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Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
from my queue:

the only real issue with the bg was that the extraction was a bit rough (exhibit A, exhibit B, etc.).

all I could really do about this is recreate the image, which was an interesting exercise. I used this as the base image. other than the smoother extraction, the star placements are the most noticeable difference, followed by many smaller things.
here's the image, should you choose to use it

png | jpg
no kds
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
2.25 still hard icon
rip
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
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sheela
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Joined October 2011
sheela


Hey Kibbleru!

Easy

  1. 00:08:331 (3) - Nazi, but a bit noticeable. Move this more further from the previous slider.
  2. 00:29:899 (1) - I'd commence the slider on the big downbeat, while there's a circle before it. The upbeat and the big downbeat are strong beats, so I thought a circle would be best to cover the upbeat then the head of the slider on the downbeat, like 00:32:818 (1) . The slider 00:37:683 (1) sounds fitting with the rhythm because of the strong beat on the upbeat.
  3. 00:56:169 (1) - It should be me, but I think I hear a little a crash in the music.
  4. 01:13:683 (5,1) - There's a distance inconsistency here. You can try rotating a bit the short slider.

Cloud's Normal

  1. 00:29:738 (3) - It seems that the tail forgot the finish and the clap.
The difficulty looks perfect to me! Although, I kind of worry about the 1/1 stacks, since you use more the stack on 1/2 rhythms. So they may cause a little confusion. You might want to also change a little similar patterns like 00:59:575 (3,4) . From what I see in your difficulty, there would be a slider before the circle.

Hard

  1. 00:01:521 (2) - Because the music in that section feels slow, the distance between the circle and the previous slider seems to have a 1/1 gap. Blame my skills, but try reducing the distance.
  2. 00:01:683 (1,2) - Add a little more distance, like you did to 00:04:277 (1,2,3) ? The beats are similar and they're strong.
  3. 00:14:656 (1,2) - Reduce the distance to get the consistency?
  4. 00:36:061 (3,1) - In my opinion, it'd be better if the slider (1) doesn't get overlap by the other slider. It makes a little awkward movement (blame my skills), and players might fail. Maybe adding more distance between them, or change the rhythm, like this:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:47:521 (1,2) - It seems a bit hard when you go from (1) to (2). I suggest you reduce the distance.
  6. 00:53:250 (4) - It's not a big deal, but try changing the curve's direction to the right. It just makes a better circular flow.

Insane

  1. 00:17:575 (3) - In my opinion, this note can be deleted. The rhythm seems to follow the drum, and the beat on 00:17:575 is the snare (?). If the mote is deleted, I think the play would be better.
  2. 00:32:494 (1) - I would try reducing this a 1/2 a beat, then there's the 1/1 slider on 00:32:818 . This would leave a strong object (circle, head of the slider) to land on the big downbeat.
  3. 00:35:899 (2,3) - I think reducing the distance a bit will better with the music. It would let 00:36:061 (3,1) have a larger distance, which would make more sense.
  4. 01:05:737 (3) - Moving this further from the previous circle would improve the movement in my opinion. The previous patterns seem to put pressure in you, like it starts to go well, after it gets hard. It starts on 01:03:953 - so moving the circle would make the play funner.

Skystar's Extra

  1. 00:15:142 (2) - The whistle sounds out of place to me. Try the sampleset soft and no addition.
  2. 00:32:493 (1) - The circle touches the bar. Please move it down.
  3. 00:38:980 (1,2) - The flow would be best if the position is switched (Ctrl + G).
  4. 00:40:521 (3,1) - The stack doesn't to stack properly, if you test it. Because of that, it's kind of unreadable. You should try moving them to a new place.
  5. 01:11:169 (4,1) - Maybe replacing them by a 1/4 slider? It's kind of hard to click the circles.

This should be it! I couldn't find much, but here's a star! Let me know if you have questions, and good luck with the map!
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

sheela901 wrote:



Hey Kibbleru!

Easy

  1. 00:08:331 (3) - Nazi, but a bit noticeable. Move this more further from the previous slider. ye
  2. 00:29:899 (1) - I'd commence the slider on the big downbeat, while there's a circle before it. The upbeat and the big downbeat are strong beats, so I thought a circle would be best to cover the upbeat then the head of the slider on the downbeat, like 00:32:818 (1) . The slider 00:37:683 (1) sounds fitting with the rhythm because of the strong beat on the upbeat. i think the slide fits the kinda sliding sound well
  3. 00:56:169 (1) - It should be me, but I think I hear a little a crash in the music. applied for all diff
  4. 01:13:683 (5,1) - There's a distance inconsistency here. You can try rotating a bit the short slider. this is on purpose for asthetic reasons.


Hard

  1. 00:01:521 (2) - Because the music in that section feels slow, the distance between the circle and the previous slider seems to have a 1/1 gap. Blame my skills, but try reducing the distance. nerfed slightly
  2. 00:01:683 (1,2) - Add a little more distance, like you did to 00:04:277 (1,2,3) ? The beats are similar and they're strong. k
  3. 00:14:656 (1,2) - Reduce the distance to get the consistency? i think this is fine
  4. 00:36:061 (3,1) - In my opinion, it'd be better if the slider (1) doesn't get overlap by the other slider. It makes a little awkward movement (blame my skills), and players might fail. Maybe adding more distance between them, or change the rhythm, like this: imo the antijumps are fine o-o
    SPOILER
  5. 00:47:521 (1,2) - It seems a bit hard when you go from (1) to (2). I suggest you reduce the distance. k
  6. 00:53:250 (4) - It's not a big deal, but try changing the curve's direction to the right. It just makes a better circular flow. no i like this :3

Insane

  1. 00:17:575 (3) - In my opinion, this note can be deleted. The rhythm seems to follow the drum, and the beat on 00:17:575 is the snare (?). If the mote is deleted, I think the play would be better. personally i think that sound is quite strong
  2. 00:32:494 (1) - I would try reducing this a 1/2 a beat, then there's the 1/1 slider on 00:32:818 . This would leave a strong object (circle, head of the slider) to land on the big downbeat. i like how this feels though :D
  3. 00:35:899 (2,3) - I think reducing the distance a bit will better with the music. It would let 00:36:061 (3,1) have a larger distance, which would make more sense. i c what u mean but i can't think of any way to apply this and still look good :C
  4. 01:05:737 (3) - Moving this further from the previous circle would improve the movement in my opinion. The previous patterns seem to put pressure in you, like it starts to go well, after it gets hard. It starts on 01:03:953 - so moving the circle would make the play funner. ok!


This should be it! I couldn't find much, but here's a star! Let me know if you have questions, and good luck with the map!

ty!
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beautiful map love this good job
Iceskulls
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Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
xD update your beatmap thread
SPOILER

[General]
  • looks fine
[Skystar]
  1. 00:12:223 (2) - Delete whistle at head ? sound not right to me
  2. 00:13:358 - Add whistle here ?
  3. 00:32:493 (1) - You can move this down about because it looks nearly overlap hp bar here for me
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:926 (3,3) - Not necessary but this looks nearly stack so I guess stack it would improve aesthetic here
  2. 00:24:223 (4) - Whistle here ?
  3. 00:26:169 (6) - Whistle ?
  4. 01:08:169 (2) - I guess ctrl+g this would make flow here 01:07:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice
  5. 01:09:142 (1,4,5) - Aesthetic- stack here ? at (1) 's tail
  6. 01:25:521 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these would make flow here 01:25:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - a bit better imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:358 (2,3) - Jumps and flow here kinda a bit too much for hard diff imo , you can try ctrl+g (3) to make flow a bit more smooth
  2. 00:11:250 (3,4) - Try this?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:22:115 (4) - 00:23:413 (4) - the whistle at tail seem a bit redundant here , why don't you hitsound slider here just like what you did here 00:24:061 (3) -
  4. 01:06:142 (2,3,4,1) - This rhythm pattern kinda hard for hard diff imo because players have to play triplet then hold cursor for slider the triplet agian , I think it better make players play this a bit more better by delete the usage of slider so player can just click triplet here which should be hard enough for them to play now here imo
    SPOILER
[Cloud]
  1. 00:11:250 (2,3) - imo this rhythm sound better
    SPOILER
    or
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:007 (2,3) - I'd would focus on vocal here so it consistent with 00:30:223 (1,2,3) - a bit
    SPOILER
  3. 01:22:115 - End kiai here just like kibbleru ?
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:386 - Redundant green timing point
The spread between Normal and Easy is fine , I take a look a the rhythm and spacing and it pretty balance between each diffs
Easy use mostly 1/1 rhythm and spacing with the mix use of 1/2 repeat slider and normal use some 1/2 rhythm to take place of those 1/2 repeat slider while also keep the other parts of rhythm look like normal so it will not feel weird between easy and normal when it come to rhythm so I guess this is fine

Nice

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i want to make a little suggestion... i think difficulty level between hard and insane is a little too much
reason being, insane i play 10 times and can only get like 75% with no fail mode and cant even pass without. but hard i get B on sightread and after 10 play i almost FC it with only 2 combo break and no miss

they are very good maps both of them but maybe consider adding hyper difficulty for between hard and insane. because of insane's very hard difficulty. i dont think difference between hard and insane should be so different that on completely different play level. not right to find hard super ez but insane super duper hard
Little
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Joined November 2012
Little
sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

Cloud's Normal

  1. 00:29:738 (3) - It seems that the tail forgot the finish and the clap. Fixed.
The difficulty looks perfect to me! Although, I kind of worry about the 1/1 stacks, since you use more the stack on 1/2 rhythms. So they may cause a little confusion. You might want to also change a little similar patterns like 00:59:575 (3,4) . From what I see in your difficulty, there would be a slider before the circle. I know that using different stack rhythms is harder, but these match the song best, and can't really find nice way to change it. I prefer to keep them. As for the pattern you mentioned, that one is different because the release on the vocal note is cut.
CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Cloud]
  1. 00:11:250 (2,3) - imo this rhythm sound better I prefer my current rhythm. It follows the instrument.
    SPOILER
    or
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:007 (2,3) - I'd would focus on vocal here so it consistent with 00:30:223 (1,2,3) - a bit No, that breaks my rhythm pattern. If you look at this whole section, you'll see the rhythm is just a consistently repeating pattern of 8 beats. Those 1/2 sliders are used to show that interesting instrument sound.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:22:115 - End kiai here just like kibbleru ? I like my kiai end better than Kibb's. I feel that it's better to continue kiai there because the energy of the song continues to build right up to that last note.
Thanks.
Cloud's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: ray of bullet.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50291
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Ray of bullet
TitleUnicode:Ray of bullet
Artist:Iris Freyja(CV:Hidaka Rina), Mononobe Mitsuki(CV:Numakura Manami)
ArtistUnicode:イリス・フレイア(CV:日高里菜)、物部深月(CV:沼倉愛美)
Creator:Kibbleru
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:銃皇無尽のファフニール
Tags:Juuou Mujin no Fafnir ending ed skystar amamiya yuko CloudSplash16 園田智也 Sonoda Tomoya
BeatmapID:644945
BeatmapSetID:280999

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HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
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Kibbleru
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CelsiusLK wrote:

xD update your beatmap thread
SPOILER

[General]
  • looks fine
fix last 2 for skystar btw

[Insane]
  1. 00:22:926 (3,3) - Not necessary but this looks nearly stack so I guess stack it would improve aesthetic here not noticeable imo c:
  2. 00:24:223 (4) - Whistle here ? that sounds a bit too much imo
  3. 00:26:169 (6) - Whistle ? ok!
  4. 01:08:169 (2) - I guess ctrl+g this would make flow here 01:07:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice i think it plays pretty good as it is too owo
  5. 01:09:142 (1,4,5) - Aesthetic- stack here ? at (1) 's tail ok
  6. 01:25:521 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these would make flow here 01:25:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - a bit better imo same as b4
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:358 (2,3) - Jumps and flow here kinda a bit too much for hard diff imo , you can try ctrl+g (3) to make flow a bit more smooth i did something else but basically it's less sharp now, i still want the flow break to emphasize the drums.
  2. 00:11:250 (3,4) - Try this?
    SPOILER
    i think this emphasizes the instrument well
  3. 00:22:115 (4) - 00:23:413 (4) - the whistle at tail seem a bit redundant here , why don't you hitsound slider here just like what you did here 00:24:061 (3) - uhh following the vocals, idk. gives a cool effect though owo
  4. 01:06:142 (2,3,4,1) - This rhythm pattern kinda hard for hard diff imo because players have to play triplet then hold cursor for slider the triplet agian , I think it better make players play this a bit more better by delete the usage of slider so player can just click triplet here which should be hard enough for them to play now here imo
    SPOILER
    really? i think the sliders actually make it easier o-o because your way the movement will be more jittery :C let me know what u think
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:386 - Redundant green timing point ok
The spread between Normal and Easy is fine , I take a look a the rhythm and spacing and it pretty balance between each diffs
Easy use mostly 1/1 rhythm and spacing with the mix use of 1/2 repeat slider and normal use some 1/2 rhythm to take place of those 1/2 repeat slider while also keep the other parts of rhythm look like normal so it will not feel weird between easy and normal when it come to rhythm so I guess this is fine

Nice

Call me back
ty

@the person talking about hard-insane spread: i think it is quite fine. hard has various jumps to lead into the somewhat harder insane.

other changes; offset-3 (cuz captin said so owo)
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Kibbleru wrote:

@the person talking about hard-insane spread: i think it is quite fine. hard has various jumps to lead into the somewhat harder insane.
just cus i don't spend my life trying to be well known in a virtual world made of pixels doesnt mean i dont have a name, lardo.
Kibbleru
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zzMemorandum wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

@the person talking about hard-insane spread: i think it is quite fine. hard has various jumps to lead into the somewhat harder insane.
just cus i don't spend my life trying to be well known in a virtual world made of pixels doesnt mean i dont have a name, lardo.
sorry if i have offended u, i was just too lazy to check since i was already in edit mode lol
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
k
nice

Bubbled
Kibbleru
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CelsiusLK wrote:

k
nice

Bubbled
yay virginity <3
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
rebubbled

fixed normal and extra 1ms different audio preview and offset
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika
skype modded cuz im cool

SPOILER
22:34 No Dap: 00:47:288 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - 
22:35 No Dap: 00:49:193 (1,2,1) - 
22:36 Kibbleru: 00:49:193 (1) -
22:37 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/638059 Iris Freyja(CV:Hidaka Rina), Mononobe Mitsuki(CV:Numakura Manami) - Ray of bullet [Hard]]
22:37 No Dap: 00:18:382 (1,2) -  
22:39 No Dap: 00:47:518 (1,2,3) -

Qualified!!
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
*whoops

^ mess something up here
here the the log

I bubbled this then kibbleru self-pop
then I rebubbled and no dap ranked this
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Kibbleru
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i gotta say the coordination between 2 BNs are op..
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
Wat
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika
LOL
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
OP ranked lol
Aerous
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hehe
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hehe
honking for audioleadin but hey it works anyway
Little
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Yo,
I don't know what you changed in my diff, but you killed the slider at 00:05:250 (1)
rip./
Lanturn
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CloudSplash16 wrote:

Yo,
I don't know what you changed in my diff, but you killed the slider at 00:05:250 (1)
rip./

RIP set ;_;
Little
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Little
If offset and preview time were the only things changed, here is the fix:
Cloud's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: ray of bullet.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50288
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Ray of bullet
TitleUnicode:Ray of bullet
Artist:Iris Freyja(CV:Hidaka Rina), Mononobe Mitsuki(CV:Numakura Manami)
ArtistUnicode:イリス・フレイア(CV:日高里菜)、物部深月(CV:沼倉愛美)
Creator:Kibbleru
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:銃皇無尽のファフニール
Tags:Juuou Mujin no Fafnir ending ed skystar amamiya yuko CloudSplash16 園田智也 Sonoda Tomoya
BeatmapID:644945
BeatmapSetID:280999

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5.4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"fanfir.flv"
0,0,"Fafnir yey.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 57,74,94
Combo3 : 223,57,136

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277,344,33788,1,10,0:0:0:0:
380,308,34112,5,0,3:0:0:0:
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476,256,36382,6,0,P|422:255|377:284,1,110,12|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,344,37031,2,0,P|229:353|175:344,1,110,10|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
104,264,37680,6,0,L|96:154,1,110,12|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,44,38328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
187,91,38653,2,0,P|241:100|293:81,1,110,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,36,39301,6,0,L|385:90,1,55,4|4,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,39788,1,4,3:2:0:0:
368,200,40112,2,0,B|340:204|340:204|288:196|288:196|260:200,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,212,40599,5,12,0:0:0:0:
140,124,40923,1,10,0:0:0:0:
227,60,41247,2,0,P|281:48|332:65,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,41734,5,10,0:0:0:0:
368,200,42058,2,0,L|356:312,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,364,42545,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,308,42869,1,2,3:2:0:0:
160,361,43193,5,4,0:0:0:0:
66,304,43518,1,10,0:0:0:0:
161,251,43842,2,0,P|180:200|161:149,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,108,44328,5,10,0:0:0:0:
232,88,44653,2,0,L|340:72,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,64,45139,1,10,0:0:0:0:
364,168,45464,1,10,0:0:0:0:
437,246,45788,6,0,P|447:300|422:347,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,320,46274,2,0,P|321:315|266:315,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,327,46761,2,0,P|168:295|114:292,1,110,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
8,320,47410,6,0,L|35:213,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
68,108,48058,1,4,3:2:0:0:
256,192,48220,12,4,49680,3:2:0:0:
8,320,50977,6,0,P|60:303|112:318,1,110,4|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,356,51626,1,2,3:2:0:0:
308,296,51950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,200,52274,6,0,L|244:90,1,110,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,8,52923,1,2,3:2:0:0:
387,92,53247,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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144,136,54058,2,0,L|155:245,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,300,54545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,348,54869,6,0,P|313:341|351:303,1,110,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,200,55518,1,2,3:2:0:0:
296,152,55842,1,12,0:0:0:0:
196,200,56166,6,0,P|145:219|94:202,1,110,4|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,140,56815,1,2,3:2:0:0:
68,56,57139,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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100,340,58112,1,2,3:2:0:0:
24,260,58437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
103,184,58761,6,0,P|154:165|205:182,1,110,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,212,59247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,248,59572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,248,59734,2,0,P|383:244|408:233,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,60,60707,2,0,P|304:85|250:80,1,110,2|12,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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332,196,62977,5,10,0:0:0:0:
312,88,63301,1,2,3:2:0:0:
416,124,63626,1,10,0:0:0:0:
332,196,63950,6,0,L|222:192,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,188,64437,1,0,3:0:0:0:
168,188,64599,2,0,P|128:151|121:98,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,300,66545,6,0,P|257:320|204:310,1,110,4|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,260,67193,1,2,3:2:0:0:
103,150,67518,1,10,0:0:0:0:
194,89,67842,6,0,P|247:103|299:87,1,110,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,68491,1,2,3:2:0:0:
388,152,68815,1,10,0:0:0:0:
475,216,69139,6,0,P|491:267|477:320,1,110,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,364,69626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,320,69950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,348,70274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,348,70437,6,0,L|124:352,1,110,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,296,71085,1,2,3:2:0:0:
87,201,71410,1,10,0:0:0:0:
182,256,71734,6,0,P|235:260|282:231,1,110,4|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,72382,1,2,3:2:0:0:
360,28,72707,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,28,73031,6,0,L|254:59,1,110,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,92,73680,1,2,3:2:0:0:
40,68,74005,1,10,0:0:0:0:
40,68,74329,6,0,L|71:173,1,110,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,74815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,196,75139,2,0,L|252:192,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,75464,6,0,P|351:232|402:214,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,192,75950,2,0,L|463:301,2,110,8|2|8,0:0|3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,76923,6,0,P|348:79|297:97,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,77410,2,0,L|189:115,1,55,2|0,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
80,124,77896,2,0,L|96:232,1,110,12|0,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
116,340,78545,5,10,0:0:0:0:
200,268,78869,2,0,P|250:250|302:266,1,110,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,79518,6,0,P|428:196|410:145,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,100,80004,2,0,L|424:67,1,55,2|0,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
316,44,80491,2,0,L|227:109,1,110,12|0,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
140,176,81139,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,268,81464,2,0,P|227:276|254:276,1,55,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,310,81789,2,0,P|325:303|349:289,1,55,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,252,82112,6,0,L|400:136,1,110,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,82599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,88,82761,2,0,P|348:62|294:68,1,110,0|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,92,83247,6,0,P|193:112|141:99,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,84,83734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,84,83896,2,0,L|99:193,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,248,84382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,248,84545,6,0,P|158:227|210:240,1,110,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,256,85031,2,0,P|291:249|314:235,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,248,85356,2,0,P|382:223|389:197,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,168,85680,2,0,P|427:141|414:117,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,84,86004,6,0,L|317:74,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,86328,2,0,L|225:125,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,84,86653,2,0,L|133:74,1,55,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,86977,2,0,L|41:125,1,55,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
I figured out why that happened. When changing offset, don't recalculate slider lengths. It's not necessary to use that when changing offset. Just resnap all. It breaks my sliders because I often ctrl+gg my sliders out of habit.
Lanturn
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Lanturn
might as well add audio-leadin to all diffs as well then. 1293 seems optimal for this set.
Avishay
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Avishay
Um, I had a small odd feeling while playing the Extra diff, it looks like this is going to get disqualified, so:

  1. 01:11:166 (4) -, 00:55:599 (4) - and 01:00:788 (5) - Those are mapped on non-existent beats and because they're mapped on 1/4 white ticks they feel really awkward to play..
  2. 01:19:437 (5,1) - x=179 to stack properly with slider end
but overall it was really fun to play, gl!
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Yo,
I don't know what you changed in my diff, but you killed the slider at 00:05:250 (1)
rip./
rip. that was not 3/4 when I last checked it uguu

Lanturn wrote:

might as well add audio-leadin to all diffs as well then. 1293 seems optimal for this set.
audio lead in is completely useless imo lol

Avishay wrote:

Um, I had a small odd feeling while playing the Extra diff, it looks like this is going to get disqualified, so:
  1. 01:11:166 (4) -, 00:55:599 (4) - and 01:00:788 (5) - Those are mapped on non-existent beats and because they're mapped on 1/4 white ticks they feel really awkward to play..
  2. 01:19:437 (5,1) - x=179 to stack properly with slider end
but overall it was really fun to play, gl!
I asked the same question "what are these doubles" the answer was "skystar"

the stack is an editor bug and it appears normally in game

and oh well
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
I was too careless here

sorry no dap ;_;
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neonat
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neonat

No Dap wrote:

audio lead in is completely useless imo lol
It's a play-safe to fall onto if the system fails, it's not useless.
pkk
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pkk

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

the only real issue with the bg was that the extraction was a bit rough (exhibit A, exhibit B, etc.).

all I could really do about this is recreate the image, which was an interesting exercise. I used this as the base image. other than the smoother extraction, the star placements are the most noticeable difference, followed by many smaller things.
here's the image, should you choose to use it

png | jpg
no kds
rip idk how to photoshop

CONGRATS KIBBOOO
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Yo,
I don't know what you changed in my diff, but you killed the slider at 00:05:250 (1)
rip./
wait did it get unsnapped?
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika
it's shortened by 1/4

supposed to be 1/1 so its 3/4
Euny
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Euny
gratz......................

dsfasdfsdfkjsdfjads

don't unrank this map T.T.........


this map gave me 1 pp hooooeee~
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
sorry guys for my carelessness :/
Kin
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Kin
Is Skystar gonna reply to a mod ?
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

Kin wrote:

Is Skystar gonna reply to a mod ?
/me shrugs. hes rip atm
Setz
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Setz
rip :(
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Reasons for Disqualification

  1. 00:05:247 (1) - in Cloud's normal should be 1/1 instead of 3/4, snap it properly to 00:05:572 - .
  2. 01:26:004 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - in Insane creates a massive difficulty gap from Hard to Insane. This needs to be reduced quite a lot to keep the spread appropriate for players.

Additional modding



Skystar's Extra

  1. 00:55:599 (4,1) - 01:00:788 (5,1) - 01:11:166 (4,1) - The rhythms here are wrong, there isn't anything on the blue ticks where you have the additional note. If you listen to the song carefully (25-50% playback rate), you can hear that the beats actually lands on the white ticks. Furthermore, your current setup also makes these spots play awkwardly.

If you have any questions regarding my mod post, please ask! The BNG will handle this from here and as always, best of luck with the re-qualification!
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