Song Riders - Be · forum

shikyu

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-07-12T12:55:37+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
[shikyu's Normal]

00:22:506 (1) This is spinner end add finish, i hear finish sound. I guess normal sampleset is enough
00:29:324 (2,3) i think more improve pattern shape. so i suggest this patter shape. ...
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00:36:824 (3,4) i think (4) note blanket is better imo use slider (3) to encircle 00:34:097 (2) slider's end, it's still good
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00:45:688 (3,1) This is pattern shape too blanket is better ...
01:06:142 (2,3,4,5) i suggest this note flow and shape k
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01:06:142 (5) This note finish sound part In order to express the sound a little bit stronger
add clap? nope, weird
01:08:188 (3) add normal sampleset hitsound imo finish only is enough here
01:10:915 (3) ^ ^
01:28:131 (1) The spinner is short so difficult for beginners to handle. not really, especially this spinner placed before break so they can focus on spinning
01:40:233 (1) why this note NC. remove NC please.k
01:48:415 (4) In order to maintain consistency add NC and 01:49:438 remove NC k
01:59:324 (1,2,3) Umm.. you this pattern more improve here? i suggest pattern shape. k
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02:06:824 (1,2,3) i don't understand this flow. it's not fine pattern flow and really hard
i think change this pattern flow k
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02:23:869 (4) 01:06:142 (5) same here current still good
02:35:460 (1,2) You more pattern blanket shape improve. so (2) note 1 grid up k
03:39:210 (3,4,1) This part distance error (4) between (1) note distance check please. k
03:54:551 (3,4) i think (3) slider curve way try this.
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thanks for mod~

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osu file format v12

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Title:Be
TitleUnicode:Be
Artist:Song Riders
ArtistUnicode:Song Riders
Creator:Yasora
Version:shikyu's Normal
Source:DEVIL SURVIVOR2 the ANIMATION
Tags:ending Shin Megami Tensei Trauma Atlus shikyu Niva Nivalis
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Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-07-16T07:01:53+00:00

Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Survive]

00:33:074 (6) - i suppose this kinda stack may break the flow..
00:36:142 (1) - i may expect a blanket here and make it horizontally, and also place 00:37:165 (2) - at 315:58
SPOILER
00:38:699 (4,1) - also ... the shape is fine, but the spacing here breaks the feeling of prev jumps. You needn't to change it , i just hope you can pay more attention to this kinda spacing in the future, where i may make it like this:
SPOILER
00:55:063 (5,1) - have similar issue to here also
00:42:960 (5) - try ctrl+r for better flow?
00:46:881 - how about to add a note here for the vocal?
01:02:392 (6) - make it parallel to (5)?
SPOILER
from 01:14:324 (1) - to 01:27:790 (4) - , over 13sec nearly all notes are placed at the right side of screen, feeling like sitting in a leaned boat...uncomfortable...theoretically, it is called "inbalance placement" which we'd better to avoid.
02:21:142 (6) - change its shape to this kinda?
SPOILER
03:27:790 (4) - stop slider on downbeat where should be emphasize but not a slider end which is weak. I would like to remove 03:27:619 (3) - , move 03:27:790 (4) - to red line, and add a note with NC at 03:27:960 -

[Niva]

00:31:369 (3,4,1,2) - i'd like to reduce the volumn of claps here..they completely cover the music.. heard not good
00:52:857 - suggest to delete the break here, too short and unnecessary
01:48:415 (1,2) - also clap volumn issue
02:32:136 (1) - ^
02:55:915 (3) - remove clap just leave finish? music is reduce here already
03:26:682 (1) - wierd clap still
03:39:381 (3) - highly recommend to move it to next white line 03:39:551 -

[Hard]

00:24:892 (4) - straight slider is looked better here imo
00:54:551 (3) - ^
01:10:063 (4) - make it straight and rotate to parallel to 01:09:210 (2) - ?
SPOILER
01:19:778 (1) - i think it's not a good choice. Although hard need to control the difficulty, it's not suitable.
01:22:506 (1) - ^
03:00:347 (2,3) - suggest straight sliders
03:06:313 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:50:460 (2) - add a red anchor point to make it like this?
SPOILER

the map is potential but i suppose it could be improved more~

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-07-16T10:24:13+00:00

SPOILER

Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Survive]
00:33:074 (6) - i suppose this kinda stack may break the flow..
00:36:142 (1) - i may expect a blanket here and make it horizontally, and also place 00:37:165 (2) - at 315:58
00:38:699 (4,1) - also ... the shape is fine, but the spacing here breaks the feeling of prev jumps. You needn't to change it , i just hope you can pay more attention to this kinda spacing in the future, where i may make it like this: this is nice imo, I try it
00:55:063 (5,1) - have similar issue to here also change a bit
00:42:960 (5) - try ctrl+r for better flow? um.. ctrl+g? imo the current seems more better
00:46:881 - how about to add a note here for the vocal?
01:02:392 (6) - make it parallel to (5)? straight like that looks a little boring for me ugu
from 01:14:324 (1) - to 01:27:790 (4) - , over 13sec nearly all notes are placed at the right side of screen, feeling like sitting in a leaned boat...uncomfortable...theoretically, it is called "inbalance placement" which we'd better to avoid. try to do something
02:21:142 (6) - change its shape to this kinda?
03:27:790 (4) - stop slider on downbeat where should be emphasize but not a slider end which is weak. I would like to remove 03:27:619 (3) - , move 03:27:790 (4) - to red line, and add a note with NC at 03:27:960 -
[Hard]
00:24:892 (4) - straight slider is looked better here imo
00:54:551 (3) - ^
01:10:063 (4) - make it straight and rotate to parallel to 01:09:210 (2) - ?
01:19:778 (1) - i think it's not a good choice. Although hard need to control the difficulty, it's not suitable.
01:22:506 (1) - ^
03:00:347 (2,3) - suggest straight sliders
03:06:313 (4) - ^

the rest fixed

thanks a lot :3/

edit- @ka niva: updated~

Last edited by Yasora 2013-07-16T15:47:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-07-16T11:56:44+00:00

no change for me, still wanna keep that wavy slider
thanks for mod anyway~

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-07-16T14:42:21+00:00

Scorpiour : I fixed all except for 03:39:381 (3), I wanted to follow the drums there instead of the vocals - thanks for the mod!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-07-19T06:40:50+00:00

from my queue

General

hmm is Devil Survivor 2: The Animation right source? i found on wikipedia

shikyu's Normal

01:49:438 (2,3) - is this unstack purposed? (and 03:52:165 (2,3) - here too)

Hard

01:27:960 - same as Survive dfif
02:27:278 (1) - whistle on end
02:30:688 (2) - ^

Niva's Insane

00:40:915 (2) - touching HP bar little bit
01:48:415 (1) - i think ctrl g on this slider is better for playing (and 01:48:926 (2) - here too)
02:44:665 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lol nice pattern
02:56:256 (4) - try adding a note here? since i can hear the piano sound cleary
03:39:551 - not used green line

Survive

00:52:506 (1) - no finish is purpsed? (since you added it in Hard diff maybe mistake?)
01:05:119 (4,5) - try reverse rhythm?
01:15:688 (3) - NC for SV changes?
01:27:960 - add spinner here to 01:29:324 - here is better than delay breaktime imo
01:57:790 (6) - maybe drum finish is needed here (and add 02:03:244 (7) - here too if you do this)
03:27:619 (3) - add NC and 03:27:960 (1) - delete NC
03:28:642 (3) - how about adding normal sample set on end?

nice song and diffs lol good luck~

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-07-19T09:41:13+00:00

Hi~ from my queue!
(test play mod)

[Survive]
- nice diff! I play with hidden at first test and it's nothing too hard to read

01:14:324 (1,2) - this slow sv and (2) a bit suddenly for me >~<
01:27:790 (4) - maybe change to slider from 01:27:790 - to 01:27:960 - ?

[Niva's Insane]
Hii~ Niva-san :3/

00:51:824 (1,2,3) - a bit more far.. o.o
01:48:926 (2) - not stack perfact >_<
02:12:278 (1) - x36/y60 ?
02:23:017 (7,1) - change the rhythm better?

other is fine for me ;3 Nice map~GL
star~

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-07-19T11:50:42+00:00

almost fixed all
thank you for mod both of you~
also thanks for star yanlu >w<

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-07-19T15:51:22+00:00

General:

-- Add a volume reduction at 00:52:506.

Hard:

02:14:324 (4) - Delete Whistle?
02:35:972 - Adding a note will be nice to fit the lyric.
02:59:665 (1) - Whistle at the end, instead of the start?
03:11:085 (6) - Delete this note, to follow the background music better.
03:15:517 (4) - ^
03:57:960 (1) - (60,112) for the second dot will be better. Currently the shape seems too curved.

Niva's Insane:

01:25:233 (1) - Make this head to (2)?
02:19:949 (5) - (92,172)
03:14:324 (3) - NC?
03:23:869 (1,3) - Start NC from (3), unless 03:23:528 (10,1) will be a bit tricky to read.
04:00:517 (5) - Hmm.. This kind of rhythm would rather fit the slider better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/875830

Survive:

-- Make tick rate 2 to avoid confusion of 01:14:324 (1).

00:45:517 (3,4) - I think this rhythm will sound better.

SPOILER

00:54:210 (1) - (140,332) will be more reasonable in spacing, also making more readable.
01:00:347 (7) - Looks hard to read imo. Add a NC, or place on (160,192) will do.
01:15:688 (3) - NC to make readable for sv change.
01:27:278 (1,2,3,4) - Imo, these unorganized spacing felt weird. Placing 01:27:278 (1) at (104,244) and 01:27:449 (2) at (144,328) will look better.
01:36:142 (1) - Unnecessary NC, imo.
02:02:392 (5) - NC since the new part of the music begins
02:03:415 (1) - Then delete NC this
02:07:847 (6) - NC for the lyric.
03:27:619 (3,1) - Swap NC for SV.
03:37:335 (7) - Delete Whistle at the reverse?
03:39:040 (3) - NC for distance change.

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-07-20T03:25:04+00:00

fixed some
thanks for mod~

edit-
@ka niva: updated

Last edited by Yasora 2013-07-20T12:22:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-07-20T03:35:53+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
Niva's Insane

00:40:915 (2) - touching HP bar little bit Moved down...
01:48:415 (1) - i think ctrl g on this slider is better for playing (and 01:48:926 (2) - here too) Nice one :3
02:44:665 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lol nice pattern xD
02:56:256 (4) - try adding a note here? since i can hear the piano sound cleary Ah, yep, I heard it but I wanted the players to focus on the drum beat instead so I'll leave this as is
03:39:551 - not used green line Removed

yanlu wrote:
[Niva's Insane]
Hii~ Niva-san :3/
00:51:824 (1,2,3) - a bit more far.. o.o Oh, it's intentional due to the next stack...
01:48:926 (2) - not stack perfact >_< Adjusted
02:12:278 (1) - x36/y60 ? Oh, I prefer the symmetry as is xD
02:23:017 (7,1) - change the rhythm better? o.o?

Sonnyc wrote:
Niva's Insane:

01:25:233 (1) - Make this head to (2)? Hmm, I prefer to make it head to (4) as its current position...
02:19:949 (5) - (92,172) Done
03:14:324 (3) - NC? Ah, yep, forgot that one - done
03:23:869 (1,3) - Start NC from (3), unless 03:23:528 (10,1) will be a bit tricky to read. Well yep, if I NC'd (3) instead the manual-stack here will be hard to read - leaving as is~
04:00:517 (5) - Hmm.. This kind of rhythm would rather fit the slider better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/875830 Err, this rhythm has been suggested some times previously actually but I still want to end the map there (as there's nothing from the song on 04:01:369...)

Thanks all (:

SPOILER

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neurosis

508 posts

Joined March 2012

neurosis 2013-08-02T04:28:32+00:00

hi~ from mod queue

Colour-coded modding:

Red is unrankable. You must fix this.
Orange is highly suggested. These are things we think you should really fix, and if you do not we want to know why you didn't.
Everything in normal black is personal opinion. You are free to take this advice or ignore it.

[General]

Tags: add "TRAUMA/Be" (singles release name)
Preview point: i think 03:18:415 - might be a better one

[Survive]
00:45:517 - i think this sounds better with a note here and 00:45:858 - , the current flow is a little confusing
01:14:153 (7) - a spinner from here to the sound at 01:29:324 - might be fitting!
02:37:506 (1) - might be better off ctrl+g here, i don't like the spacing
03:17:051 (1) - straighten this more, the current shape is too curved i think.
03:39:551 (1) - you should definitely put 80% volume here for even more impact from the finish

[Niva's Insane]
why different combo colours in this? they don't really match with the bg and aren't uniform with the rest of the difficulties.
why are there no consistent kiai times and just quick toggles? i'd add full kiai sections matching with the other difficulties

01:02:051 (5) - stack with the end of 01:01:369 (3) - fully?
01:03:415 (3) - i'd like if you just removed the repeat on this and extended it one more tick
01:10:063 (5) - i'd move this around x:192 y:268, the bottom of the map becomes cluttered with the following pattern because of the placement it's in

[Hard]
00:23:869 (3) - you should have a slider identical in length to 00:22:847 (1) - here, and a note added at 00:24:551 - , it looks and sounds much cleaner
eh...really good diff, nothing to say

[my thoughts]
this was a lot more fun to play than i was expecting from the bpm, it's well done with very little errors
good luck~

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-02T07:19:48+00:00

fixed some
thank you \w/

@ka niva: updated~

Last edited by Yasora 2013-08-02T08:08:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-02T07:39:27+00:00

emmy wrote:
[General]

Tags: add "TRAUMA/Be" (singles release name)
Preview point: i think 03:18:415 - might be a better one
I'm leaving this to Yasora

[Niva's Insane]
why different combo colours in this? they don't really match with the bg and aren't uniform with the rest of the difficulties.
why are there no consistent kiai times and just quick toggles? i'd add full kiai sections matching with the other difficulties Both are personal preferences, I feel fresher with the combo color presented in my diff and about the kiai it matches the song's emphasizes more imo (they're not unrankable anyway)

01:02:051 (5) - stack with the end of 01:01:369 (3) - fully? It's intentional~
01:03:415 (3) - i'd like if you just removed the repeat on this and extended it one more tick Removed repeat and added circle to replace it
01:10:063 (5) - i'd move this around x:192 y:268, the bottom of the map becomes cluttered with the following pattern because of the placement it's in Made the angle less narrow instead, hopefully it looks a bit better now :3

Thanks for mod!

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Papysh

259 posts

Joined February 2013

Papysh 2013-08-02T09:47:14+00:00

Hi, Late mod from my queue
Note: im suggesting everything that is on my mind so some suggestion may be just stupid~

Hi The combo colours would look better for me if you deleted the orange colour and used that colour i suggest :

Note: The balck color is optional since not everyone have good skin to play on that dark background
Note2: dont use black colour just blue and gray would be nice * too lazy to reuplaod img*
But that colours would look nicer for me since its going with BG's colours

Hard
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01:00:347 (4,5,1) - The first thing i noticed as wrong is touching notes, fix them please
* thats kinda nazi mod about that little spaces but you can
make that

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from that

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01:10:063 (4) - Little closer to the combo (3)

01:06:142 (1,2,3) - Stacking (2) with (3) would look nicer for me

01:11:597 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of stacking (1) with (2) stack (3) with (4)

01:37:165 (3,4,5) - I feel like there is a missing note between them, but i think it's just me

01:42:619 (4) - That would look nice for me
If you did that:

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01:51:483 (1,2) - Next nazi mod
Just make them more like this it feels better for me (if you want ofc) :

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just curve it a bit to he right using the same spacing

02:17:051 (4) - Next nazi mod, Just decrease spacing a bit

03:35:460 (1) - Why not something
Like that :

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that looks much nicer for me

03:48:756 (8) - *wild nazi mod appears (again)* 03:48:756 (8) - just little up, i can see its touching ;_;

04:00:858 (6,7) - Why wont you
Use that pattern:

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01:02:222 (2) - Also dont forget to move that slider with these notes : 01:00:347 (4,5) -

Dont forgert about the colours ~
o3o/

Everything else looks fine for me
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Survive
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00:29:665 (2) - That slider would looks nicer for me if you rotated it a bit,
Like this:

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02:37:506 (1) - Just curve that slider a bit
Like this:

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02:39:210 (5) - It can be curved

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Dont forget about the colours please~
o3o/

Everything else looks nice for me now i will mod guest diffs
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Guest diffs
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Niva's Insane:
00:51:824 (1,2,3) - It looks bad for me,
That's my suggestion:

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Synchronizing Kiai sections with other diffs would look nice for me, but do as you want to

03:06:483 (3,4,5) - Curve them, maybe ? D:

And please use the combo colours i suggested before *but dont use black colour plz*

Everything else looks nice for me~
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Shikyu's normal:
00:30:688 (1) - Make it better blanket
Like this:

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01:00:688 (1,2,3) - I dont know if that is good pattern i will suggest but take a look
Here:

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Ayayaya i accidently didnt0 used ctrl+g on second slider ;_;

01:26:597 (3,4) - I would like to use
Something like This:

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01:35:801 (2,3) - Just curve it a bit
like this:

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01:39:551 (3,4) - A bit higher so it can look
Like this:

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01:45:688 (1,2,3) - Just move the shorter slider in other direction
Like this:

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Everything else looks pretty good for me, Oh and dont foget about the colours i suggested please!
~
Good luck with ranking it, i liked modding it OwO
[AAAAA]

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-02T16:48:31+00:00

alright fixed something
thank you o3o/

@shikyu: updated

Last edited by Yasora 2013-08-03T07:30:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-08-03T02:23:04+00:00

fix some~

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osu file format v12

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Niva

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Niva 2013-08-07T03:43:35+00:00

Papysh wrote:
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Guest diffs
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Niva's Insane:
00:51:824 (1,2,3) - It looks bad for me, I gave them more spacing between each other instead so they didn't get too crowded
That's my suggestion:
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Synchronizing Kiai sections with other diffs would look nice for me, but do as you want to

03:06:483 (3,4,5) - Curve them, maybe ? D: Err, I prefer as is, I fixed this part's spacing consistency though (:

And please use the combo colours i suggested before *but dont use black colour plz*

Everything else looks nice for me~
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Combo color and kiai is intentional orz - thanks for checking, sorry for late reply >_<

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YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-08-07T04:27:31+00:00

Ya-nyan sorry for the delay :<

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
01:17:051 - 01:27:960 - there should be a kiai here because the vocals are loud enough to the point that there should be a kiai time here IMO.
02:34:778 - 02:45:688 - ^

[shikyu's Normal]
this is the easiest diff in the song, so i highly consider that you reduce the AR to 4 because of that. if players/beginners play this, then their reaction to the notes would be too late during gameplay.
00:27:960 (1) - i think that if you make this slider look like (3), then the pattern would be symmetrical and more fun to follow for plaers during gameplay IMO. to make it more neater and more effective, you can do a stack on 00:25:233 (2) - for neatness. it should look like this when you play.
00:37:165 (4) - move this note here instead so that it'll be more smoother and more flowy to read for players, not to mention that it'd look fun to follow during gameplay IMO.
01:10:915 (3) - not a huge issue, but i think that if you align this slider to the end of (1), then it'll be more readable and more fun to follow for players like i said above during gameplay. something like this should be fine.
01:49:778 (3) - out of curiosity this is intentional right because if it is, then i think you should stack this perfectly so that it'd be consistent with the other stacks in this diff IMO.
01:51:824 (1) - ik that this slider can look a lot nicer and smoother than this because as it stands, it doesn't look nice to play during gameplay. i think that if you make the slider look something like this or make it look like this instead, it'll be more neater and more smoother to follow during gameplay.
02:09:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - i feel that if you move this to the right a bit like this, then it'll be more straightforward and more smoother to follow for players during gameplay.
03:48:074 (3) - why don't you move it downwards instead of upwards like this for that smooth feeling in the diff during gameplay?
03:52:165 (2,3) - same as 01:49:778.

[Hard]
00:49:778 (2) - perhaps you can curve this slider a lot more to blanket the end of (4) for neatness and to make it look more flowy to follow during gameplay? it should look something like this.
00:56:256 (2,3,4) - i highly suggest that you do something like this so that it'll look a lot smoother and easier to follow during gameplay, not to mention neater IMO.
01:00:347 (4,5) - personally, i think these 2 notes can be stacked on (1) so that it'll follow the drums in the BGM. it'll also show emphasis in that part since it's at the same spot IMO.
01:14:324 (1) - orz this wiggle doesn't seem to fit with the vocals since it's nothing but a simple rise and emphasis in the vocals, so for this one, i say that you do something like this to make more sense and to give off that smooth feeling to the song during gameplay.
01:55:744 (3,4) - this should be slightly aligned to the end of (2) for that smoothness in the diff during gameplay, also (4) should be straight since i feel that the curve makes the flow awkward to follow, so what i'm saying that it should look like this for the smoothness and feeling in the diff during gameplay IMO.
01:56:938 (5) - i think this should be a NC because of the change in the vocals. to me, the (5) doesn't seem to fit with this part of the song during gameplay IMO.
02:10:233 (3,4) - the transition here feels awkward to follow considering the path it's taking IMO. ik that it follows the vocals, but the path doesn't look nice IMO, so it'd be nice if you do a different jump like this. it's more readable, more easier and more smoother to follow during gameplay.

[Niva's Insane]
01:40:233 (4) - perhaps you can space this out like you did on (3) so that it'd be consistent and smoother to follow?
04:00:517 (4) - you should extend this slider by 1/2 since that's where the song ends. it plays unfittingly if the slider ends where it is during gameplay. it's like the flow came to a sudden halt while the music is still going as well.

[Survive]
01:14:324 (1) - i think a circle should be here while the spinner should start 1/4 ahead to show emphasis to the guitar and the circle for the drums.
02:02:392 (5) - NC here because of the change in the vocals. the vocals aren't connected to the previous note in this part of the song.
02:03:415 (1) - remove the NC here if you follow the suggestion above. this time the vocals are connected.
02:04:097 (5) - make this a NC if you follow both suggestions since the vocals change here.
02:07:847 (6) - same as 02:02:392.
02:08:869 (1) - same as 02:03:415.
02:09:892 (3) - same as 02:04:097.
02:32:051 (1) - same as 01:15:324.
02:41:597 (4,5) - this pattern plays inconsistently because the jump here is too sudden and it could surprise players and also the vocals don't change that much as well. for this one, you should follow the DS to make it more readable and easier to follow during gameplay.
02:45:347 (1,2) - i think you can add drum claps on these notes to show emphasis in the drums in the BGM if you listen carefully.
03:26:597 (1) - same as 01:15:324.

and that's all i got. well i feel that the survive diff needs to be looked at a lot further since it could use more mods and work IMO. the transitions to the notes can be a bit better, but at the same time i feel that with the right amount of mods, it'll be ready in no time, so here's a star and GL on the map

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Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-07T06:42:25+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Ya-nyan sorry for the delay :<

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
01:17:051 - 01:27:960 - there should be a kiai here because the vocals are loud enough to the point that there should be a kiai time here IMO.
02:34:778 - 02:45:688 - ^
I know, but I don't like too much kiai :''3

[Hard]
00:49:778 (2) - perhaps you can curve this slider a lot more to blanket the end of (4) for neatness and to make it look more flowy to follow during gameplay? it should look something like this.
00:56:256 (2,3,4) - i highly suggest that you do something like this so that it'll look a lot smoother and easier to follow during gameplay, not to mention neater IMO.
01:00:347 (4,5) - personally, i think these 2 notes can be stacked on (1) so that it'll follow the drums in the BGM. it'll also show emphasis in that part since it's at the same spot IMO.
01:14:324 (1) - orz this wiggle doesn't seem to fit with the vocals since it's nothing but a simple rise and emphasis in the vocals, so for this one, i say that you do something like this to make more sense and to give off that smooth feeling to the song during gameplay.
01:55:744 (3,4) - this should be slightly aligned to the end of (2) for that smoothness in the diff during gameplay, also (4) should be straight since i feel that the curve makes the flow awkward to follow, so what i'm saying that it should look like this for the smoothness and feeling in the diff during gameplay IMO.
01:56:938 (5) - i think this should be a NC because of the change in the vocals. to me, the (5) doesn't seem to fit with this part of the song during gameplay IMO. keep this cuz I want the amount of combo is same to each other :'(
02:10:233 (3,4) - the transition here feels awkward to follow considering the path it's taking IMO. ik that it follows the vocals, but the path doesn't look nice IMO, so it'd be nice if you do a different jump like this. it's more readable, more easier and more smoother to follow during gameplay. um.. will think again soon

[Survive]
01:14:324 (1) - i think a circle should be here while the spinner should start 1/4 ahead to show emphasis to the guitar and the circle for the drums.
02:02:392 (5) - NC here because of the change in the vocals. the vocals aren't connected to the previous note in this part of the song.
02:03:415 (1) - remove the NC here if you follow the suggestion above. this time the vocals are connected.
02:04:097 (5) - make this a NC if you follow both suggestions since the vocals change here.
02:07:847 (6) - same as 02:02:392.
02:08:869 (1) - same as 02:03:415.
02:09:892 (3) - same as 02:04:097.
02:32:051 (1) - same as 01:15:324.
02:41:597 (4,5) - this pattern plays inconsistently because the jump here is too sudden and it could surprise players and also the vocals don't change that much as well. for this one, you should follow the DS to make it more readable and easier to follow during gameplay.
02:45:347 (1,2) - i think you can add drum claps on these notes to show emphasis in the drums in the BGM if you listen carefully. feels weird to hear for me..
03:26:597 (1) - same as 01:15:324.

and that's all i got. well i feel that the survive diff needs to be looked at a lot further since it could use more mods and work IMO. the transitions to the notes can be a bit better, but at the same time i feel that with the right amount of mods, it'll be ready in no time, so here's a star and GL on the map .

well, thanks a lot byaku-nyan :3////

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-08-07T11:24:50+00:00

fix all except 00:37:165 (4) , will look at other opinion for that
thanks for mod~

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Niva

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Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-07T15:42:21+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Niva's Insane]
01:40:233 (4) - perhaps you can space this out like you did on (3) so that it'd be consistent and smoother to follow? (1,2,3,4) is made like that so that (1) is placed correctly in play mode (idk why it's like that)... Changed this anyway
04:00:517 (4) - you should extend this slider by 1/2 since that's where the song ends. it plays unfittingly if the slider ends where it is during gameplay. it's like the flow came to a sudden halt while the music is still going as well. Has been mentioned few times earlier and I still don't feel like changing it... Current ending position is still the best imo :3

Thanks for mod~

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Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-12T05:28:33+00:00

updated all~

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-08-20T05:04:41+00:00

Hey Yasora o/
Yay 2 kudo op.

[General]

I think "the" should be capitalized in the source.
Source

[Survive]

00:33:415 - It feels really strange in play when the SV does not decrease here since it's really similar in energy to 00:22:506. I want you to strongly consider decreasing the SV here to at least .75. It will feel much more fitting with the music. Of course it would return to 1.0 at 00:38:188.
00:32:903 (5,6,1) - More spacing seems fitting to match the spacing from the 00:32:222 (1,2,3,4) star pattern. Please consider something like this:
Image
00:49:778 (1) - Nazi/// I think a bit more curve is better to match the curve of the 00:50:801 (3). Example:
Image
00:56:938 (6) - Curve the 6 less so that it matches the curve of the 00:57:960 (1). This way they will perfectly overlap and it will look nicer.
Image
00:57:278 (7,8) - Spacing error, it's pretty noticeable. Move this stack to the left slightly to space it properly from the 00:57:960 (1).
01:04:608 - Feels a bit empty here imo. Try adding a note to fill the empty space. Like so maybe:
Image
01:05:119 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I found this pattern pretty uncomfortable to play. The music asks for more spacing here, try to place a pattern similar to the 00:32:222 (1,2,3,4,5) or 00:54:551 (2,3,4,5). It will play much nicer.
01:14:153 (7,8) - Auto stacking is ruining this blanket, try to move the 7/8 more to the right. (264,92) is nice.
01:15:688 (1) - Drum finish on the head is nice.
01:42:619 (1,2) - Try reverse these NC here so that the NC is on the slider jump to start this pattern. Seem more readable to me.
01:51:483 - Since the music is louder here than previous 40% sections, I suggest try 50% here.
01:56:256 (3) - Try curving it more to match the 2 better.
Image
02:17:051 (5,6) - Make these the same slider? The different curves makes it look a bit strange.
02:36:824 (7) - It'll flow nicer if you give this slider a slight bend imo.
Image
02:45:006 (5,1) - The 1 feels really awkward in normal spacing after the jumping before it imo. Try continuing with the jump pattern instead.
Image
03:17:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - It's not very nice to play imo. Try listening to the music more closely. The music calls for a NC and jump at 03:17:733 and then increased spacing for the four hits. I suggest switch the NC on 03:17:563 (1,2) and then have a jump to the 03:17:733 and increase spacing to 1.5 or so like you've done before. You could try a 1/4 slider at 03:17:392 also which might play really nice. The stacked triplet under the slider end doesn't play that well imo.
Image
03:37:335 (7) - Rhythm here could use work imo. This jump feels really random. Since you're following percussion with 03:35:801 (3,4,5,6), I suggest that you move the 7 1/4 to the right to be on the white tick. Maybe add a new combo to it also. From 03:38:017 to 03:39:551 I'd like you to fill the rhythm out more. The gaps are difficult to understand because they aren't obvious in the music. Try a rhythm like this:
Image

Stack the 2 on the head of the to hit after playing the 1 there is nice.

I found some patterns to not play so great, especially in the last half. Although I enjoyed patterns like 03:28:642 (3,4,5,1) and 02:33:415 (1,2,3,4,1) very very much. Some could use a bit of work.

[Niva's Insane]

00:22:506 - The fast sliders and small spacing here wasn't very fitting imo, it was difficult to understand it. I think you can make the section until 00:27:960 much nicer if you reduce the SV a bit.
00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of difficult to notice these in the corner after the long spinner. Consider changing to 1/4 sliders instead.
00:44:324 (1,2) - I'd like it if you could reduce this jump. It's really big and surprising in the slow part here, and it makes the 00:47:222 (3) confusing in that it might be a jump since it's similar in spacing.
01:39:210 (1,3) - Nazi/// You could move it right a bit to fix the blanket. I noticed it in play.
Image
02:55:233 (1,2,3) - Can you move the 1 and 2 closer? I feel that the jump is too surprising, especially because the sliders are in 1/6 which is surprising enough.
02:45:688 (3) - I'm not very fond of this straight down flow here, I find it uncomfortable after the square. Try the 3 at (220,240) for more triangle flow. Or you could try another pattern entirely. =w=
04:00:517 - Add a green line and reduce SV to .6 so that this slider ends at 04:01:369 where the song cuts out. If you do so, remove the whistle and reduce the volume for the slider end. This will have a much better effect to end the map than where you currently end the slider. I know it's been said before here but I want you to consider this. :>

[Hard]

00:32:733 (5) - Consider replacing with a 1/2 slider instead. I don't really like how you placed these 1/4 repeating sliders here. A 1/2 slider pointed downwards would feel better imo.
01:14:324 (1) - Drum finish on the end is nice.
01:27:278 (6) - Try two 1/4 sliders instead, I think it might be more enjoyable to play for hard players.
01:48:585 (4,1) - Try swapping the NC's here. I think it makes the 4 easier to understand with it being on the blue tick right after the slider and all.
02:05:460 (1,2,3,4) - Please try not to break the pattern here, it will confuse the player. Delete the 02:05:972 (2) and place a 1/2 slider at 02:06:142 to follow in your previous patterns is best imo. Also try to improve flow between the 02:04:778 (5,1) orz. Here's the idea:
Image

Example:
02:16:881 (3,4) - Watch your spacing here. ._.
02:43:983 (7,1) - More intuitive if you stack these imo
03:20:801 (6,1) - The gap is pretty awkward in play. It kind of breaks polarity here. It's difficult for the player to not see it as a jump. Try moving the 1 1/4 earlier to 03:21:483 and extending it by 1/4. The use a more simple rhythm after it to follow vocals. Try like:
Image

Lot's of messy placements in this diff that you could fix up with minor adjustments. Go through and fix up things like 02:21:142 (4,5). That could improve from the 5 being moved slightly right. Just an example there. You switch from 1.6 to 1.68 or even 1.77 sometimes and it makes curves/lines look not so great.

[Shikyu's Normal]

00:32:051 (2) - I'd say change to 1/2 slider with a repeat to better represent the active drum transition. It will be more enjoyable to play.
00:52:676 (1) - Since the spinner is so short and this is the easiest diff, I'd like it if you wouldn't silence the end of it. I think it will confuse beginners since it ends so quickly. Or you could experiment with ending it later.
01:23:188 (1) - Try to give it more of a curve so that the with the 2 is consistent with blanket between the 2 and 3.
Image
02:19:778 (3,4,1) - Same idea there. Try to adjust the blankets so the 4 is right in between the sliders, it will look much nicer.
03:39:551 (1) - Epic.
03:51:142 (1,2,3) - Careful with these sort of placements. The auto stacking is making the circles overlap a bit with the slider, I'd like it if you could move them to the right a bit to fix that.

Pretty sweet diff.

Awesome map. I really like this song. See if you can't find a few mods and work more on the Insane/Hard, then let me know what's up in a couple of days.^^

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-20T10:34:56+00:00

SPOILER

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hey Yasora o/
Yay 2 kudo op.

[General]

I think "the" should be capitalized in the source. ng.. for consistent with this and based on this
[Survive]

00:33:415 - It feels really strange in play when the SV does not decrease here since it's really similar in energy to 00:22:506. I want you to strongly consider decreasing the SV here to at least .75. It will feel much more fitting with the music. Of course it would return to 1.0 at 00:38:188.
00:32:903 (5,6,1) - More spacing seems fitting to match the spacing from the 00:32:222 (1,2,3,4) star pattern. Please consider something like this:
00:49:778 (1) - Nazi/// I think a bit more curve is better to match the curve of the 00:50:801 (3). Example:
00:56:938 (6) - Curve the 6 less so that it matches the curve of the 00:57:960 (1). This way they will perfectly overlap and it will look nicer.
00:57:278 (7,8) - Spacing error, it's pretty noticeable. Move this stack to the left slightly to space it properly from the 00:57:960 (1).
01:04:608 - Feels a bit empty here imo. Try adding a note to fill the empty space. Like so maybe:
01:05:119 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I found this pattern pretty uncomfortable to play. The music asks for more spacing here, try to place a pattern similar to the 00:32:222 (1,2,3,4,5) or 00:54:551 (2,3,4,5). It will play much nicer.
01:14:153 (7,8) - Auto stacking is ruining this blanket, try to move the 7/8 more to the right. (264,92) is nice.
01:15:688 (1) - Drum finish on the head is nice.
01:42:619 (1,2) - Try reverse these NC here so that the NC is on the slider jump to start this pattern. Seem more readable to me.
01:51:483 - Since the music is louder here than previous 40% sections, I suggest try 50% here.
01:56:256 (3) - Try curving it more to match the 2 better.
02:17:051 (5,6) - Make these the same slider? The different curves makes it look a bit strange.
02:36:824 (7) - It'll flow nicer if you give this slider a slight bend imo.
02:45:006 (5,1) - The 1 feels really awkward in normal spacing after the jumping before it imo. Try continuing with the jump pattern instead.
03:17:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - It's not very nice to play imo. Try listening to the music more closely. The music calls for a NC and jump at 03:17:733 and then increased spacing for the four hits. I suggest switch the NC on 03:17:563 (1,2) and then have a jump to the 03:17:733 and increase spacing to 1.5 or so like you've done before. You could try a 1/4 slider at 03:17:392 also which might play really nice. The stacked triplet under the slider end doesn't play that well imo.
03:37:335 (7) - Rhythm here could use work imo. This jump feels really random. Since you're following percussion with 03:35:801 (3,4,5,6), I suggest that you move the 7 1/4 to the right to be on the white tick. Maybe add a new combo to it also. From 03:38:017 to 03:39:551 I'd like you to fill the rhythm out more. The gaps are difficult to understand because they aren't obvious in the music. Try a rhythm like this: still add a circle in here and I don't want to add note in 03:38:869 cuz it feels boring rhythm imo ><
I found some patterns to not play so great, especially in the last half. Although I enjoyed patterns like 03:28:642 (3,4,5,1) and 02:33:415 (1,2,3,4,1) very very much. Some could use a bit of work. no idea for this.. but I did change some stuff '3'

[Hard]

00:32:733 (5) - Consider replacing with a 1/2 slider instead. I don't really like how you placed these 1/4 repeating sliders here. A 1/2 slider pointed downwards would feel better imo.
01:14:324 (1) - Drum finish on the end is nice. with volume 60%
01:27:278 (6) - Try two 1/4 sliders instead, I think it might be more enjoyable to play for hard players.
01:48:585 (4,1) - Try swapping the NC's here. I think it makes the 4 easier to understand with it being on the blue tick right after the slider and all.
02:05:460 (1,2,3,4) - Please try not to break the pattern here, it will confuse the player. Delete the 02:05:972 (2) and place a 1/2 slider at 02:06:142 to follow in your previous patterns is best imo. Also try to improve flow between the 02:04:778 (5,1) orz. Here's the idea:
Image

Example:
02:16:881 (3,4) - Watch your spacing here. ._.
02:43:983 (7,1) - More intuitive if you stack these imo
03:20:801 (6,1) - The gap is pretty awkward in play. It kind of breaks polarity here. It's difficult for the player to not see it as a jump. Try moving the 1 1/4 earlier to 03:21:483 and extending it by 1/4. The use a more simple rhythm after it to follow vocals. Try like:
Image
Lot's of messy placements in this diff that you could fix up with minor adjustments. Go through and fix up things like 02:21:142 (4,5). That could improve from the 5 being moved slightly right. Just an example there. You switch from 1.6 to 1.68 or even 1.77 sometimes and it makes curves/lines look not so great. try to use ds more consistent ><

wew.. thanks a lot for mod~
that's very useful >w<

Kareov

349 posts

Joined July 2013

Kareov 2013-08-20T11:05:17+00:00

oh cute avatar

/me saved your avatar.

ax_pokl

ax_pokl 2013-08-22T00:15:35+00:00

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[shikyu's Normal]
Prefect! But I think this beatmap is too easy for a normal player, the name of this map should be "Easy".

[Hard]
(I think this beatmap is not hard enough to be a Hard beatmap.)
(I suggest AR+1 and OD+1, or name it "Normal" when CS-1 and reduce some red line objects)
00:56:938 (4) - This red line object does not fit the music. Conbine the last slider with this circle.
01:16:199 (3) - Do not put objects start with the blue line.

[Niva's Insane]
The combo color are not same as the other beatmap.
00:30:347 (4,1) - A little snaped, move the white point of the slider right side.
00:36:142 (1,1) - The time between these two objects is too short.
01:02:051 (5) - Do not hide objects below slider.

[Survive]
01:14:494 (1) - This spinner is too short.

Good map, good luck.

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-08-22T15:11:33+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Shikyu's Normal]

00:32:051 (2) - I'd say change to 1/2 slider with a repeat to better represent the active drum transition. It will be more enjoyable to play. kinda weird, let the beginning part become easier to play
00:52:676 (1) - Since the spinner is so short and this is the easiest diff, I'd like it if you wouldn't silence the end of it. I think it will confuse beginners since it ends so quickly. Or you could experiment with ending it later. choose to remove timing
01:23:188 (1) - Try to give it more of a curve so that the with the 2 is consistent with blanket between the 2 and 3. ok
Image
02:19:778 (3,4,1) - Same idea there. Try to adjust the blankets so the 4 is right in between the sliders, it will look much nicer. ok
03:39:551 (1) - Epic. thanks~
03:51:142 (1,2,3) - Careful with these sort of placements. The auto stacking is making the circles overlap a bit with the slider, I'd like it if you could move them to the right a bit to fix that. I ever do manual stack to avoid this, but imo player wouldn't really pay much attention for it when playing. so leave it like that, will see other opinion

thanks for mod o/

SPOILER

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Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-22T16:33:52+00:00

@ax_pokl: thanks for mod!

updated~

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-08-22T18:42:11+00:00

Wow how long was it since the last time I remember modding this map?
This map seriously needs to be bubbled soon

Anyways, random mod!

[General]

Kai time at 03:40:233 doesn't seem really necessary.

[shikyu's Normal]
00:27:960 (1,2,3) - Try placing them in the center of the map so the symmetry looks better.

01:00:688 (1,2,3) - ^
01:59:324 (1,2,3) - ^ Move these slightly.
02:43:642 (1,2) - Nya?

Better flow imo.
03:48:415 (1) - Try turning it outwards,like this:

Better flow.

[Hard]
00:39:892 (2,3) - Position in the vertical axis more, so it shows a neater symmetry.
*You may have to move the next objects a bit for it to work.
01:44:153 - Try this rhythm:

[Nivas Insane]

Kai time doesn't look the same compared to the previous diffs, they're all toggled :S

00:50:119 (2) - Nya?

Better flow imo.
00:55:915 (3) - ^ Flip horizontally.
01:02:051 (5) - Try placing it under the tail of 01:01:369 (3) to make overlap look neater.
02:07:506 (1,2,3) - Try moving these to the exact vertical axis for the symmetry.
03:06:142 - Add a hit circle here.
03:29:324 (1) - Should look the same as 03:30:006 (3) for symmetry! xD

[Survive]
00:56:938 (6) - Too far from previous object.
01:08:699 (6,1) - ^Too far apart.
01:16:710 (4,1) - ^
02:44:153 (3,4) - ^
03:48:585 (4,5) - ^

Only a few bad distance snapping I've managed to catch by eye.

Hope this helps~!

Niva

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3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-23T13:49:48+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Niva's Insane]

00:22:506 - The fast sliders and small spacing here wasn't very fitting imo, it was difficult to understand it. I think you can make the section until 00:27:960 much nicer if you reduce the SV a bit Nice suggestion, done!
00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of difficult to notice these in the corner after the long spinner. Consider changing to 1/4 sliders instead. Keeping this here, the square really fits here imo :3
00:44:324 (1,2) - I'd like it if you could reduce this jump. It's really big and surprising in the slow part here, and it makes the 00:47:222 (3) confusing in that it might be a jump since it's similar in spacing. Made it closer with less narrow angle, I know your point but wanted to keep this personally (:
01:39:210 (1,3) - Nazi/// You could move it right a bit to fix the blanket. I noticed it in play. Weird, last time I checked it has to be like that to make these two align correctly in play mode o.o - Fixed anyway
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02:55:233 (1,2,3) - Can you move the 1 and 2 closer? I feel that the jump is too surprising, especially because the sliders are in 1/6 which is surprising enough. Sure, done
02:45:688 (3) - I'm not very fond of this straight down flow here, I find it uncomfortable after the square. Try the 3 at (220,240) for more triangle flow. Or you could try another pattern entirely. =w= A modder (CDFA I think) previously said 'this pattern is awesome' and I liked it also personally, keeping it~
04:00:517 - Add a green line and reduce SV to .6 so that this slider ends at 04:01:369 where the song cuts out. If you do so, remove the whistle and reduce the volume for the slider end. This will have a much better effect to end the map than where you currently end the slider. I know it's been said before here but I want you to consider this. :> I know, still in any way ending at 04:01:028 is still better in my eyes (:

ax_pokl wrote:
[Niva's Insane]
The combo color are not same as the other beatmap. It's intentional, not unrankable btw :3
00:30:347 (4,1) - A little snaped, move the white point of the slider right side. Umm, not really sure about your wordings here but I made this more even, hopefully...
00:36:142 (1,1) - The time between these two objects is too short. 1/2 should be fine o.o
01:02:051 (5) - Do not hide objects below slider. Err, yep again this is intentional - I don't use manual-stack randomly though :3

10crystalmask01 wrote:
[Nivas Insane]
Kai time doesn't look the same compared to the previous diffs, they're all toggled :S
It's toggled also in this diff, actually (:
00:50:119 (2) - Nya?
Better flow imo.
00:55:915 (3) - ^ Flip horizontally.
01:02:051 (5) - Try placing it under the tail of 01:01:369 (3) to make overlap look neater. Umm, yep these three are all intentional, the third one should've been explained in my reply to ax_pokl's mod though
02:07:506 (1,2,3) - Try moving these to the exact vertical axis for the symmetry. Both are already in ~y;289 o.o
03:06:142 - Add a hit circle here. If I added one here the rhythm would be inconsistent (:
03:29:324 (1) - Should look the same as 03:30:006 (3) for symmetry! xD It's not aimed for symmetry here - I moved them all downwards a bit though to make it encircle (4) more perfectly

Thanks all~

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Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-23T18:57:53+00:00

fixed some in survive diff
thanks for re-mod~

updated

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-08-24T05:42:51+00:00

You PMed in game and then logged off. o.o
Let me know if you want a recheck.

No KD for this.

Edit: Here it is.
C:

[General]

01:29:324 - Missing red line here I suppose since there is a metronome reset. This will put the downbeat in the correct spot. Make sure to do in each diff.

[Survive]

00:27:619 (4) - Try deleting this. I think it will provide a nicer effect if you delete it since the music essentially stops.If you think there isn't enough spacing to the 00:27:960 (1) afterwards then you could rotate the 00:26:597 (3) or place it differently.
00:54:551 (2,3,4,5,1) - I'd really like to see a more even 1.5 spacing all the way through into the 1. Right now spacing kind of decreases right before the 1 and it's noticeable in play.
01:15:688 (1,2,3,4) - You could try shortening the 1 by 1/8 and adding another 1/4 slider to follow the drum transition here more closely. In play I can notice how we skip over the hit at 01:15:943. It's up to you, here's the rhythm that I mean:
Image

You'd have to change the pattern around to make the proper flow into the 01:17:051 (1). But since it's right after the spinner it wouldn't be too difficult I don't think.
01:35:801 (4,1) - Looks a bit weird since this is a reflection pattern, make these the same slider. Right now they have slightly different curves.
Image
Now:

Could be:
02:26:256 (6,7,1) - Maybe more of a personal thing here, but I believe that it would play better if you increased spacing and rotated them so that flow does not continue in the same line given by the 02:25:574 (5). It breaks flow when they are spaced so close and flow direction doesn't change after the gap in rhythm. Try a placement like this:
Image
02:45:006 (5,1) - Try reverse NC here since it would follow vocals and you'd have the same combo length here that you do at 01:27:278 (1,2,3,4) which would be nice.
03:31:199 (6,7) - A little more spacing will make this play more smoothly with the gap in rhythm here. Try moving the 03:31:710 (7,8,1,2) more downwards.
Image
03:39:551 (1) - Move it a few grids to the left so that it's spaced similarly to everything else.
04:01:028 (3) - Give it something unique to leave an impact on the player. Just an idea here, like a red anchor at the tip. Try it:
Image

I'm loving this diff.^^

[Hard]

00:55:233 (1,2) - Try to even out the spacing here to 1.6, unless this was intentional.
01:10:915 (6) - Try shortening it by 1/4 to hit along with the vocals on the red tick there. It plays better imo, see if you agree.
Image
02:12:278 (6,7,1) - I recommend even the spacing out and make it a little bit larger. The 1/4 sliders will play better.
03:49:778 (1) - It seems more intuitive to shorten this by 1/2 and move the 03:50:631 (2) to the left 1/4 so that it falls nicely on the white tick. Then a circle at 03:50:972.
Image
04:01:028 (7) - Same idea as the Survive diff if you want to try it.

This diff looks amazing now. Awesome job.

[Shikyu's Normal]

00:52:506 (1) - You just made the spinner really short and where it ends is not following anything in the song. Try extending the spinner to 00:54:210 and add a clap on the end. Then place delete the 00:54:551 (1). It really makes a phrase that's more friendly to play.
Image
03:52:165 (2,3) - I can't figure out why you wouldn't move the 2,3 over a few grids or manual stack them. Look at this:
Image
How it looks in play now:

How it should look:

Love this map! Call me back.^^ Keep in mind Shikyu has to respond properly to 10crystalmask01's mod or I won't bubble.

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-08-24T15:03:36+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
[shikyu's Normal]
00:27:960 (1,2,3) - Try placing them in the center of the map so the symmetry looks better. wanna stack (1) with 00:25:233 (2) - anyway it's harder to replace 00:30:688 (1) - if I put it on center

01:00:688 (1,2,3) - ^ ok
01:59:324 (1,2,3) - ^ Move these slightly. ok
02:43:642 (1,2) - Nya? not really like it
Better flow imo.
03:48:415 (1) - Try turning it outwards,like this: still prefer current one
Better flow.[/notice]

Hope this helps~!

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[General]

01:29:324 - Missing red line here I suppose since there is a metronome reset. The will put the downbeat in the correct spot. Make sure to do in each diff. leave this to Yasora
[Shikyu's Normal]

00:52:506 (1) - You just made the spinner really short and where it ends is not following anything in the song. Try extending the spinner to 00:54:210 and add a clap on the end. Then place delete the 00:54:551 (1). It really makes a phrase that's more friendly to play. ok
Image
03:52:165 (2,3) - I can't figure out why you wouldn't move the 2,3 over a few grids or manual stack them. Look at this:
Image
How it looks in play now:

How it should look:
ok, back to manual stack

sorry for late respond, just lazy for update 'cause 10crystalmask01's mod came before yasora update my diff =3=

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Niva

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Niva 2013-08-24T15:54:13+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[General]

01:29:324 - Missing red line here I suppose since there is a metronome reset. This will put the downbeat in the correct spot. Make sure to do in each diff.

Me on the 1st page wrote:
Sementara dulu ya btw~

(ini belum di-hitsound + nggak ada ide diff name-nya orz ._. - also 01:29:324 - new timing section due to metronome reset)

don't say I haven't told you about this though Yasora *hides*

Anyway I'm leaving this for Yasora herself to add the timing section~ xD

Yasora

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Topic Starter

Yasora 2013-08-25T02:52:17+00:00

alright fixed all >3<
thanks a lot uws~

updated~

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2013-08-25T04:34:28+00:00

We fixed snapping errors and some minor stuffz in Hard.

Awesome map! :3

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-08-25T04:38:20+00:00

thanks a lot uws~ <3

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-08-25T05:51:37+00:00

Pro!! Go! Go!

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2013-08-25T11:05:19+00:00

Yea this set is fine, Ranked

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2013-08-25T11:12:45+00:00

Gratz!!! Yasora-Chan!!!

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-08-25T11:18:35+00:00

Oh God!! So fast from bubble to rank. Congratz! Yasora

Xinely

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Xinely 2013-08-25T11:25:16+00:00

Yasora jadi cepet bikin rank map :O
selamat ya

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-08-25T11:33:13+00:00

thanks all o3o/

-Neipezi

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-Neipezi 2013-08-25T11:47:54+00:00

nice..!

shikyu

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shikyu 2013-08-25T12:01:59+00:00

はやっ o.o
congratz~

Freya

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Freya 2013-08-25T14:19:26+00:00

congrats!

meiikyuu

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meiikyuu 2013-08-25T18:39:08+00:00

yasoraaaaaa congrats

Alarido

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Alarido 2013-08-25T21:09:43+00:00

Cheguei tarde snif... mas...

RAAAANKEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ^^

Congratz Yasora, shikyu & Niva!

Att.

Ps.: So amazing song :3 Possibly I'll map it in the future ~.~

Kareov

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Kareov 2013-08-26T06:00:15+00:00

breakmeup

Eni

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Eni 2015-02-26T20:18:55+00:00

good song

nice map~

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