_bmp wrote:

[Hard]
00:59:418 (3) - 换位置
01:04:155 - 空着不好 还有鼓点
01:52:945 - 不建议空kiai前还是空了
03:09:838 (1) - 上移三格
03:51:206 (1,2,3) - 距离你看着办吧按ds摆的啊...

Regraz wrote:

算了

256,344,271943,6,0,B|256:304|256:304|252:300|252:300|260:296|260:296|256:292|256:292|256:264|256:264|252:260|252:260|260:256|260:256|256:252|256:252|256:220|256:220|252:216|252:216|260:212|260:212|256:208|256:208|256:192|256:192|288:172|324:192|324:192|376:172|424:192|424:192|412:108|348:48|256:32|256:32|164:48|100:108|88:192|88:192|140:172|188:192,1,950,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

271943,-400,4,2,3,25,0,0
272259,-400,4,2,3,20,0,0
272575,-400,4,2,3,15,0,0
272891,-400,4,2,3,10,0,0
277943,-400,4,2,3,5,0,0

OniJAM wrote:

Umbrella version 2.0!

256,344,271943,6,0,B|256:304|256:304|252:300|252:300|260:296|260:296|256:292|256:292|256:264|256:264|252:260|252:260|260:256|260:256|256:252|256:252|256:220|256:220|252:216|252:216|260:212|260:212|256:208|256:208|256:192|256:192|288:172|324:192|324:192|376:172|424:192|424:192|412:108|348:48|256:32|256:32|164:48|100:108|88:192|88:192|140:172|188:192,1,950,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Also, add these code in your .osu file (TimingPoints, replace old timelines after 04:31:943 - )

271943,-400,4,2,3,25,0,0
272259,-400,4,2,3,20,0,0
272575,-400,4,2,3,15,0,0
272891,-400,4,2,3,10,0,0
277943,-400,4,2,3,5,0,0

Then combine two spinners in your Easy and Hard into one which ends at 04:37:943 - . (If possible, I suggest to change other diffs too)

Call me back!

1. 02:01:471 - this soft sampleset delete here. awkward imo
2. 04:07:943 ~ 04:08:891 - this part mapping please

1. 01:01:313 (1,1,2) - check spacing
2. 01:56:892 (3) - suggust
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:49:628 (1) - missing blanket
4. 03:27:365 (1) - head add Finish?
5. 03:37:628 (1) - suggust
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:49:154 (2) - i think this rhythm finish 03:49:627 - this batter imo
7. 04:06:364 (1) - spiner increase 04:08:891 - here
8. 04:16:469 (1) - you can this slider shape change
9. 04:25:944 (4) - hmm.. this reverse one add please.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
10. 04:33:127 - what's this green line?

1. Awaken's Insane diff small Easer so can you change AR 7.0?
2. 00:24:839 (2) - move 460:300
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
3. 00:29:734 (5) - NC
4. 00:35:734 (5) - clap
5. 01:47:734 (4) - suggust
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:57:366 (3,4) - Ctrl+G please. change rhythm batter imo
7. 03:00:049 - Delete finish.
8. 04:03:996 (1) - same Normal.

1. 00:01:945 (1) - unsnap slider?
2. 01:34:155 (5) - check spacing.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:50:576 - delete whistle
4. 02:41:259 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - oh.. nice patten. but i think this hader patten.. so can you change this patten? same 01:15:208 (1,2,1,2,1) - this.
5. 03:01:943 (4) - Ctrl+G is flow batter
6. 04:03:917 (1) - same Normal diff

1. AR 8.5? batter
2. 02:06:681 (6) - Ctrl+G

1. Nice >w<

1. 00:32:260 (1,2) - suggust
   
   SPOILER

   

HabiHolic wrote:

wow. gratz your BNG! here my gift! Ranked!

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

Loctav wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

For fitting his style.You don't understand that.

I am stunned by the weight of your explanation. Now I can see why it is setup like that. I feel superly illuminated.

Okay, jokes aside. What's that. "You don't understand that"? Excuse me, but this was a legitimate question. If you are unable to answer in a proper fashion, please leave this forum - or at least do not reply.

scanter wrote:

FlobuFlobs wrote:

unnecesarry inhireted point

does it matter?

xxdeathx wrote:

Nothing is wrong with this

xxdeathx wrote:

Ok, I should've been more clear: they should be removed but aren't unrankable

ZZHBOY wrote:

you are right, every point of view should has a clear explanation
but
however
he just want to avoid anything could cause this map be dqed
so i hope you can forgive him
thank you :3

Avishay wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

you are right, every point of view should has a clear explanation
but
however
he just want to avoid anything could cause this map be dqed
so i hope you can forgive him
thank you :3

So there's no real explanation for the reason OD is 6? If the map will get disqualified, would you like to change it?

ZZHBOY wrote:

Avishay wrote:

So there's no real explanation for the reason OD is 6? If the map will get disqualified, would you like to change it?

NO at all. this map has many complicated but fun rhythm, od 6 can make player plays better and have more interesting on this map.
if I set od to 7, it will be harder for many player who can't hit accurately.
I know you are a pro player and maybe you wanna to earn more pp from this map, however please understand my thought who created this map.
i don't think anything wrong with od 6 or you can give me a clear explanation.

yf_bmp wrote:

ok. opposite view

1. The artist must be "otetsu feat.Megurine Luka". That space is not necessary between "feat." and "Megurine" that according the official.
   
   
   from official website : http://otetsu.jp/
   
2. 01:50:576 - in Awaken's Insane
   
   Do not use silent volumes on objects, You must consider turning up over 20%
   
   Additional Modding :
   
   [General]
   
   1. About OD issues : 3/4/5/5/7/8/6
      I agreed with Lust. As you can see the OD rate of all diffs, it's too bad for spread. The umbrella diff is hardest in this mapset. Well, it's not unrankable issues ... This is now your responsibility.
   [Easy]
   
   1. HP Drain Rate -1. Because you made long blacks at this part. 00:57:523 (1,1,1) - ,02:13:313 (1,1,1) -
   2. 02:00:523 (1) - I feel it's better to use a clap or something to the head of the slider since it follows nothing.
   3. 02:18:050 (1,2) - You don't have to take the 1/2 rhythm at here imo. Please try this one
      
   4. 03:43:629 (2,1) - hmm, The stack has 1/1 rhythm only here. But you used stacks on different rhythm at here : 03:34:470 (2,1) - ,03:54:364 (3,1) - . So you should consider remaking this part. It prevents the player from misreading. Then, you can be neglected about this part : 02:13:313 (1,1,1) -

   scanter wrote:

   in Umbrella diff
   
   

   If you didn't change slider speed, Please delete green section on red line.

alacat wrote:

1. About OD issues : 3/4/5/5/7/8/6
   I agreed with Lust. As you can see the OD rate of all diffs, it's too bad for spread. The umbrella diff is hardest in this mapset. Well, it's not unrankable issues ... This is now your responsibility.

CDFA wrote:

Fuck asian metadata jesus fucking christ I'm going to jump in front of a bulldozer

Lust wrote:

Just as an added thought to this conversation, a lower OD can cause instances of note-locking which is probably even more uncomfortable than just setting it to a higher OD. A fast-paced, jumpy map should probably receive a higher OD, while very difficult technical maps should have a lower one(ehh still kind of stretching it here). Granted, I haven't looked at the mapset yet but I'm just dropping my thoughts on the matter before I do.

Avishay wrote:

alacat wrote:

1. About OD issues : 3/4/5/5/7/8/6
   I agreed with Lust. As you can see the OD rate of all diffs, it's too bad for spread. The umbrella diff is hardest in this mapset. Well, it's not unrankable issues ... This is now your responsibility.

This is pretty much what I tried to say.

I talked about disqualification not because of the OD, but because the issue scanter found and I took the chance to mention it.

Eitherway gl in getting it re-ranked.

alacat wrote:

Hi, ZZHBOY. I have to disqualify due to the wrong romanised artist and inaudible section.

1. The artist must be "otetsu feat.Megurine Luka". That space is not necessary between "feat." and "Megurine" that according the official.
   
   
   from official website : http://otetsu.jp/
   
2. 01:50:576 - in Awaken's Insane
   
   Do not use silent volumes on objects, You must consider turning up over 20%
   
   Additional Modding :
   
   [General]
   
   1. About OD issues : 3/4/5/5/7/8/6
      I agreed with Lust. As you can see the OD rate of all diffs, it's too bad for spread. The umbrella diff is hardest in this mapset. Well, it's not unrankable issues ... This is now your responsibility.
   [Easy]
   
   1. HP Drain Rate -1. Because you made long blacks at this part. 00:57:523 (1,1,1) - ,02:13:313 (1,1,1) -
   2. 02:00:523 (1) - I feel it's better to use a clap or something to the head of the slider since it follows nothing.
   3. 02:18:050 (1,2) - You don't have to take the 1/2 rhythm at here imo. Please try this one
      
   4. 03:43:629 (2,1) - hmm, The stack has 1/1 rhythm only here. But you used stacks on different rhythm at here : 03:34:470 (2,1) - ,03:54:364 (3,1) - . So you should consider remaking this part. It prevents the player from misreading. Then, you can be neglected about this part : 02:13:313 (1,1,1) -

   scanter wrote:

   in Umbrella diff
   
   

   If you didn't change slider speed, Please delete green section on red line.

Avishay wrote:

I talked about disqualification not because of the OD, but because the issue scanter found and I took the chance to mention it.

HabiHolic wrote:

Sorry >_>

ReQualified

Asphyxia wrote:

I still think the OD could've been much higher, but whatever <.<

Garven wrote:

Ew, why would you have such low OD against a high AR? 8-9 would be more fitting.

ZZHBOY wrote:

Garven wrote:

Ew, why would you have such low OD against a high AR? 8-9 would be more fitting.

OD>7 would be hard to play for many player maybe?

FlobuFlobs wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

OD>7 would be hard to play for many player maybe?

What, i dont really care which OD you choose (its your choice) but this argument is wrong, those people who plays these kind of difficulties can play easiely OD>7 lol

1. better spread for this set
2. avoid note lock caused by too low OD, from lust's post

1. I personal hate high OD
2. OD7 is a value in reasonable OD interval

Venzire wrote:

Very nice map set, great song.