Kruzon wrote:

hello, from my queue

firstly, there is an error regarding OD for Lv.6 (4k), as suggested by aimod, change its HP Drain Rate to 7.
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key column format: 1l2l3l4

Lv. 6
00:11:108 (11108|2) - to 4
00:13:746 (13746|0) - to 3
00:15:724 (15724|0) - to 2
00:16:053 (16053|1) - to 1
00:16:383 (16383|1) - to 1
00:19:020 (19020|3) - to 3
00:20:009 (20009|1) - to 4
00:20:669 (20669|2) - to 4
00:20:998 (20998|3) - to 3
00:23:306 (23306|2) - to 1
00:23:636 (23636|0) - to 2
00:23:965 (23965|0) - add note to 1for what ??
00:24:625 (24625|1) - delete, and add notes on 00:24:625 (24625|1) - to 1l3what's that means ? ._. add 2 note ?
00:25:614 (25614|2) - to 4
00:26:273 (26273|3) - to 2
00:26:932 (26932|0) - to 3
00:35:834 (35834|1) - to 4
00:36:493 (36493|0) - to 2
00:36:823 (36823|1) - to 1
00:42:427 (42427|1) - delete, how about adding jackhammer on this section instead? simply add notes on 00:42:592 (42592|2,42592|1) - 2l3 and 00:42:757 (42757|2,42757|1) - 2l3 (if you decide to add jackhammer, put them)
00:43:416 (43416|3) - to 1
00:44:075 (44075|3) - to 1
00:44:735 (44735|3) - to 2
01:22:976 (82976|1) - to 1
01:23:306 (83306|0) - to 2
..

Lv. 10
hmm.. seems like nothing much to change here lol
00:03:526 (3526|3) - make this a long note that ends on 00:03:856 and move 00:03:856 (3856|3) - to 2
00:04:185 (4185|2) - make this a long note that ends on 00:04:532
00:05:669 (5669|1) - to 1
00:05:834 (5834|2) - move to 2
00:05:998 (5998|2) - add note to 3that's too strong
00:21:493 (21493|3) - add note to 4 that's will broke my consistency ;-;
00:21:658 (21658|3) - deletethat's broke my consistency
01:08:141 (68141|1) - add note to 2
01:08:965 (68965|1) - add note to 2
01:09:460 (69460|0) - maybe this long note is good on 4? if you change it, move this as well 01:10:119 (70119|3) - to 1
..

Lv. 14
It's over-mapped my eyes hurt but that's because i lack experience in modding, to be honest . So i will leave it be, im so sorry, lol


-imo, the difficulty spread between lv.10 and lv.14 is quite.. big.. you might need to consider making a difficulty in between those two, just my opinion..
-Overall, it's quite a well done map, and i love the song. It's rhythm is kinda catchy and so fun to play.
-Good luck with your map

chikitani wrote:

Hihi~ From modding queue~~

4K
0 | 1 | 2 | 3

Lvl 6

01:16:383 - Add a note. To make consistent with what you had earlier.
01:17:042 - ^
01:17:702 - ^
01:18:361 - ^
01:19:020 - ^
01:19:680 - ^
01:20:339 - ^
01:20:998 - ^
01:21:658 - ^
01:22:317 - ^
01:22:976 - ^
01:23:636 - ^

Lvl 10

T__T I keep scoring worse and worse. First try was 950k, then I keep scoring < 800k. What's wrong with me *waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah* hahaha you need to play it a lots to get higher score :v

00:27:262 ~ 00:32:537 - Can't say I agree with the beatmap for this Kiai section. While it is catchy, I can't figure out exactly what's being mapped here. then. should i remove that kaia ??

01:26:768 (86768|1,86768|2) - I think one note is sufficient here. Not loud enough to warrant two notes. i'll move it to 01:26:932 -

Lvl 14

This might be er... overdoing things, so if you feel it's too much, feel free to ignore.
00:19:845 - add a note for percussion
00:20:009 - ^
00:20:174 - ^
00:20:504 - ^
00:20:834 - ^
00:21:163 - ^
00:21:493 - ^
00:21:823 - ^

Also, the descending electronicpianothingie, seems to only play every 1/2 beat starting 00:21:163, so
00:21:246 (21246|3) - delete affirmative :3
00:21:410 (21410|1) - delete

If you want to spice things even more! can make make the beat three notes! i'll add to snare sound only
00:20:009 - make it a triple!
00:20:339 - ^
00:20:669 - ^
00:20:998 - ^
00:21:328 - ^

Though of course, if you do these things, you might have to change name from Lvl 14 to ... Lvl 18? or more noo.. 18 is too high ;-;

ExUsagi wrote:

hi burgerkill, here's the mod as you requested
previously i've been quick-checked your chart and we've talking a bit about lv.14, because this map is interesting..

well, my mod won't really long, since you got so many mods already... and this is offline mods, i can't upload screenshot.. orz

gg more Myo2-alike pattern.. xD

1/2/3/4

[Lv.14]
00:45:724 (45724|2,46053|0,46383|2,46713|0) - move to 2, to make a variation in your pattern roger that

01:16:630 (76630|1,76713|3) - 2 to 4, and 4 to 2, this pattern is used already in previous pattern done
01:17:867 (77867|2,77949|1,78031|0) - 3 to 4, 2 to 1, 1 to 2, ^

01:18:443 missing note hohoho.. your right :v and fixed
01:19:268 ^
01:19:927 ^

there's some other place that actually has a cue sound for 1/4, but i'd rather not point em out..
nice diff, i enjoy playing this..

[Lv.10]
00:01:218 (1218|1,1383|2,1548|3) - ctrl + G done

00:16:383 (16383|0,16465|1) - switch, 2 to 1, 1 to 2 done
00:16:630 (16630|1) - to 4 done too
00:16:713 (16713|3) - to 2 yeahh.. isn't too hard
^ for better and easier execution

00:45:064 (45064|2) - to 4, for scratch button like 00:44:075 (44075|3,44405|3,44735|3) -

00:47:702 (47702|1) - to 1

damn nice

[Lv.6]
00:02:207 (2207|3,2372|2,2537|1,2702|0) - 1 4 1 4, you know you want it.. :v pfftt :v arghhh done :v

00:26:273 (26273|1) - move to 00:26:438 at 4th column, and add note at 00:26:273 wakatta :3

00:50:339 (50339|2,50504|0,50669|0) - 1 3 3 fixed

00:53:801 (53801|3,53801|0,53965|0,53965|3,54130|3,54130|0) - 34, 12, 34 pattern? optional though.. oke fixed
something like :

|_|_|o|o|
|o|o|_|_|
|_|_|o|o|

erm, u know, double trill.. ==a I know that a bit :v

00:59:075 (59075|0) - remove, 00:59:735 (59735|1) - remove, 00:59:735 (59735|0) - to 2 ettoo... it's feel so.. hard to remove but.. I've fixed that

01:05:834 (65834|2,66493|0) - soft hitclap please pffttt. forget about that lol ;v

01:26:932 (86932|0) - add 1 more LN at 4th done

[overall]
whoa, every thing seems great.. but then, about diff gap between Lv.10 and Lv.14, better ask BAT, but im quiet sure the gap is fine..
also i hope this ranked soon, and i hope my mod is helping.. good luck bro!

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi BURGERKILL, here's my mod from the Queue
Modding Lv.10 and Lv.14 as requested

General

1. You can take some of these as tags (taken from B2IN's map): ending emuemu isurugi mio yuno arashiko oke.. I'll change it :3

Lv.10

1. 00:05:504 (5504|3,5669|0) - I think replacing with LNs is better done :3
2. 00:06:823 - Double done
3. 00:25:943 - My suggestion: http://puu.sh/d8xDY/80de65d9c8.jpg Note that you can have 00:26:438 single if you have your LN as a beat too fixed
4. 00:27:592 - 00:28:251 - 00:28:910 - ... Double all of the snare sounds. Another way is to double all of the kick sounds I've choise double for snare because I think that's should be strong
5. 00:31:218 - You should create something new here or players will just get boring playing this.. For example, you can just ignore the beat for this pattern only, then double all of the LNs fixed :3 I put stream in there
6. 00:53:801 - I think you shouldn't triple here, even if it's for the hype, because the sound isn't that loud yet. Save it for Lv.14. If you still want it then i have this one for you: Turn a note in each triples into a LN :3 noo I won't change it into triples LN or delete it into double pattern ;-;
7. 00:54:954 - However, i think you can triple here (or not if you don't like it/not your style)
8. 00:47:867 - 00:48:196 - Double done
9. 00:57:427 - MAYBE double (because for the rest of the pattern, no same timing has the beat this loud, for example like at 01:02:702 the beat is definitely normal... so please consider this) done too
10. 01:18:526 - Same
11. 01:24:295 (84295|1) - Remove. It's really unnecessary hahaha.. done :v

Lv.14

1. 00:14:405 - Note in col 2? fixed
2. 00:36:163 - Add a note (or not if you also use the LN for the beat) yups I'm use ln for that beat
3. 00:36:823 - 00:36:987 - ^ this is too
4. 00:50:504 - 00:50:669 - Maybe triple is enough nope.. i'll keep like that
5. 00:57:427 - Double done
6. 01:12:097 - Triple done
7. 01:15:724 (75724|2) - Starts at 01:15:889 fixed
8. 01:18:526 - Double done
9. 01:27:921 - I think this timing should be the LN's end. Stretch only the final LN or all of them done :3

Good luck~

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

From modding queue (why so much sp didn't i mention 10sp or lower ;w;) I'm sorry about that. I didn't realize your rules about only accepting 10sp or lower ;w; sorry

Lv.10

01:25:284 - Using stairs would be better imo kk fixed :3

Lv.14

01:26:932 (86932|1,86932|0,86932|2,86932|3) - Why did you end it like that :/ I know it looks nice but it's a bit of overmap. Consider ending them at the same time wakatta .. that's have been fixed

Almost nothing for me to point out ;_; Good Luck [/color]

Starry- wrote:

thank you! :3 sorry i'm late~ ;w;

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing: ☑
Audio: ☑
BG: ☑

1. Again another bg which is 1366x768 xD i dont think there's a problem with that, but it's weird.

Metadata: ☑

1. One thing I want to mention: the title. There is already a ranked map of this song called ' Aso Natsuko - More-more LOVERS!! ', instead of "More-More". I'm not sure how correct this is but be careful;w; i will ask to bat later.. :3 for how was correctly for the title

Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑

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| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |		(4K)

[Lv.10]

SPOILER

Wow looks good Maybe increase the drain a little? The map is mainly the same difficulty all the way through so it is easy to recover. (HP7.5~8) change it to 8 :3

00:07:647 (7647|1) - Move this to 3 maybe? Kinda feels better, fits with the rest of patterns.
00:14:405 (14405|2,14405|1) - Vocals end at 00:15:229 () - , so maybe end the LNs here?
00:40:779 (40779|0) - Move to 3? Feels better to play.
00:55:284 (55284|0) - From here until 00:59:240 (59240|0) - there are so many chords at 0+2 on white ticks xD Rearrange some.
01:05:834 (65834|0) - Feels better at 2
all fixed :3

Nice diff :3

[Lv.14]

SPOILER

Nothing to say here, all clear :3

00:14:405 (14405|0,14405|2) - Same as Lv.10, end on red tick :3
00:15:806 (15806|3,16713|3) - This section (stream) you should spread out, not many notes on 3.

00:27:262 (27262|3) - Why does Kiai start here? Should probably remove, doesn't fit.
00:28:416 (28416|1) - Move to 3? Feels better

00:39:295 (39295|2) - Add here. (sound)
00:39:954 (39954|2) - ^
00:40:614 (40614|2) - ^

00:42:921 (42921|2) - This whole section with the LN if you listen closely there is 1/4, if you want to fill in or not.
00:45:559 (45559|1) - ^

00:50:504 (50504|2,50504|0,50504|1,50504|3,50669|1,50669|0,50669|2,50669|3) - I don't think you should use 4 here, make both 3? Music isn't emphasised enough.
all fixed too :3

Very fun song and map~ Rank soon :3/ <3 Goodluck~

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

sup! here's my mod as requested! (late by two months) haha no prob broo

col: 1|2|3|4

[Lvl.6]
00:05:834 (5834|1) - make into a ln, end at 00:06:163
00:15:724 (15724|1,16053|0) - move 1 space to the right
all applied :3

[Lv.10]
HP -1
00:03:196 (3196|1,3361|2) - ctrl+j
00:11:932 (11932|2) - move to 1
00:12:097 (12097|0) - move to 2
00:16:383 - http://puu.sh/dmbb9/f13a582295.jpg
00:39:460 (39460|2,39707|2) - move to 4
00:39:625 (39625|3,39790|3) - move to 3
00:56:273 (56273|1) - move to 4
01:09:460 (69460|2) - move to 1
01:12:921 (72921|0,73086|1,73251|2,73416|3) - ctrl+j
01:20:834 (80834|1) - move to 3
all applied :3

[Lv.14]
00:06:328 (6328|1) - move to 3
00:07:317 (7317|1) - move to 3
00:07:647 (7647|2) - move to 2
00:08:471 (8471|1,8553|0) - ctrl+j
00:17:537 (17537|3) - move to 3
00:17:867 (17867|3) - move to 2 hee move to 2 ._. 3 maybe ?? col 2 have been taken :^
00:20:586 (20586|2,20669|0) - ctrl+j
00:39:460 (39460|1) - remove
00:40:119 (40119|2) - ^
00:40:779 (40779|0) - ^
00:51:987 (51987|2) - move to 1
01:25:284 - http://puu.sh/dmcSj/3e7ba7458e.jpg
all applied too :3


Good luck~!

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

Also, if I suggest to remove a certain note, be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Lv.6 - 01:00:063 - notes isnt snapped by 1ms. Must Fix. hope it's not wrong now ;w;.. i'm using stable not cutting edge

as for metadata:
• Title should be More-more LOVERS!! (TV Size) with small "M" at the 2nd "more". Other ranked of the same song has this title. Must change.
done :3

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Lv.6]

SPOILER

00:05:834 (5834|1) - move to 3 to have right-left hand balance before the 00:06:163 (6163|0) for comfortability.

00:26:438 (26438|3) - change to single/short note as it does not have a consistent long sound just like you did at 00:36:987 (36987|2) - (I assume this is the vocal but its quite inconsistent to LN for. Not even the bass with not-that-long sound). And if applied.. waa.. i've decide to remove it ;w;.. tell me if i'm wrong

00:26:932 (26932|2,26932|1) - move to 1 and 4 accordingly for comfortability and impact sound.

00:54:625 - add note to 1 as its better to be 2-noters since it is a really strong/impact sound

01:24:295 (84295|0,84295|3) - extend these LNs until 01:25:119 as the long sound ends there and just like you did in Lv.10 difficulty. kk. all fixed :3

[Lv.10]

SPOILER

00:02:207 (2207|0) - add soft-hitclap HS just like Lv.14's

00:25:943 (25943|1,26108|2,26273|3,26438|0) - add soft-hitwhistle HS. Lv.14's

00:27:097 (27097|1) - ^

00:31:548 (31548|1) - soft-hitclap. lv.14's

00:32:537 - add note to 4. Strong sound as 00:27:262 (27262|3,27262|0) -

00:35:834 - Recommending: http://puu.sh/dECgg/2077dba698.jpg
• The LN follows the bass-like melody. You did this at Lv. 14
• Removed the LN at previous state since it is inconsistent and not following any long sound
• In the image I gave, the last 2 LNs added with soft-hitclap hitsound as Lv.14 have it.

00:37:482 (37482|2) - remove. Only single LN is enough here and it is only 1 instrument. Lv.14 do not have this note.

00:38:306 (38306|1,38389|0) - add soft-hitwhistle

00:39:625 (39625|2,39707|3) - ^

00:40:943 (40943|1,41026|0) - ^

00:40:449 - add note to 4 or 1 for beat+synth

00:41:768 - ^ to 2

00:42:262 (42262|1,42345|2) - add soft-hitwhistle

00:53:801 (53801|3,53801|0,53801|2,53965|3,53965|1,53965|0,54130|3,54130|0,54130|2) - make this 2-noters just like you did at 01:12:097 (72097|3,72097|2,72262|0,72262|1,72427|3,72427|2,72592|0,725 92|1) as it is not very strong enough to be 3-noters in the difficulty. Let the Lv.14 have the 3-noters for this part.

00:59:570 (59570|2) - add soft-hitwhistle.

01:10:614 - add note to 2. consistent beat sound.

01:20:174 (80174|2,80504|0,80834|2,81163|1) - add soft-hitwhistle. like Lv.14's

01:26:932 (86932|2,86932|1) - remove. Lv.14 does not even have this 4-noters.

01:26:768 - add note to 3 for that tom-drum sound. all fixed too :3

[Lv.14]

SPOILER

00:03:031 (3031|0,3196|1,3361|3) - remove these notes as there is no additional sounds included here. not like 00:02:207 (2207|1,2372|1,2537|3,2702|3) - which has a really strong sound

00:03:856 (3856|2) - move to 4

00:06:163 (6163|0) - add soft-hitwhistle

00:06:163 - add note to 3 since strong start sound.

00:06:493 until 00:11:768 - Reduce those 3-noters to 2-noters as they are only beatsounds + hithat. Not like 00:12:097 (12097|3,12097|2,12097|1,12427|0,12427|1,12427|2,12757|3,12757|0,12757|1) - which are very acceptable since the instrument there is beat+hithat+cymbals.

00:15:394 (15394|1) - remove.

00:16:713 until 00:25:943 - Same as previous. Reduce 3-noters on ONLY beatsound+hithat sounds. Snare sounds are fine to be 3-noters like 00:17:042 (17042|1,17042|2,17042|3,17702|3,17702|0,17702|2). These redusage are to avoid overmapping.

00:26:768 (26768|1) - change to short note just like lv.10's

00:39:954 - add note to 3 beat sound.

00:44:240 (44240|1,44570|2,44899|0,45229|3,45559|1) - add another note on it to become 2-noters since we have additional sound there.

00:46:878 (46878|0,47207|3,47537|0) - ^

00:47:867 (47867|1) - remove. 3-noter keypress on a only beat sound.

00:52:152 (52152|0) - change to short note as this is quite inconsitent and LN alone there.

00:54:954 to 01:06:823 - since this is the chorus part, The 3-noters with 2-noters are good for me~

01:15:724 (75724|3) - add soft-hitclap like Lv.10's

01:26:603 , 01:26:685 , 01:26:768 - add notes for those tom-drums sound there.

01:26:932 - add note to 2 and 3 as the final strong notes. all done :3

[Overall]
MM! Cool song choice and also good 4k mapset. Good luck!

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

revive?

ExUsagi wrote:

oh nice, finally revived..

some general check & thingy thingy

[General & Metadata]
http://vgmdb.net/album/21818
http://official.stardust.co.jp/natsukoaso/disc.html

Artist : 麻生夏子

Romanized Artist : Natsuko Aso
according the album & the information from the singer profile http://official.stardust.co.jp/natsukoaso/profile.html)

Title : More-more LOVERS!! then i should delete "TV Size" thing :3

Romanized Title : More-more LOVERS!!

Timing : it's sightly late in 25%.. i asked people, and they thinks the offset is correctly at 887 / 00:00:887 -.. to fix this :
1. Timing > Move All Notes in time > type -2 ms , then press ok
2. press F6 > then select all timing section, then Move Selected Offset by -2 ms http://puu.sh/ghFp7.png , then press ok

after you move the offset
Unsnapped Preview Time in all diff, fix to 00:54:623 -

the pattern is satisfying for me.. while waiting arcwin, better to re-check everything.. x3

good luck!

Zan - wrote:

[Metadata]

1. Title: More-more LOVERS!! (TV ver.) / 麻生夏子 | Source 1
2. Romanised: More-more LOVERS!! (TV ver.) / Natsuko Asou | Source 2

well, im not really sure about this too
you better ask more experienced metadata hunter like alacat or KSHR

gl~
i'm ninzan

bakabakemono wrote:

googoooooooo burger

• As request about metadata

1. Romanised Artist : Aso Natsuko
   
   
   1. Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.
2. Title : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)
   Romanised : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)
   
   
   
   Webpage : http://www.lantis.jp/release-item2.php?id=d379c1f7078264c0043a1deba82fc3b1
   
3. Source : えむえむっ！
   
   Please move to tags "MM!"
   
   Additional modding :
   
   
4. Soft-hitclap has a bit delay. Please use it :3 I fixed delay ~ : http://puu.sh/gnsqH/60cd43caa8.wav
   
   
5. BG size must be 1366 x 768. Please use it ~ http://puu.sh/gnsyj/045ca766a3.jpg

alacat wrote:

• As request about metadata

1. Romanised Artist : Aso Natsuko
   
   
   1. Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.
2. Title : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)
   Romanised : More-more LOVERS!!(TV ver.)
   
   
   
   Webpage : http://www.lantis.jp/release-item2.php?id=d379c1f7078264c0043a1deba82fc3b1
   
3. Source : えむえむっ！
   
   Please move to tags "MM!"
   
   Additional modding :
   
   
4. Soft-hitclap has a bit delay. Please use it :3 I fixed delay ~ : http://puu.sh/gnsqH/60cd43caa8.wav
   
   
5. BG size must be 1366 x 768. Please use it ~ http://puu.sh/gnsyj/045ca766a3.jpg

Genocide wrote:

untick widescreen supporter on Lv.14, Lv.10. Unless you have not using Storyboard.

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

are there any bns planning to bubble this map?
if not, then i'll be happy to do a final check, since i already modded this 3 months ago.

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

wooo bubbled ... thanks arcwin

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

i just hoped that you could at least considered my previous post before arc's check. (there's no reply)

-[BURGERKILL]- wrote:

ahh. sorry about that i'm really" confused and don't know what should i do. in that time ... ;w;