General00:06:679 - If you're going to keep this part of the SB, please add the epilepsy warning.
Timing feels off. Get someone to check your timing.
Ultra EasyUltra poorly mapped.
Pretty much every 1/4 is stupid, a pain to read, and fucks you up.
FIX THIS.Do you realize how stupid these sliders look?
Pretty much every 1/2 is stupid, a pain to read, and fucks you up.
FIX THIS.Do you realize how stupid these sliders look?
01:11:679 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Pretty confusing. Maybe try new combos on (3) and the slider? And perhaps stack the 1/1's?
00:58:279 (1,1) - Best part of the whole map. You can actually see the slider track!
EasyYou fucking see this?
This map is NOT easy.
Many of the spinners have notes on them well before they complete.
00:25:479 (3) - Stupid.
00:31:079 (2,3) - Unpossible to read.
00:32:279 (4) - Difficult to read.
01:11:679 (1,2) - I read these as if they were 1/2 later. I think they fit better that way.
01:44:679 (1,2,3,4,5) -
NO.02:01:479 (2,3,4) - No.
03:08:679 (2,1) - Increase spacing.
Pretty much every 1/4 is stupid, a pain to read, and fucks you up.
FIX THIS.Hanyuu's NormalPretty difficult for a Normal.
I found the hitsounds too quiet, especially during V3 and Visual Dream.
00:14:479 (3,4) - Stack these.
00:22:079 (2) - I would delete this. Doesn't feel natural. And, it gets the player thinking note right after slider = 1/2, so they don't try reading 00:39:379 (4) as carefully and land with a 50.
00:25:279 (2) - ^
00:28:479 (2) - ^
01:20:679 (1,2,3) - Horizontal spacing is weird. >_<
ignore's HardRENAME TO INSANE. I can't believe you even tried to pass this off as a Hard. The beginning was Hard-worthy, but starting at 00:12:479 things shift to Insane quickly.
OD+1 at LEAST. It's a good map, but it's bad to play with the current OD.
02:48:879 - This long break just for four seconds at the end? C'mon.
SHDI found the hitsounds too quiet, especially during V3.
00:07:679 (3,4,5,1) - Too clustered IMO.
00:14:979 (7,1) - Stacking looks ugly.
00:15:679 (4,5) - Stacking hard to read.
02:41:479 (5) - New combo.
02:39:079 (1,3,1,3) - Not sightread-able.
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